Krfawy wrote:

#RÓŻOWO

17:11 *Marianna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858447 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Pink Tea]]
17:11 Marianna: ;w;
17:18 Krfawy: okay, I asked two qats if the diffnames are safe and stuff o3o/
17:18 Krfawy: they are totally fine since Bakari and Asphyxia said it's cool and safe o3o
17:19 Marianna: o---o
17:19 Marianna: you i'll bubble?
17:19 Marianna: ops
17:19 Marianna: xDDDD
17:19 Marianna: You'll
17:19 Marianna: xDDDDD
17:20 Krfawy: I will look at it in a few seconds just let me update my mappu XD
17:20 Marianna: ok xD
17:42 Marianna: buubbled? xDD
17:47 Krfawy: not yet XD
17:48 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858447 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Pink Tea]]
17:48 Krfawy: so, I haven't checkec colors in the rest of the mapset
17:48 Krfawy: but for sure those two pink colors are way too similar
17:48 Krfawy: and you'll have to change one of them :V
17:49 Marianna: http://puu.sh/m3HXU/b908cc024e.png this is better?
17:49 Krfawy: yes, it is :D
17:49 Krfawy: good idea Marianna \o3o/
17:49 Krfawy: also, how about AR6.5 in [Pink Tea] diff? :o
17:49 Krfawy: I think it still will be readable and funny and nice and stuff
17:49 Krfawy: and will be easier to HR DT it
17:49 *Krfawy runs XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
17:50 Marianna: xD
17:50 Marianna: I'll love easier things
17:50 Marianna: aaaa
17:50 Marianna: i love*
17:50 Krfawy: o3o
17:50 Krfawy: I love easy stuff too \:D/
17:50 Krfawy: XD
17:52 Marianna: fixed
17:52 Krfawy: ok
17:52 Krfawy: so it's all form Pink Tea diff o3o
17:52 Krfawy: now I'm looking at Basic
17:54 Krfawy: 00:24:289 (1) - how about you scale it a little bit like for 0,911x so it's more symmetrical and smooth? xD
17:55 Krfawy: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4177342 itself it would look like that]
17:55 Krfawy: so the XY position is still the same and stuff
17:55 Krfawy: it would be just polished a bit more xD
17:56 Marianna: fixed xD
17:56 Krfawy: oki
17:57 Krfawy: 00:38:689 (1) - um why is this one so lol? XD
17:57 Krfawy: I mean this is not as polished as previous patterns .3.
17:57 Krfawy: can you see it? xD
17:58 Marianna: no ;w;
17:58 Krfawy: ahhhh
17:58 Krfawy: o wait I'm stupid
17:58 Krfawy: NVM
17:58 Krfawy: forgot that I've mentioned it
17:58 Krfawy: XD
17:59 Krfawy: forget*
17:59 Marianna: xD
17:59 Krfawy: 00:49:489 (3) - so this is the only pattern in this beatmap
17:59 Krfawy: like this
17:59 Krfawy: I highly recommend using a reversed slider here :(
18:00 Krfawy: now it just breaks polarity and the patterning from the whole map ;_;
18:00 Marianna: Ok ^^
18:00 Marianna: fixed
18:00 Krfawy: o3o/
18:00 Krfawy: okay, it's all for Basic diff \o/
18:00 Krfawy: let's go to another diffu O3O
18:01 Krfawy: oh wait
18:01 Krfawy: just a suggestion from me for Basic diff
18:01 Marianna: o3o
18:02 Krfawy: so it's up to you if you want or not XD
18:02 Krfawy: I suggest AR5.5 if you want it XD
18:03 Marianna: ok xD
18:04 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858448 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Normal]]
18:04 Krfawy: 00:26:689 (1) - this is very disturbing for me because there's so many reverses D:
18:05 Krfawy: I would rather use two 1/2 sliders instead of one slider with three reverses ;_;
18:05 Krfawy: now it's really hard to follow it due to consistent patterns 
18:05 Marianna: fixed
18:05 Krfawy: ok :3
18:06 Krfawy: BRB, bathroom D:
18:06 Krfawy: but its all for normal
18:07 Marianna: ok
18:17 Marianna: updated :v
18:23 Krfawy: back o3o/
18:23 Marianna: o/
18:31 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858445 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Easy]]
18:31 Krfawy: hmmm
18:31 Krfawy: 00:23:089 (3) - shouldn't be the end hitsounded with the whistle
18:31 Krfawy: instead of the head of the slider?
18:31 Krfawy: or am I mistaken? xD
18:32 Marianna: fixed xDD
18:33 Krfawy: 00:32:689 (3) - here too? xD
18:33 Marianna: oh wait, I was already certain >.<
18:33 Krfawy: and here
18:33 Krfawy: or am I mistaken
18:33 Krfawy: oooooo
18:33 Krfawy: okay unfix! XD
18:33 Marianna: yes
18:33 Marianna: xD
18:37 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858510 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Ultra Newbie]]
18:37 Krfawy: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
18:37 Krfawy: this difficulty is beautiful <3
18:37 Marianna: xDDD
18:37 Marianna: Thanks ♥
18:38 Krfawy: hmmm
18:38 Krfawy: just a suggestion from me for a Newbie diff
18:38 Krfawy: to use AR1 or AR0.5 
18:38 Krfawy: and the rest of the settings would be the same as well
18:38 Krfawy: XD
18:39 Marianna: but how?
18:39 Krfawy: um
18:39 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858446 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Newbie]]
18:39 Krfawy: I mean you could use AR0.5-1.0 and OD0.5-1.0 and HP0.5-1.0
18:39 Krfawy: XD
18:40 Marianna: oh xD
18:40 Krfawy: \o3o/
18:40 Krfawy: okay that's all
18:40 Krfawy: ARE YOU READY!!!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!ONE
18:41 Marianna: no wait
18:41 Krfawy: ok o/
18:41 Marianna: updating~
18:42 Krfawy: let me know when everything's okay o/
18:43 Marianna: ok
18:43 Marianna: ~
18:44 Marianna: now you can bubble xD
18:44 Krfawy: XD

