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Madotsuki@ - Ikanaide

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sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 18, 2015 at 8:38:45 PM

Artist: Madotsuki@
Title: Ikanaide
Tags: kaai yuki 歌愛ユキ 想太 sohta souta eve don't go vocaloid utaite nico douga hootowlstar pandorawindy
BPM: 191
Filesize: 12264kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.56 stars, 504 notes)
  2. HOS' Easy (1.62 stars, 282 notes)
  3. Insane (4.59 stars, 706 notes)
  4. Normal (2.32 stars, 394 notes)
Download: Madotsuki@ - Ikanaide
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Go watch the MV of this song! | Mafumafu's version | himawari's version

appleeaterx & Mako Sakata / Ipas

Easy: HootOwlStar
Normal: sheela901
Hard: sheela901
Insane: sheela901
Special thanks to:
pandorawindy for the spectrum, falling flowers and other effects!
</li><li>HootOwlStar for the Easy difficulty!
Thank you, modders!
  1. Squarey
  2. Ipas
  3. jonawaga
  4. Kuki
  5. Reiki
  6. Squirrel
  7. XiiD
  8. Reclaimer
  9. Prismetical
  10. appleeaterx
  11. Mako Sakata
Last edited by sheela , edited 74 times in total.
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
Besides Spectrum , u ll need some other effects , Give me one day, Let me help you make storyboard (:
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
StoryBoard has been done, But i didnt make Japanese Lyrics for you , I know you can make lyrics very well like DECO*27 feat. GUMI - Ame Moyou.

Link : http://puu.sh/i002V/efefcd3419.zip

  1. Put the lyrics below the spectrum .
  2. Notice the lyrics font type , try to make them consistent with my fonts . Dont use additive-blend color in KiAi parts ..
  3. Dont forget open widescreen support .
  4. Refer Scripts of my fonts below.
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"11t-fonts/X1.png",320,240
 MX,1,13264,13578,327.00,307.00
 MY,0,13264,18290,370.00,370.00
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 F,0,17976,18290,0.75,0
 P,0,13264,,A
 C,0,13264,,255,100,200
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

pandorawindy wrote:

StoryBoard has been done, But i didnt make Japanese Lyrics for you , I know you can make lyrics very well like DECO*27 feat. GUMI - Ame Moyou.

Link : http://puu.sh/i002V/efefcd3419.zip

  1. Put the lyrics below the spectrum .
  2. Notice the lyrics font type , try to make them consistent with my fonts . Dont use additive-blend color in KiAi parts ..
  3. Dont forget open widescreen support .
  4. Refer Scripts of my fonts below.
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"11t-fonts/X1.png",320,240
 MX,1,13264,13578,327.00,307.00
 MY,0,13264,18290,370.00,370.00
 S,0,13264,18290,0.25,0.25
 F,0,13264,13578,0,0.75
 F,0,17976,18290,0.75,0
 P,0,13264,,A
 C,0,13264,,255,100,200
OH MY GOD. It's so magnificent! I really love the way it's like, like it's simple and not too complex (not the code but how it looks), especially the transition at the beginning, where it introduces the song and name and that spectrum!
I will do some modifications to the SB if I may. I updated the BG so the couple doesn't look weird. Also, I prefer the artist and title to be the original names, which means Japanese. My username has an "s" not capitalized. It looks weird when it is to be honest.
Oh, your name! It is not included in the SB. Since you made the beautiful SB, I have to include it in my mapset and SB.

Otherwise, thank you very much for making the SB, pandorawindy! I will try to take care with the lyrics.
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy

sheela901 wrote:

OH MY GOD. It's so magnificent! I really love the way it's like, like it's simple and not too complex (not the code but how it looks), especially the transition at the beginning, where it introduces the song and name and that spectrum!
I will do some modifications to the SB if I may. I updated the BG so the couple doesn't look weird. Also, I prefer the artist and title to be the original names, which means Japanese. My username has an "s" not capitalized. It looks weird when it is to be honest.
Oh, your name! It is not included in the SB. Since you made the beautiful SB, I have to include it in my mapset and SB.

