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Yohanes

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Yohanes 2015-07-28T09:29:58+00:00

Reditum wrote:

Overall:
46. Offset: 220,433ms BPM: 163.00

why is this here???

Lunatic:
So the thing with these ambient sections in the beginning is that ambience is really counter-intuitive to a rhythm game, because the game is intended to follow beats and rhythms, and you're pretty much trying to do that within a big open void of sound. Which isn't your fault, that's how the song is. Try adding some soft-hitwhistle sounds to spice it up. Right now, I'm hearing a lot of the soft-hitnormals and it's really kind of boring
00:16:506 (1,1) - It'd probably work better if the spinner ended on the red tick and there was a note on the big white tick. Mostly so the notes go together with the phrasing. Right now it's awkward to start tapping on the first red tick when the phrase starts on the first big white tick
00:29:390 (1,2) - ok who taught you that this was a good idea because defying flow is not a good idea it makes me sad. Apply this to all other instances where you do things similar to this.
01:08:960 (5) - ok so a little thing about flow. And similarly, apply this to the rest of the song. The thing about sliders is that sliders will move a player's mouse in a certain direction, and they will have momentum in that direction. There is a natural desire to move the mouse in a certain path, angle, or anything else. Generally, it's kind of like an arrow. If I go <-, then you're going to want to go to the left. Right now what you're doing at instances like this is forcing the person to go against intuition and jerk awkwardly down to the bottom right. Which isn't fun. even if you're trying to make the map difficult, this is not the way to achieve that.
01:38:684 (6) - ok so I expect this to be a kick slider. It's not. Tricking the player isn't fun, and it's not the right way to make your map harder. If you're going to make it like this, make the spacing show that off.
01:41:813 (1) - hitsound pls
01:55:157 - like the cool thing about FELT is the cool stuff in the drums at times like this. Right now you're not harnessing that and using it to make a better experience. And that makes me sad . Hitsounds pls
02:21:660 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok if this is a star you're gonna need to make it a star
02:46:046 (1,1,2,3,4) - This would probably work out better just having the spinner end on the next white tick and removing the (1,2,3)
03:19:819 - kiai??? why kiai here??
03:22:764 - Kiai should here!!

Solid map

Hard:
00:08:040 (4,5,6) - The phrasing of these notes better calls for 3 1/2 sliders. . . also, hitsounds.

Also solid. You could always put more in the soft sections, though, in terms of hitsounding

Decent mapset. I'd definitely spend some time on the hitsounding for Lunatic. It's tough taking on songs like this because, when presented with such rich material, it's pretty much a requirement that you take advantage of that to the fullest potential.

Also, read this as to why I'm giving you 2 kudosu stars: p/4361133

Del05

Del05 wrote:

Hi...hi...
Sorry for long delay xD.
And sorry if it is a short mod xD

General
BPM and Offset : × (please read Reiki's mod i agree with reiki too about the offset xD)
Aimod : Check again. Have tag conflict issue
Kiai : About 3rd kiai part, how about start from 03:22:764 -
Metadata : ✓
AudioLeadIn : try 800 or 850

Hard
00:06:200 - change audio to soft default, please . Cause the custom one not fit with piano sound xD
00:10:433 (3) - add whislte at slider head (if you change to default)
00:13:377 (3) - ^^
00:33:255 (2) - move to x:224;y:300 ??
00:56:261 (4) - how about use blanket with 00:56:629 (5)
01:10:065 (3,4) - i think better not use straight slider
02:06:199 (5) - NC
02:42:089 (5) - bad overlap with 02:43:009 (1) tail. so move it
03:26:261 (2,3) - Why have different distance with 03:25:708 (1) ?? (03:26:261 (2) is closer to 03:25:708 (1) than 03:26:629 (3) , it looks bad for xD)
03:49:267 (1) - try curve slider
03:56:813 (5) - move to x:360;y:156 ??
03:58:469 (1) - how about this --> --> remove whistle from spinner and add whistle+finsih for circle

Overall
Hmm... For easy and normal are look good and i like it. But for hard still can be improve
I cant mod >4 star but i cant mod the insane even it have 3.7 stars xD (sorry)

Reiki

Reiki wrote:
Heyo. Modding from my queue.
As I've started modding right after the previous mod, some of the things I've found might've been already mentioned. Just double-check to make sure. :3

[Overview]

Offset 6,186 works great for the first red (uninherited) timing section. After that, place the second red section with offset 142,382 (right above the beat on 02:22:382 - ) and remove the third one (the one with offset 220,433, placed on 03:40:433 - ). That timing fits better IMO, since the actual one seems to be a little late. And the third section isn't really needed since BPM doesn't change, nor there's any metronome reset at all.
~~>To change the timing, just move all sections on the timing setup panel by -14, and remove the third red one.~~ Actually, forget that. I was too tired while timing. You'll have to move every line manually, as doing as I said screws with the second red line. Sorry for my mistake! */me praying that you notice this* ;w; And sorry for the bonus work ;w;
You might want to place your preview point on 01:07:258 - since the previous instrument (drum) is still audiable on the beat the point is actually on. That way, players have a clearer preview of what is the song like.
I think the third Kiai fits best as how Fizz did it on their Insane, starting on 03:22:764 - since that's where the actual chorus starts. But you can decide, since it's personal preference. :p
Combo colors 1, 2 and 4 blend a lot with the BG. It's actually bothersome to play it using the default skin. I suggest you to make those colors a bit darker so that they don't blend a lot with BG (especially during Kiai, since everything flashes at that time).
Disable the Widescreen Support on all diffs. You aren't even using a Storyboard, so that option isn't needed.

Alright, let's begin.

[Hard]

00:01:414 (1) - I think the acual sound starts at 00:01:782 - so you may want to start the spinner there.
00:40:433 (5) - You might want to end the slider on 00:40:801 - since that's where the vocal fades out. You should place a soft-whistle on the end if you do, to emphatize the chime sound on the beat there. After that, place a 1/2 beat slider on 00:40:985 - to follow the melody. Your rhythm would look like this if you do as I've said (note: first circle you can see there is 00:40:249 (4) - ).
01:09:328 (1) - Remove the NC here. Keep your NC pattern of two measures, since if you alter your pattern without any apparent reason, HP drain is affected.
01:12:089 - You should place a circle here. The beat here's like screaming to be emphatized. On a Hard, it's pretty important to map everything you can hear, so that you can prepare players to the highest diffs of the set. Don't make really complex patterns, but don't stick to just mapping the vocals.
>After saying that, you should know by now that you need to increase the density (amount of notes) on your diff. Focus on both the instruments and the vocals, but avoid really complex patterns (and you should really place more notes on the red ticks, as those are very important on harder diffs). Note density seems to be okay starting from 02:49:083 - but you might wanna nerf the jumps... just keep reading below.
01:13:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Idk. I just liked this pattern here. I wonder if the jumps are okay for a Hard, tho. They might be too hard, I dunno.
01:20:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I've noticed you use lots of straight 1/2 sliders (not only here, but on many other parts as well). Players (and maybe some other modders) will notice this and compare it to an old map (I think this song was already mapped by someone in the past, but I haven't checked). You might want to give your patterns a bit more of variety, to make it more fun and entertaining. And yeah, this applies to any other areas with lots of straight sliders as well.
01:41:905 (1) - Place custom soft-whistle and soft-clap here? I think it fits perfectly.
02:28:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this kind of spacing is actually hard for a Hard. You might wanna remake this pattern, and avoid using many jumps. Players of this level of diffs aren't fully used to continuous jumps yet. :p
02:48:899 - And this place sounds so really weird if you skip this strong downbeat. Don't ignore those beats at all unless there isn't any melody or if the melody is too faint. Those beats mark the changes on tempo, so they're musically important.
03:01:230 (2,3,4) - I would leave this kind of rhythms for Insane kind of diffs. 3/4 timing is very tricky to be played, especially on this level. You might wanna replace the slider (2) for a circle, and then place a slider on 03:01:414 - , end it on 03:01:690 - and add a reverse to it. This emphatizes the melody and is easier to play for this level. You might really want to use this.
03:45:218 (5,1) - This overlap is way too tricky for this diff. Players might slider-break easily, considering the slow-down and the way the head is covered. You should like, place the slider (1) somewhere else and make the slow-down less sudden (make the slider a little faster, for example).
Before the second Kiai, the note density is quite low and focuses itself on vocals. During/after that Kiai, the density is okay, but the patterns become way too tricky for a Hard. My overall suggestion for this diff is to increase a bit more the note density on parts that seem like you can (use 1/1 sliders too, to avoid monotonous 1/2 spam) and nerf the patterns after the second Kiai a bit. You should study the recently-ranked Hards and use some of the patterns used on them to nerf your patterns. As how this map is right now, it really reminds me of an old-type of map. (kinda how I mapped before :v)
Other thing: I noticed many blankets were off (maybe by little, some few ones by a lot). I didn't mentioned them to avoid making an useless blanket-mod, so I ask of you to check your blankets on the diff and fix them as appropiate.

[Lunatic]

Well... I tried to mod this diff, but most of the things I took on Hard are present on this diff as well (you mainly focus on vocals, reducing note density; your patterns make it look like an old map). I really suggest of you to consider mapping more to the instrument, while keeping an emphasis on vocals to give this diff more variety. And you need more triplets; long streams are just streams, but triplets can make the diff more interesting. You might wanna take a look at the Insane and try to play with some of the musical patterns there to make this diff a bit more interesting.

~~Uh... I'll end mod later (most likely during night), as I have things to do (I'm a busy person, yeah ;w;). Mod for Easy and Normal is already finished, tho. :p~~ FINISHED!
Overall, the set still needs a bit of work. Most of it can be done by yourself, but getting more mods won't hurt anyone.

Good luck!

ZLO

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
heeey ~ From my mq

[General]

- Preview badly chosen. Try to place the preview here 02:21:660
- Kiai time - 03:19:819 - the beginning of this KiAi move here 03:22:764 ( how in Fizz's Insane )
- http://puu.sh/j5SYd/aed96a1e4c.png unranked (for Easy and Normal) and http://puu.sh/j5T3s/86eb60a5c3.png (for Hard and Insane and Lunatic) . Green section can be located in one place with a timing section only when the speed changes. remove the green section
- remove tick here http://puu.sh/j5Tyf/8e889bcdd0.png (Song Setup)
- add * F ant * for tags

[Hard]

01:12:089 (3) - there is clearly not enough notes. the simplest is to put here circle

[Lunatic]

00:08:408 (x) - there should be a note, but here the slider. Ends this slider 00:08:224 (2) here 00:08:408( 00:08:592 here absolutely do not need notes )

00:18:715 (3) - ^ again missed a note with a red tick. ends here slider and make a return

00:21:660 (3) - ^ ( I just want you to read it https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory and fix the like. ) do not need to skip strong sounds. Because the player relies on them

03:45:586 (1) - not very appropriate spinner. Replace it with a slider

good luck~

Haven't reply to it but soon...
Thanks for the mod guys

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-07-29T07:04:43+00:00

Yohanes wrote:
Reditum
Reditum wrote:

Overall:
46. Offset: 220,433ms BPM: 163.00

why is this here???

Lunatic:
So the thing with these ambient sections in the beginning is that ambience is really counter-intuitive to a rhythm game, because the game is intended to follow beats and rhythms, and you're pretty much trying to do that within a big open void of sound. Which isn't your fault, that's how the song is. Try adding some soft-hitwhistle sounds to spice it up. Right now, I'm hearing a lot of the soft-hitnormals and it's really kind of boring
00:16:506 (1,1) - It'd probably work better if the spinner ended on the red tick and there was a note on the big white tick. Mostly so the notes go together with the phrasing. Right now it's awkward to start tapping on the first red tick when the phrase starts on the first big white tick
00:29:390 (1,2) - ok who taught you that this was a good idea because defying flow is not a good idea it makes me sad. Apply this to all other instances where you do things similar to this.
01:08:960 (5) - ok so a little thing about flow. And similarly, apply this to the rest of the song. The thing about sliders is that sliders will move a player's mouse in a certain direction, and they will have momentum in that direction. There is a natural desire to move the mouse in a certain path, angle, or anything else. Generally, it's kind of like an arrow. If I go <-, then you're going to want to go to the left. Right now what you're doing at instances like this is forcing the person to go against intuition and jerk awkwardly down to the bottom right. Which isn't fun. even if you're trying to make the map difficult, this is not the way to achieve that.
01:38:684 (6) - ok so I expect this to be a kick slider. It's not. Tricking the player isn't fun, and it's not the right way to make your map harder. If you're going to make it like this, make the spacing show that off.
01:41:813 (1) - hitsound pls
01:55:157 - like the cool thing about FELT is the cool stuff in the drums at times like this. Right now you're not harnessing that and using it to make a better experience. And that makes me sad . Hitsounds pls
02:21:660 (1,2,3,4,1) - ok if this is a star you're gonna need to make it a star
02:46:046 (1,1,2,3,4) - This would probably work out better just having the spinner end on the next white tick and removing the (1,2,3)
03:19:819 - kiai??? why kiai here??
03:22:764 - Kiai should here!!

Solid map

Hard:
00:08:040 (4,5,6) - The phrasing of these notes better calls for 3 1/2 sliders. . . also, hitsounds. Maybe I'll change this later, but for now no fix

Also solid. You could always put more in the soft sections, though, in terms of hitsounding

Decent mapset. I'd definitely spend some time on the hitsounding for Lunatic. It's tough taking on songs like this because, when presented with such rich material, it's pretty much a requirement that you take advantage of that to the fullest potential.

Also, read this as to why I'm giving you 2 kudosu stars: p/4361133

Del05
Del05 wrote:

Hi...hi...
Sorry for long delay xD.
And sorry if it is a short mod xD

General
BPM and Offset : × (please read Reiki's mod i agree with reiki too about the offset xD)
Aimod : Check again. Have tag conflict issue
Kiai : About 3rd kiai part, how about start from 03:22:764 -
Metadata : ✓
AudioLeadIn : try 800 or 850

Hard
00:06:200 - change audio to soft default, please . Cause the custom one not fit with piano sound xD Will considert his, no change for now
00:10:433 (3) - add whislte at slider head (if you change to default)
00:13:377 (3) - ^^
00:33:255 (2) - move to x:224;y:300 ?? No, it'll cause spacing issues ._.
00:56:261 (4) - how about use blanket with 00:56:629 (5) Kay
01:10:065 (3,4) - i think better not use straight slider Changed this part
02:06:199 (5) - NC Nah
02:42:089 (5) - bad overlap with 02:43:009 (1) tail. so move it I like this overlap so, no
03:26:261 (2,3) - Why have different distance with 03:25:708 (1) ?? (03:26:261 (2) is closer to 03:25:708 (1) than 03:26:629 (3) , it looks bad for xD) imo this one is no problem as it is, so I'll keep it as it is
03:49:267 (1) - try curve slider Yea
03:56:813 (5) - move to x:360;y:156 ?? No ^^
03:58:469 (1) - how about this --> --> remove whistle from spinner and add whistle+finsih for circle I prefer not to put additional notes here

Overall
Hmm... For easy and normal are look good and i like it. But for hard still can be improve
I cant mod >4 star but i cant mod the insane even it have 3.7 stars xD (sorry)

Reiki
Reiki wrote:
Heyo. Modding from my queue.
As I've started modding right after the previous mod, some of the things I've found might've been already mentioned. Just double-check to make sure. :3

[Overview]

Offset 6,186 works great for the first red (uninherited) timing section. After that, place the second red section with offset 142,382 (right above the beat on 02:22:382 - ) and remove the third one (the one with offset 220,433, placed on 03:40:433 - ). That timing fits better IMO, since the actual one seems to be a little late. And the third section isn't really needed since BPM doesn't change, nor there's any metronome reset at all.
~~>To change the timing, just move all sections on the timing setup panel by -14, and remove the third red one.~~ Actually, forget that. I was too tired while timing. You'll have to move every line manually, as doing as I said screws with the second red line. Sorry for my mistake! */me praying that you notice this* ;w; And sorry for the bonus work ;w;
You might want to place your preview point on 01:07:258 - since the previous instrument (drum) is still audiable on the beat the point is actually on. That way, players have a clearer preview of what is the song like.
I think the third Kiai fits best as how Fizz did it on their Insane, starting on 03:22:764 - since that's where the actual chorus starts. But you can decide, since it's personal preference. :p
Combo colors 1, 2 and 4 blend a lot with the BG. It's actually bothersome to play it using the default skin. I suggest you to make those colors a bit darker so that they don't blend a lot with BG (especially during Kiai, since everything flashes at that time).
Disable the Widescreen Support on all diffs. You aren't even using a Storyboard, so that option isn't needed.

Alright, let's begin.

[Hard]

00:01:414 (1) - I think the acual sound starts at 00:01:782 - so you may want to start the spinner there. Ok
00:40:433 (5) - You might want to end the slider on 00:40:801 - since that's where the vocal fades out. You should place a soft-whistle on the end if you do, to emphatize the chime sound on the beat there. After that, place a 1/2 beat slider on 00:40:985 - to follow the melody. Your rhythm would look like this if you do as I've said (note: first circle you can see there is 00:40:249 (4) - ). Yup
01:09:328 (1) - Remove the NC here. Keep your NC pattern of two measures, since if you alter your pattern without any apparent reason, HP drain is affected. Oc
01:12:089 - You should place a circle here. The beat here's like screaming to be emphatized. On a Hard, it's pretty important to map everything you can hear, so that you can prepare players to the highest diffs of the set. Don't make really complex patterns, but don't stick to just mapping the vocals. I changed the rhythm here
>After saying that, you should know by now that you need to increase the density (amount of notes) on your diff. Focus on both the instruments and the vocals, but avoid really complex patterns (and you should really place more notes on the red ticks, as those are very important on harder diffs). Note density seems to be okay starting from 02:49:083 - but you might wanna nerf the jumps... just keep reading below.
01:13:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Idk. I just liked this pattern here. I wonder if the jumps are okay for a Hard, tho. They might be too hard, I dunno. '-'
01:20:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I've noticed you use lots of straight 1/2 sliders (not only here, but on many other parts as well). Players (and maybe some other modders) will notice this and compare it to an old map (I think this song was already mapped by someone in the past, but I haven't checked). You might want to give your patterns a bit more of variety, to make it more fun and entertaining. And yeah, this applies to any other areas with lots of straight sliders as well. I will consider this later on, but I made no change for now
01:41:905 (1) - Place custom soft-whistle and soft-clap here? I think it fits perfectly. Sorta done (?)
02:28:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this kind of spacing is actually hard for a Hard. You might wanna remake this pattern, and avoid using many jumps. Players of this level of diffs aren't fully used to continuous jumps yet. :p Owlright
02:48:899 - And this place sounds so really weird if you skip this strong downbeat. Don't ignore those beats at all unless there isn't any melody or if the melody is too faint. Those beats mark the changes on tempo, so they're musically important. Yeah
03:01:230 (2,3,4) - I would leave this kind of rhythms for Insane kind of diffs. 3/4 timing is very tricky to be played, especially on this level. You might wanna replace the slider (2) for a circle, and then place a slider on 03:01:414 - , end it on 03:01:690 - and add a reverse to it. This emphatizes the melody and is easier to play for this level. You might really want to use this. Changed
03:45:218 (5,1) - This overlap is way too tricky for this diff. Players might slider-break easily, considering the slow-down and the way the head is covered. You should like, place the slider (1) somewhere else and make the slow-down less sudden (make the slider a little faster, for example). Changed this, I hope it fixed the problem
Before the second Kiai, the note density is quite low and focuses itself on vocals. During/after that Kiai, the density is okay, but the patterns become way too tricky for a Hard. My overall suggestion for this diff is to increase a bit more the note density on parts that seem like you can (use 1/1 sliders too, to avoid monotonous 1/2 spam) and nerf the patterns after the second Kiai a bit. You should study the recently-ranked Hards and use some of the patterns used on them to nerf your patterns. As how this map is right now, it really reminds me of an old-type of map. (kinda how I mapped before :v)O.o
Other thing: I noticed many blankets were off (maybe by little, some few ones by a lot). I didn't mentioned them to avoid making an useless blanket-mod, so I ask of you to check your blankets on the diff and fix them as appropiate.

[Lunatic]

Well... I tried to mod this diff, but most of the things I took on Hard are present on this diff as well (you mainly focus on vocals, reducing note density; your patterns make it look like an old map). I really suggest of you to consider mapping more to the instrument, while keeping an emphasis on vocals to give this diff more variety. And you need more triplets; long streams are just streams, but triplets can make the diff more interesting. You might wanna take a look at the Insane and try to play with some of the musical patterns there to make this diff a bit more interesting.

~~Uh... I'll end mod later (most likely during night), as I have things to do (I'm a busy person, yeah ;w;). Mod for Easy and Normal is already finished, tho. :p~~ FINISHED!
Overall, the set still needs a bit of work. Most of it can be done by yourself, but getting more mods won't hurt anyone.

Good luck!