-Nya- wrote:

Had an IRC mod with Marianna. Changed the diff names and other small stuff.

IRC

16:45 Marianna: Hello Nya
16:45 -Nya-: Heyo
16:46 Marianna: How are you? ^^
16:47 -Nya-: Fine, thanks. You?
16:47 Marianna: Well...
16:47 Marianna: You can check my map?
16:47 -Nya-: Lol, couldn't you find anyone yesterday?
16:49 -Nya-: But I'll check it. Just wait for me to finish this mod first
16:50 Marianna: no ;w;
16:50 -Nya-: I'll check it
16:50 -Nya-: Just send the link again
16:50 Marianna:
16:50 *Marianna is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858447 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime]
16:50 -Nya-: And wait for me to finish this mod first
16:51 Marianna: ok ^^
17:00 -Nya-: Did someone check the metadata?
17:01 Marianna: I picked up the metadata of an already qualified map
17:01 -Nya-: Ok, then it's fine
17:03 -Nya-: Pink tea diff: 00:19:489 (1) - I don't really like this shape. Personal opinion. It's fine if you want to keep it.
17:04 Marianna: Well .. It does not change anything in the gameplay so I think I will continue with it ^^
17:04 -Nya-: 00:37:489 (3) - For better flow I'd rather do this: http://puu.sh/m4OG9/4867df4c9f.jpg
17:05 -Nya-: You can obviously move the (3) a bit further away if you want to
17:06 Marianna: Ok
17:11 -Nya-: In Normal: 00:23:089 (2) - Rather Ctrl+G this. Better flow.
17:12 -Nya-: 00:24:289 (1) - This slider is not a good idea since the head is overlapping the body and it looks ugly a bit. I don't think this is allowed either.
17:12 -Nya-: Try to make a slidershape that's more recognizable.
17:13 Marianna: ook
17:15 Marianna: is this?
17:15 -Nya-: In Easy: 00:26:689 (2) - Move the tail of this slider more downwards so it's more visible.
17:15 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/m4Pdm/702e18ab16.jpg
17:17 Marianna: fixed
17:20 -Nya-: In Ultra Newbie: 00:00:289 (1) - Not so sure if a slider like this is okay, since there are some parts overlapping each other. You have to make the sliderpath more visible. But I'll doublecheck this with Bakari. Just wait a sec
17:23 -Nya-: Waiting for Bakari's response. You don't have to fix anything yet.
17:24 -Nya-: Nevermind, Bakari says it's fine
17:25 Marianna: ^^
17:26 -Nya-: Done. You can update
17:27 Marianna: updated
17:37 -Nya-: Checking something with Bakari again
17:42 -Nya-: Talked to Bakari about diff names. This would work better in our opinions: Ultra Beginner, Beginner, Easy, Normal, Basic, Hard and Pink Tea.
17:44 -Nya-: Wait, change basic to advanced.
17:44 -Nya-: The word basic refers to something like Easy
17:45 Marianna: Krfawy spoke to Bakari and Asphyxia, they said okay
17:45 -Nya-: I just spoke to bakari too and he said that to me
17:45 -Nya-: http://puu.sh/m4QFK/13797c112c.jpg
17:45 Marianna: http://puu.sh/m4QFA/e2e87c8175.png
17:46 -Nya-: I actually agree with Bakari atm >.< About the changing of the diff names
17:47 Marianna: But there are 4 easys
17:48 Marianna: I will leave "Pink Tea" on hard
17:48 -Nya-: Pink tea is fine.
17:48 -Nya-: And the fourth diff can be seen as a Normal as well
17:48 *Marianna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858446 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Super Beginner]]
17:48 Marianna: Fine?
17:49 *Marianna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/858510 t+pazolite ft. Rizna - Interlude - teatime [Ultra Beginner]]
17:49 -Nya-: I guess super beginner will work too
17:49 Marianna: Ultra Beginner, Super Beginner, Beginner, Easy, Normal, Advanced and Pink Tea
17:49 Marianna: fine?
17:50 -Nya-: Yeah
17:50 Marianna: i'll update
17:50 -Nya-: Bakari says super is fine
17:51 Marianna: updated
17:55 -Nya-: I'll qualify
17:55 Marianna:
17:55 Marianna: Thanks Nya!

