1. Futsuu (2.5 stars, 240 notes)
2. Inner Oni (4.66 stars, 599 notes)
3. JuDa's Kantan (1.61 stars, 129 notes)
4. Nardo's Oni (3.85 stars, 494 notes)
5. Nofool's Muzukashii (2.87 stars, 347 notes)

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:10:503 (23) - move to 00:10:194 instead and change to d, follows 00:13:287 (32,33,34) - nicely
2. 00:14:833 - add k to follow 00:11:122 (25)
3. 00:19:627 (44) - this can be deleted if you're following the the vocals more, and can have a little break to prepare for the next pattern
4. 00:21:946 (51) - change to k, easier to hit than (k d k)
5. 00:27:204 (68) - change to K, easier to hit (K K K)
6. 00:28:751 (74,75) - change (74) to d, and delete (75), make it same as 00:18:235 (40,41,42)
7. 00:31:843 (82) - k, easier to hit instead (k d k)
8. 00:34:472 (91) - move to 00:34:781 instead, and change to k to follow trumpet sound (idk what wind instrument is it lol)
9. 00:36:792 (97) - d? easier to hit
10. 00:38:802 (104) - move to 00:39:421 flows better here
11. 00:40:194 - add k to support flow above ^
12. 00:40:812 (110) - delete this to follow vocals better
13. 00:41:431 (112) - change to d, to make it easier to hit
14. 00:43:751 (120) - move to 00:44:369 , same as 00:38:802 (104)
15. 00:45:142 - add k to support flow above ^
16. 00:46:689 (128) - miss finish? add finish here ww
17. 00:51:946 (145) - delete to have a little break here
18. 01:00:452 (6,7,8) - move (6) to 01:00:761 , change (7) to k, and delete (8), follows the vocals nicely for me ww
19. 01:03:080 (15) - delete this and move 01:03:390 (16) to 01:03:235 follow vocals better
20. 01:05:091 (21) - d? easier to hit
21. 01:06:173 (25) - k? ^
22. 01:10:348 (39,40,41) - change (39) and (41) to k, and move (41) to 01:10:658 to follow the vocals better
23. 01:19:627 (66) - move to 01:19:781 ?
24. 01:21:946 (72,73) - change (72) to k and move (73) to 01:22:256
25. 01:23:338 (77) - k? easier to hit
26. 01:25:967 (84) - k? ^

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Hihi :3
Suggesting some patterns for Futsuu as req by Charlotte, mostly follow vocals though..

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:10:503 (23) - move to 00:10:194 instead and change to d, follows 00:13:287 (32,33,34) - nicely
2. 00:14:833 - add k to follow 00:11:122 (25)
3. 00:19:627 (44) - this can be deleted if you're following the the vocals more, and can have a little break to prepare for the next pattern
4. 00:21:946 (51) - change to k, easier to hit than (k d k)
5. 00:27:204 (68) - change to K, easier to hit (K K K)
6. 00:28:751 (74,75) - change (74) to d, and delete (75), make it same as 00:18:235 (40,41,42)
7. 00:31:843 (82) - k, easier to hit instead (k d k)
8. 00:34:472 (91) - move to 00:34:781 instead, and change to k to follow trumpet sound (idk what wind instrument is it lol)
9. 00:36:792 (97) - d? easier to hit
10. 00:38:802 (104) - move to 00:39:421 flows better here
11. 00:40:194 - add k to support flow above ^
12. 00:40:812 (110) - delete this to follow vocals better
13. 00:41:431 (112) - change to d, to make it easier to hit
14. 00:43:751 (120) - move to 00:44:369 , same as 00:38:802 (104)
15. 00:45:142 - add k to support flow above ^
16. 00:46:689 (128) - miss finish? add finish here ww
17. 00:51:946 (145) - delete to have a little break here
18. 01:00:452 (6,7,8) - move (6) to 01:00:761 , change (7) to k, and delete (8), follows the vocals nicely for me ww
19. 01:03:080 (15) - delete this and move 01:03:390 (16) to 01:03:235 follow vocals better
20. 01:05:091 (21) - d? easier to hit
21. 01:06:173 (25) - k? ^
22. 01:10:348 (39,40,41) - change (39) and (41) to k, and move (41) to 01:10:658 to follow the vocals better
23. 01:19:627 (66) - move to 01:19:781 ?
24. 01:21:946 (72,73) - change (72) to k and move (73) to 01:22:256
25. 01:23:338 (77) - k? easier to hit
26. 01:25:967 (84) - k? ^

That's all from me, very helpful mod =w=/
and nice mappu www arigatou

EDIT: yay 1000th posts xD

Jerry wrote:

Here's your Futsuu check as requested~

• [Futsuu]
  Remove Finish for all these notes, they make the flow of notes sound weird/do not fit with the music :
  
  
  Remove Finish

  00:06:173 (12) - fixed
  
  00:15:142 (37) - fixed
  
  00:37:256 (98) - hmm...nope
  
  00:46:379 (127) - fixed

1. 00:15:142 (37) - Change to kat, so it is consistent with kat rhythm at 00:09:575 (21,22,23) - fixed
   
   
   
2. 00:48:544 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - d k d k pattern is a little too hard for Futsuu new players. Also, the ddk at 00:48:544 (133,134,135) - does not flow well with vocal pitch. I suggest change pattern to : hmm...little hard><? I prefer ddk d k d k d...
   
