Euny wrote:

kei channnn yea, i'm here♥

• General

1. disable widescreen support for Charles' diff

• Standard

1. 00:12:578 (1,2) - symmetric their pls. okay.
2. 01:28:129 (3,4) - swap these please there is more fitting for music. also i feel click'able 01:28:706 here. so.. hope you accept this! done.
   

• Hard

1. 00:12:578 (1,2,3) - i think you can better overlap for these reverse things. how about like this? this really makes good reading for players i guess.
   
   SPOILER

   
   i want keep this. but, bit Trial and error.
2. 03:29:187 - i told this for Charles' diff too. unnecesary green line over red line, since no sv change. I can't found green line.

• Hyper

1. 00:24:116 (6) - this feels really good but doesnt fit to beatsnap imo. you can see this part from your last diff. and i already told you. so.... hope you fix bit like this
   okay.
2. 00:38:803 (1) - i'm sure ctrl G makes really good flow for your hyper diff. done.
3. 01:16:014 (2,1) - perfect overlap for perfect seeing. done.
4. 01:51:591 (1) - i hope you change like that timeline. cause there is much 1/6 reverse sliders. and this only different length reverse times. so.. i guess you should change this for better reading. Different length reverse born fun play. i think no problem this and match song.
   

• Another445

1. 00:29:092 (2,3,4) - isnt same as 03:19:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here? if its same and agree with me, show me your nice steams or 1/6 reverse to here.
2. 01:18:322 (3) - ctrl g helps more funny for that shorts i guess. hope you try it.
3. 02:19:732 - isnt so clickable? how about this timeline? i believe you will make nice pattern for this strong piano sound c:
   
4. 03:29:187 - unnecesary green line over red line, since no sv change.

• Exitra

1. ar feels bit fast i think 9.3 is fitting for this diff. okay.
2. 00:24:194 (2) - remove this note cause i cant hear any tempo or piano sound from here changed this part.
3. 00:50:822 (1) - rotate this slider with -28 degrees(with selection centre) will helps flow i guess. keep sorry.
4. 01:25:245 (9) - put nc for this. since you added nc for 01:26:783 (1) - here too? then i think, here is newcombo cycle. good.
5. 01:28:226 (5) - cant feel tempo from here. how about remove this? changed rhythm.
6. 01:33:226 (4,5) - to be honesty, these are kill your nice stream flow keichan xD.. i believe you can better placing their. spoiler box is just sample. umm, no change.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:02:681 (1,1,1,1) - oh this spam really confuse i guess. please remove that nc. even they are keep distance. readable 1/3
8. 02:19:476 - add note please. feels bit pity cause you ignore this strong piano sound. fixed.
9. 03:35:437 (2,3,4) - this too over spacing tbh, lets compare with 03:33:129 (5,6,7,1) -them. so i think this spacing too much.. -----

Beginner really looks great for me.
so... that's it !
hope this is helpful...

Sync wrote:

on Extra:
02:48:771 (2) - This is wrongly snapped. Use 1/8 instead so the note is at 02:48:755 :@)

1. "PROGRESSIVE" is in tags twice, remove one

1. 03:48:610 (2) - Idk if you snapped this on blue tick just to simplify rhythm, but either way it should be 1/3. Considering it's a slider at 156 bpm with over a 1/1 gap to react I think it'll be fine, I've also asked alacat about it
2. 02:00:245 (1) - Could add a finish on the repeat

1. same two points as in beginner diff

1. 01:56:976 (1,2,3,4) - I think angling these a bit differently for a turn would feel a bit better with the pitch increase on 01:56:976 (1), plus the crash on 01:57:361 (1), try something like this?

• 00:34:187 (1,2) - Isn't this spacing awkwardly low? Players will only hit the head and disregard the rest of the slider so the movement between 00:34:187 (1,2,3) - is a bit weird

1. 01:03:707 (1,2,3,4) - imo these are a bit too sharp in movement, most similar patterns in this section were wide angled and it feels abrupt coming from 01:02:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which is almost linear

bbj0920 wrote:

I remember I promised you a mod for this, this is one hell of a great mapset!

Another445
My (personal) mapping idol Charles, another masterful map there. Just a few minor things.
00:09:347 (3) - I don't really think it has to be curved, it doesn't look good either imo. I miss sliders like these. I think they look alright!
00:22:731 (3) - ^ I think it'll be more endearing than annoying. Hard to say though, we'll see!
02:48:707 (1,2) - 1/8 you may have missed? Purposefully skipped 02:48:755 - , throwing 1/8 into here would mess some people up pretty bad I think.
It's so astonishing about how it's done right <3

sukiNathan wrote:

hi from iyasine's request

[Another445]

1. 01:56:976 (1,2,3,4) - I think angling these a bit differently for a turn would feel a bit better with the pitch increase on 01:56:976 (1), plus the crash on 01:57:361 (1), try something like this? Something to think about, for sure. The perpendicular movement off the 2 is a little weird but the reverse in direction to hit the slider after is pretty sick. Hmm. I kinda want the player to just slow down off the 2, focusing on keys more than movement, not really sure what to say about this one. I think I'm gonna keep it like it is, don't want to gamble with perpendicular stuff.

sukiNathan wrote:

hi from iyasine's request

[General]

1. "PROGRESSIVE" is in tags twice, remove one done

[Beginner]

1. 03:48:610 (2) - Idk if you snapped this on blue tick just to simplify rhythm, but either way it should be 1/3. Considering it's a slider at 156 bpm with over a 1/1 gap to react I think it'll be fine, I've also asked alacat about it lol actually my mistake snap. fixed.
2. 02:00:245 (1) - Could add a finish on the repeat done.

[Standard]

1. same two points as in beginner diff same.

[Extra]

• 00:34:187 (1,2) - Isn't this spacing awkwardly low? Players will only hit the head and disregard the rest of the slider so the movement between 00:34:187 (1,2,3) - is a bit weird fixed and more easily.

1. 01:03:707 (1,2,3,4) - imo these are a bit too sharp in movement, most similar patterns in this section were wide angled and it feels abrupt coming from 01:02:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - which is almost linear done. I hope fixed.

really nice, you can call me back whenever you want

1. 00:38:322 (3,1) - you should stack these to be consistent with 00:50:341 (3,1) + for readability

1. 01:51:078 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these circles and they don't really accent anything, im sure the rhythm would feel nicer if you deleted them

sukiNathan wrote:

recheck

[Hyper]

1. 00:38:322 (3,1) - you should stack these to be consistent with 00:50:341 (3,1) + for readability Great.

[Exitra]

1. 01:51:078 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these circles and they don't really accent anything, im sure the rhythm would feel nicer if you deleted them i recheck listen to 25% speed sound be careful, so, my answer http://puu.sh/kEAuM/e3a0b2ccde.jpg i can hear (4) part (i added whistle this part, these piano part). if you can't agree this, please call me again!

Yuii- wrote:

You have a lot of red lines having a different volume and sampleset that the green line on the same spot as you can see over here:


Please, check this carefully because they appear a lot of time throughout almost all the difficulties.

More examples: 2 3 4.

Very good mapset, overall! Hope to see it ranked soon! <3