ZLO
ZLOdeuka- wrote:
heeey ~ From my mq

[General]

- Preview badly chosen. Try to place the preview here 02:21:660
- Kiai time - 03:19:819 - the beginning of this KiAi move here 03:22:764 ( how in Fizz's Insane )
- http://puu.sh/j5SYd/aed96a1e4c.png unranked (for Easy and Normal) and http://puu.sh/j5T3s/86eb60a5c3.png (for Hard and Insane and Lunatic) . Green section can be located in one place with a timing section only when the speed changes. remove the green section
- remove tick here http://puu.sh/j5Tyf/8e889bcdd0.png (Song Setup)
- add * F ant * for tags

[Hard]

01:12:089 (3) - there is clearly not enough notes. the simplest is to put here circle Changed

[Lunatic]

00:08:408 (x) - there should be a note, but here the slider. Ends this slider 00:08:224 (2) here 00:08:408( 00:08:592 here absolutely do not need notes )

00:18:715 (3) - ^ again missed a note with a red tick. ends here slider and make a return

00:21:660 (3) - ^ ( I just want you to read it https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory and fix the like. ) do not need to skip strong sounds. Because the player relies on them

03:45:586 (1) - not very appropriate spinner. Replace it with a slider

good luck~

~~Haven't reply to it but soon...~~EDIT!

I remapped several part on lunatic diff, which I believe should addressed ~~if not all~~ most of problems that mentioned by Reiki, ZLO and Reditum. Sorry I can't reply to every mod that've been given, but I take every point that are mentioned into consideration
Thanks for the mod guys

Edit: mistakenly clicked quote instead of edit

gregest

808 posts

Joined February 2014

gregest 2015-07-29T14:26:02+00:00

Doot doot, mod as requested

I know I said not under 4 star, but I will try to mod your hard to be kinda fair because I worded my post wrong

[Insane]

00:22:396 - circle here

00:25:157 (1) - I would personally make it like this

00:55:065 (2) - move to X:100 Y:112, looks better

00:55:157 (3) - move to X:104 Y:116

01:06:936 (1) - I would use clap here too

01:18:163 (4,1) - this doesn't really flow well

01:38:684 (6,7,8,9) - there are some of these quads in the map, I would suggest you to give them some shape because quad stacks doesn't really look good

02:06:015 (3,4) - the spacing is a bit big here

02:20:555 (1,2) - maybe add clap instead of whistle

02:34:175 (1) - move to X:28 Y:292

03:35:647 (7,8,9,10,1) - same as the quads

[Hard]

02:26:261 (3,4) - spacing is a bit big

03:26:261 (2,3) - ^

everything else seems good for me

Hope I helped you!

-Makishima S-

2,434 posts

Joined August 2013

-Makishima S- 2015-07-29T16:37:09+00:00

Greetings Yohanes,

Here is requested mod for you, wish it will help! If you have truble with image links, contact me please, thank you.

F Ant's Easy

General
Timing section (1) is same as inherited point - please remove inherited point here - img: http://puu.sh/jhuL2.png (Critical issue)

Beatmap

00:15:954 (2,3) - Transition betwin this two might be difficult at first time for new player, there is posibility that new player will not finish slider (2) while already moving into (3) what can end with 100 score on it. You can ignore if it's intentional, it's still ok.

01:00:494 (2,3) - ^

02:14:114 (1,2) - ^

01:20:739 (2) - IMO move into X:136 Y:160 and resnap (3) and (4), looks nice like this. ex. http://puu.sh/jhxbr.jpg

02:34:175 (1,2) - ^ blanket pretty please, i know and i believe this can looks like masterpiece painting!

Everything else looks nice, easy to play, easy to follow, i feel this diff.

F Ant's Normal

00:11:905 (6) - (Add circle) Missing very hearable piano note, if intentional - ignore.

00:14:482 (5) - (Add circle) ^

02:44:297 (3,4) - Does hitsound at (3) slider end and full (4) is intentional? I came to me instantly while doing testplay and it was weird

Another very nice diff if you ask me. Was fun to play!

Hard

01:35:739 (4) - (Remove note) In my opinion, triple here don't fit song (optional - my proposition)

01:38:684 (5) - (Remove note) ^

01:38:408 (3,4) - Too high spacing

03:56:997 (6,7) - To fit drum part of song, i propose to unstack this notes and create some shape

03:57:549 (1,2) - Spacing should be a bit lower

Without some weird spacing problems, very nice to play map, i would recommend go on it and check spacing if it's not too harrash.
Overall it's nicely done.

One of my friends just shouted on skype "please rank more FELT" so we need this one

.
Good luck on ranking this, definitly solid mapset.

Cheers!

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2015-07-30T04:03:00+00:00

[F Ant's Easy]
01:21:107 (3,4) - Blanket here looks a bit off, try to fix.
02:24:421 (3,1) - Same as above.

[F Ant's Normal]
02:56:997 (4,1) - I feel like the blanket here could be repositioned? seems a little off.

[Hard]
00:43:193 (6) - Move to X=316 Y=137 to fix square.

[Fizz's Insane]
00:49:451 (2) - Move to X=248 Y=212 to fix square.
00:53:316 (1,2) - Blanket seems a little off here, fix.

[Lunatic]
00:18:715 (4,1) - Blanket seems a little off here, fix.
00:23:316 (6) - Move to X=309 Y=281 to fix diamond pattern.

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-07-30T04:19:41+00:00

CptBlackBird

CptBlackBird wrote:
Doot doot, mod as requested

I know I said not under 4 star, but I will try to mod your hard to be kinda fair because I worded my post wrong

[Insane]

00:22:396 - circle here Will consider this

00:25:157 (1) - I would personally make it like this I prefer mine

00:55:065 (2) - move to X:100 Y:112, looks better Kay

00:55:157 (3) - move to X:104 Y:116 o

01:06:936 (1) - I would use clap here too No, whistle sound best here

01:18:163 (4,1) - this doesn't really flow well It's flow nicely imo

01:38:684 (6,7,8,9) - there are some of these quads in the map, I would suggest you to give them some shape because quad stacks doesn't really look good I might remap some of this part, let's what I came up with

02:06:015 (3,4) - the spacing is a bit big here If this'll be real issue I'll reduce it

02:20:555 (1,2) - maybe add clap instead of whistle x

02:34:175 (1) - move to X:28 Y:292 ofc

03:35:647 (7,8,9,10,1) - same as the quads Nah

[Hard]

02:26:261 (3,4) - spacing is a bit big tweaked a bit

03:26:261 (2,3) - ^ [/color]

everything else seems good for me

Hope I helped you!

Taiga

[Taiga] wrote:
Greetings Yohanes,

Here is requested mod for you, wish it will help! If you have truble with image links, contact me please, thank you.

Hard

01:35:739 (4) - (Remove note) In my opinion, triple here don't fit song (optional - my proposition) I think it fit the song (?) so no change

01:38:684 (5) - (Remove note) ^^

01:38:408 (3,4) - Too high spacing It's appropriate

03:56:997 (6,7) - To fit drum part of song, i propose to unstack this notes and create some shape Change this part a bit

03:57:549 (1,2) - Spacing should be a bit lower o

Without some weird spacing problems, very nice to play map, i would recommend go on it and check spacing if it's not too harrash.
Overall it's nicely done.

One of my friends just shouted on skype "please rank more FELT" so we need this one . Thanks ^^
Good luck on ranking this, definitly solid mapset.

Cheers!

Kuki

Kuki wrote:

[Hard]
00:43:193 (6) - Move to X=316 Y=137 to fix square. square fixed

[Lunatic]
00:18:715 (4,1) - Blanket seems a little off here, fix. No, it's alright
00:23:316 (6) - Move to X=309 Y=281 to fix diamond pattern. Diamond fixed

Thank you for the Mods

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-07-31T09:57:52+00:00

[Taiga] wrote:
Greetings Yohanes,

Here is requested mod for you, wish it will help! If you have truble with image links, contact me please, thank you.

F Ant's Easy

General
Timing section (1) is same as inherited point - please remove inherited point here - img: http://puu.sh/jhuL2.png (Critical issue) whoops... forgot about it XD. Fixed.

Beatmap

00:15:954 (2,3) - Transition betwin this two might be difficult at first time for new player, there is posibility that new player will not finish slider (2) while already moving into (3) what can end with 100 score on it. You can ignore if it's intentional, it's still ok. yah this pooint was mentioned again. I think I will fix it now :3.

01:00:494 (2,3) - ^ I won't change the 1/2 on this point. Because here I follow the instrument.

02:14:114 (1,2) - ^ same as above

01:20:739 (2) - IMO move into X:136 Y:160 and resnap (3) and (4), looks nice like this. ex. http://puu.sh/jhxbr.jpg I just fix the blanket on 01:21:107 (3,4) - :3

02:34:175 (1,2) - ^ blanket pretty please, i know and i believe this can looks like masterpiece painting! yea.. Fixed the blanket too :3

Everything else looks nice, easy to play, easy to follow, i feel this diff. Thanks >w<

F Ant's Normal

00:11:905 (6) - (Add circle) Missing very hearable piano note, if intentional - ignore. I don't really sure what point that you want to say...

00:14:482 (5) - (Add circle) ^ same as above

02:44:297 (3,4) - Does hitsound at (3) slider end and full (4) is intentional? I came to me instantly while doing testplay and it was weird I make it like that just because I hear some cymbal in the song. But I'll reduce the usage of the drum hitwhistle :3

Another very nice diff if you ask me. Was fun to play! yay >w<

One of my friends just shouted on skype "please rank more FELT" so we need this one .
Good luck on ranking this, definitly solid mapset.

Cheers!

Kuki wrote:

we met again >w<

[F Ant's Easy]
01:21:107 (3,4) - Blanket here looks a bit off, try to fix. fixed
02:24:421 (3,1) - Same as above. fixed

[F Ant's Normal]
02:56:997 (4,1) - I feel like the blanket here could be repositioned? seems a little off. fixed (maybe) :3

Thanks for mods, all >w<

Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-08-01T04:40:12+00:00

sorry for late reply ;;

@Kuki both suggestions fixed!
thanks for the mod~

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [1] Flowering Night.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67212
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 103377,177733,190984
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Story
TitleUnicode:Story
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:Yohanes
Version:Fizz's Insane
Source:東方Project
Tags:美歌 NAGI☆ Mika Reitaisai SP2 Phantasmagoria of Flower View Sakuya Izayoi Flowering Night Touhou Rebirth Story yaldo_27 Fantastica Blizs Fizz
BeatmapID:732932
BeatmapSetID:297409

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.3
SliderMultiplier:1.65
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-02T06:20:20+00:00

Updated!

Ameth Rianno

515 posts

Joined November 2014

Ameth Rianno 2015-08-02T07:13:20+00:00

Hello hello maap numpang lewat

The metadata needs a japanese texts too,
Add these in to tags: フラワリングナイト東方花映塚 kaeidzuka 十六夜　咲夜 team shanghai alice zun th09 tōhō

Good luck ya~ no kudos

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-02T11:08:47+00:00

Ameth Rianno wrote:
Hello hello maap numpang lewat

The metadata needs a japanese texts too,
Add these in to tags: フラワリングナイト東方花映塚 kaeidzuka 十六夜　咲夜 team shanghai alice zun th09 tōhō

Good luck ya~ no kudos

Ooo cool, I'm going to add it by the next update..
Thanks Ameth

FCL

1,497 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2015-08-06T16:40:39+00:00

Hello, my M4M for Blizs

[F Ant's Easy]

01:56:813 (2,3) - imo, these patterns do not fit the music,so I would have replaced
01:59:758 (2,3) - ^
02:01:046 (1,2) - imo
03:46:322 (1,2,1) - these sliders do not look very pretty, may replace form

[F Ant's Normal]

02:22:212 - the perfect place for a circle
03:39:512 - ^but less confident

[Hard]

00:27:549 (3) - change this slider to 1/2, so logically, I think
01:31:414 (6) - imo, here it is better to just leave the circle
02:17:058 (4) - blanket maybe?
03:26:261 (2) - Move the slider a bit further from the first slider, 408; 296 is the ideal
03:54:788 (7,8) - maybe stack this?

[Fizz's Insane]

01:58:101 (1) - This slider is not specifically stack with 5 circle?
02:03:623 (7) - ^
02:21:292 (5) - imo, finish the slider to downbit
02:45:586 (1) - 1/2 slider will be better, imo

[Lunatic]

00:10:249 (4,1) - blanket maybe?
01:58:654 (1) - ^
03:26:629 (4,5) - These sliders are not parallel D:

it's all, good luck!

Crimmi

1,947 posts

Joined June 2009

Crimmi 2015-08-06T21:37:04+00:00

Hello there~!

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)

_________________________________________________________

Clear.

F Ant's Easy

03:22:764 (1) - I suggest you place the kiai here as here is when the chorus starts, instead of 03:19:819. Check all difficulties to make sure.

F Ant's Normal

Clear.

Hard

Clear.

Fizzy-chan's Insane <3

00:20:095 (4) - I didn't think this note fit other to force a triplet.
00:46:138 (4,5) - Maybe turn this slider into two seperate notes or delete that slider, extend it 1/4 and place a note like this: http://puu.sh/jrZD7/a2fa101015.jpg
00:47:426 (1,2) - ^
01:21:107 (1) - Maybe bring this back a 1/4th?

Lunatic

Clear.

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-08-07T04:56:17+00:00

FCL wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
01:58:101 (1) - This slider is not specifically stack with 5 circle?
02:03:623 (7) - ^ it's intentional :3
02:21:292 (5) - imo, finish the slider to downbit percussion stops earlier
02:45:586 (1) - 1/2 slider will be better, imo mapping the guitar bit here

Crimmi wrote:
Fizzy-chan's Insane <3

00:20:095 (4) - I didn't think this note fit other to force a triplet. removed!
00:46:138 (4,5) - Maybe turn this slider into two seperate notes or delete that slider, extend it 1/4 and place a note like this: http://puu.sh/jrZD7/a2fa101015.jpg
00:47:426 (1,2) - ^
01:21:107 (1) - Maybe bring this back a 1/4th? a whole lot of this map has 3/4s like this so I'm keeping these for consistency :3

thanks for mods~

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [1] Flowering Night.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67212
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Story
TitleUnicode:Story
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:Yohanes
Version:Fizz's Insane
Source:東方Project
Tags:美歌 NAGI☆ Mika Reitaisai SP2 Phantasmagoria of Flower View Sakuya Izayoi Flowering Night Touhou Rebirth Story yaldo_27 Fantastica Blizs Fizz
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-08-08T09:39:25+00:00

FCL wrote:
Hello, my M4M for Blizs

[F Ant's Easy]
01:56:813 (2,3) - imo, these patterns do not fit the music,so I would have replaced yea, you're right if I follow the vocal. But I follow the instrument here ):
01:59:758 (2,3) - ^ same as above
02:01:046 (1,2) - imo same as above
03:46:322 (1,2,1) - these sliders do not look very pretty, may replace form Nope.... it's my style

[F Ant's Normal]
02:22:212 - the perfect place for a circle Not really necessary since I think it looks cool to give some space before the such big emphasis kiai :3
03:39:512 - ^but less confident trying to avoid overusing 1/2

Crimmi wrote:
Hello there~!

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)

_________________________________________________________

Clear.

F Ant's Easy

03:22:764 (1) - I suggest you place the kiai here as here is when the chorus starts, instead of 03:19:819. Check all difficulties to make sure. I just follow Yohanes' diff before modded for this lol. fixed.

Thanks for mods >w<
Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-08T14:32:24+00:00

FCL wrote:
Hello, my M4M for Blizs

[Hard]
00:27:549 (3) - change this slider to 1/2, so logically, I think 1/2 slider doesn't fit here, there's nothing to map in 00:27:733 -
01:31:414 (6) - imo, here it is better to just leave the circle This part also need to be mapped 01:31:598 - so, no
02:17:058 (4) - blanket maybe? I like it that way :3
03:26:261 (2) - Move the slider a bit further from the first slider, 408; 296 is the ideal Change a bit
03:54:788 (7,8) - maybe stack this? No, I need a movement between those notes

[Lunatic]
00:10:249 (4,1) - blanket maybe? No, blanket it will makes these jumps 00:10:433 (5,1) - too far
01:58:654 (1) - ^ fixed, sorta
03:26:629 (4,5) - These sliders are not parallel D: kay
it's all, good luck!

Thank you for the mods FCL and Crimmi

also Blizs 4 doing the M4M
Updated!

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2015-08-09T14:23:06+00:00

hey there c:
here's the mod you requested
rather short, but hopefully helpful >o<
also: I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me :3