   
   First note is at 00:48:544
   
   
   
3. 01:14:524 (50,51,52) - I think k k d is more suitable for these 3 notes, following descending vocal pitch fixed
   
   
4. 01:15:916 (53) - For consistency with 01:13:596 (47,48,49) - , I suggest :
   
   Suggestions

   Remove this note at 01:15:916 - fixed
   
   Move 01:16:225 - to 01:16:070 - fixed
   
   
   
5. 01:11:431 - You followed vocal note for this part, so you should not put ddK for 01:12:359 -. I suggest :
   
   
   Suggestions

   01:12:513 - Change to big kat (or small kat, your decision) big kat
   
   01:12:668 - Delete fixed
   
   01:12:977 - Move to 01:12:823 - fixed

Good luck!

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

hi hi =w=!

[Futsuu]

00:04:472 (9) - add a kat here? optional. nope.
00:47:153 (130) - move to 00:47:307? I think it will fit vocal better. fixed
01:02:926 (13) - change to kat? I think it is more appropriate for mapping the vocals. ^
01:16:379 (54,55) - I think this should be the same as 01:13:905 (48,49) - . ^

[Oni]

(the difficulty gap between this Oni and Nardo's Oni is pretty big...)

00:18:235 (88) - to 00:26:895 (164) - the combo is large compared to Nardo's diff. It almost feels like Inner Oni level.
00:20:787 (109) - better to move to 00:20:168. I think this part needs it more. nope.
00:28:132 (172) - to 00:35:709 (237) - same as before. You don't have to rename the diff, I'm just pointing it out :3
00:30:684 (193) - delete? why>_<? no change.
00:47:925 (297) - add finisher? I think this note simply needs one. I think no need finish.
01:04:008 (385,386) - change to double don note? I don't think kat really fits this part.hmm...no changed now.

Good diff, though like I said earlier it is almost more suited to be "Inner Oni". okay renamed \(p_q)/

good luck with rank!

• 
  whoa the blue lines

1. 00:32:462 (9,10,11) - kdk? // 自分の個人的な好みなのですが、手前のdkdと対称にさせると面白いかなというのと、00:33:080 - の音が高めで明るめなのでkatでも良さそうだと思いました
2. 00:49:472 - か00:50:091 - にkあってもいいかも……? 少し難易度は高めですが
3. 01:24:885 (29) - 削除? // かなり打ちづらいリズムの場所に単独で置いてあるので余計に難しく感じました、裏のドラムもそこまで派手ではないので休符でも問題ないかなと思います

1. 00:21:792 (50) - 削除? // 前のnoteから1.5拍あけて赤線で始める配置、高いBPMも相まって難しく感じます。　白Tickから叩かせてもそれほど変には感じず、叩きやすくなるのではと思います
2. 00:31:689 (80) - ^と同じく
3. 00:32:617 (84) - don?
4. 00:37:256 (98,99,100) - finish削除? // やはり高いBPMのせいで指が間に合わず難しく感じます。そこまでド派手な音もないのでfinish切ってもいいかなと思います
5. 00:41:740 (113) - k?
6. 01:12:513 (44) - finish削除? // 他のfinish配置と比べても突然出てきたなという感じがしました

1. 00:30:452 (50) - remove it? // a short brake is good here since the pattern looks kinda long and hard with kkk kkk.
2. 00:30:916 (52,53,54,55,56) - dk kd k --> k dk kd? // the current rhythm sounds weird, I don't get what follows it.
3. 00:32:153 (57) - umm this slider is not too bad but I prefer rhythm with normal notes. up to you though
4. 00:36:173 (71,72,73,74) - replace this 1/3 rhythm dddk to 1/2 ddk // this is kinda konfusing (for Muzukashii diff), actually here it does not have any 1/3 rhythm.
5. 00:41:586 (97) - remove it? // I'm not sure but it sounds a bit overmapped after the simple and easy d k ddk rhythm. A pattern from 00:45:761 (115) - is a good example, which is short but rhythmical very much.
6. 00:46:379 (120) - remove the finisher?
   The KIAI time is mapped very well imo =v=!

