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Hatsune Miku - Stargazer

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 06, 2010 at 6:09:44 PM

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Stargazer
Source: Kotsuban-P
Tags: Garven Death_the_kid samiljul Vocaloid
BPM: 195
Filesize: 10934kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.89 stars, 883 notes)
  2. Easy (1.77 stars, 114 notes)
  3. Garven's Hard (4.95 stars, 397 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 458 notes)
  5. Kid's Normal (4.3 stars, 199 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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15th map, I think.

Yeah, probably my most favorite map that I've made. Too bad I live in a really white family so they give me weird looks when I'm listening to it ;~;.

StargazeR is a remix, and Stargazer is the song, apparently.

Stargazer is the name of a fish.

31 is samijul >w<

Shitty diff names because people can't handle the kawaii
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 82 times in total.
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Hamuko
Offset: 9.750
Mapping my diff now :3
Can't play it, but it looks a sexy and fun beatmap.
00:38:761 (4) - This isn't snapped (AI Mod)
i think i got the right offset, btw @_@
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
00:39:671 (3,4,5) - What is this tripet following?
00:48:441 (1,2) - Unintuitive. Delete them or replace them.
00:49:210 (Break) - My favoutrite part of the song unmapped <_<
00:59:056 (x) - I like the slider speed of this section
00:59:979 (2) - Place it somewhere else so It doesn't overlap (3). There's enough room.
01:03:979 (x) - Ugh, why is the slider speed changing so suddendly? Either make the entire section 0.5x or 1.0x
01:17:748 (2,3,4) - If you don't plan to remove this triplet, then at least add a note at 01:17:979, that way it flows much better.
01:22:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,....,16)- Ew.
01:33:518 (Kiai) - Kiai time should end here.
01:53:826 (1) - It looks like it's striving for symmetry, but it's doing it wrong :<. Maybe just redo this slider in a completely different way.
02:00:749 (4,5,6) - Unstack with (3)'s end?
02:03:056 (4) - Finish
02:11:704 (1 & Spinner) - Move the spinner to 02:11:749 and make it 1/4th shorter.
02:23:979 (1,2,3,4...,16) - Please, not again <_<
02:54:749 (Kiai) - Remove this Kiai, it seems out of place.
03:04:595 (Spinner) - Use more timing sections so that this spinner will slowly fade away.

Ugh, Overall, it's well mapped, but I'm uncertain about the difficulty. Also, I'm not a fan of how you use the stacks neither of the slider speed. Spacing seems, Uhhh, consistent? Even those jumps are readeable, but places like 01:25:364 on where you stop the map speed and notes that were hit previously can confuse the player.

Yeah, it's your best map so far... ...anyways, sorry, but I'm not giving a star, as at least I cannot enjoy it right now. Maybe ask for a recheck later when you have more diffs? (If you're planning to make more?)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
o_o@BG

Can you actually pass this diff without NoFail/unranked mods? post a replay or something here if you can ._.
if you can't wtf are you doing mapping this.

01:22:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - yuck
01:23:595 (16,1) - no
01:44:595 (6,7,8,9) - wtf whistle spam
02:23:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - wtf
02:33:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - making these streams unstacked is better
02:54:749 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - lol

no kudosu unless you think this post is helpful.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Considering the low HP Drain I think it'd be possible to pass this.

The map itself isn't even that hard. Just the last part is~.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
Taiko Done.
Max combo 876

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [31's Taiko].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Added samijul's diff, and added a WIP Death_the_kid's diff. Also, took some of Krisom's changes that I should have done when he actually modded it~. Also took Dusty's hitsound thing~.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Finished~
Don't know what to call it. Do whatever you want with it!
Star~

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Kid's Diff].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sexy~

Just waiting for 1 more diff before I move this to pending~.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31
update this plz
+ BG add plz

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [31's Taiko].osu

Roga-don
339 posts
Joined September 2009
Roga-don
Taiko

00:19:672 -> 00:27:056 : The beginning is boring
02:23:979 : Amazing deathstream :D
02:54:595 : The difficulty increase too quickly, be nicer with the player :o

Nice map, Star~
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Hrrrngh.

