Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my queue~ Here goes. [I'm noob at English, so PM me later if there's some thing you don't understand] [Somehow I can't get sleep lol]

General

- Maybe you can put the source? So others can know where's this song coming from. There's no source though, it's just a folk song I put the album in tags though
- If possible, your background image should be 1366*768. I'll look into this, maybe I can find a higher res of the BG

Normal

- Some notes like these 00:36:642 (2,3) are too close to the life bar, probably you should move them somewhere better than this. (and there are many of these so I won't mention this anymore) Moved a few of them, but unless they directly overlap the HP bar, I think it's fine, no?
- I'm not sure that some overlaps you did in the map was intentional e.g. 00:57:032 (4,1) , I think this kind of overlapping is a bit weird though, They will make the map become unattractive. Yes, this was intentionally done. I think it looks rather nice and gives more variety and flavor than constant blanket to blanket without overlaps.
01:18:595 (3) - Fix blanket, maybe? Adjusted
02:23:282 (2) - ^ Adjusted

Hard

00:34:064 (1) - Maybe you can ctrl+h this and move back to the same position for a better flow? Ah yeah, why not
00:55:626 (1,2,3) - These are a bit too difficult to read with AR7, I think you should considering remap this part but it's up to you. I like the back and forths here, but I see where you're coming from and If I get more complaints I might just stack them.
02:15:314 (1,2,3) - ^ As above
02:20:939 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (The spacing was so close that it could have been easily misread.) This one I like, jump patterns like this are something I liked playing when I played Hards and the numbers help with reading.
02:24:689 (1,2,3) - The flow feels pretty weird here. Hmm yeah. Did something different here, might be a bit hard to read though, stacks and such.
- Same issues as Normal. (in terms of life bar and overlapping) Except for one repeat slider (which I moved) none of the beats overlap with the actual HP bar (I'm using default skin to test), some are a little close but it should be fine.

Memories

- I might lower the HP to 6.5, it's up to you. Mmmm, reeeally on the fence now. If I get one more comment about the HP, down it goes.
- Same issues as Normal. (in terms of life bar but very few) Except for 02:50:470 (2) - , which is kinda close, I didn't really spot much with the default skin that was close to overlapping the HP bar, so I dunno.
- Somehow I enjoy playing it. Hey, thanks.
- I think those small jumps you put through out the map are pretty good, but you did put some jumps pattern like 00:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8). I think if you change these to those small jumps you mapped in the song it will become much better, I think the pattern didn't match the song because it didn't emphasize the vocal as much as it could. (These ones too, 01:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ) I was worried consistently using geometric cross jumps might get repetitive so I put those back and forths in there to spice it up a bit (I know it's a repetitive song) and the first pattern is supposed to be a kind of wonky rising sun since the lyrics there mention about sunny afternoons gone slightly wrong.

Overall

- I didn't mod much because the map is already decent + I'm sleepy, sry. A mod is a mod, it's all good.
- I think you can remove the second spinner in the end, I don't think it will match anything, maybe just the first spinner is enough. Yeah I see what you mean, second spinner was kinda for fade out but I guess it's not really needed.
- Some placement and overlap issues, please recheck. Many overlaps, particularly in Hard, were on purpose to accentuate flow and aesthetics, adjusted some.

So yeah, that's all from me, good luck on getting ranked! Thanks!

PolkaMocha wrote:

Hey from my mod queue!

Yes, I want 7 PM ranked and out of my life so I can focus on other maps already 8'D You're close

I'll just mod memories; I've had a long day, y'feel? No worries

00:21:407 (2) - Blanketing needs work. Fixed.

00:24:454 A triplet is called for here. mm yeah

00:29:376 (3,4,5,6) - Although this pattern is nice, I don't agree with the spacing on (6). Mmm, I see what you mean, the decrease in spacing can seem a bit odd. Moved it very slightly, but keeping it mostly intact for now.

00:40:157 (3,4) - This stack could be confusing. Constant jumps in an already repetitive map was pushing my sanity, so I added stacks to spice up the patterns a bit.