• 
  
  First play S rank xD

  

1. I think it's perfect (: well done work!

• 
  
  First play screenshot

  
  はやい！('､3_ヽ)_

1. 00:16:688 (81) - k? // 自分の好みなだけですが、いいスパイスになると思います
2. 00:36:483 - ここからddk(1/4)でつないでもいいと思います。バックにドラムの音もありますし、手前の詰まったパターンから急にスカスカになったようであれ？ってなりました
3. 00:41:122 - Muzukashiiより簡単になってる気がします
4. 00:46:843 (292) - 移動して00:47:153 - に？ // 00:46:689 - で少し区切り場所ができて尚且つ00:47:153 - 周辺でいい感じのドラムが響いてるので、 00:47:153 - で切るのは少し勿体ない気もします。　ちょこちょこっとnotes追加してこんな配置にするのもアリかなと思います　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3986098
5. 01:03:931 (385) - 削除? // この譜面全体的に少しovermap気味なところがありますが、特にこのnoteは切ってもいいと思います、メロディー後半部に向けて一区切りつけてメリハリを加えるといい感じに聞こえます
6. 01:26:740 (546) - 削除?

Naryuga wrote:

mod requested by Charlotte via in-game chat

[Futsuu]

1. 00:21:792 (50) - 削除? // 前のnoteから1.5拍あけて赤線で始める配置、高いBPMも相まって難しく感じます。　白Tickから叩かせてもそれほど変には感じず、叩きやすくなるのではと思います そうですね、ボーカル意識しすぎて赤線startで叩きにくいですね。fixed
2. 00:31:689 (80) - ^と同じく ^
3. 00:32:617 (84) - don? fixed
4. 00:37:256 (98,99,100) - finish削除? // やはり高いBPMのせいで指が間に合わず難しく感じます。そこまでド派手な音もないのでfinish切ってもいいかなと思います finish notes1つ削除しました。finishは切ってないです。
5. 00:41:740 (113) - k? fixed
6. 01:12:513 (44) - finish削除? // 他のfinish配置と比べても突然出てきたなという感じがしました removed finish.

[Oni]

• 
  
  First play screenshot

  
  はやい！('､3_ヽ)_ fast!

1. 00:16:688 (81) - k? // 自分の好みなだけですが、いいスパイスになると思います 取り入れてみます。
2. 00:36:483 - ここからddk(1/4)でつないでもいいと思います。バックにドラムの音もありますし、手前の詰まったパターンから急にスカスカになったようであれ？ってなりました okay + この周辺の配置少しだけ変えました。
3. 00:41:122 - Muzukashiiより簡単になってる気がします 1/4を入れてみました。 OniのほうもMuzukashiiより簡単なので相談してみたいと思います。
4. 00:46:843 (292) - 移動して00:47:153 - に？ // 00:46:689 - で少し区切り場所ができて尚且つ00:47:153 - 周辺でいい感じのドラムが響いてるので、 00:47:153 - で切るのは少し勿体ない気もします。　ちょこちょこっとnotes追加してこんな配置にするのもアリかなと思います　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3986098 fixed +　少しnotes追加しました。
5. 01:03:931 (385) - 削除? // この譜面全体的に少しovermap気味なところがありますが、特にこのnoteは切ってもいいと思います、メロディー後半部に向けて一区切りつけてメリハリを加えるといい感じに聞こえます 削除→kddkkに変更
6. 01:26:740 (546) - 削除? fixed.

以上です good luck

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hi! M4M via PM.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:10:194 (23) - change to d, same sound as 00:09:575 (21) - hmm...I'm thinking it
2. 00:15:142 (37,38) - Those notes should be d for the same reason as above ^. ^
3. 00:21:946 (50) - d would fit better here. Same here 00:31:843 (79) - and here 00:42:050 (111) - ^
4. 01:01:843 (9,10) - ctrl + G to follow more the vocals. fixed
5. 01:03:235 (14) - sounds better with a d here. nope
6. 01:14:524 (50) - d here? sounds better and you did the same thing here: 01:16:998 (56,57,58) - fixed

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:390 (11) - following the vocals, this sounds more like a d. fixed
2. 00:39:885 (257) - Maybe a k here? nope.
3. 00:41:740 (267) - k here too, this follow more the vocals imo. fixed

Good luck for ranking your map~

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

00:05:400 (11,12,13) - I think this would match more with Ctrl+G. ddkK doesn't play well to me (not necessarily trying to respect the song as much as i can)
00:15:142 (50) - remove finisher? I think having one just overemphasises this sound. this part sounds high enough for it and the following break makes it a perfect spot
00:17:926 (56) - same here. these sounds are not that distinct to require a finisher. this one is a bit too much yeah, removed
00:36:019 (70,71,72,73,74) - consider revising, imo this could be hard for Muzu players to hit in terms of accuracy. i have no better ideas yet, it surely is not recommended for muzu but i'll wait for more opinion
00:46:379 (120) - remove finisher? again I think this is overemphasised. the song kinda asks for it (i mean the instrumental)
01:01:070 (10) - revert to don. I don't think kat fits music here.. i had trired dddk before (i had a really hard time mapping the kiai iirc), it just doesn't play well to me
01:10:967 (56) - same as above. ^

Naryuga wrote:

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

1. 00:30:452 (50) - remove it? // a short brake is good here since the pattern looks kinda long and hard with kkk kkk. true, removed
2. 00:30:916 (52,53,54,55,56) - dk kd k --> k dk k d? // the current rhythm sounds weird, I don't get what follows it. following trumpet, just like for the kkk kkk and the slider
3. 00:32:153 (57) - umm this slider is not too bad but I prefer rhythm with normal notes. up to you though ^
4. 00:36:173 (71,72,73,74) - replace this 1/3 rhythm dddk to 1/2 ddk // this is kinda konfusing (for Muzukashii diff), actually here it does not have any 1/3 rhythm. arf changed, i liked how 1/3 plays here, this part of the song kinda allows it imo
5. 00:41:586 (97) - remove it? // I'm not sure but it sounds a bit overmapped after the simple and easy d k ddk rhythm. A pattern from 00:45:761 (115) - is a good example, which is short but rhythmical very much. seems a bit too long sadly, removed
6. 00:46:379 (120) - remove the finisher? it is alright imo
   The KIAI time is mapped very well imo =v=!

-Tenshi- wrote:

[Nofool's Muzu]

1. 00:25:348 (25) - I would chance it to k. hmm idk i think d is alirght too, not particular preferences so im gonna leave it as it is for now
2. Everything else looks fine to me. Very nice diff.

1. lol bookmarks
2. 00:53:647 (13) - Remove? it is a bit many notes in short time imo.
3. 00:28:751 (2) - k? it is higher vocals than around imo.
4. 00:50:091 (6,7) - Swap these? overall feeling is like kdk imo.

1. 00:08:338 - How about changing to similar rhythm as 00:13:287 for consistency?
2. 00:23:957 (56) - Remove this? it would be more easier to play imo.
3. 00:33:235 (84) - Same as above.
4. 00:41:276 (108) - It would be better removing this imo. actually vocals on there is not strong.

1. 00:29:678 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - kkk d k k? a bit awkward(?) to play imo.
2. 00:30:916 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - Also a bit awkward feeling. it would be better to play that changing to similar rhythm as 00:20:709 imo.
3. 00:41:586 (97) - How about removing this for making little break?
4. 00:46:379 (120) - is this finisher necessary?
5. 00:52:565 (151) - it would be not bad changing to k imo.
6. 01:18:699 (93) - Move to 01:19:008 and change to d?

1. 00:17:848 (87) - Remove?

1. 00:54:421 (326) - Remove finish?
2. 00:54:885 (328) - How about moving to 00:54:575? there is more stronger sound imo.
3. 01:06:096 - Add note?

1. 00:56:586 (156) - change spinner (?) ここから 00:58:596 - まで間がありすぎて不自然だと思うので
2. 01:20:864 - add d

1. 00:56:586 - 00:58:596 - something add notes?
2. 01:01:534 (13) - change d
3. 01:02:153 (15,16,17,18) - Ctrl+G

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:08:338 - How about changing to similar rhythm as 00:13:287 for consistency? eh? nope.
2. 00:23:957 (56) - Remove this? it would be more easier to play imo. hmm...no chnage
3. 00:33:235 (84) - Same as above. ^
4. 00:41:276 (108) - It would be better removing this imo. actually vocals on there is not strong. hmm...I'm thinking it

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:54:421 (326) - Remove finish? fixed
2. 00:54:885 (328) - How about moving to 00:54:575? there is more stronger sound imo. nope.
3. 01:06:096 - Add note? hmm...no change.

I don't know well how to mod taiko map /me runs

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

PMから～
ほとんど主観ですが…
FutsuuとMuzuだけです、他の難易度は見ましたが気になる所はなかったです
[Futsuu]

1. 00:56:586 (156) - change spinner (?) ここから 00:58:596 - まで間がありすぎて不自然だと思うので I added spinner.
2. 01:20:864 - add d fixed

自分が気づく所はこんな感じでした
頑張ってください！ありがとです!

Underflow wrote:

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:678 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - kkk d k k? a bit awkward(?) to play imo.
2. 00:30:916 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - Also a bit awkward feeling. it would be better to play that changing to similar rhythm as 00:20:709 imo. well k changed this part since a lot of peoples suggested it
3. 00:41:586 (97) - How about removing this for making little break? it already is removed
4. 00:46:379 (120) - is this finisher necessary? yes!!
5. 00:52:565 (151) - it would be not bad changing to k imo. prefer to keep ds because 2 k finisher after
6. 01:18:699 (93) - Move to 01:19:008 and change to d? following trumpet, it also emphasize pretty well the vocal already

I don't know well how to mod taiko map /me runs

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

[Nofool's Muzukashii]

1. 00:56:586 - 00:58:596 - something add notes ? no need imo
2. 01:01:534 (13) - change d k plays better to me, works well with the next patter ending like d d (reverse)
3. 01:02:153 (15,16,17,18) - Ctrl+G

still prefer ddkd x_x

自分が気づく所はこんな感じでした
頑張ってください！

1. kiai timeの終わりなんですけど、特に理由がなければ01:18:854 - まででいいと思いました。

1. 01:26:276 - k k d　k　D の配置を d d k　d　K に変えてみるのはどうでしょうか？
   音的には現状のほうがいい気がしますけど、直前にk k dを使ってるのと、全diffで最後を K で揃えても良いのかな？と思ったので