Your bg is awful.

SPOILER

If you don't use it, then switch the combo colors back to whatever you have.


Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Unyuu].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sexy Background ;D.

I'll let samipooh fix the taiko changes ;D~.
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Offset: 9820
  2. Remove letterbox
  3. Combo colors ?_?
  4. KIAI at all difficultes should be on same positions.
  5. Some source or tags?
~Prruuu~
  1. 00:59:050 (1) - Make it horizontal.
  2. 01:03:973 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:21:204 (3) - New Combo.
  4. 01:44:589 (3) - Make it vertical.
  5. 02:30:127 (2) - Same thing with sliders.
  6. 02:37:512 (3) - ^
  7. 03:03:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
~Death_the_kid's Normal
  1. 01:16:287 (4) - 1 grid up and right.
  2. 01:45:210 (3) - 1 grid right.
  3. 01:50:441 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 01:50:749 (2) - New combo.
  5. 01:53:210 (1) - Move new combo to (2)
  6. 01:56:287 (1) - Remove New combo.
  7. 01:59:979 (1) - ^
  8. 02:01:210 (1) - ^
  9. 02:33:518 (3,4) - Spacing.
Rest is ok for me <3
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31

Roganis wrote:

00:19:672 -> 00:27:056 : The beginning is boring I think It's not boring..but I Fix
02:23:979 : Amazing deathstream :D :D
02:54:595 : The difficulty increase too quickly, be nicer with the player :o Fix to easier
Nice map, Star~ Thanks :)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [31's Taiko].osu
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Wait has CDFA mapped something someone likes ahahahahahahahahahaha.

General
Remove .mp3 file then full upload.

Peru
01:15:056 (2) - Ugh, maybe move it so that the center of the end is at the center of 01:13:826 (1)? Then fix spacing
01:48:275 (1) - Ain't snapped.
01:48:275 (1,1) - Center?
01:55:056 (2) - Potentially confusing for new players.
02:31:364 (3) - Center.
02:32:595 (1) - ^

Death the kid's normal
01:12:287 (2) - Nono copypaste (1) then flip it horizontally and vertically then put it there phew
01:22:133 (4) - A slider nazi is here
01:22:749 (5) - Shinta no like overlap
01:30:441 (7) - Move up 1 grid. Remember to fix spacing on the beats after.
01:50:749 (2) - Oh f this Sorry PMSing basically it's ugly
02:28:902 (7) - Alright specificness this time move the slider point so it's in line with the tick in the center.
02:38:749 (8) - Blah

Unyou
01:31:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be a retard
02:44:287 (8,9) - WTF minor spacing
Pwnsome but silly at the same time

Okay I really don't want to mod the other diff because you reminded me that I hate Hatsune Miku <3~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desudokudo.
Wojjan
806 posts
Joined August 2008
Wojjan
great song!!!!
star
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Nice Taiko map. It's kinda simple, so not that much thing to fix. these are some suggestions...
(and I know samiljul isn't good at English, so I'll mod in Korean)

31's Taiko
01:18:127 (42,43,44,45) - 크게 상관은 없기는 한데 보컬이 01:18:281 에 등장하는데 거기가 비니까 왠지 허전하기도?
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 뭐 적절하기는 한데 개인적으로는 이러한 식의 풀콤방지 구간을 그렇게 좋아하지는 않습니다. 적당히 끊어주시는 것은?

NICE MAP
Mystearica
Mystearica
Delete .OSB + resubmit

[Uguu]

Weird song, I have to admit I don't really know what's going on here >_>

02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Is that really necessary, that's just mean.

I think you can arrange your ending to be a bit more "playable" but it's not really a problem... Not too much I can say to this map without changing it a lot.

[Midget]

Unfinished but I got what's going on in this map ._.

[Unyuu]

This is pretty good, it's fine to me as is. I liked this the best out of the mapset, good job.

