From m4m




Nice map, I'd have someone double-check the 3/4 gaps in easy to see if they're okay or not (00:12:289 (4,5) - , 00:15:589 (2,3) - , 00:20:389 (2,3) -, etc)

Have fun mapping!

Hey, Thanks for the quick reply.

pkk wrote:

From m4m

General

1. consider adding whistles at 00:13:939 -and/or 00:14:389 - , 00:33:139 - and/or 00:33:589 - since these are pretty strong sounds in the music and the whistles sound nice there imo

Took a look at them, Added in the Normal but not the Easy as I feel the hits just aren't strong in general on easy with the note placement.

Easy

1. 00:11:089 (3) - consider rotating this ~25 degrees clockwise so the angle between this and the next repeat slider isn't so sharp. I think it may feel more natural to play this way
   
   Ok, I moved the tail upwards until it was almost straight up but not quite, hope this is what you meant.
   
2. 00:44:689 (3,4) - I suggest using this rhythm instead:
   
   
   This way you have a clickable object on the strong downbeat which feels nicer to play imo

OK, I can do this easily anyways since the position of the final note isn't terribly important.

Normal

1. 00:01:489 (3) - you can make this look nicer by moving the middle point up once while on grid snap, this will make the slider less curved and blanket the hitcircle more accurately
   
   Huh, an accurate description of how to fix a blanket, Thanks for that.
   
2. 00:27:889 - imo this whistle sounds a bit out of place as there isn't a similar, distinct sound in the music to match this. I suggest removing it unless there's a good reason to have it there

Originally this was here to keep the hitsound timings consistent but after listening to the segment on repeat for a couple minutes I'd ahve to agree with you, Removed.

Nice map, I'd have someone double-check the 3/4 gaps in easy to see if they're okay or not (00:12:289 (4,5) - , 00:15:589 (2,3) - , 00:20:389 (2,3) -, etc)

Have fun mapping!

I already had someone ask about those, From what I've gathered they're fine but only because they each come back on a slider so the accuracy isn't very strict.

Hi. M4M from your queue




t+pazolite 100 bpm, it's really unusual for me. Good luck!

Hey, Thanks for the mod, Will get back with yours sometime today.

FCL wrote:

Hi. M4M from your queue

• [General]

1. combo color 1 and combo colour 3 have virtually no differences. Remove one of them, or replace it with another
   
   Yea, it's been mentioned before, I was originally against this change but I guess it's a must
   
2. between Easy and Normal there is no difference in the SV (slider Velocity). Change, otherwise defeats the purpose of having difficulties

Uhh, not really, didn't want a SV increase for a Normal and there's a DS increase anyways so they balance out.

• [Easy]

1. 00:12:289 (4,5) - uneven blanket, i think
   
   Uhh, No. Blankets Even
   
2. 00:29:089 (1,2) - flow here is not very uniform. I suggest move (2) on 296;136
   
   Reserved, This would break the 4,5, Blanket in Correcting for DS and is extremely minor as is
   
3. 00:41:389 (5) - copy 00:40:789 (4) - , Ctrl+H and reverse
   
   Thought it already was, thanks for pointing that out.
   
4. 00:44:689 (3) - make the slider a little more curved

K

• [Normal]

1. 00:03:889 (4,5) - overmapping. idk it gives rhythm, but...
   
   Not overmapping, at all really.
   
2. 00:07:789 (2,3,4) - again. Hm, okay
   
   ^^^^^^
   
3. 00:23:689 (6,1) - can be done about better, like this
   
   Changed slightly, The picture didn't tell me much about what you wanted so I tried but not sure it's what you meant.
   
4. 00:41:689 (2,5) - stack?
   
   Ok, does look a little better stacked.
   
5. 00:45:889 (1) - more logical to finish this slider to 00:48:289, spinner moved on 00:48:589

Reserved, First off the slider is representing the held note not the distance between two notes, secondly this would break consistency with the spinner across the two diffs

t+pazolite 100 bpm, it's really unusual for me. Good luck!

Thanks for modding

Hello~! As requested from my queue

[Normal]
00:01:189 (2,3) - more neater blanket
00:08:689 (3,4) - ^
00:09:439 (4,1) - ^
00:09:889 (1,2) - ^
00:14:389 (5,1) - ^
00:19:489 (1,2) - blanket?
00:30:289 (3,1) - this blanket is bad , fix it

[Easy]
00:20:389 (2,3) - spacing error
00:21:139 (3,4) - ^
00:06:289 (3,4) - more neater blanket
00:30:739 (4,5) - fix blanket

That's all

good mapset

I hope my mod helps

Hey, Thanks for the mod.

