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Hatsune Miku - Stargazer

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NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Wait has CDFA mapped something someone likes ahahahahahahahahahaha.

General
Remove .mp3 file then full upload.

Peru
01:15:056 (2) - Ugh, maybe move it so that the center of the end is at the center of 01:13:826 (1)? Then fix spacing
01:48:275 (1) - Ain't snapped.
01:48:275 (1,1) - Center?
01:55:056 (2) - Potentially confusing for new players.
02:31:364 (3) - Center.
02:32:595 (1) - ^

Death the kid's normal
01:12:287 (2) - Nono copypaste (1) then flip it horizontally and vertically then put it there phew
01:22:133 (4) - A slider nazi is here
01:22:749 (5) - Shinta no like overlap
01:30:441 (7) - Move up 1 grid. Remember to fix spacing on the beats after.
01:50:749 (2) - Oh f this Sorry PMSing basically it's ugly
02:28:902 (7) - Alright specificness this time move the slider point so it's in line with the tick in the center.
02:38:749 (8) - Blah

Unyou
01:31:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be a retard
02:44:287 (8,9) - WTF minor spacing
Pwnsome but silly at the same time

Okay I really don't want to mod the other diff because you reminded me that I hate Hatsune Miku <3~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desudokudo.
Wojjan
806 posts
Joined August 2008
Wojjan
great song!!!!
star
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Nice Taiko map. It's kinda simple, so not that much thing to fix. these are some suggestions...
(and I know samiljul isn't good at English, so I'll mod in Korean)

31's Taiko
01:18:127 (42,43,44,45) - 크게 상관은 없기는 한데 보컬이 01:18:281 에 등장하는데 거기가 비니까 왠지 허전하기도?
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 뭐 적절하기는 한데 개인적으로는 이러한 식의 풀콤방지 구간을 그렇게 좋아하지는 않습니다. 적당히 끊어주시는 것은?

NICE MAP
Mystearica
Mystearica
Delete .OSB + resubmit

[Uguu]

Weird song, I have to admit I don't really know what's going on here >_>

02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Is that really necessary, that's just mean.

I think you can arrange your ending to be a bit more "playable" but it's not really a problem... Not too much I can say to this map without changing it a lot.

[Midget]

Unfinished but I got what's going on in this map ._.

[Unyuu]

This is pretty good, it's fine to me as is. I liked this the best out of the mapset, good job.

01:47:050 (5) - Considering shortening this by 1/2 onto the white then add a circle at 01:47:666? I just think this way it fits in better with your section here.
02:44:743 (10) - This here just poked at me, it's a bit inconsistent in spacing so maybe new combo this to get over that problem but then again...

[Taiko]

I don't know anything on taiko, sorry~

[Normal]

02:08:281 (3) - This one is just a few grids off in spacing but I think you might as well change it. It's more than 2 grids so why not?

[Ez]

Looks okay.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31

lepidopodus wrote:

Nice Taiko map. It's kinda simple, so not that much thing to fix. these are some suggestions...
(and I know samiljul isn't good at English, so I'll mod in Korean)

31's Taiko
01:18:127 (42,43,44,45) - 크게 상관은 없기는 한데 보컬이 01:18:281 에 등장하는데 거기가 비니까 왠지 허전하기도?
음,뭐 보컬과 안맞아도 된다고 생각하니 안고침<
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 뭐 적절하기는 한데 개인적으로는 이러한 식의 풀콤방지 구간을 그렇게 좋아하지는 않습니다. 적당히 끊어주시는 것은? Fix to easier :3
NICE MAP Thanks XD
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [31's Taiko].osu
Mismagius
9,239 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
IRC mod :)
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'll let Garven do his changes, everything else, I've done :D
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Crap, sorry. My computer was down for a couple weeks there and I didn't notice these.

IAmNotShinta wrote:

Unyou That's Unyuu. Get your stupid Japanese moe-girl sounds right.
01:31:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be a retard Don't be hatin'
02:44:287 (8,9) - WTF minor spacing Woo, all fixed.
Pwnsome but silly at the same time Uh, uguu?

