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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 17, 2016 at 4:36:20 PM

Artist: JO*STARS ~TOMMY, Coda, JIN~
Title: JoJo Sono Chi no Kioku~end of THE WORLD~
Source: JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders 2nd Season
Tags: ジョジョの奇妙な冒険 スターダストクルセイダース TV size Hiroaki "TOMMY" Tominaga Hashimoto Jin Opening
BPM: 220
Filesize: 2750kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.14 stars, 180 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.46 stars, 103 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.1 stars, 295 notes)
  4. Oni (3.92 stars, 400 notes)
Download: JO*STARS ~TOMMY, Coda, JIN~ - JoJo Sono Chi no Kioku~end of THE WORLD~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ora Ora Ora Ora OraOra Ora Ora Ora Ora Ora Ora Ora Ora
2nd Taiko rank map
DL With ep 47 (Inner Oni) version

Jerry


Taiko M4M~

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 01:03:640 (86) - Change this to don so that you have a consistent don rhythm with 01:02:549 (84) - and 01:04:731 (88) - ?

  2. 01:06:095 (90) - This pattern here is weird imo, I suggest moving this kat to 01:06:368 -, the structure of the note spreads out better and is overall better sounding

  3. 01:19:868 (119) - Move this to 01:19:731 -, it lands on the beat more accurately


  • [The World]
  1. 00:40:459 (143,144,145) - Change these 3 notes to d k d, it flows along with the music better

  2. 00:41:822 (149) - If you followed my suggestion above ^, then change this to don so that it's consistent with the change to don you applied at 00:40:731 (145) -



  3. 00:56:959 (235,236,237,238,239,240) - The transition between the vocal-styled mapping and the drum-styled mapping changes too quickly here. I suggest leaving a few gaps between the shift in focus between the vocals and the drums of the music so that the transition is more smooth. Like this :
    Suggestions
    00:56:959 - Delete

    Move 00:57:504 - to 00:57:777 -

  4. 01:02:140 - This note is unnecessary since you're mapping to the vocals here and it messes with the flow of the note structure. I suggest removing it

That's all from me. Kantan and Muzukashii are fine.
Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
bank78952

Jerry wrote:



Taiko M4M~

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 01:03:640 (86) - Change this to don so that you have a consistent don rhythm with 01:02:549 (84) - and 01:04:731 (88) - ?

  2. 01:06:095 (90) - This pattern here is weird imo, I suggest moving this kat to 01:06:368 -, the structure of the note spreads out better and is overall better sounding

  3. 01:19:868 (119) - Move this to 01:19:731 -, it lands on the beat more accurately All Fixed


  • [The World]
  1. 00:40:459 (143,144,145) - Change these 3 notes to d k d, it flows along with the music better OK Fixed

  2. 00:41:822 (149) - If you followed my suggestion above ^, then change this to don so that it's consistent with the change to don you applied at 00:40:731 (145) - Fix



  3. 00:56:959 (235,236,237,238,239,240) - The transition between the vocal-styled mapping and the drum-styled mapping changes too quickly here. I suggest leaving a few gaps between the shift in focus between the vocals and the drums of the music so that the transition is more smooth. Like this : Fix but i not delete at 00:56:959
    Suggestions
    00:56:959 - Delete

    Move 00:57:504 - to 00:57:777 -
  4. 01:02:140 - This note is unnecessary since you're mapping to the vocals here and it messes with the flow of the note structure. I suggest removing it Fix

That's all from me. Kantan and Muzukashii are fine.
Good luck with the map!
Thanks :D
Fuel
Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
General
Widescreen support is toggled on, you need to toggle it off. Check the Design tab of song setup.


Also, your higher diff names may not be allowed. You're probably better off changing them from:
Star Platinum --> Muzukashii.
The World --> Oni.

The lower diffs could use higher HP drain rates, the song is short and with the current drain rates you can pass with low accuracy and lots of misses (see the other box for an example).

It'd probably be a good idea to start the diffs at the same place, having that long spinner in two diffs isn't really necessary.

Slider feels weird in the diffs imo (read Kantan section).

Seems like a bit of a jump to go from 0 1/4 in Star Platinum to dkd, kkd at 220 bpm in The World.

Kantan
Finishers feel a bit overused.
I thought most of this diff was nice tbh.

01:20:686 (72) - Firstly, the gap between this slider and the preceding note is very small for a Kantan diff. Even if it is 1/2, the song is 220 bpm, which might be disconcerting to newer players as the rest of the map had minimum 1/1 gaps.
Secondly, your average Kantan player won't be streaming 55 notes at 220 bpm lol.
Just for all the diffs in general, there isn't much of a drumroll here so I don't know if this slider is exactly fitting, but you should probably get another opinion on that for the higher diffs. I definitely think this isn't fit for a Kantan. A spinner might work, but it would be quite long.
01:26:004 - You could probably add a note here.

Futsuu
00:16:459 - Seeing as you're mapping to the drums in this opening bit, a k could go here.
00:17:004 - ^
01:16:049 (109) - This definitely sounds offbeat to me. 01:15:913 is where the drum sound is.
01:17:140 (112) - ^ but at 01:17:004.
01:18:231 (115) - ^ but at 01:18:095.
01:20:686 (121) - Slider again, same as Kantan point.

Star Platinum
00:11:277 (1) - As per the general section, I don't think that starting the song at different points on each diff makes sense.
Apart from this I thought the diff was nice (bar slider).

The World
00:11:277 (1) - ^ Same as Star Platinum point.
00:15:777 (9) - No audible drum beat here. Its good for variation so you don't play ddkdkdk 3 times, but it doesn't feel fitting to me.
00:16:868 (16) - ^
00:27:095 (69) - This could be K?
00:28:595 (78) - No audible drum beat here. Don't see a reason for k.
00:30:845 (92) - ^
00:47:209 (174) - Change to d?
(slider again)

Hope it helps :D

HP drain example
Shouldn't be able to pass with a ~20% play only hitting 30% of the notes.
Topic Starter
bank78952

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
General
Widescreen support is toggled on, you need to toggle it off. Check the Design tab of song setup.