00:43:439 (6) - This blanketing needs a bit of work. Fixed.

01:11:095 (5) - ^ Fixed.

01:11:564 (1) - If this slider bent on 01:11:798, it would fit better to the music. Reversed.

01:12:970 (5) - Blanketing needs work. Fixed.

01:17:657 (2,3,4) - This pattern might be confusing. Mmm, I dunno, at this BPM, a slow back and forth shouldn't be too difficult for an "Insane" as it were.

01:26:798 A slider from here to 01:27:267 might fit better. I agree.

01:30:782 (2) - Blanketing could use some work here. Fixed. I don't like how 01:31:485 (4) - now overlaps a bit but nothing really to do there :/

01:34:064 (1) - ^ Fixed.

01:40:157 This gap, especially for kiai time, is awkward. I mean, it sounds fine to me, there isn't any music there, it's like a lull in the beat pattern.

02:12:267 (2,3) - This slider Doesn't go well in relation to (2) Flipped.

02:28:439 (1) - This is not blanketed well Adjusted

02:30:314 (1) - ^ Adjusted

02:31:251 (4) - ^ Covered

02:39:103 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The vocals call for a triplet, but not a stream here. This follows the drums in the background though

02:39:923 Map the vocals here to avoid awkward pausing. I disagree that this sounds awkward, on the contrary, I think following the vocals here would be more awkward than anything else.

02:42:970 (5) - Blanketing needs work Adjusted

02:49:064 Why end on a downbeat? It follows the vocals here, hence the new slider, hitsound follows beat pattern. It does sound a little meh if you're focusing on the beat, so I'll consider changing this.

That's all. With all of the animu cancer around here, this is oddly relieving. Gotta try, right.If we won't map other genres, who will

Ben wrote:

We discussed on IRC and went over some patterns/placement. Chatlog was lost on my end but he will respond with the chatlog. We did this over TS so some descriptions might be vague. If he doesnt go into detail about the chatlog then i will be more than happy to do so when he posts.

GranDSenpai wrote:

Oi, shit cunt. Here's your mod you begged for <3 <3

Normal
00:20:939 (1,2,3,4) - They aren't aligned 100% Fixed
00:23:751 (4,1) - 4 should move into the center of 1 Fixed
00:35:939 (1,2,3,4) - Arfdrea hue
00:43:439 (1,2) - Why is it pointy slider to curved slider, seems odd. Eh..variety
00:49:064 (3) - Blanket Fixed
00:54:689 (1) - NC Fixed
01:00:548 (1) - Fix spinner gap here, should start on the red tick Fixed
01:16:251 (5,1) - Slight overlap Fixed
01:20:939 (1) - How tf do you make these map moar
01:25:157 (2,3) - I don't like these on lower AR, consider changing Mmm, I like these, might try out some other patterns
01:31:251 (6,7) - Blanket Fixed
01:44:376 (2,1) - Blanket Fixed
01:48:126 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Spammy comapred to the rest I dunno, I think it works, but I do see where you're coming from. aaaaaa
01:50:939 (1,1) - Why can't my sldiers be like this Because you're a shit cunt ;^)
02:09:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I didn't realize osuplayer111 was in this collab oi. Symmetry for life
02:24:689 (1,3) - this doesn't blanket, so idk Gah, I didn't notice that false blanket. It leads into the next note though.
02:37:814 (1) - NC Fixed
02:39:689 (1) - NC Fixed
02:40:626 (2) - Remove NC Fixed
02:52:814 (1) - Idk if this is necessary doot.

