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wmfchris
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wmfchris
Are you going to get this approved?

This is awesome, I think I can't handle this...

Big problem:
Some notes are dropped in 1/8 beats, but they're wrong. I think they're all on 1/4 unless you have specfied case.
Combo length varies too much in this song.

Anyway,
1:49:399 (2) down 1 grid, (3) down 2 grid to make a stright line
1:51:974 (3,4) up 1 grid and (3) up 2 grid for the same reason
2:13:026 (4) spacing
2:14:223 (4) spacing
2:15:621 (4) ^
2:26:891 (1) Not playable in reality? (individual play)
2:28:918 don't start kiai here
2:30:215 start kiai
3:14:274 (1,1,1) spinner to short
3:17:098 (1,1,1) ^
3:44:208 (1) spacing
3:49:567 (1,1,1) spinner too short
3:52:390 (1,1,1) ^
6:09:148 (3) down 1 grid
6:11:868 (3,4) left 1 grid
8:49:388 (1) down 1 grid
8:50 789 Does this part of kiai really need? I don't think so.
End kiai before you end, unless you finish the remaining part.
YGOkid8
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CracK wrote:

Marathons are not stated in the rules here too :|
But I hope you are not against modding it, it's only 1 difficulty:
Raki Suta - WAWAWA
Thanks~
no problem, I'll mod this. I'll edit this post to mod... when I get time to.

General:
- Remove "lucky star" from Tags, they're already in the source

Insane:
I don't know how to say this... but marathons aren't meant to be really insane like this :|. Marathons, I believe, are meant to be at a difficulty range between Normal and Hard. Maybe at some parts, there can be insane bits, but not all the time. Take a look at all the other marathons for example. Yours is just...

Sorry to bring you down like this. But if you ask a BAT about this, I'll be sure to come back and take a look, depending on the BAT's response.
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Sallad4ever
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WA~~~ :o
I can't do this, this is way too insane :(
Sorry

Too bad there isn't minoru's Wa~Wa~Wasuremono~
:D
Kert
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Well, anyway thanks for the star =)
わ
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Starrodkirby86
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'Sup.

There shouldn't be any "defined" difficulty for Marathons. I mean, you're much more free with Approved maps. Besides, there IS a Marathon that is quite difficult to pass. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3153 NeoMAX. =x

Anyway, I managed to pass this without any problems...So...I don't see it as too hard.

Overall, I'm not modding this quite yet (As it's below 8 stars), but it's pretty good. I think there might be more areas you can refine up on, say, some of the spacing on Love Love Shine was wack, but overall it was fun.

For your Storyboard, please resize the wallpapers to 800x600 or less...You can't have it any higher than that or else it'll decrease game performance. For a song like this, I'm sure this is definitely what you don't want.

Have fun~
Jarby
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Artist: Raki Suta
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Kert
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Thanks, Starrodkirby86

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

For your Storyboard, please resize the wallpapers to 800x600 or less...
Resized most of the images. Max width is now 800

About and artist of the map:
I don't know where this mp3 comes from, neither does my friend who sent me it... JarJarJacob, do you know the artist?
Anyway, I have only found this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TK_EEbbX94k
It states that the song is from beatmania, so I changed the source
It was funny for me to find out that Raki Suta stands for Lucky Star in English lol
ignorethis
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ignorethis
irc modded <3

great map
Leorda
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Privet

THIS BEATMAP MUST HAVE A VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!

[General]
Your filesize is too big, you need to compress to under 10MB (20MB if you have a video) (current 12,8MB)

[Insane]
03:14:274 (1,1,1) - Can you combine this spinner into one?? It's unrankable~
03:17:097 (1,1,1) - ^
03:19:215 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it??
03:49:567 (1,1,1) - Can you combine this spinner into one?? It's unrankable~
03:52:390 (1,1,1) - ^
05:50:709 (1) - Unsnapped LOL
05:58:718 (4) - ^
05:58:869 (5) - ^
06:08:844 (2) - ^
06:38:466 (2) - ^
06:57:509 (6) - ^
06:58:567 (2,4) - Move 2 grid down??