Also, your higher diff names may not be allowed. You're probably better off changing them from: Why?
Star Platinum --> Muzukashii.
The World --> Oni.

The lower diffs could use higher HP drain rates, the song is short and with the current drain rates you can pass with low accuracy and lots of misses (see the other box for an example).

It'd probably be a good idea to start the diffs at the same place, having that long spinner in two diffs isn't really necessary.

Slider feels weird in the diffs imo (read Kantan section).

Seems like a bit of a jump to go from 0 1/4 in Star Platinum to dkd, kkd at 220 bpm in The World.

Kantan
Finishers feel a bit overused.
I thought most of this diff was nice tbh.

01:20:686 (72) - Firstly, the gap between this slider and the preceding note is very small for a Kantan diff. Even if it is 1/2, the song is 220 bpm, which might be disconcerting to newer players as the rest of the map had minimum 1/1 gaps.
Secondly, your average Kantan player won't be streaming 55 notes at 220 bpm lol.
Just for all the diffs in general, there isn't much of a drumroll here so I don't know if this slider is exactly fitting, but you should probably get another opinion on that for the higher diffs. I definitely think this isn't fit for a Kantan. A spinner might work, but it would be quite long. I replace with spinner at 01:20:822
01:26:004 - You could probably add a note here. Nope

Futsuu
00:16:459 - Seeing as you're mapping to the drums in this opening bit, a k could go here. Fix
00:17:004 - ^ Fix
01:16:049 (109) - This definitely sounds offbeat to me. 01:15:913 is where the drum sound is. I'll Fix later
01:17:140 (112) - ^ but at 01:17:004. ^
01:18:231 (115) - ^ but at 01:18:095. ^
01:20:686 (121) - Slider again, same as Kantan point.

Star Platinum
00:11:277 (1) - As per the general section, I don't think that starting the song at different points on each diff makes sense. I delete a spinner
Apart from this I thought the diff was nice (bar slider).

The World
00:11:277 (1) - ^ Same as Star Platinum point.
00:15:777 (9) - No audible drum beat here. Its good for variation so you don't play ddkdkdk 3 times, but it doesn't feel fitting to me.
00:16:868 (16) - ^
00:27:095 (69) - This could be K?
00:28:595 (78) - No audible drum beat here. Don't see a reason for k.
00:30:845 (92) - ^
00:47:209 (174) - Change to d?
(slider again) All Fixed Except 00:47:209

Hope it helps :D

HP drain example
Shouldn't be able to pass with a ~20% play only hitting 30% of the notes.
Thanks
Shinsekai-
ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA XD


Taiko Mod Via: my mod Queue
Mod Tipe: Normal Mod

History:

k= small kat d= small don
K= BIG KAT D= BIG DON
^ you need do same thing
-------------------------------------o-------------------------------------

well let's start XD with ORA ORA ORA !!!

[General]
  1. change the name of the diff ( the world, star platinun ) to Inner Oni and Oni, that's unrankeable
  2. You can put one kiai o.o here 00:48:640 - 01:11:277 - IN ALL DIFF ^^ can be good

[Kantan]
  1. add finish 00:49:459 (40) -
  2. Other stuff are ok

[Futsuu]
  1. add finish 00:49:459 (61) -
  2. add a d here 00:53:004 (68) - for follow the voice
  3. change to k 00:53:277 (69) -
  4. add a d here 00:55:186 (73) -

[Muzukashii]
  1. Change all tok 00:17:959 (21,22,23) - and change this to d 00:18:640 (24) -
  2. Ctrl + g 00:32:686 (84,85) - for give more Variety
  3. 01:20:686 (285) - change thi to a spinner to make more consistency in the diff's

[Oni]
  1. Ctrl + G 00:22:322 (45,46) -
  2. Ctrl + G 01:16:731 (344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) -
  3. same as Muzu 01:20:686 (369) -

[Comments]
Well the song is very nice to create one Taiko map set ^^ and your map is very nice too Butr you need a llitle more consistency in the final xD, well i hope this mod can help you :D GL with the Rank
Topic Starter
bank78952

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA ORA XD


Taiko Mod Via: my mod Queue
Mod Tipe: Normal Mod

History:

k= small kat d= small don
K= BIG KAT D= BIG DON
^ you need do same thing
-------------------------------------o-------------------------------------

well let's start XD with ORA ORA ORA !!!

[General]
  1. change the name of the diff ( the world, star platinun ) to Inner Oni and Oni, that's unrankeable I know from L1m3s but i forgot to fix it ;w;
  2. You can put one kiai o.o here 00:48:640 - 01:11:277 - IN ALL DIFF ^^ can be good OK

[Kantan]
  1. add finish 00:49:459 (40) - Fix
  2. Other stuff are ok

[Futsuu]
  1. add finish 00:49:459 (61) - Fix
  2. add a d here 00:53:004 (68) - for follow the voice No i need some break/i follow drum in futsuu
  3. change to k 00:53:277 (69) - Fix
  4. add a d here 00:55:186 (73) - Nope

[Muzukashii]
  1. Change all tok 00:17:959 (21,22,23) - and change this to d 00:18:640 (24) - Fix
  2. Ctrl + g 00:32:686 (84,85) - for give more Variety Fix
  3. 01:20:686 (285) - change thi to a spinner to make more consistency in the diff's Fix

[Oni]
  1. Ctrl + G 00:22:322 (45,46) -
  2. Ctrl + G 01:16:731 (344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) -
  3. same as Muzu 01:20:686 (369) - All Fixed

[Comments]
Well the song is very nice to create one Taiko map set ^^ and your map is very nice too Butr you need a llitle more consistency in the final xD, well i hope this mod can help you :D GL with the Rank
Thanks
Jaltzu
ORA!
From my queue.

