Shinzo- wrote:

ExUsagi wrote:

[6k collab]

02:09:120 (129120|5) - in this phase, i encourage you to layer the main 1/1 beat rather than the faint piano ok then =w=

02:10:911 (130911|0) - 02:13:299 (133299|3) - 02:15:090 (135090|5,135687|5) - 02:17:478 (137478|5) - 02:20:463 (140463|5) - when the pitch change, please use different LN.. those long LN rather doesn't coincident with the long bg pitch yeyeye

03:48:373 (228373|4,228473|1,228523|2,228523|5,228523|0,228523|3) - GOD FUKING 6 HOLDS cool~ isn't it

[Overall]
technically, 04:10:911 (250911|0) - this part is really anti-climax and should have denser / harder structure..
overall, this map is well-made, you can improve some part by layering the main instrument as main pattern and drum / percussion as addition only.. by that people will understand more what the song provide throughout your mapset :3a

edit : set the HP to 8.8 & OD to 8.5, this is beyond too easy to pass with spamming the keyboard with lesser accuracy

good luck! i want this set to be approved.. need m4m too ;w;

thanks usagiiii >w< <3
updet xD

ExUsagi wrote:

00:43:150 (43150|2) - i suggest you to start layering the 1/4 drum here.. idk, the transition feels so strong Okay

01:23:299 (83299|3,83448|2,83597|1,83747|2) - 1/4 piano stream where Whoops, missed that one

02:34:045 (154045|2) - add 1 more for consistency Added

yup

ExUsagi wrote:

01:11:806 (71806|5) - until 01:11:806 (71806|5) - when you commit to layer the guitar solo, please reduce all notes that layers the drum with sporadic triplets and 1/4 stream.. and focus your layering to the 1/2 guitar lead..

unlikely 7K where you can do polyrhythm with triplets & streams at once, the column layout in 6K is just.. orz.. this kind of heavily layered part doesn't flows smoothly in 6K.. well tl;dr overnote

yup

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hai :3
Hope this mod useful :p
6K column : 1-2-3-4-5-6
Mod :

Mod Inside

00:27:553 –add circle at column 5 to makeit little stair and connect with 00:27:627 (27627|5) –(Feel free to decline cause the sound is not very clear too actually) 00:27:627 (27627|5) is a Piano
00:27:926 (27926|1) –move to 00:28:025 –to make this line 00:27:926 –become 2 circles IDK what do you mean, but this is a better musical reflection than yours
00:28:970 (28970|1) –delete cause the sound has volume not far with 00:29:045 – I'm not mapping into volume thingy.
00:31:359 –same^, delete the one at column 5 Same^
00:41:757 –add circle at column 2 here(just check it carefully, a voice connect with this 00:41:806 (41806|0) -) It's an echo
00:47:130 –same^ Already applied from Usagi's mod
00:47:776 (47776|2) –change into Ln and end at 00:47:926 –(there’s voice like whistle(I can’t descibe it ><) Already rearranged from Usagi's mod
00:55:836 (55836|1) –delete, the voice almost same with 00:55:762 -00:55:911 – Kick with an extra piano
00:56:135 (56135|0) –same^ Same ^
01:34:045 (94045|0) –move to 01:33:995 – No, this is how it works.
01:43:448 (103448|4) –same like before (00:55:836 (55836|1) –), delete it Snare and Piano. Please.... Just listen it more carefully
01:45:836 (105836|5) –same^ Same^
02:28:373 (148373|4) –delete it and change with LN end at 02:28:523 -, to make the pattern more That way it doesn't make any sense
04:45:239 (285239|5) -70% i feel this is ghost note and 30% is not, so? Rearranged
04:46:135 –add LN and end at 04:46:433 -, there is “tengneng” sound What is it?