Otherwise, thank you very much for making the SB, pandorawindy! I will try to take care with the lyrics.
original names r more better and i found your lyrics effects r great.. so delete 11t-fonts file and use img introduces instead of mine .. I think it s no necessary to add my user name to sb since i only provided you little effects and spectrum , of course , this is your sb , how to design is up to you (:

Btw, osb file has been updated.. I optimized the flowers effects in kiai and changed some sprites color to fit your lyrics. flower.png is fitter than mine. So i commend you use yours instead of mine. but you might need to increase flower.png s size to get better visual effect.

link : http://puu.sh/i0L0J/3ba906f8b4.zip
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

pandorawindy wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

OH MY GOD. It's so magnificent! I really love the way it's like, like it's simple and not too complex (not the code but how it looks), especially the transition at the beginning, where it introduces the song and name and that spectrum!
I will do some modifications to the SB if I may. I updated the BG so the couple doesn't look weird. Also, I prefer the artist and title to be the original names, which means Japanese. My username has an "s" not capitalized. It looks weird when it is to be honest.
Oh, your name! It is not included in the SB. Since you made the beautiful SB, I have to include it in my mapset and SB.

Otherwise, thank you very much for making the SB, pandorawindy! I will try to take care with the lyrics.
original names r more better and i found your lyrics effects r great.. so delete 11t-fonts file and use img introduces instead of mine .. I think it s no necessary to add my user name to sb since i only provided you little effects and spectrum , of course , this is your sb , how to design is up to you (:

Btw, osb file has been updated.. I optimized the flowers effects in kiai and changed some sprites color to fit your lyrics. flower.png is fitter than mine. So i commend you use yours instead of mine. but you might need to increase flower.png s size to get better visual effect.

link : http://puu.sh/i0L0J/3ba906f8b4.zip
Alright, thank you again!
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
I am really glad that you approved my sb effects , but.. there is no real need to thank me in sb ^ ^

  1. On second thoughts , your intro part is not very satisfactory. so i decide use mine , I have change the title , artist and your username s first letter.
  2. If you have to add storyboarders' name in sb , i can change "producer - sheela901" -> "storyboarders - pandorawindy / sheela901" , dont change it by yourself , just tell me your choice and let me fix it.
New SB osb file : http://puu.sh/i8h2z/808863223e.zip
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

pandorawindy wrote:

I am really glad that you approved my sb effects , but.. there is no real need to thank me in sb ^ ^

  1. On second thoughts , your intro part is not very satisfactory. so i decide use mine , I have change the title , artist and your username s first letter. Alright, it's okay to me.
  2. If you have to add storyboarders' name in sb , i can change "producer - sheela901" -> "storyboarders - pandorawindy / sheela901" , dont change it by yourself , just tell me your choice and let me fix it. Yeah, "producer" doesn't right to me. Although the producer is me, the creator of the beatmap, the Easy/Normal and Hard/Insane with the names are what I can call the producers. So please change it!
New SB osb file : http://puu.sh/i8h2z/808863223e.zip
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
Updated

Link : http://puu.sh/i9xVC/48139d4cdf.zip

you might misunderstood the meaning of producer . producer is one person who has option to choose GD makers and he has a responsibility to make your diffs being consistent. In other words , producer is in charge of this map.

btw.. your insane HP is little higher for me . Nowadays many novices prefer to pass insane rather than fc your easier diffs . But..high HP might make them depressing.
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

pandorawindy wrote:

Updated

Link : http://puu.sh/i9xVC/48139d4cdf.zip

you might misunderstood the meaning of producer . producer is one person who has option to choose GD makers and he has a responsibility to make your diffs being consistent. In other words , producer is in charge of this map. I know, but still, I think it's useless.

btw.. your insane HP is little higher for me . Nowadays many novices prefer to pass insane rather than fc your easier diffs . But..high HP might make them depressing. I actually also noticed that. I forgot to change after every play I do.
Weeaboo
64 posts
Joined January 2014
Weeaboo
From Queue