1. 00:52:874 (144, 145) - 1/2の大音符は難しいからやめろって言われたことがあるので、remove finishでもいいかもしれません。

1. 00:39:730 - add k ?
2. 00:44:678 - ^
3. 01:15:916 - change d and 01:16:225 - move to 01:16:070

1. 00:09:421 - delete , 00:11:895 - add d , 00:14:369 - delete

1. 00:18:235 ~ 00:35:709 - Inner Oni全体でみるとノーツが詰まってるように見えるので、少しスカスカにするか要所に休息を設けてもいいと思います。
2. 00:46:147 - move to 00:46:302
3. 00:48:544 - Volume 50%はいきなり小さくなってて違和感があるので60%ぐらいがベストかな？と
4. 00:53:957 ~ 00:56:586 - kiai time前でドラムも鳴ってるので、盛り上げる為にフォローdrumで盛り上げてもいいかも
5. 01:04:008 - これの前に kdk kの配置を使ってるので、別の配置にしたほうが良い気がしました。
   kddkk k d kkd d とか？
6. 01:07:410 - このあたりは多分Vocal沿いのマッピングにしてると思うんですけど、この箇所はdrum+Vocalを考慮しても k でいいと思います。
7. 01:08:879 - add k 次のノーツが大音符って訳ではないので、ノーツ詰めてもいいと思います。
   それか、00:59:060 - と統一させるために add finishでも :3
8. 01:13:905 - change k 後ろで鳴ってるラッパみたいな音をフォローするため

Labyr wrote:

[ General]

1. kiai timeの終わりなんですけど、特に理由がなければ01:18:854 - まででいいと思いました。
   中途半端なのでパートの区切りの01:23:802 - をkiai endに変更しました

[ JuDa's Kantan]

1. 01:26:276 - k k d　k　D の配置を d d k　d　K に変えてみるのはどうでしょうか？
   音的には現状のほうがいい気がしますけど、直前にk k dを使ってるのと、全diffで最後を K で揃えても良いのかな？と思ったので
   最初は確かにddkdKで置いてたのですが,,多種の音との折り合い考えたらkkdkDの方がよいと感じたため全diffから孤立しても nochange で

Labyr wrote:

mod req via game chat
僕はくみこちゃんが可愛いと思います　ウフフ 僕もくみこちゃんが可愛いと思います。

[ General]

1. kiai timeの終わりなんですけど、特に理由がなければ01:18:854 - まででいいと思いました。 Judyさんのend lineに合わせることにしました。

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:52:874 (144, 145) - 1/2の大音符は難しいからやめろって言われたことがあるので、remove finishでもいいかもしれません。今のところno changeで、変えるかもしれません。

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:18:235 ~ 00:35:709 - Inner Oni全体でみるとノーツが詰まってるように見えるので、少しスカスカにするか要所に休息を設けてもいいと思います。うーん、ここも今のところno changeですが変えるとすれば休息を入れようかと思います。
2. 00:46:147 - move to 00:46:302 nice
3. 00:48:544 - Volume 50%はいきなり小さくなってて違和感があるので60%ぐらいがベストかな？と Judyさんのtimming pointsと合わせることにしました。
4. 00:53:957 ~ 00:56:586 - kiai time前でドラムも鳴ってるので、盛り上げる為にフォローdrumで盛り上げてもいいかも ok,追加してみました。
5. 01:04:008 - これの前に kdk kの配置を使ってるので、別の配置にしたほうが良い気がしました。 この辺りのパターンを少し変えました。
   kddkk k d kkd d とか？
6. 01:07:410 - このあたりは多分Vocal沿いのマッピングにしてると思うんですけど、この箇所はdrum+Vocalを考慮しても k でいいと思います。 fixed.
7. 01:08:879 - add k 次のノーツが大音符って訳ではないので、ノーツ詰めてもいいと思います。
   それか、00:59:060 - と統一させるために add finishでも :3 詰めてみました。最初のほうが大きな音なのでなしです。
8. 01:13:905 - change k 後ろで鳴ってるラッパみたいな音をフォローするため fixed

低難易度に関してはあまり書けなくてごめんなさい；
良い曲ですし譜面もとても良いと思います！Rankするのめちゃくちゃ期待してます！
頑張ってください三┗( ･ㅂ･)╮-=ﾆ=一＝三☆

-[ Dumpling ]- wrote:

hi

[Nardo's Oni]

00:21:792 (113,114,115) - I suggest an alternative pattern like kat-kat-kat? I think here ddk is used too many times, some variation would be good. fixed
00:31:689 (174,175,176) - same as above? ^
00:37:256 (211) - remove finisher in order to emphasise the next note with trumpet sounds. (this note doesn't really need a finisher, it feels overemphasised). Remain unchanged as it has the same stress as 00:35:555 (196) -
01:08:338 (384) - from here I suggest ddddkkk instead, which seemingly maps the electronic sounds in the background better. Leaving 01:08:416 - blank would help reflect the sudden stop of the vocal there.

good luck with rank!