Modding Done

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hai :3
Hope this mod useful :p
6K column : 1-2-3-4-5-6
Mod :

Mod Inside

1/12 is too much, i don’t know how it’s good like, maybe 1/6, but make sure 03:19:530 (199530|2) –is get into the snap
1/6 maybe good ??
00:59:269 –make it triplet, cause the sound is louder than like 00:58:970 -, and make it a consistency with 00:59:567 –
01:07:478 –just let it only a circle, cause the sound lose with 01:07:553 -01:07:627 – // keep
01:14:418 –feel confused about these 2 notes, wheter you can just let it be or make it a little stair to make it connect between 01:14:344 – and 01:14:493 – // Stair + Thrill here 01:14:344 (74344|0,74418|1,74493|2) - 01:14:344 (74344|4,74418|3,74493|4) -
03:23:747 –make it 3 notes as same like 03:23:448 - 03:23:150 – // really? i think no, hear it again please, it doesn't have a Sacrificial Bass like the 2 point you mentions
03:33:448 (213448|3) - same like before (00:55:836 (55836|1) –), delete it // no it doesn't
03:35:687 –make it 3 notes for differentation between 03:35:538 – and so many
04:07:627 –add a circle at column 5
04:32:105 –add LN until 04:32:403 -, cause there is teret” sound something like that // no there's isn't any song like yo mention here

Modding Done

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod this by myself since I can't really find peeps who can mod 6K.

[Pharos' Part]

Mods

1. 01:02:403 - Seharusnya double, karena d 01:03:597 pke double soalnya.
2. 01:02:702 - Baca gini cukup susah. Mending bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/lZUb3/e292d9d8b2.png atau http://puu.sh/lZUbZ/2acc17e011.png . Lebih enak bacanya.
3. 01:03:299 (63299|2) - Pindah k |5|. Soalnya gk ngepas d jack not 01:03:150 (63150|2,63299|2) .
4. 01:05:090 (65090|5,65239|4,65388|5) - Lebih enak maininnya klo not2 ini tuker kolom. Yg skrg ini berat d mainin.
5. 01:05:538 (65538|3) - Pindah k |1| lebih enak maininnya.
6. 01:05:836 - Patternnya coba d bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/lZUr1/d1d15a4054.png . Lebih enak bacanya. // re arrange
7. 01:06:284 (66284|2) - Pindah k |1| klo mod d atas d apply. // ngga cocok sama hasil re arrange ku
8. 01:07:030 (67030|3) - Pindah k |5| biar enak maininnya.
9. 01:07:478 - Serius ngejack? Bahkan pianonya aja gk ngedukung Jack. Mending bikin jdi kyk http://puu.sh/lZUw1/a82045b8f5.png patternnya.
10. 01:08:821 - Lebih enak maininnya klo patternny jdi model kyk http://puu.sh/lZUyj/adb2e636ef.png
11. 01:12:851 - Coba http://puu.sh/lZUAa/d54e63a6bc.png . Lebih enak pas d mainin.
12. 01:13:448 (73448|0) - Pindah |2| biar gk terlalu ngejack d |1| dan enak maininnya. // re- Arrange
13. 01:18:274 - Why double?
14. 01:21:284 (81284|4) - Kolom |3|, 01:21:359 (81359|2) - Kolom |4|. Lebih enak maininnya.

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod this by myself since I can't really find peeps who can mod 6K.

Takane6 wrote:

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod this by myself since I can't really find peeps who can mod 6K.

why not ask me? o,o?
btw marked :>

edit :
Ene come from nowhere again >w</

!! ALERT !! : many mods inside :v

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[General]
Preview point unsnapped lol :v

Pharospole1st

01:10:911 (70911|5) - move to 01:11:060 - at collumn 2 because 01:11:060 - has same sound with 01:10:612 - // add note istead, Sound amount are same
01:14:045 (74045|3,74194|4) - switch these for prevent 01:13:747 (73747|3,73896|3,74045|3) - jack
01:16:433 (76433|1) - move to 1 for prevent 01:15:985 (75985|1,76135|1,76284|1,76433|1,76582|1) - jack //Same Pitch
--
for prevent 01:17:030 (77030|4,77179|4,77329|4) - jack... maybe do this :
1. 01:16:732 (76732|5) - move to 5
2. 01:16:881 (76881|3,77030|5) - switch these
3. 01:17:030 (77030|4) - move to 3 collumn // re-arrange
--
01:18:274 (78274|1,78299|0) - ;w; move 1 col to right maybe for prevent 01:18:299 (78299|0,78373|0) - jack
--
01:19:567 (79567|4,79642|5,79717|4) - switch collumn and 01:19:866 (79866|5) - move to 4 for prevent 01:19:567 (79567|4,79717|4,79866|4) - jack
--

