1. Easy (1.49 stars, 85 notes)
2. Hard (2.84 stars, 229 notes)
3. Insane (4.16 stars, 330 notes)
4. Normal (1.96 stars, 149 notes)
5. YuruYuri! (4.78 stars, 416 notes)

1. the offset seems wrong. try moving all your timing points by -19 and re adjust all your notes
2. you have 2 different video and BG files, I am pretty sure that this is what is causing an error when you open the map in the editor.

1. You should use lower slider velocity for easy. at this BPM I would suggest .8 I know that doing this will make you have to remap, but the current SV is too high. also, I noticed you are using green timing points to reduce this slider velocity, but its best if you use 1.0 for those timing points and change the base SV instead.
2. after you adjust the SV, in easy you want to always follow the same distance snap. something like .9 or 1.0 so that there are no overlaps in notes that have a 1/1 gap.
   
3. 00:13:313 (2) - having more than 1 reverse is something you don't want to do in Easy, the player will not have enough time to react since the slider is so short.
4. 00:23:497 (2) - move back to the white line
5. 00:35:024 (4) - move forward to white line
   The map in general needs a lot of work, look at Easy diffs for ranked maps to get some ideas of what to do.

1. same as easy, you want to always follow distance snap.
2. 00:06:366 (5) - this slider's end is not snapped, extend it so that the end is at 00:06:839-
   as with Easy, the diff needs a lot of work, look at ranked maps to get ideas

Setz wrote:

hmmmmm I don't know if you are going to try to rank this, but I guess I will leave some things here in hopes that it will help you go in the right direction

[General]

1. the offset seems wrong. try moving all your timing points by -19 and re adjust all your notes
2. you have 2 different video and BG files, I am pretty sure that this is what is causing an error when you open the map in the editor.

[Easy]

1. You should use lower slider velocity for easy. at this BPM I would suggest .8 I know that doing this will make you have to remap, but the current SV is too high. also, I noticed you are using green timing points to reduce this slider velocity, but its best if you use 1.0 for those timing points and change the base SV instead.
2. after you adjust the SV, in easy you want to always follow the same distance snap. something like .9 or 1.0 so that there are no overlaps in notes that have a 1/1 gap.
   
3. 00:13:313 (2) - having more than 1 reverse is something you don't want to do in Easy, the player will not have enough time to react since the slider is so short.
4. 00:23:497 (2) - move back to the white line
5. 00:35:024 (4) - move forward to white line
   The map in general needs a lot of work, look at Easy diffs for ranked maps to get some ideas of what to do.

[Normal]

1. same as easy, you want to always follow distance snap.
2. 00:06:366 (5) - this slider's end is not snapped, extend it so that the end is at 00:06:839-
   as with Easy, the diff needs a lot of work, look at ranked maps to get ideas

the same type of problems are in the rest of the diffs, but I hope that some of this points you in the right direction, good luck and have fun mapping!

Setz wrote:

I am glad that my advice helped you a little Hope my English is not too hard for you to understand

Sadly, there is no easy way to find the offset. you just have to listen to the song very carefully at 25% play speed and try to find the start of the first sound of the music.
It is very difficult, I have a hard time doing this myself
One last thing with timing that I forgot to mention in the first post, move your red timing point to 00:00:031 - in all diffs. this is so that the map's timeline is easier to read for future mods.

Mapping is very hard when you are starting to do it. no one can make a perfect map when they are starting out. But you should keep trying to improve. it will happen with time and practice.
If you have any more questions, feel free to ask me, I will try my best to help

Setz wrote:

I found the reason for the error.

the video file you are using is ".mp4" format. Osu can not read this type of file.

You must convert the video to "AVI" format so that Osu can read it. I don't know how to do this, sorry hopefully that helps!

-soramaru- wrote:

Setz wrote:

I found the reason for the error.

the video file you are using is ".mp4" format. Osu can not read this type of file.

You must convert the video to "AVI" format so that Osu can read it. I don't know how to do this, sorry hopefully that helps!

I see!
Thank you!