General stuff
Modding style:
d = don
k = kat
D = don + finish
K = kat + finish
(I have a poll on my queue. Go vote if you want to. :))

Refer to wiki for stuff below.
Change OD and HP the way wiki says.
Kantan & Futsuu: I don't think you need to use SV multipliers on inheriting points. Just lower your SV from Timing panel. Not sure this matters or not, tho.

Kantan
00:32:822 - Add k for consistency with 00:37:186 (26,27)
00:42:368 - Add d
00:45:913 (36) - D
00:47:277 (37) - K
00:48:640 (39) - K?
00:51:504 (43) - Move to 00:51:640 - I don't think following the vocals there is a good idea.
00:53:277 - Add k
00:56:004 (48) - k
00:59:004 (51) - K
01:06:368 - Add k
01:10:595 - Add d
01:11:004 - Add k
01:12:368 - Add a spinner till 01:13:186 OR add k or K to 01:13:186
01:16:186 - Add d
01:17:277 - Add k
01:18:368 - Add d
01:19:459 - Add k

Futsuu
00:27:095 (24) - K
00:29:277 - Add d
00:30:368 (30) - Move to 00:30:231 and delete 00:30:913 (31) -
00:39:095 (43) - K
00:39:640 (44) - K
00:51:504 (65) - Move to 00:51:640 ?
00:52:186 - Add d
00:54:640 (70) - Del
00:54:913 (71,72) - Add finishes
00:56:004 (73) - K
01:08:549 - Add d
01:09:095 (98) - k
01:11:549 - Add d
01:12:368 - ↑

Muzu
00:15:913 (9) - k
00:18:913 (25) - D or K
00:22:459 (41,42,43) - Delete all three or just the first one.
00:28:595 - Add d
00:30:368 (75) - Move to 00:30:231
00:30:640 (76) - Move to 00:31:049
00:32:277 (82) - Move to 00:32:140 AND 00:32:686 (84) - move to 00:32:549
00:33:368 (87) - k
00:33:640 (88) - Del
00:35:549 (96) - Del
00:38:413 (108) - Del
00:40:868 (121) - 00:41:413 (123) - Move these to white ticks
00:41:413 (123) - 00:41:277 (122) - 00:41:822 (124) - 00:42:368 (126) - K?
00:43:731 (133) - d
00:44:004 - Add k
00:47:686 (147) - Move to 00:47:140
00:49:049 (153) - Del
00:50:549 - Add d
00:52:049 - ↑
00:53:140 (172,173) - Del AND 00:53:549 (174) - Move to 00:53:277
00:53:822 (175) - k
00:53:959 - Add d
00:54:504 (178) - Move to 00:54:368
00:55:186 (181,182) - K (both)
00:56:004 (183,184,185,186,187,188) - Like this:


00:57:504 (190) - Move to 00:57:640
01:01:731 (208) - Move to 01:01:595
01:01:459 (207,208,209,210,211) - This:


01:03:231 (214) - Del
01:04:186 - Add k
01:10:595 (244) - D
01:11:277 (246,247,248) - K K K
01:12:095 -> Something like this? Anyway, don't leave it unmapped.


ORAORA:
From 01:15:640 (260) - onwards:
dkdkdkd_dkdkdkd_dkdkdkd_dkdkdkdk

Oni
00:30:095 (84,85) - Ctrl+G
00:30:504 (87,88) - Ctrl+G
00:34:049 (107) - Del
00:34:186 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - Snap these to 1/3 beats
00:35:686 - Add d
00:36:231 - Add d
00:38:413 (128) - Del
00:39:777 (136) - Del
00:55:459 (227) - K
00:56:004 (228,229,230,231,232,233) - Snap to 1/3 beats.
00:57:231 (235) - Move to 00:57:504

Good luck!
Topic Starter
bank78952

Jaltzu wrote:

ORA!
From my queue.

General stuff
Modding style:
d = don
k = kat
D = don + finish
K = kat + finish
(I have a poll on my queue. Go vote if you want to. :))

Refer to wiki for stuff below.
Change OD and HP the way wiki says.
Kantan & Futsuu: I don't think you need to use SV multipliers on inheriting points. Just lower your SV from Timing panel. Not sure this matters or not, tho. i'll fix these later =w=

Kantan
00:32:822 - Add k for consistency with 00:37:186 (26,27) fix
00:42:368 - Add d ^
00:45:913 (36) - D ^
00:47:277 (37) - K ^
00:48:640 (39) - K? ^
00:51:504 (43) - Move to 00:51:640 - I don't think following the vocals there is a good idea. ^
00:53:277 - Add k ^
00:56:004 (48) - k ^
00:59:004 (51) - K ^
01:06:368 - Add k ^
01:10:595 - Add d ^
01:11:004 - Add k ^
01:12:368 - Add a spinner till 01:13:186 OR add k or K to 01:13:186 nope
01:16:186 - Add d fix
01:17:277 - Add k no
01:18:368 - Add d fix
01:19:459 - Add k no


Futsuu
00:27:095 (24) - K fix
00:29:277 - Add d fix
00:30:368 (30) - Move to 00:30:231 and delete 00:30:913 (31) - fix
00:39:095 (43) - K fix
00:39:640 (44) - K D is better for me
00:51:504 (65) - Move to 00:51:640 ? nope follow the vocal
00:52:186 - Add d fix
00:54:640 (70) - Del fix
00:54:913 (71,72) - Add finishes fix
00:56:004 (73) - K nope
01:08:549 - Add d fix
01:09:095 (98) - k fix
01:11:549 - Add d fix
01:12:368 - ↑ fix

