Hi! from queue :3
[General]
make sure to nc at downbeat (big white tick)
you didn't use any finish hitsounds at Easy, Normal, and Hard. which is a shame because there are lots of part where it can be spiced up with finish hitsound. you can see BoatKrab's and Paloch VeGa's diffs for reference
i guess thats all
goodluck~
[General]
- Remove Nine point eight deemo mili from Tags because they already exist in Artist, Title, and Source
- 00:05:857 (3,1) - ok im sorry this is hella nazi but you can make better blanket by moving 00:07:320 (1) - to the left by 1 grid (turn off the ds first) and then adjust 00:05:857 (3) - 's curve. 1.24 distance is fine, i suppose http://puu.sh/iNoSb/daa8138bc6.jpg
- 00:13:174 (1,2) - not really fond with this flow. i'd make them like this http://puu.sh/iNp2s/9c228e6b00.jpg and you can adjust the pattern afterwards easily without breaking the ds consistency http://puu.sh/iNp5J/1eb57c0b4c.jpg
- 00:26:345 (2) - also i won't recommend this rhythm because this slider follows the vocal and previous slider 00:24:881 (1) - follows the beat while they're in the same combo pattern, which can make beginners confused. so i suggest to end this slider 00:26:345 (2) - at 00:27:076 - . it improves the rhythm consistency and has better readability
- 00:24:881 (1,2) - whether you follow above suggestion or not, i'd make these two a bit similiar for better appearance lol http://puu.sh/iNpmM/436306d4e5.jpg
- 00:31:101 (1,2) - hmm idk you can make better blanket by tweaking the last node this slider 00:31:101 (1) - http://puu.sh/iNprJ/19ecf0e619.jpg
- 00:36:588 (3,1) - switch nc because the new verse clearly started at 00:36:588 - . if you follow, nc this 00:39:515 (3) - , switch nc 00:41:710 (1,3) - and remove nc 00:43:906 (1) -
- 00:39:515 (3,4) - also more nazi blanket things because im a shit http://puu.sh/iNpzI/ad208d0243.jpg
- 00:53:784 (4) - nc?
- 00:57:076 (7) - ^
- 00:57:076 (7) - also this slider kinda touches the HP bar a bit http://puu.sh/iNpN0/b6aef1dd8e.jpg so i suggest to lower it down
- 01:05:857 (3,1) - switch nc. new verse started at 01:05:857 - . also if you follow, switch nc 01:08:784 (3,1) - because 01:08:784 - is the downbeat , and nc 01:11:710 (4) -
- 01:11:710 (4,5) - flow and appearance isn't really good so i suggest to change their position. my suggestion http://puu.sh/iNpXK/b8d0f0ceaf.jpg and for the pattern afterwards http://puu.sh/iNpZN/9ca96db280.jpg
- 01:51:223 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/iNq7R/13b85f1c8c.jpg
- 02:05:857 (4,1) - switch nc
- 02:11:710 (4) - nc
make sure to nc at downbeat (big white tick)
- 00:02:930 (4,1) - switch nc. if you follow, nc this 00:04:393 (4) -
- 00:12:076 (6,1) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/iNqyV/0937b89033.jpg
- 00:19:027 (5,1) - switch nc
- 00:36:223 (5,1) - please use distance snap properly because beginner players can misread this
- 00:45:003 (4) - nc
- 00:46:466 (6,7) - make them similiar? http://puu.sh/iNqId/631431d6f1.jpg
- 00:55:613 (4) - only suggestion. i'd prefer to make this slider curves evenly at each ends http://puu.sh/iNqNs/87bba83555.jpg
- 01:38:418 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - just an opinion but this is somehow quite a boring pattern. i guess you should add a circle or reversed slider somewhere
- 01:53:235 - add a note here. it feels quite weird when theres nothing to click there even though your rhythm is following the vocal
- 01:55:613 (1,2) - switch nc
- the gap between hard and normal is quite big so idk i dont really know about it but many maps were DQ-ed because of stupid star rating gaps. idk just wanting you to be careful
- 00:02:930 (1) - ok this is dumb but move this slider up by one grid so 00:02:015 (3,1) - wont be too close
- 00:27:808 (1,2) - also dumb nazi circle suggestion http://puu.sh/iNrsJ/9e421c09a7.jpg
- 00:31:101 (5) - nc?
