FELT - Story · forum

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-12T14:40:07+00:00

Hi there, as requested.

Title: Story
Artist: FELT
Source: 東方Project
Reference: http://feltmusic.net/FELT005/
Too lazy to do a research on tags.

Poke me if you have any other questions, good luck!

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-08-12T21:31:40+00:00

Squirrel

Squirrel wrote:
hey there c:
here's the mod you requested
rather short, but hopefully helpful >o<
also: I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me :3

F Ant's Easy
overall a nice diff, but sadly very repetetive :c consistency is the key in Easy diff.
00:15:954 (2) - the slider should end on the red tick here at 00:16:322 - instead, because the sound is too dominant to be skipped. the slider even starts on a similar sound. you can start another slider on the downbeat, so it doesn't go unmapped: My previous pattern was the 2nd choice of yours XD. but I change it to be like this because it was modded and looks weird if I suddenly put 1/2 snap without anything have a big effect. So I change it.

If you think it's too hard for an Easy you could also extend the second slider, to make it easier to catch it:

but, imo, the first screen should work alright, you use similar rhythms later on in the diff. c:
00:58:469 (4) - why is this snapped to 1/8? o.o yea.... lol
01:55:157 (1,2) - gap feels weird here. beat goes on, vocals go on to. maybe you can try this rhythm instead: It's because I prefer fully follow the instrument.

similar: 01:58:101 (1,2) - etc
02:22:396 (1) - til 02:45:954 (1) - is this the first Kiai just flipped? completely? :C I don't know.. of course, people can do that and it's fine, but the song is sooooo repetetive... copying this long section and just flipping it over to the other side makes it worse. it's just boring to play. (maybe not for anyone, but still.) You can keep the rhythm, but pretty pretty please change the placement. at least at some parts. ;_; I think it's okay to keep it like this since it's an Easy diff. Like I said before, consistency is the key in Easy diff. It will be really boring if it applied for the diff that looks hard.
03:58:469 (1) - spinner's long enough, so to emphasize the beat at 03:58:469 - better add a circle there and shorten the spinner accordingly? I'm sorry, I don't know where should I put the spinner start ;w;
F Ant's Normal
diff is alright as it is. I don't agree with most rhythms and the flow, but that's just my personal preferance, so I won't say anything about that. owo
sooo, my only suggestion: 03:58:469 (1) - same as in Easy yea~~ like I said in Easy :3

welp, that's all from me. (tired of the song, sorry.. orz)
Hope I could help! If you have questions - feel free to ask
Good luck! //squee

Umi

Umi wrote:

F Ant's Easy
00:15:954 (2) - until now u were following the piano (like 00:12:089 (1,2,3) - or 00:09:144 (1,2,3) - ) but suddendly u're skipping it at 00:16:322 - , u should better keep the rythm consistent. I think it's a good point to put a transition since I hear a long guitar at 00:16:506 - that I think it's not really a good idea to ignore it.
00:33:991 (3) - i'd curve a bit this slider to the left, it give a pretty nice follow toward 00:35:095 (4) - I'll keep it straight with 00:32:703 (1) - .
SPOILER
01:30:862 (4) - how about adding a reverse on this slider with a finish on end and then start the spinner at 01:32:150 - where the voice is actually starting, give a try. I prefer add a circle rather than put a reverse because I think 01:31:598 - has a big effect :3 . Fixed~.
01:59:758 (2) - the finish on head isn't needed, it doesn't emphasize anything. removed
02:45:218 (4,1) - this is pretty much the same suggestion as 01:30:862 (4) - reverse on slider and spinner starting at 02:46:506 - Yup
03:33:807 (4,1) - same as before ~ Yup
03:39:696 (2,1) - guess what ;p I know ;p

F Ant's Normal
00:16:506 (3) - I'd delete the reverse on the slider for two reason, firstly u won't skip piano sound at 00:17:611 - and secondly, u're generally willing to click on heavy beats (big white ticks) like this one 00:17:979 - so having a note or slider starting here would be more pleasant to play. here a suggestion of pattern I change it to make a consistency with Easy diff
SPOILER
00:53:132 - Adding a note here would follow the voice perfectly Sorry, I follow the instrument ;w; I hear the drum paused on 00:52:948 - , so I think it looks good if the note was stopped there.
00:53:868 (2) - move this slider above (1), the movement feel more natural, here what i mean I'll keep mine since it's still not flowed badly. And I want to put some variation flows too :3.
SPOILER
01:19:819 (1,2) - same as above same as above
01:31:782 (1) - like i mentioned on your easy, u should start the spinner where the voice is getting high, so at 01:31:782 (1) - and this go for the others spinners as well ( 02:46:138 (1) - // 03:34:727 (1) - // 03:40:617 (1) - ) okay ;p

that's it, Good set overall, gl

Yohanes wrote:
@Blizs On normal 00:21:660 (2) - missing clap? added */me Give kudos to Yohanes XD

Thanks for mods >w<~~~

Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-13T05:10:45+00:00

Updated!

Thanks for the metadata check Kwan

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-09-04T05:00:09+00:00

~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Fanta's easy]

01:59:758 - Use Additions Drum-clap instead a whistle there? then just clap there without Additions Drum? since you just suddenly change the rhythm, I think you should have consistent hitsound like you did on 01:55:157 (1,2,3) - and 02:01:046 (1,2,3) -
On these rhythm 01:55:157 (1,2) - 01:58:101 (1,2) - 02:01:046 (1,2) - Maybe you should try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZkW5/9d163cec63.jpg it'll better on cover both vocal and instrument there, because I'm not sure why you change the rhythm drastic so suddenly

Sisanya bagus

[Fanta's Normal]

00:52:396 - How about add a circle there with whistle? so the rhythm will follow the piano sequences there
01:05:831 (3) - I don't think that (3) with will represent anything imo, then this 01:07:120 (4) - should be stop around here 01:07:120 - if you want a stop moment on this part 01:07:304 towards the kiai, so try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg
02:19:451 (3,4) - Same as above, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg
01:12:089 - Delete whistle there? a bit contradictive with clap imo, doesn't sounds good
01:22:580 - Add whistle will sound better
02:00:126 - How about add a circle there? somewhat same as the first one I mention
02:55:524 - Add clap there? then use a whistle here 02:55:892 - instead a clap, lastly replace whistle with clap here 02:56:076 -
02:58:837 (2,3,4) - Tbh I'm not sure what are you try to follow there, kinda bad rhythm if I say, try this rhythm instead 02:58:837 (2,3,4) - so you can improve the curent rhythm
03:05:279 - 03:06:015 - Use whistle instead clap there?

[Hard]

00:51:660 (1,2) - Following the strong vocal on (2), you can swap NC on those two imo
01:12:641 (5) - How about change into a 1/2 slider instead and add circle here 01:13:009 -? I know you're trying to follow that long vocal, but kinda bad if I say because you skipped strong drum sound here 01:12:825 - , something like
02:26:997 (5) - Same as above
01:27:549 - Add circle there? because you skip the strong drum sound there
02:41:905 - Same as above
01:37:856 (2,4,5,6) - Move (4,5,6) somewhere else? it's overlapping with (2)
02:20:003 (4) - You can improve the rhythm there by shorter that slider into 1/1 instead and add circle here 02:20:555 - and here 02:20:739 - and a bit readjust the spinner, something like http://puu.sh/jZo3j/d933a93da3.jpg
02:42:089 (5,6,1) - Tbh the placement kinda too force, furthermore both transition and flow kinda bad there imo

[Fizz's Hard]

01:31:046 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try to nerf it a bit, by reducing the jump between triplet. Because it's a bit too hard to have triplet with large jump on Hard
02:27:549 (1,2,3) - How about ctrl+g them and move to x:136 y:60? beause the movement from 02:27:733 (3,4,5) - especially after the triplet kinda not comfortable imo, rather too sharp and sudden if I say
03:49:635 (2,4) - About the hitsound on those two, Im not sure why you're doing that, I mean you can have same hitsound like you did on 03:46:690 (2,4) - for consistency, furthermore using finish sound kinda not fit imo

Sweet

[Lunatic]

00:16:506 (1) - You can improve the rhythm by make the spinner a bit shorter, so this strong beat 00:17:979 - more clickable, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZpbp/e84ef3a1de.jpg, don't forget readjust the green line on red tick
00:20:739 (7) - How we move from (6,7,8) kinda not comfortable imo, so how about move that (7) to x:152 y:356?
00:55:065 (2,3) - Try not to stacking them, do something like http://puu.sh/jZoZL/32fd7cc6de.jpg it's more common to use these days
01:13:561 (3,4) - How about ctrl+g that? I prefer to make triangle pattern there, so it can improve the overall flow
02:06:384 (1,2) - How about move both to x:208 y:112? so it can improve the straight and triangle pattern
03:01:230 (2,1,2,3) - Reduce the jumps please, so the polarity more readable, idk why you put so much big jump there ;(
03:08:592 (1) - Maybe you can move that down a bit? because the movement kinda too crampped from 03:08:408 (2,1) - . Then try to consider nerf down
the overall jumps here 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - especially 03:09:328 (1,2) - kinda overdone to me

Spacingnya jauh jauh bgt ga ngerti deh -_- lebih condong ke random placing menurut aku