Pharospole2nd

03:27:926 - add note for the sound impact, maybe :v // nope.. only 2 sound here
03:30:911 (210911|1,211060|1) - hmmm why is the only jack in this pattern? move 03:30:911 (210911|1) - to 3 maybe.. Re- Arrange

Pharospole3rd

04:11:209 (251209|1) - move to 3 and 04:11:060 (251060|2) - move to 4 for hand balance and prevent 04:11:209 (251209|1,251359|1,251508|1) - jack
04:11:657 (251657|4) - move to 4 to prevent 04:11:508 (251508|4,251657|4,251806|4) - jack
04:12:851 - add note for kick
04:13:597 (253597|4) - the LN for melody should start from 04:13:523 - that note are for melody... and LN for Guitar
04:14:642 (254642|2) - move to 4 for hand balance both for prevent 04:14:642 (254642|2,254791|2,254941|2) - jack
04:16:881 (256881|2) - move to 2 for prevent 04:16:732 (256732|2,256881|2,257030|2,257179|2) - jack
04:17:329 (257329|3,257403|4) - switch collumn, and 04:17:478 (257478|3) - move to col 2
04:18:821 (258821|2) - move to 1 or 6 for prevent 04:18:672 (258672|2,258821|2,258970|2) - jack
04:19:717 (259717|2,259941|2) - didnt see a shielding in here before.. maybe move 04:19:866 (259866|1,259941|2) - 1 col to left and 04:19:717 (259717|0) - move to 2
04:19:866 (259866|3) - move to 5 for prevent 04:19:866 (259866|3,260015|3,260164|3) - jack
04:20:911 (260911|2) - move to 2 for better place and prevent 04:20:911 (260911|2,261060|2,261209|2) - jack too
04:22:851 (262851|4) - move to 4 for prevent 04:22:851 (262851|4,263000|4,263150|4) - jack
04:23:747 (263747|4) - move to 3 for prevent 04:23:597 (263597|4,263747|4,263896|4) - jack
04:30:314 (270314|0) - move to 5 for better placement and pattern
04:30:463 - 04:30:612 - 04:30:911 - add note for consistency with 04:30:164 -

Takane6 wrote:

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod this by myself since I can't really find peeps who can mod 6K.

why not ask me? o,o?
btw marked :>

edit :
Ene come from nowhere again >w</

!! ALERT !! : many mods inside :v

1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]
Preview point unsnapped lol :v

MEGApole1st

00:20:164 (20164|2,20164|3,20314|5,20314|0) - woops the sound is same with 00:22:553 (22553|3,22553|2,22702|1) - but hve different pattern o,o Applied
00:27:627 - add note for consistency with 00:25:239 - and 00:21:657 - Applied
00:38:672 - better add note here for piano since this two 00:38:523 (38523|3,38821|4) - doesnt hve piano sound
00:39:269 - 00:39:866 - 00:40:463 - 00:41:060 - 00:41:657 - 00:43:448 - 00:44:642 - ^ When you realized that those singles are actually following Piano
00:52:403 (52403|3,52553|3,52702|3) - and 00:53:597 (53597|3,53747|3,53896|3) - emm... a bit uncomfort for left hand, 00:52:403 (52403|3,52553|3,52702|3) - switch collumn maybe, and 00:53:747 (53747|3) - move to col 2
00:54:941 (54941|3) - move to 6 to prevent 00:54:791 (54791|3,54941|3,55090|3) - jack Rearranged

MEGApole2nd

01:33:000 - add note for consistency with 01:21:657 - 01:22:254 - 01:22:851 - and many more :v Added
01:33:000 - 01:37:179 - 01:37:776 - 01:43:150 - 01:46:135 - ^ Added to them
..
01:31:657 - delete one note for consistency with 01:26:881 - 01:28:075 - 01:22:105 - and many more :v Deleted
..
01:32:105 - delete one note for consistency with 01:22:553 - 01:23:747 - 01:24:941 - and many more :v
01:39:269 - ^ Applied them

