haokuailiaoxingyao wrote:
111111Spring wrote:
shafa
yeyeMinakami Yuki wrote:
nuked
Thx Regraz!Regraz wrote:
Hi! From in-game req.
Silence tick or sliderslide at the very first part. It's noisy. 啊 我找下44字节的wav看看
[LV.7]
00:11:471 (2,3) - Change the direction for better flow. fixed
00:17:193 (1,2) - make them further from each other for not being read as 1/2. fixed
00:32:234 (3,1) - ^ ^
00:35:504 (1,2,3) - Keep consistent DS. ok
00:36:158 (3,1) - Same as 00:17:193 (1,2) - . 这里还好吧..
There are more similar issues, so I do not repeat here.
The patterns are OK. Just you need to work more on spacing control.其实是为了预防gap gg
Good luck!
Thanks!Regraz wrote:
[Spring's LV.10]
00:18:665 (2,3) - The jump does not get the support of music at all. 跳的距离改小了
00:19:482 (6,7,8) - No reason to abruptly enlarge the DS here. 这个我挺喜欢的,还是不要改了
01:41:553 (1,1) - Do not leave the 3rd piano sound unmapped. 好
This diff is at least OK.
updatedSpring wrote:
Thanks!Regraz wrote:
[Spring's LV.10]
00:18:665 (2,3) - The jump does not get the support of music at all. 跳的距离改小了
00:19:482 (6,7,8) - No reason to abruptly enlarge the DS here. 这个我挺喜欢的,还是不要改了
01:41:553 (1,1) - Do not leave the 3rd piano sound unmapped. 好
This diff is at least OK.
REMAPEDRegraz wrote:
Hi! From in-game req.
Silence tick or sliderslide at the very first part. It's noisy.
[Mofeng's LV.4]
01:35:338 Unsnapped note.
00:18:174 (3,2) - Avoid this kind of overlap in lower diffs.
00:22:425 (1,2) - Slightly overlapped. Avoid this and your diff would be more neat.
00:32:888 (1,2) - Using blankets here.
00:44:659 (4,5) - Dont use such pattern. it would be easily read as reversed 2 times.
00:46:948 (4,6) - Avoid this overlap.
00:54:795 (3,4) - use blankets here.
00:56:757 (2) - Do not hide this note under slider.
01:01:662 (1) - Do not reverse 2 times. Difficult for newbie players to catch.
I guess I need to stop here. The probs are the same in the latter part. Be sure to carefully check your patterns.
Good luck!
updatedDiamondMofeng wrote:
REMAPEDRegraz wrote:
Hi! From in-game req.
Silence tick or sliderslide at the very first part. It's noisy.
[Mofeng's LV.4]
01:35:338 Unsnapped note.
00:18:174 (3,2) - Avoid this kind of overlap in lower diffs.
00:22:425 (1,2) - Slightly overlapped. Avoid this and your diff would be more neat.
00:32:888 (1,2) - Using blankets here.
00:44:659 (4,5) - Dont use such pattern. it would be easily read as reversed 2 times.
00:46:948 (4,6) - Avoid this overlap.
00:54:795 (3,4) - use blankets here.
00:56:757 (2) - Do not hide this note under slider.
01:01:662 (1) - Do not reverse 2 times. Difficult for newbie players to catch.
I guess I need to stop here. The probs are the same in the latter part. Be sure to carefully check your patterns.
Good luck!
yeyepocket-Gao wrote:
no reply=fixed[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
[LV11]
00:01:498 (2) - 建議往下移
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3791931
00:02:806 (3) - 和00:04:441 (4) - 一樣音高 建議同地方
00:34:850 (1) - 啥鬼
00:38:120 (1,2,3) - 建議滑條 不了
00:38:447 (4,5,6) - 建議^ 不了
00:38:774 (7,8,9) -
00:39:019 (10) - 如果上面的搞了這刪掉吧 啊?
00:39:019 (10) - 跟之前一樣 cymbal就滑條 之前换成滑条了
ANiMABE hhhhhhhhhKuo Kyoka wrote:
233 ANiMABE
good luck <3
谢谢1112deng wrote:
不行惹有些强迫症
[LV.11]
00:09:346 (8,0)试着改一下这里,实在受不了:( 吓死宝宝惹 fixed
像这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3793639
然后这里00:54:141 (46,1)和00:54:468 (46,4)
建议改成直线
像这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3793704和https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3793697 其实我觉得原来也挺好看的 还是不了
第一次send这种东西有误不要介意
既然我的不能update留个纪念
然后给个林肯(link)给你
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/364190
...哎怎么还有啊1112deng wrote:
我可以告诉你还有?(*/w\*)
1112deng wrote:
liaoxingyao wrote:
...哎怎么还有啊告诉你还有了嘛[LV.7]
00:40:735 (34,7)建议不要靠这么近,像这样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3798028 这个不太好看啊 还是不改了
???KuranteMelodii wrote:
same
nidelinkaZZHBOY wrote:
s4s
no reply=fixedNarcissu wrote:
[LV.6]
00:16:866 (3) - 這種空拍通常習慣拉很近或者遠遠超過平時的DS而不是0.9這種曖昧的情況……因為無論這個水平的玩家還是開DT的玩家都容易讀錯
00:21:117 (1,2,3) - 原地堆疊大量note ACC會墜毀,我建議你擺成這樣↓↓↓,第一個是重音跳你可以不放
00:26:512 (4,5,6) - 疊不同時值的物件也是ACC會墜毀的梗。除了音樂非常明顯的地方都不要疊和跳
01:01:989 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同樣超難打而毫無PP的梗,01:02:316 (4,1) - 這兩個滑條建議分出來
01:44:659 (4,3) - 分開 这个应该还好。。?
[LV.11]
01:35:177 (2) - 這種折高概率slider black , 少折返一下不會少塊肉的
01:08:365 (2) - ^
01:15:395 (9) - 性藥你真的不喜歡同班的蘿莉嗎 四暗刻因为我是给
谢谢小m菊苣!DreaM117er wrote:
還摸了~
[LV6][LV11]
01:18:665 (4) - 建議疊在01:18:338 (3) - 的這個位置,這裡做的超棒的
00:43:024 (8) - DS間距有變建議加個NC比較好
01:03:378 (6) - ^
加油呢
no reply=fixedMomizi wrote:
回摸~
[LV.11]
两个LV11了!(
00:18:665 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这一段的话感觉都用开头的那种短滑条好了,都是一样的音( 咦?
00:55:940 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - 10到11后面的三连的flow感觉比较糟糕 11 12 13往下顺着过去比较好。就是这两个00:56:267 (11,1) - 换一下位置
01:47:765 (4) - 感觉NC会比较好读
01:48:419 (4) - ↑