Not bad
STAR
Kert
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привет-привет :D
Arigatou ignorethis and Leorda 8-)

I dunno where it comes from... I think there is just no video for this. I am also not sure if the rule about max filesize works for marathons
I snapped those notes but they are still detected by AImod as unsnapped lol. I haven't changed those spinners cause it's possible to get 300 on all of them, I tried myself
Krisom
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Hihi!

I'm sorry, I can't mod something I cant play :(, it's still too hard for me. I do can say 2 things 'bout it.

->If you plan to map only up to 08:56:393, you should reduce the filesize by cutting the mp3.
->I... ...I mean, this is Misao "singing", but I only saw her like once during all the SB D:! You could find some Misao images for the SB ;)

Sorry I could not do a proper mod -_-"
Mismagius
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Mismagius
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/11378

Now my map isn't the only VAVAVAVAinsane :(
Kert
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Thanks for the stars, Krisom and Blue Dragon =)
OK, I found this - http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm1482766 I think it's not needed to include the video like that..
I guess, I'll just name the artist Nico Nico Douga
Kert
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Done.
-changed title
-changed most of the images to misao <3
-cut mp3 a bit
-snapped 'unspanned lol' notes
Mismagius
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:)
FrozenOG
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CracK wrote:

Done.
-changed title
-changed most of the images to misao <3
-cut mp3 a bit
-snapped 'unspanned lol' notes
a spinner needs to reach a bonus of 2,000 in auto mode (no mods) to becomr rankable

p.s. lets see lesjuh FC this! lol
FrozenOG
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FrozenOG
omg.............

thats me............
ATTACH[CoolBoy963 - Nico Nico Douga - WAWAWA SPEED mix [Insane] (2010-06-01) Osu.osr]

feed me internets if you think that was cool or you said it was not bad ^_^.

Download: CoolBoy963 - Nico Nico Douga - WAWAWA SPEED mix [Insane] (2010-06-01) Osu.osr
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Kert
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Not bad :)
Thanks for the star~
FrozenOG
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FrozenOG

CracK wrote:

Not bad :)
Thanks for the star~
i got more point but forgot to save the replay! :(

ummm... where's my internet u owe me?
Kert
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I haven't said that it was cool =P
FrozenOG
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FrozenOG

CracK wrote:

I haven't said that it was cool =P
check again ;)
Kert
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Ok, ok, I'll give you one for your incredible cleverness :3
IceBeam
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Ух,суровая мапа.

Тяжело это модить,в целом всё ок.А искать что-то совсем мелкое,это как иголку в стогу сена.

Но тем не менее:

01:01:819 (3) - Выровняй лучше.
02:15:945 (5) - Добавь сюда ещё сиркл,а то обрываеться как-то резко.
03:01:656 (1) - 2 вправо?
03:07:303 (1) - 2 влево?
03:20:009 (1,2,3) - Очень неровные слайдеры,сделай лучше.
03:43:832 (4) - На 1 вправо.
03:44:008 (1) - Лучше подравняй его под (2,3)
04:58:663 (1) - Лучше 1 вправо,ну и весь комбо-момент тоже сместить конечно.
06:33:178 (2) - Форма слайдера.Можешь оставить конечно,но я бы изменил.
06:50:256 (5) - На 1 вправо.
08:40:632 (10) - Что-то не то с ним.Может на 08:40:982 закончить? А в 08:41:157 добавить просто сиркл?

Ну и начало,эти спиннеры..

Больше всего понравился кусок Ванессы.А вообще эпично,большую работу проделал,надеюсь апрувнут.

Удачи,стар~
ZLOdeuka-
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блах блах блах...мило)
Kurai
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The BackGround <3333
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Очень хорошо :D
roflninja
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roflninja
Hi,

[insane]
01:49:067 (1) - no new combo? imo
01:50:396 (1) - ^
01:51:684 (1) - ^
08:52:731 (7) - new combo?

sorry I couldnt find much, this might be a bit to much for me to mod

nice map ;)
Kert
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Thanks for the stars, and for your mods, SadKangaroo and roflninja :)
Sonic Fumes
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Sonic Fumes
i like this map.
Yuji Tokaji
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Star ~
hime_nikki04
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Hiya ~

Couldn't find anything wrong with it...

