"Konachan.com - 10723 food hiiragi_kagami kusakabe_misao lucky_star minegishi_ayano" The combo colors are hard to see on top of this bg, since the combo color works on all the other bgs, I advise you exchange this bg with another one.
Source: capitalize the "b" in "beatmania"
Insane:
Normal mod:
00:30:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Since you were mostly following vocals up till now, this snapping to drums was quite random to me, so I advise you try to follow the vocals here
01:34:440 (1,1) - this jump was quite random in comparison to how you mapped this section so far, so I suggest changing this
02:10:431 (6) - ^
07:17:796 - since you seem to be mapping all the lyrics in this section, I think it is appropriate to add a note here
07:20:598 - ^
07:36:187 (4,5) - y did you stack these notes, the pattern will probably flow better if you make continue the stream with 5
08:42:396 (3,4) - place these out further so they are partially overlapped by 1 and 2
Combo mod:
00:32:455 (5) - earlier, you had a new combo for every new sound, so I advise adding a new combo here
00:33:819 (5) - ^
00:35:273 (4) - ^
00:38:182 (5) - ^
00:39:637 (5) - ^
00:58:910 (1,3) - to follow your combo mapping and follow the sounds, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3
01:23:407 (7) - new combo for new sound
02:22:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - add new combos here to be like the previous few sliders
03:34:302 (8) - new combo to be consistent with 03:35:714 (1)
03:48:243 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 03:47:538 (1)
05:05:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - add some combos in this section that are consistent to the previous few combos (sadly, I can't exactly figure out your pattern)
Timing section mod:
00:56:360 - move back a quarter note for the change in hitsound type
01:04:000 - 2 replicas of the same timing section at the same time, please remove the 2 copies
01:26:652 - move back a quarter note for the change in hitsound type
01:35:089 - a quarter note before this timing section, add a inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the use of custom hitsounds on the start of the slider this timing section is on)
01:42:228 (1) - move back a quarter note for the use of a noncustom hitsound on your first note
01:48:734 - move back a quarter note for the volume change
01:50:064 - ^
Going to stop the timing section mod here, but you need to go through the whole song and fix the timing sections like I did above. If you are wondering about the reasoning, check out the explanation in my signature.
Decent marathon. I didn't really how the difficulty level fluctuated so much, but I think is more of a personal preference. Star.