forum

Ookawa Shigenobu - Kakushin Observation [OsuMania]

posted
Total Posts
43
Topic Starter
shionelove
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月25日 at 21:57:38

Artist: Ookawa Shigenobu
Title: Kakushin Observation
Source: 運命線上のφ
Tags: unmei senjyou fai phi eroge Lump of Suger yoshilove
BPM: 94
Filesize: 4030kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. HD - 7Key (2.94 stars, 693 notes)
  2. NM - 7Key (1.92 stars, 441 notes)
  3. yoshilove's MX - 7Key (3.72 stars, 892 notes)
Download: Ookawa Shigenobu - Kakushin Observation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
凪咲love


old forum: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3578212
paperlens
Hi mod as requested

[yoshilove]
Already Excellent map, just suggestions
00:14:708 (14708|5) - move to 5,

00:34:655 (34655|6) - move to 3 for PR 00:35:134 (35134|1) - move to 1

00:39:761 (39761|5) - move to 1?

00:41:357 (41357|0,41517|2,41676|0) - change into a LN, there is a low sound bass

00:42:634 - from here to 00:45:187 - there is a 1/2 bass sound, maybe try to follow that

00:47:421 - maybe one note is enough

00:49:814 (49814|3) - can't hear the sound for this note, but 00:50:134 - here maybe add

00:50:293 (50293|6,50453|5,50533|6) - check this snap, different with hutu's diff

00:55:400 - from here on: SO GOD AMAZING

[HD]
00:15:346 (15346|0) - maybe move to 2, different with 00:14:548 (14548|0,14868|0) -

00:51:410 (51410|1) - maybe move, different pitch with 00:50:293 (50293|1,50612|1,51091|1) -

00:57:953 (57953|2,58059|4,58165|4,58272|1,58378|5,58485|5,58591|0,58697|6,58804|6,58910|1,59017|5,59123|5,59229|2,59336|6,59442|6,59548|1,59655|5,59761|5) - maybe Ctrl+H (these pattern feels amazing)

[NM]
00:59:974 (59974|3) - maybe delete

take my stars and fav
Topic Starter
shionelove

paperlens wrote:

Hi mod as requested



[HD]
00:15:346 (15346|0) - maybe move to 2, different with 00:14:548 (14548|0,14868|0) - change pattern

00:51:410 (51410|1) - maybe move, different pitch with 00:50:293 (50293|1,50612|1,51091|1) -
00:50:293 (50293|1,50612|1,51091|1,51410|1) - same pitch

00:57:953 (57953|2,58059|4,58165|4,58272|1,58378|5,58485|5,58591|0,58697|6,58804|6,58910|1,59017|5,59123|5,59229|2,59336|6,59442|6,59548|1,59655|5,59761|5) - maybe Ctrl+H (these pattern feels amazing)
i don't like mirror pattern and for 00:59:655 (59655|5,59761|5,59868|4,59974|3,60080|2,60187|1) - these

[NM]
00:59:974 (59974|3) - maybe delete no thanks

take my stars and fav
thank you my friend,mod and star
Topic Starter
shionelove


yoshilove wrote:

paperlens wrote:

Hi mod as requested

[yoshilove]
Already Excellent map, just suggestions
00:14:708 (14708|5) - move to 5, mo-ve

00:34:655 (34655|6) - move to 3 for PR 00:35:134 (35134|1) - move to 1 aa soory no change

00:39:761 (39761|5) - move to 1? sorry no change :3 (nice picth

00:41:357 (41357|0,41517|2,41676|0) - change into a LN, there is a low sound bass sorry no change><

00:42:634 - from here to 00:45:187 - there is a 1/2 bass sound, maybe try to follow that a~ sorry no change~ nice :3

00:47:421 - maybe one note is enough no change~

00:49:814 (49814|3) - can't hear the sound for this note, but 00:50:134 - here maybe add meow!

00:50:293 (50293|6,50453|5,50533|6) - check this snap, different with hutu's diff meow!!