MEGApole3rd

why 02:30:015 - 02:30:314 - 02:29:717 - have different amount of notes while its the same sound with 02:28:523 - 02:28:821 - 02:29:120 - 02:29:418 - ? :> Nice catch. Applied
02:31:209 - delete 1 note, 4 note is too much *u* Same sound with 02:30:612
02:58:373 - delete 1 note, because the 4 note here 02:58:821 - has finish That one got finish too

MEGApole4th

04:38:672 - add note for consistency 04:37:478 -
04:39:269 - 04:40:463 - ^ Applied them
04:47:553 - add note for snare :v
04:48:747 - ^ Added
04:50:911 (290911|2,290911|3,290985|0,290985|5,291060|2,291060|3,291135|5,291135|0,291209|3,291209|2,291284|5,291284|0,291359|2,291359|3,291433|0,291433|5,291508|1) - how about 1/8 pattern? :V Give a dead twist instead (insert evil face here)

Takane6 wrote:

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod this by myself since I can't really find peeps who can mod 6K.

why not ask me? o,o?
btw marked :>

edit :
Ene come from nowhere again >w</

!! ALERT !! : many mods inside :v

1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]
Preview point unsnapped lol :v

Shinpole1st

02:00:762 - add note , same power with 01:58:373 - 02:05:538 -
02:07:926 - ^
--
1. 02:21:060 (141060|0) - this LN should end at 02:22:254 -
2. 02:22:254 (142254|1) - change into LN end at 02:22:851 -
3. and then switch ^ both note collumn
--

Shinpole2nd

03:04:344 - add note for consistency with 03:00:762 - 03:01:359 - 03:03:150 -
03:04:941 - add note for consistency with 03:01:956 - 03:02:553 - 03:08:523 - no the snare is on the red line
03:11:806 - add note for consistency with 03:10:612 - 03:07:030 - 03:04:941 -
03:19:493 (199493|1,199530|2) - switch collumn for better flow

Shinpole3rd

03:48:523 (228523|5,228523|2,228523|0,228523|1,228523|4,228523|3) - how about arrange this into:
03:48:523 (228523|5) - move to 3
03:48:523 (228523|1) - move to 5
03:48:523 (228523|4) - move to 2
03:48:523 (228523|2) - move to 4
03:48:523 (228523|3) - move to 5 u mean 6 ==a
04:05:164 (245164|3,245388|3,245388|5) - should be at 1/3 snap

shionelove wrote:

marked
my university life is hell

column 123456
add tag "beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL
[the diff]
00:04:344 (4344|3) - 6 better Moved
00:21:881 (21881|4,21956|3,21956|2) - 3 45 for stairs Applied
00:56:284 - i always map such sounds as flap stair(idk what to say this pattern) Hmm, applied. And Tbh i personally calls it back&forth stair/ladder.

01:32:403 (92403|1) - idk about this LN i think guitar is this Applied
01:44:642 (104642|5,104642|4) - i think
trill is better for me Hmm, okay applied

02:53:075 (173075|0,173075|2,173150|3,173150|4,173224|1,173224|0) - 1/3 or 1/3 and 1/4 1/3. Polyrhythm kinds of breaking the rhythm.
02:56:060 (176060|4,176508|2) - delete Deleted
02:57:478 - simple is better for me IDK that really resembles 4K. Will apply when there's more people suggesting this.
02:59:866 - Applied

03:16:806 (196806|4,196806|3) - wrong snap
03:18:970 - same as above

03:54:717 (234717|0) - use 1/8
04:08:523 - single note is enough because of silent part,i think making difference from 04:10:314 (250314|2) - is better
04:10:314 (250314|2,262851|2,263150|4) - these LNs are same rhythm as 04:24:045 (264045|5,264269|2) - ,you should fix this because mania doesn't accept any rhythm originality and it gives you dq rip Just pointing out that those sections you pointed out is mapped by a different mapper.
05:00:164 (300164|1) - unnecessary none,you must delete this Deleted.

