Awesome song choice! Nice first map, yet there are some quality issues that need to be improved before this can go to ranked, so I have to take this down for now.
[General]
[Normal]
[Hard]
Please don't forget to check the mods above too that happened after qualification! In case you didn't understand something, feel free to ask. If you disagree with something, we can find a compromise together.
Good luck!
[General]
The default soft-sliderslide is pretty noisy for that first section of the song. The music is rather empty there so I would recommend you to add a silent (or atleast much lower volume) soft-sliderslide as a custom hitsound.
The last part is more dense in Normal than in Hard. Actually I personally love the sliderart in Hard, so I would have liked to see something like that in Normal too. It's your decision if you want to change this though, after all the section is really easy in both diffs.
The last part is more dense in Normal than in Hard. Actually I personally love the sliderart in Hard, so I would have liked to see something like that in Normal too. It's your decision if you want to change this though, after all the section is really easy in both diffs.
[Normal]
01:26:562 (5) - I would recommend you to replace it with a circle at 01:26:735 - as the density is a bit high here for the easiest diff, and your rhythm got a bit messy (mainly due to the 1/4 slider starting at a blue tick, which is against the emphasis of the song because the players click the weakest beat)
Normal is generally fine, but there are some important hitsounds missing, that make the map feel quite empty hitsounding-wise at these parts:
00:56:390 - Missing Finish
00:57:080 - Missing Clap
01:17:769 - Missing Clap
01:26:045 - Missing Clap
Normal is generally fine, but there are some important hitsounds missing, that make the map feel quite empty hitsounding-wise at these parts:
00:56:390 - Missing Finish
00:57:080 - Missing Clap
01:17:769 - Missing Clap
01:26:045 - Missing Clap
[Hard]
There are some rhythm issues with the 3/8-sliders, some of them are misplaced. The vocals in this song are generally pretty offbeat at those places, but they should be simplified the best way possible.
00:19:149 (4) - I think you tried to follow the vocal, but the vocal is more on 00:19:493 -
00:39:838 (2) - The vocal is more at 00:40:183 -
00:53:631 (2) - The vocal is more at 00:53:976 -
01:04:666 (1) - The vocals are completely offbeat here. It would be better to follow just the drums here.
There are some other odd rhythm decisions too, that need some work.
00:35:355 (3) - The rhythm sounds weird, because the only sound is at 00:35:873 - not at 00:35:700 -. I would recommend you to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/kVAcV/4f7a6e6470.jpg
00:38:114 (4) - Same as above.
00:43:286 (2,3) - Hmm.. I don't really understand these extended sliders. It would be better to follow the drums here when there is nothing else in the music to follow.
00:19:149 (4) - I think you tried to follow the vocal, but the vocal is more on 00:19:493 -
00:39:838 (2) - The vocal is more at 00:40:183 -
00:53:631 (2) - The vocal is more at 00:53:976 -
01:04:666 (1) - The vocals are completely offbeat here. It would be better to follow just the drums here.
There are some other odd rhythm decisions too, that need some work.
00:35:355 (3) - The rhythm sounds weird, because the only sound is at 00:35:873 - not at 00:35:700 -. I would recommend you to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/kVAcV/4f7a6e6470.jpg
00:38:114 (4) - Same as above.
00:43:286 (2,3) - Hmm.. I don't really understand these extended sliders. It would be better to follow the drums here when there is nothing else in the music to follow.
Please don't forget to check the mods above too that happened after qualification! In case you didn't understand something, feel free to ask. If you disagree with something, we can find a compromise together.
Good luck!