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue

[Normal]
00:01:189 (2,3) - more neater blanket
00:08:689 (3,4) - ^
00:09:439 (4,1) - ^
00:09:889 (1,2) - ^
00:14:389 (5,1) - ^
00:19:489 (1,2) - blanket?
00:30:289 (3,1) - this blanket is bad , fix it

[Easy]
00:20:389 (2,3) - spacing error
00:21:139 (3,4) - ^
00:06:289 (3,4) - more neater blanket
00:30:739 (4,5) - fix blanket

That's all

good mapset

I hope my mod helps

Don't really have much to reply to in a blanket mod like this, but thanks for pointing them out for me anyways, Glad you got to it so quickly.

I kinda like this song, so calm ~ owo
just making a few suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. consider adding a silent sliderslide? the default sound doesn't match the song :c
   (if you have trouble adding custom hitsounds, feel free to pm me for help)

Easy

1. 00:00:289 (1,2) - consider evening up the blanket here. http://puu.sh/kpXzA.jpg
   (just pull the first anchor of (2) slightly further left with DS enabled and Grid Snap disabled)
2. 00:02:689 (3) - how about curving this differently to match the melody? http://puu.sh/kpXHO.jpg | http://puu.sh/kpXII.jpg
3. 00:05:089 (1) - for a more comfortable movement from the prev object to this you could move this to the lower right (384|320 ?) and adjust the distance to the following pattern
4. 00:10:789 (2,3,4) - approach circle of (4) appears directly after players hit (2) which might cause confusion. I'd prefer if you unstack them and blanket (2) instead? http://puu.sh/kpXTZ.jpg
   then again, I feel a little uncomfortable with the tick change here 00:12:289 (4,5) - it might be okay, I'm not sure, but I think using a few more sliders with a reverse on the blue ticks would be nice. example: http://puu.sh/kpY2x.jpg | http://puu.sh/kpY3P.jpg
5. 00:15:589 (2,3) - similar here with the tick change. how about http://puu.sh/kpY6O.jpg ?
6. 00:19:489 (1,2,3) - this looks super confusing for beginner players. :/ because AR is so low, both (2) and (3) are 100% visible when (1) ends. also same about the tick change as before.. hmh. if you want to keep the rhythm - maybe you like sth like this: http://puu.sh/kpYid.jpg
   but I'd prefer if you change the rhythm
7. 00:30:289 (3,4) - here, too. and 00:32:389 (6,7) -
8. 00:33:889 (1,2) - the pattern is unreadable for beginner players, sadly. they'll most likely hit the wrong end of (2), because it's closer to (1) and the followpoints kinda point to the sldierend, too. it's not visible that they continue below the slidertrack, so.. ya. I'd suggest this (including rhythm change cause of blue tick): http://puu.sh/kpYxw.jpg (this way (3) blankets (1), looks nice, imo)
9. 00:39:889 (3,4,5) - here, again. also, the strong downbeat here 00:41:089 - should be clickable, atm it's a sliderend. try this rhythm maybe: http://puu.sh/kpYBO.jpg
10. 00:48:289 (1) - because the downbeat is pretty strong I'd suggest to add a circle here and move the spinner by 1/2 beat on the timeline. (also shorten it by 1/2 beat so it's not too long!)

Normal
neat diff, I'm really troubled by the sliderslide here, but other than that only some small suggestions -

1. 00:14:689 (1,2) - reverse them on the timeline? if you listen closely, there are strong beats on 00:14:689 - and 00:14:989 - and a weaker beat on 00:15:289 (2) - . It'd make more sense if the loduer beats were clickable, so first the circlem, then a 1/2 slider.
2. 00:15:589 (3,4) - the 1/4 reverse looks a little confusing. and you use this very rarely, so it might be better to go with a different rhythm here: http://puu.sh/kpYV1.jpg
3. 00:26:689 (1) - consider using two sliders here instead. the end of the slider isn't mapped to the background sound, but the weak beat on 00:27:889 - which is a repetition of the prev melody you follow with the start of the slider. try http://puu.sh/kpZ2B.jpg ?
4. 00:34:789 (2,3) - similar to 00:15:589 (3,4) -. consider a change here as well
5. 00:42:889 (5,1,2) - you should blanket them properly and stack (2) below (5)'s end. the overlap looks really confusing while playing. :c
6. 00:45:889 (1) - similar to 00:26:689 (1) -, try two sliders here, too?
7. 00:48:289 (1) - aaand same as in Easy. another circle would be nice. :3

and that's all from me. Good luck with this!
//squee

Hey, thanks for such an in-depth mod. No Reply = fixed exactly the way you said.

