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Nicki Minaj - Stupid Hoe

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Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
quick one before I sleep orz

maybe a very slightly darker shade of red or maybe I'm colourblind

Easy
00:09:651 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - if you are following 4 measure NC, remove NC at 00:12:051 (1) - , NC at 00:15:051 (1) - , remove NC at 00:16:851 (3) - . Normally I don't point out NC things but this one was inconsistent compared to rest of song
00:48:051 (1,1,2,1) - this rhythm just doesn't really make sense.. it is following nothing, (although there is nothing to follow because rap (I haaaaaaaate Nicki Minaj zzzzzz). I think a constructed rhythm would work better to follow the whatever sound that is (sounds like dog yelps) like this

Normal
nothing really

Advanced
00:15:651 (1) - I would ctrl+h this slider so it flows nicer
00:16:251 (2) - maybe a 1/2 repeat slider? to follow the vocals (which is pretty noticeable at this part)
00:44:451 (1,2,3) - imo this just looks kinda ugly... can't you just copy 00:43:251 (1,2,3) - rotate it and use that?
00:43:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - just a random thought, but this pattern is the most intense in the diff. If using vocals to justify this, then wouldn't 00:42:051 (4,5) - have the same rhythm? just a random thought
00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - any reason why the NCing here is not the same as the rest of diff, which is 2 measure NC? to fix, remove NC at 00:51:651 (1) - , NC at 00:52:851 (7) - , remove NC at 00:54:051 (1) - . The last NC can probably be allowed because of ending of drums, but if it were me, I would of removed it

moph's Hard
nothing really
00:29:451 (3) - it would be awesome if you can ctrl+g but I know you are following DS so zzzzzzzzzzz

the hardest diff
00:31:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this music part is basically the same as 00:28:851 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - yet, the rhythms are slightly different. players will be expecting the mapped rhythm will be the same because the music parts are so similar. I would consider removing that circle 4 and moving 00:32:151 (3) - to 319//63 OR adding a circle 4 to 00:29:901 -

ok I hate Nicki Minaj brb while I claw myself
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

Prismetical wrote:

This song describes my life! M4M ♥

Normal
00:11:751 (4,3) - stack properly Fixed
00:14:151 - circle
00:33:651 (1,3,4) - dislike that part... you should decide what to follow and not always switch between following drums and following others, try that:
I have to maintain a hard pace and at the same time easy here
00:33:651 (1) - make it symmetrical, looks slightly wrong It makes no difference ingame
00:33:651 (1,2) - the spacing between that two (I mean the spacing as in the picture below) doesn't look that good, rather but it somewhere at the top right to use the playfield more

00:34:551 (2,1) - overlay here, another reason to move (2)
00:36:051 (1,2,3) - again a switch, decide whether to follow the drums or the whistles, switching is confusing
00:38:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - pointless, this is the only part where you follow voice and then you follow drums again, confusing, remove and remap that part
00:47:451 (2) - shorten slider, doesn't fit here
00:52:551 (6,2) - stack

Advanced
00:13:251 (3) - remove the red point, looks weird For me its good
00:13:851 (4) - ^
00:28:851 - at this point it is a mistake to put a break in this because that would be so cool to see this mapped I think here need not be mapped, has a very low rate

Hard
amazing work on that one! just one thing, I couldn't follow the first part very well, mostly due to unlucky stackings, with that I mean stackings like 00:11:151 (7,8) - where you just don't see if there is something under that slider or not, try to put the stacked circles on the next object rather than under the previous

Much luck!
Sankyuu

Rizen wrote:

quick one before I sleep orz

maybe a very slightly darker shade of red or maybe I'm colourblind

Easy
00:09:651 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - if you are following 4 measure NC, remove NC at 00:12:051 (1) - , NC at 00:15:051 (1) - , remove NC at 00:16:851 (3) - . Normally I don't point out NC things but this one was inconsistent compared to rest of song Fixed
00:48:051 (1,1,2,1) - this rhythm just doesn't really make sense.. it is following nothing, (although there is nothing to follow because rap (I haaaaaaaate Nicki Minaj zzzzzz). I think a constructed rhythm would work better to follow the whatever sound that is (sounds like dog yelps) like this Changed

Normal
nothing really

Advanced
00:15:651 (1) - I would ctrl+h this slider so it flows nicer For me its good
00:16:251 (2) - maybe a 1/2 repeat slider? to follow the vocals (which is pretty noticeable at this part)
00:44:451 (1,2,3) - imo this just looks kinda ugly... can't you just copy 00:43:251 (1,2,3) - rotate it and use that?
00:43:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - just a random thought, but this pattern is the most intense in the diff. If using vocals to justify this, then wouldn't 00:42:051 (4,5) - have the same rhythm? just a random thought I try to do easy and difficult parts
00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - any reason why the NCing here is not the same as the rest of diff, which is 2 measure NC? to fix, remove NC at 00:51:651 (1) - , NC at 00:52:851 (7) - , remove NC at 00:54:051 (1) - . The last NC can probably be allowed because of ending of drums, but if it were me, I would of removed it Fixed

moph's Hard
nothing really
00:29:451 (3) - it would be awesome if you can ctrl+g but I know you are following DS so zzzzzzzzzzz

the hardest diff
00:31:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this music part is basically the same as 00:28:851 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - yet, the rhythms are slightly different. players will be expecting the mapped rhythm will be the same because the music parts are so similar. I would consider removing that circle 4 and moving 00:32:151 (3) - to 319//63 OR adding a circle 4 to 00:29:901 - Fixed

ok I hate Nicki Minaj brb while I claw myself
xDDD Sankyu Rizen ♥

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

FROM CHAT IN-GAME

HERE

General
Background resolution is incorrect. BG should be 1366x768
apart from BG every thing is fine. I'll Fix :3