end

shionelove wrote:

marked
my university life is hell

column 123456
add tag "beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL
[the diff]

01:06:433 (66433|1,66582|1) - 1 for 1346 pattern OK

end

shionelove wrote:

marked
my university life is hell

column 123456
add tag "beatmania IIDX 22 PENDUAL
[the diff]
01:58:373 - add some 1/3 for piano
02:01:135 (121135|3) - 1/3
02:08:423 (128423|3,128423|2) - delete 3 no it's better to start the doublet there imo

03:16:806 (196806|4,196806|3) - wrong snap nope
03:18:970 - same as above i'll re-consider

04:08:523 - single note is enough because of silent part,i think making difference from 04:10:314 (250314|2) - is better

end

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Mega, Shin, Aste

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

6K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Length Mp3 05:04 but Length Map 04:59 (5:00:164 - 0:00:165 = 4:59:999) lel \:D/
2. Unrankable Issue : Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitwhistle.wav

TRI-Pole

OD : 8,5 or 8,7 or 9
HP : 8,5 or 8

1. 00:33:150 - this small bell really low pitch, reduce note amount xD [color=#FF0000]Lol nope it's still audible :p[/color]
2. 00:43:448 (43448|2) - add Bell.wav hitsounds, check 00:43:150 (43150|0) - No Bell there.
3. 01:23:597 - you missed C or F for snare wet sounds But there's no wet snare there D: Notice that 01:23:597 - got both heavy and soft piano and here 01:25:388 (85388|1,85463|2) - There's 2 F there. What's wrong?
4. 01:25:090 (85090|1) - remove C, since i can't hear snare or beat sounds here, check here too :
   01:31:060 (91060|2) -
   01:33:448 (93448|1) -
   01:35:836 (95836|1) -
   01:37:030 (97030|2) - etc, so lazy.. Breakbeats
5. 01:32:105 - you missed C as beat sounds, also : Added
   02:01:956 (121956|1) -
   02:03:150 (123150|5) -
   02:04:344 - That's not my part so don't merge it with mod for my part
6. 02:46:135 (166135|3) - shorten LN until 02:46:433 - or 02:46:508 - you can hear when long synth would stop, same reason like Shorten until 02:46:582 instead since that's where the synth changes
   03:13:597 (193597|5) -
7. 02:48:224 (168224|3) - LN should stop in red tick? No, guitar
8. 04:32:254 - you missed note here for sounds like this 04:32:553 (272553|4) - and why C was there?? Lol don't misinterpret my part with other person's part
9. 04:41:956 - no need 4 note here, try reduce note amount, since stream snare was stopped here 04:41:881 - also remove C No, it reflects the amount of the instruments. And C is for kick as you can hear.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

86

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Mod my map please xD
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/389878

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6

mod

1. 01:23:373 (83373|2) - ada suara disini
   01:27:951 (87951|2) - disini juga
   01:30:388 (90388|5) - tambah di 5 & 6
2. 03:19:567 (199567|5,199617|4,199667|3,199717|2) - coba ke 2 3 4 5?
3. 03:32:105 (212105|2,212105|4) - ke 1 & 3 karna kiri kosong (?)
4. 03:43:597 (223597|2) - ada suara tapi pelan
5. 03:54:717 (234717|0) - lebih pas di 03:54:692 (234692|0) -
   04:05:164 (245164|3) - ^ 04:05:140 (245140|3) -

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank

Monople--> Tripole

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6

mod

1. 03:19:567 (199567|5,199617|4,199667|3,199717|2) - coba ke 2 3 4 5? // nope. malah berat dong
2. 03:32:105 (212105|2,212105|4) - ke 1 & 3 karna kiri kosong (?) // nope. keep
   

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Mega, Shin, Aste

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

6K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Length Mp3 05:04 but Length Map 04:59 (5:00:164 - 0:00:165 = 4:59:999) lel \:D/
2. Unrankable Issue : Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitwhistle.wav