Mystearica wrote:

[Unyuu]

This is pretty good, it's fine to me as is. I liked this the best out of the mapset, good job. :D

01:47:050 (5) - Considering shortening this by 1/2 onto the white then add a circle at 01:47:666? I just think this way it fits in better with your section here. Hrm, k.
02:44:743 (10) - This here just poked at me, it's a bit inconsistent in spacing so maybe new combo this to get over that problem but then again... Yeah, I kind of worry about my ghetto star, though I'll try and ride it as long as I can. Well, I'll keep the evened out spacing between 8 and 9 and see how that fits.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Last edited by Garven , edited 1 time in total.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko - Stealing kudosus since ...I can't remember.

General:

No source or tags...?
Uh...no custom colours? The original ones sucks.
Disable countdown and letterbox during breaks. Really.
Prruuuuu:

01:16:281 (3) - Better like this, maybe... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15428
01:45:820 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15432
01:48:281 (1) - Horrible rainbow slider. You're not Dusty!
DtK something:

The claps makes no sense. Really. >_>;

01:50:743 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15434
Uh...I guess that's about it. Star.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desu.

EDIT: I'm too lazy to think of cool combo colors.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hi, hi, hi~

[General]
add some tags to the beatmap to get some people in here? (Few ones:Vocaloid, Hatsumi Miku)

[Prruuu]
Perfect to me, except could you reduce the spinner lengths? That much spinning can hurt a guy's wrists
00:44:589 (1,1) - Could you map this? Too huge of a time gap

[Death_the_kid's Chuuu]
00:46:743 (1,1) - Huge space, map plz?
01:07:666 (1) - Extend to 01:10:743?

[Midget]
00:41:820 (1) - Why do you cut off here???

[Garvens Uuyuu]
00:33:973 (8,9) - Spacing
00:39:358 (1,2) - ^
00:42:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:896 (1) - Could you make into a slider?
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please fix this up plz, it's confusing ;o;

[Uguu]
00:33:973 (4) - Could you flip horozontally?
01:06:435 (1,1) - Could you put notes here?
01:39:820 (4,5) - Spacing
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^(!!!!)
02:33:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
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Sorry, can't mod Taiko ;o; Even though I don't like that many Vocaloid songs, Miku worked her way into my heart here. Star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

[Midget]
00:41:820 (1) - Why do you cut off here???
This diff is incomplete. Once it gets finished, this map will get moved to WIP ;3~.
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

[Garvens Uuyuu]
00:33:973 (8,9) - Spacing What? It's distance snapped.
00:39:358 (1,2) - ^ But it looks great and is less filling. Also plays just fine with the OD.
00:42:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Um, what?
01:08:896 (1) - Could you make into a slider? Naw. I wanted to give a small break here.
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please fix this up plz, it's confusing ;o; Alright, I threw in some new combos from Mystearica's suggestion.
Wait, when it's finished it'll be moved to works in progress?

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
desu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Midget and I will collab this for approval later.

Map moved to pending.
hime_nikki04
89 posts
Joined April 2010
hime_nikki04
Hiya!

This is just a suggestion... to be honest, I couldn't find anything wrong with this beatmap! Star ~

Easy:
Move the note on 02:03:666 so it is in line with the the notes before it.
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Such a nice song...

[Prruuu]
00:59:050 (1) - shorten this slider to end at 00:59:512
01:00:281 (2) - shorten this slider to end at 01:00:743
02:34:281 (2) - move this note here
02:34:743 (x) - add a note here
^ This all sounds better to me...just check it and see...
AIMOD detects some spacing issues...

[Kid's Chuuu]
00:31:512 (4) - remove 1 repeat
00:33:666 (4) - move this slider here
00:35:973 (3) - shorten this slider to end at 00:36:127
00:36:435 (4) - move this slider here
^ This all sounds better to me...just check it...
AIMOD detects spacing issues...

[31's Taiko]
I dont mod taikos...but it looked good :P


[Garvern's Unyuu]
Add the same Kiai Time as the other maps?
Seems fine...

[Uguu]
Add the same Kiai Time as the other maps?
Seems fine...

Well mostly there all just suggestions...just check it out and see if anything I said made a difference :P

~STAR
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
Why is Crap a tag?

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file, please remove and Full Submit!

[Uguu]
just... wow
01:35:973 I think you could end Kiai around here too
01:50:435 (1) - I think this is too extra... is too close to the previous spinner
02:47:204 I think around here would be a good point to end Kiai since the chorus kind of ends there

[Garven's Unyuu]
Fine, awesome map ^^

[31's Taiko]
Fine

[Kid's Chuu]
Why are there extra kiai sections?
You should cut down a bit on Kiai, like on Garven's Diff

[Prruuu]
Fine

I think you should fix Kiai, Garven's the only one with a decent Kiai, plus Kiai should be kind of consistent across diffs, have star anyways
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
The background is stupid.

