nice map <3
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Samfree feat. SF-A2 Miki - Miki Miki Romantic Night
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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[Normal]
don't use normal-clap-normal-clap all the time. maybe some small hitsound changes is needed.
00:27:447 (2) - whistle?
00:51:593 (3) - add clap on the end.
00:53:057 (1) - add clap on the start.
01:09:520 (4) - 1 grid up?
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
02:01:105 (3) - 1 grid left.
02:11:715 (1) - remove new combo?
[Crimmi's Romance]
why so many whistles at the 4th beat of the 4 beats....? not really good imo.
00:17:935 (5) - new combo?
00:23:788 (6) - ^
00:58:910 (5) - ^
02:03:300 (5) - ^
[orion's Night]
00:18:483 (7) - why not make the note here? all the shape look like a flower then= =
00:32:020 (6) - 1 grid up?
00:35:861 (5) - break after this note is too short. remove the break plz.
00:54:337 (5) - 1 grid left.
01:02:386 (4) - ^
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
01:52:691 (3) - spacing?
02:39:703 (5) - 1 grid right.
02:45:374 (3) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down?
02:51:227 (3) - spacing?
[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1
00:17:020 (4) - 1 grid up?
00:22:691 (7) - new combo?
00:34:215 (7) - ^
00:43:179 (7) - ^
00:58:910 (1) - remove new combo?
01:01:837 (1,2,3,4) - ...i suggest a remap.
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
02:40:618 (10) - 1 grid right?
03:22:325 - 03:24:886 this kiai don't make sense imo.
star~
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[Normal]
don't use normal-clap-normal-clap all the time. maybe some small hitsound changes is needed.
00:27:447 (2) - whistle?
00:51:593 (3) - add clap on the end.
00:53:057 (1) - add clap on the start.
01:09:520 (4) - 1 grid up?
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
02:01:105 (3) - 1 grid left.
02:11:715 (1) - remove new combo?
[Crimmi's Romance]
why so many whistles at the 4th beat of the 4 beats....? not really good imo.
00:17:935 (5) - new combo?
00:23:788 (6) - ^
00:58:910 (5) - ^
02:03:300 (5) - ^
[orion's Night]
00:18:483 (7) - why not make the note here? all the shape look like a flower then= =
00:32:020 (6) - 1 grid up?
00:35:861 (5) - break after this note is too short. remove the break plz.
00:54:337 (5) - 1 grid left.
01:02:386 (4) - ^
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
01:52:691 (3) - spacing?
02:39:703 (5) - 1 grid right.
02:45:374 (3) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down?
02:51:227 (3) - spacing?
[Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1
00:17:020 (4) - 1 grid up?
00:22:691 (7) - new combo?
00:34:215 (7) - ^
00:43:179 (7) - ^
00:58:910 (1) - remove new combo?
01:01:837 (1,2,3,4) - ...i suggest a remap.
01:13:179 (1) - remove new combo?
02:40:618 (10) - 1 grid right?
03:22:325 - 03:24:886 this kiai don't make sense imo.
star~
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
I'm not going to fix any modding. They're fine. Thankyou 0.0
Hi
[General]
Source : Vocaloid2
[File]
1) Your bg (7264619.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 or find the better bg (current 921x768)
2) Delete the .osb and full submit
[Normal]
00:16:471 (3) - Overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks good, IMO
00:38:422 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:43:544 (1) - No new combo here, since this not following the music or rhythm, IMO
01:01:837 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
01:04:032 (5) - Clap here doesn't fit at all, IMO
01:06:959 (4) - ^
01:09:886 (5) - ^
01:36:959 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
01:38:057 (3) - I feel, the end of slider must stack with 01:36:959 (1) at the end of slider
01:42:813 (1) - Add a finish?
01:54:154 (x) - Add note with clap? Feels empty here with rhythm
02:00:374 (1) - Add a finish?
[Crimmi's Romance]
00:24:886 (8) - I really don't like this object when this object is place behind the slider
01:44:276 (4) - Allign with 3? Overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks right, IMO
[orion's Night]
How about rename this diff to onion's epic Nightmare? lol
00:40:983 (6) - Don't stack with 5
Great eurobeat
STAR
[General]
Source : Vocaloid2
[File]
1) Your bg (7264619.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 or find the better bg (current 921x768)
2) Delete the .osb and full submit
[Normal]
00:16:471 (3) - Overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks good, IMO
00:38:422 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:43:544 (1) - No new combo here, since this not following the music or rhythm, IMO
01:01:837 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
01:04:032 (5) - Clap here doesn't fit at all, IMO
01:06:959 (4) - ^
01:09:886 (5) - ^
01:36:959 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
01:38:057 (3) - I feel, the end of slider must stack with 01:36:959 (1) at the end of slider
01:42:813 (1) - Add a finish?
