Hi Sheela, from my queue!
* SB/FB.png: 完全に また今度 夜が んでいく -> 完全に また今度 夜が滲んでいく ( http://piapro.jp/t/YDng )
* Add to the tags 'souta' ?
* 02:03:193 (4,1) - 02:58:480 (4,1) - Just a minor thing, but the overlap with the slider end destroys the beauty of this difficulty. Consider doing something like this? http://puu.sh/lVyCK/f20242b414.jpg
* 02:16:386 (1,2) - Minor, but DS. Rest is looking great!
* 00:01:936 (3,4) - 00:34:606 (5,6) - 00:42:774 (3,1) - 02:06:020 (5,1) - DS, some are minor, some look much better when fixed.
* 00:15:444 (6) - Add a clap?
* 00:42:774 (3,1) - Every other stack in this difficulty is 1/2, so stacking this as 1/1 doesn't make sense to me and could cause confusion. Would just be consistent with 00:42:774 (3,1) - and space them out.
* 01:37:119 (3,4) - Why is this jump so large??? Please don't do this, you don't even have this in the KIAI.
* 03:06:805 (1) - Only in this diff, the spinner is extended to the red tick. Probably a mistake you want to get rid of.
* 00:34:135 (6,7,8,1) - Was a bit confused here. (6,7) has such a large jump while the downbeat has such little space. It's a bit awkward when playing, especially because this is in one straight line.
* 01:16:700 (3) - Clap pattern has changed to every 1/1 tick here, consider adding one here then?
* 01:45:287 (3,4) - Since you always have spacing in between when the double claps come, why did you stack these? Makes more sense if you stacked (1,2) instead and spaced out (3,4) instead. That way you can also keep that straight line.
* 01:51:570 (2) - Not sure if a 1/1 slider is the best here, the clap on the red tick is completely ignored now, while you never do that in this difficulty.
* 02:13:088 (4) - Kinda offbeat here, consider changing to something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwxe/ec3d8ab5a8.jpg . This goes on quite a bit in the last KIAI, but to me it just plays so weird.
* 02:36:491 (1,2,3,4) - Try ctrl+g'ing some stuff here? Currently you keep spacing between each set of sliders, while at 02:37:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are jumps at every single one of them. Prehaps something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwL0/da9d7a39f0.jpg
* 02:58:481 (3,4,5) - Weird angle when playing.. could easily be fixed by moving (3) a bit upwards. http://puu.sh/lVwV4/91de8877c8.jpg
Many random DS shifting moments, like 00:55:496 (4,5,6) - 01:05:077 (2,3) - etc. when your usual spacing is smaller than that (like 01:06:020 (1,2) - ). Maybe it's just me, but this bothered me a bit. Good job otherwise.
Waah, this song & utaite are awesome! Really thanks for showing me this, I'm hooked lol.
Good map & SB work, call me back!
General
* SB/FB.png: 完全に また今度 夜が んでいく -> 完全に また今度 夜が滲んでいく ( http://piapro.jp/t/YDng )
* Add to the tags 'souta' ?
HOS' Easy
* 02:03:193 (4,1) - 02:58:480 (4,1) - Just a minor thing, but the overlap with the slider end destroys the beauty of this difficulty. Consider doing something like this? http://puu.sh/lVyCK/f20242b414.jpg
* 02:16:386 (1,2) - Minor, but DS. Rest is looking great!
Normal
* 00:01:936 (3,4) - 00:34:606 (5,6) - 00:42:774 (3,1) - 02:06:020 (5,1) - DS, some are minor, some look much better when fixed.
* 00:15:444 (6) - Add a clap?
* 00:42:774 (3,1) - Every other stack in this difficulty is 1/2, so stacking this as 1/1 doesn't make sense to me and could cause confusion. Would just be consistent with 00:42:774 (3,1) - and space them out.
Hard
* 01:37:119 (3,4) - Why is this jump so large??? Please don't do this, you don't even have this in the KIAI.
* 03:06:805 (1) - Only in this diff, the spinner is extended to the red tick. Probably a mistake you want to get rid of.
Insane
* 00:34:135 (6,7,8,1) - Was a bit confused here. (6,7) has such a large jump while the downbeat has such little space. It's a bit awkward when playing, especially because this is in one straight line.
* 01:16:700 (3) - Clap pattern has changed to every 1/1 tick here, consider adding one here then?
* 01:45:287 (3,4) - Since you always have spacing in between when the double claps come, why did you stack these? Makes more sense if you stacked (1,2) instead and spaced out (3,4) instead. That way you can also keep that straight line.
* 01:51:570 (2) - Not sure if a 1/1 slider is the best here, the clap on the red tick is completely ignored now, while you never do that in this difficulty.
* 02:13:088 (4) - Kinda offbeat here, consider changing to something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwxe/ec3d8ab5a8.jpg . This goes on quite a bit in the last KIAI, but to me it just plays so weird.
* 02:36:491 (1,2,3,4) - Try ctrl+g'ing some stuff here? Currently you keep spacing between each set of sliders, while at 02:37:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are jumps at every single one of them. Prehaps something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwL0/da9d7a39f0.jpg
* 02:58:481 (3,4,5) - Weird angle when playing.. could easily be fixed by moving (3) a bit upwards. http://puu.sh/lVwV4/91de8877c8.jpg
Many random DS shifting moments, like 00:55:496 (4,5,6) - 01:05:077 (2,3) - etc. when your usual spacing is smaller than that (like 01:06:020 (1,2) - ). Maybe it's just me, but this bothered me a bit. Good job otherwise.
Waah, this song & utaite are awesome! Really thanks for showing me this, I'm hooked lol.
Good map & SB work, call me back!