00:55:400 - from here on: SO GOD AMAZING
arigatooooo
http://puu.sh/kmx8E.zip
RuberusuScarlet
IRCでBNcheck

変更点
・00:42:314 - to 00:42:634 - のsnap修正(全diff)
・yoshilove's MXの00:57:793 (57793|3,57900|4) - のsnap修正

Marirose
yoshi's diff 01:25:080 - add
Topic Starter
shionelove

Marirose wrote:

yoshi's diff 01:25:080 - add
fixed,thank you!
Marirose
bubbled
RuberusuScarlet
><)/ Qualify!
Topic Starter
shionelove
thank you my friend
AnatOWJIya
MX
First note: 00:01:304 (1304|0) -
First sound: ~ somewhere 00:01:352 -
Da hell?
Is it okay or something wrong with offset?
OzzyOzrock
holy SHIT
Feerum
Hello. I just checked some stuff in this Map. That i will point out.

[MX]
00:26:836 (26836|0) - For what the hell is the note here?
01:04:017 - Missing short LN? Breaks the Consistency
Also from 01:04:256 - this end. There still the Sound you follow all the time with the LN's. Why missing here?
01:07:846 (67846|0,67926|1,68006|2,68086|1) - I hear the Sound you try to follow with this LN's but these are just wrong Snapped.
00:26:836 (26836|0,70400|2,70479|3,70559|4,70639|5) - Also here should be 1/12
01:14:442 (74442|5) - 1/12 Beatline down?

[HD]
00:43:910 (43910|0) - Why this LN has a different Length then in MX? Same Sound? Should have same length?

Well i don't play a lot 7k but i think Mapping is not a lot different to the other Keymodes.
Also the MX Quality looks not rly good for me this is kinda LN overuse. But i think its your decision.

Good luck for Rank~

Greets
Feerum
moni
as Feerum mod , this isn't ready for ranked at all zzz

if u want to speed ranked , plz make sure your map don't have issue like this huuu ..
OzzyOzrock

moni wrote:

as Feerum mod , this isn't ready for ranked at all zzz

if u want to speed ranked , plz make sure your map don't have issue like this huuu ..
not speed-ranked, the old forum is in the description.
Deep Sea
diffs are not in good condition, need more mods.
Feerum
I never say'd it's not ready for Rank. I point just some issues that should be fixed.

The Mapper has to decide when he want's to rank Something. But i agree here with Shana. A Map can't have enough Mod's even when it's a low BPM Calm song. Every Mod only helps to get better quality :)

I really don't mean it bad to the Mapper but that what i mention looks like where there something wrong. Maybe the Mapper can explain everything and i was wrong. Then it's okay.
moni

OzzyOzrock wrote:

moni wrote:

as Feerum mod , this isn't ready for ranked at all zzz

if u want to speed ranked , plz make sure your map don't have issue like this huuu ..
not speed-ranked, the old forum is in the description.
oh ok , i'm sorry
moni

Feerum wrote:

I never say'd it's not ready for Rank. I point just some issues that should be fixed.

The Mapper has to decide when he want's to rank Something. But i agree here with Shana. A Map can't have enough Mod's even when it's a low BPM Calm song. Every Mod only helps to get better quality :)

I really don't mean it bad to the Mapper but that what i mention looks like where there something wrong. Maybe the Mapper can explain everything and i was wrong. Then it's okay.
it's my opinion , i just refer your mod 8-)
PS. sorry for double post
NlHIL
NMはそんなに悪くなかったけど他はやってて全く楽しくなかったしPPにならなかったし訓練にもならなかったし時間の無駄だった

Too boring to keep playing ;w;
Rumia-
I totally didnt get how this lns are overused lol..fine tbh
whoring the red vote isnt a good trend though.
omedetou
Topic Starter
shionelove
BPM94の、4つ打ちではないジャズ調の曲で、エロゲのBGMなんかで君達の考える面白い譜面を作るのははっきり言って不可能だよ
IIDXでいうならSummer Vacation(CU mix)でquasarやAAより面白い譜面を作れってことだよ、無理だね
所詮人の好みなんて、LNが少なく、BPMが140以上で、物量ならなんでも好まれる一方、LNが多かったり、BPMチェンジが激しい、ズレが多数あったりすると、りっぱな癖譜面となって、万人受けはしない

核心オブザベーション[FOUR DIMENSIONS]でも作らないといけないかな?w
Nanatsu
But that's your choice that selecting a bad song 'to make mania map'

I'm not going to say bad words if you did your best on this mapset.

What should i say? Doing own best is pretty worth thing in mapping

However, I still feel that your paragraphs are kinda excuse
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply