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Harbyter
ask to some QAT if you can consider this a marathon, the play lenght is 4:59:999 lel
Verniy_Chan

Hi Mega, Shin, Aste

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

6K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Length Mp3 05:04 but Length Map 04:59 (5:00:164 - 0:00:165 = 4:59:999) lel \:D/
  2. Unrankable Issue : Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitwhistle.wav
TRI-Pole

OD : 8,5 or 8,7 or 9
HP : 8,5 or 8
  1. 00:20:463 - still hear another sounds : small crash+bell, maybe add note here, you can check consistency main white tick
  2. 00:30:463 - add note for consistency pitch small crash sounds 00:28:075 -
  3. 00:33:150 - this small bell really low pitch, reduce note amount xD
  4. 00:39:791 - add note, check consistency here 00:42:179 -
  5. 00:43:448 (43448|2) - add Bell.wav hitsounds, check 00:43:150 (43150|0) - and add note here maybe for small snare like 00:42:851 (42851|1,42851|2) - & 00:44:045 (44045|5,44045|4) - ,also :
    00:44:642 -
    00:45:836 -
  6. 00:58:672 - are you ignored cimbal sounds here like 01:01:060 - ? same reason :
  7. 01:00:164 (60164|5) - add F as cimbal sounds like above, don't forget here :
    01:00:463 (60463|2) -
    01:00:762 (60762|0) -
    01:01:359 (61359|4) -
  8. 01:04:866 (64866|3,65090|4,65090|3,65164|2,65164|1) - pitch look simmiliar, but.. if you know i mean
  9. 01:20:164 (80164|5,80314|5,80463|5,80612|5,80762|5,80911|5,81060|5) - dat anchor, rearrange please~ some pitch is different
  10. 01:23:597 - you missed C or F for snare wet sounds and here 01:25:388 (85388|1,85463|2) -
  11. 01:25:090 (85090|1) - remove C, since i can't hear snare or beat sounds here, check here too :
    01:31:060 (91060|2) -
    01:33:448 (93448|1) -
    01:35:836 (95836|1) -
    01:37:030 (97030|2) - etc, so lazy..
  12. 01:32:105 - you missed C as beat sounds, also :
    02:01:956 (121956|1) -
    02:03:150 (123150|5) -
    02:04:344 -
  13. 01:44:269 - you missed note here, check 01:44:418 (104418|2) -
  14. 02:01:135 (121135|3) - seem unsnap, btw still hear piano here 02:01:060 -
  15. 02:17:478 (137478|3) - it will be nice if note move to |3|
  16. 02:18:672 (138672|4) - add F for cimbal sounds, same reason like :
    02:38:075 (158075|4) -
    04:09:717 (249717|5) -
  17. 02:23:349 (143349|3,143448|2) - it will be greget if this part change pattern to shield pattern, it's better than jack here 02:23:349 (143349|3,143448|3) -
  18. 02:46:135 (166135|3) - shorten LN until 02:46:433 - or 02:46:508 - you can hear when long synth would stop, same reason like
    03:13:597 (193597|5) -
  19. 02:46:732 (166732|5) - change to LN for consistency long synth
  20. 02:48:224 (168224|3) - LN should stop in red tick?
  21. 03:30:314 - & 03:30:612 - cek consistency dug dug sounds xD here 03:26:732 - & 03:27:030 - also
    03:32:105 - & 03:32:403 -
    03:33:896 - & 03:34:194 -
    03:35:687 - & 03:35:985 -
  22. 03:48:523 (228523|5,228523|2,228523|0,228523|3,228523|1,228523|4) - lel \:D/ don't forget add F for cimbal sounds
  23. 03:54:194 (234194|5,234418|3) - i feel dajavu dug dug again xD nevermind
  24. 04:30:015 (270015|5) - move to |5| please don't cut art style please xD
  25. 04:32:254 - you missed note here for sounds like this 04:32:553 (272553|4) - and why C was there??
  26. 04:41:956 - no need 4 note here, try reduce note amount, since stream snare was stopped here 04:41:881 - also remove C
  27. 04:43:150 - piano sounds in main white tick really loud, try add note maybe

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
86

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Mod my map please xD
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/389878
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Mega, Shin, Aste

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

6K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Length Mp3 05:04 but Length Map 04:59 (5:00:164 - 0:00:165 = 4:59:999) lel \:D/
  2. Unrankable Issue : Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitwhistle.wav
TRI-Pole

OD : 8,5 or 8,7 or 9
HP : 8,5 or 8
  1. 00:33:150 - this small bell really low pitch, reduce note amount xD [color=#FF0000]Lol nope it's still audible :p[/color]
  2. 00:43:448 (43448|2) - add Bell.wav hitsounds, check 00:43:150 (43150|0) - No Bell there.
  3. 01:23:597 - you missed C or F for snare wet sounds But there's no wet snare there D: Notice that 01:23:597 - got both heavy and soft piano and here 01:25:388 (85388|1,85463|2) - There's 2 F there. What's wrong?
  4. 01:25:090 (85090|1) - remove C, since i can't hear snare or beat sounds here, check here too :
    01:31:060 (91060|2) -
    01:33:448 (93448|1) -
    01:35:836 (95836|1) -
    01:37:030 (97030|2) - etc, so lazy.. Breakbeats
  5. 01:32:105 - you missed C as beat sounds, also : Added
    02:01:956 (121956|1) -
    02:03:150 (123150|5) -
    02:04:344 - That's not my part so don't merge it with mod for my part
  6. 02:46:135 (166135|3) - shorten LN until 02:46:433 - or 02:46:508 - you can hear when long synth would stop, same reason like Shorten until 02:46:582 instead since that's where the synth changes
    03:13:597 (193597|5) -
  7. 02:48:224 (168224|3) - LN should stop in red tick? No, guitar
  8. 04:32:254 - you missed note here for sounds like this 04:32:553 (272553|4) - and why C was there?? Lol don't misinterpret my part with other person's part
  9. 04:41:956 - no need 4 note here, try reduce note amount, since stream snare was stopped here 04:41:881 - also remove C No, it reflects the amount of the instruments. And C is for kick as you can hear.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
86

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Mod my map please xD
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/389878
Thanks for modding
Verniy_Chan
Padahal saya selalu akurat dengan hitsoundsnya
nevermind.. Good Luck for ranking
Davin Fortune
DAVIN COME SUDDENLY~~

Just check this and got little problem *NO KUDOSU*,

00:20:015 (20015|1) - is it a ghost note? its hard to see the beat get beated here

00:22:403 (22403|5) - aaa^

i jump lel

00:56:135 - this should be 3, read this 00:23:747 (23747|3,23747|5,23747|0,23896|0,23896|3,23896|5) -

00:56:383 (56383|2,56483|3,56582|4,56682|3,56781|2) - this should not be connected with last stair, it already different flow

01:00:463 - this should be 3 like 00:59:866 - , try look the instru sound

01:01:856 (61856|5,61956|4,61956|0,62055|3,62155|2,62254|5,62254|0) - i think this should be in a chord(2 notes), better i guess, if doesnt better make them all into 1 note only cause 01:01:956 - 01:02:254 - has no different with their friend right?

I check only for fun
*Davin Fortune go away~~

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6
mod
  1. 01:23:373 (83373|2) - ada suara disini
    01:27:951 (87951|2) - disini juga
    01:30:388 (90388|5) - tambah di 5 & 6
  2. 03:19:567 (199567|5,199617|4,199667|3,199717|2) - coba ke 2 3 4 5?
  3. 03:32:105 (212105|2,212105|4) - ke 1 & 3 karna kiri kosong (?)
  4. 03:43:597 (223597|2) - ada suara tapi pelan
  5. 03:54:717 (234717|0) - lebih pas di 03:54:692 (234692|0) -
    04:05:164 (245164|3) - ^ 04:05:140 (245140|3) -

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank ;)
Dont forget this mod~~

Monople--> Tripole
Lel
Aste-

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6
mod
  1. 03:19:567 (199567|5,199617|4,199667|3,199717|2) - coba ke 2 3 4 5? // nope. malah berat dong
  2. 03:32:105 (212105|2,212105|4) - ke 1 & 3 karna kiri kosong (?) // nope. keep

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank ;)

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Mega, Shin, Aste

Mod Via Exclusive PM Request

6K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Length Mp3 05:04 but Length Map 04:59 (5:00:164 - 0:00:165 = 4:59:999) lel \:D/
  2. Unrankable Issue : Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitwhistle.wav
TRI-Pole