Squirrel wrote:

I kinda like this song, so calm ~ owo
just making a few suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. consider adding a silent sliderslide? the default sound doesn't match the song :c
   (if you have trouble adding custom hitsounds, feel free to pm me for help)

Easy

1. 00:00:289 (1,2) - consider evening up the blanket here. http://puu.sh/kpXzA.jpg
   (just pull the first anchor of (2) slightly further left with DS enabled and Grid Snap disabled)
2. 00:02:689 (3) - how about curving this differently to match the melody? http://puu.sh/kpXHO.jpg | http://puu.sh/kpXII.jpg
3. 00:05:089 (1) - for a more comfortable movement from the prev object to this you could move this to the lower right (384|320 ?) and adjust the distance to the following pattern
   
   Moved the nmote, but left the following pattern alone, given the amount of time between notes here DS is almost irrelevant.
   
4. 00:10:789 (2,3,4) - approach circle of (4) appears directly after players hit (2) which might cause confusion. I'd prefer if you unstack them and blanket (2) instead? http://puu.sh/kpXTZ.jpg
   then again, I feel a little uncomfortable with the tick change here 00:12:289 (4,5) - it might be okay, I'm not sure, but I think using a few more sliders with a reverse on the blue ticks would be nice. example: http://puu.sh/kpY2x.jpg | http://puu.sh/kpY3P.jpg
5. 00:15:589 (2,3) - similar here with the tick change. how about http://puu.sh/kpY6O.jpg ?
6. 00:19:489 (1,2,3) - this looks super confusing for beginner players. :/ because AR is so low, both (2) and (3) are 100% visible when (1) ends. also same about the tick change as before.. hmh. if you want to keep the rhythm - maybe you like sth like this: http://puu.sh/kpYid.jpg
   but I'd prefer if you change the rhythm
   
   Reserved, I don't this is a problem and frankly I really like this pattern, so I'm keeping it.
   
7. 00:30:289 (3,4) - here, too. and 00:32:389 (6,7) -
   
   Not sure what you're referring to here
   
8. 00:33:889 (1,2) - the pattern is unreadable for beginner players, sadly. they'll most likely hit the wrong end of (2), because it's closer to (1) and the followpoints kinda point to the sldierend, too. it's not visible that they continue below the slidertrack, so.. ya. I'd suggest this (including rhythm change cause of blue tick): http://puu.sh/kpYxw.jpg (this way (3) blankets (1), looks nice, imo)
   
   Lazy fix, Ctrl + H and shifted remaining notes to clean up DS
   
9. 00:39:889 (3,4,5) - here, again. also, the strong downbeat here 00:41:089 - should be clickable, atm it's a sliderend. try this rhythm maybe: http://puu.sh/kpYBO.jpg
10. 00:48:289 (1) - because the downbeat is pretty strong I'd suggest to add a circle here and move the spinner by 1/2 beat on the timeline. (also shorten it by 1/2 beat so it's not too long!)
    
    Added Circle, Kept spinner with same end time.

Normal
neat diff, I'm really troubled by the sliderslide here, but other than that only some small suggestions -

1. 00:14:689 (1,2) - reverse them on the timeline? if you listen closely, there are strong beats on 00:14:689 - and 00:14:989 - and a weaker beat on 00:15:289 (2) - . It'd make more sense if the loduer beats were clickable, so first the circlem, then a 1/2 slider.
   
   Oh yea, This was because in my original version there was no circle there and a previous mod suggested adding a beat there to keep flow going, Looking back at it now it seems weird
   
2. 00:15:589 (3,4) - the 1/4 reverse looks a little confusing. and you use this very rarely, so it might be better to go with a different rhythm here: http://puu.sh/kpYV1.jpg
   
   Reserved, Just because I use it rarely doesn't mean it's a broken pattern, And even if this causes someone a single retry, the map is less than 60 seconds long.
   