Hard
00:49:064 (1,2,3,4) - Might be hard to read Adjusted
00:55:860 (2) - Stack this correctly Fixed
01:27:267 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
01:34:767 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
01:38:282 (2,4) - Blanket Fixed
01:41:564 (3,5,7) - you lazy fuck ehehehehehe
01:51:876 (1) - Blanket Fixed
02:24:689 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
02:35:939 (1,2,3,4) - ohohohoho hu3hu3hu3hu3hu3
02:41:095 (2,3) - Blanket Fixed
02:46:954 (6,1,2,1,2) - This with AR7, you evil cunt. I like it ^_^

Memories
00:23:751 (5,6) - Blanket Fixed
00:28:439 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
00:29:376 (3,4,5,6) - pp Illuminati
00:29:845 (5,2) - this overlap is weird I like it
00:44:376 (1,2,3) - Kreygasm yee
00:46:720 (9,1) - Blanket Fixed
00:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ohohohoho dadadadada
00:54:689 (1,2,3,4) - nice cross to cross, not 100% sure about this flow Adjusted
01:01:720 (8,9,10) - I like these better than stacks \O/
01:11:564 (1,4) - Stack correctly Fixed
01:14:376 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
01:44:376 (3,4) - Blanket Fixed
01:49:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - check spacing Fixed
01:51:876 (1,3) - Blanket Fixed
02:13:439 (1) - NC Fixed
02:52:814 (1) - NC Fixed

Routalempi wrote:

Made my way over here from my modding queue, here's your NM good sir/madam!

What a lovely tune this is, I can already tell I will be coming back to this map whenever I need a break from the drum&bass and anime OPs that seem to dominate the ranked map scene nowadays. <3

Memories

- Right off the bat, i think OD 8 is too high for this map. I'd suggest OD 6, but 7 might suffice as well if you want to keep it unusually high while still making sense.
- The intro (00:20:939 - 00:39:454 -) could use a slower slider velocity, right now the sliders feel rushed.
- Most of the sliders in the intro feel just a tiny bit too short; that's the song's fault and it can be mitigated by muting hitsounds on sliderends. (Not sure if this is a problem in the first place, just bothered my ear for some reason)
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here
- 00:52:814 (5) - NC here
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here
-

I got this far when the map started constantly crashing my osu whenever I opened it in editor. I changed from beta to stable to CE and back, re'downloaded the map several times, but no matter what I do it still keeps crashing almost instantly when I open it in the editor. Is anyone else having this problem? I really wanted to mod this, too

rfandomization wrote:

Yeah, the editor has been bugging out today, it's not just you
Switching to stable fallback seems to be a temporary fix at the moment

Hard

There's an unsnapped green timing point at 02:47:125 - snap it to 02:47:071 (It's your very last kiai endpoint).
Map plays well and there aren't any obvious note placement or pattern issues here. Combos need fixing though:
- 00:30:314 (1) - remove NC
- 00:55:626 (1) - remove NC
- 00:58:439 (1) - remove NC, 00:59:376 (3) - add NC, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC
- 01:50:939 (1) - remove NC
( - 01:51:407 (7) - MAYBE NC here so this note is its own combo, not quite sure though. a very tricky part to combo well )
- 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC
- 02:31:720 (1) - remove NC, 02:32:189 (2) - add NC
- 02:52:813 (1) - remove NC

Routalempi wrote:

rfandomization wrote:

Yeah, the editor has been bugging out today, it's not just you
Switching to stable fallback seems to be a temporary fix at the moment

Looks like it's working again today, going to finish what I started here

Memories

- Right off the bat, i think OD 8 is too high for this map. I'd suggest OD 6, but 7 might suffice as well if you want to keep it kind of high while still making sense. I might have to lower it down to OD 7, for now though I'm keeping OD 8 up there,
- The intro (00:20:939 - 00:39:454 -) could use a slower slider velocity, right now the sliders feel rushed. It will also give a bit of contrast to the first kiai time. Originally the first 15 seconds or so were mapped, but due to how weirdly off-time it was, that got deleted. I think the SV works considering that's when the song starts to pick up.
- 00:46:251 (7) - NC here I didn't put one there because the music is completely and very much a continuation of the previous notes.
- 00:52:814 (5) - NC here
- 00:56:564 (7) - NC here you fixed these already it seems
- 01:00:314 (5) - NC, 01:02:189 (1) - remove NC Fixed first NC, didn't remove the second one due to it being an end beat
- 01:15:079 (4) - having this note under the sliderend doesn't feel nice to play, and the music doesn't suggest such a pause in flow either. Changed this up a bit
- 01:39:689 (1) - remove NC Kept this due to end beat, again. Might change since I don't like the last note of a triple being NC
- 01:51:876 (1) - remove NC Sure
- 01:53:751 (4) - NC, 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC NC'd 01:52:814 (1) - instead
- 02:39:689 (1) - remove NC Again, end beats. Don't particularly like this but have had objections to not having an NC here so :L
- 02:52:814 (1) - remove NC ^