Muzu
00:15:913 (9) - k fix
00:18:913 (25) - D or K fix (i choose D)
00:22:459 (41,42,43) - Delete all three or just the first one. delete except 41
00:28:595 - Add d fix
00:30:368 (75) - Move to 00:30:231 ^
00:30:640 (76) - Move to 00:31:049 ^
00:32:277 (82) - Move to 00:32:140 AND 00:32:686 (84) - move to 00:32:549 ^
00:33:368 (87) - k ^
00:33:640 (88) - Del ^
00:35:549 (96) - Del ^
00:38:413 (108) - Del ^
00:40:868 (121) - 00:41:413 (123) - Move these to white ticks ^
00:41:413 (123) - 00:41:277 (122) - 00:41:822 (124) - 00:42:368 (126) - K? nope
00:43:731 (133) - d fix
00:44:004 - Add k ^
00:47:686 (147) - Move to 00:47:140 ^
00:49:049 (153) - Del ^
00:50:549 - Add d ^
00:52:049 - ↑ ^
00:53:140 (172,173) - Del AND 00:53:549 (174) - Move to 00:53:277 ^
00:53:822 (175) - k ^
00:53:959 - Add d ^
00:54:504 (178) - Move to 00:54:368 ^
00:55:186 (181,182) - K (both) nope
00:56:004 (183,184,185,186,187,188) - Like this: fix


00:57:504 (190) - Move to 00:57:640 ^
01:01:731 (208) - Move to 01:01:595 ^
01:01:459 (207,208,209,210,211) - This: ^


01:03:231 (214) - Del ^
01:04:186 - Add k ^
01:10:595 (244) - D ^
01:11:277 (246,247,248) - K K K ^
01:12:095 -> Something like this? Anyway, don't leave it unmapped. ^


ORAORA:
From 01:15:640 (260) - onwards: nope kdkdk is still better for me ;w;
dkdkdkd_dkdkdkd_dkdkdkd_dkdkdkdk

Oni
00:30:095 (84,85) - Ctrl+G nope
00:30:504 (87,88) - Ctrl+G nope
00:34:049 (107) - Del ok delete
00:34:186 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - Snap these to 1/3 beats fix
00:35:686 - Add d ok
00:36:231 - Add d ok
00:38:413 (128) - Del fix
00:39:777 (136) - Del fix
00:55:459 (227) - K ok
00:56:004 (228,229,230,231,232,233) - Snap to 1/3 beats. fix
00:57:231 (235) - Move to 00:57:504 fix

Good luck!
Thanks
Ora ora ora ora ora ora ora
Skeuddy
Hi, Bank, from my queue
00:49:459 - Start of kiai

Muzukashii
  1. 00:22:731 - Some note
  2. 00:35:140 - ^
  3. 00:50:959 - ^
  4. 00:52:322 00:52:595 - ^ and 00:52:731 (168) - k
  5. 00:54:504 00:54:777 - ^

Oni
  1. 00:24:640 (58) - k
  2. 00:52:731 (209,211) - ^
  3. 00:59:686 (249) - ^
  4. 01:08:413 (298) - ^
  5. 00:32:209 (98) - d
Topic Starter
bank78952

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Bank, from my queue
00:49:459 - Start of kiai Fixed

Muzukashii
  1. 00:22:731 - Some note
  2. 00:35:140 - ^
  3. 00:50:959 - ^
  4. 00:52:322 00:52:595 - ^ and 00:52:731 (168) - k
  5. 00:54:504 00:54:777 - ^

Im not fix anything in muzukashii
Oni
  1. 00:24:640 (58) - k
  2. 00:52:731 (209,211) - ^
  3. 00:59:686 (249) - ^ Fix
  4. 01:08:413 (298) - ^ Fix
  5. 00:32:209 (98) - d
No reply=not fixed
Thanks
Chromoxx
ORRAAAAAAA

[Kantan]
00:22:459 - k 00:22:731 - d, this is a really distinctive part of the melody and shouldn't be left out
00:24:913 - add k
00:39:095 - add k
that's it i think, the rest seems good

[Futsuu]
00:22:731 - add k
00:30:231 (31) - move to 00:30:368 -
00:30:913 - maybe add k
rest seems fine, nice map

[Muzukashii]
seems good

[Oni]
seems good too lol

The mapset is kept rather simple and easy, so there isn't much to point out, i think you could still add an inner with more complex 1/4 patterns tbh but idk.
GL ranking, you could probably submit it to TNA next week ;)
Topic Starter
bank78952

Chromoxx wrote:

ORRAAAAAAA

[Kantan]
00:22:459 - k 00:22:731 - d, this is a really distinctive part of the melody and shouldn't be left out
00:24:913 - add k
00:39:095 - add k
that's it i think, the rest seems good all fixed

[Futsuu]
00:22:731 - add k
00:30:231 (31) - move to 00:30:368 -
00:30:913 - maybe add k
rest seems fine, nice map Fixed except 00:30:913

[Muzukashii]
seems good

[Oni]
seems good too lol

The mapset is kept rather simple and easy, so there isn't much to point out, i think you could still add an inner with more complex 1/4 patterns tbh but idk.
GL ranking, you could probably submit it to TNA next week ;)
LOL i'll XD
Danke schön
[R]
[Muzukashii]
00:15:095 - d
00:16:186 - move red tick backward, flow 00:17:822 -

00:29:686 - move 00:29:140 - emphasize for 00:29:822 -

00:38:004 (103,104) - delete ? consistency 00:32:822 -

00:38:277 - add d , emphasize
00:38:549 - k ^

00:40:459 (115,116) - ddk , make not monotoune
00:41:549 (119,120) - ddd , ^

00:48:368 - move red tick onward ? flow 00:45:913 (136,137,138,139) -
00:54:777 - add k
00:58:186 - d

01:25:640 - 01:26:368 - add note , it just make bit awkard if leave empty here

[Oni]
00:16:868 - add d, you add note 00:14:686 - to make not monotoune right ?
00:20:686 - add note , flow

00:28:322 (74,75) - ctrl+G, following vocal

00:29:277 - k
00:29:413 - delete
00:29:549 - d

00:30:095 (84,85) - ctrl+G
00:46:663 - add d ?