Easy
DS1.1 right ?
00:11:451 (2) - here to 00:12:051 (1) - Spacing from circle(2) too far from slider(1) , move a circle(2) to X:444 Y:152 Fixed
00:15:051 (2) - Seem the problem like above^ move circle(2) to X:64 Y:212 Fixed
00:16:851 (1) - ^ X:256 Y:104
00:36:051 (2) - NC ? Oki
00:42:651 (4) - The blanket guy it doesn't fit with 00:40:851 (3) - please check again It makes no difference ingame

Normal
00:12:051 (1) - Spacing error you can move it to the right 1 space.
00:11:751 (4,3) - Let them stack I think is pretty guy.
00:24:051 (1) - Ctrl+J ? make them flow with the circle(2) 00:24:951 (2) - Fixed
00:27:351 (2,3) - Spacing error X:284 Y:292 is pretty fine. Fixed

Advanced
00:25:251 (5) - In my opinion NC here is fine, but if you don't want to have a short combo, you don't want to do Fixed
00:39:651 (3,4) - It doesn't balance, I suggest you delete slider(4) and copy slider(3) then ctrl+H, don't forget to fix distance Fixed
00:45:051 (3,1) - Spacing error ? please check Fixed

moph's Hard
This is hard diff but HP Drain and OD too high, two things should be 6.
00:11:751 (9) - Spacing far away from circle(8)
00:12:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ DS1.5 or 1.6 ?
00:17:151 (4) -The blanket doesn't fit with the end of slider(3) 00:16:851 (3) - move a bit end point of slider(4) to the right
00:24:951 (3) - Here DS is 1.4 right ? Spacing error
00:26:151 (6) - The blanket again with 00:25:701 (5) - try to check
00:45:651 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This is a pretty shape, but should be make it clearly. I think isn't good for Hard diff

Stupid Stupid
00:19:251 (1) - The blanket make it balance with 00:19:701 (2) - It makes no difference ingame
WOW overall nice diff

That's all GL for ranking . :D
Sankyuuuuuuu ♥♥
Mekki
1,795 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki

Prismetical wrote:

This song describes my life! M4M ♥

Normal
00:11:751 (4,3) - stack properly
00:14:151 - circle
00:33:651 (1,3,4) - dislike that part... you should decide what to follow and not always switch between following drums and following others, try that:

00:33:651 (1) - make it symmetrical, looks slightly wrong
00:33:651 (1,2) - the spacing between that two (I mean the spacing as in the picture below) doesn't look that good, rather but it somewhere at the top right to use the playfield more

00:34:551 (2,1) - overlay here, another reason to move (2)
00:36:051 (1,2,3) - again a switch, decide whether to follow the drums or the whistles, switching is confusing
00:38:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - pointless, this is the only part where you follow voice and then you follow drums again, confusing, remove and remap that part Sorry, i don't understand what can be confusing at this part, i followed vocals all the time, and on Marianna's part too.
00:47:451 (2) - shorten slider, doesn't fit here Ofc, it does..
00:52:551 (6,2) - stack done
PASTAAAAAAAAAAAA
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moph
1,147 posts
Joined January 2013
moph

Prismetical wrote:

Hard
amazing work on that one! just one thing, I couldn't follow the first part very well, mostly due to unlucky stackings, with that I mean stackings like 00:11:151 (7,8) - where you just don't see if there is something under that slider or not, try to put the stacked circles on the next object rather than under the previous

/Changed one stack but kept the others, they are stacked intentionally under the slider end for emphasis on the following note

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

moph's Hard
This is hard diff but HP Drain and OD too high, two things should be 6. /I'm just filling the gap left by the other diffs, not going to lower unless the easier ones are
00:11:751 (9) - Spacing far away from circle(8) /fixed spacing
00:12:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ DS1.5 or 1.6 ? /same
00:17:151 (4) -The blanket doesn't fit with the end of slider(3) 00:16:851 (3) - move a bit end point of slider(4) to the right /fixed blanket
00:24:951 (3) - Here DS is 1.4 right ? Spacing error /yeah fixed
00:26:151 (6) - The blanket again with 00:25:701 (5) - try to check /fixed
00:45:651 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This is a pretty shape, but should be make it clearly. I think isn't good for Hard diff /I'll get more opinions on it, keeping as is for now

Rizen wrote:

moph's Hard
nothing really
00:29:451 (3) - it would be awesome if you can ctrl+g but I know you are following DS so zzzzzzzzzzz /yeah soz buddy, wana keep to the DS
ok I hate Nicki Minaj brb while I claw myself lmao
Thanks for the mods :D