Insane

1. 00:12:636 (4) - I would change this weird dip in slider to make it look better

2. 00:28:342 (1) - Again i would change this dip in the slider imo they don't play well and look ugly

3. 00:46:562 (4,5,1) - I would curve these a bit more to make them more fun to play

4. 01:05:253 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems a bit weird to me i have no clue how you could change it maybe make 4-5 a blanket

5. 02:47:819 (1,2) - Curve these a bit more

Hard

1. 00:18:761 (2) - change the point on the slider to about [url=00:18:761 (2) -]here[/url] to make it look smoother

2. 01:03:526 (1) - Change the bend in this slider

Sorry for the delay on me modding this, I had a pretty hard time finding any problems with it. I couldn't find anything wrong with the easy and normal. Overall great map it flows nicely good luck! :)
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Yeah~

[HOS' Easy]
  1. 01:23:630 (5) - Using this placement of red anchor points made a bad slider shape . I suggest you to keep it flows smoothly using curve or keep it plays straight or make it like 00:05:725 (3) - slider shape
  2. 02:45:306 - Fill around this section with break time?
[Normal]
  1. 01:57:243 (2) - You could curve it to the upper side . It just personal preferences, but it looks bad on visual preferences imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:740 (4) - I'd rather to make this into a slider end from 00:02:583 (3) (this mod insist you to make (3) become a 1/2 slider) - . This part is too low to be emphasized by a circle, that mostly preferable to emphasizing the strong or important beat
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Too low to be emphasized . I know it's exist to support current rhythm from 00:02:897 (2) - , but I suggest you to not accentuate it with circle . Maybe like above, do it with slider end
[]
Nice~
Good Luck~
Maybe I want o investigate more Insane diff, since it's rainy here and I can't hear beats properly
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

Ipas wrote:

Yeah~

[Normal]
  1. 01:57:243 (2) - You could curve it to the upper side . It just personal preferences, but it looks bad on visual preferences imo // Switched side of the curve.
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:740 (4) - I'd rather to make this into a slider end from 00:02:583 (3) (this mod insist you to make (3) become a 1/2 slider) - . This part is too low to be emphasized by a circle, that mostly preferable to emphasizing the strong or important beat // Agreed and applied.
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:740 (1) - Too low to be emphasized . I know it's exist to support current rhythm from 00:02:897 (2) - , but I suggest you to not accentuate it with circle . Maybe like above, do it with slider end // I did the same thing as Hard.
[/notice]
[]
Nice~
Good Luck~
Maybe I want o investigate more Insane diff, since it's rainy here and I can't hear beats properly
Thanks Ipas for the mod! Overall everything was fixed.

Squarey wrote:

From Queue

Insane

1. 00:12:636 (4) - I would change this weird dip in slider to make it look better // Changed the slider into 1/2 and straighten the slider.

2. 00:28:342 (1) - Again i would change this dip in the slider imo they don't play well and look ugly // I think this is okay.

3. 00:46:562 (4,5,1) - I would curve these a bit more to make them more fun to play // Alright.

4. 01:05:253 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems a bit weird to me i have no clue how you could change it maybe make 4-5 a blanket // Changed in my way.

5. 02:47:819 (1,2) - Curve these a bit more //They're currently look good to me.

Hard

1. 00:18:761 (2) - change the point on the slider to about [url=00:18:761 (2) -]here[/url] to make it look smoother // The last link might be incorrect. But the curve looks fine.

2. 01:03:526 (1) - Change the bend in this slider // Blanketed with (2)

Sorry for the delay on me modding this, I had a pretty hard time finding any problems with it. I couldn't find anything wrong with the easy and normal. Overall great map it flows nicely good luck! :)
Thanks Squarey for the mod! No problem with the delay, I didn't receive any mail about this reply, so I should apologize then.
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar

Ipas wrote:

[HOS' Easy]
  1. 01:23:630 (5) - Using this placement of red anchor points made a bad slider shape . I suggest you to keep it flows smoothly using curve or keep it plays straight or make it like 00:05:725 (3) - slider shape // Already decided this before but always forgot to do this. Fixed.
  2. 02:45:306 - Fill around this section with break time? // Fixed

Nice~
Good Luck~
Thanks for the mod!