TRI-Pole

OD : 8,5 or 8,7 or 9
HP : 8,5 or 8

1. 00:58:672 - are you ignored cimbal sounds here like 01:01:060 - ? same reason :
2. 01:00:164 (60164|5) - add F as cimbal sounds like above, don't forget here :
   01:00:463 (60463|2) -
   01:00:762 (60762|0) -
   01:01:359 (61359|4) - // no cymbal hitsound. sorry but please hear again. the F are for Snare,, not Cymbal
3. 01:04:866 (64866|3,65090|4,65090|3,65164|2,65164|1) - pitch look simmiliar, but.. if you know i mean // 01:04:866 (64866|3,64941|5,65090|3,65164|1,65239|0) - this is the Piano. the rest are other sound
4. 01:20:164 (80164|5,80314|5,80463|5,80612|5,80762|5,80911|5,81060|5) - dat anchor, rearrange please~ some pitch is different // keep for now
   
   
5. 03:30:314 - & 03:30:612 - cek consistency dug dug sounds xD here 03:26:732 - & 03:27:030 - also
   03:32:105 - & 03:32:403 -
   03:33:896 - & 03:34:194 -
   03:35:687 - & 03:35:985 -
   
6. 04:30:015 (270015|5) - move to |5| please don't cut art style please xD
7. 04:32:254 - you missed note here for sounds like this 04:32:553 (272553|4) - and why C was there??
   

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

86

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Mod my map please xD
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/389878

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6

mod

1. 01:23:373 (83373|2) - ada suara disini Yes
   01:27:951 (87951|2) - disini juga ^
   01:30:388 (90388|5) - tambah di 5 & 6 Lol d sini gk bsa d bikin triple. Instrumenny cuman suara burst doang.

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank

Davin Fortune wrote:

DAVIN COME SUDDENLY~~

Just check this and got little problem *NO KUDOSU*,

00:20:015 (20015|1) - is it a ghost note? its hard to see the beat get beated here Piano

00:22:403 (22403|5) - aaa^ ^

i jump lel

00:56:135 - this should be 3, read this 00:23:747 (23747|3,23747|5,23747|0,23896|0,23896|3,23896|5) - It's not the same. It's double since it don't have any Big Beat sounds.

00:56:383 (56383|2,56483|3,56582|4,56682|3,56781|2) - this should not be connected with last stair, it already different flow But it's perfectly fine for the pitch.

I check only for fun
*Davin Fortune go away~~

1. soft-hitnormal file
2. Timing
3. Sequences

Eternalie wrote:

hi there ppl~
this map is fun to watch owo

mod

collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6
[Tri-pole]
00:12:837 (12837|1,12837|0) - this should be 3 notes since it sounds same as : 00:12:539 (12539|2,12539|1,12539|0) - Whoops fixed
00:13:136 (13136|1,13136|2,13136|0) - this however should only be 2 it's not as loud as previous suggestion Fixed
00:26:792 (26792|1) - move to 3 same pitch as : 00:26:195 (26195|2) - Moved
00:47:190 (47190|2) - add note 1/3 snap on 3 Fixed
00:47:277 (47277|5,47277|4,47389|1,47389|0,47488|4,47488|3,47575|1,47575|2) - also isn't this 1/3 snapping rythm ??? sounds really close to that atleast Yes it is 1/3 snap
^ 00:56:742 (56742|3,56941|3,57128|3) - yeah there you use 1/3 , I think previous suggestion is also a 1/3
01:07:911 (67911|3) - add one note for rythm here in 4 (actually there is many places where you didn't added for that same rythm , you might want to check thoose out) Actually the rhythm there goes with triples. 01:06:792 - Quad because of the Impulse
05:04:603 (304603|1,304702|3) - why not continuing the 1/6 pattern here ? the empty space makes it really weird to play tbh
^ suggesting , add 05:04:802 (304802|1) - and 05:04:901 (304901|2) - (1/6 snaps) following the piano Fixed, and you mean 1/3 right?

