[Veus']
00:21:528 (3) - Blanket could be better (move the endpoint 6~8 pixels down)
00:36:528 (3,4) - The turn is quite a flowbreaker, would be much better if (4) was above (3)'s end instead of being below it.
00:58:090 (1) - Could be a bit more down-right for better playability.
01:19:653 (1) - The red point could be more towards the center. Fits the beat way better, and would allow a bigger, prettier blanket.
01:57:856 (2) - A slider starting and ending on random red ticks is pretty eccentric, try http://puu.sh/du9GC/631a7d031f.png or something similar instead.
02:08:403 (1) - Could blanket the previous (4).
[Normal]
00:55:747 (4,5) - The 1/2 should be first, and then the 1/1 slider IMO.
01:13:793 (5) - New combo?
01:30:434 (2) - x:352 y:200 to match (1) better. If you edit this, consider moving 01:30:903 (3) to somewhere around x:220 y:252.
01:47:778 (4) - Could be blanketing the previous (3).
02:22:466 (8) - New combo?
02:43:794 (6) - ^
03:33:950 (5) - Move the pattern starting here more rightwards for better flow.
[Hard]
OD +1, perhaps?
00:14:966 (7) - Could end 1/4 earlier, though I don't see a too big problem with this.
00:21:294 (6) - Could be blanketing the previous (5) properly.
00:55:747 (5) - New combo?
01:02:778 (3) - x:260 y:240 for proper blanketing.
02:41:216 (4) - New combo?
Good map (and song) as always~
00:21:528 (3) - Blanket could be better (move the endpoint 6~8 pixels down)
00:36:528 (3,4) - The turn is quite a flowbreaker, would be much better if (4) was above (3)'s end instead of being below it.
00:58:090 (1) - Could be a bit more down-right for better playability.
01:19:653 (1) - The red point could be more towards the center. Fits the beat way better, and would allow a bigger, prettier blanket.
01:57:856 (2) - A slider starting and ending on random red ticks is pretty eccentric, try http://puu.sh/du9GC/631a7d031f.png or something similar instead.
02:08:403 (1) - Could blanket the previous (4).
[Normal]
00:55:747 (4,5) - The 1/2 should be first, and then the 1/1 slider IMO.
01:13:793 (5) - New combo?
01:30:434 (2) - x:352 y:200 to match (1) better. If you edit this, consider moving 01:30:903 (3) to somewhere around x:220 y:252.
01:47:778 (4) - Could be blanketing the previous (3).
02:22:466 (8) - New combo?
02:43:794 (6) - ^
03:33:950 (5) - Move the pattern starting here more rightwards for better flow.
[Hard]
OD +1, perhaps?
00:14:966 (7) - Could end 1/4 earlier, though I don't see a too big problem with this.
00:21:294 (6) - Could be blanketing the previous (5) properly.
00:55:747 (5) - New combo?
01:02:778 (3) - x:260 y:240 for proper blanketing.
02:41:216 (4) - New combo?
Good map (and song) as always~