Ready~!

Qualified~

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz~ <3

1. 00:00:289 (1,2) - This is the one that made me realized there something wrong at the very beginning of the map. There's nothing in the music, to say "I could make a jump over here, yeah, looks cool". You emphasise what is important and that's it. In case you want to do something similar, try with https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4185817 the rhythm changes but there's a reason behind it, and it's the fact that from 00:00:289 - to 00:00:889 - there's a held sound, meaning there's no reason to make 00:00:889 - clickable. That's another thing I want to talk about. The rhythm of the map and what should be or not clickable. Pay attention to the music!
2. 00:02:989 (2,3,4,5) - Alright, so... (2,3) is justified, you even added a custom hitsound to (3)s head, and I agree with that, it's fine. However you have an inconsistency later on. To begin with (3,4) has a similar issue to what I explained above, there's nothing to emphasise, therefore the spacing should be lower, whilst (4,5) should, once again, be highlighted for the sake of consistency. Additionally, I don't know why did you map that differently from 00:07:489 (1,2,3,4) - both rhythm and spacing are inconsistent between patterns. I can understand the fact that you don't want to make rhythms repetitive, but even the spacing? Nah.
3. 00:18:889 (4,1) - I was expecting a jump here instead of 00:18:289 (3,4) - as you did in this case, after all, you are adding more spacing on almost every downbeat, so it'd make sense.
4. 00:26:689 (1,2,3,4) - Really noticeable and unnecessary jump-y pattern.
5. 00:32:089 (2) - I don't know why did you decide to add a different hitsound from 00:31:489 (1,3) - even when they all sound the same way. (3) doesn't even have a hitsound, why?
6. 00:43:489 (1,2) - Compare the difference and tell me what do you think 00:48:289 (1,2,3) - ! Also, I thought you were placing jumps after a break as done in 00:14:689 (1,2) - and 00:33:889 (1,2) - . It'd make sense, don't you think?

Niebieskii wrote:

I love pink <3
Congratulations Marianna

Yuii- wrote:

"Ultra Beginner" is extremely unnecessary. You already have 2 other beginners that can be FCeable but pretty much every player, why did you bother on making another difficulty with 5 objects? No need to!

Okoratu wrote:

an incredibly hasty decision.

ghm12 wrote:

Como todo mundo já falou, a culpa não é sua.