[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-04T10:57:52+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
[Fizz's Hard]
01:31:046 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try to nerf it a bit, by reducing the jump between triplet. Because it's a bit too hard to have triplet with large jump on Hard well, it IS an insane, not a hard, but I nerfed it a bit
02:27:549 (1,2,3) - How about ctrl+g them and move to x:136 y:60? beause the movement from 02:27:733 (3,4,5) - especially after the triplet kinda not comfortable imo, rather too sharp and sudden if I say stacked the triple
03:49:635 (2,4) - About the hitsound on those two, Im not sure why you're doing that, I mean you can have same hitsound like you did on 03:46:690 (2,4) - for consistency, furthermore using finish sound kinda not fit imo listen to the music, I'm mimicking what's in the percussion

Sweet thank you~

update

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Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-05T13:31:12+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Hard]
00:51:660 (1,2) - Following the strong vocal on (2), you can swap NC on those two imo right
01:12:641 (5) - How about change into a 1/2 slider instead and add circle here 01:13:009 -? I know you're trying to follow that long vocal, but kinda bad if I say because you skipped strong drum sound here 01:12:825 - , something like No problem, fixed
02:26:997 (5) - Same as above ^
01:27:549 - Add circle there? because you skip the strong drum sound there Y
02:41:905 - Same as above Y
01:37:856 (2,4,5,6) - Move (4,5,6) somewhere else? it's overlapping with (2) geser (2) dikit ke atas
02:20:003 (4) - You can improve the rhythm there by shorter that slider into 1/1 instead and add circle here 02:20:555 - and here 02:20:739 - and a bit readjust the spinner, something like http://puu.sh/jZo3j/d933a93da3.jpg Sure, nice
02:42:089 (5,6,1) - Tbh the placement kinda too force, furthermore both transition and flow kinda bad there imo I kinda like this pattern, so I'm not changing anything
[Lunatic]
00:16:506 (1) - You can improve the rhythm by make the spinner a bit shorter, so this strong beat 00:17:979 - more clickable, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZpbp/e84ef3a1de.jpg, don't forget readjust the green line on red tick Alright
00:20:739 (7) - How we move from (6,7,8) kinda not comfortable imo, so how about move that (7) to x:152 y:356? Keep this, but I tweak the slider slightly
00:55:065 (2,3) - Try not to stacking them, do something like http://puu.sh/jZoZL/32fd7cc6de.jpg it's more common to use these days Y
01:13:561 (3,4) - How about ctrl+g that? I prefer to make triangle pattern there, so it can improve the overall flow I don't really like triangle pattern that's not ended at the top circle I hope you get what I mean So, I'll keep it
02:06:384 (1,2) - How about move both to x:208 y:112? so it can improve the straight and triangle pattern Y
03:01:230 (2,1,2,3) - Reduce the jumps please, so the polarity more readable, idk why you put so much big jump there ;( Reduced
03:08:592 (1) - Maybe you can move that down a bit? because the movement kinda too crampped from 03:08:408 (2,1) - . Then try to consider nerf down
the overall jumps here 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - especially 03:09:328 (1,2) - kinda overdone to me Nerfed

Spacingnya jauh jauh bgt ga ngerti deh -_- lebih condong ke random placing menurut aku ._.
[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Thanks for the mods Mako

Sekarang nunggu Fanta selsai apply mods, baru update~

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-10T13:38:12+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Fanta's easy]
01:59:758 - Use Additions Drum-clap instead a whistle there? then just clap there without Additions Drum? since you just suddenly change the rhythm, I think you should have consistent hitsound like you did on 01:55:157 (1,2,3) - and 02:01:046 (1,2,3) - Fixed the first one. But I will keep the addition drum on the second point because I hear a tom in the song.
On these rhythm 01:55:157 (1,2) - 01:58:101 (1,2) - 02:01:046 (1,2) - Maybe you should try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZkW5/9d163cec63.jpg it'll better on cover both vocal and instrument there, because I'm not sure why you change the rhythm drastic so suddenly. I will keep the current pattern because I fullly follow the instrument here. And since they are consistent, I think it's okay.

Sisanya bagus Makasih >w<
[Fanta's Normal]
00:52:396 - How about add a circle there with whistle? so the rhythm will follow the piano sequences there Nope. I know there was a low volume piano on 00:52:396 - , but I think give a pause for the cymbal at 00:52:212 - would be good since it clearly heard.
01:05:831 (3) - I don't think that (3) with will represent anything imo, then this 01:07:120 (4) - should be stop around here 01:07:120 - if you want a stop moment on this part 01:07:304 towards the kiai, so try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg Remapped this part. But I use another pattern
02:19:451 (3,4) - Same as above, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg Remapped this part. But I use another pattern
01:12:089 - Delete whistle there? a bit contradictive with clap imo, doesn't sounds good deleted idk why did it there lol
01:22:580 - Add whistle will sound better cool!!
02:00:126 - How about add a circle there? somewhat same as the first one I mention I mapped full instrument here, so I think it will looks weird if I put a circle just for the vocal.
02:55:524 - Add clap there? then use a whistle here 02:55:892 - instead a clap, lastly replace whistle with clap here 02:56:076 - cool >w<
02:58:837 (2,3,4) - Tbh I'm not sure what are you try to follow there, kinda bad rhythm if I say, try this rhythm instead 02:58:837 (2,3,4) - so you can improve the curent rhythm try what rythm anyway I changed the pattern.
03:05:279 - 03:06:015 - Use whistle instead clap there? changed
[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Thanks for mod, Mako >w<
yaa I'm Fanta :33

Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-11T06:49:49+00:00

Updated!

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-09-11T20:25:04+00:00

Didn't know you were yaldo at first lol hi.

[General]

Additional tags:
Fizz Smug Fantastica Blizs
Since these are your GDers
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is.

[Fizz]

00:12:089 (1,2) - Bad flow break make it smooth here.
00:22:948 (3) - Offbeat slider, switch with 2 circles.
00:40:433 (2,3) - Bad because tails end on strong beats. Suggestion:
http://puu.sh/k7T8x/2d8a6940da.jpg
01:06:752 (2) - Switch with two circles, both beats are of same intensity.
01:30:494 (2,3) - This should be spaced out, stack takes away too much momentum.
01:40:985 (3) - Switch with slider + circle b3ecause strong finish beat on tail.
02:03:991 (1) - 2 circles because strong beats.
02:38:776 (2) - ^, definitely because finish on tail is always a bad sign.
03:28:285 (7) - Ctrl+g for more intense movement
03:33:622 (3,4) - This doesn't work out as it follows nothing properly (not even vocals, they start at 03:33:807 - first).
03:33:622 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+g this and see how it fits the song.

[Lunatic]

Suboptimal rhythm patterns that leave out important beats or work against the layer of music you're trying to follow:
00:08:408 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 4's tail ends on a strong piano beat.
00:11:169 (2,3,4,5) - 2 ends on a strong beat.
00:13:930 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^, reversearrow in this case.
00:34:727 (4) - Goes over too many important beats.
00:35:647 (1,2,3,1) - Not recommended due to offbeat sliders and because piano is not what is dominant at this place.
00:51:476 (5) - ^
01:01:414 (3) - Goes over too many important drum beats.
01:08:960 (1) - 01:11:905 (2) - ^. You're doing this issue over and over again, please revisit these things properly. It might follow the vocal line, but consider the stronger beats as your main priority to map out.
01:37:856 (2,3,4) - 02:25:524 (2) - ^ etc.
02:04:911 (2) - Never ever do this, you're starting from a weak beat and end on a finisher.
01:08:500 (3) - Overmapped, should be at 01:08:316 -
00:10:433 (5,1) - Compare to 00:07:488 (1) - which sounds identical.
00:15:034 (5) - Finish too strong, whistle
Dysfunctional emphasis on certain beats:
00:23:500 (2) - Low spacing although this is as strong as 00:23:316 (1) -
01:17:795 (3,4) - 4 needs more emphasis.
01:20:371 (3) - Way too high emphasis compared to what it is representing in the song.
01:21:844 (3,5) - Stack for higher emphasis on 5.
01:23:684 (3,4) - Low spacing on 4
03:18:899 (6,7,1) - Low spacing on 1 although it's strongest beat here.
03:44:113 (5,6) - way too high.
Missing triples/ministreams:
00:23:776 -
00:58:746 -
02:39:236 - 03:27:825 -
Listen closer to the drums, there's more of these.
00:26:077 (2) - Crop by 1/4 and set a circle on the white tick to follow drums
02:24:788 (4) - Destroys your pattern.

Lower diffs look fine as i could see on first glance. Fizz' diff is nice too, although some rhythm patterns aren't very nice because of passive hitsounding (many claps on slidertails).
Lunatic needs a lot of work as rhythms are wonky and spacing is unrefined due to mentioned issues. Doesn't mean it's bad, but you should work on it still. Good luck! /o/

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2015-09-15T06:42:15+00:00

Apa kabar

[Hard]
00:54:604 (1,3) - Swap new combo for vocal part?
02:20:923 (1) - I think short spinner would having a bad gameplay though because some players couldn't spin well. Perhaps, extend it or replace with slider?
02:28:285 (1) - Make a blanket combo?

[Fizz's Insane]
00:43:193 (5,6) - Remove (6) and extend (5) by 1/2 for following vocal like you did in previous slider?
01:31:598 (1) - Why new combo? Any reason?
02:45:954 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
03:03:438 (1) - Why whistle at start?