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138,346,13101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,276,13251,2,0,P|48:240|44:200,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,212,13551,2,0,P|152:172|168:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,13851,2,0,B|320:100|320:100|388:80,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,44,14301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,44,14451,6,0,P|487:78|482:113,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,14751,2,0,P|408:230|413:264,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,336,15051,2,0,L|324:360,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,15501,2,0,L|180:344,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,304,15801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,15951,2,0,P|160:188|152:144,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,16251,6,0,L|12:88,2,70,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,52,16701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,108,16851,2,0,L|364:96,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,28,17151,2,0,P|448:84|428:168,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,17601,6,0,L|376:280,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,344,17901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,344,18051,2,0,P|368:376|308:352,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,344,18651,2,0,P|144:376|204:352,1,140
124,100,19251,6,0,P|104:160|132:260,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,272,19701,2,0,B|332:252|332:252|412:276,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,188,20151,2,0,L|392:160,1,83.9999974365235,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,48,20451,2,0,B|304:72|304:72|196:40,1,167.999994873047,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,100,20901,2,0,B|248:144|248:144|192:168,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,21351,2,0,L|28:188,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,308,21651,6,0,B|161:351|161:351|204:328,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,22101,2,0,L|460:352,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,22551,2,0,P|520:200|504:156,1,83.9999974365235,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,52,22851,2,0,B|436:56|436:56|388:76|388:76|316:80,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,23301,2,0,B|224:160|212:121|212:121|156:156|160:208,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,23751,2,0,P|38:188|46:229,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,344,24051,6,0,B|64:364|120:336|120:336|144:356|196:352,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,340,24501,2,0,B|428:328|428:328|392:352,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,260,24951,2,0,L|412:252,1,83.9999974365235,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,172,25251,2,0,P|512:92|480:4,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,92,25701,2,0,B|320:116|320:116|220:84,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,44,26151,2,0,P|120:96|136:144,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,26451,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,352,26751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,352,26901,2,0,P|412:296|380:196,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,280,27351,2,0,L|204:340,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,27651,2,0,P|88:296|120:196,1,167.999994873047,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,80,28101,2,0,P|80:64|32:76,2,83.9999974365235,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,28551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,36,28701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,112,28851,6,0,P|384:88|460:120,1,125.999996154785,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,200,29301,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,176,29451,2,0,P|384:212|396:256,1,62.9999980773926,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,328,29751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,328,30051,2,0,L|328:336,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,268,30501,2,0,L|100:276,1,125.999996154785,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,336,30951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,336,31251,6,0,P|8:268|36:196,1,125.999996154785,2|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,188,31701,2,0,P|148:120|120:48,1,125.999996154785,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,28,32151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,28,32451,2,0,B|92:40|92:40|168:24,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,32901,2,0,B|311:71|311:71|375:83,1,125.999996154785,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,124,33351,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,124,33651,6,0,P|464:192|484:264,1,140,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,34101,2,0,L|304:268,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,280,34551,2,0,L|184:356,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,352,34851,2,0,L|96:276,1,70,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,35151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,192,35301,2,0,P|176:124|140:40,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,124,35751,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,52,36051,6,0,P|312:44|364:60,2,70,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,156,36501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,192,36651,2,0,P|444:268|424:332,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,264,37101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,340,37251,2,0,L|152:376,1,70,4|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,304,37551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,304,37701,2,0,L|228:252,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,144,38151,2,0,L|160:172,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,152,38451,6,0,P|40:88|68:8,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,38901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,39051,2,0,B|236:60|236:60|328:40,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,20,39501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,20,39651,2,0,L|416:100,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,168,39951,2,0,L|499:237,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,336,40251,2,0,P|384:352|292:332,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,260,40701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,260,40851,6,0,L|112:352,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,264,41301,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,264,41451,2,0,P|28:216|32:188,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,92,41751,2,0,L|-8:84,2,70,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,42201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,92,42351,2,0,L|264:84,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,16,42651,2,0,P|364:84|340:160,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,43101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,248,43251,6,0,L|376:272,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,376,43551,2,0,L|264:356,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,43851,2,0,L|52:368,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,256,44301,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,256,44451,2,0,L|28:176,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,44751,2,0,L|140:112,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,56,45051,2,0,P|292:32|364:60,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,45501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,220,45651,6,0,P|400:172|392:140,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,156,45951,2,0,P|280:204|288:236,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,220,46251,6,0,P|412:172|404:140,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,46551,2,0,P|268:204|276:236,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,46851,6,0,P|424:172|416:140,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,156,47151,2,0,P|256:204|264:236,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,324,47451,6,0,P|264:344|192:320,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,230,48051,6,0,P|-11:148|8:68,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,20,48501,2,0,L|200:48,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,44,48801,1,4,3:0:0:0:
316,44,48951,2,0,L|400:16,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
504,68,49251,6,0,P|524:152|496:252,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
468,340,49701,2,0,L|384:296,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
276,296,50001,1,4,3:0:0:0:
276,296,50151,2,0,L|201:334,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
84,332,50451,6,0,P|64:252|100:156,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
196,124,50901,2,0,L|112:64,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
236,28,51201,1,4,3:0:0:0:
236,28,51351,2,0,L|320:88,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,51651,6,0,P|440:128|420:256,1,167.999994873047,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
468,352,52101,2,0,P|420:360|364:344,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
268,356,52401,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,356,52551,2,0,P|226:362|185:354,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
68,336,52851,6,0,L|80:244,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
40,139,53151,1,4,3:0:0:0:
40,139,53301,2,0,P|81:131|122:137,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,53601,1,4,3:0:0:0:
232,176,53751,2,0,P|240:124|228:76,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
332,12,54051,6,0,L|436:12,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
512,96,54351,1,4,3:0:0:0:
512,96,54501,2,0,P|504:144|524:204,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,300,54801,1,4,3:0:0:0:
472,300,54951,2,0,L|368:300,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,348,55251,6,0,L|168:348,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
104,252,55551,1,4,3:0:0:0:
104,252,55701,2,0,L|208:252,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,56001,1,4,3:0:0:0:
312,236,56151,2,0,P|320:180|300:124,1,83.9999974365235,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,56451,6,0,B|192:92|192:92|120:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,12,56901,2,0,P|32:84|64:156,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,172,57351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Anyone can disable SBs but there's always the lyrics. 14+
Why would you need to do this? since when is age 14 a milestone?