01:47:050 (5) - Considering shortening this by 1/2 onto the white then add a circle at 01:47:666? I just think this way it fits in better with your section here.
02:44:743 (10) - This here just poked at me, it's a bit inconsistent in spacing so maybe new combo this to get over that problem but then again...

[Taiko]

I don't know anything on taiko, sorry~

[Normal]

02:08:281 (3) - This one is just a few grids off in spacing but I think you might as well change it. It's more than 2 grids so why not?

[Ez]

Looks okay.
Mapper 31
1,798 posts
Joined August 2009
Mapper 31

lepidopodus wrote:

Nice Taiko map. It's kinda simple, so not that much thing to fix. these are some suggestions...
(and I know samiljul isn't good at English, so I'll mod in Korean)

31's Taiko
01:18:127 (42,43,44,45) - 크게 상관은 없기는 한데 보컬이 01:18:281 에 등장하는데 거기가 비니까 왠지 허전하기도?
음,뭐 보컬과 안맞아도 된다고 생각하니 안고침<
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - 뭐 적절하기는 한데 개인적으로는 이러한 식의 풀콤방지 구간을 그렇게 좋아하지는 않습니다. 적당히 끊어주시는 것은? Fix to easier :3
NICE MAP Thanks XD
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [31's Taiko].osu
Mismagius
9,245 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
IRC mod :)
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'll let Garven do his changes, everything else, I've done :D
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Crap, sorry. My computer was down for a couple weeks there and I didn't notice these.

IAmNotShinta wrote:

Unyou That's Unyuu. Get your stupid Japanese moe-girl sounds right.
01:31:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be a retard Don't be hatin'
02:44:287 (8,9) - WTF minor spacing Woo, all fixed.
Pwnsome but silly at the same time Uh, uguu?

Mystearica wrote:

[Unyuu]

This is pretty good, it's fine to me as is. I liked this the best out of the mapset, good job. :D

01:47:050 (5) - Considering shortening this by 1/2 onto the white then add a circle at 01:47:666? I just think this way it fits in better with your section here. Hrm, k.
02:44:743 (10) - This here just poked at me, it's a bit inconsistent in spacing so maybe new combo this to get over that problem but then again... Yeah, I kind of worry about my ghetto star, though I'll try and ride it as long as I can. Well, I'll keep the evened out spacing between 8 and 9 and see how that fits.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Last edited by Garven , edited 1 time in total.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko - Stealing kudosus since ...I can't remember.

General:

No source or tags...?
Uh...no custom colours? The original ones sucks.
Disable countdown and letterbox during breaks. Really.
Prruuuuu:

01:16:281 (3) - Better like this, maybe... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15428
01:45:820 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15432
01:48:281 (1) - Horrible rainbow slider. You're not Dusty!
DtK something:

The claps makes no sense. Really. >_>;

01:50:743 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15434
Uh...I guess that's about it. Star.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desu.

EDIT: I'm too lazy to think of cool combo colors.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hi, hi, hi~

[General]
add some tags to the beatmap to get some people in here? (Few ones:Vocaloid, Hatsumi Miku)

[Prruuu]
Perfect to me, except could you reduce the spinner lengths? That much spinning can hurt a guy's wrists
00:44:589 (1,1) - Could you map this? Too huge of a time gap

[Death_the_kid's Chuuu]
00:46:743 (1,1) - Huge space, map plz?
01:07:666 (1) - Extend to 01:10:743?

[Midget]
00:41:820 (1) - Why do you cut off here???

