Madotsuki@ - Ikanaide · forum

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,790 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2015-08-23T17:01:54+00:00

cute song and mapset

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

sheela 2015-08-23T17:03:28+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
cute song and mapset

Woah, it got noticed by -kevincela-. Anyway, thank you!

Darson

187 posts

Joined June 2014

Darson 2015-10-30T22:21:32+00:00

Hello from my queue!

General

omg this sb lkasjdflasjdflksajfdlsakfdjasfldkasfdl
Fucking awesome map and great song

HOS' Easy

Couldn't find any issue

Normal

01:19:861 (4,5,6) - Maybe try some 1/2 sliders instead? It would probably sound better with the guitar strumming
01:50:960 (6) - Maybe move this to x:304 y:80 so it leads into 01:51:274 (1) better
02:01:013 - You could put a note here for the hihat beat but maybe it's fine how it is

Hard

00:10:437 (3) - Maybe move this to x:436 y:264 so it has consistent flow with 00:09:494 (1,2)
00:33:683 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this is Nazi but the spacing is a bit off mainly between 00:34:625 (4,5) they're a bit closer together than the others

Insane

00:34:311 (7,8) - I think this would flow better if you stacked these under 00:33:840 (4)
00:59:756 (1,2) - Any reason these aren't combo'd with 01:00:070 (1,2,3) ?
01:50:646 (5) - Maybe move this to x:348 y:60 ? Idk I think it flows better with a bigger gap between 01:50:489 (4,5)
03:04:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - jizz

Done!

Hopefully this mod helps, good luck

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

sheela 2015-10-31T00:17:46+00:00

Reclaimer wrote:
Hello from my queue!

General
omg this sb lkasjdflasjdflksajfdlsakfdjasfldkasfdl ffgfsfasgshfh
Fucking awesome map and great song fucking yes

HOS' Easy
Couldn't find any issue

Normal
01:19:861 (4,5,6) - Maybe try some 1/2 sliders instead? It would probably sound better with the guitar strumming Alright. I like it.
01:50:960 (6) - Maybe move this to x:304 y:80 so it leads into 01:51:274 (1) better Moved the circle.
02:01:013 - You could put a note here for the hihat beat but maybe it's fine how it is Yeah, it's fine how it is, because 02:00:070 (1,2,3) is mostly following the drums. Therefore having a note on where you want it makes the sound bad in my opinion, since it's following something else.

Hard
00:10:437 (3) - Maybe move this to x:436 y:264 so it has consistent flow with 00:09:494 (1,2) I did something on 00:09:494 (1,2) . There currently don't have a natural flow, so I moved (1) somewhere else.
00:33:683 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe this is Nazi but the spacing is a bit off mainly between 00:34:625 (4,5) they're a bit closer together than the others Nice catch actually. Fixed the spacing.

Insane
00:34:311 (7,8) - I think this would flow better if you stacked these under 00:33:840 (4) Cool.
00:59:756 (1,2) - Any reason these aren't combo'd with 01:00:070 (1,2,3) ? It's actually because the pattern for the new combo: a new combo on each downbeat. But I removed it because it was ugly.
01:50:646 (5) - Maybe move this to x:348 y:60 ? Idk I think it flows better with a bigger gap between 01:50:489 (4,5) Yet, after 01:50:489 (4) the beat is not that loud, so large distance wouldn't fit. I've remapped the star pattern.
03:04:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - jizz pls
Done!

Hopefully this mod helps, good luck

Thank you for the mod, Reclaimer! It was pretty helpful!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2015-11-01T21:05:10+00:00

Heya! :3

Easy

00:23:316 (1,2) - change it like that:
1 00:23:316 - to 00:24:259 -
2 00:24:573 - to 00:25:515 -

00:55:986 (1) - shape the slider, don't cut into other sliders

01:23:630 (1) - ^

01:26:144 (1) - ^

01:33:683 (1) - ^

01:38:709 (1) - ^
01:43:735 (1) - ^
01:53:788 (1) - ^

01:58:814 (1) - ^ like that: 02:51:589 (1) -
02:03:840 (1) - ^
02:59:128 (1) - ^
03:01:641 (1) - ^
03:06:981 - start the spinner here