That's all I got, good luck

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-16T09:19:13+00:00

Pho wrote:
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is.

I will keep use F Ant for the diff name like I did on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/660951&m=0 . So people still can notice me as Fantastica :3

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-16T09:40:58+00:00

Phoi

Pho wrote:
Didn't know you were yaldo at first lol hi. Ahahah

[General]
Additional tags:
Fizz Smug Fantastica Blizs
Since these are your GDers
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is. Yeah, he wants it
[Lunatic]
Suboptimal rhythm patterns that leave out important beats or work against the layer of music you're trying to follow:
00:08:408 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 4's tail ends on a strong piano beat. ✓
00:11:169 (2,3,4,5) - 2 ends on a strong beat.
00:13:930 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^, reversearrow in this case. ✓
00:34:727 (4) - Goes over too many important beats. ✓
00:35:647 (1,2,3,1) - Not recommended due to offbeat sliders and because piano is not what is dominant at this place.
00:51:476 (5) - ^
01:01:414 (3) - Goes over too many important drum beats.
01:08:960 (1) - 01:11:905 (2) - ^. You're doing this issue over and over again, please revisit these things properly. It might follow the vocal line, but consider the stronger beats as your main priority to map out.
01:37:856 (2,3,4) - 02:25:524 (2) - ^ etc.
02:04:911 (2) - Never ever do this, you're starting from a weak beat and end on a finisher.
01:08:500 (3) - Overmapped, should be at 01:08:316 - ✓
00:10:433 (5,1) - Compare to 00:07:488 (1) - which sounds identical.
00:15:034 (5) - Finish too strong, whistle ✓
Dysfunctional emphasis on certain beats:
00:23:500 (2) - Low spacing although this is as strong as 00:23:316 (1) -
01:17:795 (3,4) - 4 needs more emphasis.
01:20:371 (3) - Way too high emphasis compared to what it is representing in the song. ✓
01:21:844 (3,5) - Stack for higher emphasis on 5. ✓
01:23:684 (3,4) - Low spacing on 4 Nah, while playing it's alright
03:18:899 (6,7,1) - Low spacing on 1 although it's strongest beat here. ✓
03:44:113 (5,6) - way too high. ✓
Missing triples/ministreams:
00:23:776 -
00:58:746 -
02:39:236 - 03:27:825 -
Listen closer to the drums, there's more of these.
00:26:077 (2) - Crop by 1/4 and set a circle on the white tick to follow drums
02:24:788 (4) - Destroys your pattern. I don't think so :/
Lower diffs look fine as i could see on first glance. Fizz' diff is nice too, although some rhythm patterns aren't very nice because of passive hitsounding (many claps on slidertails).
Lunatic needs a lot of work as rhythms are wonky and spacing is unrefined due to mentioned issues. Doesn't mean it's bad, but you should work on it still. Good luck! /o/

Sorry for taking so long to reply, my internet is on her period lately ._.
I think I need to talk about things that I don't reply directly, so if I had time I'll pm you in-game

Leo

Leorda wrote:
Apa kabar heiyo ^^

[Hard]
00:54:604 (1,3) - Swap new combo for vocal part? Oh, yeah
02:20:923 (1) - I think short spinner would having a bad gameplay though because some players couldn't spin well. Perhaps, extend it or replace with slider? I'll replace it with slider
02:28:285 (1) - Make a blanket combo? current one is fine imo

[Lunatic]
03:03:438 (1) - Why whistle at start? Ok, removed

That's all I got, good luck Okei

Thanks for the mod

I'll upload it once Fizz give me an update and after I finished fixed some problems

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-18T12:36:45+00:00

Pho wrote:
[Fizz]
00:12:089 (1,2) - Bad flow break make it smooth here. i don't see why it's bad
00:22:948 (3) - Offbeat slider, switch with 2 circles. following the piano sound
00:40:433 (2,3) - Bad because tails end on strong beats. Suggestion: done
01:06:752 (2) - Switch with two circles, both beats are of same intensity. exactly, both are same intensity so they're a slider. plus it helps emphasise the 1's power
01:30:494 (2,3) - This should be spaced out, stack takes away too much momentum. done
01:40:985 (3) - Switch with slider + circle b3ecause strong finish beat on tail. i don't like how slider + circle feels, I think the reverse does well to represent the "wind down" part
02:03:991 (1) - 2 circles because strong beats. done
02:38:776 (2) - ^, definitely because finish on tail is always a bad sign. done
03:28:285 (7) - Ctrl+g for more intense movement done
03:33:622 (3,4) - This doesn't work out as it follows nothing properly (not even vocals, they start at 03:33:807 - first).
03:33:622 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+g this and see how it fits the song. i really really like this rhythm for a lot of reasons, but the main one is that it keeps rhythmic consistency with the whole slow part

Leorda wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
00:43:193 (5,6) - Remove (6) and extend (5) by 1/2 for following vocal like you did in previous slider? i'm not sure i understand your suggestion, so no change
01:31:598 (1) - Why new combo? Any reason? downbeat
02:45:954 (1) - ^ ^

thank you for the mods, and sorry for late reply ;w;

update

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 67258
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
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Title:Story
TitleUnicode:Story
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:Yohanes
Version:Fizz's Insane
Source:東方Project
Tags:美歌 NAGI☆ Mika Reitaisai SP2 kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View フラワリングナイト東方花映塚 th09 Sakuya Izayoi Flowering Night Touhou Rebirth Story yaldo_27 Fantastica Blizs Fizz
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290,197,231383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,225,231475,2,0,L|217:205,1,70.1250013375282,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
326,332,231844,2,0,L|393:313,1,70.1250013375282,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,289,232212,6,0,L|118:314,1,82.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,367,232580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,220,232764,2,0,L|151:52,1,165,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,120,233316,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,57,233500,6,0,P|432:65|477:165,1,165,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,245,234052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,205,234236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,205,234328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,205,234420,2,0,P|261:211|207:208,1,82.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,136,234788,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,156,234972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,222,235156,6,0,L|19:348,1,123.75,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,361,235525,2,0,P|65:361|104:336,1,82.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,186,235893,2,0,L|177:268,1,82.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,346,236261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,279,236445,6,0,L|357:106,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,235,236997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,216,237181,2,12,L|438:43,1,165,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,37,237733,2,0,L|218:43,2,41.25,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,37,238469,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,238561,12,2,244635,0:0:0:0:

KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-09-21T14:08:38+00:00

Hello~! from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:10:433 (3,4) - bad flow , slider (3) shape is bad (imo)
00:22:580 (3,4) - more neater blanket? o.o
00:08:408 (4) - how about changing this slider to 2 circles on the white ticks
00:35:095 (4,1) - more neater blanket
00:45:402 (2,3) - ctrl+g better to follow vocals
01:11:721 (2,3) - I don't like the rhythm something like that better :

easy

03:51:475 (3) - this slider is bad , remove it and add a circle on the white tick

[Normal]
00:49:451 (4,1) - more neater blanket
03:56:261 - missing note

[Hard]
00:10:433 (3) - this slider should end here 00:10:801 - and add a circle here 00:10:985 -
00:20:187 (6,3) - overlap
02:22:396 (1,2) - bad flow something like this works forgot to picture something else , blanket (2) too

hard

02:28:101 (8,1) - blanket?
03:06:567 (1,3) - overlap

[Fizz's Insane]
02:57:733 (1) - this spin should start here 02:57:181 - or here 02:58:101 -
03:30:678 (3,1) - overlap

[Lunatic]
00:10:433 (5,1) - ctrl+g for better rhythm

01:58:102 (4,1) - ctrl+g (4) and fix blanket
03:02:518 (2,3) - fix blanket
03:02:794 (3,1) - overlap

Good mapset

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-22T16:18:42+00:00

KASUM1

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~! from #modreqs

[Hard]
00:10:433 (3) - this slider should end here 00:10:801 - and add a circle here 00:10:985 - Nah, to many things to click for this diff
00:20:187 (6,3) - overlap It's alright, since 6 has already disappear before 3 shows up
02:22:396 (1,2) - bad flow something like this works forgot to picture something else , blanket (2) too Ok
02:28:101 (8,1) - blanket? Nah, I like mine better
03:06:567 (1,3) - overlap Uh, i believe this one is alright

[Lunatic]
00:10:433 (5,1) - ctrl+g for better rhythm I kinda like this triangle pattern, no change
01:58:102 (4,1) - ctrl+g (4) and fix blanket ctrl+g would make the spacing way to big, and I don't really want to curve second slider even further
03:02:518 (2,3) - fix blanket Kay
03:02:794 (3,1) - overlap Yeah, this one is on purpose and I believe this is alright too

Good mapset <3

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Sorry I didn't change much, thanks for the mod anyway KASUM1

As usual, I'll update when my guests already finished applying mod

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-24T12:03:43+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
02:57:733 (1) - this spin should start here 02:57:181 - or here 02:58:101 - I like where it starts: on the downbeat with the crash cymbal, but I don't mind your suggestions here
03:30:678 (3,1) - overlap intentional

sorry for no changes, but thanks for the mod :3

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-25T11:15:15+00:00

KASUM1

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~! from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:10:433 (3,4) - bad flow , slider (3) shape is bad (imo) I think it's not really bad since there's so many people use this shape.
00:22:580 (3,4) - more neater blanket? o.o I'm not sure if it have blanket problem.
00:08:408 (4) - how about changing this slider to 2 circles on the white ticks I will keep mine. The pitch on the piano looks decreased so I think I will use just the higher pitch as click. And I want to keep consistency with 00:11:353 (4) - and 00:14:298 (4) -
00:35:095 (4,1) - more neater blanket I'm not sure if it have blanket problem.
00:45:402 (2,3) - ctrl+g better to follow vocals I want to keep 00:45:770 - as click for reversed slider because the vocal looks have a high pitch there.
01:11:721 (2,3) - I don't like the rhythm something like that better : I won't to ignore the vocal emphasis on 01:12:273 -
03:51:475 (3) - this slider is bad , remove it and add a circle on the white tick ummm..... I'm not really understand why the slider is bad.