[Prruuu]
01:19:973 (2,1,2,3,4) - ugly, slider (2) half-overlaps (3)
01:24:896 (3) - wtf offscreen slider.
02:30:127 (2) - ^
02:40:589 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders aren't parallel
02:43:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - change the hitsounds to something better?

[Garven's]
Fun diff
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sucks, jumps in between the kicksliders with 1/4 between them? D:

[Uguu]
01:21:204 (1,3) - line them up
01:22:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - jesus christ
01:24:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't like this pattern
01:30:435 (5,7) - if you copy+paste sliders and then flip them around it looks better.
01:55:050 (3) - horrendous slider
02:03:666 (1) - make it straight plz

02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - what is this
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - uh

* for Garven
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Dusty wrote:

The background is stupid.

I like my BG. D: Unless you didn't notice mine was different better, hehe.

[Garven's]
Fun diff
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sucks, jumps in between the kicksliders with 1/4 between them? D: Well, considering how huge the sliderball drag area is while you're playing this (since I used pretty large hit circles), they aren't much of a jump, really. I just wanted to keep some sort of ramping-up of excitement for the final chorus.

* for Garven Aww
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
dsfl;g iuo hsdufs I'll change the background once I can ask rokodo to make a taiko background.
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Stargazer <3
nice & pretty map
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Prruuu
00:35:050 (3) - Too far from previous object.
01:18:127 (4) - ^
03:03:358 (1) - Ugly slider.

Kid's Chuuu
00:37:512 (1) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left so that it lines with (2).

31's taiko:
ok

Garven's Unyuu
ok

Uguu
said I might not mod insane diffs
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Sorry for putting in a more-relevant bg CDFA. :P
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Garven wrote:

Sorry for putting in a more-relevant bg CDFA. :P
That's ok <3~.

Too bad I can't seem to find Rokodo to make that background~.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[General]
This map is cursed with the ancient curse of osb! Remove it!

[prruuu]
01:48:281 (1,1) - mirrored sliders would be more sexy here
02:30:127 (2) - Offscreeeeen


[Kid's chuuu]
Claps every second tick would be far more sexy than the current clap placement.

[31. Taiko]
Who is 31??
Anyways not gonna mod this

[Garven]
No maid miku... Nooo!
It's weird that the HP drain is soo much higher on this than on Uguu.
01:06:435 (1,1) - This would be much sexier if you removed the spinner then copy + pasted the slider, horizontal flipped it and reversed it.
01:31:050 (1,2) - This anti-jump is pretty weird imo. I would rather have this spaced like the other beats or a jump here.

[Uguu]
Gaahh those 16 circles long 195 BPM 1/4 streams are so hard x.x

Those other streams just screamed overmapping :/

Those jumps at the end also felt too much but I guess you want it that way

Other than that it's fine

Ok modded.
*star*
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Xgor wrote:

[Garven]
No maid miku... Nooo! No means yes!
It's weird that the HP drain is soo much higher on this than on Uguu. I didn't use wtf raep streams, so the drain is justified. :3
01:06:435 (1,1) - This would be much sexier if you removed the spinner then copy + pasted the slider, horizontal flipped it and reversed it. Hrm, I spose so.
01:31:050 (1,2) - This anti-jump is pretty weird imo. I would rather have this spaced like the other beats or a jump here. Well, I guess since you're the second to raise it, I'll change it up.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Nice video and song :)

[General]
- Can you remove the audio from the vid ? it'll save some size if you remove it
- Why is crap as a Tag?