Normal

00:16:405 (2) - ugly :3
02:57:871 (4) - ^
01:05:253 (5) - confusing jump, because before these jumps are stacked, like here: 01:07:767 (4) -
01:49:233 (2) - ^
01:09:023 - circle
01:14:049 - ^
01:50:489 - ^
02:08:081 - ^
02:48:290 - ^ (definitely place one there, that will be fun)
02:00:698 (3,1) - don't stack

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

sheela 2015-11-01T21:15:42+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Normal
00:16:405 (2) - ugly :3 I made something.
02:57:871 (4) - ^ Alright.
01:05:253 (5) - confusing jump, because before these jumps are stacked, like here: 01:07:767 (4) - With the current short distance, it reads fine since everything is constant.
01:49:233 (2) - ^
01:09:023 - circle
01:14:049 - ^
01:50:489 - ^
02:08:081 - ^ I won't added more circles because honestly, it adds more to the difficulty, and I don't want that. It can cause trouble the spread of Easy and Normal.
02:48:290 - ^ (definitely place one there, that will be fun) But I'll add this circle since "it's fun" lol.
02:00:698 (3,1) - don't stack I'm going to consider this. It looks okay to me though.

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3

Thank you for the mod, Prismetical!

HootOwlStar

750 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2015-11-02T15:21:13+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya! :3

Easy
Really sorry that I deleted the screenshots to make my replies neater.
00:23:316 (1,2) - change it like that: I'm actually following the pattern as of 00:28:342 (1,2) - and I think my current patterrn is quite fitting to the vocal as I mapped to it in this part.
1 00:23:316 - to 00:24:259 -
2 00:24:573 - to 00:25:515 -
00:55:986 (1) - shape the slider, don't cut into other sliders I made it intentionally since I think the pattern is quite great for me and I might even destroy the current flow if I follow this suggestion.
01:23:630 (1) - ^ I think it is fine as it is though.
01:26:144 (1) - ^ I did try apply some curvature to the slider but it doesn't turn out well.
01:33:683 (1) - ^ Tried making the slider flat instead of blanket.
01:38:709 (1) - ^ Quite a great idea.
01:43:735 (1) - ^ I think there's no problem.
01:53:788 (1) - ^ Not going to change the slider into wave.
01:58:814 (1) - ^ like that: 02:51:589 (1) - ^
02:03:840 (1) - ^ I like how it is though.
02:59:128 (1) - ^ ^
03:01:641 (1) - ^ You made me questionable about the design a little lol
03:06:981 - start the spinner here It was actually fine but I would follow this suggestion if more people state this issue.

Amazing storyboard!
Great map!
Good luck on getting ranked! :3

Wow, you did great efforts in modding my difficulty though haha. Thanks for the mod and the wishes! :3
@sheela901 below is my diff after update. Anyway it's when I copy the diff code that I found out that the mp3. file is besssst.mp3 though.

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: besssst.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 82688,99966,101222
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ikanaide
TitleUnicode:いかないで
Artist:Madotsuki@
ArtistUnicode:窓付き＠
Creator:sheela901
Version:HOS' Easy
Source:
Tags:kaai yuki 歌愛ユキ 想太 sohta eve don't go vocaloid utaite nico douga hootowlstar pandorawindy
BeatmapID:735762
BeatmapSetID:315799