[Normal]
00:49:451 (4,1) - more neater blanket Okay
03:56:261 - missing note I don't want to kill new players with sustained notes. And I hear a big effect cymbal on 03:56:076 - That I think it deserve a pause :3

Good mapset

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Thanks for your mods >w<
Update :
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Oh and additional mod for Lunatic :3

Lunatic

Maybe you can reduce the OD by 1 (OD=7). Since there's so many notes that have no recovery time from spinners to notes. it will frustrating for the players that not really good in spinning. They spinning and the score still not come out. When the score come oute, the spinners finished and continued with notes without recovery time. That's why it will frustrating (I'm not really good in spinning XD). But if we reduce the OD, the players can recovery after the score appear.
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - Straight notes looks doesnt really fit here since it looks broke the flow. How about move 01:15:770 (2) - to stack with 01:14:298 (2) - instead ?
02:06:199 (4,1) - Switch NC ? I think the vocal start on 02:06:199 - deserve the NC.
02:07:856 (3) - remove clap on the tail. I didn't hear any snares there.
02:51:475 (8,9,10,11,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3.
02:56:997 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3.
03:27:917 (3) - how about ctrl+g here ? Since I see that you generally use this flow in the whole diff (example 03:23:316 (3,4,1,2) - ). And it looks have a better flow too.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-25T12:03:55+00:00

Blizs wrote:
Oh and additional mod for Lunatic :3

Lunatic
Maybe you can reduce the OD by 1 (OD=7). Since there's so many notes that have no recovery time from spinners to notes. it will frustrating for the players that not really good in spinning. They spinning and the score still not come out. When the score come oute, the spinners finished and continued with notes without recovery time. That's why it will frustrating (I'm not really good in spinning XD). But if we reduce the OD, the players can recovery after the score appear. discussed in irc, no change
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - Straight notes looks doesnt really fit here since it looks broke the flow. How about move 01:15:770 (2) - to stack with 01:14:298 (2) - instead ? Actually, I like how this part plays. No change
02:06:199 (4,1) - Switch NC ? I think the vocal start on 02:06:199 - deserve the NC. Kay
02:07:856 (3) - remove clap on the tail. I didn't hear any snares there. Yea
02:51:475 (8,9,10,11,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3. asdf discussed in irc aswell, fixed
02:56:997 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3. ^
03:27:917 (3) - how about ctrl+g here ? Since I see that you generally use this flow in the whole diff (example 03:23:316 (3,4,1,2) - ). And it looks have a better flow too. Nah, I like this whole pattern to be smooth

Thanks Fanta!
Updated!

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-10-11T11:51:03+00:00

We did irc,

Log

2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Halloooo pap
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Aku mager periksaa nih
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Gimana dong
2015-10-09 14:34 Yohanes: Yehoo
2015-10-09 14:34 Yohanes: lol
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/705002 FELT - Story [F Ant's Normal]]
2015-10-09 14:35 Yohanes: yg berubah cuma lunatic sih sebenarnya
2015-10-09 14:35 Mako Sakata: Yahh
2015-10-09 14:35 Mako Sakata: Fantasticanya ga ada yah
2015-10-09 14:36 Yohanes: iya, lagi off dia nya
2015-10-09 14:39 Mako Sakata: Aku agak ganjil sama ini 03:07:856 (3) - di normal
2015-10-09 14:40 Mako Sakata: Kayanya lebih pas pake 1/2 slider ngikutin vokal, jadi gini http://puu.sh/kDMuF/806486a813.jpg
2015-10-09 14:41 Mako Sakata: Terus spinner ini 03:09:512 (1) - kok pake finish? padahal di easy pake suara default whistle
2015-10-09 14:41 Mako Sakata: Lebih cocok pake default wishtle kata aku mah
2015-10-09 14:46 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/704841 FELT - Story [Hard]]
2015-10-09 14:47 Mako Sakata: 00:29:758 (2) - Kalo itu nc bgmn kak? yang di hard
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: Oiya
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: yang normal nanti aku sampein si fanta
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: tapi aku setuju sih
2015-10-09 14:49 Yohanes: 00:29:758 (2) - NC-ed
2015-10-09 14:49 Mako Sakata: 01:38:592 (4,5,6) - Itu overlap kak pas dimainin sama 01:37:856 (2) - 
2015-10-09 14:49 Mako Sakata: Coba mungkin pindah 456 nya agak ke bawah deh
2015-10-09 14:51 Yohanes: ok
2015-10-09 14:51 Mako Sakata: Kak ajarin buat slider kaya gini dooong 02:20:739 (6) - 
2015-10-09 14:51 Mako Sakata: Lucu bentuknya
2015-10-09 14:52 Yohanes: itu aku ngawur bikinnya lol
2015-10-09 14:53 Yohanes: *asal jadi
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Aku harus jadi ngawur berarti biar bisa buat kaya gitu XD
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Kaaaaakk kalo ini dijadiin blanket 02:41:353 (4,5) - ?
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Somehow nanggung bgt
2015-10-09 14:54 Yohanes: 02:41:353 (4,5) - aku khawatir spacingnya
2015-10-09 14:55 Yohanes: 4 nya di curve lagi?
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Iya curve lg dikiit
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Kak kalo ctrl+g ini 02:48:899 (1,2) - bgmn?
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Somehow lebih enak mencet slider dulu baru circle
2015-10-09 14:57 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDN3G/0fc8b78081.jpg moga2 spacingnya gak jadi masalah
2015-10-09 14:58 Mako Sakata: Gpp kook
2015-10-09 14:59 Yohanes: 02:48:899 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/kDN7R/1e27f4ff53.jpg
2015-10-09 15:00 Mako Sakata: Okke
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: Kak tambah circle di sini 03:30:494 - ?
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: Somehow kerasa empty
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: http://puu.sh/kDNdK/5303bce26a.jpg
2015-10-09 15:03 Mako Sakata: Terus yang ini 03:31:598 (1,2) - menurut aku ritmenya agak ganjil, mungkin dijadiin kaya gini bagus kak http://puu.sh/kDNfr/81c70fe48f.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNl2/73a700236b.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Mako Sakata: Kak reverse yang ini aneh engga sih 03:47:426 (6) - sama 03:50:371 (6) - ? kayanya di situ cuma triplet deh, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus kak http://puu.sh/kDNkS/f1ea04a099.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Mako Sakata: Kaaaak kalo ada yang ngerasa ga cocok sama mod aku bilang aja yaa
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNmu/e04590fd89.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: oke
2015-10-09 15:07 Yohanes: sejauh ini gak ada masalah kok
2015-10-09 15:07 Mako Sakata: Oke oke
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Keren kak hardnya
2015-10-09 15:08 Yohanes: 03:47:426 (6,6) - kalo triplet & circle rasanya agak kosong
2015-10-09 15:08 Yohanes: jadinya nggak aku ubah
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Jadi mau keep aja?
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Oke deeh
2015-10-09 15:09 Yohanes: iya
2015-10-09 15:09 Yohanes: uww, thanks =w=
2015-10-09 15:18 Mako Sakata: Punya frizz juga udah keren kak
2015-10-09 15:19 Mako Sakata: Tapi entah hitsound bagian ini 03:49:635 (2,3,4) - agak ga enak
2015-10-09 15:19 Mako Sakata: Terutama clapnya
2015-10-09 15:22 Yohanes: bentar, aku bilang fizz dulu
2015-10-09 15:23 Mako Sakata: Oke oke
2015-10-09 15:23 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750896 FELT - Story [Lunatic]]
2015-10-09 15:25 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNUr/7d4754b855.jpg <<~ Fizz
2015-10-09 15:25 Mako Sakata: Mungkin 01:22:212 (4) - rotate 15 drajat kak? biar lebih enak ke (5) nya http://puu.sh/kDNVL/402f264c9a.jpg
2015-10-09 15:26 Mako Sakata: Okeeey
2015-10-09 15:28 Yohanes: 01:22:212 (4) - rotated
2015-10-09 15:30 Mako Sakata: Oke
2015-10-09 15:30 Mako Sakata: Kak aku mau tanya, 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - itu kok kombonya kaya gitu?
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: coz it looks cool
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: jk
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: buat readability
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: and it looks cool
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: sama kaya yang ini 03:55:156 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) -
2015-10-09 15:32 Mako Sakata: Hem
2015-10-09 15:32 Mako Sakata: Kalo yang ini 03:48:530 (7) - kok engga pake s:c1 clap kak?
2015-10-09 15:33 Mako Sakata: 03:57:365 (3) - kalo tambah clap?
2015-10-09 15:34 Mako Sakata: Aku seneng kalo meriksa map baguss XD
2015-10-09 15:34 Mako Sakata: Sedikit yang harus disebutin
2015-10-09 15:34 Yohanes: 03:48:530 (7) - s:c1 kan suaranya "ngebass" jadi rasanya kurang cocok kalo dipake di bagian yg suara instrument nya "tinggi"
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: ACTION can't explain properly
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Ga ngeeeeh
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: Thanks Makoo =w=
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Ohh
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: ~~~
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Jadi prefer whistle c:c1 aja?
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: *s:c2
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: iyap
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: 03:57:365 (3) - kalo tambah clap, terlalu berisik
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: emphasis nya nggak dapet imo
2015-10-09 15:36 Mako Sakata: Oh iyaaa sc2 XD
2015-10-09 15:36 Mako Sakata: Yaudah deh
2015-10-09 15:37 Mako Sakata: Kalo udah diupdate berkabar ya kak
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: oke oke~
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: aku nunggu fantastica online dulu
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: baru ntar update
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: oiya, hitsound-nya hard aku ubah
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: jadi mirip lunatic
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: mau di cek atau nggak usah?
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Ga usah kak
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Aku udah mager lagi
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: wkwkwk oke deh
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Aku percayaaaaa
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Kepada dirimu
2015-10-09 15:39 Mako Sakata: Yang menci
2015-10-09 15:39 Mako Sakata: Oke2
2015-10-09 15:39 Yohanes: lol okay~
2015-10-09 15:40 Yohanes: eh, nggak perlu kudos lagi kan?
2015-10-09 15:40 Yohanes: yg kemarin udah 2 :P
2015-10-09 15:41 Mako Sakata: Engga usaaaah
2015-10-09 15:41 Mako Sakata: Aku maunya uaaang $$$
2015-10-09 15:41 Yohanes: ._.
2015-10-09 15:41 dasar *beeb* *beeb*
2015-10-09 15:42 Yohanes: xD
2015-10-09 15:45 Mako Sakata: Beeb beeb atau beb beb
2015-10-09 15:45 Mako Sakata: Hayoooo
2015-10-09 15:50 Yohanes: LOL
2015-10-09 15:50 Yohanes: terserah, yang manapun boleh ;;)
2015-10-09 15:51 Yohanes: wwww