Good Luck guys , nice song :3/

Eternalie wrote:

hi there ppl~
this map is fun to watch owo

mod

collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6
[Tri-pole]
00:12:837 (12837|1,12837|0) - this should be 3 notes since it sounds same as : 00:12:539 (12539|2,12539|1,12539|0) -
00:13:136 (13136|1,13136|2,13136|0) - this however should only be 2 it's not as loud as previous suggestion
00:26:792 (26792|1) - move to 3 same pitch as : 00:26:195 (26195|2) -
00:47:190 (47190|2) - add note 1/3 snap on 3
00:47:277 (47277|5,47277|4,47389|1,47389|0,47488|4,47488|3,47575|1,47575|2) - also isn't this 1/3 snapping rythm ??? sounds really close to that atleast
^ 00:56:742 (56742|3,56941|3,57128|3) - yeah there you use 1/3 , I think previous suggestion is also a 1/3
01:07:911 (67911|3) - add one note for rythm here in 4 (actually there is many places where you didn't added for that same rythm , you might want to check thoose out)
02:20:001 (140001|3) - move to another collumn , this isn't the same pitch imho , and it feels kind of awkward to play imho (2) probably would give a better feeling on another collumn ok
02:25:486 (145486|4,145486|3) - this should be one note , OR this02:25:399 (145399|1) - should be double aswell , they both have the same catch I think there's a drum, hear again
03:35:896 (215896|2,215896|1) - move one to the right ? okay
04:07:389 (247389|3,247389|1,247389|4,247389|5,247389|2,247389|0) - This is absolutely beautifull XD , unexpected but kind of ''wow'' feeling or something tee hee thankss xD
04:13:583 (253583|0) - this note should be one line down (redline) so here 04:13:508 (253508|0) - fixed
04:13:844 (253844|3) - this note should be on the red line aswell fixed
04:24:030 (264030|3,264254|3,264254|5) - put the snap to 1/6 and move thoose 3 notes to 1 line down ok

Good Luck guys , nice song :3/

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi mega~

im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject

00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance
01:32:613 (92613|0,92613|5,92613|2,92762|4,92762|2,92762|0,92911|3,92911|0,92986|1,93060|4,93060|5,93060|2,93210|4,93210|0,93284|1,93359|4) - maybe ctrl+h ~ feels heavy in the right side // hmm.. yeah you're right. Fixed
03:42:314 (222314|5) - move to |5| // could you please tell me the reason why?
03:42:314 (222314|2,222463|3) - ctrl+h // uhh... this too
03:44:105 (224105|3) - move to |2| // ^
03:45:896 (225896|2,225896|4) - move two col to the left // hmm.. nope.. could you please tell me the reason why?
03:47:687 (227687|2) - move to |2| // this too
03:47:836 (227836|1) - move to |3| // this one too
04:34:254 (274254|1) - delete // why? please tell me the reason.
04:34:851 (274851|2) - change to an LN ends here 04:35:001 - // no guitar sound here. but if you have some idea that you want to share please do tell me *at least the reason why.

cool map.. gl ~

Aste- wrote:

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi mega~

im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject

00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance
01:32:613 (92613|0,92613|5,92613|2,92762|4,92762|2,92762|0,92911|3,92911|0,92986|1,93060|4,93060|5,93060|2,93210|4,93210|0,93284|1,93359|4) - maybe ctrl+h ~ feels heavy in the right side // hmm.. yeah you're right. Fixed
03:42:314 (222314|5) - move to |5| // could you please tell me the reason why?
03:42:314 (222314|2,222463|3) - ctrl+h // uhh... this too
03:44:105 (224105|3) - move to |2| // ^
03:45:896 (225896|2,225896|4) - move two col to the left // hmm.. nope.. could you please tell me the reason why?
03:47:687 (227687|2) - move to |2| // this too
03:47:836 (227836|1) - move to |3| // this one too
04:34:254 (274254|1) - delete // why? please tell me the reason.
04:34:851 (274851|2) - change to an LN ends here 04:35:001 - // no guitar sound here. but if you have some idea that you want to share please do tell me *at least the reason why.

cool map.. gl ~

Done my part

http://puu.sh/qQFEL/b93e85a883.rar