General

Audio Preview is inconsistent, make sure it's adjusted in Fizz's Insane.
suggestions because of combocolours: red doesn't go well with the other colours, and cc#1 and #2 are very very similar in brightness.
different example colours \o/
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 80,210,255
Combo2 : 180,180,180
Combo3 : 102,217,174
Combo4 : 64,57,176
```

F Ant's Easy
overall a nice diff, but sadly very repetetive :c

00:15:954 (2) - the slider should end on the red tick here at 00:16:322 - instead, because the sound is too dominant to be skipped. the slider even starts on a similar sound. you can start another slider on the downbeat, so it doesn't go unmapped:

If you think it's too hard for an Easy you could also extend the second slider, to make it easier to catch it:

but, imo, the first screen should work alright, you use similar rhythms later on in the diff. c:
00:58:469 (4) - why is this snapped to 1/8? o.o
01:55:157 (1,2) - gap feels weird here. beat goes on, vocals go on to. maybe you can try this rhythm instead:

similar: 01:58:101 (1,2) - etc
02:22:396 (1) - til 02:45:954 (1) - is this the first Kiai just flipped? completely? :C I don't know.. of course, people can do that and it's fine, but the song is sooooo repetetive... copying this long section and just flipping it over to the other side makes it worse. it's just boring to play. (maybe not for anyone, but still.) You can keep the rhythm, but pretty pretty please change the placement. at least at some parts. ;_;
03:58:469 (1) - spinner's long enough, so to emphasize the beat at 03:58:469 - better add a circle there and shorten the spinner accordingly?

F Ant's Normal
diff is alright as it is. I don't agree with most rhythms and the flow, but that's just my personal preferance, so I won't say anything about that. owo
sooo, my only suggestion: 03:58:469 (1) - same as in Easy

Hard
overall the diff is nice, but it feels like the DS is horribly inconsistent. :/ I'm pretty sure that can lead to confusion sometimes, as the rhythm isn't the easiest.. but Idk if you want to change that. I'd highly recommend sticking to one DS (intentional jumps are okay, sure), but constantly changing DS from 1.3. to 1.5 and 1.7 and 1.9 and above... up to you ofcourse.

there's an unnecessary green line at 03:40:433 - D: xD
00:01:782 (1) - this should probably end earlier.. recovery time is very very low for a Hard diff and even in the Insane the spinner ends at 00:05:831 -
(I know it's a GD etc, but still the difficulties should be consistent and increasing from lowest to highest and ya, as I already said. the current recovery time is really extremely low. :c )
00:08:040 (4,5) - feels weird that 00:08:040 - and 00:08:224 - are clickable, but 00:08:408 - isn't, even tho it's the same sound. consider using three circles instead or use a short reverse slider to cover all three sounds.
00:11:169 (4,5) - similar to ^
00:15:034 (1) - sliderart looks a little weird here, cause 00:16:322 (4) - appears too late. (it's not really blanketed anyway) I'd prefer if you use a different shape for the slider (ye, sorry for nitpicking xD)
00:16:506 (1) - new "part" starts on the downbeat, having the spinner end there is kind of a waste, imo. :c Consider shortening the spinne rby 1/1 or 1/2 and add a circle or short slider at 00:17:979 - ?
01:14:482 (2,3,4) - patterns looks a little crowded and the jump from 3 to 4 exaggerated.. maybe you can change this up a bit?
example
01:26:261 (2,3,4) - similar to ^, you can move 4 a little to avoid that
screen
01:31:414 (6) - don't end the slider on the downbeat, please.. so dominant, should be clickable, imo. :c try this rhythm instead?

similar here: 03:34:359 (5) -
01:31:782 (1) - similar to the other spinner. end this earlier and place an object on the downbeat
makes more sense especially because of the rhythm you're following afterwards..
in general, I have a minor problem with the section following here, because of the emphasis of some beats, but complete ignorance of some other, very similar ones.
01:34:911 (1) - for example. the first blue and red tick are the same sounds as 01:35:647 (3,4,5) - , but not mapped, while the others are. the sounds here, too: 01:36:384 (6) - not mapped and here, first part of this slider 01:37:856 (2) -
01:39:788 - drum ignored, not even covered by a slider
Honestly, maybe you should take a closer look at this section and decide which sounds you want to map. Imo, it'd be alright, to make _all of the beats_ clickable, that's totally okay for this difficulty.
Anyway, if you need more help with this, feel free to ask for help ingame. I'd help you out with the rhythm, if that's needed. :3
(the same goes for the short section starting here 03:34:727 (1,1) - til 03:40:432 (1) - 03:40:432 (1) - )
03:54:236 (6,7) - this is the only time a circle's stacked below a sliderend, might be surprising, so I think it'd be better to unstack this
03:56:813 (5,6) - flow would work better with 03:56:261 (4) - if you change the placement of 5+6

welp, that's all from me. (tired of the song, sorry.. orz)
Hope I could help! If you have questions - feel free to ask
Good luck! //squee

Arcubin

689 posts

Joined September 2013

Arcubin 2015-08-10T15:24:55+00:00

we did some IRC mod for hard and lunatic diff

Things that changed :

odd rhythm
changed some pattern due readability issues
tags addition

IRC logs

22:52 Yohanes: Poi
22:52 Arcubin: poi
22:52 Arcubin: should we start?
22:52 Yohanes: yep
22:52 *Arcubin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750896 FELT - Story [Lunatic]]
22:53 Arcubin: gotta check metadata first
22:54 Yohanes: meta di post nya Ameth Riano itu dimasukin?
22:54 Yohanes: in thread
22:54 Arcubin: wait
22:54 Arcubin: >belum buka thread
22:54 Arcubin: wkwkwk
22:56 Arcubin: blah entar aku post tags nya barengan sama kudos
22:56 Yohanes: t/313997/start=30
22:56 Arcubin: original title belum masuk
22:56 Yohanes: I linked that uu~
22:57 Arcubin: so lag wdw
22:57 Arcubin: oh... rupanya aku juga lagi dl >.>
22:57 Arcubin: pantesan
22:57 Arcubin: awkawkawkk
22:57 Yohanes: Flowering Night
22:57 Yohanes: ada kok
22:57 Yohanes: ._.
22:58 Arcubin: yang katakana belum
22:58 Yohanes: Oh ok
22:58 Yohanes: lemme add it
22:58 Arcubin: 十六夜　咲夜 team shanghai alice zun tōhō seems unnecessary
22:59 Yohanes: 美歌 NAGI☆ Mika Reitaisai SP2 Phantasmagoria of Flower View フラワリングナイト東方花映塚 kaeidzuka zun th09 Sakuya Izayoi Flowering Night Touhou Rebirth Story yaldo_27 Fantastica Blizs Fizz
22:59 Yohanes: imo ZUN is necessary
22:59 Arcubin: yha
23:00 Arcubin: kebanyakan touhou song sekarang gak pake zun soalnya
23:00 Yohanes: Oke deh
23:00 Yohanes: remuve zun
23:00 Yohanes: move
23:00 Arcubin: ok
23:00 *Arcubin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750896 FELT - Story [Lunatic]]
23:01 Yohanes: 十六夜　咲夜 ini apa btw?
23:01 Arcubin: sakuya izayoi
23:01 Yohanes: o
23:02 Yohanes: okay, lets get going
23:02 Arcubin: k
23:02 Arcubin: 00:10:249 (4,5,1) - odd rhythm
23:02 Arcubin: make it like http://puu.sh/jwgZb.jpg ?
23:03 Yohanes: wait
23:03 Arcubin: k
23:04 Yohanes: there's really subtle sound here 00:10:617 -
23:04 Yohanes: I don't think i want to change
23:04 Yohanes: but i'll consider that
23:04 Arcubin: but it's low emphasize
23:04 Arcubin: not really comfortable to click at
23:04 Arcubin: but yeah it's yours
23:05 Yohanes: Kay~
23:05 Arcubin: 00:08:408 -
23:05 Arcubin: clickable sound
23:05 Arcubin: consider this one too~
23:06 Yohanes: okay, add circle
23:06 Arcubin: 00:23:316 (6,7) - add finish?
23:08 Yohanes: ok
23:09 Arcubin: 00:31:966 (1) - remove nc
23:09 Arcubin: and add nc at 00:31:414 (5) -
23:09 Arcubin: unstable nc
23:10 Yohanes: why?
23:10 Arcubin: unstable nc
23:10 Yohanes: ok
23:10 Arcubin: but yeah... it's current is indicating different pattern
23:10 Arcubin: your call?
23:10 Yohanes: unstable?
23:10 Arcubin: yha
23:10 Arcubin: sebelumnya tiap 1 downbeat
23:10 Yohanes: *inconssistent
23:10 Arcubin: blame my wording ;w;
23:11 Yohanes: changed NC
23:11 Yohanes: i blame you
23:11 Yohanes: xD
23:11 Arcubin: ;w;
23:11 Yohanes: fyi, i ctrl+g these two 00:40:433 (2,3) -
23:12 Arcubin: yha
23:12 Arcubin: 00:31:966 (3,4,5,6,1) - i feel comfortable with this kind of pattern btw http://puu.sh/jwhxf.jpg
23:13 Yohanes: I like that pattern xD
23:13 Arcubin: bisa buatnya?
23:13 Yohanes: also, i change the direction of the triangle
23:13 Arcubin: okay
23:13 Yohanes: cclockwise
23:14 Yohanes: *i like my pattern
23:14 Yohanes: blame my wording
23:14 Yohanes: ;w;
23:14 Arcubin: kek
23:14 *Arcubin blame
23:15 Arcubin: 00:55:525 (1,4,1) - inconsistent nc
23:16 Arcubin: 00:56:261 (4,5,1) - also wtf with this screen jump
23:17 Yohanes: reduces spacing
23:17 Arcubin: carefull with pattern
23:18 Arcubin: this one can be so bad if you wrong putting a jump
23:18 Yohanes: k k k
23:19 Arcubin: 01:00:494 (4,5,1) - overmapped
23:19 Arcubin: song doesn't deserve triplet
23:20 Yohanes: I think this fits quite well
23:20 Yohanes: I'll consider this aswell
23:20 Arcubin: k
23:20 Arcubin: 01:07:304 - remove timing point?
23:21 Arcubin: there's none her
23:21 Arcubin: e
23:21 Yohanes: oh ok
23:21 Arcubin: not necessary to add timing
23:22 Arcubin: 01:09:696 (3,1) - nc
23:22 Arcubin: 01:10:985 (4,1) - ^
23:22 Arcubin: 01:12:641 (4,1) - ^
23:22 Yohanes: pattern indicator
23:23 Arcubin: ikr
23:23 Arcubin: just reminder if it's really a mistake
23:23 Yohanes: kay~
23:24 Yohanes: pernah nggak sih, DQ gara2 NC?
23:24 Yohanes: xD
23:24 Arcubin: belum pernah denegr
23:24 Arcubin: and who the hell give a fuck to that
23:24 Arcubin: lol
23:24 Yohanes: lmao
23:24 Arcubin: 01:30:494 (2) - arc point not in centre
23:25 Arcubin: make a slight bad blanket
23:25 Yohanes: so NAZI
23:25 Arcubin: yea
23:25 Arcubin: ikr
23:26 Yohanes: fixsedzs
23:26 Arcubin: 01:36:752 (5,6,7,8,1) - killing back and forth imo
23:26 Arcubin: change pattern?
23:27 Arcubin: 01:36:199 (2,3,4) - soalnya disini triplet
23:27 Yohanes: ok~ I'll work on that
23:27 Yohanes: any suggestion?
23:28 Yohanes: gimme inspiration
23:28 Arcubin: wat
23:28 Arcubin: wait*
23:28 Yohanes: OoOoO
23:29 Yohanes: Oh, here should be 5-plet
23:29 Arcubin: lol
23:29 Arcubin: mini stream?
23:29 Yohanes: here to
23:29 Yohanes: 01:39:420 (2,3,4) -
23:29 Yohanes: working on that T_T
23:32 Arcubin: 01:36:199 (2,3,4) - jadi fiveplet kan?
23:32 Arcubin: if so my suggestion
23:32 Yohanes: jadi
23:33 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/jwiKY/920b225bf1.jpg can you see it?
23:34 Arcubin: 6 => 7 seems too far
23:34 Arcubin: 3(144,72). 4(128,84). 5(120,100). 6(116,120)
23:34 Yohanes: its a downward movement , so I think it should be fine
23:34 Arcubin: okay then
23:35 Yohanes: wat is dat?
23:35 Arcubin: nohing
23:35 Arcubin: pretend yuo don't see anything
23:35 Arcubin: >.>
23:36 Yohanes: lol ok
23:36 Arcubin: 02:05:647 (1,2,3,4) - i'm afraid with this jump
23:36 Arcubin: really
23:36 Arcubin: should be fine tho
23:37 Yohanes: actually I'm a bit worried too
23:38 Arcubin: the problem is it's back and forth
23:38 Yohanes: but for the meantime i'm not changing enithingu~
23:38 Arcubin: not jump distance
23:38 Arcubin: but as i said
23:38 Arcubin: should be fine
23:39 Yohanes: ok then =w=
23:39 Arcubin: okay
23:39 Arcubin: 02:09:144 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream too
23:39 Arcubin: it's come from no where ;w;
23:39 Arcubin: suggestion to make 02:09:512 (8) - a 1/2 or 3/4 slider
23:42 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/jwjeK/63606ab640.jpg ?
23:42 Yohanes: 8 blanket with 1
23:42 Arcubin: should be fine
23:42 Arcubin: okay
23:43 Yohanes: nice
23:46 Yohanes: a moment of silence
23:46 Arcubin: still searching
23:46 Yohanes: lol
23:46 Arcubin: honestly this one is very nice
23:47 Arcubin: yohanes is next frostmourne confirmed
23:47 Yohanes: lmao
23:48 Arcubin: just suggestion to map 5plet as triplet end up with repeat slider
23:48 Arcubin: "suggestion
23:48 Arcubin: "
23:49 Yohanes: hmm ok~
23:49 Yohanes: but I think 5plet as 5plet is what I want to do
23:49 Arcubin: that's why i say "just suggestion"
23:50 Yohanes: that's why i say "I think"
23:50 Yohanes: =w=
23:50 Arcubin: should i mod hard too?
23:50 Yohanes: yes please
23:50 *Arcubin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/704841 FELT - Story [Hard]]
23:51 Yohanes: there're few changes being made
23:51 Arcubin: upload it then
23:51 Yohanes: just havent uploaded it yet
23:51 Arcubin: i won't point out something already changed =w=
23:51 Yohanes: wait a min
23:52 Yohanes: up up up
23:52 Arcubin: updating
23:52 Arcubin: done
23:53 Yohanes: ~
23:53 Arcubin: welp
23:53 Yohanes: actually, I haven't read all of squee's mod
23:53 Arcubin: my first impression like
23:53 Arcubin: "wth, it's too slow
23:53 Arcubin: and then i check timing"
23:54 Arcubin: okay it's sv changes
23:54 Yohanes: umm, ok~
23:55 Arcubin: imo
23:55 Arcubin: player will get surprised
23:55 Arcubin: first play
23:55 Arcubin: first try*
23:55 Arcubin: cause the sv differentiation
23:56 Arcubin: but... it's mean you have to remap openig
23:56 Yohanes: yeah
23:56 Arcubin: which is painfull
23:56 Yohanes: fyi, I also remap opening on lunatic diff
23:56 Yohanes: lmao
23:56 Arcubin: kek
23:57 Yohanes: I think I want to stick with this
23:57 Arcubin: for now
23:57 Yohanes: I'm in a slump
23:57 Yohanes: aaaa
23:57 Arcubin: there's should be one who notice this too
23:58 Arcubin: but yeah nvm this
23:59 Arcubin: 00:37:672 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/jwkiC.jpg?
00:00 Arcubin: 01:07:304 - unnecessary timng point
00:00 Yohanes: ok
00:01 Arcubin: 01:18:531 (4) - http://puu.sh/jwks8.jpg should sound better
00:02 Arcubin: 01:27:549 - ignored high emphasize
00:04 Arcubin: 02:34:727 (2) - wdw spacing
00:05 Yohanes: 01:27:549 - what shoul I do then
00:05 Arcubin: stack with 01:27:733 (6) - should be fine
00:06 Arcubin: 01:27:733 (6) - this also get ignored
00:06 Yohanes: wait wait
00:07 Arcubin: okay
00:07 Yohanes: aku cinta bahasa Indonesia'
00:07 Arcubin: lol
00:07 Arcubin: kenapa gak indo aja dari tadi XD
00:07 Yohanes: kwkwkw
00:07 Yohanes: 01:27:549 - jelasin ulang bagian ini
00:07 Yohanes: ane gak mudeng congg~
00:07 Arcubin: stack aja sama 01:27:733 (6) -
00:08 Arcubin: imo bagus kok
00:09 Yohanes: ntar spacing nya gak konsisten 01:26:629 (3,4,5,6) -
00:09 Yohanes: might cause readibility issue
00:09 Arcubin: but song give such emphasize
00:09 Arcubin: at least for me
00:10 Arcubin: ato di stacks ama 01:26:997 (4) - juga bisa
00:10 Arcubin: tapi gak catchable
00:10 Yohanes: hmm, 'i'll consider that..
00:11 Arcubin: kay
00:11 Yohanes: no change for now '-'
00:11 Arcubin: ikr
00:11 Arcubin: 02:34:727 (2) - fix spacing
00:11 Arcubin: 02:50:003 (5) - remove whistle
00:11 Yohanes: fixedz
00:12 Arcubin: 02:56:997 (6,7) - suggestion to make it a triplet or reverse slider
00:12 Yohanes: no, I need "bum bum" there
00:13 Yohanes: repeat slider added
00:14 Arcubin: 03:45:586 (1) - don't do this
00:14 Arcubin: hard-tier player can't read sudden sv changes that much
00:14 Yohanes: do you think I need NC here? 02:06:199 (5) - sv changes
00:15 Arcubin: no need imo
00:15 Yohanes: 03:45:586 (1) - I'll change this
00:16 Arcubin: 03:45:586 (1) - move this somewhere else
00:16 Yohanes: 03:45:586 (1) - to be 0.75 instead of 0.5
00:16 Arcubin: don't stack
00:16 Arcubin: 03:58:469 (1) - i mean this
00:16 Arcubin: 03:45:586 (1) - 0.75 should be fine
00:18 Yohanes: 03:56:813 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - I'll reposition this
00:18 Arcubin: that should be all
00:18 Yohanes: re arrange
00:18 Yohanes: bleh~
00:18 Yohanes: re pattern
00:18 Yohanes: okay, post irc on thread

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2015-08-10T18:56:35+00:00

m4m

all suggestions
[general]

audio preview in Fizz's Insane Conflicts with the other diffs in the set make it the same pls
tags in Lunatic conflict with all other diffs make sure they are all the same

[Hard]

00:07:488 (3) - angle this a little less move the head to the right alittle
00:54:236 (6) - thought this angle was a bit strange try this http://puu.sh/jwwif/c0ad3e560c.jpg
00:56:813 (6,1) - blanket tail of 6
00:58:285 drum beat here, add a circle or make 00:58:101 (2) - a slider
00:58:653 (4) - stack this on 00:58:838 (5) - ?
02:22:948 (2) - make this face down instead? also blanet with 02:22:396 (1) -
03:46:690 (2,3,4) - stack under the tail? 03:45:586 (1) -

[Fizz's Insane]

00:20:095 add a circle here for a triplet?
01:21:844 (3) - ctl+g?

[Lunatic]

00:08:408 (3,1) - stack these, I feel 3 is really strange to read
00:55:065 (2,3) - I almost cant tell this is a triplet, make it more visible please
02:06:015 (3,4) - I feel the spacing is slightly overdone here
02:10:617 (1) - ctl+g
02:56:076 (1) - ctl+g flows better imo
03:35:647 (7,8,9,10,1) - you do these 5 stacks a lot and I would recommend to unstack them, and have movement, its a lot more fun to play with movement in these

nice set good luck with ranking

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2015-08-11T00:38:37+00:00

F Ant's Easy

00:15:954 (2) - until now u were following the piano (like 00:12:089 (1,2,3) - or 00:09:144 (1,2,3) - ) but suddendly u're skipping it at 00:16:322 - , u should better keep the rythm consistent.
00:33:991 (3) - i'd curve a bit this slider to the left, it give a pretty nice follow toward 00:35:095 (4) -
SPOILER
01:30:862 (4) - how about adding a reverse on this slider with a finish on end and then start the spinner at 01:32:150 - where the voice is actually starting, give a try.
01:59:758 (2) - the finish on head isn't needed, it doesn't emphasize anything.
02:45:218 (4,1) - this is pretty much the same suggestion as 01:30:862 (4) - reverse on slider and spinner starting at 02:46:506 -
03:33:807 (4,1) - same as before ~
03:39:696 (2,1) - guess what ;p

F Ant's Normal

00:16:506 (3) - I'd delete the reverse on the slider for two reason, firstly u won't skip piano sound at 00:17:611 - and secondly, u're generally willing to click on heavy beats (big white ticks) like this one 00:17:979 - so having a note or slider starting here would be more pleasant to play. here a suggestion of pattern
SPOILER
00:53:132 - Adding a note here would follow the voice perfectly
00:53:868 (2) - move this slider above (1), the movement feel more natural, here what i mean
SPOILER
01:19:819 (1,2) - same as above
01:31:782 (1) - like i mentioned on your easy, u should start the spinner where the voice is getting high, so at 01:31:782 (1) - and this go for the others spinners as well ( 02:46:138 (1) - // 03:34:727 (1) - // 03:40:617 (1) - )

Hard

from 00:06:200 - to 00:17:979 - i'd recommend u to use the same HS as your GDers (whistle emphasize piano)
00:06:200 (1) - finish on head
00:46:874 (7) - i'll take as exemple what i said on F Ant's normal at 00:16:506 (3) -, this is my personal opinion but i always thought it was weird to end a slider on heavy beats cuz "u're generally willing to click on them", so how about ending this slider 1/2 earlier and add a note 00:47:426 - with finish on it
00:54:052 - this blank feel off, i wasn't expecting it during the play, maybe use this rythm ?
SPOILER
01:26:261 (2,3) - i dunno if u intend to make a blanket here but it could be way better, try to fix it a bit
01:31:414 (6) - i'd change this slider into 2 notes for the same reason as 00:46:874 (7) -, U did it there 02:45:770 (6,1) - so why not :3 (fix this one as well > 03:09:328 (8) - )
02:34:727 (2) - at first sight, i thought it was a 1/4 rythm considering the low spacing, increase it.

Fizz's Insane

00:20:095 - blank intentional ? a note would fit perfectly imo (if u agree then add one 00:21:568 - and 00:27:457 - as well )
00:20:187 (4) - i'd curve this slider in the other direction , the movement feel forced, flow isn't that good here
SPOILER
00:41:169 - u shouldn't skip this piano and finish sound, this little break almost got me. try out this rythm.
SPOILER
01:07:120 (1) - NC not necessary
01:13:193 (1) - according your NC pattern, this one isn't supposed to be here, delete (or is it because u doesn't want exceed a certain combo?)
01:19:083 (1) - ^
01:30:862 (1) - ^
01:41:905 - this would be a good spot for a spinner don't u think ? until 01:43:377 -
02:06:199 (1) - NC off
02:20:923 (1) - ^
02:45:586 (1) - finish it 1/2 or 1/4 earlier (up to u) and add a note 02:45:954 - , click action is needed imo on this heavy beat.
03:18:162 (1) - once again NC doesn't concord with your pattern, i mean just look at 03:10:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 03:13:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
03:27:917 (1) - ^
sweet diff~

Lunatic

from 00:06:200 - to 00:17:979 - check what i said on Hard.
00:06:200 (1) - Finish on head
03:09:512 (2) - ctrl G, continuity of your previous pattern
00:42:457 (3) - move this slider a bit up to give a better flow between (2) and (4)
SPOILER
01:30:494 (2) - this look kinda weird, i was expecting a perfect blanket
03:04:175 (3) - move it a bit more under 3 or just curved in the other direction, it'll increase the flow
SPOILER
03:09:512 (2) - Triangle pattern? move to x:240,y:312
I really enjoyed this difficulty, good job .

that's it, Good set overall, gl

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-08-11T01:03:08+00:00

Depths wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
00:20:095 add a circle here for a triplet? oops yeah (I removed it in Crimmi's mod but actually prefer it here) added
01:21:844 (3) - ctl+g? I like how it is

Umi wrote:
Fizz's Insane
00:20:095 - blank intentional ? a note would fit perfectly imo (if u agree then add one 00:21:568 - and 00:27:457 - as well ) done
00:20:187 (4) - i'd curve this slider in the other direction , the movement feel forced, flow isn't that good here done
SPOILER