Star ~
Nakata Yuji
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Nakata Yuji
Modding for your m4m queue

I can pass this.... But it's very strange for a "marathon". It's certainly a challenge, but anyone who's going to try to S it may or not rage quit. A map can have an insane difficulty, or it can be very long. You can't really have both. Anyways, increasing the circle size might help.

Also, it's very hard to mod this difficulty, since a good majority of the notes are jumps.
But that's also another problem. The spacing is very sporadic. I know the map was meant to be like this...
For example:
04:58:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This was an anti-stream. The spacing here may cause misses in most playthroughs...

I didn't catch too much else, but be wary of these anti-streams I mentioned, and such.

I'll give it a star because it's well mapped otherwise.
And the storyboard was also interesting.
Kert
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Thanks for pointing out some arguable parts of my map.
Well, I believe it is possible to memorize these 3 or 4 anti-streams after 1-2 plays actually, so it's not a big deal. They are like James's traps hehe
I may change circle size, but I personally think it's ok right now. And about "marathon" difficulty you can read Starrodkirby post on the first page.
Vass_Bass
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Vass_Bass
I modded your BG some time ago =P
it's grate map, have a star ;)
Hijiri Tezuka
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Hijiri Tezuka
Hello ^w^

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00:17:091 (1) - Could you shorten to 00:18:546 and put notes after?
00:47:000 (2) - Remove clap plz?
00:51:637 (7) - Extend a bit?
01:52:307 (4,1) - Could you slowly fade the notes back in by adding a few notes to slowly reach the ones you placed?
02:28:918 (1) - Could you make into a slider and make it reapeat up untill 02:29:566?
-------------------
Other than that, the map is perfecto (Except there's nothing Perfecto about so many deathstreams for me @___@)
Star~
Kert
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Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

Hello ^w^

-------------
00:17:091 (1) - Could you shorten to 00:18:546 and put notes after? I think it's fine now
00:47:000 (2) - Remove clap plz? Removed
00:51:637 (7) - Extend a bit? I don't understand what do you mean by extending a note lol
01:52:307 (4,1) - Could you slowly fade the notes back in by adding a few notes to slowly reach the ones you placed? I think it will be better to have a break there
02:28:918 (1) - Could you make into a slider and make it reapeat up untill 02:29:566? Done. +Added one note after
-------------------
Other than that, the map is perfecto (Except there's nothing Perfecto about so many deathstreams for me @___@)
Star~
Thank you
Tomoka Rin
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Star~
Mianki
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Mianki
Here for the mod4mod queu.
Most of them are suggestions. See which ones you like :P. And I think you should rename the difficultys name. "CracKing" is my suggestion :D

00:56:364 to 01:01:819 Put clap hitsound on every white tick on this time period
01:02:182 to 01:07:637 Same thing as ^ but with whistle hitsound
01:08:667 to Break: Every note with clap hitasound except the last 2, finish hitsound on them
06:14:298 (4) Clap at the end of the slider
06:16:718 (4) ^
06:18:078 (1) Clap
06:21:556 (6.7) ^
06:27:000 to Break: This section could use some hitsounds. Try putting them yourself
06:33:199 (2) Remove this sldier and put a note here, then put a slider (which is 2 ticks long in 1/4 beat snap divisor) with a reverse arrow here 06:33:351
07:26:729 (7) Finish or whistle
07:32:334 (1) ^
07:37:939 (2) ^
07:43:544 (6) ^
07:49:149 (1) ^
07:54:754 (1) ^
08:17:174 (2) ^
08:28:384 (9) ^
08:34:989 (2) ^
08:39:594 (9) ^
08:45:199 (1) ^
08:50:804 ^

Star~
Kert
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Done ~half of them. I prefer not to overload the map with not necessary hitsounds, because they can possibly ruin the song.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10354 - this one is a good example, where the additional hitsounds are not needed
Sonic Fumes
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Sonic Fumes
Approve THIS.
Sakura
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OMG THIS IS AWESOME

Also i think it should be named Marathon, btw 03:32:714 = Awesomeness! Love Bloody Tears XD

WAWAWA awesome! have a double star =3
Kert
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1+2=3 Triple Star :3
Wow, thanks Sakura301<3 I am glad you liked it ^_^