[Garvens Uuyuu]
00:33:973 (8,9) - Spacing
00:39:358 (1,2) - ^
00:42:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:896 (1) - Could you make into a slider?
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please fix this up plz, it's confusing ;o;

[Uguu]
00:33:973 (4) - Could you flip horozontally?
01:06:435 (1,1) - Could you put notes here?
01:39:820 (4,5) - Spacing
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^(!!!!)
02:33:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - ^
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Sorry, can't mod Taiko ;o; Even though I don't like that many Vocaloid songs, Miku worked her way into my heart here. Star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

[Midget]
00:41:820 (1) - Why do you cut off here???
This diff is incomplete. Once it gets finished, this map will get moved to WIP ;3~.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

[Garvens Uuyuu]
00:33:973 (8,9) - Spacing What? It's distance snapped.
00:39:358 (1,2) - ^ But it looks great and is less filling. Also plays just fine with the OD.
00:42:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Um, what?
01:08:896 (1) - Could you make into a slider? Naw. I wanted to give a small break here.
02:43:512 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please fix this up plz, it's confusing ;o; Alright, I threw in some new combos from Mystearica's suggestion.
Wait, when it's finished it'll be moved to works in progress?

Download: Hatsune Miku - Stargazer (CDFA) [Garven's Unyuu].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
desu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Midget and I will collab this for approval later.

Map moved to pending.
hime_nikki04
89 posts
Joined April 2010
hime_nikki04
Hiya!

This is just a suggestion... to be honest, I couldn't find anything wrong with this beatmap! Star ~

Easy:
Move the note on 02:03:666 so it is in line with the the notes before it.
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Such a nice song...

[Prruuu]
00:59:050 (1) - shorten this slider to end at 00:59:512
01:00:281 (2) - shorten this slider to end at 01:00:743
02:34:281 (2) - move this note here
02:34:743 (x) - add a note here
^ This all sounds better to me...just check it and see...
AIMOD detects some spacing issues...

[Kid's Chuuu]
00:31:512 (4) - remove 1 repeat
00:33:666 (4) - move this slider here
00:35:973 (3) - shorten this slider to end at 00:36:127
00:36:435 (4) - move this slider here
^ This all sounds better to me...just check it...
AIMOD detects spacing issues...

[31's Taiko]
I dont mod taikos...but it looked good :P


[Garvern's Unyuu]
Add the same Kiai Time as the other maps?
Seems fine...

[Uguu]
Add the same Kiai Time as the other maps?
Seems fine...

Well mostly there all just suggestions...just check it out and see if anything I said made a difference :P

~STAR
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
Why is Crap a tag?

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file, please remove and Full Submit!

[Uguu]
just... wow
01:35:973 I think you could end Kiai around here too
01:50:435 (1) - I think this is too extra... is too close to the previous spinner
02:47:204 I think around here would be a good point to end Kiai since the chorus kind of ends there

[Garven's Unyuu]
Fine, awesome map ^^

[31's Taiko]
Fine

[Kid's Chuu]
Why are there extra kiai sections?
You should cut down a bit on Kiai, like on Garven's Diff

[Prruuu]
Fine

I think you should fix Kiai, Garven's the only one with a decent Kiai, plus Kiai should be kind of consistent across diffs, have star anyways
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
The background is stupid.

[Prruuu]
01:19:973 (2,1,2,3,4) - ugly, slider (2) half-overlaps (3)
01:24:896 (3) - wtf offscreen slider.
02:30:127 (2) - ^
02:40:589 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders aren't parallel
02:43:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - change the hitsounds to something better?

[Garven's]
Fun diff
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sucks, jumps in between the kicksliders with 1/4 between them? D:

[Uguu]
01:21:204 (1,3) - line them up
01:22:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - jesus christ
01:24:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't like this pattern
01:30:435 (5,7) - if you copy+paste sliders and then flip them around it looks better.
01:55:050 (3) - horrendous slider
02:03:666 (1) - make it straight plz

02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - what is this
02:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - uh

* for Garven
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven

Dusty wrote:

The background is stupid.

I like my BG. D: Unless you didn't notice mine was different better, hehe.

[Garven's]
Fun diff
02:23:973 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sucks, jumps in between the kicksliders with 1/4 between them? D: Well, considering how huge the sliderball drag area is while you're playing this (since I used pretty large hit circles), they aren't much of a jump, really. I just wanted to keep some sort of ramping-up of excitement for the final chorus.

* for Garven Aww
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
dsfl;g iuo hsdufs I'll change the background once I can ask rokodo to make a taiko background.
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Stargazer <3
nice & pretty map
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