01:54:154 (x) - Add note with clap? Feels empty here with rhythm
02:00:374 (1) - Add a finish?
[Crimmi's Romance]
00:24:886 (8) - I really don't like this object when this object is place behind the slider
01:44:276 (4) - Allign with 3? Overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks right, IMO
[orion's Night]
How about rename this diff to onion's epic Nightmare? lol
00:40:983 (6) - Don't stack with 5
Great eurobeat
STAR
This is already good ouran 
orion's night is fun and hard is challenging
The star rating on normal is kinda high though, but after playing it, it's okay
you should present this to a BAT
Miki's voice kinda like miku :/
orion's night is fun and hard is challenging
The star rating on normal is kinda high though, but after playing it, it's okay
you should present this to a BAT
Miki's voice kinda like miku :/
Map the first two difficulties all the way, lazy bums. 
Some newbies get pissed when their favorite song isn't mapped fully in the dif they play. Far outnumbers those who go "short is good!", trust me. Doesn't matter too much though. Just go through them and check for slider overlaps. There were a couple in the easiest difficulty.
orion's night:
Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:
00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"
Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.
Hard:
See if you can break up some of the 1/2 streams. Some of them just felt weird. Let me show you a good example of a spot where that hit circle would be better off gone IMO:
00:20:496 (5) - This is a great example. It just feels better if this hit circle's deleted because having it there goes against the flow of music a bit.
00:23:788 (10) - Same here.
Why does it feel better if those two hit circles are deleted? It's A. how the music goes and B. What you've already established with 00:18:483 (4,5). That spot has the same musical pattern as the two spots above and by deleting those two hit circles you would go with the flow, so to speak.
Look for things like that.
Otherwise, nice job. Guess I'll star it ahead of time since there's no point in you bugging me again if you decide to change nothing because there's nothing technically wrong with it and it's a bit fun, I just think it can be improved greatly if you spend a little more time on the last two difficulties.
Some newbies get pissed when their favorite song isn't mapped fully in the dif they play. Far outnumbers those who go "short is good!", trust me. Doesn't matter too much though. Just go through them and check for slider overlaps. There were a couple in the easiest difficulty.orion's night:
Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:
00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"
Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.
Hard:
See if you can break up some of the 1/2 streams. Some of them just felt weird. Let me show you a good example of a spot where that hit circle would be better off gone IMO:
00:20:496 (5) - This is a great example. It just feels better if this hit circle's deleted because having it there goes against the flow of music a bit.
00:23:788 (10) - Same here.
Why does it feel better if those two hit circles are deleted? It's A. how the music goes and B. What you've already established with 00:18:483 (4,5). That spot has the same musical pattern as the two spots above and by deleting those two hit circles you would go with the flow, so to speak.
Look for things like that.
Otherwise, nice job. Guess I'll star it ahead of time since there's no point in you bugging me again if you decide to change nothing because there's nothing technically wrong with it and it's a bit fun, I just think it can be improved greatly if you spend a little more time on the last two difficulties.
Edit 1: Completed Whole Diff.Ekaru wrote:
Map the first two difficulties all the way, lazy bums.
orion's night:
Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:
00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"
Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.
Hard:
See if you can break up some of the 1/2 streams. Some of them just felt weird. Let me show you a good example of a spot where that hit circle would be better off gone IMO:
00:20:496 (5) - This is a great example. It just feels better if this hit circle's deleted because having it there goes against the flow of music a bit.
00:23:788 (10) - Same here.
Why does it feel better if those two hit circles are deleted? It's A. how the music goes and B. What you've already established with 00:18:483 (4,5). That spot has the same musical pattern as the two spots above and by deleting those two hit circles you would go with the flow, so to speak.
Look for things like that.
Otherwise, nice job. Guess I'll star it ahead of time since there's no point in you bugging me again if you decide to change nothing because there's nothing technically wrong with it and it's a bit fun, I just think it can be improved greatly if you spend a little more time on the last two difficulties.