About difficulty name, I dunno, if a BAT will also demand difficulty name change, then I will do it. Insane is there cause not many marathons are insane
wanhyrzh
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wanhyrzh
I want to do a mod4mod and post in your queue.....
but your map is so good that I can not find any mistakes...O.o
however, I'll just offer some personnal suggestions (maybe just my style opinion)
SPOILER
General: delete all the bookmarks(blue ticks)
01:47:405(1) why not end this spinner a little earlier then add a circle here at the center? just as those you have done in earlier time.
03:14:274(1,1,1) these spinners are too short...I remember that there should be at least 2000 bonus score for each when auto plays, no matter RANK or APP maps. You may see those less than 2000 in old maps...but well, they have gone into history.
03:17:098(1,1,1) ^
03:49:567(1,1,1) ^
03:52:390(1,1,1) ^
04:17:314(1) ^ but this one is better
04:51:625(1) why not make this slider a little bit longer with 2 reverse? I think it's more funny like this:

04:53:032(1) ^
07:16:745(x) add a circle here and stack with the later Circle3?
07:19:547(x) ^
07:22:350(x) ^
07:27:955(x) ^
07:30:757(x) ^

star~good luck with it! :D
Kert
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wanhyrzh wrote:

General: delete all the bookmarks(blue ticks) They are still useful for me :3
01:47:405(1) why not end this spinner a little earlier then add a circle here at the center? just as those you have done in earlier time. Done, thanks for the idea

Spinners: I can't make them longer.. cause it will ruin all the feeling of the song =/

04:51:625(1) why not make this slider a little bit longer with 2 reverse? I think it's more funny like this:
[attachment=0:bb39d]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:bb39d] I decided not to, it looks a bit ugly to my taste
04:53:032(1) ^

07:16:745(x) add a circle here and stack with the later Circle3?
07:19:547(x) ^
07:22:350(x) ^ Done all these
07:27:955(x) ^
07:30:757(x) ^

star~good luck with it! :D Thank you =)
Kamure
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Kamure
Oh god, so hard. So perfect......
blissfulyoshi
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"Konachan.com - 10723 food hiiragi_kagami kusakabe_misao lucky_star minegishi_ayano" The combo colors are hard to see on top of this bg, since the combo color works on all the other bgs, I advise you exchange this bg with another one.

Source: capitalize the "b" in "beatmania"

Insane:
Normal mod:
00:30:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since you were mostly following vocals up till now, this snapping to drums was quite random to me, so I advise you try to follow the vocals here
01:34:440 (1,1) - this jump was quite random in comparison to how you mapped this section so far, so I suggest changing this
02:10:431 (6) - ^
07:17:796 - since you seem to be mapping all the lyrics in this section, I think it is appropriate to add a note here
07:20:598 - ^
07:36:187 (4,5) - y did you stack these notes, the pattern will probably flow better if you make continue the stream with 5
08:42:396 (3,4) - place these out further so they are partially overlapped by 1 and 2

Combo mod:
00:32:455 (5) - earlier, you had a new combo for every new sound, so I advise adding a new combo here
00:33:819 (5) - ^
00:35:273 (4) - ^
00:38:182 (5) - ^
00:39:637 (5) - ^
00:58:910 (1,3) - to follow your combo mapping and follow the sounds, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3
01:23:407 (7) - new combo for new sound
02:22:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - add new combos here to be like the previous few sliders
03:34:302 (8) - new combo to be consistent with 03:35:714 (1)
03:48:243 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 03:47:538 (1)
05:05:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - add some combos in this section that are consistent to the previous few combos (sadly, I can't exactly figure out your pattern)

Timing section mod:
00:56:360 - move back a quarter note for the change in hitsound type
01:04:000 - 2 replicas of the same timing section at the same time, please remove the 2 copies
01:26:652 - move back a quarter note for the change in hitsound type
01:35:089 - a quarter note before this timing section, add a inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the use of custom hitsounds on the start of the slider this timing section is on)
01:42:228 (1) - move back a quarter note for the use of a noncustom hitsound on your first note
01:48:734 - move back a quarter note for the volume change
01:50:064 - ^
Going to stop the timing section mod here, but you need to go through the whole song and fix the timing sections like I did above. If you are wondering about the reasoning, check out the explanation in my signature.