-Tenshi- wrote:

Hi! M4M via PM.

[Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:17:848 (87) - I think you should remove this note, it plays and sounds weird imo. Retained to follow the percussion.
2. 00:41:740 (229) - This sounds more like a k if you follow the vocals. No, the vocal pitch is the same as 00:41:895 (230) -
3. 00:48:854 (263) - Change to d? sound is different from here 00:48:699 (261,262) - and is almost the same as here 00:49:163 (265) - mapped d. k would fit the snare well imo.

Good luck for ranking your map~

Underflow wrote:

via in-game pm.

[Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:17:848 (87) - Remove? Retained to follow the percussion.

I don't know well how to mod taiko map /me runs

Labyr wrote:

mod req via game chat
僕はくみこちゃんが可愛いと思います　ウフフ

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:09:421 - delete , 00:11:895 - add d , 00:14:369 - delete As the vocal sounds weaker at 00:11:895 - , it would be better to use fewer notes there.

there is no suggestion. Good map.

低難易度に関してはあまり書けなくてごめんなさい；
良い曲ですし譜面もとても良いと思います！Rankするのめちゃくちゃ期待してます！
頑張ってください三┗( ･ㅂ･)╮-=ﾆ=一＝三☆

DakeDekaane wrote:

Do you happen to be accepting another Oni difficulty?

Labyr wrote:

[ Nofool's Muzukashii]

1. 00:39:730 - add k ?
2. 00:44:678 - ^ i try to avoid 5 notes patterns there :c
3. 01:15:916 - change d and 01:16:225 - move to 01:16:070 hmm i prefer to keep because i want a k at - 01:16:225 (80) - rather than a break

1. 00:18:235 - ~00:28:132 - because this part follows vocal and brass instrument, so i suggest you remove 00:30:297 (5) - and 00:28:751 (2,3) - to make these part more balance each other
2. 00:34:318 (12) - move to 00:35:245 - ,the reason is same as above
3. 01:18:854 - ~01:23:493 - i prefer to use spinner here, but it is up to you

1. 00:06:946 (14) - try to remove the finisher to enhance the power of 00:07:410 (15) -
2. 00:06:483 (13) - change to k to make difference with 00:06:946 (14) -
3. 00:20:400 (46,47) - reverse and change 00:21:019 (48,49) - to k (or follow 00:30:606 (76,77,78) - ) to follow the vocal properly
4. try to add notes on 00:54:421 - ,00:54:730 - and 00:55:039 -
5. 01:19:163 (59) - ,01:21:637 (67) - try to remove them and add d on 01:21:019 -

1. 00:06:946 (19) - try to remove the finisher, i feel the vocal here is not very powerful , and if remove the finish, the incoming K would be more powerful to play,and if you accept, 00:06:483 (16,17,18) - change to kkk would be better
2. 01:26:895 (125,126,127,128) - ^
3. 00:54:111 - how about adding some notes on this part?

1. 00:06:946 (27) - 建議改成小d感覺這裡沒有非常強烈的音
2. 01:27:359 - ^
3. 00:07:720 (29) - 不知為何感覺這個d跟前面的K打起來有點不合,建議可以刪掉,不過不強迫
4. 01:12:513 (411,412) - 建議顏色調換,打起來會比較舒服,然後01:11:740 (406) - 改成k

1. 00:06:946 (28) - as i said on futsuu
2. 01:27:358 (568) - ^
3. 01:23:802 (551) - try to change this note to D
4. 01:25:967 (559) - change to k , the vocal's pitch is higher
5. 00:05:555 (19) - ^

qoot8123 wrote:

hi just leaving some suggestion here

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:06:946 (27) - 建議改成小d感覺這裡沒有非常強烈的音 這裡vocal感覺比較強, 所以D能充分把它反映出來
2. 01:27:359 - ^ ^
3. 00:07:720 (29) - 不知為何感覺這個d跟前面的K打起來有點不合,建議可以刪掉,不過不強迫 我覺得還好, 而且這裡有背景鼓點作支持
4. 01:12:513 (411,412) - 建議顏色調換,打起來會比較舒服,然後01:11:740 (406) - 改成k 改了

Good luck

qoot8123 wrote:

hi just leaving some suggestion here

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:06:946 (14) - try to remove the finisher to enhance the power of 00:07:410 (15) - hmm...vocal finish is good.so no change.
2. 00:06:483 (13) - change to k to make difference with 00:06:946 (14) - fixed.
3. 00:20:400 (46,47) - reverse and change 00:21:019 (48,49) - to k (or follow 00:30:606 (76,77,78) - ) to follow the vocal properly
4. try to add notes on 00:54:421 - ,00:54:730 - and 00:55:039 - change k k d d k.
5. 01:19:163 (59) - ,01:21:637 (67) - try to remove them and add d on 01:21:019 - added.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:06:946 (28) - as i said on futsuu same as Futsuu
2. 01:27:358 (568) - ^ ^
3. 01:23:802 (551) - try to change this note to D fixed.
4. 01:25:967 (559) - change to k , the vocal's pitch is higher fixed.
5. 00:05:555 (19) - ^ ^