I can see an age warning required if it was 18+ but since 18+ things arent rankable in osu then age warnings are kinda redundant.
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

Nathan Kiss wrote:

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Anyone can disable SBs but there's always the lyrics. 14+
Why would you need to do this? since when is age 14 a milestone?

I can see an age warning required if it was 18+ but since 18+ things arent rankable in osu then age warnings are kinda redundant.
I'll talk with one Qat about it
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Hellow! checking upon Marianna's request and as Nicki Minaj is one my favorite singers here I drop a mod. <3
[ General]Skinning
  1. If you decided to skin the circle, then include all the elements who belong to its nature. According to Ranking Criteria, you should add followpoint.png too as well as you skinned the other elements. Please refer to this for further information. Adding the default followpoint which you can download it here would hurt no one.
  2. The same goes with the reversearrow, it belongs to the slider-family according to this thread. Hence, the other slider.png elements must be added to the folder. They are sliderscorepoint.png, sliderb.png and sliderfollowcircle.png respectively. You can ask me in pm if you need more help with this.
Storyboard
  1. Would you mind telling me if the following elements are being used? Otherwise, remove them if they're not changing anything in the mapset.
    1. sb\lyric\thumbs.db
    2. sb\lyric\22~56.png
  2. The lyrics are way confusing sometimes due the bright part that the bg has in the bottorm. Due to that, it's so hard top predict what the lyrics are saying in these specific parts 00:09:651 - 00:12:051 - 00:21:651 - etc. I highly suggest you to find another bg which be more suitable to the mapsets / lyrics / singer; the current context with the anime girl doesn't make sense at all.
Spread
  1. The gap between the insane and the moph's hard is actually big. It's almost 1.4 stars and this doesn't help at all to players who passes the hard since the transitions between the diffs is rather exaggerated. I do believe adding a hyper diff here between both diff would improve the spread issue in this mapset. Otherwise, try to reduce the DS over the jumps of the Insane.
Call me back once these issues were addressed properly.
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

HappyRocket88 wrote:


Hellow! checking upon Marianna's request and as Nicki Minaj is one my favorite singers here I drop a mod. <3
[ General]Skinning
  1. If you decided to skin the circle, then include all the elements who belong to its nature. According to Ranking Criteria, you should add followpoint.png too as well as you skinned the other elements. Please refer to this for further information. Adding the default followpoint which you can download it here would hurt no one.
  2. The same goes with the reversearrow, it belongs to the slider-family according to this thread. Hence, the other slider.png elements must be added to the folder. They are sliderscorepoint.png, sliderb.png and sliderfollowcircle.png respectively. You can ask me in pm if you need more help with this.
Storyboard
  1. Would you mind telling me if the following elements are being used? Otherwise, remove them if they're not changing anything in the mapset.
    1. sb\lyric\thumbs.db
    2. sb\lyric\22~56.png
  2. The lyrics are way confusing sometimes due the bright part that the bg has in the bottorm. Due to that, it's so hard top predict what the lyrics are saying in these specific parts 00:09:651 - 00:12:051 - 00:21:651 - etc. I highly suggest you to find another bg which be more suitable to the mapsets / lyrics / singer; the current context with the anime girl doesn't make sense at all.
Spread
  1. The gap between the insane and the moph's hard is actually big. It's almost 1.4 stars and this doesn't help at all to players who passes the hard since the transitions between the diffs is rather exaggerated. I do believe adding a hyper diff here between both diff would improve the spread issue in this mapset. Otherwise, try to reduce the DS over the jumps of the Insane.
Call me back once these issues were addressed properly.
All fixed!
The only thing I did not accept was BG, I really think it looks good and I do not think the whole world will read the lyrics (But I could read well) >.<
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Marianna wrote:

The only thing I did not accept was BG, I really think it looks good and I do not think the whole world will read the lyrics (But I could read well) >.<
I'm sorry but, frankly, the bg was the issue you should've changed compared to the other ones. An anime characters doesn't make any sense with the song and it doesn't co-relate with the song itself. You can ask other BNs/QATs for more opinions, though. What I do believe is that placing these kind of backgrounds would fit better with the lyrics.



Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna
Ok new BG :D
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
In youtube, people hate this song :v
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

KittyAdventure wrote:

In youtube, people hate this song :v
v:
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
My twin, sorry for late ;w; (Sorry for doublepost too ;w;)



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]
  1. Disbale "Letterbox during breaks" because that not really need.
  2. I think this song is not really good too for 16 years old (I suggestion you change to 18+)
    See this map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/301072
  3. Used offset in 00:00:051
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:051 (1) - Trying to not used NC again
  2. 00:37:851 - Add a circle because has a sound and adding whistle
  3. Well, i think you need remapping in kiai time part in 00:48:051.
    That not suit with background music in 00:48:051 (1)
[Collab Normal]
  1. OD +1
  2. 00:34:851 (2) - How about slider stopped in white tick? That's better than stopped in red tick.
  3. 00:37:252 (2) - ^
  4. 00:42:051 (3) - Out from line!
  5. 00:44:901 - Add a circle because has a sound
[Advanced]
  1. CS used 3, OD -1
  2. 00:28:851 - I think you can mapping some note in this time.
[Hard]
  1. Used CS 4 and AR, HP, OD -1
  2. 00:18:051 (3,4) - Out from line!
  3. 00:43:551 (2) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:351 (2,3) - Blanket is error
  2. 00:13:551 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:14:751 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:17:751 (4) - Move to x:136|y:64
  5. 00:23:751 (3,4) - Blanket is error
  6. 00:27:351 (3) - Change a position
  7. 00:34:251 (3) - Move to x:392|y:32
  8. 00:38:751 (2) - Blanket is error
  9. 00:41:451 (3) - Move to x:376|y:160
  10. 00:49:551 (2,3) - Blanket is error
  11. 00:56:451 (1) - Move to x:176|y:84
Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all)

Good Luck~
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

KittyAdventure wrote:

My twin, sorry for late ;w; (Sorry for doublepost too ;w;)



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT

[General]
  1. Disbale "Letterbox during breaks" because that not really need.i cant
  2. I think this song is not really good too for 16 years old (I suggestion you change to 18+)
    See this map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/301072 Ok!
[Easy]
  1. Well, i think you need remapping in kiai time part in 00:48:051.
    That not suit with background music in 00:48:051 (1)     I was explained this for you ingame ♥

Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all) This is one mod you need kds ♥

Good Luck~
Sankyu ♥
snz
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snz
Melhor Mapa Que Eu Já Vi :D

Merece A Minha Estrela ☆ --> ★
Marianna
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Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

Ppuskalin wrote:

Melhor Mapa Que Eu Já Vi :D

Merece A Minha Estrela ☆ --> ★
Sankyuu ♥
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Recheck as promised. Sorry for the late. No kudosu!
[ General]
  1. There's currently an unrankable issue regarding spread on the mapset. The main concern resides over the transition of the Easy and the Normal. The normal has almost the triple of notes in comparison with the Easy and that's not good. You have three options: either making the Normal easier by reducing objects by avoiding 1/2 objects, making the Easy harder or renaming the Easy to Beginner and add another diff.
  2. Skin: The followpoint.png is making troubles to players for the ones who play with no dim background due the color of itself. I do believe making the folowpoint white with make stuff readable and friendlier to players.
  3. Uncheck Widescreen Support and LetterBox During Breaks. There's no need to have them enabled since it plays totally find without it.
  4. Combo color two blends with the background which might possibly alter how players see the objects in game. I highly suggest to try out this one, which in gameplay, would look like this:
    Combo2 : 239,67,84

[ Easy]
  1. Since this is a beginner diff, Slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. Try to make a smoother and more readable shape for this slider.
  2. 00:21:651 (3) The slider-tail sound is really noisy. It doesn't make sense to emphasize this slider with the current sound. It would be better if you swap the hitsound in this way Sample set: Auto | Additions: Drum to have consistency with the previous sound of the slider-tail 00:19:251 (1)
  3. 00:28:251 (4) Whistle here to highlight better the instruments of this segment.
  4. 00:45:651 (3) The current slider sound off due the offbeat is making with the slider-tail. It would make more sense if you tried a 3/1 slider with a reverse to emphasize better the music. The current is just odd imo.
  5. 00:48:051 (1) - 00:52:851 (1) These two sliders are a nonono over Easy difficulties. They're skipping many important beats which makes an awful rhythm due the exaggerated length. It would make more sense if you tried sliders like this 00:51:651 (2) to fill up the patterning.
[]
Overall not a bad diff, I do believe getting more mods will make this mapset perfect.
[ Collab Normal]
Settings
  1. OD + 1, in this way you'll have consistency with the way the OD increases among the difficulties.
  1. 00:14:151 Add a note here. It will give players a better idea where the next downbeat will start.
  2. 00:39:351 (2,3) This slider is skipping the downbeat here which is the one who has more input on the segment. I highly suggest to remove 00:39:501 (3) - and 00:39:951 (4) Then, place a 1/1 slider which starts properly in the white tick.
  3. 00:46:851 (1) Remove NC here.
  4. Why the NC here 00:48:051 (1,2,3,4) is shorter than 00:49:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? Please, consider to make the NC'ing consistent among the diff since this is a Normal difficulty.
[]
I complain about some rhythms this difficulty manages, avoiding creating offbeats here would make this diff better.
[ Advanced]
  1. 00:25:251 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency with the way you managed the NC.
  2. 00:46:851 (4) Ctrl + J for a better for to (4) to (5)
  3. 00:13:851 (4,1) The flow over this section is rather weird because the slider-tail of (4) suggests the next note will be at the top, where the (1) ends creating an uncomfortable flow for players. The difference is quite high if you compare:
    this
    vs