Decent marathon. I didn't really how the difficulty level fluctuated so much, but I think is more of a personal preference. Star.
Kert
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Fixed everything, except this:
00:30:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since you were mostly following vocals up till now, this snapping to drums was quite random to me, so I advise you try to follow the vocals here
01:34:440 (1,1) - this jump was quite random in comparison to how you mapped this section so far, so I suggest changing this
02:10:431 (6) - ^
I just couldn't think of a better way to place them, let them be so

Thanks for a quality mod!
Blackiris
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Blackiris
Just wanted to star this map.
ヘ(^_^ヘ)(ノ^_^)ノ⌒☆
Garven
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Hrm, I'm not good at modding this sort of map, since I can't really play it. That and the song is D:

Anyway, as per your request:

[General]
Try to lower filesize a little bit. Try to aim for around 10 megs.

[Insane]
00:49:455 (1) - Doesn't feel like a spot that would justify a .5 section.
00:50:546 (1,2) - These... why 1/8 snap?
01:35:738 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit on the ridiculous side to me
01:37:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - These look really messy to me (same with copy paste later)
03:14:274 (1,1,1) - Auto's not liking these spinners' length. etc. etc.

Kind of an anti-climactic ending though. :/
Kert
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Garven wrote:

Hrm, I'm not good at modding this sort of map, since I can't really play it. That and the song is D:

Anyway, as per your request:

[General]
Try to lower filesize a little bit. Try to aim for around 10 megs. - I can't do anything about that, images are already resized

[Insane]
00:49:455 (1) - Doesn't feel like a spot that would justify a .5 section.
00:50:546 (1,2) - These... why 1/8 snap? 1/4 won't work there
01:35:738 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit on the ridiculous side to me
01:37:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - These look really messy to me (same with copy paste later) - Made them look a bit better
03:14:274 (1,1,1) - Auto's not liking these spinners' length. etc. etc. - :/

Kind of an anti-climactic ending though. :/ Take it as a rest after the "storm" =)
And thank you Garven & Blackiris!
aRiskOfRain
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'k.
any34
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Выскажу всего лишь мнение.
Слишком много спиннеров в начале, ну правда слишком много, можно было и меньшим количеством обойтись. Так же много джампов в том же самом начале.
К концу становится уж слишком легко, в отличие от того же начала.
Ну это всего лишь придирки =|.
Даю звезду.
Kert
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DiamondCrash, thanks for the star!
GaShiK, спасибо. приму на заметку
sveta-insane
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star!
KIA
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ROAR! >W<
Kert
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спасибо за звёзды)
Haneii
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You need a "cursortrail.png" in the folder.

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) – maybe make them all different combos (diff colours)? Looks confusing (although I don’t play insane maps so I’m not too sure about this one).

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Kert
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It's a trap ^_^'
Added "cursortrail.png". Thanks for the star
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KuraiPettan wrote:

cuuute_misao.jpg
^_^ Thank you once again, Kurai ^_^/
James2250
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-Resize section pass and section fail so they are 800x600 or below
-Why is there an audo lead in time?
-Some of your backgrounds in the folder are too big, resize them all so they are 1024x768 and below
-To my knowledge you don't need the 100g in the folder

00:53:728 (1) - start at 00:53:455
00:57:455 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:819 (3) - new combo
05:38:330 (11) - make this shorter and add more repeats?
05:43:981 (11) - ^

*star*
Kert
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James2250 wrote:

-Resize section pass and section fail so they are 800x600 or below - Did nothing here
-Why is there an audo lead in time? - deleted
-Some of your backgrounds in the folder are too big, resize them all so they are 1024x768 and below - done
-To my knowledge you don't need the 100g in the folder - deleted

00:53:728 (1) - start at 00:53:455 - done
00:57:455 (1) - remove new combo - done
00:57:819 (3) - new combo - done
05:38:330 (11) - make this shorter and add more repeats? - It was intended to sound like that, I like it how it is
05:43:981 (11) - ^

*star*
Thank you for you mod and star!
Ari-chan_old
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Jaja :3
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Derekku
[General]
*Why not just force the Lucky Star skin instead of adding it to the folder? (Although, you'd want to keep the different combobursts) If you don't want to do this, then you need to add some skin elements which are missing from the folder.
*approachcircle.png, cursortrail.png, and ready.png are what I notice. Please add those to the folder (even if they're from the default skin so they don't clash with a player's custom skin) and full submit.