[Pruuu]
There are 6 unused timing section (cause they have the same setting as the timing section before them) :
SPOILER
- 01:03:973
- 01:43:358
- 01:53:204
- 02:47:050
- 02:54:743
- 03:08:281
cause they aren't used, might as well remove them all
00:30:743 (1) - shorten this slider to the previous white tick, if you follow this, add circle on where it end before
01:45:820 (5) - NC
02:37:512 (3) - delete the repeat then lengthen this to 02:38:127, then move 02:38:743 (4) to the previous red tick? basically following the lyric
02:44:743 (1) - how about move this to the previous red tick? it's long enough so it's not too sudden and then lengthen it if you move this

[Kid's Chuu]
Another 5 unused timing section :
SPOILER
- 01:03:973
- 01:43:358
- 01:53:204
- 02:47:358
- 02:54:743
00:46:743 (1) - lengthen this to the next white tick ?
02:12:281 (1) - it's better if this is end on the previous red tick
02:44:743 (1) - same as the spinner on Pruu
03:03:666 (1) - start and end this at the same time as in Garven's Unyuu, the current place isn't very nice
Combo mod
SPOILER
01:19:973 (1) - remove NC
02:05:820 (1) - ^
02:09:820 (1) - ^
02:35:358 (1) - ^ then add NC on 02:35:973 (2) ?
02:56:589 (1) - ^ then add NC on 02:57:204 (5)
03:01:512 (1) - ^ then add NC on 03:01:820 (6) ?

[Garven's Unyuu]
01:33:358 (7) - hmm.....change it into circle?
yeah the last section is fun, the only thing that bugs me is the two stack ~ increased spacing, but I blame my playing skill :P

[Uguu]
02:06:743 (3,4,5,6) - please stack the end better
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this is overkill :o
03:04:589 (1) - fade out this spinner just like in Garven's Unyuu, easy way to do it is too copy the timing point code from the osu notepad

Am I the only one who have fun playing this? (except for Uguu cause it's makes me go Uguu~)
Of course a Star from me :3
Good Luck
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[quote="Sallad4ever"
[Garven's Unyuu]
01:33:358 (7) - hmm.....change it into circle? Nah, but it did make me notice that the 1 and 2 of that combo were misaligned, so if anything, inspiration kudos. :P
yeah the last section is fun, the only thing that bugs me is the two stack ~ increased spacing, but I blame my playing skill :P Hehe, I was running out of ideas for a constant eighth note run. It's a nice challenge at the end of the song.
[/quote]

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31

Xgor wrote:

[31. Taiko]
Who is 31??
Anyways not gonna mod this
Me
samiljul is one Korean national holiday, and its March 1st (31) :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desu >w<
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
Fun maps :)
*sigh* I couldn't find anything to point out/comment on. Although why do you have "loli" and "crap" in tags- are they really necessary? And you don't have to add "Japanese" since BAT's add that to the genre when the map gets ranked.

~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Unrelatedly, I found out that samijul wasn't in the tags, so I'll just put that in >w<

Also removing crap from the tags because people actually noticed.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
bleh diff names
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
IRC Modding is fun yo
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Garven

OD -1
Removed silent slider end thingies
Combo crap that doesn't really matter
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Suggested to re-map this~

Also, typod's Samiljul. Fixing :D~
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

CDFA wrote:

Garven

OD -1
Removed silent slider end thingies Have you noticed how RETARDED this sounds now (on the first one, anyway)? I'd rather keep this one in, considering how the vocal wavers out instead of wanting for the striking sound of a hit. Funny that there wasn't whining about the silenced spinners too.
Combo crap that doesn't really matter
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Suggested to re-map this~ With the lower OD, it is a bit harder to read. Gee. I'll keep for now, though, and if someone else wants it completely remapped I'll do it.
Updated a couple hit sounds that were either missed or changed on accident somehow.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Hard].osu
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - So I see you are trying to make the slider end on a red tick. Can you make or something, as long nothing touches a blue tick. Currently sounds like crap.
00:35:666 (1) - ^
00:38:743 (2) - ^
00:40:589 (1) - Extend or shorten by 1/4
01:01:512 (3) - Bad sounding
02:37:512 (3) - Sounds bad, but not as bad as everything before this.

Rest are all ok, but the last part on Insane is kinda overkill.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
00:33:204 (1) - So I see you are trying to make the slider end on a red tick. Can you make or something, as long nothing touches a blue tick. Currently sounds like crap.
00:35:666 (1) - ^
00:38:743 (2) - ^
00:40:589 (1) - Extend or shorten by 1/4
01:01:512 (3) - Bad sounding
02:37:512 (3) - Sounds bad, but not as bad as everything before this.

Rest are all ok, but the last part on Insane is kinda overkill.
All of those except 02:37:512 (3) - were unintentional~. Thanks for pointing them out >w<.
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