00:49:049 - move white tick backward, make arrange good

00:53:959 (217,218) - ddd
00:54:504 (221,222) - ^

00:58:936 - add d

01:15:640 - sems like monotoune here, you can add ddd example 01:15:640 (335,336) - , 01:16:731 (343,344) - , 01:17:822 (353,354) - , 01:18:913 (361,362) -

sry for pending
Topic Starter
bank78952

[R] wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:15:095 - d
00:16:186 - move red tick backward, flow 00:17:822 -

00:29:686 - move 00:29:140 - emphasize for 00:29:822 -

00:38:004 (103,104) - delete ? consistency 00:32:822 -

00:38:277 - add d , emphasize
00:38:549 - k ^

00:40:459 (115,116) - ddk , make not monotoune
00:41:549 (119,120) - ddd , ^

00:48:368 - move red tick onward ? flow 00:45:913 (136,137,138,139) -
00:54:777 - add k
00:58:186 - d

01:25:640 - 01:26:368 - add note , it just make bit awkard if leave empty here

All Fixed

[Oni]
00:16:868 - add d, you add note 00:14:686 - to make not monotoune right ?
00:20:686 - add note , flow

00:28:322 (74,75) - ctrl+G, following vocal

00:29:277 - k
00:29:413 - delete
00:29:549 - d

00:30:095 (84,85) - ctrl+G
00:46:663 - add d ?

00:49:049 - move white tick backward, make arrange good

00:53:959 (217,218) - ddd
00:54:504 (221,222) - ^

00:58:936 - add d

01:15:640 - sems like monotoune here, you can add ddd example 01:15:640 (335,336) - , 01:16:731 (343,344) - , 01:17:822 (353,354) - , 01:18:913 (361,362) - All Fixed Except 00:29:277 - 00:29:413 - 00:29:549 -

sry for pending
thanks
Estaryo
:) Hello from my Queue :)

In the following I will show you what I would change and why.



General


  1. HP and OD 2 in your Kantan... may a little too low. Thats all.


Kantan


Futsuu


  1. 00:25:459 (22,23) – Ctrl + G // Better support for the two notes before and after this

  2. 00:51:504 (66) – Move to 00:51:640 // Sure you want to support the Vocal here, but i think sticking to the rythm here in your Futsuu would be better



Muzukashii


  1. 00:41:549 (118) – Change to K // Section of the Song starting at (115) sounds like 2-2-2



Oni


  1. 00:32:209 (100) – Move to 00:32:277 // it's really weird to play, following the rythm all the time then that one note surprises you.

  2. 00:32:549 (102) – Change to D // sounds good if ^ is done

  3. 00:36:572 (122) – Move to 00:36:640 // it would be a really nice support for the song if you place it here instead of supporting vocal

I like the usage of 1/3 Notes for supporting the vocals but i think these singlestanding ¼ doesn't suit right,if you definitly want to support the vocal there, then try to support the vocals with 1/3 and not with ¼ that would be fine too
Example 00:32:004 – 00:32:549 DKDK 1/3 hear for yourself


Thats all what I can find, it's not much
I think this map in total is fine
:) I hope this was helpfull in any way. For Questions feel free to ask and leave a comment :)
Topic Starter
bank78952

Estaryo wrote:

:) Hello from my Queue :)

In the following I will show you what I would change and why.



General


  1. HP and OD 2 in your Kantan... may a little too low. Thats all.


Kantan


Futsuu


  1. 00:25:459 (22,23) – Ctrl + G // Better support for the two notes before and after this

  2. 00:51:504 (66) – Move to 00:51:640 // Sure you want to support the Vocal here, but i think sticking to the rythm here in your Futsuu would be better



Muzukashii


  1. 00:41:549 (118) – Change to K // Section of the Song starting at (115) sounds like 2-2-2



Oni


  1. 00:32:209 (100) – Move to 00:32:277 // it's really weird to play, following the rythm all the time then that one note surprises you. Nope

  2. 00:32:549 (102) – Change to D // sounds good if ^ is done ^

  3. 00:36:572 (122) – Move to 00:36:640 // it would be a really nice support for the song if you place it here instead of supporting vocal

I like the usage of 1/3 Notes for supporting the vocals but i think these singlestanding ¼ doesn't suit right,if you definitly want to support the vocal there, then try to support the vocals with 1/3 and not with ¼ that would be fine too
Example 00:32:004 – 00:32:549 DKDK 1/3 hear for yourself


Thats all what I can find, it's not much
I think this map in total is fine
:) I hope this was helpfull in any way. For Questions feel free to ask and leave a comment :)
Thanks :D
No reply=Fix
Quizmaegi
[Futsuu]

00:17:822 ~ 00:18:640 - d__d__d (1/2)

00:51:368 - k

00:51:504 - move to 00:51:640

00:54:640 - k

00:56:549 - k, del 00:56:822

01:02:004 - k

01:05:549 - k, 01:05:822 - d

Oni & muzu will be later
Quizmaegi
[Muzukashi]

00:22:731 - d

00:35:140 - k

00:48:504 - k

00:48:640 - d

00:48:913 - d

00:49:049 - d

00:49:322 - k

00:53:686 - d

00:58:459 , 00:59:004 , 00:59:549 , 00:59:822 , 00:59:959 , 01:00:095 - Finish ?

01:04:868 - d

01:09:777 - d

01:20:549 - D or K

(so easy muzukashi...)