Download: Samfree feat. SF-A2 Miki - MikiMiki Romantic Night (ouranhshc) [Crimmi's Romance].osu
in fact this diff is Hard, That why i'm not put any jump in it =[Ekaru wrote:
orion's night:
Shake it up! This map really needs some intuitive jumps like so:
00:37:691 (1,2,1) - This is a perfect place for a pair of jumps. It has a couple of emphasized notes that are basically screaming, "jump please!"
Look for things like that. Simply doing this will make this map a lot funner.
Pizza is delicious :3
So?
Star this song anyway XD
So?
Star this song anyway XD
I love vocaloid and this song.
It's very nice.
I hope that miki debut in osu!
So I give star!
It's very nice.
I hope that miki debut in osu!
So I give star!
[General]
...the Normal audio is too loud?
[Normal]
00:22:325 (1) too high, pull it back if you can.
00:31:105 (3) ^
00:37:691 (1) ^
00:58:544 (1) ^
00:25:252 (1) start this spinner at 00:25:435 ?
[Crimmi's Romance]
02:19:398 (3) it hurts the HP bar, try to pull it back.
02:35:313 meaningless timing section?
[orion's Night]
01:02:935 (7,9) they hurt the HP bar, try to pull them back.
[Hard]
00:21:593 (3) pull it back??
00:32:935 (3) ^
01:45:922 (2) ^
03:01:105 (3) ^....
fin, the map is star-worthy
...the Normal audio is too loud?
[Normal]
00:22:325 (1) too high, pull it back if you can.
00:31:105 (3) ^
00:37:691 (1) ^
00:58:544 (1) ^
00:25:252 (1) start this spinner at 00:25:435 ?
[Crimmi's Romance]
02:19:398 (3) it hurts the HP bar, try to pull it back.
02:35:313 meaningless timing section?
[orion's Night]
01:02:935 (7,9) they hurt the HP bar, try to pull them back.
[Hard]
00:21:593 (3) pull it back??
00:32:935 (3) ^
01:45:922 (2) ^
03:01:105 (3) ^....
fin, the map is star-worthy
Vikon wrote:
[General]
...the Normal audio is too loud? on My diff They're fine, I use only 60%.
[orion's Night]
01:02:935 (7,9) they hurt the HP bar, try to pull them back. Fine
^^
Normal
HP drain too low. OD maybe too low. Too many overlaps.
I don't see why this is here when Crimmi's Romance is available and better.
Crimmi's Romance
Pretty good. I liked it.
Except spinners.
00:13:544 (1) - Too close for comfort.
00:25:252 (1) - ^
00:36:959 (1) - ^
orion's Night
Okay, I guess, but I don't like the OD.
Hard
Rename to Insane.
Looks good, dispite stupid overlaps.
You abuse whistle on some sliders, IMO.
HP drain too low. OD maybe too low. Too many overlaps.
I don't see why this is here when Crimmi's Romance is available and better.
Crimmi's Romance
Pretty good. I liked it.
Except spinners.
00:13:544 (1) - Too close for comfort.
00:25:252 (1) - ^
00:36:959 (1) - ^
orion's Night
Okay, I guess, but I don't like the OD.
Hard
Rename to Insane.
Looks good, dispite stupid overlaps.
You abuse whistle on some sliders, IMO.
general
some green lines unsnapped..you should at least resnap the kiai lines
[url]Normal[/url]
[00:27:447] whistle?
[00:36:227] ^
[00:58:554] move 1 grid up an 2 grids left , to keep the spacing
[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[01:25:618] whistle?
[01:31:471] ^
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]
Crimmi's Romance
kiai time a little too long..
[02:54:520] move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
orion's Night
[02:05:279] whistle
Hard
[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]
[02:58:727] kiai end at [02:58:910] or [02:58:554]
[03:24:703] kiai end at [03:24:886]
star
some green lines unsnapped..you should at least resnap the kiai lines
[url]Normal[/url]
[00:27:447] whistle?
[00:36:227] ^
[00:58:554] move 1 grid up an 2 grids left , to keep the spacing
[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[01:25:618] whistle?
[01:31:471] ^
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]
Crimmi's Romance
kiai time a little too long..
[02:54:520] move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
orion's Night
[02:05:279] whistle
Hard
[01:13:361] should not the kiai end at [01:13:554]or [01:13:179]?