    this
    Hence I heavily suggest to re-place some object to make this part more readable and catchy.
  4. Please, map the break. There's no need to have such as a short break on this difficulty since the song was cut. It does make sense in the Easy and the Normal, but not in this diff.
[]
Really a polished diff. Just those concerns that destroyed the flow over this section
[ moph's Hard]
  1. 00:11:601 (8) Having this understack over this cute difficulty doesn't play good due the stack leniency you managed in this difficulty. It only makes troubles to players to click it since they're hidden. I do believe staking it over the next slider-head would make more sense and play better just as well as you did in the upcoming patterns like 00:14:301 (8,1) - 00:40:701 (8,1) - etc
  2. Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterbox During breaks since the diff plays totally fine without it.
[]
I honestly don't find such as errors on your GDs. Good job!
[ Insane] I honestly thought you were going to name this difficulty different. Like extract a fragment of the lyrics like "Headed Shoes" or "Stuntman" would fit here.
  1. 00:30:951 (3,1) Really weird transition between them. It would make more sense if you placed them as a non-stack as you did in the upcoming patterns like 00:33:351 (3,1) - 00:42:651 (3,4) - etc.
  2. 00:45:651 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) I highly dislike the NC spam here. It would make more sense if you tried to remove some NC just as well as you did in the previous jump. The current confuses due the place of the objects which made a non intuitively pattern here.
[]
Not a bad diff! But could be improved!
[]
Good luck!
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Recheck as promised. Sorry for the late. No kudosu!
[ General]
  1. There's currently an unrankable issue regarding spread on the mapset. The main concern resides over the transition of the Easy and the Normal. The normal has almost the triple of notes in comparison with the Easy and that's not good. You have three options: either making the Normal easier by reducing objects by avoiding 1/2 objects, making the Easy harder or renaming the Easy to Beginner and add another diff. MkGuh will make one Easy
  2. Skin: The followpoint.png is making troubles to players for the ones who play with no dim background due the color of itself. I do believe making the folowpoint white with make stuff readable and friendlier to players. Changed
  3. Uncheck Widescreen Support and LetterBox During Breaks. There's no need to have them enabled since it plays totally find without it. I like LetterBox During Breaks
  4. Combo color two blends with the background which might possibly alter how players see the objects in game. I highly suggest to try out this one, which in gameplay, would look like this: fixed
    Combo2 : 239,67,84

[ Easy]
  1. Since this is a beginner diff, Slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. Try to make a smoother and more readable shape for this slider.
  2. 00:21:651 (3) The slider-tail sound is really noisy. It doesn't make sense to emphasize this slider with the current sound. It would be better if you swap the hitsound in this way Sample set: Auto | Additions: Drum to have consistency with the previous sound of the slider-tail 00:19:251 (1) Fixed
  3. 00:28:251 (4) Whistle here to highlight better the instruments of this segment. There's no reason for me to put Whistle here
  4. 00:45:651 (3) The current slider sound off due the offbeat is making with the slider-tail. It would make more sense if you tried a 3/1 slider with a reverse to emphasize better the music. The current is just odd imo. I did so to become more easily
  5. 00:48:051 (1) - 00:52:851 (1) These two sliders are a nonono over Easy difficulties. They're skipping many important beats which makes an awful rhythm due the exaggerated length. It would make more sense if you tried sliders like this 00:51:651 (2) to fill up the patterning.
[]
Overall not a bad diff, I do believe getting more mods will make this mapset perfect.
[ Collab Normal]
Settings
  1. OD + 1, in this way you'll have consistency with the way the OD increases among the difficulties.
  1. 00:14:151 Add a note here. It will give players a better idea where the next downbeat will start.
  2. 00:39:351 (2,3) This slider is skipping the downbeat here which is the one who has more input on the segment. I highly suggest to remove 00:39:501 (3) - and 00:39:951 (4) Then, place a 1/1 slider which starts properly in the white tick.
  3. 00:46:851 (1) Remove NC here.
  4. Why the NC here 00:48:051 (1,2,3,4) is shorter than 00:49:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? Please, consider to make the NC'ing consistent among the diff since this is a Normal difficulty.
[]
I complain about some rhythms this difficulty manages, avoiding creating offbeats here would make this diff better.
[ Advanced]
  1. 00:25:251 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency with the way you managed the NC.
  2. 00:46:851 (4) Ctrl + J for a better for to (4) to (5)
  3. 00:13:851 (4,1) The flow over this section is rather weird because the slider-tail of (4) suggests the next note will be at the top, where the (1) ends creating an uncomfortable flow for players. The difference is quite high if you compare:
    this
    vs

