Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

Hello ^w^

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00:17:091 (1) - Could you shorten to 00:18:546 and put notes after? I think it's fine now
00:47:000 (2) - Remove clap plz? Removed
00:51:637 (7) - Extend a bit? I don't understand what do you mean by extending a note lol
01:52:307 (4,1) - Could you slowly fade the notes back in by adding a few notes to slowly reach the ones you placed? I think it will be better to have a break there
02:28:918 (1) - Could you make into a slider and make it reapeat up untill 02:29:566? Done. +Added one note after
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Other than that, the map is perfecto (Except there's nothing Perfecto about so many deathstreams for me @___@)
Star~

wanhyrzh wrote:

General: delete all the bookmarks(blue ticks) They are still useful for me :3
01:47:405(1) why not end this spinner a little earlier then add a circle here at the center? just as those you have done in earlier time. Done, thanks for the idea

Spinners: I can't make them longer.. cause it will ruin all the feeling of the song =/

04:51:625(1) why not make this slider a little bit longer with 2 reverse? I think it's more funny like this:
[attachment=0:bb39d]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:bb39d] I decided not to, it looks a bit ugly to my taste
04:53:032(1) ^

07:16:745(x) add a circle here and stack with the later Circle3?
07:19:547(x) ^
07:22:350(x) ^ Done all these
07:27:955(x) ^
07:30:757(x) ^

star~good luck with it! Thank you =)

Garven wrote:

Hrm, I'm not good at modding this sort of map, since I can't really play it. That and the song is D:

Anyway, as per your request:

[General]
Try to lower filesize a little bit. Try to aim for around 10 megs. - I can't do anything about that, images are already resized

[Insane]
00:49:455 (1) - Doesn't feel like a spot that would justify a .5 section.
00:50:546 (1,2) - These... why 1/8 snap? 1/4 won't work there
01:35:738 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit on the ridiculous side to me
01:37:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - These look really messy to me (same with copy paste later) - Made them look a bit better
03:14:274 (1,1,1) - Auto's not liking these spinners' length. etc. etc. - :/

Kind of an anti-climactic ending though. :/ Take it as a rest after the "storm" =)

KuraiPettan wrote:

cuuute_misao.jpg

James2250 wrote:

-Resize section pass and section fail so they are 800x600 or below - Did nothing here
-Why is there an audo lead in time? - deleted
-Some of your backgrounds in the folder are too big, resize them all so they are 1024x768 and below - done
-To my knowledge you don't need the 100g in the folder - deleted

00:53:728 (1) - start at 00:53:455 - done
00:57:455 (1) - remove new combo - done
00:57:819 (3) - new combo - done
05:38:330 (11) - make this shorter and add more repeats? - It was intended to sound like that, I like it how it is
05:43:981 (11) - ^

*star*

Soaprman wrote:

I think upping the circle size by one might not be a bad idea. It'd make the map accessible to more people without actually changing it much. - Some parts start looking ugly after this.. I don't want to do that =/ I made HP Drain quite low because the map is hard

03:34:302 (2) - sounds better snapped to 1/4. (i.e. move this 1/8 to the right on the timeline) - done
03:40:037 (2) - ^ - done
03:41:404 (2) - ^ - done

04:19:425 (1) - maybe remove this? The spacing contrasted with the anti-jump at 04:18:545 (3,1) makes this kind of easy to miss. - Sounds worse if I delete it. I think some places like this are not critical for map playability

...and that's all! This was quite fun to play. Thanks for posting it in my queue! And good luck with getting this approved.

Lesjuh wrote:

Alright!