Xinely wrote:

Denied kudosus as requsted by the modder.
Next time give kudosu only for helpful mods which can improve your map

Good luck for the map :3

Xinely wrote:

Denied kudosus as requsted by the modder.
Next time give kudosu only for helpful mods which can improve your map

Good luck for the map :3

chucentry wrote:

Hi soramaru-san

easy

00:02:557 - try with 60 % HS volume sounds better

00:20:241 (1) - spinner finish here 00:21:504 - the only i know in easy is, if are an spinner need be 3 with lines of distance to put the next note

00:30:347 (1,2,3,4) - in easy try to not put more sliders. Here can put a reverse slider or 1 slider like http://puu.sh/kYman/ff767a44f8.jpg

00:38:557 (1,2,3) - same

00:42:978 - here start a low part change the volume of HS to 50 or 40

00:45:505 (1) - is stacking with the 00:42:978 (1) - try to no do it, change place

00:48:031 (1,2,3) - = 00:38:557 (1,2,3) -

00:50:557 (1) - finish here 00:50:557 (1) - and add slider here 00:53:083 - and here 00:53:715 (1,2,3) - same slidaaa

00:53:083 - start kiai put 80% volume of HS

01:03:189 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:13:610 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:18:663 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:23:399 (1,2,3,4) - suraidaaa

01:12:978 - 60% of HS the kiai finish and start a part not strong like kiai-san

Insane

00:05:820 (3,4) - stack with 00:06:031 (5) -

00:10:872 (3,4) - same ↑

00:50:004 (3) - remove this the triple is here 00:50:162 -

00:54:425 (5) - same. remove and 00:54:583 - dd here

00:56:320 (4) - say bye chii

01:02:636 (4) - remove. if u want can add note here 01:02:478 -

01:05:162 (4) - bye

Same problem with the green lines

YuriYuri

00:04:452 - remove this green line

00:14:422 - ↑

00:17:715 (2,3,4) - the distance here is akward not consistent try to use the same snap or something more confourtable

00:18:346 (5) - green lines here remove all or put other nº%

00:22:768 - change volume to 60%

00:23:715 (7) - maybe here? x:274 y:190

00:24:978 (4,5,1) - same distance pls

00:46:451 (6,7,8) - confuse to play. Can think is a triple. Maybe stack or short jumpy

00:50:004 (7) - remove this note and put one here 00:50:162 - often triples started in hite line feels not good

00:53:715 (3,4,5,6,7) - too much.remove this 00:53:794 (4) -

00:54:820 (4,5) - short distance try to move it more far

00:56:320 (4) - remove if u want can put the 00:56:241 (3) - here x:201 y:165

01:01:768 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nyan. Remove this 01:01:767 (6) - and this 01:01:926 (1) - start in (6). Short reverse slider 01:01:767 - to 01:02:083 (6) - the second:01:02:083 - to 01:02:320 - and them start thte stream because the vocal start the strong part with their voice there

01:06:426 (4) - remove 01:06:426 (4) -

01:09:978 (7) - you ignored the "san" said by a cute girl. maybe change it 01:09:978 (7) - for one note and slider.

In general try to use volume of HS like " 80, 60, 70, 75,40, 30, 20" notnumbers liek 79 81 77, the change is short and its the same but not looks good

Sory i cant mod Normal and hard. i dont know nothing about it T.T

chucentry wrote:

Hi soramaru-san

easy

00:02:557 - try with 60 % HS volume sounds better

00:20:241 (1) - spinner finish here 00:21:504 - the only i know in easy is, if are an spinner need be 3 with lines of distance to put the next note

00:30:347 (1,2,3,4) - in easy try to not put more sliders. Here can put a reverse slider or 1 slider like http://puu.sh/kYman/ff767a44f8.jpg

00:38:557 (1,2,3) - same

00:42:978 - here start a low part change the volume of HS to 50 or 40

00:45:505 (1) - is stacking with the 00:42:978 (1) - try to no do it, change place

00:48:031 (1,2,3) - = 00:38:557 (1,2,3) -

00:50:557 (1) - finish here 00:50:557 (1) - and add slider here 00:53:083 - and here 00:53:715 (1,2,3) - same slidaaa

00:53:083 - start kiai put 80% volume of HS

01:03:189 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:13:610 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:18:663 (1,2,3,4) - = 01:23:399 (1,2,3,4) - suraidaaa