Good luck papa aldo and friends~

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-10-13T00:51:14+00:00

gratzz for first bubble, Yohan ;33

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2015-10-13T13:05:53+00:00

Wohooo!

[General]

For all diffs, I feel weird about the last kiai (start from 03:34:543 - - ) . I would like to give my opinion for them . About the previous kiai (start from 03:22:764 - - ), don't you think it would even more better to have it ended on 03:34:543 - ? 03:31:598 - End it on here feels nonsense for me . Then, you can just delete the next kiai section, because they feel really out of place in my point of view

[F Ant's Easy]

00:15:954 (2,3) - To catch the pianos, it is more greater to switch rhythm between these two . It won't affects the playability

[F Ant's Normal]

00:15:586 (2,3) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here, because (3) start on something not important at all . You may want to give more emphasis to 00:16:322 - , so how about try to remove reverse from (2), then place (3) on 00:16:322 - after reverse removed . It works even more better and sounds nice for me . 3/2 gap after this rhythm isn't affects too much, so I think it's fine to apply this point
03:29:205 - For me, there is no point to keep this beat/vocal being mapped along the song, because the next beat on 03:29:389 - is really more prominent . You may want to think out more this complaint . I have my own suggestion for this, hope you can try to use it once (With this rhythm, you will allowed to catch the vocals and drums more precise . The gaps are also constant, so it won't be a problem to have it like this)
SPOILER

[]
I assume the other diffs are fine . If you wasn't really sure about them, you can ask me again to check them entirely
Call me again after fix (Don't forget to tell me about your certainty for higher diffs)

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-10-14T10:19:20+00:00

Ipas wrote:
Wohooo!

[General]
For all diffs, I feel weird about the last kiai (start from 03:34:543 - - ) . I would like to give my opinion for them . About the previous kiai (start from 03:22:764 - - ), don't you think it would even more better to have it ended on 03:34:543 - ? 03:31:598 - End it on here feels nonsense for me . Then, you can just delete the next kiai section, because they feel really out of place in my point of view I'll let Yohan fix mine :3
[F Ant's Easy]
00:15:954 (2,3) - To catch the pianos, it is more greater to switch rhythm between these two . It won't affects the playability Nice >w< some people mentioned about it but I can't find a nice pattern for it. fixed
[F Ant's Normal]
00:15:586 (2,3) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here, because (3) start on something not important at all . You may want to give more emphasis to 00:16:322 - , so how about try to remove reverse from (2), then place (3) on 00:16:322 - after reverse removed . It works even more better and sounds nice for me . 3/2 gap after this rhythm isn't affects too much, so I think it's fine to apply this point Hmmm... I think you have a point here. So fixed.
03:29:205 - For me, there is no point to keep this beat/vocal being mapped along the song, because the next beat on 03:29:389 - is really more prominent . You may want to think out more this complaint . I have my own suggestion for this, hope you can try to use it once (With this rhythm, you will allowed to catch the vocals and drums more precise . The gaps are also constant, so it won't be a problem to have it like this) Nope here. Since this is Normal diff, I want to try to make the pattern really easy to read. And I think put a 1/2 slider between 3/2 gap looks kinda hard to read.
SPOILER
[]
I assume the other diffs are fine . If you wasn't really sure about them, you can ask me again to check them entirely
Call me again after fix (Don't forget to tell me about your certainty for higher diffs)

Thanks for the mod, Ipas >w<
update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2015-11-02T09:07:10+00:00

Metadata done (semua dah bener......), next tinggal ngemodding beatmap....

good luck for your map.... i'm waiting your map in ranked/approved beatmaps.....

lumayan ngoleksi semua map felt di osu dan albumnya dikomputer..... (hampir semua koleksi album felt yang didapat)

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2015-12-23T03:12:04+00:00

oh damn gogogo

FELT is love~

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-01-20T07:03:32+00:00

Updated Blizs diff!
Also, make some changes on Lunatic...
I think rebubbling is necessary

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-01-20T07:42:30+00:00

After all this time😩😩😩😩

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-01-20T08:30:14+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
After all this time😩😩😩😩

Still better than leaving this map untouched & doing nothing orz
I'll rank this tho, hopefully

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2016-01-31T11:40:31+00:00

hype!!!

Riviclia

38 posts

Joined May 2012

Riviclia 2016-02-05T16:09:31+00:00

I want to mod this

F Ant's Easy

03:08:776 (4) - strong beats, two circles feel better

F Ant's Normal

02:00:310 (5) - http://puu.sh/mFAbF/7dc096121d.jpg

Hard

01:37:856 (2,3,4) - reduce distance
02:01:414 (1,2) - ^
02:25:892 (2) - two circles? voice sounds clear
03:09:328 (8) - put it under 6
03:18:530 (5) - two circles?.. voice sounds too clear

and I feel distances too inconsistent

Fizz's Insane

02:08:224 (1) - curve upward
02:10:433 (2) - move more away from 1, it looks like 1/1 between 2 and 3
02:21:107 (3,4) - change clap to whistle
03:06:567 (1,2) - far unlike others

Lunatic

02:04:911 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider and add circle
02:24:420 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/mUgSF/0be1fafc2a.jpg

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-04-05T08:11:14+00:00

@Riviclia : on Hard, fixed all except 03:09:328 (8) - Thank you for modding!

Remapped Lunatic from scratch!
Redownload please, thank you

Edit : I forgot to mention that I change the CC across all diffs, let me know if you want to revert it to older color

Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-04-08T09:49:03+00:00

free kds

2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: Hi battle
2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: can I ask 4 testplay?
2016-04-08 02:25 Battle: s u re
2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: oh, wait let me update it for a sec
2016-04-08 02:25 Battle: mk
2016-04-08 02:26 Yohanes: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944709 FELT - Story]
2016-04-08 02:26 Yohanes: L u n a t i c
2016-04-08 02:26 Battle: dling
2016-04-08 02:31 Yohanes: almost FC
2016-04-08 02:31 Battle: that one pattern
2016-04-08 02:31 Battle: that i broke at felt weird
2016-04-08 02:32 Yohanes: 03:46:506 (1,2,3) - ?
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: 03:46:046 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -  like
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: you could remove 03:46:230 (4) -  cuz like
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: i dunno, emphasizing the downbeat would probably be good
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: ah
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: i c kinda now
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: it feels kinda weird cuz in the section it like never follows up a stream w/ a slider
2016-04-08 02:33 Yohanes: yes
2016-04-08 02:34 Yohanes: that's the only time I use 1/2slider+duplet
2016-04-08 02:34 Battle: i dunno with the way it was playing, having that bit of variation made it like
2016-04-08 02:34 Battle: awk
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: i guess it's mostly cuz the whole 1/1 slider being there lol
2016-04-08 02:35 Yohanes: probably I should change the slider into circle instead (?)
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: ya
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: the slider after the stream
2016-04-08 02:36 Yohanes: alright
2016-04-08 02:36 Yohanes: is there anything else maybe?
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: and i think it's like a personal thing but like
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: the pauses before the kiai really take away from like the momentum 
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: during play
2016-04-08 02:37 Yohanes: I like the pause actually lol
2016-04-08 02:37 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:37 Yohanes: cuz it emphasize the drums quite well
2016-04-08 02:37 Battle: tru
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: hm
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: 02:20:739 (1) -  maybe for this map it out?
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: so that way the pause is more emphasized?
2016-04-08 02:38 Yohanes: drums are too weak to be mapped imo
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: originally I put a spinner there
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: hm
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: fair enough
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: and I think the "Whoooaaaaazzzzzzz" sound is more important
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: lol
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: since the whoooooosh sound 
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: is like
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: bam
2016-04-08 02:40 Battle: 00:54:604 (1,2,3) -  btw these triggered me lmao
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: that's about it lol
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: you can count me as "out of idea where to put it"
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: alright
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: i dunno what's going on with the stack leniency there
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: did the triplets feels weird?
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: on kiai
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: mm naw
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: oh
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: increase stack leniency
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: so they'll stack
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: for those things 
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: cuz there's a few places where stack leniency kinda fks up visuals
2016-04-08 02:42 Yohanes: yeah, probably I should mess around with that
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: i never turned on stacking on editor
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: lo
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: cuz it's like
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: aaaa
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: so I don't know how they look while playing
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: lol
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: i have stacks on on editor
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: well
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: i turned it on now
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: mmmmmm
2016-04-08 02:44 Yohanes: and realized how disgusting this one looks 00:54:604 (1,2,3) -
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: lmaoooo
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: yepppppp
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: 8 sl makes it stack
2016-04-08 02:45 Yohanes: true
2016-04-08 02:45 Yohanes: that doesn't affect gameplay in every way right?
2016-04-08 02:46 Yohanes: just affect the visuals
2016-04-08 02:46 Battle: ya but it looks real distracting lol
2016-04-08 02:46 Battle: with it not stacked
2016-04-08 02:47 Battle: visuals only
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: alright, nice
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: now I'll turned it off
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: stacking I mean, because
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: you know
2016-04-08 02:48 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:48 Yohanes: to keep my sanity