Overall the map plays well as it is IMO. Thanks

Hard

There's an unsnapped green timing point at 02:47:125 - snap it to 02:47:071 (It's your very last kiai endpoint). Fixed
Map plays well and there aren't any obvious note placement or pattern issues here. Combos need fixing though:
- 00:30:314 (1) - remove NC As before, end beats
- 00:55:626 (1) - remove NC This has to do with reading the note under the slider that follows this one, I was advised to make this an NC
- 00:58:439 (1) - remove NC, 00:59:376 (3) - add NC, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC Added the NC but didn't remove the other ones due to big white tick and end beats
- 01:50:939 (1) - remove NC Big white tick
( - 01:51:407 (7) - MAYBE NC here so this note is its own combo, not quite sure though. a very tricky part to combo well ) Mmm, yeah that's a tricky one. I'm not keen on NC-ing it but if I get readability complaints I probably will have to.
- 01:54:689 (1) - remove NC Aaah why the hate on my end beats I was told by an experienced mapper that this is a better idea, I don't really like how it looks either tbh.
- 02:31:720 (1) - remove NC, 02:32:189 (2) - add NC Agreed with this one.
- 02:52:813 (1) - remove NC As above

Normal

- 00:29:376 (2,3) - feels really weird to play rythm-wise, try removing the repeat from 00:29:376 (2) and moving 00:30:782 (3) to 00:30:314 and making it one tick longer. On a harder difficulty this would be fine as-is, but it's too much of a trip-up in a normal-level map IMO. Sure why not.
- as with previous difficulties, some combos need fixing:
- 00:59:376 (5) - NC here, 01:00:314 (1) - remove NC Added but didn't remove, I need to discuss about these end beat combos with a BN or something :/
- 01:30:314 (4) - NC Done.
- 01:35:939 (5) - NC here, 01:37:814 (1) - remove NC Added but didn't remove due to big white tick
- 02:13:439 (5) - NC here, 02:15:314 (1) - remove NC, 02:17:189 (3) - NC here Added both but didn't remove.
- 02:20:939 (3) - NC here, 02:21:876 (1) - remove NC Agreed
- 02:39:689 (1) - remove NC, 02:40:626 (2) - add NC Added but didn't remove since I did this in all diffs.
- 02:52:814 (1) - remove NC End beat

It would make me so happy to see this eventually ranked, have a star! Thanks! I'm trying my best, would make me happy to see a ranked Bengali song on osu!

Hanczer wrote:

From our modding queue!

[Memories]

00:23:751 (5) - 00:25:157 (2) - 00:26:564 (1) - 00:28:439 (1) - 00:34:064 (1) - 00:35:939 (1) - 00:38:282 (2) - 00:50:939 (1) - 00:51:407 (2) - 00:55:392 (4) - 00:56:095 (6) - 01:01:251 (7) - 01:11:095 (5) - 01:13:439 (1) - 01:13:907 (2) - 01:32:189 (1) - 01:44:376 (3) - 02:11:564 (1) - 02:34:064 (1) - fix those blankets Adjusted
00:26:564 (1,3) - overlap Not anymore
00:29:376 (3,4) - Ctrl + G Ctrl-G'd the slider
00:33:126 (4) - This slider should be directed at 00:32:657 (2) - as you did with 00:33:595 (5,1) - This is a rotation of the previous pattern due to the similar sounds.
00:44:376 (1,2,3) - Copy 00:44:376 (1) - and rotate it by 120 degrees http://scr.hu/1ks5/89wya Adjusted
01:16:720 (7,8,9) - I feel like you should place it further Why not
01:22:110 (5) - place it between 01:21:407 (2,3) - http://scr.hu/1ks5/2xha2 Making a straight line with 01:21:642 (3,5,6) -
01:24:454 (8,4) - overlap Moved
02:29:142 (2,3,4) - make it a perfect triangle Adjusted