3. 00:26:689 (1) - consider using two sliders here instead. the end of the slider isn't mapped to the background sound, but the weak beat on 00:27:889 - which is a repetition of the prev melody you follow with the start of the slider. try http://puu.sh/kpZ2B.jpg ?
4. 00:34:789 (2,3) - similar to 00:15:589 (3,4) -. consider a change here as well
   
   Reserved
   
5. 00:42:889 (5,1,2) - you should blanket them properly and stack (2) below (5)'s end. the overlap looks really confusing while playing. :c
   
   Reserved, I tried playing around with it but there's no way to make it look good with 2 stacked under 5's end without completely remapping that portion, So I'll leave it for now and look for second opinions.
   
6. 00:45:889 (1) - similar to 00:26:689 (1) -, try two sliders here, too?
   
   In this case reserved since it's the song ending slider, it's not really meant to be super melodic so I don't feel it's necessary.
   
7. 00:48:289 (1) - aaand same as in Easy. another circle would be nice. :3

and that's all from me. Good luck with this!
//squee

Here goes my mod.

as far as I'm concerned, colour 1 and 2 are REALLY REALLY hard to tell apart, so I'd suggest using something else (perhaps try using the colour of her dress? I think that'd be a good

your sliderslide that is in the folder is not being used right now (clearly audible sliderticks on 00:45:889 (1) - in the Normal if you feel like checking that out) so I'd make sure to use it

EZ

00:00:289 (1,2) - don't want to start this off with a 'blanket plis' but yeah this'd just look a lot neater if this was a proper blanket, simply because of how long both of these are visible together
00:13:489 (5) - would say a whistle on the repeat here goes along well with the peak in the song
00:20:389 (2,3) - would it be to big of a bother to get rid of the overlap between these two? or perhaps try going for a triangle between 00:19:489 (1,2,3) - for the looks
00:32:689 (7) - having this white tick clickable, as opposed to having it land on a tail, would be much more intuitive and more accurate in terms of following the song
00:45:889 (1) - I like what you did with your Normal Diff more to be honest. The piano hit landing on this really does feel like it'd go along well with a slider, since the slider would allow you to properly catch the whole 'fading out' thing of te piano without having to start 00:47:089 (1) - on....well nothing really, (aside from the sound of the fading piano, which I doubt it something that HAS to be clickable by any means) so yeah I'd try and come up with a fancy slider for this, works better I think

NM

I think OD4 for this would do just fine

00:02:689 (1,2) - would ctrl+g on the timeline here, goes along much nicer with the song
00:03:889 (4,5) - so my main problem with these is that neither of these really have an audible beat in the background to back them up, hence making use of a rather dense rythm for this section of the piano rather odd in my opinion. Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761517 for a potential rythm would be MUCH nicer I think since it is waaaaay less dense and it just does a better job of catching the whole 'fading out' thing of the piano
00:14:689 (1,2) - again, this would be much more fitting if you'd ctrl+g the rythm here
00:17:989 (3) - I'll just point this out as a possibel example of how I think the whole fading out piano thing should be mapped. If you look at this slider and then compare it so say 00:07:789 (2,3,4) - I think the slider does a better job of following the song, having lots of objects start during a section that really does not feel like it'd call for anything clickable or anything that'd make the section stand out is something that I think should be avoided
00:33:589 (1) - hnnnng putting such a strong peak on the repeat where it has literally 0 emphasize to it
00:48:289 (1) - I don't really think this has to be NC'd

so yeah I'd keep an eye on the rythm used in the Normal c: I get the idea of having a higher note density here when compared to the Easy Diff, I just think that the way this was executed here is kinda questionable at times. I mean, having the note density for stuff like 00:07:489 (1,2,3,4) - as high or almost higher than the previous section with actual piano hits is pretty odd I'd say since it not only puts a decent amount of emphasize on this when there is nothing here calling for that, it also takes away emphasize from the surrounding sections since they don't really stand out agains this supposedly calm section while playing anymore.

Good Luck!

Hey, Thanks for the mod. no reply = Fixed exactly as you said

Peachtrees wrote:

Here goes my mod.

as far as I'm concerned, colour 1 and 2 are REALLY REALLY hard to tell apart, so I'd suggest using something else (perhaps try using the colour of her dress? I think that'd be a good

Uhh, Greyish Blue and Pink are hard to tell apart?????? You sure you looked in the right place?

your sliderslide that is in the folder is not being used right now (clearly audible sliderticks on 00:45:889 (1) - in the Normal if you feel like checking that out) so I'd make sure to use it

Definately being used....... Although I've had some problems with it in the past so I'll keep an eye on it, but no definitely being used.

