Ok, so I'll try this. Not sure how much useful feedback I can actually provide though.
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Easy
00:07:320 (1,2) - Like Mofu said, I don't think DS change is allowed in an easy difficulty if you want to get this ranked. Same applies for 00:12:120 (1,2), 00:26:520 (1,2) and 00:40:920 (1,2).
00:21:720 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is intentional, but the DS goes from 1.22 to 1.36, if you just DS snap (2) with 1.3 it comes out at 1.26 and 1.36 which would be better for consistency, it might even be a ranking issue if you have this stay at 1.22
00:27:420 (2,3,4) - I think this would flow better if you would move (3) down a bit (~x:288;y:312), and then adjust (4) to be consistent with DS.
00:50:520 (1) - I personally think this spinner is too long and becomes somewhat tiring, it's up to you though. However you should definitely make the hitsound at the end soft, if you use normal it sounds unnatural even at 5% volume since the song is so quiet.
00:21:720 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is intentional, but the DS goes from 1.22 to 1.36, if you just DS snap (2) with 1.3 it comes out at 1.26 and 1.36 which would be better for consistency, it might even be a ranking issue if you have this stay at 1.22
00:27:420 (2,3,4) - I think this would flow better if you would move (3) down a bit (~x:288;y:312), and then adjust (4) to be consistent with DS.
00:50:520 (1) - I personally think this spinner is too long and becomes somewhat tiring, it's up to you though. However you should definitely make the hitsound at the end soft, if you use normal it sounds unnatural even at 5% volume since the song is so quiet.
Normal
00:24:720 (6) - I think you forgot to remove a finish here
00:50:520 (1) - Same thing about the spinner as in the Easy
00:50:520 (1) - Same thing about the spinner as in the Easy
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