OD : 8,5 or 8,7 or 9
HP : 8,5 or 8
  1. 00:58:672 - are you ignored cimbal sounds here like 01:01:060 - ? same reason :
  2. 01:00:164 (60164|5) - add F as cimbal sounds like above, don't forget here :
    01:00:463 (60463|2) -
    01:00:762 (60762|0) -
    01:01:359 (61359|4) - // no cymbal hitsound. sorry but please hear again. the F are for Snare,, not Cymbal
  3. 01:04:866 (64866|3,65090|4,65090|3,65164|2,65164|1) - pitch look simmiliar, but.. if you know i mean // 01:04:866 (64866|3,64941|5,65090|3,65164|1,65239|0) - this is the Piano. the rest are other sound
  4. 01:20:164 (80164|5,80314|5,80463|5,80612|5,80762|5,80911|5,81060|5) - dat anchor, rearrange please~ some pitch is different // keep for now

  5. 03:30:314 - & 03:30:612 - cek consistency dug dug sounds xD here 03:26:732 - & 03:27:030 - also
    03:32:105 - & 03:32:403 -
    03:33:896 - & 03:34:194 -
    03:35:687 - & 03:35:985 -
  6. 04:30:015 (270015|5) - move to |5| please don't cut art style please xD
  7. 04:32:254 - you missed note here for sounds like this 04:32:553 (272553|4) - and why C was there??

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating
86

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Mod my map please xD
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/389878
hueeh

Done~

http://puu.sh/mQf04/91b4d35455.rar

Poou~
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

Luthfeh wrote:

yang ini kan?
ok

1 2 3 4 5 6
mod
  1. 01:23:373 (83373|2) - ada suara disini Yes
    01:27:951 (87951|2) - disini juga ^
    01:30:388 (90388|5) - tambah di 5 & 6 Lol d sini gk bsa d bikin triple. Instrumenny cuman suara burst doang.

kirain 5k+1 ;w;
nice pattern btw
GL forrank ;)

Davin Fortune wrote:

DAVIN COME SUDDENLY~~

Just check this and got little problem *NO KUDOSU*,

00:20:015 (20015|1) - is it a ghost note? its hard to see the beat get beated here Piano

00:22:403 (22403|5) - aaa^ ^

i jump lel

00:56:135 - this should be 3, read this 00:23:747 (23747|3,23747|5,23747|0,23896|0,23896|3,23896|5) - It's not the same. It's double since it don't have any Big Beat sounds.

00:56:383 (56383|2,56483|3,56582|4,56682|3,56781|2) - this should not be connected with last stair, it already different flow But it's perfectly fine for the pitch.

I check only for fun
*Davin Fortune go away~~

UPDATE:


  1. soft-hitnormal file
  2. Timing
  3. Sequences
Topic Starter
MEGAtive
Actually, I'm planning to extend this song by myself since the current length aren't really approvable. So yes, going to make a big changes later after I'm done with my Exam's Training.
Topic Starter
MEGAtive
Already extended. Pls reDL if you DL this mapset before Feb 14th.
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

Resurrected

Aste-
Oh? It's time for me to wake up?

Ok then
Fubukicat
hi there ppl~
this map is fun to watch owo

mod
collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6
[Tri-pole]
00:12:837 (12837|1,12837|0) - this should be 3 notes since it sounds same as : 00:12:539 (12539|2,12539|1,12539|0) -
00:13:136 (13136|1,13136|2,13136|0) - this however should only be 2 it's not as loud as previous suggestion
00:26:792 (26792|1) - move to 3 same pitch as : 00:26:195 (26195|2) -
00:47:190 (47190|2) - add note 1/3 snap on 3
00:47:277 (47277|5,47277|4,47389|1,47389|0,47488|4,47488|3,47575|1,47575|2) - also isn't this 1/3 snapping rythm ??? sounds really close to that atleast
^ 00:56:742 (56742|3,56941|3,57128|3) - yeah there you use 1/3 , I think previous suggestion is also a 1/3
01:07:911 (67911|3) - add one note for rythm here in 4 (actually there is many places where you didn't added for that same rythm , you might want to check thoose out)
02:20:001 (140001|3) - move to another collumn , this isn't the same pitch imho , and it feels kind of awkward to play imho (2) probably would give a better feeling on another collumn
02:25:486 (145486|4,145486|3) - this should be one note , OR this02:25:399 (145399|1) - should be double aswell , they both have the same catch I think
03:35:896 (215896|2,215896|1) - move one to the right ?
04:07:389 (247389|3,247389|1,247389|4,247389|5,247389|2,247389|0) - This is absolutely beautifull XD , unexpected but kind of ''wow'' feeling or something tee hee
04:13:583 (253583|0) - this note should be one line down (redline) so here 04:13:508 (253508|0) -
04:13:844 (253844|3) - this note should be on the red line aswell
04:24:030 (264030|3,264254|3,264254|5) - put the snap to 1/6 and move thoose 3 notes to 1 line down
05:04:603 (304603|1,304702|3) - why not continuing the 1/6 pattern here ? the empty space makes it really weird to play tbh
^ suggesting , add 05:04:802 (304802|1) - and 05:04:901 (304901|2) - (1/6 snaps) following the piano