[Insane]
*I agree with changing this diff's name to "Marathon". "Insane" by itself just looks/sounds awkward.
*Drain is a bit low, even for a map of this insanity.
01:00:728 (1) - Shorten to the white tick?
01:31:628 (5,1) - Expected a note in-between these.
02:43:297 (3) - Isn't snapped to the uninherited section.
03:25:480 - Shouldn't this kiai be on the next white tick instead of in-between notes?
04:07:920 - kiai not snapped to the white tick
05:39:390 - kiai randomly between notes again
05:45:040 - ^
08:56:409 - What a strange way to end the map here. It's kinda awkward... Perhaps try a spinner decreasing in volume or something after this for the fade-out? =/
*Remember to keep inherited sections before the note you want them actually on to make sure they work even if the player hits early/late. The only time they should be ON the note is for kiai. You seem to place the sections correctly in some spots, but wrong in others. I see bpm slider change sections directly on notes, which I especially suggest to avoid to make sure the sliders don't break (I've seen this happen in ranked maps before and I'd hate to see it again). Also, some sections are sloppy, such as kiai ending during or after a break in random spots.

Now for uninherited timing sections... I wish I could give you accurate timings, but this is too insane for me to test. ;A;

006,910 - Sounds okay.
078,865 - Could probably use a +10.
107,072 - Should start at 01:47:404, and also feels a bit off (the last couple sets of notes get behind). BPM 182 seems to feel much better.
111,393 - Why is this here? Notes aren't even snapped to it. Remove this section.
112,594 - Metronome sounds really early... Perhaps a +20 to this section?
162,864 - Unnecessary. Remove this.
163,304 - Fine.
208,480 - Okay.
209,538 - Should start at 03:29:890.
250,804 - Fine.
300,014 - 170BPM with +20 or +25 to offset felt much better to me (beginning was too early, and the ending was too slow)
350,710 - Fine.
429,914 - I'm thinking a +10 here. (one of the few sections I could actually play test for accuracy)

Remember to rensap notes after making timing changes (and be careful since some parts use 1/3 snap - It'd probably be better to individually resnap incorrect sections, actually).

Sorry for the sloppy mod, but I hope it helps. ;x;
Kert
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Thanks for an awesome timing mod, Derekku! No, really, you don't even know how many times I tried to find BPM for 107,072 section and not only that
Changed practically everything, except the ending.. because.. it's just ugly to have a looong spinner until the end =/ And I don't have any other ideas
hateech
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star
jericho2442
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jericho2442
check the timing for this part, it goes out of time near the end 01:47:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

spinner like this 03:14:274 (1,1,1) - COME ON >_> , auto can "barely" make them, i kno with approved the rules can be laspe sometime, but the amount of ninja spinners around this part need to be fixed, srry but its true >_>

03:27:774 (1) - remove newcombo
04:52:768 (8) - remove this note
04:54:176 (6) - remove this note

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map is pretty much solid, but srry i wont map untill them ninja spinners are abit better, approved map or not D:
Kert
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Fixed that.
Arigatou for the mod, jericho!
спасибо за звезду, hateech
Galkan
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Galkan
Shouldn't be it VAVAVA? :-P Good job anyway, have a star.
Kert
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I don't know which is the right name, really. But the original mp3 file stated WAWAWA, so I'll leave it as it is. And I also like this name more :D
Cheers =)
Galkan
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Galkan
Well, here is by V.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KhDNXOcOkoc

Also, you can add some Misao (or all LS characters) combobursts, only Konata and Kagami are here :)
Soaprman
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Soaprman
I think upping the circle size by one might not be a bad idea. It'd make the map accessible to more people without actually changing it much.

03:34:302 (2) - sounds better snapped to 1/4. (i.e. move this 1/8 to the right on the timeline)
03:40:037 (2) - ^
03:41:404 (2) - ^

04:19:425 (1) - maybe remove this? The spacing contrasted with the anti-jump at 04:18:545 (3,1) makes this kind of easy to miss.