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: besssst.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 82688,99966,101222
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ikanaide
TitleUnicode:いかないで
Artist:Madotsuki@
ArtistUnicode:窓付き＠
Creator:sheela901
Version:HOS' Easy
Source:
Tags:kaai yuki 歌愛ユキ 想太 sohta eve don't go vocaloid utaite nico douga hootowlstar pandorawindy
BeatmapID:735762
BeatmapSetID:315799

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"blop.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,78804,79677
2,164249,165122
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/bub.png",458,85
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/bub.png",524,142
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb/bub.png",539,301
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/pulse.png",328,154
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB/pulse.png",420,362
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo4 : 204,166,22

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Hello~
Going recheck the Insane~
You're knew that you mustn't give me a kudos on this post

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:055 - This part is an empty rhythm, just a faded sound from the previous drum clap . I suggest you to make 00:02:897 (1) - into 1/3 slider then make 3/4 pattern with the next slider
  2. 01:19:861 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - After distanced placements of 01:18:918 (2,3) - which have same rhythm with this one, this one feels too dense . Consider to enlarge the spacing a bit . Maybe reduce the usage of circles and make them into sliders with jumps like the previous one is preferable too
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

Ipas wrote:

Hello~
Going recheck the Insane~
You're knew that you mustn't give me a kudos on this post

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:055 - This part is an empty rhythm, just a faded sound from the previous drum clap . I suggest you to make 00:02:897 (1) - into 1/3 slider then make 3/4 pattern with the next slider // I deleted the note.
  2. 01:19:861 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - After distanced placements of 01:18:918 (2,3) - which have same rhythm with this one, this one feels too dense . Consider to enlarge the spacing a bit . Maybe reduce the usage of circles and make them into sliders with jumps like the previous one is preferable too // Enlarged the spacing to 1.30x.
Thanks again Ipas!
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal
Hey~ NM from my queue.