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"blop.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,78804,79677
2,164249,165122
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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 C,0,121327,121641,89,114,120,255,192,203
 C,0,138604,138918,255,192,203,89,114,120
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 C,0,139547,140175,225,225,225,255,192,203
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 C,0,164049,164363,225,225,225,89,114,120
 F,0,191065,191693,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",204,182
 F,0,699,1013,1,0
 S,0,699,1013,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",282,195
 F,0,1013,1327,1,0
 S,0,1013,1327,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",364,162
 F,0,1327,1641,1,0
 S,0,1327,1641,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",444,155
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 S,0,1641,1955,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",524,190
 F,0,1955,2269,1,0
 S,0,1955,2269,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\bub.png",542,331
 F,0,2583,2897,1,0
 S,0,2583,2897,0.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",328,154
 S,0,156510,156824,0.25,1
 S,1,156824,157767,1,1.1
 F,0,157452,157767,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",420,362
 S,0,159023,159337,0.25,1
 S,1,159337,160280,1,1.1
 F,0,159966,160280,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\pulse.png",120,326
 S,0,161536,161850,0.25,1
 S,1,161850,162793,1,1.1
 F,0,162479,162793,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\intro\ez.png",320,240
 S,0,18290,,0.2
 C,0,18290,,155,200,100
 P,0,18290,,A
 F,0,18290,18604,0,1
 MX,1,18290,18604,40,60
 MY,1,18290,18604,344
 F,0,23002,23316,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\intro\hos.png",320,240
 S,0,18290,,0.2
 C,0,18290,,255,100,200
 P,0,18290,,A
 F,0,18290,18604,0,1
 MX,1,18290,18604,300,280
 MY,1,18290,18604,364
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
699,314.13612565445,4,2,1,80,1,0
2740,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2897,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
3055,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
3212,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
23316,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
33369,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
43421,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
60070,-100,4,2,1,75,0,1
60384,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
60698,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
61013,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
78604,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
81117,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
121327,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
138604,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
138918,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
148971,-100,4,2,0,50,0,1
149049,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
156353,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
156510,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
164049,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
166562,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
186667,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
187295,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
187924,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
188552,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
189180,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
189808,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
190437,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
191065,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
191693,-100,4,2,3,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 89,114,120
Combo3 : 172,41,20
Combo4 : 204,166,22

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sheela

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sheela 2015-11-02T23:51:18+00:00

Updated your difficulty, HootOwlStar!

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2015-11-04T03:02:21+00:00

I really liked this beatmap. I hope you get it ranked soon!

sheela

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sheela 2015-11-04T03:11:13+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
I really liked this beatmap. I hope you get it ranked soon!

Thank you! I'll get it ranked soon after I've found my nominator, hehe.

BigEarsMau

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BigEarsMau 2015-11-06T11:43:13+00:00

Hi there, sheela
I'm supposed to mod your map from my modding queue. Unfortunately, I can't mod your map because your map is too good. I barely find any mistakes in it
So here's a star from me instead

Good luck in being ranked
and sorry

sheela

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sheela 2015-11-06T11:47:01+00:00

BigEarsMau wrote:
Hi there, sheela
I'm supposed to mod your map from my modding queue. Unfortunately, I can't mod your map because your map is too good. I barely find any mistakes in it
So here's a star from me instead

Good luck in being ranked
and sorry

Hey BigEarsMau! Haha, don't worry about that. Thank you for checking and giving a star!

pandorawindy

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pandorawindy 2015-11-09T20:28:48+00:00

how s it going panda

sheela

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sheela 2015-11-09T21:58:10+00:00

pandorawindy wrote:
how s it going panda

It's going slow because of my other map, haha. I hope I catch this nominator early lol.

Ipas

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Ipas 2015-11-17T11:44:42+00:00

You can catch me early sheela! The stuff is going to start again! I'm happy for it~

Darson

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Darson 2015-11-18T08:12:51+00:00

How da fak is this not ranked yet :<

Ipas

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Ipas 2015-11-24T02:17:07+00:00

Recheck!

[General]

I feel the timing is too slow . It should be -19 according to "Timing Analyzer"

[HOS' Easy]

00:32:112 (2) - This one almost touch the HP bar . Would be nice to have it lowered down regarding to custom skin HP bar that might has touched by

[Normal]

00:11:988 (3,4) - It's a bit nonsense with two circle here . There's nothing too strong and nothing too low here, so it fits better with one 1/2 slider instead
01:59:894 (3) - Not really clear what this circle is supposed for, so I think it's better to remove it
03:00:679 - Are you sure going with this skipped beat? Just my thought, that I think it's really important to be filled since you aren't focused on drum anymore, and in fact this beat isn't drum only

[]
Continue later . I want to go somewhere . Stay tune!

sheela

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sheela 2015-11-24T02:26:40+00:00

@Ipas: Thank you again! I have applied everything for my part with the timing.