00:41:169 - u shouldn't skip this piano and finish sound, this little break almost got me. try out this rythm. didn't use your rhythm but I added a slider
SPOILER
01:07:120 (1) - NC not necessary I prefer it like this
01:13:193 (1) - according your NC pattern, this one isn't supposed to be here, delete (or is it because u doesn't want exceed a certain combo?) it's cuz there's a small SV change, so I put an NC there
01:19:083 (1) - ^
01:30:862 (1) - ^ i prefer it this way
01:41:905 - this would be a good spot for a spinner don't u think ? until 01:43:377 - added
02:06:199 (1) - NC off done
02:20:923 (1) - ^ this is consistent with 01:07:120 (1) -
02:45:586 (1) - finish it 1/2 or 1/4 earlier (up to u) and add a note 02:45:954 - , click action is needed imo on this heavy beat. done
03:18:162 (1) - once again NC doesn't concord with your pattern, i mean just look at 03:10:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 03:13:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fixed
03:27:917 (1) - ^ fixed
sweet diff~ thanks!

thanks for mods~

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Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-11T14:07:16+00:00

Squee

Squirrel wrote:
hey there c:
here's the mod you requested
rather short, but hopefully helpful >o<
also: I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me :3

General
Audio Preview is inconsistent, make sure it's adjusted in Fizz's Insane. ok
suggestions because of combocolours: red doesn't go well with the other colours, and cc#1 and #2 are very very similar in brightness.[box=different example colours cool \o/]
[Colours]
Combo1 : 80,210,255
Combo2 : 180,180,180
Combo3 : 102,217,174
Combo4 : 64,57,176
Hard
overall the diff is nice, but it feels like the DS is horribly inconsistent. :/ I'm pretty sure that can lead to confusion sometimes, as the rhythm isn't the easiest.. but Idk if you want to change that. I'd highly recommend sticking to one DS (intentional jumps are okay, sure), but constantly changing DS from 1.3. to 1.5 and 1.7 and 1.9 and above... up to you ofcourse.
there's an unnecessary green line at 03:40:433 - D: xD o
00:01:782 (1) - this should probably end earlier.. recovery time is very very low for a Hard diff and even in the Insane the spinner ends at 00:05:831 -
(I know it's a GD etc, but still the difficulties should be consistent and increasing from lowest to highest and ya, as I already said. the current recovery time is really extremely low. :c ) Alright, fixed
00:08:040 (4,5) - feels weird that 00:08:040 - and 00:08:224 - are clickable, but 00:08:408 - isn't, even tho it's the same sound. consider using three circles instead or use a short reverse slider to cover all three sounds. I'll think about it
00:11:169 (4,5) - similar to ^^
00:15:034 (1) - sliderart looks a little weird here, cause 00:16:322 (4) - appears too late. (it's not really blanketed anyway) I'd prefer if you use a different shape for the slider (ye, sorry for nitpicking xD) lol changed
00:16:506 (1) - new "part" starts on the downbeat, having the spinner end there is kind of a waste, imo. :c Consider shortening the spinne rby 1/1 or 1/2 and add a circle or short slider at 00:17:979 - ? I don't think I want to change this
01:14:482 (2,3,4) - patterns looks a little crowded and the jump from 3 to 4 exaggerated.. maybe you can change this up a bit? http://puu.sh/jv49I.jpg prefer mine~
01:26:261 (2,3,4) - similar to ^, you can move 4 a little to avoid that http://puu.sh/jv4fb.jpg u~ ^
01:31:414 (6) - don't end the slider on the downbeat, please.. so dominant, should be clickable, imo. :c try this rhythm instead? I split last slider into 2 circles, so yeah
]http://puu.sh/jv4i7.jpg
similar here: 03:34:359 (5) - I like it as it is actually
01:31:782 (1) - similar to the other spinner. end this earlier and place an object on the downbeat Uhh, no
makes more sense especially because of the rhythm you're following afterwards..
in general, I have a minor problem with the section following here, because of the emphasis of some beats, but complete ignorance of some other, very similar ones.
01:34:911 (1) - for example. the first blue and red tick are the same sounds as 01:35:647 (3,4,5) - , but not mapped, while the others are. the sounds here, too: 01:36:384 (6) - not mapped and here, first part of this slider 01:37:856 (2) -
01:39:788 - drum ignored, not even covered by a slider
Honestly, maybe you should take a closer look at this section and decide which sounds you want to map. Imo, it'd be alright, to make _all of the beats_ clickable, that's totally okay for this difficulty. I can't explain it properly, but to put it simply, I map this part as it is to make this diff doesn't filled by triplets or 5-plets. So, I think this kind of rhythm choice is fine as long I kept is as consistent as possible, without randomly put triplets here and there.
Anyway, if you need more help with this, feel free to ask for help ingame. I'd help you out with the rhythm, if that's needed. :3
(the same goes for the short section starting here 03:34:727 (1,1) - til 03:40:432 (1) - 03:40:432 (1) - )
03:54:236 (6,7) - this is the only time a circle's stacked below a sliderend, might be surprising, so I think it'd be better to unstack this I add one or two more like this, so It should be fine now I guess
03:56:813 (5,6) - flow would work better with 03:56:261 (4) - if you change the placement of 5+6 Re patterned
welp, that's all from me. (tired of the song, sorry.. orz) orz
Hope I could help! If you have questions - feel free to ask
Good luck! //squee

Depths

Depths wrote:
m4m

all suggestions
[general]
audio preview in Fizz's Insane Conflicts with the other diffs in the set make it the same pls Kay
tags in Lunatic conflict with all other diffs make sure they are all the same Kay
[Hard]
00:07:488 (3) - angle this a little less move the head to the right alittle Sure
00:54:236 (6) - thought this angle was a bit strange try this This could break the flow u.u http://puu.sh/jwwif/c0ad3e560c.jpg
00:56:813 (6,1) - blanket tail of 6 sorta fixed
00:58:285 drum beat here, add a circle or make 00:58:101 (2) - a slider Kay
00:58:653 (4) - stack this on 00:58:838 (5) - ? I changed this part
02:22:948 (2) - make this face down instead? also blanet with 02:22:396 (1) - Blanket fixed
03:46:690 (2,3,4) - stack under the tail? 03:45:586 (1) - Nooo...
[Lunatic]
00:08:408 (3,1) - stack these, I feel 3 is really strange to read Sure
00:55:065 (2,3) - I almost cant tell this is a triplet, make it more visible please Yea
02:06:015 (3,4) - I feel the spacing is slightly overdone here This is fine when playing actually
02:10:617 (1) - ctl+g Uh, this is hard. But I'll keep mine for the time being
02:56:076 (1) - ctl+g flows better imo ^
03:35:647 (7,8,9,10,1) - you do these 5 stacks a lot and I would recommend to unstack them, and have movement, its a lot more fun to play with movement in these I'll thinking bout it
nice set good luck with ranking

Umi

Umi wrote:

Hard
from 00:06:200 - to 00:17:979 - i'd recommend u to use the same HS as your GDers (whistle emphasize piano) Kay
00:06:200 (1) - finish on head K
00:46:874 (7) - i'll take as exemple what i said on F Ant's normal at 00:16:506 (3) -, this is my personal opinion but i always thought it was weird to end a slider on heavy beats cuz "u're generally willing to click on them", so how about ending this slider 1/2 earlier and add a note 00:47:426 - with finish on it Sure
00:54:052 - this blank feel off, i wasn't expecting it during the play, maybe use this rythm ? Okay
SPOILER
01:26:261 (2,3) - i dunno if u intend to make a blanket here but it could be way better, try to fix it a bit Ehh, fixed hopefully
01:31:414 (6) - i'd change this slider into 2 notes for the same reason as 00:46:874 (7) -, U did it there 02:45:770 (6,1) - so why not :3 (fix this one as well > 03:09:328 (8) - ) Oukay
02:34:727 (2) - at first sight, i thought it was a 1/4 rythm considering the low spacing, increase it. Yea

Lunatic
from 00:06:200 - to 00:17:979 - check what i said on Hard.
00:06:200 (1) - Finish on head K
03:09:512 (2) - ctrl G, continuity of your previous pattern Uhh what?
00:42:457 (3) - move this slider a bit up to give a better flow between (2) and (4) Sure, no big deal
SPOILER
01:30:494 (2) - this look kinda weird, i was expecting a perfect blanket fixedzs
03:04:175 (3) - move it a bit more under 3 or just curved in the other direction, it'll increase the flow Yeah
SPOILER
03:09:512 (2) - Triangle pattern? move to x:240,y:312 Umm? Btw, I change this pattern a bit
I really enjoyed this difficulty, good job . thx thx thx ^^

that's it, Good set overall, gl

Thank you guys for modding

I'll update when Blizs finished applying mods, also
@Blizs On normal 00:21:660 (2) - missing clap?

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-08-12T09:51:45+00:00

Wow... so many mods XD....
Will reply when I online

IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-12T14:40:07+00:00

Hi there, as requested.

SPOILER

Title: Story
Artist: FELT
Source: 東方Project
Reference: http://feltmusic.net/FELT005/
Too lazy to do a research on tags.

Poke me if you have any other questions, good luck!

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-08-12T21:31:40+00:00

Squirrel

Squirrel wrote:
hey there c:
here's the mod you requested
rather short, but hopefully helpful >o<
also: I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree with me :3

F Ant's Easy
overall a nice diff, but sadly very repetetive :c consistency is the key in Easy diff.
00:15:954 (2) - the slider should end on the red tick here at 00:16:322 - instead, because the sound is too dominant to be skipped. the slider even starts on a similar sound. you can start another slider on the downbeat, so it doesn't go unmapped: My previous pattern was the 2nd choice of yours XD. but I change it to be like this because it was modded and looks weird if I suddenly put 1/2 snap without anything have a big effect. So I change it.

If you think it's too hard for an Easy you could also extend the second slider, to make it easier to catch it:

but, imo, the first screen should work alright, you use similar rhythms later on in the diff. c:
00:58:469 (4) - why is this snapped to 1/8? o.o yea.... lol
01:55:157 (1,2) - gap feels weird here. beat goes on, vocals go on to. maybe you can try this rhythm instead: It's because I prefer fully follow the instrument.

similar: 01:58:101 (1,2) - etc
02:22:396 (1) - til 02:45:954 (1) - is this the first Kiai just flipped? completely? :C I don't know.. of course, people can do that and it's fine, but the song is sooooo repetetive... copying this long section and just flipping it over to the other side makes it worse. it's just boring to play. (maybe not for anyone, but still.) You can keep the rhythm, but pretty pretty please change the placement. at least at some parts. ;_; I think it's okay to keep it like this since it's an Easy diff. Like I said before, consistency is the key in Easy diff. It will be really boring if it applied for the diff that looks hard.
03:58:469 (1) - spinner's long enough, so to emphasize the beat at 03:58:469 - better add a circle there and shorten the spinner accordingly? I'm sorry, I don't know where should I put the spinner start ;w;
F Ant's Normal
diff is alright as it is. I don't agree with most rhythms and the flow, but that's just my personal preferance, so I won't say anything about that. owo
sooo, my only suggestion: 03:58:469 (1) - same as in Easy yea~~ like I said in Easy :3

welp, that's all from me. (tired of the song, sorry.. orz)
Hope I could help! If you have questions - feel free to ask
Good luck! //squee

Umi

Umi wrote:

F Ant's Easy
00:15:954 (2) - until now u were following the piano (like 00:12:089 (1,2,3) - or 00:09:144 (1,2,3) - ) but suddendly u're skipping it at 00:16:322 - , u should better keep the rythm consistent. I think it's a good point to put a transition since I hear a long guitar at 00:16:506 - that I think it's not really a good idea to ignore it.
00:33:991 (3) - i'd curve a bit this slider to the left, it give a pretty nice follow toward 00:35:095 (4) - I'll keep it straight with 00:32:703 (1) - .
SPOILER
01:30:862 (4) - how about adding a reverse on this slider with a finish on end and then start the spinner at 01:32:150 - where the voice is actually starting, give a try. I prefer add a circle rather than put a reverse because I think 01:31:598 - has a big effect :3 . Fixed~.
01:59:758 (2) - the finish on head isn't needed, it doesn't emphasize anything. removed
02:45:218 (4,1) - this is pretty much the same suggestion as 01:30:862 (4) - reverse on slider and spinner starting at 02:46:506 - Yup
03:33:807 (4,1) - same as before ~ Yup
03:39:696 (2,1) - guess what ;p I know ;p

F Ant's Normal
00:16:506 (3) - I'd delete the reverse on the slider for two reason, firstly u won't skip piano sound at 00:17:611 - and secondly, u're generally willing to click on heavy beats (big white ticks) like this one 00:17:979 - so having a note or slider starting here would be more pleasant to play. here a suggestion of pattern I change it to make a consistency with Easy diff
SPOILER
00:53:132 - Adding a note here would follow the voice perfectly Sorry, I follow the instrument ;w; I hear the drum paused on 00:52:948 - , so I think it looks good if the note was stopped there.
00:53:868 (2) - move this slider above (1), the movement feel more natural, here what i mean I'll keep mine since it's still not flowed badly. And I want to put some variation flows too :3.
SPOILER
01:19:819 (1,2) - same as above same as above
01:31:782 (1) - like i mentioned on your easy, u should start the spinner where the voice is getting high, so at 01:31:782 (1) - and this go for the others spinners as well ( 02:46:138 (1) - // 03:34:727 (1) - // 03:40:617 (1) - ) okay ;p

that's it, Good set overall, gl

Yohanes wrote:
@Blizs On normal 00:21:660 (2) - missing clap? added */me Give kudos to Yohanes XD

Thanks for mods >w<~~~

Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Yohanes

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Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-08-13T05:10:45+00:00

Updated!

Thanks for the metadata check Kwan

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-09-04T05:00:09+00:00

~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Fanta's easy]

01:59:758 - Use Additions Drum-clap instead a whistle there? then just clap there without Additions Drum? since you just suddenly change the rhythm, I think you should have consistent hitsound like you did on 01:55:157 (1,2,3) - and 02:01:046 (1,2,3) -
On these rhythm 01:55:157 (1,2) - 01:58:101 (1,2) - 02:01:046 (1,2) - Maybe you should try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZkW5/9d163cec63.jpg it'll better on cover both vocal and instrument there, because I'm not sure why you change the rhythm drastic so suddenly

Sisanya bagus

[Fanta's Normal]

00:52:396 - How about add a circle there with whistle? so the rhythm will follow the piano sequences there
01:05:831 (3) - I don't think that (3) with will represent anything imo, then this 01:07:120 (4) - should be stop around here 01:07:120 - if you want a stop moment on this part 01:07:304 towards the kiai, so try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg
02:19:451 (3,4) - Same as above, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg
01:12:089 - Delete whistle there? a bit contradictive with clap imo, doesn't sounds good
01:22:580 - Add whistle will sound better
02:00:126 - How about add a circle there? somewhat same as the first one I mention
02:55:524 - Add clap there? then use a whistle here 02:55:892 - instead a clap, lastly replace whistle with clap here 02:56:076 -
02:58:837 (2,3,4) - Tbh I'm not sure what are you try to follow there, kinda bad rhythm if I say, try this rhythm instead 02:58:837 (2,3,4) - so you can improve the curent rhythm
03:05:279 - 03:06:015 - Use whistle instead clap there?

[Hard]

00:51:660 (1,2) - Following the strong vocal on (2), you can swap NC on those two imo
01:12:641 (5) - How about change into a 1/2 slider instead and add circle here 01:13:009 -? I know you're trying to follow that long vocal, but kinda bad if I say because you skipped strong drum sound here 01:12:825 - , something like
02:26:997 (5) - Same as above
01:27:549 - Add circle there? because you skip the strong drum sound there
02:41:905 - Same as above
01:37:856 (2,4,5,6) - Move (4,5,6) somewhere else? it's overlapping with (2)
02:20:003 (4) - You can improve the rhythm there by shorter that slider into 1/1 instead and add circle here 02:20:555 - and here 02:20:739 - and a bit readjust the spinner, something like http://puu.sh/jZo3j/d933a93da3.jpg
02:42:089 (5,6,1) - Tbh the placement kinda too force, furthermore both transition and flow kinda bad there imo

[Fizz's Hard]

01:31:046 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try to nerf it a bit, by reducing the jump between triplet. Because it's a bit too hard to have triplet with large jump on Hard
02:27:549 (1,2,3) - How about ctrl+g them and move to x:136 y:60? beause the movement from 02:27:733 (3,4,5) - especially after the triplet kinda not comfortable imo, rather too sharp and sudden if I say
03:49:635 (2,4) - About the hitsound on those two, Im not sure why you're doing that, I mean you can have same hitsound like you did on 03:46:690 (2,4) - for consistency, furthermore using finish sound kinda not fit imo

Sweet

[Lunatic]

00:16:506 (1) - You can improve the rhythm by make the spinner a bit shorter, so this strong beat 00:17:979 - more clickable, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZpbp/e84ef3a1de.jpg, don't forget readjust the green line on red tick
00:20:739 (7) - How we move from (6,7,8) kinda not comfortable imo, so how about move that (7) to x:152 y:356?
00:55:065 (2,3) - Try not to stacking them, do something like http://puu.sh/jZoZL/32fd7cc6de.jpg it's more common to use these days
01:13:561 (3,4) - How about ctrl+g that? I prefer to make triangle pattern there, so it can improve the overall flow
02:06:384 (1,2) - How about move both to x:208 y:112? so it can improve the straight and triangle pattern
03:01:230 (2,1,2,3) - Reduce the jumps please, so the polarity more readable, idk why you put so much big jump there ;(
03:08:592 (1) - Maybe you can move that down a bit? because the movement kinda too crampped from 03:08:408 (2,1) - . Then try to consider nerf down
the overall jumps here 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - especially 03:09:328 (1,2) - kinda overdone to me

Spacingnya jauh jauh bgt ga ngerti deh -_- lebih condong ke random placing menurut aku

[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-04T10:57:52+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
[Fizz's Hard]
01:31:046 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try to nerf it a bit, by reducing the jump between triplet. Because it's a bit too hard to have triplet with large jump on Hard well, it IS an insane, not a hard, but I nerfed it a bit
02:27:549 (1,2,3) - How about ctrl+g them and move to x:136 y:60? beause the movement from 02:27:733 (3,4,5) - especially after the triplet kinda not comfortable imo, rather too sharp and sudden if I say stacked the triple
03:49:635 (2,4) - About the hitsound on those two, Im not sure why you're doing that, I mean you can have same hitsound like you did on 03:46:690 (2,4) - for consistency, furthermore using finish sound kinda not fit imo listen to the music, I'm mimicking what's in the percussion

Sweet thank you~

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Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-05T13:31:12+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Hard]
00:51:660 (1,2) - Following the strong vocal on (2), you can swap NC on those two imo right
01:12:641 (5) - How about change into a 1/2 slider instead and add circle here 01:13:009 -? I know you're trying to follow that long vocal, but kinda bad if I say because you skipped strong drum sound here 01:12:825 - , something like No problem, fixed
02:26:997 (5) - Same as above ^
01:27:549 - Add circle there? because you skip the strong drum sound there Y
02:41:905 - Same as above Y
01:37:856 (2,4,5,6) - Move (4,5,6) somewhere else? it's overlapping with (2) geser (2) dikit ke atas
02:20:003 (4) - You can improve the rhythm there by shorter that slider into 1/1 instead and add circle here 02:20:555 - and here 02:20:739 - and a bit readjust the spinner, something like http://puu.sh/jZo3j/d933a93da3.jpg Sure, nice
02:42:089 (5,6,1) - Tbh the placement kinda too force, furthermore both transition and flow kinda bad there imo I kinda like this pattern, so I'm not changing anything
[Lunatic]
00:16:506 (1) - You can improve the rhythm by make the spinner a bit shorter, so this strong beat 00:17:979 - more clickable, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZpbp/e84ef3a1de.jpg, don't forget readjust the green line on red tick Alright
00:20:739 (7) - How we move from (6,7,8) kinda not comfortable imo, so how about move that (7) to x:152 y:356? Keep this, but I tweak the slider slightly
00:55:065 (2,3) - Try not to stacking them, do something like http://puu.sh/jZoZL/32fd7cc6de.jpg it's more common to use these days Y
01:13:561 (3,4) - How about ctrl+g that? I prefer to make triangle pattern there, so it can improve the overall flow I don't really like triangle pattern that's not ended at the top circle I hope you get what I mean So, I'll keep it
02:06:384 (1,2) - How about move both to x:208 y:112? so it can improve the straight and triangle pattern Y
03:01:230 (2,1,2,3) - Reduce the jumps please, so the polarity more readable, idk why you put so much big jump there ;( Reduced
03:08:592 (1) - Maybe you can move that down a bit? because the movement kinda too crampped from 03:08:408 (2,1) - . Then try to consider nerf down