General
  1. Easy and Insane have epilepsy warnings, but normal and hard don't. It looks like the storyboard is the same in all of the difficulties, so you should probably either make all of them have the warning, or none of them.
  2. 02:45:306 - On some difficulties you drag the break so it ends around here, but on some others you don't. Make this consistent.
Easy
  1. 00:13:264 (1,2,3) - Spacing, 1.08 and 1.12 is too much of a difference
  2. 00:23:316 (1,2) - ^ 1 is too close to 2.
  3. 01:06:039 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 01:07:295 (3,4,5) - ^ You should probably check the spacing yourself.
  5. 03:06:667 (9,1) - This spinner appears really quickly, which may be too much for Easy players. Try removing 9.
That's all I could find.
Normal
  1. 00:06:981 (3,4) - Blanket?
  2. 00:10:123 (6,1) - Blanket? Rotate 15° anti-clockwise and move to about x-430 y- 168
  3. 00:17:034 (3) - ^ Rotate 5° anti-clockwise and move to x-202 y-55. Doesn't ruin the copy/paste slider.
  4. 00:20:018 (5,6) - Why are you making a jump on normal? Correct the ds.
  5. 01:20:175 (5) - Move this to about x-438 y-101
  6. 01:22:374 (4) - End this at about x-263 y-22 and put 01:22:374 (4) - this at x-306 y-55
  7. 01:24:887 (5) - Take the reverse off of this and try a rhythm like this or this.
  8. 02:06:039 (5,1) - Fix Blanket. If it's not a blanket then make it a blanket or make it looks less like a blanket.
  9. 02:50:332 (4,5) - Blanket?
  10. 02:52:845 (4,5) - Blanket?
Hard
  1. 00:04:782 (2,3) - Blanket? I know you're trying to keep the copy-paste slider, but you could copy/paste it again and rotate it about 120° clockwise.
  2. 00:32:112 (1,2) - Fix the blanket by stretching 1 out a bit more.
  3. 00:39:651 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:02:740 (2,3) - Fix blanket, and then make this identical with 01:03:526 (1,2) - this. If it's not a blanket then don't make it look like a blanket.
  5. 01:10:751 (4) - Clap.
  6. 01:22:374 (1,2) - Blanket?
  7. 01:22:374 (1,2) - Reverse this, make it start at about x-258 y-255, then reverse it again. This makes it go in the middle of the red 1. If you do that, then also correct 2's spacing.
  8. 01:27:871 (2,3) - Fix the blanket by stretching out 3 a bit more.
  9. 01:29:913 (1,2) - ^, stretch out 2.
  10. 01:41:850 (3,4) - Blanket?
  11. 01:55:358 (2,3,1) - Spacing.
  12. 02:23:002 (3,4) - Fix blanket. Move this slightly up.
  13. 02:30:856 (3,4,1) - Spacing.
  14. 03:02:897 (1,2,3,4) - Make some of these blankets, or fix them if they are blankets.
Insane
  1. 00:07:295 (3,4) - Rotate 3° clockwise and move to x-192 y-242 to stack 4's end with the red 3's end.
  2. 00:08:709 (3) - Rotate vertically, because it's close the the brownish 5.
  3. 00:24:416 (5,1) - Blanket. If this isn't supposed to be a blanket either make it a blanket or make it look less like a blanket.
  4. 00:39:966 (2,3,4) - Blanket, the slider is too curved. Also, consider stacking 3 on 4.
  5. 00:48:133 (5) - Move this slightly to the left to make the crossbow neater.
  6. 00:51:903 (4) - ^, but slightly down this time.
  7. 01:14:835 (1) - ^, but slightly left this time.
  8. 01:21:903 (5,6) - Blanket.
  9. 01:22:374 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:39:023 (2) - ^ Curve it out a bit more.
  11. 02:37:452 (4,1) - Make this look less like a blanket.
  12. 02:54:102 (1,2,3,4) - Make 1 and 4 identical
Good Luck~!! :)
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

jonawaga wrote:

Hey~ NM from my queue.