Good Luck guys , nice song :3/
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

Eternalie wrote:

hi there ppl~
this map is fun to watch owo

mod
collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6
[Tri-pole]
00:12:837 (12837|1,12837|0) - this should be 3 notes since it sounds same as : 00:12:539 (12539|2,12539|1,12539|0) - Whoops fixed
00:13:136 (13136|1,13136|2,13136|0) - this however should only be 2 it's not as loud as previous suggestion Fixed
00:26:792 (26792|1) - move to 3 same pitch as : 00:26:195 (26195|2) - Moved
00:47:190 (47190|2) - add note 1/3 snap on 3 Fixed
00:47:277 (47277|5,47277|4,47389|1,47389|0,47488|4,47488|3,47575|1,47575|2) - also isn't this 1/3 snapping rythm ??? sounds really close to that atleast Yes it is 1/3 snap
^ 00:56:742 (56742|3,56941|3,57128|3) - yeah there you use 1/3 , I think previous suggestion is also a 1/3
01:07:911 (67911|3) - add one note for rythm here in 4 (actually there is many places where you didn't added for that same rythm , you might want to check thoose out) Actually the rhythm there goes with triples. 01:06:792 - Quad because of the Impulse
05:04:603 (304603|1,304702|3) - why not continuing the 1/6 pattern here ? the empty space makes it really weird to play tbh
^ suggesting , add 05:04:802 (304802|1) - and 05:04:901 (304901|2) - (1/6 snaps) following the piano Fixed, and you mean 1/3 right? ;)

Good Luck guys , nice song :3/
Thanks for modding Eter~
Will mod yours soon
Aste-
Oh?

no mod for my part? okay~
Shinzo-

Eternalie wrote:

hi there ppl~
this map is fun to watch owo

mod
collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6
[Tri-pole]
00:12:837 (12837|1,12837|0) - this should be 3 notes since it sounds same as : 00:12:539 (12539|2,12539|1,12539|0) -
00:13:136 (13136|1,13136|2,13136|0) - this however should only be 2 it's not as loud as previous suggestion
00:26:792 (26792|1) - move to 3 same pitch as : 00:26:195 (26195|2) -
00:47:190 (47190|2) - add note 1/3 snap on 3
00:47:277 (47277|5,47277|4,47389|1,47389|0,47488|4,47488|3,47575|1,47575|2) - also isn't this 1/3 snapping rythm ??? sounds really close to that atleast
^ 00:56:742 (56742|3,56941|3,57128|3) - yeah there you use 1/3 , I think previous suggestion is also a 1/3
01:07:911 (67911|3) - add one note for rythm here in 4 (actually there is many places where you didn't added for that same rythm , you might want to check thoose out)
02:20:001 (140001|3) - move to another collumn , this isn't the same pitch imho , and it feels kind of awkward to play imho (2) probably would give a better feeling on another collumn ok
02:25:486 (145486|4,145486|3) - this should be one note , OR this02:25:399 (145399|1) - should be double aswell , they both have the same catch I think there's a drum, hear again
03:35:896 (215896|2,215896|1) - move one to the right ? okay
04:07:389 (247389|3,247389|1,247389|4,247389|5,247389|2,247389|0) - This is absolutely beautifull XD , unexpected but kind of ''wow'' feeling or something tee hee thankss xD
04:13:583 (253583|0) - this note should be one line down (redline) so here 04:13:508 (253508|0) - fixed
04:13:844 (253844|3) - this note should be on the red line aswell fixed
04:24:030 (264030|3,264254|3,264254|5) - put the snap to 1/6 and move thoose 3 notes to 1 line down ok

Good Luck guys , nice song :3/
thanks for mod eter >w<
apdet
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