the overall jumps here 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - especially 03:09:328 (1,2) - kinda overdone to me Nerfed

Spacingnya jauh jauh bgt ga ngerti deh -_- lebih condong ke random placing menurut aku ._.
[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Thanks for the mods Mako

Sekarang nunggu Fanta selsai apply mods, baru update~

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-10T13:38:12+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
~~Aku masih mager jadi placeholder dulu~~

[Fanta's easy]
01:59:758 - Use Additions Drum-clap instead a whistle there? then just clap there without Additions Drum? since you just suddenly change the rhythm, I think you should have consistent hitsound like you did on 01:55:157 (1,2,3) - and 02:01:046 (1,2,3) - Fixed the first one. But I will keep the addition drum on the second point because I hear a tom in the song.
On these rhythm 01:55:157 (1,2) - 01:58:101 (1,2) - 02:01:046 (1,2) - Maybe you should try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZkW5/9d163cec63.jpg it'll better on cover both vocal and instrument there, because I'm not sure why you change the rhythm drastic so suddenly. I will keep the current pattern because I fullly follow the instrument here. And since they are consistent, I think it's okay.

Sisanya bagus Makasih >w<
[Fanta's Normal]
00:52:396 - How about add a circle there with whistle? so the rhythm will follow the piano sequences there Nope. I know there was a low volume piano on 00:52:396 - , but I think give a pause for the cymbal at 00:52:212 - would be good since it clearly heard.
01:05:831 (3) - I don't think that (3) with will represent anything imo, then this 01:07:120 (4) - should be stop around here 01:07:120 - if you want a stop moment on this part 01:07:304 towards the kiai, so try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg Remapped this part. But I use another pattern
02:19:451 (3,4) - Same as above, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jZmig/2f00ddaa9c.jpg Remapped this part. But I use another pattern
01:12:089 - Delete whistle there? a bit contradictive with clap imo, doesn't sounds good deleted idk why did it there lol
01:22:580 - Add whistle will sound better cool!!
02:00:126 - How about add a circle there? somewhat same as the first one I mention I mapped full instrument here, so I think it will looks weird if I put a circle just for the vocal.
02:55:524 - Add clap there? then use a whistle here 02:55:892 - instead a clap, lastly replace whistle with clap here 02:56:076 - cool >w<
02:58:837 (2,3,4) - Tbh I'm not sure what are you try to follow there, kinda bad rhythm if I say, try this rhythm instead 02:58:837 (2,3,4) - so you can improve the curent rhythm try what rythm anyway I changed the pattern.
03:05:279 - 03:06:015 - Use whistle instead clap there? changed
[]
Good luck! jangan buru buru yaaaw pap

Thanks for mod, Mako >w<
yaa I'm Fanta :33

Update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-11T06:49:49+00:00

Updated!

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-09-11T20:25:04+00:00

Didn't know you were yaldo at first lol hi.

[General]

Additional tags:
Fizz Smug Fantastica Blizs
Since these are your GDers
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is.

[Fizz]

00:12:089 (1,2) - Bad flow break make it smooth here.
00:22:948 (3) - Offbeat slider, switch with 2 circles.
00:40:433 (2,3) - Bad because tails end on strong beats. Suggestion:
http://puu.sh/k7T8x/2d8a6940da.jpg
01:06:752 (2) - Switch with two circles, both beats are of same intensity.
01:30:494 (2,3) - This should be spaced out, stack takes away too much momentum.
01:40:985 (3) - Switch with slider + circle b3ecause strong finish beat on tail.
02:03:991 (1) - 2 circles because strong beats.
02:38:776 (2) - ^, definitely because finish on tail is always a bad sign.
03:28:285 (7) - Ctrl+g for more intense movement
03:33:622 (3,4) - This doesn't work out as it follows nothing properly (not even vocals, they start at 03:33:807 - first).
03:33:622 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+g this and see how it fits the song.

[Lunatic]

Suboptimal rhythm patterns that leave out important beats or work against the layer of music you're trying to follow:
00:08:408 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 4's tail ends on a strong piano beat.
00:11:169 (2,3,4,5) - 2 ends on a strong beat.
00:13:930 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^, reversearrow in this case.
00:34:727 (4) - Goes over too many important beats.
00:35:647 (1,2,3,1) - Not recommended due to offbeat sliders and because piano is not what is dominant at this place.
00:51:476 (5) - ^
01:01:414 (3) - Goes over too many important drum beats.
01:08:960 (1) - 01:11:905 (2) - ^. You're doing this issue over and over again, please revisit these things properly. It might follow the vocal line, but consider the stronger beats as your main priority to map out.
01:37:856 (2,3,4) - 02:25:524 (2) - ^ etc.
02:04:911 (2) - Never ever do this, you're starting from a weak beat and end on a finisher.
01:08:500 (3) - Overmapped, should be at 01:08:316 -
00:10:433 (5,1) - Compare to 00:07:488 (1) - which sounds identical.
00:15:034 (5) - Finish too strong, whistle
Dysfunctional emphasis on certain beats:
00:23:500 (2) - Low spacing although this is as strong as 00:23:316 (1) -
01:17:795 (3,4) - 4 needs more emphasis.
01:20:371 (3) - Way too high emphasis compared to what it is representing in the song.
01:21:844 (3,5) - Stack for higher emphasis on 5.
01:23:684 (3,4) - Low spacing on 4
03:18:899 (6,7,1) - Low spacing on 1 although it's strongest beat here.
03:44:113 (5,6) - way too high.
Missing triples/ministreams:
00:23:776 -
00:58:746 -
02:39:236 - 03:27:825 -
Listen closer to the drums, there's more of these.
00:26:077 (2) - Crop by 1/4 and set a circle on the white tick to follow drums
02:24:788 (4) - Destroys your pattern.

Lower diffs look fine as i could see on first glance. Fizz' diff is nice too, although some rhythm patterns aren't very nice because of passive hitsounding (many claps on slidertails).
Lunatic needs a lot of work as rhythms are wonky and spacing is unrefined due to mentioned issues. Doesn't mean it's bad, but you should work on it still. Good luck! /o/

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2015-09-15T06:42:15+00:00

Apa kabar

[Hard]
00:54:604 (1,3) - Swap new combo for vocal part?
02:20:923 (1) - I think short spinner would having a bad gameplay though because some players couldn't spin well. Perhaps, extend it or replace with slider?
02:28:285 (1) - Make a blanket combo?

[Fizz's Insane]
00:43:193 (5,6) - Remove (6) and extend (5) by 1/2 for following vocal like you did in previous slider?
01:31:598 (1) - Why new combo? Any reason?
02:45:954 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
03:03:438 (1) - Why whistle at start?

That's all I got, good luck

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-16T09:19:13+00:00

Pho wrote:
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is.

I will keep use F Ant for the diff name like I did on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/660951&m=0 . So people still can notice me as Fantastica :3

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-16T09:40:58+00:00

Phoi

Pho wrote:
Didn't know you were yaldo at first lol hi. Ahahah

[General]
Additional tags:
Fizz Smug Fantastica Blizs
Since these are your GDers
Also concerning the two lowest diffs, you should switch the names to Blizs's diff unless he wants to keep it as it is. Yeah, he wants it
[Lunatic]
Suboptimal rhythm patterns that leave out important beats or work against the layer of music you're trying to follow:
00:08:408 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 4's tail ends on a strong piano beat. ✓
00:11:169 (2,3,4,5) - 2 ends on a strong beat.
00:13:930 (1) - ^
00:33:623 (3) - ^, reversearrow in this case. ✓
00:34:727 (4) - Goes over too many important beats. ✓
00:35:647 (1,2,3,1) - Not recommended due to offbeat sliders and because piano is not what is dominant at this place.
00:51:476 (5) - ^
01:01:414 (3) - Goes over too many important drum beats.
01:08:960 (1) - 01:11:905 (2) - ^. You're doing this issue over and over again, please revisit these things properly. It might follow the vocal line, but consider the stronger beats as your main priority to map out.
01:37:856 (2,3,4) - 02:25:524 (2) - ^ etc.
02:04:911 (2) - Never ever do this, you're starting from a weak beat and end on a finisher.
01:08:500 (3) - Overmapped, should be at 01:08:316 - ✓
00:10:433 (5,1) - Compare to 00:07:488 (1) - which sounds identical.
00:15:034 (5) - Finish too strong, whistle ✓
Dysfunctional emphasis on certain beats:
00:23:500 (2) - Low spacing although this is as strong as 00:23:316 (1) -
01:17:795 (3,4) - 4 needs more emphasis.
01:20:371 (3) - Way too high emphasis compared to what it is representing in the song. ✓
01:21:844 (3,5) - Stack for higher emphasis on 5. ✓
01:23:684 (3,4) - Low spacing on 4 Nah, while playing it's alright
03:18:899 (6,7,1) - Low spacing on 1 although it's strongest beat here. ✓
03:44:113 (5,6) - way too high. ✓
Missing triples/ministreams:
00:23:776 -
00:58:746 -
02:39:236 - 03:27:825 -
Listen closer to the drums, there's more of these.
00:26:077 (2) - Crop by 1/4 and set a circle on the white tick to follow drums
02:24:788 (4) - Destroys your pattern. I don't think so :/
Lower diffs look fine as i could see on first glance. Fizz' diff is nice too, although some rhythm patterns aren't very nice because of passive hitsounding (many claps on slidertails).
Lunatic needs a lot of work as rhythms are wonky and spacing is unrefined due to mentioned issues. Doesn't mean it's bad, but you should work on it still. Good luck! /o/

Sorry for taking so long to reply, my internet is on her period lately ._.
I think I need to talk about things that I don't reply directly, so if I had time I'll pm you in-game

Leo

Leorda wrote:
Apa kabar heiyo ^^

[Hard]
00:54:604 (1,3) - Swap new combo for vocal part? Oh, yeah
02:20:923 (1) - I think short spinner would having a bad gameplay though because some players couldn't spin well. Perhaps, extend it or replace with slider? I'll replace it with slider
02:28:285 (1) - Make a blanket combo? current one is fine imo

[Lunatic]
03:03:438 (1) - Why whistle at start? Ok, removed

That's all I got, good luck Okei

Thanks for the mod

I'll upload it once Fizz give me an update and after I finished fixed some problems

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-18T12:36:45+00:00

Pho wrote:
[Fizz]
00:12:089 (1,2) - Bad flow break make it smooth here. i don't see why it's bad
00:22:948 (3) - Offbeat slider, switch with 2 circles. following the piano sound
00:40:433 (2,3) - Bad because tails end on strong beats. Suggestion: done
01:06:752 (2) - Switch with two circles, both beats are of same intensity. exactly, both are same intensity so they're a slider. plus it helps emphasise the 1's power
01:30:494 (2,3) - This should be spaced out, stack takes away too much momentum. done
01:40:985 (3) - Switch with slider + circle b3ecause strong finish beat on tail. i don't like how slider + circle feels, I think the reverse does well to represent the "wind down" part
02:03:991 (1) - 2 circles because strong beats. done
02:38:776 (2) - ^, definitely because finish on tail is always a bad sign. done
03:28:285 (7) - Ctrl+g for more intense movement done
03:33:622 (3,4) - This doesn't work out as it follows nothing properly (not even vocals, they start at 03:33:807 - first).
03:33:622 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+g this and see how it fits the song. i really really like this rhythm for a lot of reasons, but the main one is that it keeps rhythmic consistency with the whole slow part

Leorda wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
00:43:193 (5,6) - Remove (6) and extend (5) by 1/2 for following vocal like you did in previous slider? i'm not sure i understand your suggestion, so no change
01:31:598 (1) - Why new combo? Any reason? downbeat
02:45:954 (1) - ^ ^

thank you for the mods, and sorry for late reply ;w;

update

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Creator:Yohanes
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Source:東方Project
Tags:美歌 NAGI☆ Mika Reitaisai SP2 kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View フラワリングナイト東方花映塚 th09 Sakuya Izayoi Flowering Night Touhou Rebirth Story yaldo_27 Fantastica Blizs Fizz
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19,222,235156,6,0,L|19:348,1,123.75,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,361,235525,2,0,P|65:361|104:336,1,82.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,186,235893,2,0,L|177:268,1,82.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,346,236261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,279,236445,6,0,L|357:106,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,235,236997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,216,237181,2,12,L|438:43,1,165,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,37,237733,2,0,L|218:43,2,41.25,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,37,238469,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,238561,12,2,244635,0:0:0:0:

KASUM1_old

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1_old 2015-09-21T14:08:38+00:00

Hello~! from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:10:433 (3,4) - bad flow , slider (3) shape is bad (imo)
00:22:580 (3,4) - more neater blanket? o.o
00:08:408 (4) - how about changing this slider to 2 circles on the white ticks
00:35:095 (4,1) - more neater blanket
00:45:402 (2,3) - ctrl+g better to follow vocals
01:11:721 (2,3) - I don't like the rhythm something like that better :

easy

03:51:475 (3) - this slider is bad , remove it and add a circle on the white tick

[Normal]
00:49:451 (4,1) - more neater blanket
03:56:261 - missing note

[Hard]
00:10:433 (3) - this slider should end here 00:10:801 - and add a circle here 00:10:985 -
00:20:187 (6,3) - overlap
02:22:396 (1,2) - bad flow something like this works forgot to picture something else , blanket (2) too

hard

02:28:101 (8,1) - blanket?
03:06:567 (1,3) - overlap

[Fizz's Insane]
02:57:733 (1) - this spin should start here 02:57:181 - or here 02:58:101 -
03:30:678 (3,1) - overlap

[Lunatic]
00:10:433 (5,1) - ctrl+g for better rhythm

01:58:102 (4,1) - ctrl+g (4) and fix blanket
03:02:518 (2,3) - fix blanket
03:02:794 (3,1) - overlap

Good mapset

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-22T16:18:42+00:00

KASUM1

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~! from #modreqs

[Hard]
00:10:433 (3) - this slider should end here 00:10:801 - and add a circle here 00:10:985 - Nah, to many things to click for this diff
00:20:187 (6,3) - overlap It's alright, since 6 has already disappear before 3 shows up
02:22:396 (1,2) - bad flow something like this works forgot to picture something else , blanket (2) too Ok
02:28:101 (8,1) - blanket? Nah, I like mine better
03:06:567 (1,3) - overlap Uh, i believe this one is alright

[Lunatic]
00:10:433 (5,1) - ctrl+g for better rhythm I kinda like this triangle pattern, no change
01:58:102 (4,1) - ctrl+g (4) and fix blanket ctrl+g would make the spacing way to big, and I don't really want to curve second slider even further
03:02:518 (2,3) - fix blanket Kay
03:02:794 (3,1) - overlap Yeah, this one is on purpose and I believe this is alright too

Good mapset <3

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Sorry I didn't change much, thanks for the mod anyway KASUM1

As usual, I'll update when my guests already finished applying mod

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2015-09-24T12:03:43+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
02:57:733 (1) - this spin should start here 02:57:181 - or here 02:58:101 - I like where it starts: on the downbeat with the crash cymbal, but I don't mind your suggestions here
03:30:678 (3,1) - overlap intentional

sorry for no changes, but thanks for the mod :3

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-09-25T11:15:15+00:00

KASUM1

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~! from #modreqs

[Easy]
00:10:433 (3,4) - bad flow , slider (3) shape is bad (imo) I think it's not really bad since there's so many people use this shape.
00:22:580 (3,4) - more neater blanket? o.o I'm not sure if it have blanket problem.
00:08:408 (4) - how about changing this slider to 2 circles on the white ticks I will keep mine. The pitch on the piano looks decreased so I think I will use just the higher pitch as click. And I want to keep consistency with 00:11:353 (4) - and 00:14:298 (4) -
00:35:095 (4,1) - more neater blanket I'm not sure if it have blanket problem.
00:45:402 (2,3) - ctrl+g better to follow vocals I want to keep 00:45:770 - as click for reversed slider because the vocal looks have a high pitch there.
01:11:721 (2,3) - I don't like the rhythm something like that better : I won't to ignore the vocal emphasis on 01:12:273 -
03:51:475 (3) - this slider is bad , remove it and add a circle on the white tick ummm..... I'm not really understand why the slider is bad.

[Normal]
00:49:451 (4,1) - more neater blanket Okay
03:56:261 - missing note I don't want to kill new players with sustained notes. And I hear a big effect cymbal on 03:56:076 - That I think it deserve a pause :3

Good mapset

Good luck with ranking , good to see you fizz ♥

Thanks for your mods >w<
Update :
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

Oh and additional mod for Lunatic :3

Lunatic

Maybe you can reduce the OD by 1 (OD=7). Since there's so many notes that have no recovery time from spinners to notes. it will frustrating for the players that not really good in spinning. They spinning and the score still not come out. When the score come oute, the spinners finished and continued with notes without recovery time. That's why it will frustrating (I'm not really good in spinning XD). But if we reduce the OD, the players can recovery after the score appear.
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - Straight notes looks doesnt really fit here since it looks broke the flow. How about move 01:15:770 (2) - to stack with 01:14:298 (2) - instead ?
02:06:199 (4,1) - Switch NC ? I think the vocal start on 02:06:199 - deserve the NC.
02:07:856 (3) - remove clap on the tail. I didn't hear any snares there.
02:51:475 (8,9,10,11,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3.
02:56:997 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3.
03:27:917 (3) - how about ctrl+g here ? Since I see that you generally use this flow in the whole diff (example 03:23:316 (3,4,1,2) - ). And it looks have a better flow too.

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2015-09-25T12:03:55+00:00

Blizs wrote:
Oh and additional mod for Lunatic :3

Lunatic
Maybe you can reduce the OD by 1 (OD=7). Since there's so many notes that have no recovery time from spinners to notes. it will frustrating for the players that not really good in spinning. They spinning and the score still not come out. When the score come oute, the spinners finished and continued with notes without recovery time. That's why it will frustrating (I'm not really good in spinning XD). But if we reduce the OD, the players can recovery after the score appear. discussed in irc, no change
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - Straight notes looks doesnt really fit here since it looks broke the flow. How about move 01:15:770 (2) - to stack with 01:14:298 (2) - instead ? Actually, I like how this part plays. No change
02:06:199 (4,1) - Switch NC ? I think the vocal start on 02:06:199 - deserve the NC. Kay
02:07:856 (3) - remove clap on the tail. I didn't hear any snares there. Yea
02:51:475 (8,9,10,11,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3. asdf discussed in irc aswell, fixed
02:56:997 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Be Careful!!!! This should be 1/3. ^
03:27:917 (3) - how about ctrl+g here ? Since I see that you generally use this flow in the whole diff (example 03:23:316 (3,4,1,2) - ). And it looks have a better flow too. Nah, I like this whole pattern to be smooth

Thanks Fanta!
Updated!

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2015-10-11T11:51:03+00:00

We did irc,

Log

2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Halloooo pap
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Aku mager periksaa nih
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: Gimana dong
2015-10-09 14:34 Yohanes: Yehoo
2015-10-09 14:34 Yohanes: lol
2015-10-09 14:34 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/705002 FELT - Story [F Ant's Normal]]
2015-10-09 14:35 Yohanes: yg berubah cuma lunatic sih sebenarnya
2015-10-09 14:35 Mako Sakata: Yahh
2015-10-09 14:35 Mako Sakata: Fantasticanya ga ada yah
2015-10-09 14:36 Yohanes: iya, lagi off dia nya
2015-10-09 14:39 Mako Sakata: Aku agak ganjil sama ini 03:07:856 (3) - di normal
2015-10-09 14:40 Mako Sakata: Kayanya lebih pas pake 1/2 slider ngikutin vokal, jadi gini http://puu.sh/kDMuF/806486a813.jpg
2015-10-09 14:41 Mako Sakata: Terus spinner ini 03:09:512 (1) - kok pake finish? padahal di easy pake suara default whistle
2015-10-09 14:41 Mako Sakata: Lebih cocok pake default wishtle kata aku mah
2015-10-09 14:46 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/704841 FELT - Story [Hard]]
2015-10-09 14:47 Mako Sakata: 00:29:758 (2) - Kalo itu nc bgmn kak? yang di hard
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: Oiya
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: yang normal nanti aku sampein si fanta
2015-10-09 14:48 Yohanes: tapi aku setuju sih
2015-10-09 14:49 Yohanes: 00:29:758 (2) - NC-ed