    this
    Hence I heavily suggest to re-place some object to make this part more readable and catchy.
  4. Please, map the break. There's no need to have such as a short break on this difficulty since the song was cut. It does make sense in the Easy and the Normal, but not in this diff.
[]
Really a polished diff. Just those concerns that destroyed the flow over this section
[ moph's Hard]
  1. 00:11:601 (8) Having this understack over this cute difficulty doesn't play good due the stack leniency you managed in this difficulty. It only makes troubles to players to click it since they're hidden. I do believe staking it over the next slider-head would make more sense and play better just as well as you did in the upcoming patterns like 00:14:301 (8,1) - 00:40:701 (8,1) - etc
  2. Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterbox During breaks since the diff plays totally fine without it.
[]
I honestly don't find such as errors on your GDs. Good job!
[ Insane] I honestly thought you were going to name this difficulty different. Like extract a fragment of the lyrics like "Headed Shoes" or "Stuntman" would fit here.
  1. 00:30:951 (3,1) Really weird transition between them. It would make more sense if you placed them as a non-stack as you did in the upcoming patterns like 00:33:351 (3,1) - 00:42:651 (3,4) - etc. I do not like many of the same things
  2. 00:45:651 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) I highly dislike the NC spam here. It would make more sense if you tried to remove some NC just as well as you did in the previous jump. The current confuses due the place of the objects which made a non intuitively pattern here. For me it is great many maps have it :roll:
[]
Not a bad diff! But could be improved!
[]
Good luck!
All fixed in Normal / Advanced / Hard In the Advanced I just did not accept one thing: I do not mapped to break because it is a very easy difficulty to have a part so calm so mapped
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
No Kudosu for this because modding just 1 new diff

[MkGuh's Easy]
  1. 00:13:251 (3) - Out from line.
  2. 00:18:051 (2) - I think you need to remove this because a newbie/new player will confured.
  3. 00:47:751 - Add a circle because has a sound.
Good luck for rebubble~ o3o
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

KittyAdventure wrote:

No Kudosu for this because modding just 1 new diff

[MkGuh's Easy]
  1. 00:13:251 (3) - Out from line.
  2. 00:18:051 (2) - I think you need to remove this because a newbie/new player will confured.
  3. 00:47:751 - Add a circle because has a sound.
Good luck for rebubble~ o3o
Sankyu ♥
Mekki
1,795 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
No fixes to mod, sorry. That part has nothing that is confusing for beginners, the slider isn't overlaping with HP Bar and that gap is proposital because of the vocals.
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Please, enable Widescreen support you have a 16:9 background at moph's Hard
Marianna
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Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna

XinCrin wrote:

Please, enable Widescreen support you have a 16:9 background at moph's Hard
Ok
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
nope xd
Last edited by HappyRocket88 , edited 1 time in total.
Mekki
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Joined November 2014
Mekki
lol
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
skin isn't that nice

sb isn't 18+, you censored cursewords. the song itself however, is 18+. so you should list that at the top of the bms page.

00:07:551 - the "ugh" should be something more like "mmh" instead, because "ugh" really isn't the right word. it should also start at 00:06:351 - instead of 00:07:551 - because it makes no sense to have the lyric for it one second after it's said.

00:18:651 - "You see where Brad at" should have a "?" at the end, as that's how the lyrics should be.

00:19:251 - this should be "Ice my wrist-es and I piss on b!ches" instead of "Ice my wrists and I piss on b!tches".

00:31:251 - it's "Jordans" not "Jordan"

also lyrics at 00:45:501 - should be "I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish", you have five instead of four.

and "a bitch would" should start at 00:47:001 -.

a lot of your capitalization is wrong, e.g. "I'm Angelina, You Jennifer" instead of "I'm Angelina, you Jennifer", but that's not really a big deal unless you care about quality, which you should i guess.

good job on the mp3 cut, it's not bad.
Loony
226 posts
Joined October 2014
Loony
Hello there! Here's a mod:
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:651 (1,2,3) - Make it a perfect triangle for better looking and esthetical reasons.
  2. 00:19:251 (1,3) - I would make a blanket between the beginning of the 1st slider and the end of the 3rd slider, or generally changed it, f.e. smth like that. Also for esthetical reasons.
  3. 00:56:451 (1) - Move the red slider tick, the one making the slider sharply curved, a bit to the right. To make it perfect ;)
Hope so this short mod was heplful anyway!
Good luck ;)
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki
also wtf is 00:47:451 (3) - in angelina diff lmfao
Marianna
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Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
Marianna
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-Spy_old
Mod!

[Notes]

Just 1, why would you leave out the part where she says "stupid hoe" if thats the song name. Nothing wrong with it dw, but you might wanna change the title to "excerpt" or "Edit" cause it may affect the rank-ability?