[Oni]

00:25:186 - d ?

00:29:277 - d

00:40:731 - D (Finish)

00:40:868 - del or move to 00:41:004

00:41:277 ~ 00:41:549 - ^

00:41:822 ~ 00:42:095 - ^

00:42:368 ~ 00:42:640 - ^

00:55:731 - d

00:55:731 - Finish

01:06:913 - d

01:07:459 - move to 01:07:322

01:07:595 - d

01:09:640 - d
Topic Starter
bank78952

Quizmaegi wrote:

[Futsuu]

00:17:822 ~ 00:18:640 - d__d__d (1/2)

00:51:368 - k

00:51:504 - move to 00:51:640

00:54:640 - k Fixed

00:56:549 - k, del 00:56:822

01:02:004 - k Fixed

01:05:549 - k, 01:05:822 - d Fixed

[Muzukashi]

00:22:731 - d Fixed

00:35:140 - k Fixed

00:48:504 - k Fixed

00:48:640 - d Fixed

00:48:913 - d Fixed

00:49:049 - d Fixed

00:49:322 - k Fixed

00:53:686 - d

00:58:459 , 00:59:004 , 00:59:549 , 00:59:822 , 00:59:959 , 01:00:095 - Finish ?

01:04:868 - d Fixed

01:09:777 - d Fixed

01:20:549 - D or K Later...

(so easy muzukashi...)

[Oni]

00:25:186 - d ? Fixed

00:29:277 - d

00:40:731 - D (Finish) Later...

00:40:868 - del or move to 00:41:004

00:41:277 ~ 00:41:549 - ^

00:41:822 ~ 00:42:095 - ^

00:42:368 ~ 00:42:640 - ^

00:55:731 - d

00:55:731 - Finish

01:06:913 - d

01:07:459 - move to 01:07:322

01:07:595 - d

01:09:640 - d
Thanks For mod
i give kudos only first post
No reply = not fix
ptar124
Hi, as requested รอจนรากงอกละเนอะแบงค์ :v

Oni

00:15:777 - add any note, don or kat
00:20:686 (38,39) - change either one to kat
00:23:277 (53,54) - ^
00:25:459 (63,64) - Ctrl+G
00:26:822 (69) - don
00:28:049 (75) - kat
00:30:777 (92,93,94) - change any to kat
00:36:640 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - change to 1/3 notes
00:38:731 (133) - remove
00:54:504 (226,228) - change either one to kat
01:08:959 (309,310) - (optional) change 309 or both to kat

Muzukashii

00:17:822 (20) - remove
00:18:504 (23,24) - ctrl+G
00:20:140 (31) - (optional) change to kat
00:22:731 (42) - kat
00:23:277 (44) - kat
00:55:186 (183,184) - add finish

Futsuu

00:19:731 - add note
00:20:822 (15,16) - ctrl+G
00:33:368 - add note
00:37:731 - ^
00:43:731 - add DON (big don)
00:44:004 (54) - add finish
00:44:822 - add kat
00:46:459 - add don
00:47:277 (59) - change to don
00:47:822 - add kat
00:49:186 - add kat
00:50:822 - add don
00:51:504 (67) - remove
00:51:640 - add don
00:58:186 - add don
01:04:186 - add don
01:08:549 - add don
01:14:822 - add don
01:15:095 (114) - remove
01:15:640 (116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - change to d---k---d---k---d---k---d---k---d.... or d---k---k-------d---k---d-------d---k---d..........

Kantan

00:17:549 (4) - move to 00:17:277
00:24:095 (13) - remove
00:24:913 (15) - add finish
00:31:595 (23) - rhythm too hard for kantan, consider revision
00:44:004 (40) - add finish
00:59:004 (58) - remove or move to 00:59:277
01:10:595 (72) - rhythm too hard for kantan, consider revision
01:10:595 (72) - add kat
01:20:549 (85) - add finish
01:20:822 (1,1,2,3) - remove

Overall

Hi, bank

Difficulty spread between Muzukashii and Oni is too wide. while Muzukashii does not have any 1/4, 1/4 and 1/3 notes appear very regularly in Oni. The consistency of difficulty inside one map is very irregular in all difficulties. In easier difficulties, some notes are placed on beats that are not very regular (3/4, 1/3, etc.). Futsuu needs the most work since it's difficulty spread is heavily skewed towards Kantan, leaving an immense gap between it and Muzukashii. Good work on Muzukashii and Oni, just minor hitsound errors but otherwise, very nicely done. Hope to see this ranked.

Best,
ptar124
Topic Starter
bank78952

ptar124 wrote:

Hi, as requested รอจนรากงอกละเนอะแบงค์ :v หูกระจงควรปลูกให้ห่างจากตัวบ้าน

Oni

00:15:777 - add any note, don or kat K
00:20:686 (38,39) - change either one to kat K
00:23:277 (53,54) - ^ K
00:25:459 (63,64) - Ctrl+G แบบเดิมดีละ มั่ย :v
00:26:822 (69) - don K (D)
00:28:049 (75) - kat K
00:30:777 (92,93,94) - change any to kat K
00:36:640 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - change to 1/3 notes 1/4 แบบเดิมดีกว่า :v
00:38:731 (133) - remove K
00:54:504 (226,228) - change either one to kat K
01:08:959 (309,310) - (optional) change 309 or both to kat ไม่

Muzukashii

00:17:822 (20) - remove ไม่
00:18:504 (23,24) - ctrl+G K
00:20:140 (31) - (optional) change to kat K
00:22:731 (42) - kat K
00:23:277 (44) - kat K
00:55:186 (183,184) - add finish K