EZ

00:00:289 (1,2) - don't want to start this off with a 'blanket plis' but yeah this'd just look a lot neater if this was a proper blanket, simply because of how long both of these are visible together

OK, had to modify SV a bit to make a blanket possible but it works.

00:13:489 (5) - would say a whistle on the repeat here goes along well with the peak in the song

Reserved, I don't like the sound of it, besides the hitsounds are more rhythmic than musical here so I'd like to avoid inconsistency

00:20:389 (2,3) - would it be to big of a bother to get rid of the overlap between these two? or perhaps try going for a triangle between 00:19:489 (1,2,3) - for the looks

Well, there's no actual overlap there, and I'm happy with it as it is, so reserved.

00:32:689 (7) - having this white tick clickable, as opposed to having it land on a tail, would be much more intuitive and more accurate in terms of following the song

OK, it was awkward trying to fit a circle in there but I drew back the previous slider and added a circle.

00:45:889 (1) - I like what you did with your Normal Diff more to be honest. The piano hit landing on this really does feel like it'd go along well with a slider, since the slider would allow you to properly catch the whole 'fading out' thing of te piano without having to start 00:47:089 (1) - on....well nothing really, (aside from the sound of the fading piano, which I doubt it something that HAS to be clickable by any means) so yeah I'd try and come up with a fancy slider for this, works better I think

NM

I think OD4 for this would do just fine

00:02:689 (1,2) - would ctrl+g on the timeline here, goes along much nicer with the song

I disagree, Reserved

00:03:889 (4,5) - so my main problem with these is that neither of these really have an audible beat in the background to back them up, hence making use of a rather dense rythm for this section of the piano rather odd in my opinion. Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3761517 for a potential rythm would be MUCH nicer I think since it is waaaaay less dense and it just does a better job of catching the whole 'fading out' thing of the piano

There is no fading here, and it captures a rhythm that's always there, I don't see a problem in switching to a less dominant track while the melody goes quiet. This is generally one of the defining differences between the diffs as well so, Reserved

00:14:689 (1,2) - again, this would be much more fitting if you'd ctrl+g the rythm here

That would make a submissive hit clickable while putting a dominant beat on a slider tail,

00:17:989 (3) - I'll just point this out as a possibel example of how I think the whole fading out piano thing should be mapped. If you look at this slider and then compare it so say 00:07:789 (2,3,4) - I think the slider does a better job of following the song, having lots of objects start during a section that really does not feel like it'd call for anything clickable or anything that'd make the section stand out is something that I think should be avoided
00:33:589 (1) - hnnnng putting such a strong peak on the repeat where it has literally 0 emphasize to it

Well it was already audibly emphasized, but ok, made it a circle into a slider instead.

00:48:289 (1) - I don't really think this has to be NC'd

You're right, Reserved.

so yeah I'd keep an eye on the rythm used in the Normal c: I get the idea of having a higher note density here when compared to the Easy Diff, I just think that the way this was executed here is kinda questionable at times. I mean, having the note density for stuff like 00:07:489 (1,2,3,4) - as high or almost higher than the previous section with actual piano hits is pretty odd I'd say since it not only puts a decent amount of emphasize on this when there is nothing here calling for that, it also takes away emphasize from the surrounding sections since they don't really stand out agains this supposedly calm section while playing anymore.

Good Luck!

Thanks for the mod

LOL just plugged in my not-so-shitty headphones to get rid of my other ones and yea there actually is stuff going on HAHAHA o boi I'll compensate you with a star

LOL, well now you know, use decent headphones when playing a rhythm game

tru though getting good ones is $$$

o well probably should've just postponed for a day until I don't feel like ass anymore, though I will say that ima stay strong on everything that was not related to the other stuff that my headphones did cathc ;w;

anyways good luck, relaxing songs r the best

imo when you are ready you should go straight for the BN's.

Good luck.

I'm trying, but honestly they're all either inactive or...... well yea almost all of them are just perma-afk. Think Ima just stack some mods on this to be safe while moving onto my next map. Honestly have no idea how it's gonna work.