Não adianta desistir de mapear por conta do erro dos outros. Os BNs tem a liberdade de qualificarem o que quiser, se eles escolheram algo sem qualidade e sofreram punição por isso a culpa é deles, não sua.

-Nya- wrote:

Please don't talk like this. I followed my own judgement. I don't like it that you're talking like that about my decision. You don't know anything about the way that I think when I qualify or bubble something. Believe me, I would never push something forward that I feel isn't ready yet. Unfortunately I just struck extremely bad luck here that's nobody's fault. Perhaps this was even meant to happen to bring me back to real life and not concentrate on this game for the rest of my life.

@Marianna: Keep on mapping if you want to. Don't let this minor setback affect your mindset about mapping. Fix the stuff that others felt was wrong and try to push this forward again. Lol, it's not as if Krfawy and I were kicked out of osu completely.

Good Luck~!

Marianna wrote:

Sorry, I stopped doing maps, just make two BNs be removed...

Marianna wrote:

Ok I will not stop now ^^

Krfawy wrote:

Marianna wrote:

Sorry, I stopped doing maps, just make two BNs be removed...

WTF, it was us who qualified it so I'm not really sure why you felt sorry about it. We qualified it, we got removed from the BNG. Seems easy and okay, right?

About the easiest diff (which now is not on the forums anymore): well, I kind of do and do not understand why it is such a problem for only 5-element difficulty to get ranked or not even if it seems unnecessary, and the simplest reason of my actual confusion is *THIS* set. According to this, such a thing shouldn't even be a problem since the song has a few simple diffs and this one is even calmer than the mapset by monstrata, so this particular situation is honestly off. Of course, the mapset should get more mods, but on the other hand, the official DQ reason is low quality itself.

LigerZero wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4655408 <(")

1. 00:14:689 (1) - Are you conscious that you are trying to cover a lot of sounds with only 1 slider? 00:33:889 (1,2,3) - See? They are way too different and thus they sound completely different. And then you have something similar happening on 00:38:689 (1) - in which you have a mute sound from 00:38:839 - to 00:39:439 - and, once again neither 00:39:589 - nor 00:39:889 - are clickable... as for the last thing, the beat is actually on 00:40:339 - and therefore the slider should end there.
2. 00:42:289 (3,1) - You could really improve this blanket.

1. 00:35:089 (4) - Improving that curve into the opposite way would play way more intuitive with the following pattern, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4379762 would help.

Yuii- wrote:

Please, delete the beginner difficulty. Easy is already too easy.

[Easy]

You know, even if I tell you to delete the Beginner, this difficulty is already... too damn easy as well. The problem of making difficulties that easy is that you either ignore a lot of beats in the middle of sliders or you ignore them because you can't map on 1/2 for the sake of consistency. Not to mention the fact that it's really boring. I'm dropping just two things that are "must fix", but I still disagree with this difficulty as a whole. Even if you take a look at other people's teatimes, you will notice that there is no "so easy" difficulty as this song isn't asking for one.

1. 00:14:689 (1) - Are you conscious that you are trying to cover a lot of sounds with only 1 slider? 00:33:889 (1,2,3) - See? They are way too different and thus they sound completely different. And then you have something similar happening on 00:38:689 (1) - in which you have a mute sound from 00:38:839 - to 00:39:439 - and, once again neither 00:39:589 - nor 00:39:889 - are clickable... as for the last thing, the beat is actually on 00:40:339 - and therefore the slider should end there.
2. 00:42:289 (3,1) - You could really improve this blanket.

[Hard]

1. 00:35:089 (4) - Improving that curve into the opposite way would play way more intuitive with the following pattern, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4379762 would help.

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Everything else seems to be fine, go.
Regarding the Easy: Sure you can make something easier than the Normal... but please, don't ignore all the beats in the song, it's a really short one.

Marianna wrote:

(Only Easy) If you say so.

jonawaga wrote:

M4M~ on your queue~♥

Marianna wrote:

(Only Easy) If you say so.

Easy~

1. 00:16:789 (3) - This is unnecessary, remove it. Fixed
2. 00:31:489 - Here, try a rhythm like this, it sounds much better.

That's all I could find... I hope this helps. Don't mod back if it doesn't.