@HootOwlStar: I didn't change for the timing for your difficulty though, to not "ruin" anything. So you have to do it, unless you want me do shift everything!

sheela

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sheela 2015-11-25T00:59:19+00:00

Updated HootOwlStar's difficulty!

Mint

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Mint 2015-12-14T20:24:23+00:00

Hi Sheela, from my queue!

General

* SB/FB.png: 完全に　また今度　夜がんでいく -> 完全に　また今度　夜が滲んでいく ( http://piapro.jp/t/YDng )
* Add to the tags 'souta' ?

HOS' Easy

* 02:03:193 (4,1) - 02:58:480 (4,1) - Just a minor thing, but the overlap with the slider end destroys the beauty of this difficulty. Consider doing something like this? http://puu.sh/lVyCK/f20242b414.jpg
* 02:16:386 (1,2) - Minor, but DS. Rest is looking great!

Normal

* 00:01:936 (3,4) - 00:34:606 (5,6) - 00:42:774 (3,1) - 02:06:020 (5,1) - DS, some are minor, some look much better when fixed.
* 00:15:444 (6) - Add a clap?
* 00:42:774 (3,1) - Every other stack in this difficulty is 1/2, so stacking this as 1/1 doesn't make sense to me and could cause confusion. Would just be consistent with 00:42:774 (3,1) - and space them out.

Hard

* 01:37:119 (3,4) - Why is this jump so large??? Please don't do this, you don't even have this in the KIAI.
* 03:06:805 (1) - Only in this diff, the spinner is extended to the red tick. Probably a mistake you want to get rid of.

Insane

* 00:34:135 (6,7,8,1) - Was a bit confused here. (6,7) has such a large jump while the downbeat has such little space. It's a bit awkward when playing, especially because this is in one straight line.
* 01:16:700 (3) - Clap pattern has changed to every 1/1 tick here, consider adding one here then?
* 01:45:287 (3,4) - Since you always have spacing in between when the double claps come, why did you stack these? Makes more sense if you stacked (1,2) instead and spaced out (3,4) instead. That way you can also keep that straight line.
* 01:51:570 (2) - Not sure if a 1/1 slider is the best here, the clap on the red tick is completely ignored now, while you never do that in this difficulty.
* 02:13:088 (4) - Kinda offbeat here, consider changing to something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwxe/ec3d8ab5a8.jpg . This goes on quite a bit in the last KIAI, but to me it just plays so weird.
* 02:36:491 (1,2,3,4) - Try ctrl+g'ing some stuff here? Currently you keep spacing between each set of sliders, while at 02:37:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - there are jumps at every single one of them. Prehaps something like this? http://puu.sh/lVwL0/da9d7a39f0.jpg
* 02:58:481 (3,4,5) - Weird angle when playing.. could easily be fixed by moving (3) a bit upwards. http://puu.sh/lVwV4/91de8877c8.jpg

Many random DS shifting moments, like 00:55:496 (4,5,6) - 01:05:077 (2,3) - etc. when your usual spacing is smaller than that (like 01:06:020 (1,2) - ). Maybe it's just me, but this bothered me a bit. Good job otherwise.

Waah, this song & utaite are awesome! Really thanks for showing me this, I'm hooked lol.
Good map & SB work, call me back!

sheela

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sheela 2015-12-15T02:51:32+00:00

@appleeaterx: Thank you very much of the mod! Everything has been applied, and I fixed some DS shifts, so some might be left out unchanged because I think the distance suits with the beats.

EDIT: I applied the suggestions on HOS' Easy!

Mint

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Mint 2015-12-16T20:01:06+00:00

Looks good to me!
Bubbled!

sheela

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sheela 2015-12-16T21:49:56+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Looks good to me!
Bubbled!

Coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Thanks again!

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2015-12-16T22:38:33+00:00

Placeholder, checking now

Darson

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Darson 2015-12-16T23:17:37+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Looks good to me!
Bubbled!