2015-10-09 14:49 Mako Sakata: 01:38:592 (4,5,6) - Itu overlap kak pas dimainin sama 01:37:856 (2) - 
2015-10-09 14:49 Mako Sakata: Coba mungkin pindah 456 nya agak ke bawah deh
2015-10-09 14:51 Yohanes: ok
2015-10-09 14:51 Mako Sakata: Kak ajarin buat slider kaya gini dooong 02:20:739 (6) - 
2015-10-09 14:51 Mako Sakata: Lucu bentuknya
2015-10-09 14:52 Yohanes: itu aku ngawur bikinnya lol
2015-10-09 14:53 Yohanes: *asal jadi
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Aku harus jadi ngawur berarti biar bisa buat kaya gitu XD
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Kaaaaakk kalo ini dijadiin blanket 02:41:353 (4,5) - ?
2015-10-09 14:54 Mako Sakata: Somehow nanggung bgt
2015-10-09 14:54 Yohanes: 02:41:353 (4,5) - aku khawatir spacingnya
2015-10-09 14:55 Yohanes: 4 nya di curve lagi?
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Iya curve lg dikiit
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Kak kalo ctrl+g ini 02:48:899 (1,2) - bgmn?
2015-10-09 14:56 Mako Sakata: Somehow lebih enak mencet slider dulu baru circle
2015-10-09 14:57 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDN3G/0fc8b78081.jpg moga2 spacingnya gak jadi masalah
2015-10-09 14:58 Mako Sakata: Gpp kook
2015-10-09 14:59 Yohanes: 02:48:899 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/kDN7R/1e27f4ff53.jpg
2015-10-09 15:00 Mako Sakata: Okke
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: Kak tambah circle di sini 03:30:494 - ?
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: Somehow kerasa empty
2015-10-09 15:01 Mako Sakata: http://puu.sh/kDNdK/5303bce26a.jpg
2015-10-09 15:03 Mako Sakata: Terus yang ini 03:31:598 (1,2) - menurut aku ritmenya agak ganjil, mungkin dijadiin kaya gini bagus kak http://puu.sh/kDNfr/81c70fe48f.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNl2/73a700236b.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Mako Sakata: Kak reverse yang ini aneh engga sih 03:47:426 (6) - sama 03:50:371 (6) - ? kayanya di situ cuma triplet deh, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus kak http://puu.sh/kDNkS/f1ea04a099.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Mako Sakata: Kaaaak kalo ada yang ngerasa ga cocok sama mod aku bilang aja yaa
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNmu/e04590fd89.jpg
2015-10-09 15:06 Yohanes: oke
2015-10-09 15:07 Yohanes: sejauh ini gak ada masalah kok
2015-10-09 15:07 Mako Sakata: Oke oke
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Keren kak hardnya
2015-10-09 15:08 Yohanes: 03:47:426 (6,6) - kalo triplet & circle rasanya agak kosong
2015-10-09 15:08 Yohanes: jadinya nggak aku ubah
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Jadi mau keep aja?
2015-10-09 15:08 Mako Sakata: Oke deeh
2015-10-09 15:09 Yohanes: iya
2015-10-09 15:09 Yohanes: uww, thanks =w=
2015-10-09 15:18 Mako Sakata: Punya frizz juga udah keren kak
2015-10-09 15:19 Mako Sakata: Tapi entah hitsound bagian ini 03:49:635 (2,3,4) - agak ga enak
2015-10-09 15:19 Mako Sakata: Terutama clapnya
2015-10-09 15:22 Yohanes: bentar, aku bilang fizz dulu
2015-10-09 15:23 Mako Sakata: Oke oke
2015-10-09 15:23 Mako Sakata: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750896 FELT - Story [Lunatic]]
2015-10-09 15:25 Yohanes: http://puu.sh/kDNUr/7d4754b855.jpg <<~ Fizz
2015-10-09 15:25 Mako Sakata: Mungkin 01:22:212 (4) - rotate 15 drajat kak? biar lebih enak ke (5) nya http://puu.sh/kDNVL/402f264c9a.jpg
2015-10-09 15:26 Mako Sakata: Okeeey
2015-10-09 15:28 Yohanes: 01:22:212 (4) - rotated
2015-10-09 15:30 Mako Sakata: Oke
2015-10-09 15:30 Mako Sakata: Kak aku mau tanya, 03:08:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - itu kok kombonya kaya gitu?
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: coz it looks cool
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: jk
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: buat readability
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: and it looks cool
2015-10-09 15:31 Yohanes: sama kaya yang ini 03:55:156 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) -
2015-10-09 15:32 Mako Sakata: Hem
2015-10-09 15:32 Mako Sakata: Kalo yang ini 03:48:530 (7) - kok engga pake s:c1 clap kak?
2015-10-09 15:33 Mako Sakata: 03:57:365 (3) - kalo tambah clap?
2015-10-09 15:34 Mako Sakata: Aku seneng kalo meriksa map baguss XD
2015-10-09 15:34 Mako Sakata: Sedikit yang harus disebutin
2015-10-09 15:34 Yohanes: 03:48:530 (7) - s:c1 kan suaranya "ngebass" jadi rasanya kurang cocok kalo dipake di bagian yg suara instrument nya "tinggi"
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: ACTION can't explain properly
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Ga ngeeeeh
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: Thanks Makoo =w=
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Ohh
2015-10-09 15:35 Yohanes: ~~~
2015-10-09 15:35 Mako Sakata: Jadi prefer whistle c:c1 aja?
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: *s:c2
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: iyap
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: 03:57:365 (3) - kalo tambah clap, terlalu berisik
2015-10-09 15:36 Yohanes: emphasis nya nggak dapet imo
2015-10-09 15:36 Mako Sakata: Oh iyaaa sc2 XD
2015-10-09 15:36 Mako Sakata: Yaudah deh
2015-10-09 15:37 Mako Sakata: Kalo udah diupdate berkabar ya kak
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: oke oke~
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: aku nunggu fantastica online dulu
2015-10-09 15:37 Yohanes: baru ntar update
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: oiya, hitsound-nya hard aku ubah
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: jadi mirip lunatic
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: mau di cek atau nggak usah?
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Ga usah kak
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Aku udah mager lagi
2015-10-09 15:38 Yohanes: wkwkwk oke deh
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Aku percayaaaaa
2015-10-09 15:38 Mako Sakata: Kepada dirimu
2015-10-09 15:39 Mako Sakata: Yang menci
2015-10-09 15:39 Mako Sakata: Oke2
2015-10-09 15:39 Yohanes: lol okay~
2015-10-09 15:40 Yohanes: eh, nggak perlu kudos lagi kan?
2015-10-09 15:40 Yohanes: yg kemarin udah 2 :P
2015-10-09 15:41 Mako Sakata: Engga usaaaah
2015-10-09 15:41 Mako Sakata: Aku maunya uaaang $$$
2015-10-09 15:41 Yohanes: ._.
2015-10-09 15:41 dasar *beeb* *beeb*
2015-10-09 15:42 Yohanes: xD
2015-10-09 15:45 Mako Sakata: Beeb beeb atau beb beb
2015-10-09 15:45 Mako Sakata: Hayoooo
2015-10-09 15:50 Yohanes: LOL
2015-10-09 15:50 Yohanes: terserah, yang manapun boleh ;;)
2015-10-09 15:51 Yohanes: wwww

Good luck papa aldo and friends~

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-10-13T00:51:14+00:00

gratzz for first bubble, Yohan ;33

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2015-10-13T13:05:53+00:00

Wohooo!

[General]

For all diffs, I feel weird about the last kiai (start from 03:34:543 - - ) . I would like to give my opinion for them . About the previous kiai (start from 03:22:764 - - ), don't you think it would even more better to have it ended on 03:34:543 - ? 03:31:598 - End it on here feels nonsense for me . Then, you can just delete the next kiai section, because they feel really out of place in my point of view

[F Ant's Easy]

00:15:954 (2,3) - To catch the pianos, it is more greater to switch rhythm between these two . It won't affects the playability

[F Ant's Normal]

00:15:586 (2,3) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here, because (3) start on something not important at all . You may want to give more emphasis to 00:16:322 - , so how about try to remove reverse from (2), then place (3) on 00:16:322 - after reverse removed . It works even more better and sounds nice for me . 3/2 gap after this rhythm isn't affects too much, so I think it's fine to apply this point
03:29:205 - For me, there is no point to keep this beat/vocal being mapped along the song, because the next beat on 03:29:389 - is really more prominent . You may want to think out more this complaint . I have my own suggestion for this, hope you can try to use it once (With this rhythm, you will allowed to catch the vocals and drums more precise . The gaps are also constant, so it won't be a problem to have it like this)
SPOILER

[]
I assume the other diffs are fine . If you wasn't really sure about them, you can ask me again to check them entirely
Call me again after fix (Don't forget to tell me about your certainty for higher diffs)

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2015-10-14T10:19:20+00:00

Ipas wrote:
Wohooo!

[General]
For all diffs, I feel weird about the last kiai (start from 03:34:543 - - ) . I would like to give my opinion for them . About the previous kiai (start from 03:22:764 - - ), don't you think it would even more better to have it ended on 03:34:543 - ? 03:31:598 - End it on here feels nonsense for me . Then, you can just delete the next kiai section, because they feel really out of place in my point of view I'll let Yohan fix mine :3
[F Ant's Easy]
00:15:954 (2,3) - To catch the pianos, it is more greater to switch rhythm between these two . It won't affects the playability Nice >w< some people mentioned about it but I can't find a nice pattern for it. fixed
[F Ant's Normal]
00:15:586 (2,3) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here, because (3) start on something not important at all . You may want to give more emphasis to 00:16:322 - , so how about try to remove reverse from (2), then place (3) on 00:16:322 - after reverse removed . It works even more better and sounds nice for me . 3/2 gap after this rhythm isn't affects too much, so I think it's fine to apply this point Hmmm... I think you have a point here. So fixed.
03:29:205 - For me, there is no point to keep this beat/vocal being mapped along the song, because the next beat on 03:29:389 - is really more prominent . You may want to think out more this complaint . I have my own suggestion for this, hope you can try to use it once (With this rhythm, you will allowed to catch the vocals and drums more precise . The gaps are also constant, so it won't be a problem to have it like this) Nope here. Since this is Normal diff, I want to try to make the pattern really easy to read. And I think put a 1/2 slider between 3/2 gap looks kinda hard to read.
SPOILER
[]
I assume the other diffs are fine . If you wasn't really sure about them, you can ask me again to check them entirely
Call me again after fix (Don't forget to tell me about your certainty for higher diffs)

Thanks for the mod, Ipas >w<
update :
F Ant's Easy : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=rtDb9BVw
F Ant's Normal : http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=KXA4sK6z

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2015-11-02T09:07:10+00:00

Metadata done (semua dah bener......), next tinggal ngemodding beatmap....

good luck for your map.... i'm waiting your map in ranked/approved beatmaps.....

lumayan ngoleksi semua map felt di osu dan albumnya dikomputer..... (hampir semua koleksi album felt yang didapat)

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2015-12-23T03:12:04+00:00

oh damn gogogo

FELT is love~

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-01-20T07:03:32+00:00

Updated Blizs diff!
Also, make some changes on Lunatic...
I think rebubbling is necessary

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-01-20T07:42:30+00:00

After all this time😩😩😩😩

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-01-20T08:30:14+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
After all this time😩😩😩😩

Still better than leaving this map untouched & doing nothing orz
I'll rank this tho, hopefully

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2016-01-31T11:40:31+00:00

hype!!!

Riviclia

38 posts

Joined May 2012

Riviclia 2016-02-05T16:09:31+00:00

I want to mod this

F Ant's Easy

03:08:776 (4) - strong beats, two circles feel better

F Ant's Normal

02:00:310 (5) - http://puu.sh/mFAbF/7dc096121d.jpg

Hard

01:37:856 (2,3,4) - reduce distance
02:01:414 (1,2) - ^
02:25:892 (2) - two circles? voice sounds clear
03:09:328 (8) - put it under 6
03:18:530 (5) - two circles?.. voice sounds too clear

and I feel distances too inconsistent

Fizz's Insane

02:08:224 (1) - curve upward
02:10:433 (2) - move more away from 1, it looks like 1/1 between 2 and 3
02:21:107 (3,4) - change clap to whistle
03:06:567 (1,2) - far unlike others

Lunatic

02:04:911 (2) - shorten to 1/2 slider and add circle
02:24:420 (3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/mUgSF/0be1fafc2a.jpg

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-04-05T08:11:14+00:00

@Riviclia : on Hard, fixed all except 03:09:328 (8) - Thank you for modding!

Remapped Lunatic from scratch!
Redownload please, thank you

Edit : I forgot to mention that I change the CC across all diffs, let me know if you want to revert it to older color

Battle

2,875 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-04-08T09:49:03+00:00

free kds

2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: Hi battle
2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: can I ask 4 testplay?
2016-04-08 02:25 Battle: s u re
2016-04-08 02:25 Yohanes: oh, wait let me update it for a sec
2016-04-08 02:25 Battle: mk
2016-04-08 02:26 Yohanes: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944709 FELT - Story]
2016-04-08 02:26 Yohanes: L u n a t i c
2016-04-08 02:26 Battle: dling
2016-04-08 02:31 Yohanes: almost FC
2016-04-08 02:31 Battle: that one pattern
2016-04-08 02:31 Battle: that i broke at felt weird
2016-04-08 02:32 Yohanes: 03:46:506 (1,2,3) - ?
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: 03:46:046 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -  like
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: you could remove 03:46:230 (4) -  cuz like
2016-04-08 02:32 Battle: i dunno, emphasizing the downbeat would probably be good
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: ah
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: i c kinda now
2016-04-08 02:33 Battle: it feels kinda weird cuz in the section it like never follows up a stream w/ a slider
2016-04-08 02:33 Yohanes: yes
2016-04-08 02:34 Yohanes: that's the only time I use 1/2slider+duplet
2016-04-08 02:34 Battle: i dunno with the way it was playing, having that bit of variation made it like
2016-04-08 02:34 Battle: awk
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: i guess it's mostly cuz the whole 1/1 slider being there lol
2016-04-08 02:35 Yohanes: probably I should change the slider into circle instead (?)
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: ya
2016-04-08 02:35 Battle: the slider after the stream
2016-04-08 02:36 Yohanes: alright
2016-04-08 02:36 Yohanes: is there anything else maybe?
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: and i think it's like a personal thing but like
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: the pauses before the kiai really take away from like the momentum 
2016-04-08 02:36 Battle: during play
2016-04-08 02:37 Yohanes: I like the pause actually lol
2016-04-08 02:37 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:37 Yohanes: cuz it emphasize the drums quite well
2016-04-08 02:37 Battle: tru
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: hm
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: 02:20:739 (1) -  maybe for this map it out?
2016-04-08 02:38 Battle: so that way the pause is more emphasized?
2016-04-08 02:38 Yohanes: drums are too weak to be mapped imo
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: originally I put a spinner there
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: hm
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: fair enough
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: and I think the "Whoooaaaaazzzzzzz" sound is more important
2016-04-08 02:39 Yohanes: lol
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: since the whoooooosh sound 
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: is like
2016-04-08 02:39 Battle: bam
2016-04-08 02:40 Battle: 00:54:604 (1,2,3) -  btw these triggered me lmao
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: that's about it lol
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: you can count me as "out of idea where to put it"
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: alright
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: i dunno what's going on with the stack leniency there
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: did the triplets feels weird?
2016-04-08 02:41 Yohanes: on kiai
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: mm naw
2016-04-08 02:41 Battle: oh
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: increase stack leniency
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: so they'll stack
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: for those things 
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:42 Battle: cuz there's a few places where stack leniency kinda fks up visuals
2016-04-08 02:42 Yohanes: yeah, probably I should mess around with that
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: i never turned on stacking on editor
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: lo
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: cuz it's like
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: aaaa
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: so I don't know how they look while playing
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: lol
2016-04-08 02:43 Battle: i have stacks on on editor
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: well
2016-04-08 02:43 Yohanes: i turned it on now
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: mmmmmm
2016-04-08 02:44 Yohanes: and realized how disgusting this one looks 00:54:604 (1,2,3) -
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: lmaoooo
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: yepppppp
2016-04-08 02:44 Battle: 8 sl makes it stack
2016-04-08 02:45 Yohanes: true
2016-04-08 02:45 Yohanes: that doesn't affect gameplay in every way right?
2016-04-08 02:46 Yohanes: just affect the visuals
2016-04-08 02:46 Battle: ya but it looks real distracting lol
2016-04-08 02:46 Battle: with it not stacked
2016-04-08 02:47 Battle: visuals only
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: alright, nice
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: now I'll turned it off
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: stacking I mean, because
2016-04-08 02:47 Yohanes: you know
2016-04-08 02:48 Battle: lol
2016-04-08 02:48 Yohanes: to keep my sanity

Modem

3,013 posts

Joined February 2014

Modem 2016-08-07T16:07:17+00:00

>v<

21:07 Yohanes: Hai Modem! :D
21:07 Yohanes: test hard diff map aku bisa nggak?
21:07 Modem: Hm, oke :3
21:08 *Yohanes is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1049109 FELT - Story]
21:08 Yohanes: Barusan remap hard soalnya
21:09 Modem: Downloading~
21:09 Modem: Tapi aku gak jago-jago banget. Gak papa nih? o.o
21:10 Yohanes: Nggak apa
21:10 Yohanes: justru bagus malah wkwkwkw
21:10 Modem: owo
21:10 Modem: Oke then >3<
21:10 Yohanes: :D
21:18 Yohanes: :3
21:22 Modem: Huwa that's embarassing XD
21:22 Yohanes: :DDD
21:22 Modem: Laptopnya ngelag pas kiai time kedua =v=
21:22 Modem: Tapi hardnya asik kok. Nggak overmap owob
21:23 Yohanes: Ooo, pantesan :D
21:23 Yohanes: paling sekarang aku tahu bagian mana yg perlu perbaikan
21:23 Yohanes: btw
21:23 Modem: Hm? ovo
21:23 Yohanes: 02:49:451 (3,4,5,1) - ini nggak enak ya?
21:24 Modem: Hm, iya tadi agak kepeleset di situ o.o
21:24 Modem: Gimana kalau (4) nya nggak usah disembunyiin?
21:24 Yohanes: xD aku ganti deh
21:25 Yohanes: Kalo 5 aku taruh di 02:48:899 (1) - gimana?
21:25 Yohanes: atau 4 nya aku pindah?
21:25 Modem: Hm, sebentar, aku screenshot dulu :3
21:26 Modem: http://puu.sh/qsSTa/4e805bd4a8.jpg
21:26 Modem: Kalau gitu gimana? 
21:26 Modem: Jadi (5) distack sama headnya (2)
21:26 Modem: Trus (1) distack sama (4)
21:28 Yohanes: Ooo, boleh juga
21:28 Yohanes: changed!
21:28 Modem: Yay
21:29 Yohanes: ada yg lain nggak?
21:29 Yohanes: maksudnya yg perlu adjustment
21:29 Modem: Hm, ok aku cek dulu ya :3
21:32 Modem: 00:19:635 (4) - Gimana kalau di add whistle? 
21:32 Yohanes: Oke
21:32 Modem: Soalnya 00:22:580 (4) - sudah di add whistle :3
21:32 Modem: yay
21:33 Yohanes: ini hitsoundnya aku cuma copy dari lunatic lol
21:33 Modem: Oh XD
21:33 Yohanes: belum di ricek lagi wkwkw
21:33 Modem: xd
21:34 Modem: 00:57:549 (4) - Remove whistle dari headnya? Agak loud soalnya xd
21:36 Modem: 01:18:163 (1) - Ini kepalanya agak kurang ngestack sama kepalanya 01:16:874 (1) 
21:36 Yohanes: emm, ok deh
21:36 Modem: :D
21:36 Yohanes: stack fixed!
21:36 Modem: \:D
21:36 Yohanes: itu emang entah kenapa suka lari2 sendiri stacknya
21:36 Modem: \:D/
21:37 Modem: Iyap, mapku juga XD
21:37 Yohanes: xD
21:37 Modem: 01:21:107 (3) - Ekornya owo
21:38 Modem: Oya, disable Widescreen Supportnya
21:38 Yohanes: oh, nyala toh widescreen supportnya lol
21:38 Modem: XD
21:38 Yohanes: 01:21:107 (3) - kalo ini sih nggak bisa diapa-apain lagi xD
21:39 Modem: Oh xd
21:39 Yohanes: oh bisa ternyata
21:39 Yohanes: hahaha
21:39 Modem: Oh owo
21:39 Modem: 02:10:617 (3) - Um, ekor o3o
21:40 Yohanes: fixed!
21:40 Modem: :D
21:40 Modem: 02:20:739 (1,1) - I luv this
21:40 Yohanes: btw, ini 02:14:666 (5,1) - mainnya oke nggak?
21:41 Yohanes: thanks owo
21:42 Modem: :d
21:42 Modem: Hm, 02:14:666 (5,1) - Jumpnya agak kejauhan ya, considering downbeatnya sebenernya ada di 02:15:770 (3)
21:44 Yohanes: mmmm
21:45 Modem: Gimana kalau 02:15:034 (1) agak dibengkokin lagi -> http://puu.sh/qsTFM/b44b1a1702.jpg