Modem

3,013 posts

Joined February 2014

Modem 2016-08-07T16:07:17+00:00

>v<

21:07 Yohanes: Hai Modem! :D
21:07 Yohanes: test hard diff map aku bisa nggak?
21:07 Modem: Hm, oke :3
21:08 *Yohanes is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1049109 FELT - Story]
21:08 Yohanes: Barusan remap hard soalnya
21:09 Modem: Downloading~
21:09 Modem: Tapi aku gak jago-jago banget. Gak papa nih? o.o
21:10 Yohanes: Nggak apa
21:10 Yohanes: justru bagus malah wkwkwkw
21:10 Modem: owo
21:10 Modem: Oke then >3<
21:10 Yohanes: :D
21:18 Yohanes: :3
21:22 Modem: Huwa that's embarassing XD
21:22 Yohanes: :DDD
21:22 Modem: Laptopnya ngelag pas kiai time kedua =v=
21:22 Modem: Tapi hardnya asik kok. Nggak overmap owob
21:23 Yohanes: Ooo, pantesan :D
21:23 Yohanes: paling sekarang aku tahu bagian mana yg perlu perbaikan
21:23 Yohanes: btw
21:23 Modem: Hm? ovo
21:23 Yohanes: 02:49:451 (3,4,5,1) - ini nggak enak ya?
21:24 Modem: Hm, iya tadi agak kepeleset di situ o.o
21:24 Modem: Gimana kalau (4) nya nggak usah disembunyiin?
21:24 Yohanes: xD aku ganti deh
21:25 Yohanes: Kalo 5 aku taruh di 02:48:899 (1) - gimana?
21:25 Yohanes: atau 4 nya aku pindah?
21:25 Modem: Hm, sebentar, aku screenshot dulu :3
21:26 Modem: http://puu.sh/qsSTa/4e805bd4a8.jpg
21:26 Modem: Kalau gitu gimana? 
21:26 Modem: Jadi (5) distack sama headnya (2)
21:26 Modem: Trus (1) distack sama (4)
21:28 Yohanes: Ooo, boleh juga
21:28 Yohanes: changed!
21:28 Modem: Yay
21:29 Yohanes: ada yg lain nggak?
21:29 Yohanes: maksudnya yg perlu adjustment
21:29 Modem: Hm, ok aku cek dulu ya :3
21:32 Modem: 00:19:635 (4) - Gimana kalau di add whistle? 
21:32 Yohanes: Oke
21:32 Modem: Soalnya 00:22:580 (4) - sudah di add whistle :3
21:32 Modem: yay
21:33 Yohanes: ini hitsoundnya aku cuma copy dari lunatic lol
21:33 Modem: Oh XD
21:33 Yohanes: belum di ricek lagi wkwkw
21:33 Modem: xd
21:34 Modem: 00:57:549 (4) - Remove whistle dari headnya? Agak loud soalnya xd
21:36 Modem: 01:18:163 (1) - Ini kepalanya agak kurang ngestack sama kepalanya 01:16:874 (1) 
21:36 Yohanes: emm, ok deh
21:36 Modem: :D
21:36 Yohanes: stack fixed!
21:36 Modem: \:D
21:36 Yohanes: itu emang entah kenapa suka lari2 sendiri stacknya
21:36 Modem: \:D/
21:37 Modem: Iyap, mapku juga XD
21:37 Yohanes: xD
21:37 Modem: 01:21:107 (3) - Ekornya owo
21:38 Modem: Oya, disable Widescreen Supportnya
21:38 Yohanes: oh, nyala toh widescreen supportnya lol
21:38 Modem: XD
21:38 Yohanes: 01:21:107 (3) - kalo ini sih nggak bisa diapa-apain lagi xD
21:39 Modem: Oh xd
21:39 Yohanes: oh bisa ternyata
21:39 Yohanes: hahaha
21:39 Modem: Oh owo
21:39 Modem: 02:10:617 (3) - Um, ekor o3o
21:40 Yohanes: fixed!
21:40 Modem: :D
21:40 Modem: 02:20:739 (1,1) - I luv this
21:40 Yohanes: btw, ini 02:14:666 (5,1) - mainnya oke nggak?
21:41 Yohanes: thanks owo
21:42 Modem: :d
21:42 Modem: Hm, 02:14:666 (5,1) - Jumpnya agak kejauhan ya, considering downbeatnya sebenernya ada di 02:15:770 (3)
21:44 Yohanes: mmmm
21:45 Modem: Gimana kalau 02:15:034 (1) agak dibengkokin lagi -> http://puu.sh/qsTFM/b44b1a1702.jpg
21:45 Modem: Biar lebih comfortable pas jump :3
21:46 Yohanes: mmm, okelah aku bengkokin dikit lagi
21:46 Modem: \:D/
21:46 Modem: Trus remove NC di 02:15:034 (1) & add NC di 02:15:770 (3) 
21:47 Yohanes: Oiya
21:47 Yohanes: mabok NCan ku xDxD
21:47 Modem: XD
21:47 Modem: Aku juga sering gitu sampe dimarahin BN XD
21:48 Modem: 02:36:199 (3,1) - Yang ini jumpnya enak
21:48 Modem: Tapi ekornya 02:36:199 (3) uwu
21:48 Modem: 02:45:954 (4) - NC please />w</
21:48 Yohanes: xD, fixed
21:49 Yohanes: Ok
21:49 Modem: \:D/
21:50 Modem: 03:31:598 (5) - NC owo
21:50 Yohanes: Okk
21:50 Yohanes: 03:32:886 - perlu NC nggak?
21:51 Modem: Yup ^^
21:51 Yohanes: sipp
21:51 Modem: 03:08:408 (2) - Gimana kalau -> http://puu.sh/qsTWS/4a169756d5.jpg
21:52 Modem: Biar triangle pattern jumpnya lebih luwes owob
21:52 Modem: Trus lebih asik kalau 03:09:512 diremove reverse part nya trus diganti sama circle + NC
21:53 Modem: Trus distack di ekornya (2)
21:53 Yohanes: Hmm okelah~
21:53 Yohanes: tapi aku mau ada reverse nya disitu
21:53 Modem: Oh oki~
21:53 Yohanes: I just l;ove it for some reason xDD
21:54 Modem: owo
21:55 Modem: 03:40:432 (3) - NC owo
21:55 Modem: Trus remove NC di 03:39:328 (1) 
21:55 Yohanes: Aaaa, aku suka NC an nya kaya gitu
21:55 Yohanes: biar ngebedain mana yg 1/2 sama yg 1/1
21:56 Modem: Hm, oke then XD
21:56 Modem: 03:52:211 (4) - NC?
21:57 Yohanes: kayanya nggak usah ya
21:57 Modem: Hm, oke :3
21:57 Yohanes: kalo aku pindah2 NC nya nanti pattern selanjutnya NC nya jadi kependekan (?)
21:57 Yohanes: iya nggak sih? :3
21:58 Modem: Nggak deh, nanti NCnya kependekan xd
21:58 Modem: Oke, itu aja sih :3
21:58 Yohanes: Okeee
21:58 Modem: owo
21:59 Yohanes: kalo mod Lunatic sekalian gimana? :P:P:P
21:59 Yohanes: mau nggak? hahaha
21:59 Modem: Mod bisa tapi test playnya nggak XD
22:00 Yohanes: No prob :D
22:00 Modem: Gud owob
22:00 Modem: Ok
22:00 Modem: Hm
22:03 Modem: 00:07:948 (4,5) - Triple click nya bikin kaget o.o
22:03 Yohanes: wkwkwkwkww
22:04 Yohanes: itu sih nggak sengaja naruh circle
22:04 Modem: Soalnya spacingnya sama kayak 1/2 rhythm
22:04 Modem: Oh o.o
22:04 Yohanes: untung kamu lihat hahaha
22:04 Modem: XD 
22:04 Modem: Oke then owo
22:05 Modem: Oya ini diff extra ya?
22:05 Modem: Kenapa nggak pakai 4 Stack Leniency aja?
22:06 Modem: Biar 1/2 stack kayak 00:14:482 (1,3) lebih rapi :3 
22:06 Yohanes: lunatic sih
22:06 Yohanes: soalnya waktu itu
22:06 Yohanes: hueee
22:06 Yohanes: bentar2
22:07 Yohanes: kalo aku jadiin 4, 00:54:604 (1,2,3) - kelihatan jelek ._.
22:07 Yohanes: waktu itu aku udh rundingan dikit sih sama Battle
22:08 Modem: Walah, aku belom sampe situ XD
22:08 Modem: Oke :3
22:09 Yohanes: :D
22:12 Modem: 00:31:966 (3,4,5,6) - Gimana kalo ctrl + G (4) & (5) trus ctrl + G lagi (5) & (6) ?
22:12 Modem: Buat ngemphasize downbeat di 00:32:703 (1)
22:13 Modem: 00:32:703 (1) - Trus whistle di kepalanya diremove aja. Soalnya agak terlalu loud >.<
22:14 Yohanes: umm, aku pinginnya punya smooth flow disitu, jadi no change ._.
22:14 Yohanes: whistle removed
22:14 Modem: Oki
22:15 Modem: 00:40:801 (6) - Dibikin curvy aja biar (4) bisa ngestack di ekornya -> http://puu.sh/qsUXJ/33c7185a73.jpg
22:15 Modem: Trus flow ke 00:41:353 (7,8,9) juga lebih enak :3
22:15 Yohanes: aa, aku lebih suka kalo itu straight hahaha
22:15 Modem: 00:41:537 (9) - NC & remove NC di 00:42:089 (1) 
22:16 Yohanes: NC changed
22:16 Modem: 00:40:801 (6) Cuma suggestion kok, biar placementnya (4) nggak keliatan overlap aja XD
22:17 Yohanes: :D oke deh
22:17 Yohanes: btw, aku testplay mapnya Rumia bentar ya
22:17 Yohanes: bentar balik
22:17 Yohanes: hehehe
22:17 Modem: \:D/
22:17 Modem: Oke oke
22:23 Yohanes: tadaima
22:23 Modem: okaeri 
22:27 Modem: Okay then :3
22:28 Yohanes: gimana?
22:28 Yohanes: :D
22:28 Modem: 00:44:114 (5,6) - Jump ini entah kenapa kerasa lebih enak kalau di ctrl + G
22:29 Modem: 00:47:058 (1) - Remove NC di sini terus add NC di 00:47:426 (3) 
22:29 Yohanes: jadi konsisten gitu spacingnya?
22:30 Modem: Yup :3
22:30 Yohanes: Kalo tentang NC, itu buat readability pattern
22:30 Modem: Ok :3
22:30 Yohanes: imo kalo NC nya diganti jadinya kurang enak dilihat owo
22:30 Modem: XD
22:30 Modem: Oki oki
22:31 Modem: 01:01:966 (4,1) - Stack owo
22:32 Yohanes: kalo yg 00:46:874 (5,6) - aku lebih suka patternku sendiri
22:32 Yohanes: stacked
22:32 Modem: Hm, oke 
22:32 Modem: 01:13:930 (3,1) - Stack owo
22:33 Modem: Oh nevermind
22:33 Yohanes: xD
22:33 Modem: udah gak bisa digeser lagi ternyata XD
22:33 Yohanes: peppy plz
22:34 Modem: 01:15:770 (4,8,1) - Stack owo
22:35 Modem: 01:31:598 (6) - NC owo
22:36 Yohanes: no need to NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:36 Modem: Wow XD
22:36 Yohanes: xD
22:37 Modem: Aku terobsesi sama tradisi 'downbeat = NC' xd
22:37 Yohanes: memang seharunya gitu sih
22:38 Yohanes: pas mapping aku nggak pernah merhatiin downbeat atau bukan
22:38 Yohanes: asal taruh aja yg penting kelihatannya oke wkwkwk
22:38 Modem: XD
22:38 Modem: 01:41:813 (1) - Spinner ini gimana kalau dipendekin sampe 01:43:009 terus add a note + NC + whistle di 01:43:377 (1) ?
22:39 Modem: Rasanya lebih enak kalau 01:43:377 clickable :3
22:40 Modem: 02:01:046 (5) - Um, NC? ovo'
22:40 Yohanes: aku nggak suka kalo ada note persis setelah spinner
22:40 Modem: Hm, ok :3
22:41 Yohanes: wkwkw
22:41 Modem: Xd
22:41 Yohanes: no need to NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:42 Modem: XD 
22:42 Modem: Maklum, habit
22:42 Yohanes: hahaha
22:43 Modem: Plus ada jump di 02:00:862 (4,5) , jadi biar mempermudah ngasih warning aja ke player xd
22:43 Yohanes: kalo di NC follow circle nya malah hilang dong xD
22:44 Modem: Entahlah, pas dimarahin sama BN , aku juga ngira kayak gitu XD
22:44 Modem: Btw whistle di 02:01:046 (5) diilangin aja biar suara cymbalsnya jadi soft owo
22:45 Yohanes: hmm aku pikir lagi deh NC nya wkwkw
22:45 Yohanes: whistle removed
22:45 Modem: \:D/
22:47 Modem: 02:07:856 (4,1) - Blanket -> http://puu.sh/qsWpu/802d3feffe.jpg
22:48 Yohanes: ok
22:49 Modem: :D
22:49 Modem: 02:20:739 (3) - Lebih manteb kalau dibikin rounded flow kayak yang di hard owo
22:50 Modem: Gimana kalau kayak gini -> http://puu.sh/qsWxV/f0aa76ee96.jpg
22:51 Yohanes: Aku lebih suka punyaku, sorry ,_,
22:51 Yohanes: Nekoooo http://puu.sh/qsWDB/3587d86452.jpg
22:52 Modem: XDXDXD
22:52 Modem: No one noticed that before when I modded xd
22:52 Modem: Neko is the best =v=
22:52 Modem: 02:28:285 (3) - Um, add NC di sini trus remove NC di 02:27:917 (1) ? /runs
22:52 Yohanes: hahaha
22:53 Yohanes: back and forth jumps need NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:54 *Modem runs xd
22:55 Modem: 02:59:021 (2) - Ctrl + G ? :3
22:56 Modem: Would make a cute rounded flow owo
22:56 Yohanes: nanti jump nya ke 02:59:389 (3) - kejauhan dong ;;
22:57 Yohanes: lagipula, aku nggak terlalu suka flow begitu
22:57 Yohanes: sering banget sliderberak wkwkw
22:57 Yohanes: break
22:57 Yohanes: uuuuuuuuu
22:57 Modem: XDXDXD
22:58 Modem: Well soal spacing jumpnya nggak masalah kok, considering Lunatic = Extra/Insane+ di mapset ini :3
23:00 Yohanes: iya juga sih
23:00 Yohanes: aku pikirin lagi deh wkwkwk
23:00 Modem: Oki oki~ >w<
23:00 Yohanes: tapi belum aku ganti sekarang
23:00 Modem: Ok
23:01 Modem: 03:45:586 (1) - Kenapa slider ini dibikin slow mendadak? o.o
23:01 Yohanes: Di musiknya kan ada slowdown nya kan
23:02 Yohanes: somewhat kaya di tahan gitu
23:02 Yohanes: wkakwakwakwa aku nggak bisa ngejelasin yg bener
23:03 Modem: Hm yup, barusan aku playback ratenya aku slow kan jadi 25% bener suaranya agak ditahan :3
23:03 Modem: Oke then
23:03 Modem: 03:50:371 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This is soo coool
23:04 Yohanes: thankss!
23:04 Modem: owob
23:04 Modem: Ok, that's all~
23:04 Yohanes: wooo nice
23:05 Yohanes: post di thread ya~
23:05 Yohanes: 2 kudos lumayan wkwkw
23:05 Modem: owowowo
23:05 Modem: Yay~
23:05 Modem: Oki oki

Good luck~

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-08-07T16:15:27+00:00

Hey
I hate you pap

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-08-07T16:17:35+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hey
I hate you pap