Good luck

qoot8123 wrote:

hi just leaving some suggestion here

[ Nofool's Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:946 (19) - try to remove the finisher, i feel the vocal here is not very powerful , and if remove the finish, the incoming K would be more powerful to play,and if you accept, 00:06:483 (16,17,18) - change to kkk would be better removed the finisher, kept ddd, i prefer how it plays with the following d ;w;
2. 01:26:895 (125,126,127,128) - ^ ^
3. 00:54:111 - how about adding some notes on this part? added 2 k and a spinner so it looks more like the futsuu, missing one d but i want to keep at least one clear break here

Good luck

qoot8123 wrote:

[ JuDa's Kantan]

1. 00:18:235 - ~00:28:132 - because this part follows vocal and brass instrument, so i suggest you remove 00:30:297 (5) - and 00:28:751 (2,3) - to make these part more balance each other
   but it sounds to be too bigger than any parts and next parts 00:38:029 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:40:503 (4,5,6,7,8) - . I dont have any idea how adjust the best ,so keep. ;_;
2. 00:34:318 (12) - move to 00:35:245 - ,the reason is same as above same, keep for now.
3. 01:18:854 - ~01:23:493 - i prefer to use spinner here, but it is up to you long spinner > long rest... plays not the best imo.

1. Change 98% volume sections to 100%?
2. 00:35:555 (236,237) - Finishers (like at 01:16:379 (498,499) - )? Because the song is still intense, so it's weird to stop 1/4. But it is not, if you have big notes.
3. 01:05:091 (412,413,414,415,416,417) - This should stay dense with 1/4, because the song doesn't change. At 01:06:483 it's ok, because you have big notes.
4. 01:20:864 (531,532,533,534) - ^ because it's still kiai, and it's a good build up for the last part of the song.
5. 01:23:416 - add d? Since the drums are more exciting here.

1. 00:37:720 (77) - Delete? It would make a nice break leading into this next section (which is important because it's a looong string of notes otherwise), but still work since it maps directly to the trumpet sound.
2. 00:47:462 (121,122) - ^ Similarly, a break leading into here would be awesome. I don't know how attached you are to this triplet.
3. And delete the speed-up. The graduals are weird but you can keep them if you like them.

1. HP7, since Muzu seems to be at 6 (plus, 7 is a good number for Futsuu diffs)

1. OD 4 would be better since there are so little notes, but you can pick 3 if you want (because BPM or something)
2. HP8 if Futsuu is switched to 7 (and 8 is good because there are sooo few notes).
3. 01:27:359 (32,33) - d K? All other diffs do that ;w;

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]

1. Change 98% volume sections to 100%?
2. 00:35:555 (236,237) - Finishers (like at 01:16:379 (498,499) - )? Because the song is still intense, so it's weird to stop 1/4. But it is not, if you have big notes.
3. 01:05:091 (412,413,414,415,416,417) - This should stay dense with 1/4, because the song doesn't change. At 01:06:483 it's ok, because you have big notes.
4. 01:20:864 (531,532,533,534) - ^ because it's still kiai, and it's a good build up for the last part of the song.
5. 01:23:416 - add d? Since the drums are more exciting here.

Good set. I'll be back 8)

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]

1. Change 98% volume sections to 100%?　　　
   @Charlotte Appliedしたら私のKantanも変えてといてください 統一化がMapsetとして望ましいので

[JuDa's Kantan]

1. OD 4 would be better since there are so little notes, but you can pick 3 if you want (because BPM or something)
   wont change. bpm is still under 200 same as My ranked Kantan. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4704783
2. HP8 if Futsuu is switched to 7 (and 8 is good because there are sooo few notes).
   will change. I'll leave it creator. @Charlotte , 7に変えたら8で、 keepなら7.5に変えてください。
3. 01:27:359 (32,33) - d K? All other diffs do that ;w;
   flow seems not the best as single diff. Inverted the colors completely as Intro.

Good set. I'll be back 8)

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OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Oni]

1. Change 98% volume sections to 100%? fixed.
2. 00:35:555 (236,237) - Finishers (like at 01:16:379 (498,499) - )? Because the song is still intense, so it's weird to stop 1/4. But it is not, if you have big notes. hmm...I think no need finish.I think soft sound.00:35:555 (236,237) - << 01:16:379 (504,505) -
3. 01:05:091 (412,413,414,415,416,417) - This should stay dense with 1/4, because the song doesn't change. At 01:06:483 it's ok, because you have big notes. added notes.
4. 01:20:864 (531,532,533,534) - ^ because it's still kiai, and it's a good build up for the last part of the song. ^
5. 01:23:416 - add d? Since the drums are more exciting here. fixed

[Futsuu]

1. HP7, since Muzu seems to be at 6 (plus, 7 is a good number for Futsuu diffs) fixed.

Good set. I'll be back 8)

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hmm... I guess you were modding Inner Oni? I don't have 98% volume sessions and 500+ notes.