21:45 Modem: Biar lebih comfortable pas jump :3
21:46 Yohanes: mmm, okelah aku bengkokin dikit lagi
21:46 Modem: \:D/
21:46 Modem: Trus remove NC di 02:15:034 (1) & add NC di 02:15:770 (3) 
21:47 Yohanes: Oiya
21:47 Yohanes: mabok NCan ku xDxD
21:47 Modem: XD
21:47 Modem: Aku juga sering gitu sampe dimarahin BN XD
21:48 Modem: 02:36:199 (3,1) - Yang ini jumpnya enak
21:48 Modem: Tapi ekornya 02:36:199 (3) uwu
21:48 Modem: 02:45:954 (4) - NC please />w</
21:48 Yohanes: xD, fixed
21:49 Yohanes: Ok
21:49 Modem: \:D/
21:50 Modem: 03:31:598 (5) - NC owo
21:50 Yohanes: Okk
21:50 Yohanes: 03:32:886 - perlu NC nggak?
21:51 Modem: Yup ^^
21:51 Yohanes: sipp
21:51 Modem: 03:08:408 (2) - Gimana kalau -> http://puu.sh/qsTWS/4a169756d5.jpg
21:52 Modem: Biar triangle pattern jumpnya lebih luwes owob
21:52 Modem: Trus lebih asik kalau 03:09:512 diremove reverse part nya trus diganti sama circle + NC
21:53 Modem: Trus distack di ekornya (2)
21:53 Yohanes: Hmm okelah~
21:53 Yohanes: tapi aku mau ada reverse nya disitu
21:53 Modem: Oh oki~
21:53 Yohanes: I just l;ove it for some reason xDD
21:54 Modem: owo
21:55 Modem: 03:40:432 (3) - NC owo
21:55 Modem: Trus remove NC di 03:39:328 (1) 
21:55 Yohanes: Aaaa, aku suka NC an nya kaya gitu
21:55 Yohanes: biar ngebedain mana yg 1/2 sama yg 1/1
21:56 Modem: Hm, oke then XD
21:56 Modem: 03:52:211 (4) - NC?
21:57 Yohanes: kayanya nggak usah ya
21:57 Modem: Hm, oke :3
21:57 Yohanes: kalo aku pindah2 NC nya nanti pattern selanjutnya NC nya jadi kependekan (?)
21:57 Yohanes: iya nggak sih? :3
21:58 Modem: Nggak deh, nanti NCnya kependekan xd
21:58 Modem: Oke, itu aja sih :3
21:58 Yohanes: Okeee
21:58 Modem: owo
21:59 Yohanes: kalo mod Lunatic sekalian gimana? :P:P:P
21:59 Yohanes: mau nggak? hahaha
21:59 Modem: Mod bisa tapi test playnya nggak XD
22:00 Yohanes: No prob :D
22:00 Modem: Gud owob
22:00 Modem: Ok
22:00 Modem: Hm
22:03 Modem: 00:07:948 (4,5) - Triple click nya bikin kaget o.o
22:03 Yohanes: wkwkwkwkww
22:04 Yohanes: itu sih nggak sengaja naruh circle
22:04 Modem: Soalnya spacingnya sama kayak 1/2 rhythm
22:04 Modem: Oh o.o
22:04 Yohanes: untung kamu lihat hahaha
22:04 Modem: XD 
22:04 Modem: Oke then owo
22:05 Modem: Oya ini diff extra ya?
22:05 Modem: Kenapa nggak pakai 4 Stack Leniency aja?
22:06 Modem: Biar 1/2 stack kayak 00:14:482 (1,3) lebih rapi :3 
22:06 Yohanes: lunatic sih
22:06 Yohanes: soalnya waktu itu
22:06 Yohanes: hueee
22:06 Yohanes: bentar2
22:07 Yohanes: kalo aku jadiin 4, 00:54:604 (1,2,3) - kelihatan jelek ._.
22:07 Yohanes: waktu itu aku udh rundingan dikit sih sama Battle
22:08 Modem: Walah, aku belom sampe situ XD
22:08 Modem: Oke :3
22:09 Yohanes: :D
22:12 Modem: 00:31:966 (3,4,5,6) - Gimana kalo ctrl + G (4) & (5) trus ctrl + G lagi (5) & (6) ?
22:12 Modem: Buat ngemphasize downbeat di 00:32:703 (1)
22:13 Modem: 00:32:703 (1) - Trus whistle di kepalanya diremove aja. Soalnya agak terlalu loud >.<
22:14 Yohanes: umm, aku pinginnya punya smooth flow disitu, jadi no change ._.
22:14 Yohanes: whistle removed
22:14 Modem: Oki
22:15 Modem: 00:40:801 (6) - Dibikin curvy aja biar (4) bisa ngestack di ekornya -> http://puu.sh/qsUXJ/33c7185a73.jpg
22:15 Modem: Trus flow ke 00:41:353 (7,8,9) juga lebih enak :3
22:15 Yohanes: aa, aku lebih suka kalo itu straight hahaha
22:15 Modem: 00:41:537 (9) - NC & remove NC di 00:42:089 (1) 
22:16 Yohanes: NC changed
22:16 Modem: 00:40:801 (6) Cuma suggestion kok, biar placementnya (4) nggak keliatan overlap aja XD
22:17 Yohanes: :D oke deh
22:17 Yohanes: btw, aku testplay mapnya Rumia bentar ya
22:17 Yohanes: bentar balik
22:17 Yohanes: hehehe
22:17 Modem: \:D/
22:17 Modem: Oke oke
22:23 Yohanes: tadaima
22:23 Modem: okaeri 
22:27 Modem: Okay then :3
22:28 Yohanes: gimana?
22:28 Yohanes: :D
22:28 Modem: 00:44:114 (5,6) - Jump ini entah kenapa kerasa lebih enak kalau di ctrl + G
22:29 Modem: 00:47:058 (1) - Remove NC di sini terus add NC di 00:47:426 (3) 
22:29 Yohanes: jadi konsisten gitu spacingnya?
22:30 Modem: Yup :3
22:30 Yohanes: Kalo tentang NC, itu buat readability pattern
22:30 Modem: Ok :3
22:30 Yohanes: imo kalo NC nya diganti jadinya kurang enak dilihat owo
22:30 Modem: XD
22:30 Modem: Oki oki
22:31 Modem: 01:01:966 (4,1) - Stack owo
22:32 Yohanes: kalo yg 00:46:874 (5,6) - aku lebih suka patternku sendiri
22:32 Yohanes: stacked
22:32 Modem: Hm, oke 
22:32 Modem: 01:13:930 (3,1) - Stack owo
22:33 Modem: Oh nevermind
22:33 Yohanes: xD
22:33 Modem: udah gak bisa digeser lagi ternyata XD
22:33 Yohanes: peppy plz
22:34 Modem: 01:15:770 (4,8,1) - Stack owo
22:35 Modem: 01:31:598 (6) - NC owo
22:36 Yohanes: no need to NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:36 Modem: Wow XD
22:36 Yohanes: xD
22:37 Modem: Aku terobsesi sama tradisi 'downbeat = NC' xd
22:37 Yohanes: memang seharunya gitu sih
22:38 Yohanes: pas mapping aku nggak pernah merhatiin downbeat atau bukan
22:38 Yohanes: asal taruh aja yg penting kelihatannya oke wkwkwk
22:38 Modem: XD
22:38 Modem: 01:41:813 (1) - Spinner ini gimana kalau dipendekin sampe 01:43:009 terus add a note + NC + whistle di 01:43:377 (1) ?
22:39 Modem: Rasanya lebih enak kalau 01:43:377 clickable :3
22:40 Modem: 02:01:046 (5) - Um, NC? ovo'
22:40 Yohanes: aku nggak suka kalo ada note persis setelah spinner
22:40 Modem: Hm, ok :3
22:41 Yohanes: wkwkw
22:41 Modem: Xd
22:41 Yohanes: no need to NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:42 Modem: XD 
22:42 Modem: Maklum, habit
22:42 Yohanes: hahaha
22:43 Modem: Plus ada jump di 02:00:862 (4,5) , jadi biar mempermudah ngasih warning aja ke player xd
22:43 Yohanes: kalo di NC follow circle nya malah hilang dong xD
22:44 Modem: Entahlah, pas dimarahin sama BN , aku juga ngira kayak gitu XD
22:44 Modem: Btw whistle di 02:01:046 (5) diilangin aja biar suara cymbalsnya jadi soft owo
22:45 Yohanes: hmm aku pikir lagi deh NC nya wkwkw
22:45 Yohanes: whistle removed
22:45 Modem: \:D/
22:47 Modem: 02:07:856 (4,1) - Blanket -> http://puu.sh/qsWpu/802d3feffe.jpg
22:48 Yohanes: ok
22:49 Modem: :D
22:49 Modem: 02:20:739 (3) - Lebih manteb kalau dibikin rounded flow kayak yang di hard owo
22:50 Modem: Gimana kalau kayak gini -> http://puu.sh/qsWxV/f0aa76ee96.jpg
22:51 Yohanes: Aku lebih suka punyaku, sorry ,_,
22:51 Yohanes: Nekoooo http://puu.sh/qsWDB/3587d86452.jpg
22:52 Modem: XDXDXD
22:52 Modem: No one noticed that before when I modded xd
22:52 Modem: Neko is the best =v=
22:52 Modem: 02:28:285 (3) - Um, add NC di sini trus remove NC di 02:27:917 (1) ? /runs
22:52 Yohanes: hahaha
22:53 Yohanes: back and forth jumps need NC (ノ°Д°）ノ︵
22:54 *Modem runs xd
22:55 Modem: 02:59:021 (2) - Ctrl + G ? :3
22:56 Modem: Would make a cute rounded flow owo
22:56 Yohanes: nanti jump nya ke 02:59:389 (3) - kejauhan dong ;;
22:57 Yohanes: lagipula, aku nggak terlalu suka flow begitu
22:57 Yohanes: sering banget sliderberak wkwkw
22:57 Yohanes: break
22:57 Yohanes: uuuuuuuuu
22:57 Modem: XDXDXD
22:58 Modem: Well soal spacing jumpnya nggak masalah kok, considering Lunatic = Extra/Insane+ di mapset ini :3
23:00 Yohanes: iya juga sih
23:00 Yohanes: aku pikirin lagi deh wkwkwk
23:00 Modem: Oki oki~ >w<
23:00 Yohanes: tapi belum aku ganti sekarang
23:00 Modem: Ok
23:01 Modem: 03:45:586 (1) - Kenapa slider ini dibikin slow mendadak? o.o
23:01 Yohanes: Di musiknya kan ada slowdown nya kan
23:02 Yohanes: somewhat kaya di tahan gitu
23:02 Yohanes: wkakwakwakwa aku nggak bisa ngejelasin yg bener
23:03 Modem: Hm yup, barusan aku playback ratenya aku slow kan jadi 25% bener suaranya agak ditahan :3
23:03 Modem: Oke then
23:03 Modem: 03:50:371 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This is soo coool
23:04 Yohanes: thankss!
23:04 Modem: owob
23:04 Modem: Ok, that's all~
23:04 Yohanes: wooo nice
23:05 Yohanes: post di thread ya~
23:05 Yohanes: 2 kudos lumayan wkwkw
23:05 Modem: owowowo
23:05 Modem: Yay~
23:05 Modem: Oki oki

Good luck~

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-08-07T16:15:27+00:00

Hey
I hate you pap

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-08-07T16:17:35+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hey
I hate you pap

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-08-08T10:17:53+00:00

M4M from my queue

[Hard]
not clear about your NC pattern...I suggest add NC at long white lines
01:06:936 (5) - change to 2 circles and make a jump may be better
01:08:960 (3,1,2,3,4) - they are the same position in music but you placed different spacing.why not just rorate by 72?
01:19:083 (1,2,3) - I personally suggest overlaping 1/4 in hard
01:20:371 (1,2,3,1,2) - same problem
01:22:212 (3,1) - stack?
01:28:469 (4) - spacing
01:56:813 (3,1) - curve 3 more to make a better blanket
02:14:666 (2,3) - stack?
02:15:586 (4) - spacing
02:56:997 (4,5) - don't think it's good to make 1/3 like this..try sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796731
03:09:144 (4) - better to change the end to one circle and make a little jump
03:33:438 (2) - it's not good to ignore this strong snare drum imo
03:33:807 (2) - and this clap is hard to be sounded
no big problems..but some details can be improved like spacing consistency,slider shapes and neaty

[Lunatic]
NC problem same as hard
00:01:782 (1,1) - since they are quite close.it's better to move 00:06:200 (1) - 's head near to center
00:14:482 (1,3) - stack
00:23:132 (5) - the beats at the arrow and the end are quite strong,better to change them to circles to make jumps
00:26:721 - deserve a note to cover the drum
00:52:580 (3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a pentagram
01:25:709 (5) - this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796774
03:54:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing consistent?
same as hard,no big problems but some details can be improved

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-08-08T14:06:00+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
M4M from my queue

[Hard]
not clear about your NC pattern...I suggest add NC at long white lines Um, I'll try to adjust them
01:06:936 (5) - change to 2 circles and make a jump may be better Ok
01:08:960 (3,1,2,3,4) - they are the same position in music but you placed different spacing.why not just rorate by 72? Uh, I think this pattern is okay. and I don't really want to re-arrange this part too ._.
01:19:083 (1,2,3) - I personally suggest overlaping 1/4 in hard I'll keep it as it is for now, might change in the future tho
01:20:371 (1,2,3,1,2) - same problem same
01:22:212 (3,1) - stack? ye
01:28:469 (4) - spacing This was intentional
01:56:813 (3,1) - curve 3 more to make a better blanket ok
02:14:666 (2,3) - stack? ok
02:15:586 (4) - spacing same
02:56:997 (4,5) - don't think it's good to make 1/3 like this..try sth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796731 alright
03:09:144 (4) - better to change the end to one circle and make a little jump Personally I like this a lot so I don't want to change them lol
03:33:438 (2) - it's not good to ignore this strong snare drum imo What? There're circle there already, btw I mapped out 03:33:438 - into a slider
03:33:807 (2) - and this clap is hard to be sounded Umm, I don't really understand what you man by that ;;
no big problems..but some details can be improved like spacing consistency,slider shapes and neaty

[Lunatic]
NC problem same as hard same
00:01:782 (1,1) - since they are quite close.it's better to move 00:06:200 (1) - 's head near to center ok moved
00:14:482 (1,3) - stack ok
00:23:132 (5) - the beats at the arrow and the end are quite strong,better to change them to circles to make jumps I don't think so, by the placement & the flow of the reverse slider I think the sound in 1/2 already covered enough
00:26:721 - deserve a note to cover the drum changed
00:52:580 (3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a pentagram lol, I like it that way
01:25:709 (5) - this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5796774 ye
03:54:236 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the spacing consistent? I'll see what I can do, but no change for now
same as hard,no big problems but some details can be improved

Thanks a lot No_Gu!

Electoz

Nomination Assessment Team

1,901 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-22T12:30:05+00:00

[F Ant's Easy]

00:13:930 - Remove whistle? I'm guessing that you're trying to put less whistles than Normal but this one kinda stand out since you didn't put whistles on similar places like 00:08:040 - 00:10:985 - 00:16:874 .

[F Ant's Normal]

00:54:604 (3) - zzz would fit better with a 1/1 slider + circle cuz a 3/2 slider on this is pretty awkward + you didn't use 3/2 stuff anymore when the rhythm tensed up since 00:53:316 onward.
00:56:261 (1) - Recheck hitsound on this pls, not sure if there's anything else missing but pretty sure a finish should be on 00:56:261 .
03:07:856 (1) - Remove NC? According to how you NC'd stuff every 2 downbeats.
03:40:432 - Huh you NC'd this in Easy tho? Not sure if this is intentional so gonna mention this just in case.

[Hard]

00:38:224 (6) - 00:40:249 (3) - Unsnapped.

[Fizz's Insane]

00:06:200 - Conflict settings between red and green lines, please use the same sampleset on them.

Didn't mod Hard and higher diffs yet I'm too tired lol
Anyways I think Lunatic can be polished more so try getting more mods on that and I'll mod this some time later so don't worry, good luck~

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-09-22T18:47:18+00:00

k focus on lunatic cuz i cant rly mod hard lo

[Lunatic]

00:06:015 - piano start at here =w= 00:06:200 (1) - move to 00:06:015 -
00:09:144 (5) - 00:12:089 (2) - 00:14:298 (7) - 00:15:034 (4) - 00:20:923 (2) - 01:12:273 (5) - 01:15:218 (3) - should NC on here instead
00:19:267 (1,2,3) - i dont see the reason to make the spacing inconsistent here lo
00:20:739 (1,2) - should have larger spacing for emphasis
00:32:519 (6,1) - same here, should got different larger then 00:32:334 (5,6) - for emhpasis
00:40:801 (1) - 01:05:463 (1) - 01:11:721 (1) - 01:14:850 (1) - 01:21:844 (1) - unnecessary nc
00:47:242 (2,3) - 00:53:132 (6,1) - 00:54:420 (4,1) - 02:05:831 (4,5) - same as 00:20:739 (1,2)
00:56:261 (1) - flow would be better if you ctrl + g this
01:19:819 (5) - should NC here instead, 01:20:739 (1) - not 01:20:739 (1) -
01:34:543 - add a note here, make the spinner end at 01:34:359 -
01:40:433 (4) - NC
02:05:279 - i dont think using sliderend to express the cymbol sound is a good choice
02:06:936 (2) - should NC here instead
02:25:156 (7,1) - could be improved
02:28:285 (3) - sound here deserved a larger spacing, and you should NC here instead
02:34:175 (5) - 02:43:009 (2) - should NC here instead
02:51:843 (2) - should NC here instead, not 02:51:475 (1,1) -
03:07:488 (4,1) - blanket off
03:09:328 (7,8) - 8 deserved larger spacing
03:28:653 (5) - NC
03:29:573 (7,1) - larger spacing for emphasis
03:37:488 (4) - 03:43:377 (4) - 03:49:267 (4) - should NC here instead
03:58:469 - make this sound clikcable

[Fizz's Insane]

00:42:089 (2,3) - 2 slider fit better to the structure
00:47:795 (2,3,4,5) - consist the spacing would look nicer
01:04:359 (3,4) - i dont find the reason to make the spacing here inconsistent lol

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497482 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509064

Last edited by SnowNiNo_ 2016-09-24T15:17:26+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-09-24T11:40:53+00:00

snapping on hard fixed!
I'll look for some more mods for Lunatic

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-09-28T19:45:43+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
k focus on lunatic cuz i cant rly mod hard lo

[Lunatic]
00:06:015 - piano start at here =w= 00:06:200 (1) - move to 00:06:015 - I want to start on those strong sound, no idea what it is lol
00:09:144 (5) - 00:12:089 (2) - 00:14:298 (7) - 00:15:034 (4) - 00:20:923 (2) - 01:12:273 (5) - 01:15:218 (3) - should NC on here instead
00:19:267 (1,2,3) - i dont see the reason to make the spacing inconsistent here lo let's say that's just for aesthetic reason xD
00:20:739 (1,2) - should have larger spacing for emphasis It's enough
00:32:519 (6,1) - same here, should got different larger then 00:32:334 (5,6) - for emhpasis By the way the note placed, it has different flow from the previous set of patterns, so i think it already emphasized enough
00:40:801 (1) - 01:05:463 (1) - 01:11:721 (1) - 01:14:850 (1) - 01:21:844 (1) - unnecessary nc
00:47:242 (2,3) - 00:53:132 (6,1) - 00:54:420 (4,1) - 02:05:831 (4,5) - same as 00:20:739 (1,2)
00:56:261 (1) - flow would be better if you ctrl + g this I want to keep the back and forth flow on the next move
01:19:819 (5) - should NC here instead, 01:20:739 (1) - not 01:20:739 (1) -
01:34:543 - add a note here, make the spinner end at 01:34:359 -
01:40:433 (4) - NC
02:05:279 - i dont think using sliderend to express the cymbol sound is a good choice I also use this to mark the end of vocal sound here, I think it's alright
02:06:936 (2) - should NC here instead
02:25:156 (7,1) - could be improved
02:28:285 (3) - sound here deserved a larger spacing, and you should NC here instead I think the emphasize is enough already
02:34:175 (5) - 02:43:009 (2) - should NC here instead
02:51:843 (2) - should NC here instead, not 02:51:475 (1,1) -
03:07:488 (4,1) - blanket off I don'tintend to make a blanket here lol
03:09:328 (7,8) - 8 deserved larger spacing I think its already enough
03:28:653 (5) - NC
03:29:573 (7,1) - larger spacing for emphasis Ctrl+G'ed
03:37:488 (4) - 03:43:377 (4) - 03:49:267 (4) - should NC here instead
03:58:469 - make this sound clikcable
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/497482 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509064

Basically reworked the NC-ing!
Thanks for your mod! no reply means fixed

Misure

953 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-10-03T08:19:38+00:00

as requested, hello

[Lunatic]

00:07:488 (3,1) - 00:10:433 (1,2) - why the NC sets are different?
00:18:715 (4,1) - although with a fixed DS, the distance seems close when playing
00:40:433 (2,4) - the overlap seems awkward, maybe try this?
00:48:163 (1,1) - NCs no need imo
00:56:261 (1) - ctrl+G to be compared to 00:55:893 (7) -
01:18:715 (2,3,4,5) - kinda close imo, maybe the triple can be 248|96 or something, to be stacked by the streams
01:10:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part seems too high in space, maybe you can put them lower
01:34:175 - spinner stops here better
02:08:224 (1,2,3) - nazi stack
02:10:617 (3,1) - too close
02:25:156 (7,1) - no stack?
02:28:837 (2) - better like this?
02:33:070 (2) - ctrl+H flows better imo, especially after 02:31:782 (2) -
03:09:512 (8) - maybe you can NC

ok that's all, a smooth map
Good luck!

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-10-07T10:53:51+00:00

Misure wrote:
as requested, hello
[Lunatic]
00:07:488 (3,1) - 00:10:433 (1,2) - why the NC sets are different?
00:18:715 (4,1) - although with a fixed DS, the distance seems close when playing That's true actually. but I want to keep that
00:40:433 (2,4) - the overlap seems awkward, maybe try this? I don't really want to have different spacing there
00:48:163 (1,1) - NCs no need imo
00:56:261 (1) - ctrl+G to be compared to 00:55:893 (7) - I want to keep the back and forth jumps to the next note
01:18:715 (2,3,4,5) - kinda close imo, maybe the triple can be 248|96 or something, to be stacked by the streams It's okay for me, the actual spacing when playing is quite big to be honest
01:10:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part seems too high in space, maybe you can put them lower lol I don't even realize that, but I think thats alright
01:34:175 - spinner stops here better I'm still confused about this spinner, so let me think about that
02:08:224 (1,2,3) - nazi stack
02:10:617 (3,1) - too close
02:25:156 (7,1) - no stack? no, I want to have different movement into the slider
02:28:837 (2) - better like this?
02:33:070 (2) - ctrl+H flows better imo, especially after 02:31:782 (2) - I don't want to re-did the entire next pattern, so I keep it as it is lmao
03:09:512 (8) - maybe you can NC Idk. 1 note-long NC after a jump just feels wrong to me
ok that's all, a smooth map
Good luck!

No reply means fixed
Thanks a lot Misure!

Naxess

osu! Alumni

390 posts

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-10-16T19:43:26+00:00

From PM request

General

Some things regarding your tags
1. Having "Story" in your tags is unnecessary as it's already mentioned in the artist field.
2. According to various sources, "東方花映塚　～ Phantasmagoria of Flower View." is the official title, and as such you should replace the currently existing variation of this in your tags.
3. I'm sure "zun" would fit in the tags as well, as they're the original composer.

Hard

00:08:776 - The impact from the piano is here. Placing clickables around it, but not on it doesn't make much sense in my opinion. The click on 00:08:592 - is currently also very sudden and can be unexpected. I'd have made 00:08:776 - a 1/2 slider and kept a gap at 00:08:592 - .
00:10:985 - This gap can be avoided by moving 00:11:169 (1) - here and giving it a repeat. I say this because there's actually piano on this tick, but not at other gaps like 00:07:304 - and 00:10:249 - .
Your NCing can be improved, I'd recommend you look for similar issues to these in your map.
1. 00:11:169 (1,4) - Swap NC here (move the existing to the one that doesn't have), in order to follow your previous pattern.
  ^ 00:13:377 (1,4) - This goes on for a while so you may want to check this again.
2. 03:53:500 (4,1) - (4) is a syncopated beat and as such you should move the combo to this note.
