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Samfree feat. SF-A2 Miki - Miki Miki Romantic Night

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Sallad4ever
This is already good ouran :)

orion's night is fun and hard is challenging
The star rating on normal is kinda high though, but after playing it, it's okay

you should present this to a BAT :D

Miki's voice kinda like miku :/
Ekaru
Map the first two difficulties all the way, lazy bums. :( Some newbies get pissed when their favorite song isn't mapped fully in the dif they play. Far outnumbers those who go "short is good!", trust me. Doesn't matter too much though. Just go through them and check for slider overlaps. There were a couple in the easiest difficulty.

orion's night:

Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:

00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"

Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.

Hard:

See if you can break up some of the 1/2 streams. Some of them just felt weird. Let me show you a good example of a spot where that hit circle would be better off gone IMO:

00:20:496 (5) - This is a great example. It just feels better if this hit circle's deleted because having it there goes against the flow of music a bit.
00:23:788 (10) - Same here.

Why does it feel better if those two hit circles are deleted? It's A. how the music goes and B. What you've already established with 00:18:483 (4,5). That spot has the same musical pattern as the two spots above and by deleting those two hit circles you would go with the flow, so to speak.

Look for things like that.

Otherwise, nice job. Guess I'll star it ahead of time since there's no point in you bugging me again if you decide to change nothing because there's nothing technically wrong with it and it's a bit fun, I just think it can be improved greatly if you spend a little more time on the last two difficulties.
Crimmi

Ekaru wrote:

Map the first two difficulties all the way, lazy bums. :( Some newbies get pissed when their favorite song isn't mapped fully in the dif they play. Far outnumbers those who go "short is good!", trust me. Doesn't matter too much though. Just go through them and check for slider overlaps. There were a couple in the easiest difficulty. WTF>>>> RAGEQUIT>X( I'm Not Lazy He's Just Told To Map It Till A Specific Point You Idiot....Sigh... =[I will finish it...=(

orion's night:

Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:

00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"

Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.

Hard:

See if you can break up some of the 1/2 streams. Some of them just felt weird. Let me show you a good example of a spot where that hit circle would be better off gone IMO:

00:20:496 (5) - This is a great example. It just feels better if this hit circle's deleted because having it there goes against the flow of music a bit.
00:23:788 (10) - Same here.

Why does it feel better if those two hit circles are deleted? It's A. how the music goes and B. What you've already established with 00:18:483 (4,5). That spot has the same musical pattern as the two spots above and by deleting those two hit circles you would go with the flow, so to speak.

Look for things like that.

Otherwise, nice job. Guess I'll star it ahead of time since there's no point in you bugging me again if you decide to change nothing because there's nothing technically wrong with it and it's a bit fun, I just think it can be improved greatly if you spend a little more time on the last two difficulties.
Edit 1: Completed Whole Diff.

Download: Samfree feat. SF-A2 Miki - MikiMiki Romantic Night (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Romance].osu
orioncomet

Ekaru wrote:

orion's night:

Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:

00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"

Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.
in fact this diff is Hard, That why i'm not put any jump in it =[
arien666
Pizza is delicious :3
So?

Star this song anyway XD
banvi
I love vocaloid and this song.
It's very nice. :oops:

I hope that miki debut in osu!
So I give star! :)
Vikon
[General]
...the Normal audio is too loud?

[Normal]
00:22:325 (1) too high, pull it back if you can.
00:31:105 (3) ^
00:37:691 (1) ^
00:58:544 (1) ^
00:25:252 (1) start this spinner at 00:25:435 ?

[Crimmi's Romance]
02:19:398 (3) it hurts the HP bar, try to pull it back.
02:35:313 meaningless timing section?

[orion's Night]
01:02:935 (7,9) they hurt the HP bar, try to pull them back.

[Hard]
00:21:593 (3) pull it back??
00:32:935 (3) ^
01:45:922 (2) ^
03:01:105 (3) ^....

fin, the map is star-worthy
orioncomet

Vikon wrote:

[General]
...the Normal audio is too loud? on My diff They're fine, I use only 60%.

[orion's Night]
01:02:935 (7,9) they hurt the HP bar, try to pull them back. Fine
valuable_old
^^
anonymous_old
Normal
HP drain too low. OD maybe too low. Too many overlaps.