[Hard]

00:26:564 (1) - 00:47:189 (1) - 00:57:501 (3,4) - 01:18:595 (5) - 01:23:751 (2) - 01:26:095 (5) - 01:35:001 (3) - 01:36:173 (1) - 01:38:282 (2) - 01:51:876 (1) - 02:41:564 (3) - fix those blankets Adjusted
00:28:439 (1) - This slider should be directed at 00:29:142 (2) - Adjusted
00:42:501 (3) - The shape of this slider doesnt fit to this flow, try to flip it by 180 degrees Changed
00:48:126 (3,4) - Copy sliders insted of trying to make them identical It's the same slider...
00:50:001 (5,6,1) - This flow could be better It's up and down while curving, looks fine to me
00:53:517 (5) - blanket to 00:52:814 (4) - http://scr.hu/1ks5/kfabd Fine
00:55:157 (2,1,2,3) - This may be confusing, I would suggest to unstack 00:55:626 (1) - aaaaaa f this pattern. If I get one more bloody complaint about this it's going bye bye. I like back and forths though so it stays for now.
02:14:845 (4,1,2,3) - ^ The other one was at the bottom of the screen so I get it but this one stays, I don't want to remove every back and forth.
01:12:501 (3,4) - Make them parallel http://scr.hu/1ks5/x8ict They're fine, I don't want it that rigid.
01:29:845 (3,4,1,2) - same problem here, unstack 01:30:079 (4,2) - Is it the AR 7? I've had two complaints about the back and forths on this difficulty, but not a single playtester messed up on them, they fudged up other sections, like the 3/4 near the end.
01:32:189 (1,2) - Place then on a straight line Adjusted
01:41:564 (3,5) - place them the same way as 01:42:501 (5,7) - Adjusted, but it didn't seem to be that different.
01:50:704 (5,1) - I feel like you shouldnt stack them because these sounds arent similar at all Kept this
02:19:064 (1,2,3) - Make this spacing consistant Moved 3 further away
02:20:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Its really hard to read with low AR, maybe try to make a pentagon I used to love this sort of cross jump at 60K, and playtesters liked this too, so no change for now.
02:25:626 (3,4) - No need to stack Unstacked to make it a back and forth

[Normal]

00:48:126 (2) - 01:19:532 (2) - 01:21:524 (2) - 01:44:376 (2) - 01:50:939 (1) - 01:54:220 (2) - 02:23:282 (2) - 02:33:126 (4) - 02:34:064 (1) - 02:41:564 (3) - 02:47:658 (2) - fix those blankets Done
02:51:877 (1,2) - Bad flow Adjusted
00:43:439 (1) - A single slider with red point doesnt fit to this pattern, there's no reason for it This line of the lyrics has an abstract negative meaning to it, hence the pointy slider whenever the line appears in the song. Also, having fifty million curves gets annoying after a while, there has to be some variation.
00:52:814 (3) - ^, place at least even number of them ^

Good luck~ Thanks for the blanket check, was really helpful, along with some of the other suggestions, good for polishing off parts of the map.

-Mo- wrote:

Wall of blankets

-Mo- wrote:

You don't have to KD this; this is literally the most disgusting mod I have ever done in my life.

Lily Bread wrote:

good luck!

Ascendance wrote:

careful on double kudosu for mo, 1 per thread usually, gl this mapset

Ascendance wrote:

Since you're looking to push this forward, I'll just leave stuff here for some general assistance.

General

Song Setup

1. Widescreen Support is enabled on Hard and Normal. Obviously, if you don't plan on having a storyboard, I suggest deselecting these. Fixed

Difficulty

In order to create a slightly better spread, consider these changes:

1. Circle Size in [Hard] difficulty from 4 -> 3.5 - This creates a solid spread of 3 - 3.5 - 4. Changed this as someone else also suggested, I'm not 100% sure how much I like this. If it seems cluttered or strange then I might revert to the CS 4 version again. Checked for overlaps and things
2. Approach Rate in [Normal] difficulty from 5 -> 6 - This creates a 6 - 7 - 8 spread. I originally had this, for the consistency but I could not find a Normal of this difficulty that uses Approach Rate 6, and as the lowest diff in the set I think it might be a bit much.
   