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-08-08T10:17:53+00:00

M4M from my queue

[Hard]
not clear about your NC pattern...I suggest add NC at long white lines
01:06:936 (5) - change to 2 circles and make a jump may be better
01:08:960 (3,1,2,3,4) - they are the same position in music but you placed different spacing.why not just rorate by 72?
01:19:083 (1,2,3) - I personally suggest overlaping 1/4 in hard
01:20:371 (1,2,3,1,2) - same problem
01:22:212 (3,1) - stack?
01:28:469 (4) - spacing
01:56:813 (3,1) - curve 3 more to make a better blanket
02:14:666 (2,3) - stack?
02:15:586 (4) - spacing
02:56:997 (4,5) - don't think it's good to make 1/3 like this..try sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796731
03:09:144 (4) - better to change the end to one circle and make a little jump
03:33:438 (2) - it's not good to ignore this strong snare drum imo
03:33:807 (2) - and this clap is hard to be sounded
no big problems..but some details can be improved like spacing consistency,slider shapes and neaty

[Lunatic]
NC problem same as hard
00:01:782 (1,1) - since they are quite close.it's better to move 00:06:200 (1) - 's head near to center
00:14:482 (1,3) - stack
00:23:132 (5) - the beats at the arrow and the end are quite strong,better to change them to circles to make jumps
00:26:721 - deserve a note to cover the drum
00:52:580 (3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a pentagram
01:25:709 (5) - this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796774
03:54:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing consistent?
same as hard,no big problems but some details can be improved

Yohanes

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Yohanes 2016-08-08T14:06:00+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
M4M from my queue

[Hard]
not clear about your NC pattern...I suggest add NC at long white lines Um, I'll try to adjust them
01:06:936 (5) - change to 2 circles and make a jump may be better Ok
01:08:960 (3,1,2,3,4) - they are the same position in music but you placed different spacing.why not just rorate by 72? Uh, I think this pattern is okay. and I don't really want to re-arrange this part too ._.
01:19:083 (1,2,3) - I personally suggest overlaping 1/4 in hard I'll keep it as it is for now, might change in the future tho
01:20:371 (1,2,3,1,2) - same problem same
01:22:212 (3,1) - stack? ye
01:28:469 (4) - spacing This was intentional
01:56:813 (3,1) - curve 3 more to make a better blanket ok
02:14:666 (2,3) - stack? ok
02:15:586 (4) - spacing same
02:56:997 (4,5) - don't think it's good to make 1/3 like this..try sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796731 alright
03:09:144 (4) - better to change the end to one circle and make a little jump Personally I like this a lot so I don't want to change them lol
03:33:438 (2) - it's not good to ignore this strong snare drum imo What? There're circle there already, btw I mapped out 03:33:438 - into a slider
03:33:807 (2) - and this clap is hard to be sounded Umm, I don't really understand what you man by that ;;
no big problems..but some details can be improved like spacing consistency,slider shapes and neaty

[Lunatic]
NC problem same as hard same
00:01:782 (1,1) - since they are quite close.it's better to move 00:06:200 (1) - 's head near to center ok moved
00:14:482 (1,3) - stack ok
00:23:132 (5) - the beats at the arrow and the end are quite strong,better to change them to circles to make jumps I don't think so, by the placement & the flow of the reverse slider I think the sound in 1/2 already covered enough
00:26:721 - deserve a note to cover the drum changed
00:52:580 (3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a pentagram lol, I like it that way
01:25:709 (5) - this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796774 ye
03:54:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing consistent? I'll see what I can do, but no change for now
same as hard,no big problems but some details can be improved

Thanks a lot No_Gu!

Electoz

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Electoz 2016-09-22T12:30:05+00:00

[F Ant's Easy]

00:13:930 - Remove whistle? I'm guessing that you're trying to put less whistles than Normal but this one kinda stand out since you didn't put whistles on similar places like 00:08:040 - 00:10:985 - 00:16:874 .

[F Ant's Normal]

00:54:604 (3) - zzz would fit better with a 1/1 slider + circle cuz a 3/2 slider on this is pretty awkward + you didn't use 3/2 stuff anymore when the rhythm tensed up since 00:53:316 onward.
00:56:261 (1) - Recheck hitsound on this pls, not sure if there's anything else missing but pretty sure a finish should be on 00:56:261 .
03:07:856 (1) - Remove NC? According to how you NC'd stuff every 2 downbeats.
03:40:432 - Huh you NC'd this in Easy tho? Not sure if this is intentional so gonna mention this just in case.

[Hard]

00:38:224 (6) - 00:40:249 (3) - Unsnapped.

[Fizz's Insane]

00:06:200 - Conflict settings between red and green lines, please use the same sampleset on them.

Didn't mod Hard and higher diffs yet I'm too tired lol
Anyways I think Lunatic can be polished more so try getting more mods on that and I'll mod this some time later so don't worry, good luck~

SnowNiNo_

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SnowNiNo_ 2016-09-22T18:47:18+00:00

k focus on lunatic cuz i cant rly mod hard lo

[Lunatic]

00:06:015 - piano start at here =w= 00:06:200 (1) - move to 00:06:015 -
00:09:144 (5) - 00:12:089 (2) - 00:14:298 (7) - 00:15:034 (4) - 00:20:923 (2) - 01:12:273 (5) - 01:15:218 (3) - should NC on here instead
00:19:267 (1,2,3) - i dont see the reason to make the spacing inconsistent here lo
00:20:739 (1,2) - should have larger spacing for emphasis
00:32:519 (6,1) - same here, should got different larger then 00:32:334 (5,6) - for emhpasis
00:40:801 (1) - 01:05:463 (1) - 01:11:721 (1) - 01:14:850 (1) - 01:21:844 (1) - unnecessary nc
00:47:242 (2,3) - 00:53:132 (6,1) - 00:54:420 (4,1) - 02:05:831 (4,5) - same as 00:20:739 (1,2)
00:56:261 (1) - flow would be better if you ctrl + g this
01:19:819 (5) - should NC here instead, 01:20:739 (1) - not 01:20:739 (1) -
01:34:543 - add a note here, make the spinner end at 01:34:359 -
01:40:433 (4) - NC
02:05:279 - i dont think using sliderend to express the cymbol sound is a good choice
02:06:936 (2) - should NC here instead
02:25:156 (7,1) - could be improved
02:28:285 (3) - sound here deserved a larger spacing, and you should NC here instead
02:34:175 (5) - 02:43:009 (2) - should NC here instead
02:51:843 (2) - should NC here instead, not 02:51:475 (1,1) -
03:07:488 (4,1) - blanket off
03:09:328 (7,8) - 8 deserved larger spacing
03:28:653 (5) - NC
03:29:573 (7,1) - larger spacing for emphasis
03:37:488 (4) - 03:43:377 (4) - 03:49:267 (4) - should NC here instead
03:58:469 - make this sound clikcable

[Fizz's Insane]

00:42:089 (2,3) - 2 slider fit better to the structure
00:47:795 (2,3,4,5) - consist the spacing would look nicer
01:04:359 (3,4) - i dont find the reason to make the spacing here inconsistent lol

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497482 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509064

Last edited by SnowNiNo_ 2016-09-24T15:17:26+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yohanes

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Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-09-24T11:40:53+00:00

snapping on hard fixed!
I'll look for some more mods for Lunatic

Yohanes

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Yohanes 2016-09-28T19:45:43+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
k focus on lunatic cuz i cant rly mod hard lo

[Lunatic]
00:06:015 - piano start at here =w= 00:06:200 (1) - move to 00:06:015 - I want to start on those strong sound, no idea what it is lol
00:09:144 (5) - 00:12:089 (2) - 00:14:298 (7) - 00:15:034 (4) - 00:20:923 (2) - 01:12:273 (5) - 01:15:218 (3) - should NC on here instead
00:19:267 (1,2,3) - i dont see the reason to make the spacing inconsistent here lo let's say that's just for aesthetic reason xD
00:20:739 (1,2) - should have larger spacing for emphasis It's enough
00:32:519 (6,1) - same here, should got different larger then 00:32:334 (5,6) - for emhpasis By the way the note placed, it has different flow from the previous set of patterns, so i think it already emphasized enough
00:40:801 (1) - 01:05:463 (1) - 01:11:721 (1) - 01:14:850 (1) - 01:21:844 (1) - unnecessary nc
00:47:242 (2,3) - 00:53:132 (6,1) - 00:54:420 (4,1) - 02:05:831 (4,5) - same as 00:20:739 (1,2)
00:56:261 (1) - flow would be better if you ctrl + g this I want to keep the back and forth flow on the next move
01:19:819 (5) - should NC here instead, 01:20:739 (1) - not 01:20:739 (1) -
01:34:543 - add a note here, make the spinner end at 01:34:359 -
01:40:433 (4) - NC
02:05:279 - i dont think using sliderend to express the cymbol sound is a good choice I also use this to mark the end of vocal sound here, I think it's alright
02:06:936 (2) - should NC here instead
02:25:156 (7,1) - could be improved
02:28:285 (3) - sound here deserved a larger spacing, and you should NC here instead I think the emphasize is enough already
02:34:175 (5) - 02:43:009 (2) - should NC here instead
02:51:843 (2) - should NC here instead, not 02:51:475 (1,1) -
03:07:488 (4,1) - blanket off I don'tintend to make a blanket here lol
03:09:328 (7,8) - 8 deserved larger spacing I think its already enough
03:28:653 (5) - NC
03:29:573 (7,1) - larger spacing for emphasis Ctrl+G'ed
03:37:488 (4) - 03:43:377 (4) - 03:49:267 (4) - should NC here instead
03:58:469 - make this sound clikcable
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497482 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509064

Basically reworked the NC-ing!
Thanks for your mod! no reply means fixed

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