00:50:546 (1,2) - No!
00:51:091 (4,5) - No!
00:51:637 (7,8) - No!
Make these 1/4 or remove them! Made them 1/4

01:35:748 (1,2,3,4) - Make the distance between these shorter done
02:19:847 - Normal hitsounds would sound alot better here. Yes, done
02:31:090 (9,10) - It's a small thing but these two should be closer to each other, it can really mess up the stream. Remapped the stream without grip snap

03:25:656 - Why the short kiai section here? It doesn't fit. I don't think so
05:39:563 - ^

05:51:768 (1,2) - ):
05:53:129 (1,2) - ):
05:54:339 (7) - ):
Can lead to very frustrating combobreaks. Do you really want to keep these jumps? Yes

06:58:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nasty pattern and difficulty jump. I suggest decreasing the spacing on this one. Decreased
06:43:935 - Good place for a kiai time section! Added
07:53:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - Potential combobreaker ;( Can't think of any other pattern.. I guess it's not that critical

This map could definitely use some more kiai sections. The ones you placed are very short. Place them wisely at epic moments in the song!

Other than that everything looks good to me!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use the file "cursortrail.png". Remember to full submit after this fix. - Added and full resubmitted

Add "OnosakiHito" into the tags on both difficulties. - Done

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]
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Remapped 2x part, fixed spacing, new combos and spinner. Everything

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Ninja!

Enjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Bubble #1~

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Ninja!

Anjoy your approved status! Have fun failing, everyone~

Jarby wrote:

A few sections are lacking hitsounds entirely, perhaps you could add some more in? - I prefer to leave some of the parts without hitsounds. Actually I tried placing some of them there, but all just started sounding worse and repetitive

00:51:910 (1,2,3,4) - How are you supposed to read speed changes like this? There aren't any slider ticks and they're effectively random. - ^_^' That's a good question haha. I don't really know how can it be read from the first try, but I think it's not that critical.
01:26:662 (1,2,3,1,2) - These sliders should be snapped to 1/3 - Remapped this part a bit
03:20:009 (1,2) - Failed symmetry here could be fixed up to make this cleaner, same with the following bit. - Tried my best to make them more cute
08:42:406 (3,4) - Yeah, these could be improved quite a bit. - Same

Let's not rush things

00:54:425 (1) - shouldn't this be on the blue tick?

Derekku wrote:

Taiko
*Isn't kiai supposed to only start/end on the downbeats of measures? Regardless, many kiai sections start/end at weird spots like blue ticks, so I highly suggest fixing those.
*Almost 3000 combo? Holy...

02:19:853 ~ 02:27:637 - Seems little random ;_;

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Derekku wrote:

Unranked ~2 months ago. It's ridiculous that this hasn't been re-approved yet. Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to pop again for a missing uninherited section and some concerns I have with Taiko.

[Taiko]
*Not really a big deal, but perhaps put Overall Difficulty back into the middle since Taiko diffs usually use the default settings? - Taiko diff's can also have higher or lower OD's.
*And I suppose remove the breaks since Taiko diffs don't need them. - It's okay, player need breaks.
00:56:374 - Kiai should start here on the white tick. - changed
01:10:920 - and end here. - changed
03:52:745 (5,6) - I think this would sound better being on the red/blue ticks than the blue/white ticks. - changed
03:53:451 (9,10) - ^ - changed
03:54:156 (13,14) - ^ - changed
04:34:743 - Kiai shouldn't end on a random tick, so either place it here (on the downbeat), or at 04:34:391. - changed
04:46:004 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - This pattern (and the similar ones after it) doesn't sound right no matter how many times I listen to it. - changed
The mapping does seem to match Miaso, but it sounds really awkward with the music. How about changing http://puu.sh/GEd to http://puu.sh/GEf? Thus, you would keep the first/second groups of notes the same but moving the third/fourth to the white tick. Then, repeat for the following measures until the end of Butterfly. (I won't be mad if you disagree, but it sounds really strange) - Still post for this last issue?(04:46:004 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1))
05:36:739 (1,2,1,1,1) - Kinda strange to start using streams of 5 notes when the same musical pattern only had four back at 05:00:034, but it's up to you. - denidet, it's okay.
05:49:445 - Perhaps end kiai on the downbeat (here) instead? - changed
07:03:290 - Expected kiai to end here, but it's up to you. - changed