1. 今のままでも許容範囲なので問題無いのですがAメロの前半の密度が他のパートに比べて低すぎるような気がします。また、全体を通して通常ノートの単色Tripletが一切ないので、このパートにパターンを組みこんで入れてみても良いかもしれません。
2. 01:12:668 (8,9,10) - リバースが少し浮き気味に感じたので、kiai前半同様に音取り重視でkkdの方が良いように感じました。逆にここでリバース系のパターンを残す場合は前半も同じように、ddk-kkd-ddkkd等でリバース系を用いた方が統一感が上がるような気がします。
3. 00:52:256 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - 全体を通してここだけ難易度がかなり高く、非常に不安です。初心者でも裏拍スタートのTripletを叩きやすくするために、(10)ノートの削除を検討してみてください。また、残っているtripletを単色にすることで難易度面のバランスの更なる向上に繋がります。

1. 00:13:905 (34) - 一貫性の為にWo~パート前半同様にtripletを置くことを検討してください。密度が気になる場合は前のDoubletsからノートを削ることで問題の解消が出来ます。
2. 00:25:194 (60,61) - 削除を推奨します。難易度面のバランス+Spread
3. 00:40:967 (107,108,109,110,111,112) - 突然ボーカルに寄りすぎている上に、難易度面のギャップが非常に目立ちます。密度も曲調に対して重すぎるので、緩急のためにも簡易化高推奨です。パターンの具体例を挙げるなら[-d-k-d-kk]等、ドラムを残しつつボーカルもフォロー出来る、且つ難易度面の改善にも繋がります。
4. 直前と同じように音程重視でK-kd-dでも良い気がします。
5. 01:11:431 (39,40,41) - なんか音にイマイチ合っていないような気が... ここから音程がはっきりと変わっているので、小節頭のdkd>kdkのパターン化から外してddk等でも良いと思います。

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ JuDa's Kantan]

1. 今のままでも許容範囲なので問題無いのですがAメロの前半の密度が他のパートに比べて低すぎるような気がします。また、全体を通して通常ノートの単色Tripletが一切ないので、このパートにパターンを組みこんで入れてみても良いかもしれません。
   Aメロ前半は前後パートの音量、緩急考えたらボーカルは度外視が妥当だと思います。これ以上詰めたらバスの音に対して蛇足感が否めません。 , 代わりにAメロの後半と前半のgap差を埋めるために後半を修正
   単色のTriplet は00:26:895 (8,9,10) - KKKであるのですが... 00:54:730 (15,16,1) - k-k-spinerも安定感を図るという意図では同義になると思うんですが , 00:31:843 (7,8,9,10) - ここを単色3連kkkのパターンに変更 .... うーんこれでいいのだろうか
   
2. 01:12:668 (8,9,10) - リバースが少し浮き気味に感じたので、kiai前半同様に音取り重視でkkdの方が良いように感じました。逆にここでリバース系のパターンを残す場合は前半も同じように、ddk-kkd-ddkkd等でリバース系を用いた方が統一感が上がるような気がします。
   3打目におけるトランペットのピッチの高低で作ってるのでkkdだけfixed.
   
3. 00:52:256 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - 全体を通してここだけ難易度がかなり高く、非常に不安です。初心者でも裏拍スタートのTripletを叩きやすくするために、(10)ノートの削除を検討してみてください。また、残っているtripletを単色にすることで難易度面のバランスの更なる向上に繋がります。
   正直誰もココを突っ込んでくれなかったから不安ではありました.00:52:565(10) - だけ remove. Thanks~

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tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:13:905 (34) - 一貫性の為にWo~パート前半同様にtripletを置くことを検討してください。密度が気になる場合は前のDoubletsからノートを削ることで問題の解消が出来ます。 okay.一貫性考慮して合わせました。
2. 00:25:194 (60,61) - 削除を推奨します。難易度面のバランス+Spread fixed.
3. 00:40:967 (107,108,109,110,111,112) - 突然ボーカルに寄りすぎている上に、難易度面のギャップが非常に目立ちます。密度も曲調に対して重すぎるので、緩急のためにも簡易化高推奨です。パターンの具体例を挙げるなら[-d-k-d-kk]等、ドラムを残しつつボーカルもフォロー出来る、且つ難易度面の改善にも繋がります。
4. 直前と同じように音程重視でK-kd-dでも良い気がします。タイムスタンプ抜けですかね?
5. 01:11:431 (39,40,41) - なんか音にイマイチ合っていないような気が... ここから音程がはっきりと変わっているので、小節頭のdkd>kdkのパターン化から外してddk等でも良いと思います。ddk良いですね。fixed.

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