3. 00:20:923 (3,1) - Swap these and remove 00:20:187 (1) - in order to keep following your pattern. Straying from your pattern here makes no sense from what I can hear; there are no musical cues, SV changes or any pattern that would require NCing otherwise. I'd suggest you to recheck your NCing for the whole map to make sure you don't miss anything or mix up your pattern like this. These seem like obvious issues to me, so I doubt they would be very difficult for you to find either.
00:35:647 - Relatively strong beat here, also a downbeat. Consider keeping these clickable for the sake of giving the player a reference to the rhythm while playing. A possible solution is repeating 00:35:095 (2) - and placing a circle on 00:35:647 - .
00:47:795 (2,3,4) - I'd have swapped these rhythmically, meaning 00:48:531 - would have the circle. This way you'll place emphasis on the right ticks in accordance to the song (white ticks are stronger in most cases, including this one).
01:35:647 (3,4,5) - I feel like this pattern is very off at the moment. So here we hear multiple sounds from the melody in constant 1/4 intervals. The first 3 are mapped clickable, the fourth is skipped, the same sound at 03:39:144 - is not mapped and the same melody at 01:36:384 - is completely ignored in terms of emphasis. 01:36:015 - is also a strong beat, but a slider ends on it. This is also the only sections that have triples, and placing them inconsistently like this would likely damage the playing experience. I feel like this section could use some revising.
^ 03:37:856 -
^ 03:43:745 -
02:14:666 (2,3) - These are very close to stacking, unlike 02:10:617 (3,4) - and 02:15:770 (1,1) - , which are stacked.
02:31:230 (1,4) - Overlapping inconsistently and unintentionally should often want to be avoided due to aesthetic reasons, but up to you.
02:39:512 (5,1) - 02:15:034 (3,4) - There seem to be a lot of opportunities for blanketing, and whether to blanket or not to blanket seems to vary a lot throughout the map, for example around 03:07:119 - and 03:08:710 - you're using it a lot. Having inconsistent concepts is usually something you'd want to avoid for the sake of the visual theme of your map. Existing blankets can also be improved further, refer to this. Not really of importance in my opinion though, just in case you care about your blankets.
03:31:598 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here feels a bit odd, especially skipping 03:32:518 - for the sake of the 1/1 slider. Try something like this, to emphasize the vocals and drums better while still keeping a 1/1 slider.
03:55:156 - Again, lifting your finger on strong beats like these wouldn't make any sense in a rhythm game in my opinion. While it is possible to use misplaced emphasis of a layer to indicate switching to another layer, you'd need to do this consistently throughout the map for it this to work well, and the existing layers are currently not very clearly differentiated either. Consider making it clickable, preferably with a circle for consistency with 03:56:445 - 03:57:181 - . That way you'll also be able to NC it properly.

Fizz's Insane

00:06:200 - There's two timing sections with different settings on this tick, this is unrankable due to technical issues. You'll notice the sampleset is not the same, consider unifying them.
Ranking Criteria - Timing wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.

Hit Objects
00:24:973 (5) - Since you're stacking all the triples around here and nothing else except this note, players might confuse this with a triple. Either way I'd suggest you move this upwards for consistency.
01:57:549 (5,1) - 02:06:015 (3,5) - I think it would be more aesthetic if you kept an equal distance between all your overlapping. That means always having it a specific distance (so if you overlap half-half, you'll do so for all of them), for the sake of consistency and thus potentially readability as well. Consider making 01:57:549 (5,1) - equally as spaced as 02:06:015 (3,5) - .

Hitsounds
Going to assume hitsounding is copied, so I'll only mod it here.

00:18:531 - Add whistle for consistency with 00:19:267 - , which is on a drum-kick.
^ 00:21:476 -
^ 00:24:420 -
^ 00:25:893 -
^ 00:27:365 -
^ 01:00:862 -
^ 01:02:703 -
^ 01:03:439 -
^ 01:03:807 -
^ 01:08:592 -
^ 01:10:065 -
^ 01:14:482 -
^ 01:15:954 -
^ 01:16:690 -
^ 01:17:426 -
^ 01:23:316 -
^ 01:26:261 -
You get the idea, it continues.
00:51:660 - I'd have added a whistle here, since you did for a similar sound at 00:52:212 - .
^ 02:44:665 -
^ 02:45:034 -
^ 03:19:451 -
00:52:764 - 00:52:948 - Compare these two sounds with 00:53:684 - relative 00:53:868 - and solve the inconsistency.
00:58:746 - Clap for consistency with 00:57:273 -
^ 00:57:181 - Whistle for consistency with 00:58:653 -
02:07:856 - Add finish and drum addition
02:27:917 - No need for soft addition here, you already have soft addition from the timing section. Nothing of importance though.
03:45:218 - Add finish
^ 03:47:794 -
^ 03:54:052 -
A lot of finishes around here, not sure if you want to add them all so just mentioned a few.
04:04:635 - I think you should silence the end of the spinner. The whistle hardly complements the faint piano note in my opinion. Consider adding a timing point here and setting the volume to 5%.

Good luck!

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-10-17T08:26:48+00:00

Naxess wrote:
From PM request

General

Some things regarding your tags

Having "Story" in your tags is unnecessary as it's already mentioned in the artist field. Makes sense
According to various sources, "東方花映塚　～ Phantasmagoria of Flower View." is the official title, and as such you should replace the currently existing variation of this in your tags. Ok
I'm sure "zun" would fit in the tags as well, as they're the original composer. I swear I've add this on tags before

Hard

00:08:776 - The impact from the piano is here. Placing clickables around it, but not on it doesn't make much sense in my opinion. The click on 00:08:592 - is currently also very sudden and can be unexpected. I'd have made 00:08:776 - a 1/2 slider and kept a gap at 00:08:592 - . Did something similar
00:10:985 - This gap can be avoided by moving 00:11:169 (1) - here and giving it a repeat. I say this because there's actually piano on this tick, but not at other gaps like 00:07:304 - and 00:10:249 - . I use different rhythm here, but fixed
Your NCing can be improved, I'd recommend you look for similar issues to these in your map. Alright, I re-did NC-ing on this diff

00:11:169 (1,4) - Swap NC here (move the existing to the one that doesn't have), in order to follow your previous pattern.
^ 00:13:377 (1,4) - This goes on for a while so you may want to check this again.
03:53:500 (4,1) - (4) is a syncopated beat and as such you should move the combo to this note.
00:20:923 (3,1) - Swap these and remove 00:20:187 (1) - in order to keep following your pattern. Straying from your pattern here makes no sense from what I can hear; there are no musical cues, SV changes or any pattern that would require NCing otherwise. I'd suggest you to recheck your NCing for the whole map to make sure you don't miss anything or mix up your pattern like this. These seem like obvious issues to me, so I doubt they would be very difficult for you to find either.
00:35:647 - Relatively strong beat here, also a downbeat. Consider keeping these clickable for the sake of giving the player a reference to the rhythm while playing. A possible solution is repeating 00:35:095 (2) - and placing a circle on 00:35:647 - . Alright
00:47:795 (2,3,4) - I'd have swapped these rhythmically, meaning 00:48:531 - would have the circle. This way you'll place emphasis on the right ticks in accordance to the song (white ticks are stronger in most cases, including this one). Oh you're right
01:35:647 (3,4,5) - I feel like this pattern is very off at the moment. So here we hear multiple sounds from the melody in constant 1/4 intervals. The first 3 are mapped clickable, the fourth is skipped, the same sound at 03:39:144 - is not mapped and the same melody at 01:36:384 - is completely ignored in terms of emphasis. 01:36:015 - is also a strong beat, but a slider ends on it. This is also the only sections that have triples, and placing them inconsistently like this would likely damage the playing experience. I feel like this section could use some revising. I understand where are you coming from, but this is only a hard difficulty. I cannot map to every 1/4 sound on this section because it will makes it way harder than it should. Besides, imo they're placed quite consistently if you noticed. I place triplets every 2 measurement
^ 03:37:856 -
^ 03:43:745 -
02:14:666 (2,3) - These are very close to stacking, unlike 02:10:617 (3,4) - and 02:15:770 (1,1) - , which are stacked. ppy pls, fixed
02:31:230 (1,4) - Overlapping inconsistently and unintentionally should often want to be avoided due to aesthetic reasons, but up to you. Uh, yeah I want to keep this
02:39:512 (5,1) - 02:15:034 (3,4) - There seem to be a lot of opportunities for blanketing, and whether to blanket or not to blanket seems to vary a lot throughout the map, for example around 03:07:119 - and 03:08:710 - you're using it a lot. Having inconsistent concepts is usually something you'd want to avoid for the sake of the visual theme of your map. Existing blankets can also be improved further, refer to this. Not really of importance in my opinion though, just in case you care about your blankets. I didn't blanket some parts for the sake of spacing, either to emphasize them or to keep them consistent, so that's it lol
03:31:598 (1,2,3,4) - The rhythm here feels a bit odd, especially skipping 03:32:518 - for the sake of the 1/1 slider. Try something like this, to emphasize the vocals and drums better while still keeping a 1/1 slider. Okay!
03:55:156 - Again, lifting your finger on strong beats like these wouldn't make any sense in a rhythm game in my opinion. While it is possible to use misplaced emphasis of a layer to indicate switching to another layer, you'd need to do this consistently throughout the map for it this to work well, and the existing layers are currently not very clearly differentiated either. Consider making it clickable, preferably with a circle for consistency with 03:56:445 - 03:57:181 - . That way you'll also be able to NC it properly. I want to keep it for now, because I think it's properly used on that particular section. Moreover, i don't want to put 2 circles there because, (as you said) I want to have a "relaxed" transition considering next pattern has 1/2 circle spam
Good luck!

Thank you so much Naxess! That mod was very helpful

I'll update once GD'ers send me the update

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-10-17T12:54:58+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]
00:42:089 (2,3) - 2 slider fit better to the structure ok
00:47:795 (2,3,4,5) - consist the spacing would look nicer yeah
01:04:359 (3,4) - i dont find the reason to make the spacing here inconsistent lol crash cymbal

Naxess wrote:
Fizz's Insane

00:06:200 - There's two timing sections with different settings on this tick, this is unrankable due to technical issues. You'll notice the sampleset is not the same, consider unifying them. done

Hit Objects
00:24:973 (5) - Since you're stacking all the triples around here and nothing else except this note, players might confuse this with a triple. Either way I'd suggest you move this upwards for consistency. sure

01:57:549 (5,1) - 02:06:015 (3,5) - I think it would be more aesthetic if you kept an equal distance between all your overlapping. That means always having it a specific distance (so if you overlap half-half, you'll do so for all of them), for the sake of consistency and thus potentially readability as well. Consider making 01:57:549 (5,1) - equally as spaced as 02:06:015 (3,5) - . I would normally agree with you here, but if I start changing consistency issues now, I'd basically want to remap the whole thing (i mapped this over a year ago)

Good luck!

Also fixed up hitsounds (mostly, anyway).

upd

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Story
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ArtistUnicode:FELT
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Yohanes

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Yohanes 2016-10-21T13:30:05+00:00

Since I don't hear any words from Blizs, I will reply to mod for him

Electoz wrote:
[F Ant's Easy]
00:13:930 - Remove whistle? I'm guessing that you're trying to put less whistles than Normal but this one kinda stand out since you didn't put whistles on similar places like 00:08:040 - 00:10:985 - 00:16:874 .
[F Ant's Normal]
00:54:604 (3) - zzz would fit better with a 1/1 slider + circle cuz a 3/2 slider on this is pretty awkward + you didn't use 3/2 stuff anymore when the rhythm tensed up since 00:53:316 onward. Actually, there is one on 02:08:224 (3) - which is literally the same with 00:54:604 (3) - . And I personally think the usage of 3/2 on this section is okay, since the sound on the red tick isn't that pronounced & the music is still quite calm
00:56:261 (1) - Recheck hitsound on this pls, not sure if there's anything else missing but pretty sure a finish should be on 00:56:261
03:07:856 (1) - Remove NC? According to how you NC'd stuff every 2 downbeats.
03:40:432 - Huh you NC'd this in Easy tho? Not sure if this is intentional so gonna mention this just in case. I remove the NC on Easy instead to keep the 2-measurement NC pattern

Else is fixed, thank you Electoz!

edit : updated!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-10-21T17:11:31+00:00

Checked the map over, seems all fine on my end

Original bubbler is no longer a BN, so I will restore the bubble

Post for reference: p/4577241

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-10-21T17:29:03+00:00

Woa, Thanks Jonny

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-10-21T23:07:26+00:00

Thank you lfj for taking care this one for me, waiting for qualified now ww

Electoz

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-10-22T04:49:09+00:00

I'm next I guess, placeholder.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2016-10-23T15:49:22+00:00

<3

Electoz

Nomination Assessment Team

1,901 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-10-26T12:49:33+00:00

Reposting again instead of editing so it can pop up people's email notification, no kds

[General]

Add "Smug-" to the tags since it's Fizz's old username?

[Hard]

00:47:426 (1,2) - 00:52:028 (5,1) - Swap NC on these places? The current ones look unintentional to me tho since you didn't do the same thing in Lunatic.
00:53:316 (3) - NC this if you swapped NC on 00:52:028 (5,1) I guess.
02:01:046 (1,2) - 02:05:647 (3,1) - 02:06:936 (3) - Same as before, not sure whether this is intentional but better be consistent with Lunatic.
02:27:917 (5,6) - The stack here doesn't play really well since 02:28:101 (6) is weaker than 02:27:917 (5) and it looks really random cuz you didn't stack any where else, would play better if it's a 1/2 slider like 01:13:561 (5) imo.
02:42:089 (3) - Optional but Ctrl+G would flow better with 02:42:641 (4,1) .
03:09:604 - Add a spinner like Lunatic?
03:32:886 - You might want to add a silent soft-sliderslide on S:C3 since the sliderslide sound is audible on this.
03:57:181 (3,1) - Should be spaced further, this can be misleading for a 1/2 spacing since these NCs 03:55:524 (1,1,1) are only 1/2 apart.

[Fizz's Insane]

Would be nice if you can add a silent drum-sliderslide imo cuz there's a few places where you can here the sliderslide sound like 01:13:561 (4) - 02:33:807 (4) - etc
00:36:936 (3) - 00:42:825 (4) - 00:45:770 (4) - NC on these places?
02:02:334 (4) - NC here for consistency with 00:48:715 (1) ?
00:56:813 - Is this intentional for using drum addition? Doesn't sound really fit imo.
01:19:083 - Is this green line supposed to be D:C1 like what you did with 02:33:438 ?
02:30:586 - Add clap? Since you have one on 01:16:230 .
03:21:475 (2) - Use 0.7 DS?
03:40:433 - An unused green line but I'm not sure if it's intentional to remain the same setting as 03:34:543 so I'm gonna mention this just in case.
03:54:788 (6,7,1) - aaa the flow here is sort of linear-ish and it's pretty uncomfortable imo.

[Lunatic]

01:31:046 (1) - Remove NC? Since you didn't NC 02:45:218 (2) - 03:33:807 (5) either.

The main purpose of most nitpicking issues is not to be applied but to check whether they are intended and I recommend rechecking everything again just in case, call me back after you're done fixing/rechecking.

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-10-27T13:53:39+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Reposting again instead of editing so it can pop up people's email notification, no kds

[General]
Add "Smug-" to the tags since it's Fizz's old username?Will add if he want to lol

[Hard]
00:47:426 (1,2) - 00:52:028 (5,1) - Swap NC on these places? The current ones look unintentional to me tho since you didn't do the same thing in Lunatic. Yes, they're intentional. In Hard diff, I'd like to keep the NC on every 2 measurement on the slow part
00:53:316 (3) - NC this if you swapped NC on 00:52:028 (5,1) I guess. ^
02:01:046 (1,2) - 02:05:647 (3,1) - 02:06:936 (3) - Same as before, not sure whether this is intentional but better be consistent with Lunatic. ^
02:27:917 (5,6) - The stack here doesn't play really well since 02:28:101 (6) is weaker than 02:27:917 (5) and it looks really random cuz you didn't stack any where else, would play better if it's a 1/2 slider like 01:13:561 (5) imo. sure
02:42:089 (3) - Optional but Ctrl+G would flow better with 02:42:641 (4,1) . I don't really like the way it flows from (1,2) though, so I keep it as it is
03:09:604 - Add a spinner like Lunatic? ok
03:32:886 - You might want to add a silent soft-sliderslide on S:C3 since the sliderslide sound is audible on this. oh, you're right
03:57:181 (3,1) - Should be spaced further, this can be misleading for a 1/2 spacing since these NCs 03:55:524 (1,1,1) are only 1/2 apart. yea
[Lunatic]
01:31:046 (1) - Remove NC? Since you didn't NC 02:45:218 (2) - 03:33:807 (5) either. um sure
The main purpose of most nitpicking issues is not to be applied but to check whether they are intended and I recommend rechecking everything again just in case, call me back after you're done fixing/rechecking.

Thank you!
Waiting for Fizz now

Fizz

334 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2016-10-28T13:39:26+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Reposting again instead of editing so it can pop up people's email notification, no kds

[Fizz's Insane]

Would be nice if you can add a silent drum-sliderslide imo cuz there's a few places where you can here the sliderslide sound like 01:13:561 (4) - 02:33:807 (4) - etc
00:36:936 (3) - 00:42:825 (4) - 00:45:770 (4) - NC on these places? yes thanks for pointing them out
02:02:334 (4) - NC here for consistency with 00:48:715 (1) ? fixd
00:56:813 - Is this intentional for using drum addition? Doesn't sound really fit imo. it's intentionally there and i think it sounds fine
01:19:083 - Is this green line supposed to be D:C1 like what you did with 02:33:438 ? the difference is minor but it's there, these are supposed to be different
02:30:586 - Add clap? Since you have one on 01:16:230 . fixed
03:21:475 (2) - Use 0.7 DS? sure
03:40:433 - An unused green line but I'm not sure if it's intentional to remain the same setting as 03:34:543 so I'm gonna mention this just in case. nice catch thanks
03:54:788 (6,7,1) - aaa the flow here is sort of linear-ish and it's pretty uncomfortable imo. lol yes thank you for pointing this out, i remember this bothering me like a year ago

Thank you for the cleanup mod
@Yohanes could you add a silent drum-sliderslide for me? Thank you

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Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Topic Starter

Yohanes 2016-10-28T14:25:52+00:00

Fizz said he didn't need his old username to be added, so I'm not changing it

We're ready!

Electoz

Nomination Assessment Team

1,901 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-10-28T16:01:49+00:00

I discussed and fixed some minor hitsound stuff with Fizz, metadata is from this post p/4418536
Qualified!

00:12 Electoz: hey quick question
00:12 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/732932 FELT - Story [Fizz's Insane]]
00:13 Fizz: sup
00:13 Electoz: 01:16:322 - 02:30:586 - whistle is a bit inconsistent
00:13 Electoz: is this intentional?
00:15 Fizz: oops
00:16 Fizz: hitsounds are kinda all over the place
00:21 Electoz: ugh do you think are there any more hitsounds error and stuff?
00:21 Electoz: I didn't recheck hitsound throughly so if you think there might be then I'll go through it again
00:22 Fizz: uhh i think it's mostly fine
00:22 Electoz: alright
00:22 Fizz: honestly if there's one or two errors i don't think it's /that/ big of a deal
00:32 Electoz: how long are you gonna stay online
00:33 Electoz: I'll recheck it again just in case
00:34 Fizz: i'll be around for a while
00:43 Electoz: 02:28:101 (5) - Add soft-whistle? According to 01:13:746
00:43 Electoz: 03:50:003 - Clap should be here instead of 03:50:371 - I guess
00:43 Electoz: *01:13:746 -
00:47 Fizz: for that first one i think the percussion is a bit different
00:47 Fizz: it's pretty quiet so it's difficult to tell .w.
00:48 Fizz: otherwise i think i would've had an easier time hitsounding this
00:48 Fizz: for the second one i'll probably just remove the clap on the repeat slider
00:50 Electoz: 03:50:003 - aaa but I still think a clap should be here tho? cuz you switched between claps and whistles on every 2 white ticks since 03:46:322 -
00:51 Fizz: 03:49:727 - 03:50:647 - clap goes on these sounds
00:51 Fizz: and i don't hear it on that point
00:52 Electoz: alright