Niceeee

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2015-12-17T01:45:44+00:00

Helloo~
Some small sugestion,

[General]

Umm metadata source? I'm not familiar with vocaloid and utaite
Imo combo color 1 looks same with bg, because almost 80% of the bg color consists of that color, furthermore the approach circle kinda hard to be seen in some part
Why using tick rate 2? I don't think the extra tick represent anything

[Insane]

Imo for a better readability maybe you can consider to add some nc on anti jump part like 00:22:669 (1,2,3) - , 00:42:145 (1,2,3) - , and 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - ? especially on 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - the 1/1 anti jump spacing there visually looks like regular 1/2 beat
00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
01:17:329 (1,1,1,1) - A bit not understand with that nc spam there
02:01:779 (3) - Missing clap I guess
02:18:585 (1) - Maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 (4) - ? because imo the rhythm better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, without adding weak beat such as 02:18:585 (1) -

[Hard]

00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
01:19:842 (1) - How about changed that into 1/2 slider with circle instead or something similiar to complete the guitar sequences on that part? imo the current kinda odd because you miss this beat 01:19:999 -
01:16:072 (1,2) - Missing clap on both head I guess
02:18:585 (4) - Literally same as Insane, maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 - ?

[Normal]

00:14:816 - 01:10:732 - 01:22:041 - Missing clap I guess
01:51:727 (2) - Missing clap also
02:18:428 (6) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so a rhythm like this might be better http://puu.sh/lYlWD/5445a5ae3c.jpg ?
02:43:402 (4,5,6) - Imo the straight pattern looks to plain, maybe rotate them like this http://puu.sh/lYmca/03d50f5684.jpg will improve the flow a bit?
03:00:837 (5) - Missing clap

[HOS' Easy]

01:10:732 - Missing clap I guess
02:18:271 (4) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so reducing the reverse might be good there?

[]
Just let me know when you updated

sheela

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sheela 2015-12-17T02:42:35+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloo~
Some small sugestion,

[General]
Umm metadata source? I'm not familiar with vocaloid and utaite I read this wrong lol. Look at HootOwlStar's post for the sources.
Imo combo color 1 looks same with bg, because almost 80% of the bg color consists of that color, furthermore the approach circle kinda hard to be seen in some part Yes, I agree.
Why using tick rate 2? I don't think the extra tick represent anything Alright, fixed it to 1.
[Insane]
Imo for a better readability maybe you can consider to add some nc on anti jump part like 00:22:669 (1,2,3) - , 00:42:145 (1,2,3) - , and 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - ? especially on 02:00:051 (1,2,3) - the 1/1 anti jump spacing there visually looks like regular 1/2 beat
00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
01:17:329 (1,1,1,1) - A bit not understand with that nc spam there It was to emphasize the ending of the chorus. But I decided to add one on the downbeats.
02:01:779 (3) - Missing clap I guess
02:18:585 (1) - Maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 (4) - ? because imo the rhythm better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, without adding weak beat such as 02:18:585 (1) - It could work, but there is a cymbal sound on 02:18:585 . Without having anything on that sound, it's rather awkward and sounds weird. Plus, the slow slider makes a nice effect for this beat.
[Hard]
00:02:564 - Probably missing clap
01:19:842 (1) - How about changed that into 1/2 slider with circle instead or something similiar to complete the guitar sequences on that part? imo the current kinda odd because you miss this beat 01:19:999 -
01:16:072 (1,2) - Missing clap on both head I guess
02:18:585 (4) - Literally same as Insane, maybe you should delete that and emphsized more jump on 02:18:428 - ? Same reason as Insane, because of the beat I don't want to miss.
[Normal]
00:14:816 - 01:10:732 - 01:22:041 - Missing clap I guess
01:51:727 (2) - Missing clap also
02:18:428 (6) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so a rhythm like this might be better http://puu.sh/lYlWD/5445a5ae3c.jpg ? Pretty much the same reason.
02:43:402 (4,5,6) - Imo the straight pattern looks to plain, maybe rotate them like this http://puu.sh/lYmca/03d50f5684.jpg will improve the flow a bit? I made something else.
03:00:837 (5) - Missing clap

[]
Just let me know when you updated

Anything that has not comments followed by are fixed. Thank you for the mod!