...and that's all! This was quite fun to play. Thanks for posting it in my queue! And good luck with getting this approved. :)
Kert
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Soaprman wrote:

I think upping the circle size by one might not be a bad idea. It'd make the map accessible to more people without actually changing it much. - Some parts start looking ugly after this.. I don't want to do that =/ I made HP Drain quite low because the map is hard

03:34:302 (2) - sounds better snapped to 1/4. (i.e. move this 1/8 to the right on the timeline) - done
03:40:037 (2) - ^ - done
03:41:404 (2) - ^ - done

04:19:425 (1) - maybe remove this? The spacing contrasted with the anti-jump at 04:18:545 (3,1) makes this kind of easy to miss. - Sounds worse if I delete it. I think some places like this are not critical for map playability

...and that's all! This was quite fun to play. Thanks for posting it in my queue! And good luck with getting this approved. :)
Thank you =)
jericho2442
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well i dont see anything "unrank/approvable" in it now so i will star
OnosakiHito
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Well, I have now a good solution for the Taiko Map.
I've made for the first part 5min's of the song and the last 4min's will be the second part/new Taiko diff..

I will send you them later.

Greetings,
おのさき人
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Kert
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Cheers, jericho

OnosakiHito, hm.. I guess it'll be fine! Can't wait to play your diffs!
OnosakiHito
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Okay, I made now the first Taiko diff. part.
Here the link: http://www.sendspace.com/file/zora8e

Some updates are possible.
And it's important to know what the other people think about it.~
Galkan
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Seriously, I don't know if I will ever start making those combobursts you've requested. I know it's simple but I'M TOO FUCKING LAZY, DAMNIT! -.-

Forgive.
any34
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any34
Сделаю свою диффу на карту, если ты не против :roll:
Kert
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ответил в игре.
[Strike]
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[Strike]
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any34
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any34
мда... действительно сложно :(
не потяну.
кстати вот фикс тебе: марафон идет чуть меньше 9 минут, но я думаю, можно сказать что ровно 9.
Kert
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)
исправил

And thanks for the star, gaomon!
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Alright!

00:50:546 (1,2) - No!
00:51:091 (4,5) - No!
00:51:637 (7,8) - No!
Make these 1/4 or remove them!

01:35:748 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance between these shorter
02:19:847 - Normal hitsounds would sound alot better here.
02:31:090 (9,10) - It's a small thing but these two should be closer to each other, it can really mess up the stream.

03:25:656 - Why the short kiai section here? It doesn't fit.
05:39:563 - ^

05:51:768 (1,2) - ):
05:53:129 (1,2) - ):
05:54:339 (7) - ):
Can lead to very frustrating combobreaks. Do you really want to keep these jumps?

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nasty pattern and difficulty jump. I suggest decreasing the spacing on this one.
06:43:935 - Good place for a kiai time section!
07:53:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - Potential combobreaker ;(

This map could definitely use some more kiai sections. The ones you placed are very short. Place them wisely at epic moments in the song!

Other than that everything looks good to me!
Kert
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Lesjuh wrote:

Alright!

00:50:546 (1,2) - No!
00:51:091 (4,5) - No!
00:51:637 (7,8) - No!
Make these 1/4 or remove them! Made them 1/4

01:35:748 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance between these shorter done
02:19:847 - Normal hitsounds would sound alot better here. Yes, done
02:31:090 (9,10) - It's a small thing but these two should be closer to each other, it can really mess up the stream. Remapped the stream without grip snap

03:25:656 - Why the short kiai section here? It doesn't fit. I don't think so
05:39:563 - ^

05:51:768 (1,2) - ):
05:53:129 (1,2) - ):
05:54:339 (7) - ):
Can lead to very frustrating combobreaks. Do you really want to keep these jumps? Yes

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nasty pattern and difficulty jump. I suggest decreasing the spacing on this one. Decreased
06:43:935 - Good place for a kiai time section! Added
07:53:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - Potential combobreaker ;( Can't think of any other pattern.. I guess it's not that critical

This map could definitely use some more kiai sections. The ones you placed are very short. Place them wisely at epic moments in the song!