Hi there. 2nd Mod and no kudosu for this.

There are a few improvements I can recommend to you.

1) End Spinner:
Difficulties affected: Both.

When reducing the volume of the spinner at the end, there are very few timing points for changing the volume, so although the volume of the spinner goes down, the volume does not gradually decrease.

Improvement (+- 2 uncertainty):
00:49:489 - 35%
00:50:089 - 30%
00:50:689 - 25%
00:51:289 - 23%
00:51:889 - 21%
00:52:489 - 17%
00:53:089 - 14%
00:53:689 - 10%
00:54:289 - 7%
00:54:889 - 6%
00:55:389 - 5%

With this the spinner volume decreases in volume while sounding a lot smoother than before.

Normal:
1) 00:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - Somehow I do not like the idea of the blanket because I feel like you should spread out the notes to improve flow. In this case arrange notes 2,3,4,5 like this It looks cleaner in my opinion.

Easy:
1) 00:30:739 (4,5,6) - Try this arrangement: It looks cleaner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3824222

Thanks for the recheck. I already discussed it entirely with you.

ok lets see

[General]
follow the metadata on this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/429759, Teatime -> teatime and add "東方Project" to Source
Add 1500ms of audio leadin for each difficulty

[Easy]
00:17:089 (4,5) - blanket can look better
00:19:489 (1,2,3) - plays better like this: 00:32:089 (6) - this need to go up more, its partially offscreen
00:45:889 (1) - you can curve this more so it blankets the last note, need to shift around things to get the right distance snap:
[Normal]
00:03:889 (4,5) - these curve a little too much, make them the same shape as 00:02:689 (1)
00:19:489 (1,2) - blanket can look better here
00:29:089 (1,2) - the angle this plays in is a bit weird, might want to move 00:29:989 (2) more toward the left
00:31:489 (1) - too much curve
00:42:289 (4,5,1,2) - this whole pattern seems a bit messy, I'd suggest you redo this so they don't end up looking too clustered

yeah thats about all, mostly just some visuals and make sure you fix that offscreen slider on Easy. Call me back when you are done.

jonathanlfj wrote:

ok lets see

[General]
follow the metadata on this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/429759, Teatime -> teatime and add "東方Project" to Source
Add 1500ms of audio leadin for each difficulty

[Easy]
00:17:089 (4,5) - blanket can look better
00:19:489 (1,2,3) - plays better like this:

SPOILER

00:32:089 (6) - this need to go up more, its partially offscreen
00:45:889 (1) - you can curve this more so it blankets the last note, need to shift around things to get the right distance snap:

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:03:889 (4,5) - these curve a little too much, make them the same shape as 00:02:689 (1)
00:19:489 (1,2) - blanket can look better here
00:29:089 (1,2) - the angle this plays in is a bit weird, might want to move 00:29:989 (2) more toward the left
00:31:489 (1) - too much curve
00:42:289 (4,5,1,2) - this whole pattern seems a bit messy, I'd suggest you redo this so they don't end up looking too clustered

yeah thats about all, mostly just some visuals and make sure you fix that offscreen slider on Easy. Call me back when you are done.

Hey, thanks for the Mod, Although I'm not sure how to add audio lead in right now. All changed.

To add audio lead in if you already have not done so.

1) go to editor and under the file dropdown menu, click 'open .osu in notepad'
2) where it says audio lead in in the notepad file, put 1500 and then save.
3) repeat for each difficulty.

Thank you Matthew, being very helpful again. Remind me to star you when you make a map sometime

rechecking no kd

Change romanized title: t+pazolite ft. RIZNA - Interlude - teatime
add this to source: 東方Project
add these to tags: 東方紅魔郷 the embodiment of scarlet devil 上海紅茶館 chinese tea shanghai teahouse 紅 美鈴 hong meiling

[Easy]
00:45:889 (1,1) - fix the distance here

EDIT: alright here is a bubble, good luck!