General
  1. Easy and Insane have epilepsy warnings, but normal and hard don't. It looks like the storyboard is the same in all of the difficulties, so you should probably either make all of them have the warning, or none of them. // Alright, enabled to all difficulties.
  2. 02:45:306 - On some difficulties you drag the break so it ends around here, but on some others you don't. Make this consistent. // The breaks are automatically created, and I didn't do anything with dragging the end of the break. But anyway, ending the break there doesn't seem to fit very well with the music.
Normal
  1. 00:06:981 (3,4) - Blanket?
  2. 00:10:123 (6,1) - Blanket? Rotate 15° anti-clockwise and move to about x-430 y- 168 // The current pattern is intended. I like how it looks like.
  3. 00:17:034 (3) - ^ Rotate 5° anti-clockwise and move to x-202 y-55. Doesn't ruin the copy/paste slider.
  4. 00:20:018 (5,6) - Why are you making a jump on normal? Correct the ds. // Oops. Fixed the distance.
  5. 01:20:175 (5) - Move this to about x-438 y-101
  6. 01:22:374 (4) - End this at about x-263 y-22 and put 01:22:374 (4) - this at x-306 y-55 // Not sure if I understand the last point.
  7. 01:24:887 (5) - Take the reverse off of this and try a rhythm like this or this. // Did what the first screenshot looked like.
  8. 02:06:039 (5,1) - Fix Blanket. If it's not a blanket then make it a blanket or make it looks less like a blanket. // Not going to change anything. It's still pretty.
  9. 02:50:332 (4,5) - Blanket?
  10. 02:52:845 (4,5) - Blanket? // If I make a blanket pattern, it can make an overlap pattern with another slider which is ugly.
Hard
  1. 00:04:782 (2,3) - Blanket? I know you're trying to keep the copy-paste slider, but you could copy/paste it again and rotate it about 120° clockwise. // I think it still looks okay.
  2. 00:32:112 (1,2) - Fix the blanket by stretching 1 out a bit more.
  3. 00:39:651 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:02:740 (2,3) - Fix blanket, and then make this identical with 01:03:526 (1,2) - this. If it's not a blanket then don't make it look like a blanket.
  5. 01:10:751 (4) - Clap.
  6. 01:22:374 (1,2) - Blanket? // There's already a blanket with tail of (1).
  7. 01:22:374 (1,2) - Reverse this, make it start at about x-258 y-255, then reverse it again. This makes it go in the middle of the red 1. If you do that, then also correct 2's spacing. // I think it's alright. I like the current pattern.
  8. 01:27:871 (2,3) - Fix the blanket by stretching out 3 a bit more.
  9. 01:29:913 (1,2) - ^, stretch out 2.
  10. 01:41:850 (3,4) - Blanket?
  11. 01:55:358 (2,3,1) - Spacing.
  12. 02:23:002 (3,4) - Fix blanket. Move this slightly up.
  13. 02:30:856 (3,4,1) - Spacing. // I don't see the problem.
  14. 03:02:897 (1,2,3,4) - Make some of these blankets, or fix them if they are blankets.
Insane
  1. 00:07:295 (3,4) - Rotate 3° clockwise and move to x-192 y-242 to stack 4's end with the red 3's end.
  2. 00:08:709 (3) - Rotate vertically, because it's close the the brownish 5.
  3. 00:24:416 (5,1) - Blanket. If this isn't supposed to be a blanket either make it a blanket or make it look less like a blanket.
  4. 00:39:966 (2,3,4) - Blanket, the slider is too curved. Also, consider stacking 3 on 4.
  5. 00:48:133 (5) - Move this slightly to the left to make the crossbow neater.
  6. 00:51:903 (4) - ^, but slightly down this time.
  7. 01:14:835 (1) - ^, but slightly left this time.
  8. 01:21:903 (5,6) - Blanket.
  9. 01:22:374 (1,2) - ^
  10. 01:39:023 (2) - ^ Curve it out a bit more.
  11. 02:37:452 (4,1) - Make this look less like a blanket. // Made a blanket.
  12. 02:54:102 (1,2,3,4) - Make 1 and 4 identical
Good Luck~!! :)
Thank you for the mod, jonawaga! Anything that has nothing written after the point has been fixed.
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki


[Hard]
00:42:479 (2) - Move to X=39 Y=167 to fix triangle's spacing.
00:50:018 (2) - Ctrl+G perhaps.
01:52:374 (4) - Move to X=70 Y=320 to fix spacing.

[Insane]
00:12:636 (4) - Ctrl+G perhaps.
00:16:091 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:16:405 (3) - Ctrl+G.
00:18:290 (1) - Ctrl+G.
00:18:918 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:19:233 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:57:871 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:05:096 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
01:07:924 (4) - Curve this slider perhaps
01:20:489 (8) - Move to X=432 Y=116 to almost fix spacing (I don't think it's possible to get perfect without moving other notes).
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
sheela

Kuki wrote:



[Hard]
00:42:479 (2) - Move to X=39 Y=167 to fix triangle's spacing.
00:50:018 (2) - Ctrl+G perhaps.
01:52:374 (4) - Move to X=70 Y=320 to fix spacing.

[Insane]
00:12:636 (4) - Ctrl+G perhaps. // I like the current one.
00:16:091 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:16:405 (3) - Ctrl+G.
00:18:290 (1) - Ctrl+G.
00:18:918 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:19:233 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:57:871 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:05:096 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
01:07:924 (4) - Curve this slider perhaps // The pattern looks fine.
01:20:489 (8) - Move to X=432 Y=116 to almost fix spacing (I don't think it's possible to get perfect without moving other notes).
Thanks for the mod, Kuki! Anything that has nothing written after a point is applied.
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