Other than that everything looks good to me!
Thank you!
OnosakiHito
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Okay, now it's star time.

*star*
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
As your request.

OnosakiHito's Taiko Oni
- There are 55 unsnapped objects. Unfortunatly both 1/4 and 1/3 notes are used so you need to snap those manually. (Or just copy + paste those parts to some other file, then snap it, then copy + paste back to this diff...)
- Some big notes are too random.

00:06:910 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - I'd rather put xxxxx xx xx xxx x?
00:15:273 (2,3,4) - kdk?
00:32:364 (1,1,2,1,1) - consider put xx x xx. (This applies to all other similar parts. Well, you don't need to change all of them, I'm just suggestting to put something like this to a few parts.)
00:49:697 (1) - Move to 00:49:728. (You don't need to use 1/6 here.)
00:49:879 (2) - Move to 00:49:910.
01:08:000 (2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - covert these to Big notes?
01:31:756 (1) - k?
02:10:118 (2) - delete this?
02:46:127 (2) - D?
02:48:951 (2,3,4) - I don't think 1/6 here is make sense.
02:50:362 (2,3,4) - ^
02:54:245 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:19:656 (1,1,1,1,1) - This is unrankable, as the end of the spinner and the start of spinner is overlapped. Also don't spam it like this.
04:37:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Personally I don't like this stream.
04:43:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
04:45:994 ~ 04:50:217 - Actually this part is 1/4, not 1/3. Up to you, though.
04:51:625 ~ 04:55:847 - ^
05:23:151 (2) - Add a note? (This applies to all other similar parts.)
05:41:328 (2) - k?
05:50:504 (5) - How about delete this, as there's BPM change right after this note, and this can be too confusing.
06:43:860 (16) - add d?
07:00:872 (2) - D?
07:13:953 (8) - delete this?
07:50:211 (2) - k?
08:10:177 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - How about change all to big notes, or just make 08:10:878 (1,2,3) to big notes?

I couldn't mod that precisly, as this one is really long map.

As there is an unrankable issue, I can't star right now. Sorry.
Kert
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I guess everything was fixed by OnosakiHito. Thank you, lepi!
Andrea
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Andrea
[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use the file "cursortrail.png". Remember to full submit after this fix.

Add "OnosakiHito" into the tags on both difficulties.

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]

02:32:171 (19) - New combo.
02:32:279 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:34:766 (19) - New combo.
02:34:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:17:314 (1) - Can you make this spinner a bit more longer?
04:21:361 (3) - New combo for make the slider visible.
07:26:739 (7,1) - Spacing, too close.
07:49:159 ~ 08:00:369 - This 2x BPM section is a bit unexpected... I suggest to remove.
Kert
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Kert

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use the file "cursortrail.png". Remember to full submit after this fix. - Added and full resubmitted

Add "OnosakiHito" into the tags on both difficulties. - Done

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]
...
Remapped 2x part, fixed spacing, new combos and spinner. Everything
Thanks a lot!
Andrea
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Andrea
Looks much better now.

Bubble #1~
Ekoro
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Ekoro
OMG YES !

Gogo rank :D
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Ninja!

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~
arien666
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arien666

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Ninja!

Enjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~
orz, why didn't I give a star for this song?
Enyway, good job :3
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus

osuplayer111 wrote:

Bubble #1~

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~
Huh? Bubble #2?
Jarby
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Jarby


So do we unrank it or what
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
At least I'm not who should decide that, but this one lacks bubble #2 and that's true, right?
Jarby
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Jarby
Well, nothing dreadful, I'll forgive some of the more creative spacing here since it's not that difficult to read and it makes relative sense, after all. A few sections are lacking hitsounds entirely, perhaps you could add some more in?

00:51:910 (1,2,3,4) - How are you supposed to read speed changes like this? There aren't any slider ticks and they're effectively random.
01:26:662 (1,2,3,1,2) - These sliders should be snapped to 1/3.
03:20:009 (1,2) - Failed symmetry here could be fixed up to make this cleaner, same with the following bit.
08:42:406 (3,4) - Yeah, these could be improved quite a bit. Take a look.
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