01:12:978 - 60% of HS the kiai finish and start a part not strong like kiai-san

Insane

00:05:820 (3,4) - stack with 00:06:031 (5) -

00:10:872 (3,4) - same ↑

00:50:004 (3) - remove this the triple is here 00:50:162 -

00:54:425 (5) - same. remove and 00:54:583 - dd here

00:56:320 (4) - say bye chii

01:02:636 (4) - remove. if u want can add note here 01:02:478 -

01:05:162 (4) - bye

Same problem with the green lines

YuriYuri

00:04:452 - remove this green line

00:14:422 - ↑

00:17:715 (2,3,4) - the distance here is akward not consistent try to use the same snap or something more confourtable

00:18:346 (5) - green lines here remove all or put other nº%

00:22:768 - change volume to 60%

00:23:715 (7) - maybe here? x:274 y:190

00:24:978 (4,5,1) - same distance pls

00:46:451 (6,7,8) - confuse to play. Can think is a triple. Maybe stack or short jumpy

00:50:004 (7) - remove this note and put one here 00:50:162 - often triples started in hite line feels not good

00:53:715 (3,4,5,6,7) - too much.remove this 00:53:794 (4) -

00:54:820 (4,5) - short distance try to move it more far

00:56:320 (4) - remove if u want can put the 00:56:241 (3) - here x:201 y:165

01:01:768 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nyan. Remove this 01:01:767 (6) - and this 01:01:926 (1) - start in (6). Short reverse slider 01:01:767 - to 01:02:083 (6) - the second:01:02:083 - to 01:02:320 - and them start thte stream because the vocal start the strong part with their voice there

01:06:426 (4) - remove 01:06:426 (4) -

01:09:978 (7) - you ignored the "san" said by a cute girl. maybe change it 01:09:978 (7) - for one note and slider.

In general try to use volume of HS like " 80, 60, 70, 75,40, 30, 20" notnumbers liek 79 81 77, the change is short and its the same but not looks good

Sory i cant mod Normal and hard. i dont know nothing about it T.T

Skidayo wrote:

僕の日本語ちょっと変かもしれません（笑）
そしてすみませんが、hitsoundの使い方は全然知りません。hitsoundに関しては他の人に。。。

easy

ノート間の距離を1.1xで変更してください
00:30:346 (1,2,1) -
00:39:820 (2,3) - ＾
00:44:241 (2,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:54:346 (2,1) - ＾
01:03:188 (1,2,1) - ＾
01:08:241 (1,2) - ＾
01:13:136 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ＾

kiaiタイムが目盛りに合っていません。
00:53:084 - 00:53:083からkiaiタイムを始めてください

00:20:241 (1) - 00:20:083で強い音が聞こえるので、ここからスピナーを始めるほうがいいと思います
00:50:557 (1) - スピナーが終わるまで次のノートが見えてはいけません　00:51:820でスピナーを終了するのがいいと思います。

normal

すごくいい譜面ですが、ランクのためには変更しなければならないことがいくつかありますね。
(そして、ちょっとnormalには難しい譜面かも。。）

00:00:662 (1) - normalもスピナーが終わるまで次のノートが見えてはいけません。easyと同じようにスピナーを入れないほうがいいと思います。
00:50:399 (1) - これもスピナーが終わるまで次のノートが見えてはいけません
01:27:188 (1) - 01:28:452で終えるのがいいとおもいます。

kiaiタイムが目盛りに合っていません。
00:53:084 - 00:53:083からkiaiタイムを始めてください
01:12:663 - 終了地点を00:12:662に変更してください
01:23:478 - ここにあるタイミングも01:23:399から

意図はわかりますが、ノート間の距離が1.1xではなければなりません
00:56:873 (3,4,1) -
01:01:294 (2,3,4) -

00:06:346 (5,6) - これはちょっとnormalには難しいとおもいます。スライダーを重ねない形に変更するのがいいと思います。
00:15:820 (2) - こんな短いスライダーが二回往復するのは難しいと思います。http://puu.sh/l8YJU/99cf105593.jpg＜＜こういうふうに変えるのはどうでしょうか
01:22:136 (3) - ＾

hard

これもいい譜面ですが、ちょっとリーディングがむずかしいですね。

目盛りに合ってないです。
00:10:769 (2) -
01:13:611 (2) -
01:13:927 (3) -

kiaiタイムが目盛りに合っていません。
00:53:084 - 00:53:083からkiaiタイムを始めてください
01:12:663 - 終了地点を00:12:662に変更してください

insane

insaneとyuruyuriは後で続けて書きます。