Futsuu

00:19:731 - add note K
00:20:822 (15,16) - ctrl+G K
00:33:368 - add note K
00:37:731 - ^ K
00:43:731 - add DON (big don) K
00:44:004 (54) - add finish K
00:44:822 - add kat K
00:46:459 - add don K
00:47:277 (59) - change to don K
00:47:822 - add kat K
00:49:186 - add kat K
00:50:822 - add don K
00:51:504 (67) - remove K
00:51:640 - add don K
00:58:186 - add don K
01:04:186 - add don K
01:08:549 - add don K
01:14:822 - add don K
01:15:095 (114) - remove K
01:15:640 (116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - change to d---k---d---k---d---k---d---k---d.... or d---k---k-------d---k---d-------d---k---d.......... dkdkdkdkd :v

Kantan

00:17:549 (4) - move to 00:17:277
00:24:095 (13) - remove
00:24:913 (15) - add finish
00:31:595 (23) - rhythm too hard for kantan, consider revision
00:44:004 (40) - add finish
00:59:004 (58) - remove or move to 00:59:277
01:10:595 (72) - rhythm too hard for kantan, consider revision
01:10:595 (72) - add kat
01:20:549 (85) - add finish
01:20:822 (1,1,2,3) - remove ยกเว้น 01:20:822 จ่ะ :v

Overall

Hi, bank

Difficulty spread between Muzukashii and Oni is too wide. while Muzukashii does not have any 1/4, 1/4 and 1/3 notes appear very regularly in Oni. The consistency of difficulty inside one map is very irregular in all difficulties. In easier difficulties, some notes are placed on beats that are not very regular (3/4, 1/3, etc.). Futsuu needs the most work since it's difficulty spread is heavily skewed towards Kantan, leaving an immense gap between it and Muzukashii. Good work on Muzukashii and Oni, just minor hitsound errors but otherwise, very nicely done. Hope to see this ranked.

Best,
ptar124
โอ้แม่สาวน้อย :v
PatZar
hi :v
Topic Starter
bank78952

PatZar wrote:

hi :v
Mod my map please :v
snz
From Mod Queue

[General]

Nothing

[Kantan]
00:18:913 (6) - Change This To k
00:22:731 (11) - Delete This And 00:22:459 (10) - Snap To 00:22:731
00:31:595 - Add One D Here
00:33:640 - Add One d Here
00:40:731 (36,37,38,39,40) - Change This By k b k b k
00:45:913 (43) - Change This By One k
00:51:095 - Add One k Here
00:57:640 - Add One d Here
01:11:277 (76) - Change This By One D
01:18:368 (84,85) - Ctrl+G

[Futssu]
00:17:004 (8) - Change This To One d
00:21:913 - Try This

00:35:004 (43,44) - Ctrl+G
00:37:731 (48) - Change This To One k
00:39:640 (51) - ^ (Dont Remove The Finish)
00:46:459 (64) - ^
00:53:549 - Add One k
00:58:459 (93,94,95,96) - Add Finish

[Muzukashii]
00:16:322 (11) - Change This To d
00:17:686 (19) - ^
00:27:640 (62) - Add Finish On This
00:29:413 - Add One d Here
00:30:231 (76) - Change This To One k
00:34:868 - Add One d Here
00:39:277 (112) - Delete This
00:39:459 (112) - Snap This To 00:39:368
00:47:277 (145) - Add Finish On This
00:52:322 - Add One d Here
01:00:231 - ^
01:20:004 - ddd 1/4

[Oni]
00:15:299 - Add One d Here For ddk
00:20:890 - Add dd For ddd
00:25:868 (68,69) - Ctrl+G
00:27:572 - Add One d Here For ddd
00:32:004 (104) - Add Finish Here
00:38:413 - Add One k Here
00:47:072 - Add One k Here For kkkkd
00:48:777 (191) - Snap This On 00:48:913
00:51:231 - Add One k Here
00:51:504 (210) - Add Finish Here
00:54:095 (229) - k
00:55:186 (237) - D
00:59:959 - Try This

01:13:322 - Add One k Here
01:20:549 - ddk 1/4

Good Luck With Rank :D
Topic Starter
bank78952

Ppuskalin wrote:

From Mod Queue

[General]

Nothing

[Kantan]
00:18:913 (6) - Change This To k No
00:22:731 (11) - Delete This And 00:22:459 (10) - Snap To 00:22:731
00:31:595 - Add One D Here No
00:33:640 - Add One d Here
00:40:731 (36,37,38,39,40) - Change This By k b k b k Okey
00:45:913 (43) - Change This By One k i'll change to K
00:51:095 - Add One k Here
00:57:640 - Add One d Here
01:11:277 (76) - Change This By One D
01:18:368 (84,85) - Ctrl+G

[Futssu]
00:17:004 (8) - Change This To One d No
00:21:913 - Try This No i think it hard for fuustu

00:35:004 (43,44) - Ctrl+G Okey
00:37:731 (48) - Change This To One k ok
00:39:640 (51) - ^ (Dont Remove The Finish) nope
00:46:459 (64) - ^ d is better
00:53:549 - Add One k no
00:58:459 (93,94,95,96) - Add Finish no :D

[Muzukashii]
00:16:322 (11) - Change This To d
00:17:686 (19) - ^ k is fine for me
00:27:640 (62) - Add Finish On This No
00:29:413 - Add One d Here
00:30:231 (76) - Change This To One k
00:34:868 - Add One d Here
00:39:277 (112) - Delete This Nope
00:39:459 (112) - Snap This To 00:39:368 Nope
00:47:277 (145) - Add Finish On This
00:52:322 - Add One d Here
01:00:231 - ^ k is better for me i'll add k :v
01:20:004 - ddd 1/4 No

