I don't mod so forgive me if this is bad.
[Veus' Easy]
00:54:340 (2,3) - Whistle the returns?
01:00:903 (1) - I'd suggest adding more hitsounds because it sounds kinda plain; maybe a whistle and the 2nd return, a finish on the 3rd and keep the 4th one with a whistle.
01:08:403 (1) - Same suggestion but even if you don't do it shouldn't there be a Whistle the end like 01:00:903 (1) -
01:15:903 (1) - ^ more hitsounds would sound a bit better
01:19:653 (1) - ^ hitsounds please xD
01:55:278 (3) - Whistle the return
01:57:856 (2,3) - I can see you're following the vocal here but I think it'd flow better if you moved 01:57:856 (2) - to 01:57:621 - that way you wouldn't have a confusing overlap either.
01:57:621 (2) - Whistle the returns?
02:15:903 (1) - As suggested before, more hitsounds on these long returning sliders would be better imo
02:23:403 (1) - ^
02:30:903 (1) - ^
02:34:653 (1) - ^
02:44:028 (3) - Finish the end?
02:54:340 (2) - Clap end?
03:15:903 (1) - More hitsound on the slider would be better imo
03:19:653 (1) - ^
03:38:403 (1,2) - I think the overlaps are confusing with the low AR and for an easy. I'd recommend shortening 03:38:403 (1) - to 03:39:809
tldr; Overlaps are confusing with low AR and for an easy, long returning sliders should have more hitsounds imo because they sound too plain. Good overall ^_^
[Normal]
00:40:981 (5) - Expected you to follow the vocal here and end it at 00:41:449 -
01:01:841 (2,3) - Too plain add whistle or finish or something to emphasize the chorus D:
01:06:763 (5) - This rhythm is plain odd and doesn't play well. How about adding a slider at 01:06:528 (5) - and deleting 01:07:231 (6) - you'll have to rearrange a bit but I think the rhythm will be better
01:09:341 (2,3,1) - More hitsounds please
01:24:341 (2,3,4) - ^ need emphasis
02:07:934 (4,5) - Come on, this just looks sloppy. Align please xD
02:16:841 (2,3,1) - More hitsounds please!
02:24:341 (2,3,1) - ^
02:39:341 (2,3,1) - ^
02:45:903 (1) - Finish?
03:24:341 (2,3,1) - Hitsounds?
tldr; like easy emphasis the chorus with some hitsounds.
[Hard]
00:22:700 (2,3) - This jump is too sudden at the start imo (yes I know you have other jumps like it in the map)
00:50:122 (1) - Remove a return? I think you've missed an opportunity to add more flow / patterns here.
01:18:481 (6) - Hm, I think a more rounded slider would like and play better here this straight one is somewhat ugly
02:05:122 (1) - Again you could remove a return. You have an opportunity to make a pattern here.
02:45:903 (3) - Finish?
02:46:606 (4) - New Combo for consistency with "I'm addict" NC's 02:47:309 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
02:52:231 (1) - Really odd jump imo. I don't know why you've put one here tbqh, I'd reduce it a little
tldr; fix that offset.
That's all from me. Luv ya.
[Veus' Easy]
- +1 AR looks and plays better to me
00:54:340 (2,3) - Whistle the returns?
01:00:903 (1) - I'd suggest adding more hitsounds because it sounds kinda plain; maybe a whistle and the 2nd return, a finish on the 3rd and keep the 4th one with a whistle.
01:08:403 (1) - Same suggestion but even if you don't do it shouldn't there be a Whistle the end like 01:00:903 (1) -
01:15:903 (1) - ^ more hitsounds would sound a bit better
01:19:653 (1) - ^ hitsounds please xD
01:55:278 (3) - Whistle the return
01:57:856 (2,3) - I can see you're following the vocal here but I think it'd flow better if you moved 01:57:856 (2) - to 01:57:621 - that way you wouldn't have a confusing overlap either.
01:57:621 (2) - Whistle the returns?
02:15:903 (1) - As suggested before, more hitsounds on these long returning sliders would be better imo
02:23:403 (1) - ^
02:30:903 (1) - ^
02:34:653 (1) - ^
02:44:028 (3) - Finish the end?
02:54:340 (2) - Clap end?
03:15:903 (1) - More hitsound on the slider would be better imo
03:19:653 (1) - ^
03:38:403 (1,2) - I think the overlaps are confusing with the low AR and for an easy. I'd recommend shortening 03:38:403 (1) - to 03:39:809
tldr; Overlaps are confusing with low AR and for an easy, long returning sliders should have more hitsounds imo because they sound too plain. Good overall ^_^
[Normal]
00:40:981 (5) - Expected you to follow the vocal here and end it at 00:41:449 -
01:01:841 (2,3) - Too plain add whistle or finish or something to emphasize the chorus D:
01:06:763 (5) - This rhythm is plain odd and doesn't play well. How about adding a slider at 01:06:528 (5) - and deleting 01:07:231 (6) - you'll have to rearrange a bit but I think the rhythm will be better
01:09:341 (2,3,1) - More hitsounds please
01:24:341 (2,3,4) - ^ need emphasis
02:07:934 (4,5) - Come on, this just looks sloppy. Align please xD
02:16:841 (2,3,1) - More hitsounds please!
02:24:341 (2,3,1) - ^
02:39:341 (2,3,1) - ^
02:45:903 (1) - Finish?
03:24:341 (2,3,1) - Hitsounds?
tldr; like easy emphasis the chorus with some hitsounds.
[Hard]
- The offset is different by +1 on this diff
- I think you could emphasize the drums in some parts like 01:14:028 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 02:29:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - might worth a thought
- Some of the copy paste is a little too obvious like 00:44:028 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:59:028 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - and the last chorus; it's no big deal though
00:22:700 (2,3) - This jump is too sudden at the start imo (yes I know you have other jumps like it in the map)
00:50:122 (1) - Remove a return? I think you've missed an opportunity to add more flow / patterns here.
01:18:481 (6) - Hm, I think a more rounded slider would like and play better here this straight one is somewhat ugly
02:05:122 (1) - Again you could remove a return. You have an opportunity to make a pattern here.
02:45:903 (3) - Finish?
02:46:606 (4) - New Combo for consistency with "I'm addict" NC's 02:47:309 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
02:52:231 (1) - Really odd jump imo. I don't know why you've put one here tbqh, I'd reduce it a little
tldr; fix that offset.
That's all from me. Luv ya.