Hello! Don't see this bubble pop as something bad, just want to discuss a couple of things stated above

Combo Colour (2) doesn't fit the BG at all, maybe a light yellow would look more interesting and fitting!
Offset 300 sounds way much better.
Why are you using the same SV on both difficulties? The song is calm and there should be different SV, because the difference between each diff can become unnoticeable, then.
00:00:289 - (On Easy) I don't understand the purpose of this 1.05x SV green line? It's for a better blanketing (even though the inconsistent spacing is unrankable)? Does it have a reason? Why you are not using it on Normal?
00:00:289 (1,2) - (On Easy) Fix this spacing, please! It's something very minor but you know how picky we have to be.
00:26:689 (1,2) - (On Normal) Fix that 1.5x spacing, too!
00:37:189 (4) - (On Normal) Do you think you could split this object into one slider to 00:37:789 - and then adding a circle on 00:38:089 - ? I think it'd follow both vocals and beats in a better and different way.
00:45:889 (1) - (On Normal) Make this harder, map more elements/beats in here, why is this the same as in the Easy?
00:48:289 (1) - (On both diffs) Completely unnecessary and loud hitsound usage over here, try whistle instead. In case you want to keep the Finish, I'd recommend you to run 15% green line volume, but it doesn't fit.
00:48:589 (1) - (On both diffs) Can you reduce this line to 5% instead?

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Hey, Thanks for the mod, here is

Yuii- wrote:

Hello! Don't see this bubble pop as something bad, just want to discuss a couple of things stated above

Combo Colour (2) doesn't fit the BG at all, maybe a light yellow would look more interesting and fitting!

Originally I thought this just looked nice with the colour palette I currently had, I'll try the colour of the dress maybe

Offset 300 sounds way much better.

I literally can't tell the difference, also the cut on the mp3 is random so it seems really coincidental that it'd land on a perfect offset like this, if you're certain we can discuss in irc or something but I'm hesitant to make that change right now

Why are you using the same SV on both difficulties? The song is calm and there should be different SV, because the difference between each diff can become unnoticeable, then.

Increasing the SV doesn't mean much to the difficulties to me, plus it's already a little fast for an easy at this bpm. I use increased DS instead as I think it's more fitting for the song here.

00:00:289 - (On Easy) I don't understand the purpose of this 1.05x SV green line? It's for a better blanketing (even though the inconsistent spacing is unrankable)? Does it have a reason? Why you are not using it on Normal?

It's for the blanketing, I was pretty sure that the difference in DS created by having different SV would be fine since it mathematically balances out with the multiplier, plus it's not really noticeable in gameplay.

00:00:289 (1,2) - (On Easy) Fix this spacing, please! It's something very minor but you know how picky we have to be.

OK, Now the blanket is a little separated from what I'd like but the spacing is even now.

00:26:689 (1,2) - (On Normal) Fix that 1.5x spacing, too!

Hope you were talking about the slider combo 2 here, cause I didn't see any other DS breaks

00:37:189 (4) - (On Normal) Do you think you could split this object into one slider to 00:37:789 - and then adding a circle on 00:38:089 - ? I think it'd follow both vocals and beats in a better and different way.

The way I see it that would follow the general pattern I have in the normal, and it would make an inconsistency with the entire slider since I didn't have a circle on the previous identical tick that occurs on the second tick of the slider. So I'm going to pass on that for now

00:45:889 (1) - (On Normal) Make this harder, map more elements/beats in here, why is this the same as in the Easy?

Good point, I think I mapped the normal first and just didn't want to have nothing on the easy. I'll try a pattern here. Hope you like what I put.

00:48:289 (1) - (On both diffs) Completely unnecessary and loud hitsound usage over here, try whistle instead. In case you want to keep the Finish, I'd recommend you to run 15% green line volume, but it doesn't fit.

OK, Thought the Finish would fit here since it's literally the last note, but I guess it is loud compared to the rest of the map, changed.

00:48:589 (1) - (On both diffs) Can you reduce this line to 5% instead?

I hope you meant the entire chain of it to get down to 5%, since there isn't a line at that exact time stamp, if not then just correct it, is now uploaded thx.

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so
is Kyubey's set halved (50 bpm) and this is doubled?
like which one is correct

Okoratu wrote:

so
is Kyubey's set halved (50 bpm) and this is doubled?
like which one is correct

100 bpm feels more natural to me, especially when you compare this song to other songs which use the same theme.

I choose 100bpm over 50 mainly because of Slider velocity, I wasn't interested in using CS 5 on an easy diff so having the higher SV was a necessity.