[Oni]
00:15:299 - Add One d Here For ddk
00:20:890 - Add dd For ddd Nope
00:25:868 (68,69) - Ctrl+G
00:27:572 - Add One d Here For ddd
00:32:004 (104) - Add Finish Here
00:38:413 - Add One k Here
00:47:072 - Add One k Here For kkkkd No k kkd is better for me
00:48:777 (191) - Snap This On 00:48:913 No idk why but i think k on 00:48:777 is still better
00:51:231 - Add One k Here
00:51:504 (210) - Add Finish Here No no finish is still better
00:54:095 (229) - k
00:55:186 (237) - D No K is better
00:59:959 - Try This No

01:13:322 - Add One k Here
01:20:549 - ddk 1/4 No

Good Luck With Rank :D
Thanks
No reply = Fixed
Maya Tendo
こんにちは~Modding Queueから

[Oni]
00:22:663 add d。前後が8分だらけで、ここだけボーカルが無いので区切りとして。
00:25:186 delete。00:24:368 (61,63) - の大音符が引き立つと思います。
00:27:913 delete。上記のように大音符の後ろに似たような休憩を入れたほうが見栄えがよいので。
00:29:277 add d+ 00:29:140 delete。明らかにボーカルの音が大きいのでノーツを置かないと不自然だと思います。
00:32:368 - move to 00:32:413。音はこちらでなっています。
00:36:368 (123,124,125,126) - ここは1/3でMapした方が整合性が取れます。

kiaiはGOOD!

[Muzukashii]
00:27:095 K。直前がdKdKときていてたのでKにしないと不自然です。
00:32:140 delete。音取りするなら1/3ですが難しくなるし、ここら一帯は静かなので思い切って簡単めにしていいかと。
00:34:868 delete。難しい配置だと思います。
00:38:549 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - change to 1/2。ここまでがすべて1/2で来たのであわせたほうが自然です。
00:40:731 (119,121,123,125) - DKDK + 00:41:004 (120,122,124,126) - delete or as same as Oni patarn+.大音符にした方が他難易度と同じような感じになってよいです。

kiai is good too!
Topic Starter
bank78952

Mrriichi wrote:

こんにちは~Modding Queueから

I reply in english language

[Oni]
00:22:663 add d。前後が8分だらけで、ここだけボーカルが無いので区切りとして。ok
00:25:186 delete。00:24:368 (61,63) - の大音符が引き立つと思います。ok
00:27:913 delete。上記のように大音符の後ろに似たような休憩を入れたほうが見栄えがよいので。no it still better wwwwww
00:29:277 add d+ 00:29:140 delete。明らかにボーカルの音が大きいのでノーツを置かないと不自然だと思います。 add d but not delete at 00:29:140
00:32:368 - move to 00:32:413。音はこちらでなっています。ok
00:36:368 (123,124,125,126) - ここは1/3でMapした方が整合性が取れます。123,124 are fix but 125,126 are still in 1/4 because it better for me :D

kiaiはGOOD!

[Muzukashii]
00:27:095 K。直前がdKdKときていてたのでKにしないと不自然です。ok
00:32:140 delete。音取りするなら1/3ですが難しくなるし、ここら一帯は静かなので思い切って簡単めにしていいかと。ok
00:34:868 delete。難しい配置だと思います。ok
00:38:549 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - change to 1/2。ここまでがすべて1/2で来たのであわせたほうが自然です。still 1/3 ;w;
00:40:731 (119,121,123,125) - DKDK + 00:41:004 (120,122,124,126) - delete or as same as Oni patarn+.大音符にした方が他難易度と同じような感じになってよいです。delete XD

kiai is good too!
I'll fixed this all at tomorrow wwwwwww
どうもありがとう :D
Gemu-
Hi, from my Queue ~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

Nice!

[ Futsuu]

01:03:640 - Change to k to follow the previous rhythm kd dk 01:02:277 (98,99) - and the rhythm with 01:04:186 (102,103,104,105,106) -
01:15:368 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.

[ Muzukashii]

00:36:777 - Change to k to follow the previous rhythm 00:36:368 (98,99) - and have Dk kd.
00:39:277 (110) - Change to k to follow the rhythm, also sounds better.
00:46:049 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:43:186 (123,124,125,126) -
00:56:731 (186) - Change to k to follow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:39:277 (110) -
01:25:277 (5) - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
01:24:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change this to ---> to follow the drums. Also sounds better.

[ Oni]

00:34:731 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
00:39:640 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. Also in this part the voice increases.
00:57:095 - ^
01:24:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change this to ---> to follow the drums. Also sounds better.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
bank78952

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my Queue ~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

Nice!

[ Futsuu]

01:03:640 - Change to k to follow the previous rhythm kd dk 01:02:277 (98,99) - and the rhythm with 01:04:186 (102,103,104,105,106) -
01:15:368 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. All Fixed

[ Muzukashii]

00:36:777 - Change to k to follow the previous rhythm 00:36:368 (98,99) - and have Dk kd. Alright Fixed
00:39:277 (110) - Change to k to follow the rhythm, also sounds better. ^
00:46:049 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 00:43:186 (123,124,125,126) - No d are fine for me
00:56:731 (186) - Change to k to follow the rhythm and the consistency with 00:39:277 (110) - OK
01:25:277 (5) - Change to k to follow the rhythm. ^
01:24:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change this to ---> to follow the drums. Also sounds better. ^

[ Oni]

00:34:731 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. D is still better No change
00:39:640 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. Also in this part the voice increases. ^
00:57:095 - ^
01:24:913 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change this to ---> to follow the drums. Also sounds better. ok but not fix at all

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Thanks you still give me a helpful mod lol
Smallwu
Hi~ mod from my queue

Muzukashii
00:36:368 (98) - d
00:43:049 - Add k
00:47:140 (139) - Remove
01:10:186 (245,246,247) - D K D
01:20:549 (290) - D? Because here is the song's end

Oni
01:15:640 - 01:19:868 Try to add something new, because I think here too easy in Oni
01:20:549 (383) - D
Good luck~
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