- 00:36:588 (1) - clap at slider's tail sounds weird because you cant hear any drums there in the song, so i suggest to remove clap
- 00:38:052 (1) - remove nc
- 00:41:162 (1) - ^
- 01:04:759 (2,3) - nazi blanket mod you can improve the blanket http://puu.sh/iNrJC/84e2dfc37f.jpg
- 01:06:406 (2,3) - idk why you dont use ds
- 01:10:979 (8,1) - ^
- 01:53:966 - clap
- 01:54:698 (4,5) - ds is a bit off
- 01:59:088 (2,3) - you can improve the blanket http://puu.sh/iNrWQ/ae49531322.jpg
- 02:07:137 (4) - remove clap since theres no drums in the song
- 02:14:637 (1,1,2) - not really fond of this overlap since this is only hard diff. might be acceptable if its insane diffs
- 00:04:210 (3,1) - might be better if you create a jump between them since 00:04:393 (1) - is a new combo but it's only a suggestion
- 00:10:064 (5) - add whistle? same hitsound pattern with 00:04:210 (3,1) - also the music is quite similiar
- 00:14:637 (7,8) - man i love nazi mod but i hate it when im the one receiving it http://puu.sh/iNtvq/a41dca54ec.jpg
- 00:13:174 - add finish at slider's head, same like 00:16:101 (1) -
- 00:24:515 - 00:24:881 - add finish
- 00:57:808 (2,3) - ctrl+G for better flow
- 01:08:418 - add finish
- 01:13:357 - add clap with normal sampleset
- 01:13:906 - ^
- 01:29:271 (6) - i suggest to nc since this is the start of a new vocal verse
- 01:51:223 - add finish? to accent the start of kiai
- 01:53:784 - add clap with normal sampleset
- 01:57:076 - add finish?
- 02:00:003 (4) - i suggest to nc since this is the start of a new vocal verse. if you follow, remove nc 01:59:088 (1) -
- 02:04:393 (5,6,7) - i suck at this so idk only suggestion
- 02:05:491 - add clap with normal sampleset
nice diff! also i like your slider art
- 00:24:149 (3,4,5) - you might want to fix the ds
- 00:42:076 (8,9,1) - not really neat for me, so i suggest to separate them a bit
- 00:51:223 - add finish to accent the start of kiai
- 00:53:052 - add clap
- 01:08:418 - add finish? theres cymbal noise in the music
- 01:56:710 (3) - clap at slider's tail sounds weird so i suggest to remove it
- 00:10:247 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest to make this rhythm the same like 00:07:320 (1,2,3) - for rhythm consistency
- 00:25:430 (3) - idk why you slow the sv of this slider. it feels weird since there's no significant change that can be heard in this part
- 00:28:357 (1) - remove nc because you already nc-ed 00:27:808 (1) -
- 00:44:637 (5,1) - only suggestion, but i'd make an anti-jump
- 00:52:137 (1) - remove nc. 00:52:137 (1,2) - is still a part of 00:51:223 (1,2,3) - 's rhythm
- 01:04:302 - add a note? i can hear drums there
- 01:08:784 (5,1) - switch nc. new verse starts here 01:08:784 -
- 01:21:588 (1,2) - ^, 01:21:588 (1) - is still a part of 01:20:491 (1,2) - 's rhythm
there are some parts which i think are quite overmapped
00:26:345 (1,2,3,4) - 00:31:101 (1,2) - 00:32:198 (1,2,3,4) - 00:52:686 (1,2,3,4) - 00:54:698 (3,4,5,6) - 01:02:930 (1,2,3) - 01:52:686 (1,2,3,4) -
reason is because you spammed a lot of small sliders when the vocal isn't intense and in fact, they are in a quite simple rhythm. which makes it really weird to play. idk im just pointing those out. it's up to you whether you want to change it or not
also you should try using finish hitsounds more at parts where you can hear cymbal noises like 00:13:174 - 00:16:101 - etc. some hitsound patterns are not consistent so be careful
you didn't use any finish hitsounds at Easy, Normal, and Hard. which is a shame because there are lots of part where it can be spiced up with finish hitsound. you can see BoatKrab's and Paloch VeGa's diffs for reference
i guess thats all
goodluck~