[General]

1. it was hard for me to say anything about this because it was too good ><

[Easy]

1. 00:29:089 (1) - maybe bend the slider the other way ?
2. 00:30:739 (4) - move this slightly to the right to match the flow ?
3. 00:45:889 (1) - overlap this with the previous note ?
4. everything was so neat and organized its so beautiful ;-;

[Normal]

1. 00:25:489 (3,4,1) - bend 3 to match w 1 more ?
2. 00:27:889 (2,1) - bend 1 to match w 2 ?
   

all i could find :')

Hey thx for the mod, I guess I can still make a change or two since the bubble got popped earlier.

Maphi wrote:

[General]

1. it was hard for me to say anything about this because it was too good ><

[Easy]

1. 00:29:089 (1) - maybe bend the slider the other way ?
   
   Had to look back to understand what you meant, I see where you're going but I think for the sake of the map not being completely mind-numbing keeping with the wave motion will provide more interesting play than making it perfectly circular.
   
2. 00:30:739 (4) - move this slightly to the right to match the flow ?
   
   Same as above, Reserved.
   
3. 00:45:889 (1) - overlap this with the previous note ?
   
   Alright, it's true that the partial overlap looked a little weird, Had to change slider curvature to maintain both final note blanket and DS consistency but wasn't much work for polishing sake.
   
4. everything was so neat and organized its so beautiful ;-;

[Normal]

1. 00:25:489 (3,4,1) - bend 3 to match w 1 more ?
   
   1 is a wave and 3 is a curve, not sure what you wanted here.
   
2. 00:27:889 (2,1) - bend 1 to match w 2 ?
   
   2 is literally a flipped copy paste of 1, pretty hard to make them match anymore than they already do.

all i could find :')

Thx for the mod, everything helps

00:05:089 (1,2) - (On Easy) Breaks with all the other patterns. Inconsistency with ds.

That's it, yup.
PM me back once you have fixed that one and start calling jonathan back!

Hey, Thanks for the recheck, Fixed the pattern with a little bit of work, thanks again.

k

no kd

[Easy]
00:45:889 (1) - snap end to 00:47:689, don't forget to fix spacing as well

[Normal]
00:45:889 (1) - whistle

i can qualify it afterwards

EDIT: Enjoy your first rank~

Congratz for your first qualified!

Ara

Grats!

why 'ft.' and 'RIZNA' ......

well. ft. is the common abbreviation of "featuring" and this song is featuring リズナ which translates out to Rizuna which in english becomes RIZNA. so yea.

Sorry for the confusing explanation. Please ask if you have anything you do not understand.
Feel free to call me for rebubble/requalify if you need me!

I hate metadata I swear I will eat babies

Blare, fucking metadata is hard, thx for the fix anyways, just wish it didn't need an extra week if all that needs changing is a metadata technicality. Anyways I'd love to make the fix now, but if you check my profile I don't have a comp right now, although I guess I can dl and make the change on a friends comp whenever available since I just need to edit the meta. I'll call you guys back whenever I can make the change, hopefully later tonight.

Here's my Hard GD as you requested c:


I hope you like it!

no kd

[ByBy]
00:03:589 - consider a whistle here
00:12:889 (2) - ^
00:22:789 - ^
00:32:089 (2) - ^
00:41:989 - ^
00:49:489 (3) - ^
00:50:689 (1) - slider end is unsnapped
also decreasing the volume is cool, but you can still use whistles to emphasis the stronger sounds in the music

no kd

[General]
・You can reduce the memory size of BG by changing from PNG to JPG (2.52MB ⇒ 713KB). It does not matter, but I would like to recommend the JPG: http://puu.sh/lpPCr/c0e19ed6e8.jpg
・Add ByBy13 to Tags.

[Normal]
・00:04:489 (5) - Remove a whistle If you look at your hitsound pattern.

[ByBy's Tea]
・00:50:689 (1) - jonathan said.
・I think some whistle are missing, so please consider jonathan's suggestions.

call me back for bubble/heart if you need me.

Thanks jonathan and Gamu for mods.Added some whistles but that slider from 00:50:689(1)- seems to be right
EDIT:Fixed a pattern after having IRC with Yuii-

Everything looks fine.

Bubbled~

alright lets try this again

Wow nice one.Regratz (:

Yay now I'm finally allowed to rank my map of this :^)

Gj!

Hi, I'd decrease a bit the offset since sometimes I feel like some notes are just a little little little bit late compared to the song.
(normal diff)
EDIT: Tried myself twice, 257 seems a bit more accurate
EDIT 2: Discovered just right now ranked maps can't be edited.
so noobish.

congrats!!