Last edited by sheela 2015-12-17T12:18:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HootOwlStar

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HootOwlStar 2015-12-17T11:04:11+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Helloo~
Some small sugestion

[General]
Umm metadata source? I'm not familiar with vocaloid and utaite
In case tweets can be a source for metadata, you can refer to one of his tweets which I managed to find https://twitter.com/madotsuki_/status/635790046566584321, in which he just states the title in the niconico video http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26055413 so I think these 2 links could be good enough.
Imo combo color 1 looks same with bg, because almost 80% of the bg color consists of that color, furthermore the approach circle kinda hard to be seen in some part sheela helped me fixed it already
Why using tick rate 2? I don't think the extra tick represent anything my tick rate is already 1 so yep
[HOS' Easy]
01:10:732 - Missing clap I guess sheela helped me fixed it already
02:18:271 (4) - Imo that better to be stopped on 02:18:428 - following the strong vocal there to make a better stop motion, so reducing the reverse might be good there? I need to agree with sheela about the cymbal sound + I don't really want to apply more 1/2's into my difficulty so yeah
Just let me know when you updated

Thanks for mod and gogogogogogog

Ipas

806 posts

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Ipas 2015-12-18T02:15:54+00:00

Continue of my mod hue
Sorry for really late >< It almost a month

[Hard]

00:39:632 (3,4) - Overlap looks untidy . Maybe you can try to polish the current position or avoid this overlap either
01:08:376 - Are you distinguishing this vocal? I guess you need to map it too, since I feel that most of your rhythm pattern follow the major vocals
01:53:611 - Rather strong vocal exist here, map?
02:01:151 - Again?
02:08:376 - I'm guessing to hit something here while there's nothing here actually, haha . Please fill if you agree with me
02:36:491 (1) - Start from this slider, please don't empty some parts with 1/1 gap . The music goes very strong (obviously you know it) and weird to skip some beats that will benefit with emphasis

[Insane]

00:51:884 (4) - You can improve the flow with Ctrl+G this slider
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I did a testplay and there's nothing bad here
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[]
Let me know after update!

sheela

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sheela 2015-12-18T02:43:17+00:00

Ipas wrote:
Continue of my mod hue
Sorry for really late >< It almost a month

[Hard]
00:39:632 (3,4) - Overlap looks untidy . Maybe you can try to polish the current position or avoid this overlap either
01:08:376 - Are you distinguishing this vocal? I guess you need to map it too, since I feel that most of your rhythm pattern follow the major vocals
01:53:611 - Rather strong vocal exist here, map?
02:01:151 - Again? Not this one, as I want to emphasize the chorus by having a gap in-between.
02:08:376 - I'm guessing to hit something here while there's nothing here actually, haha . Please fill if you agree with me I mostly follow the piano in this part. And I guess I wanted to vary the rhythms in the chorus, so it doesn't has to be the same as the first.
02:36:491 (1) - Start from this slider, please don't empty some parts with 1/1 gap . The music goes very strong (obviously you know it) and weird to skip some beats that will benefit with emphasis Okay, but I left 2 gaps. It sounded pretty weird because of the vocals.
[Insane]
00:51:884 (4) - You can improve the flow with Ctrl+G this slider
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I did a testplay and there's nothing bad here
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[]
Let me know after update!

Thanks again, Ipas! I'm going to let Mako Sakata know that I applied your mod so she could check it and give a rebubble.

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2015-12-18T06:13:00+00:00

Recheck,

Normal
- The spacing on 01:22:041 (3) - , 01:53:140 (5) - , and 03:03:821 (6) - kinda inconsistence
Hard
- I'm sorry, but a blanket on 00:39:632 (3,4) - might looks better ><

The rest should be good

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2015-12-19T01:48:59+00:00

Alright, rebubbled!

Darson

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Darson 2015-12-19T02:41:28+00:00