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Hi.
[Hard]
This song is really good.
Good luck ranking it.
Hi.
[Hard]
- 00:45:317 - Add a note, triplet please and thank you. Follows vocals and is nice to finish off this epic 00:44:028 (1,2,3,1,2,3) pattern.
- 01:00:669 (4,1) - The jump is too big imo. It would be hard to reduce it though. I thought if you experimented with Ctrl+G on 01:00:434 (3,4) and moved them closer you could make some nice circle flow into 1. http://puu.sh/bfibf/5055a2318d.jpg But you probably want it to be the same as the 02:15:434 (3,4). Maybe you can just try to reduce the jump a bit to be balaced with 02:15:669 (4,1).
- 01:02:778 (3) - Ctrl+G seems more fitting flow in the 01:00:903 (1,2,3) considering how 1-2 are placed. Maybe you can try it.
- 01:55:513 (7) - I much prefer to remove a repeat. The pause fits much better than the extra repeat since the vocals don't sound there and it provides good movement into 01:56:450 (1).
- 02:00:317 - Same as 00:45:317.
- 02:53:520 (3,4,5) - Use smaller spacing so it's easier to catch the rhythm change. Right now you use really similar spacing to 1/2 patterns like 03:30:903 (1,2,3). Maybe you can have the sliders slightly overlapping to reflect it.
- 02:58:091 (3,4,5) - Make spacing the same here, strange how it varies.
- 03:04:653 (1) - I liked a slider here since the vocals hold for a bit and it hits with the guitar at 03:04:888. Seemed easier to catch the 2.
- 03:06:997 (5,6,7) - Missed a soft whistle somewhere here, feels too quiet. Maybe on the 7 is nice.
- 03:14:966 (8) - Ctrl+G. www Makes this awesome jump to the 03:15:903 (1) and copies this two sliders in the same direction idea you have going through the whole section 03:11:216 (1,2) - 03:12:153 (1,2) - 03:13:091 (1,2).
- 03:16:841 (1) - Remove NC, seems extra here and breaks your combo pattern.
- 03:23:403 (1,2,3) - Kind of imbalanced pattern since the jump from 1-2 is waay bigger than the one from 2-3 which didn't happen before in the patterns like this. Maybe you can do a different pattern.
- 03:29:966 (5,6,7,1) - If you can rearrange and make a jump pattern here with spacing like the other patterns for this same section of music, it would feel much better imo. Since it's the song's climax, I didn't like how the spacing was closed.
This song is really good.
Good luck ranking it.