   Both of these would match up with your 4 - 6 - 8 OD spread. Even though it's not so important this consistency, it would make it a bit cleaner and it shows gradual difficulty progression, especially as the normal is your lowest diff, so you don't need an OD2 diff for example.

Background

1. The current background is below traditional background standards for ranked maps, please consider changing it to the acceptable ranking criteria quality of 1366 x 768, which I've done for you here! Thanks, updated

Hitsounding

1. Currently, your hitsound volume does not change during the course of the map. I would suggest altering hitsound volume during kiais or times of specific emphasis, rather than leaving all of them at 50%. Given how steady the song itself is, I didn't do much with the hitsounding, kept it steady and consistent for the most part. I think a steady volume fits the song mostly, I don't know where I might adjust the volume really or maybe I'm being lazy D:

Hopefully this helped you, I don't really feel confident in modding standard because I've been doing so much CTB recently, but good luck here

Endaris wrote:

Hi, from Tuesday Queue. Heyo \o

General

The Normal Diff isn't suited as the lowest difficulty of the set according to RC-Guideline. Even if I disregard the general design choices that make this difficulty rather unfit for the lowest difficulty of the set for my own taste(SV1.3, 1.3 DS) 02:45:314 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 01:46:251 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are not absolutely not acceptable I think: too long of a pattern, dense, lots of 1/2 in one place) I've talked to some people about this, including mappers with far more experience than me, playtesters, and have a general consensus that the low BPM of the song offsets the relatively higher density of this difficulty. That said, the inconsistencies in the use of 1/2 was noted even before, and some notes seemed to have disappeared as well....I have added more 1/2 notes and removed a few to reduce the jarring density spike of some sections.

1. 02:52:930 (1) - This spinner shared by all difficulties is not properly snapped, the ending hitsound is early or late compared to the actual music depending on which drumhit you use for orientation(I would use the later one). New timing section would be Offset 172814, 122bpm, could need some fine tuning though. I don't know about this one, it sounded fine to me on slower speed and no one else mentioned it, but songs like this often have random offbeat sections due to inconsistent BPM, especially at the end of this one so hmm.

1. I'd recommend some custom combo colors matching the background. Stole these from another map with a black and white BG, and I thought they worked great there so I'm implementing them in this mapset as well. Black/Gray/White combo colors are a no-go for obvious reasons.

Normal

I'm not going to say too much about this because I think it is too difficult to be the lowest difficulty of the set. To me it looks like that the further you got within the map the more you forgot that this was supposed to be a map for new players especially regarding your usage of 1/2. Overall inconsistent.
Just compare these: 01:24:689 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 01:32:189 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) -
The same phrase in immediate consecution but you manage to map the first one twice as dense as the second one for no apparent reason.
Putting RC and overall inconsistency in usage of 1/2 aside this is very nice difficulty though. Most inconsistencies in 1/2 usage have been adjusted.

1. 01:19:064 (1) - 01:20:235 (3) - 02:23:282 (4) - Wrongly snapped sliderends. While you could argue on the first one, the other two have a drumhit for comparison. When in doubt, always trust drums over vocals as vocals blurr out and are inconsistent by nature. Oops. I switched to 1/16 beat snap divisor to check and perfect blankets, and while adjusting them, some sliders became 1/16 accidentally in all difficulties. I've adjusted all the ones in this mod and a few others but I might have missed some.

So just try to get more clear on what you want to use and what not to fix the inconsistencies I think, I didn't find anything bugging me aside from this so this diff is actually pretty good, just not fit for RC. My recommendation would be to adapt to the harder parts and map an additional easy difficulty with SV1.3, DS1.0 and a clear focus on 1/1 and 2/1.