I don't see why this is here when Crimmi's Romance is available and better.

Crimmi's Romance
Pretty good. I liked it.

Except spinners.
00:13:544 (1) - Too close for comfort.
00:25:252 (1) - ^
00:36:959 (1) - ^

orion's Night
Okay, I guess, but I don't like the OD.

Hard
Rename to Insane.

Looks good, dispite stupid overlaps.

You abuse whistle on some sliders, IMO.
LKs
general

some green lines unsnapped..you should at least resnap the kiai lines

[url]Normal[/url]

[00:27:447] whistle?
[00:36:227] ^
[00:58:554] move 1 grid up an 2 grids left , to keep the spacing
[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[01:25:618] whistle?
[01:31:471] ^
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]

Crimmi's Romance

kiai time a little too long..

[02:54:520] move 1 grid up and 1 grid right

orion's Night

[02:05:279] whistle

Hard

[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]
[02:58:727] kiai end at [02:58:910] or [02:58:554]
[03:24:703] kiai end at [03:24:886]

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ztrot
timing checks out just fine~
no other issues
Natteke
^o^/
Gens
[General]
  1. Maybe... include the singer vocaloid in tags?
[Easy]
  1. I felt that many, if not all spinners can be too hard for a new player. Consider replacing them with something else.
[Crimmi's Romance]
New combos, new combos...

00:17:935 (5) -
00:23:788 (6) -
00:35:496 (5) -
00:47:203 (7) -
00:58:910 (5) -
01:10:618 (5) -
01:34:032 (5) -
01:39:886 (3) -
01:57:447 (6) -
02:03:300 (5) -
02:20:861 (5) -
02:26:715 (3) -
02:32:935 (5) -
03:07:691 (3) -
03:22:691 (2) -

New combo all of these.

03:21:959 (1) -

Undo the new combo on this.

So yeah, I have nothing more to offer. Popping the bubble for this I PROMISE I'LL INSTA REBUBBLE AFTER YOU FIX
My main concern is the vocaloid singing, if you were wondering; the least important thing here is the new combo stuff.
(I would insta-rank afterwards, but I don't think I'm at that level of expertise yet)
orioncomet
SF-A2 Miki is the vocaloid singer.
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

orioncomet wrote:

SF-A2 Miki is the vocaloid singer.

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Maybe... include the singer vocaloid in tags?
[Easy]
  1. I felt that many, if not all spinners can be too hard for a new player. Consider replacing them with something else.
[Crimmi's Romance]
New combos, new combos...

00:17:935 (5) -
00:23:788 (6) -
00:35:496 (5) -
00:47:203 (7) -
00:58:910 (5) -
01:10:618 (5) -
01:34:032 (5) -
01:39:886 (3) -
01:57:447 (6) -
02:03:300 (5) -
02:20:861 (5) -
02:26:715 (3) -
02:32:935 (5) -
03:07:691 (3) -
03:22:691 (2) -

New combo all of these.

03:21:959 (1) -

Undo the new combo on this.

So yeah, I have nothing more to offer. Popping the bubble for this I PROMISE I'LL INSTA REBUBBLE AFTER YOU FIX
My main concern is the vocaloid singing, if you were wondering; the least important thing here is the new combo stuff.
(I would insta-rank afterwards, but I don't think I'm at that level of expertise yet)
Done


samfree = composer
SF-A2 Miki = vocals
Gens
Sorry for making you wait.
Mafiamaster
Let's go!
Sallad4ever
First of Miki's song that get ranked?

Btw Gratz this make's it your 6 or 7 or 8 ranked map this month :D
Krisom
I said it before, I did not like it :/
Wich is sad, because I love the song.
Don't get me wrong, I love most of your maps (And sometimes, I love more than just the maps... <3)...
>o<! Ouran, don't trade quality for ranking speed >_<!!
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Krisom wrote:

I said it before, I did not like it :/
Wich is sad, because I love the song.
Don't get me wrong, I love most of your maps (And sometimes, I love more than just the maps... <3)...
>o<! Ouran, don't trade quality for ranking speed >_<!!
i didn't trade quality, this was one of my older maps at the time
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