[Beginner]

00:16:851 (3) - slider ends at an awkward time, I know you wanted it to end at the start of "Bitch" but its misleading to beginners because its longer by 1 tick than the previous slider.

00:57:573 - Kiai should just end when the map ends, awkward to end kiai in the middle of a word.

Nice map!

[Mk's Easy]

00:16:851 (1) - This slider feel really awkward, maybe make it longer, so the reverse starts when she says "Bitch" (Its a really stressed word in this song)

00:21:651 (1) - Hit sound???? (end of reverse slider)

00:38:451 (1) - Kiai start here?

00:55:251 (1) - space this farther away from previous slider.

Good map!

[Collab Normal]

00:15:051 (2) - This slider is placed awkwardly, try to have it resemble the previous slider.

00:19:701 (2) - I tried moving the slider, and it sounds better if its placed 2 ticks forward.

00:27:351 (2) - improper stack

00:34:851 (2) - This slider ends at an awkward position, sounds and plays better if ended 2 ticks sooner.

00:35:751 (3) - Can this note be moved to this time? Sounds better.

00:43:251 (1) - Can you remove this note? Sounds better that way.

00:45:651 - to 00:47:451 - can you remap to compensate the singer when she says "I wish I wish I wish" ???

Nice map :)

[Advanced]

00:11:751 (4) - This slider plays and sounds awkward, its better of as a single note than a short slider.

00:17:451 (4) - Make slider longer? Sounds very weird :P

00:35:301 (4) - make this slider start 00:35:451 - instead? Sounds better.

00:36:501 - put one note in-between these sliders, will sound very nice, try it! and also make the next slider start later

00:37:251 (3) - here, you can 1. remove the slider if you agree to the previous point, or make 00:37:701 (4) - start a tad bit later.



Good map set! Like the song! Im not experienced enough to mod for anything higher than 2.5 sorry :cry:
Tony
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Joined July 2010
Tony
get this ranked pls ;w;
Yijun_old_1
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Joined June 2016
Yijun_old_1
I LOVE THIS MAP OMG!!!!!!!!!
Aurele
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Joined January 2011
Aurele
Y'all wanted a twist, eh.

Come'on Marianna!

Angelina
00:48:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - Let's get sickening!

On a more serious note, if you were going to revive this, I would change the pattern of the whole kiai to this, it feels more suitable with the song and the beats!
Marianna
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Topic Starter
Marianna

Marianna wrote:

Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
oi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bold = highly recommended
red = unrankable

Beginner

00:16:851 (3) - Não sei se foi só eu que achou estranho terminar no beat vermelho, acho que sim. Eu recomendaria você terminar no beat branco para seguir as batidas, como você vem fazendo, mesmo que o vocal termine no tick vermelho. Nos anterior, mesmo o vocal terminando em outro tick, você os deixou no branco. Deveria fazer o mesmo aqui, só pela consistência mesmo.

00:47:451 - O que acha de colocar um circle aqui? Tanto para enfatizar o vocal quanto o isntrumental, que é bem forte. Ficaria consistente com 00:42:651 (4) - já que você também enfatizou o vocal com um circle.

Mk's Easy

00:21:651 (1,1) - MEU DEUS, STACKA ISSO, QUE AGONIA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGgggggggb h

não sei mais o que deveria mudar, tá tão lindo quanto você.


MkRianna's Normal

00:16:851 (1) - Se você aplicou o que eu falei no Beginner, o mesmo vale para essa diff! >w<

00:45:951 (2) - Já que, nessa seção, você não usou nenhum 1/2 e o vocal é MUITO forte, que tal substituir esses slider por dois circles? Ficaria muito mais legal de clicar, considerando a seção, e não ficaria tão difícil quanto um monte de 1/2.

Advanced

00:15:651 (1) - Você vem usando o NC a cada 2 ticks brancos, menos aqui. Ficou um pouco inconsistente. Eu recomendaria remover o NC desse e adicionar um em 00:16:851 (3) - , pois aí, sim, ficaria consistente.

00:20:151 (3) - Terminar um slider em um tick branco quando se tem um som forte, especialmente sendo o começo de uma seção nova (tick branco grande), não é tão legal de jogar nem tão divertido de clicar, além de tirar toda a intensidade da música. O que acha de, ao invés de um slider 1/1, dois circles 1/1? Ou até algo assim, ficaria bem interessante e consistente.

00:42:501 - Um circle aqui pra combinar com 00:41:901 (3) - e mapear o vocal, que é bem forte nessa parte?

00:53:451 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Eu amo quem fez isso, ficou muito bom.

Angelina

00:24:501 (2,3,1) - Essas 3 notas parecem muito próximas uma das outras, considerando a ênfase e a consistência das notas anteriores. Não acha melhor afastar um pouco (3)? Algum lugar perto de x:388 y:239 ficaria ótimo.

essa diff tá muito linda, não consegui achar muito c:

woof
Marianna
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Marianna

Kuron-kun wrote:

oi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! olá!!!!!!!!!!

bold = highly recommended
red = unrankable

Advanced
00:53:451 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Eu amo quem fez isso, ficou muito bom. Também te amo rs

woof meow
All Fixed :3 Thank you ♥♥♥
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