Hard
I would use longer combos here, more like every 2 measures instead of each single one - makes more sense with the vocal phrases.

1. 00:25:392 (2) - this is an overmap. While it's not the worst overmap in the world it is very characteristic for the entire song except for the part after the last break until the start of the Kiai that the second red tick (and most of the time the fourth too) of a measure never gets any attention by the background of the song. This is mostly used to bring more attention to the downbeat and the third beat of each measure. Which is why you should not leave these out under any circumstances like you did at 01:27:267 (2) -
   I'd recommend you to look out for this specific design of the song on every difficulty(also on Normal, it probably just took me that long to realize this), sometimes less is more, experiment The very conspicuous lack of a finish hitsound at the 1:27 timestamp prompted me to change that. I didn't quite understand the rest of this point, but after the second break, the focus of the song's background switches to the 3/4 percussion so I followed that mostly in both Hard and Memories.

1. 01:11:564 (1) - add finish for consistency in relation to 01:13:439 (1) - 01:19:064 (1) - 01:20:939 (1) - Good catch

1. 01:35:704 (4,1) - This plays odd as the vocals are on blue ticks here if I'm not completely wrong. I would rather go with something like
   Did something different here

1. 01:39:454 (5) - Rather make this a triple so the player can actively play the first syllable of Coffee House. Why not

1. 02:37:814 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit weird cause you're following percussions very cleanly on the repeatsliders but ignore the one at 02:38:165 - . You might want to try and include the structure of vocals like this Due to how the vocals kind of "cover" that percussion whereas the last ones are clearly audible and at the forefront, I left this one in, although in the last difficulty I followed the percussion there. I think in a Hard following every mid-percussion is a bit too much.
   

Memories

No time left to judge the quality of this but take some unsnapped sliderends

1. 00:30:782 (2) - 00:51:876 (3) - 01:19:064 (1) - As above, was using 1/16 for blanketing. Fixed these.

Nice song, I liked it It's a beautiful track.
Good luck with your set. Don't forget to contact me for further discussion/explanation if you see the slightest need for it.

Prismetical wrote:

Hellu! :3

Normal

00:34:064 (5) - I wouldn't reverse It's a bit dense but fits the beat I reckon
00:45:314 (3) - shape this slider like 00:43:439 (1) - Reshaped previous slider to have a consistent pointy slider
00:54:454 (5) - remove There's a background beat that feels weird to leave unmapped
01:11:329 (5) - add circle Increasing the density of this part makes it a bit of a sudden cluster and since the vocals are being followed I don't want to suddenly switch track
01:12:267 (2) - ^ As above
01:42:267 (4) - start slider here and remove circle and end the slider here 01:42:970 - This leaves the more important white tick in the middle of the slider, which is undesirable.

Good luck on getting ranked!

Thanks for the mod, every little bit helps

Pereira006 wrote:

[General]

1. 01:24:689 (T) - add timing with volume 30% or low because the finish so higher than quiet this song, abuse finish is hurt ear Used 40% but I think it attacks ears less now.

[Normal]

this diff look good but you NC are pretty inconsistency, you have lot random NC 2/1 1/1 and 1/2, I suggest recheck you style, fix all NC 1/1 or 2/1. This is Normal Level
Changed so that NCs all use 2/1, it should be more consistent now. Fixed blankets and spacing.

[Hard]

Gameplay:
Fixed all


[Memories]

Gameplay:

1. 02:23:985 (1) - no need NC I tried to avoid double digit combo but I guess it doesn't matter much, fixed.

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the mapset loot pretty good, my worry is NC
Any question or you don't understand ask me in-game I will explain better
Call me when you done this

Pereira006 wrote:

Alright

Bubble

good luck

BeatofIke wrote:

Popping this bubble due to early timing. Try using 334 (+20) as your offset~
Don't forgot to re-snap all notes and timing sections afterwards (Timing -> Resnap All Notes).

The mapset itself looks fine. Call be back after fix.

Ascendance wrote:

pp

BeatofIke wrote:

Just one more thing. On your memories difficulty, you have an unsnapped green timing section at 01:02:111.