Mapset updated

- Ly0572 -
hi mega~
im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject
00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance
00:08:360 (8360|3,8509|4,8658|5) - ^^
01:01:792 - add to |4|
01:02:314 (62314|0) - move to the other side |6|
01:11:792 - Add to |5| then move this 01:11:866 (71866|4) - to |4|
01:32:613 (92613|0,92613|5,92613|2,92762|4,92762|2,92762|0,92911|3,92911|0,92986|1,93060|4,93060|5,93060|2,93210|4,93210|0,93284|1,93359|4) - maybe ctrl+h ~ feels heavy in the right side
01:43:210 (103210|4,103284|3,103359|2,103359|5,103433|1) - move one col to the left
02:01:493 - add to |2|
02:01:717 (121717|2) - move to |6|
03:24:777 (204777|4) - move to |3|
03:42:314 (222314|5) - move to |5|
03:42:314 (222314|2,222463|3) - ctrl+h
03:44:105 (224105|3) - move to |2|
03:45:896 (225896|2,225896|4) - move two col to the left
03:47:687 (227687|2) - move to |2|
03:47:836 (227836|1) - move to |3|
04:01:419 (241419|0,241493|3,241568|4,241642|4) - maybe change to an LN like this 04:02:016 (242016|4) -
if u did that^, move this note 04:01:568 (241568|1) - to |5| then extend it up to here 04:01:717 -
04:34:254 (274254|1) - delete
04:34:851 (274851|2) - change to an LN ends here 04:35:001 -

cool map.. gl ~
Aste-

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi mega~
im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject
00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance
01:32:613 (92613|0,92613|5,92613|2,92762|4,92762|2,92762|0,92911|3,92911|0,92986|1,93060|4,93060|5,93060|2,93210|4,93210|0,93284|1,93359|4) - maybe ctrl+h ~ feels heavy in the right side // hmm.. yeah you're right. Fixed
03:42:314 (222314|5) - move to |5| // could you please tell me the reason why?
03:42:314 (222314|2,222463|3) - ctrl+h // uhh... this too
03:44:105 (224105|3) - move to |2| // ^
03:45:896 (225896|2,225896|4) - move two col to the left // hmm.. nope.. could you please tell me the reason why?
03:47:687 (227687|2) - move to |2| // this too
03:47:836 (227836|1) - move to |3| // this one too
04:34:254 (274254|1) - delete // why? please tell me the reason.
04:34:851 (274851|2) - change to an LN ends here 04:35:001 - // no guitar sound here. but if you have some idea that you want to share please do tell me *at least the reason why.

cool map.. gl ~
Done my part

http://puu.sh/qQFEL/b93e85a883.rar
- Ly0572 -

Aste- wrote:

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi mega~
im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject
00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance
01:32:613 (92613|0,92613|5,92613|2,92762|4,92762|2,92762|0,92911|3,92911|0,92986|1,93060|4,93060|5,93060|2,93210|4,93210|0,93284|1,93359|4) - maybe ctrl+h ~ feels heavy in the right side // hmm.. yeah you're right. Fixed
03:42:314 (222314|5) - move to |5| // could you please tell me the reason why?
03:42:314 (222314|2,222463|3) - ctrl+h // uhh... this too
03:44:105 (224105|3) - move to |2| // ^
03:45:896 (225896|2,225896|4) - move two col to the left // hmm.. nope.. could you please tell me the reason why?
03:47:687 (227687|2) - move to |2| // this too
03:47:836 (227836|1) - move to |3| // this one too
04:34:254 (274254|1) - delete // why? please tell me the reason.
04:34:851 (274851|2) - change to an LN ends here 04:35:001 - // no guitar sound here. but if you have some idea that you want to share please do tell me *at least the reason why.

cool map.. gl ~
Done my part

http://puu.sh/qQFEL/b93e85a883.rar
Reason : That mod is just more on comfortability :)
Aste-
isee.. well i'll take it as consideration

thanks for your mod
Topic Starter
MEGAtive

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi mega~
im not that useful when its 4* up so feel free to reject
00:05:972 (5972|3,6121|4,6270|5) - move one column to the left.. finger balance 00:05:972 (5972|3,6419|2) - Pitch are different. I'm trying to be stricter with pitch here.
00:08:360 (8360|3,8509|4,8658|5) - ^^ Same reason as above
01:01:792 - add to |4| Why?
01:02:314 (62314|0) - move to the other side |6| Rearranged
01:11:792 - Add to |5| then move this 01:11:866 (71866|4) - to |4| For what?
01:43:210 (103210|4,103284|3,103359|2,103359|5,103433|1) - move one col to the left 01:42:911 (102911|5,102986|4,103060|3,103135|2,103210|4,103284|3,103359|2,103433|1,103508|3,103583|2,103657|1,103732|0) - see how it actually works
02:01:493 - add to |2| For what?
02:01:717 (121717|2) - move to |6| It's fine actually. Still plays well.

cool map.. gl ~
Thanks for modding, Lyo. Map updated. Will mod yours soon.
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