[02:11:898] kiai end at [02:12:081] or [02:11:715]
[02:58:727] kiai end at [02:58:910] or [02:58:554]
[03:24:703] kiai end at [03:24:886]
star
timing checks out just fine~
no other issues
no other issues
^o^/
[General]
New combos, new combos...
00:17:935 (5) -
00:23:788 (6) -
00:35:496 (5) -
00:47:203 (7) -
00:58:910 (5) -
01:10:618 (5) -
01:34:032 (5) -
01:39:886 (3) -
01:57:447 (6) -
02:03:300 (5) -
02:20:861 (5) -
02:26:715 (3) -
02:32:935 (5) -
03:07:691 (3) -
03:22:691 (2) -
New combo all of these.
03:21:959 (1) -
Undo the new combo on this.
So yeah, I have nothing more to offer. Popping the bubble for this I PROMISE I'LL INSTA REBUBBLE AFTER YOU FIX
My main concern is the vocaloid singing, if you were wondering; the least important thing here is the new combo stuff.
(I would insta-rank afterwards, but I don't think I'm at that level of expertise yet)
- Maybe... include the singer vocaloid in tags?
- I felt that many, if not all spinners can be too hard for a new player. Consider replacing them with something else.
New combos, new combos...
00:17:935 (5) -
00:23:788 (6) -
00:35:496 (5) -
00:47:203 (7) -
00:58:910 (5) -
01:10:618 (5) -
01:34:032 (5) -
01:39:886 (3) -
01:57:447 (6) -
02:03:300 (5) -
02:20:861 (5) -
02:26:715 (3) -
02:32:935 (5) -
03:07:691 (3) -
03:22:691 (2) -
New combo all of these.
03:21:959 (1) -
Undo the new combo on this.
So yeah, I have nothing more to offer. Popping the bubble for this I PROMISE I'LL INSTA REBUBBLE AFTER YOU FIX
My main concern is the vocaloid singing, if you were wondering; the least important thing here is the new combo stuff.
(I would insta-rank afterwards, but I don't think I'm at that level of expertise yet)
SF-A2 Miki is the vocaloid singer.
Topic Starter
orioncomet wrote:
SF-A2 Miki is the vocaloid singer.
DoneGens wrote:
[General][Easy]
- Maybe... include the singer vocaloid in tags?
[Crimmi's Romance]
- I felt that many, if not all spinners can be too hard for a new player. Consider replacing them with something else.
New combos, new combos...
00:17:935 (5) -
00:23:788 (6) -
00:35:496 (5) -
00:47:203 (7) -
00:58:910 (5) -
01:10:618 (5) -
01:34:032 (5) -
01:39:886 (3) -
01:57:447 (6) -
02:03:300 (5) -
02:20:861 (5) -
02:26:715 (3) -
02:32:935 (5) -
03:07:691 (3) -
03:22:691 (2) -
New combo all of these.
03:21:959 (1) -
Undo the new combo on this.
So yeah, I have nothing more to offer. Popping the bubble for this I PROMISE I'LL INSTA REBUBBLE AFTER YOU FIX
My main concern is the vocaloid singing, if you were wondering; the least important thing here is the new combo stuff.
(I would insta-rank afterwards, but I don't think I'm at that level of expertise yet)
samfree = composer
SF-A2 Miki = vocals
Sorry for making you wait.
Let's go!
First of Miki's song that get ranked?
Btw Gratz this make's it your 6 or 7 or 8 ranked map this month
Btw Gratz this make's it your 6 or 7 or 8 ranked map this month
I said it before, I did not like it :/
Wich is sad, because I love the song.
Don't get me wrong, I love most of your maps (And sometimes, I love more than just the maps... <3)...
>o<! Ouran, don't trade quality for ranking speed >_<!!
Wich is sad, because I love the song.
Don't get me wrong, I love most of your maps (And sometimes, I love more than just the maps... <3)...
>o<! Ouran, don't trade quality for ranking speed >_<!!
Topic Starter
i didn't trade quality, this was one of my older maps at the timeKrisom wrote:
I said it before, I did not like it :/
Wich is sad, because I love the song.
Don't get me wrong, I love most of your maps (And sometimes, I love more than just the maps... <3)...
>o<! Ouran, don't trade quality for ranking speed >_<!!