1. Insane (5 stars, 442 notes)
2. Normal (3,51 stars, 114 notes)
3. Skib's Hard (4,76 stars, 222 notes)

strager wrote:

Easy
I thought you mapped before? Spinners too short, you shouldn't have many/any 1/2 notes, slider velocity too fast. Use 1/2 sliders sparingly.

Needs to be remapped. It won't even pass for a Normal.

+ lengthen spinners
+ got rid of some 1/2 beats, but 1/2 sliders stays - it's playable for normal.
- velocity stays

Insane
Increase OD...?
Decrease HP drain.

- OD stays
+ HP drain -1

00:40:732 (3,4) - Unstack. - done
01:19:522 (3) - Speed probably needs a warning. dunno anything about SB'ing and for single slider I dont think it's such a big deal

1. 01:29:267 (7) - Maybe new combo here.

Shinxyn wrote:

~.~
I personally find the hitsounds a tad bit too loud.... plus max volume Normal doesn't match max volume soft well (the normal parts would be too loud compared to the soft) reduced volume to 90% on normal, and 85% on some parts with normal hitsounds in Insane
Add Skiboslaw to tags on all diffs? done
If this came from DDR (I have no idea actually), preferably use that as Source...done

Normal- this isn't hard for a Normal, but I have doubts on this being the easiest difficulty, moreso cuz of the second half of the map
00:03:280 - huh, whats that inherited timing panel for? done
01:10:541 - blah, shift timing panel before note done
01:18:184 (1) - :S does this reeeeeeaaaally have to be 2x? nope, changed.
01:33:088 (2) - clap? I actually like them that way.
01:34:617 (4) - clap at start of slider? -||-
Meh @ the single combo parts got rid of some of them

Insane- o_o
Maybe Overall diff+1 I'll think about it.. but it looks like pretty big change in OD when playing
00:43:311 (3,5) - have this sound like 00:45:413 (7,9)? (add claps?), to try to follow up on your claps ><; that's the way I wanted them to follow
00:49:522 (5) - add clap? done
01:39:872 (6,7) - make this a flip of 1,2? done
01:43:407 (5) - shift the rest of this stream from this note right a tick? :X done
The hitsound combination wasn't too bad thanks, I guess..?

May need a few more mods ><! yeah, I'm waiting for them

ShaggoN wrote:

Actually there was nothing to mod

Shinxyn wrote:

I personally find the hitsounds a tad bit too loud.... plus max volume Normal doesn't match max volume soft well (the normal parts would be too loud compared to the soft)
01:25:064 (6,7,8,9) - turn this part's volume down! D:!
01:31:179 (9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:37:293 (2,3,4,1,2) - ^
Normal hitsounds are now 80% in most places, soft are still 100%

00:45:700 - shift timing panel before note
01:10:563 - timing panel before note please... or actually, remove this and turn 01:05:955's panel to a Normal sample
fixed, all other unsnapped timing sections fixed as well

00:15:128 (4) - make this a flip of 2~ (left a tick) I swear I used motherf***ing ruler this time
00:18:567 (2) - follow up on this whistle or remove it? removed

00:57:644 (7,9,10) - try adding claps to these? trying trying to follow up on your pace (7,9, and start of 10) nicely done, added in corresponding sections as well
00:59:841 (4) - the clap doesn't sound bad, but it sounds lacking (follow up on it please) done, added another clap

01:48:758 (5,6) - eh? unexpected jump D: fixed, additionally changed one stack of 2x2 to two stacks

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Skib's Hard]
00:31:369 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing. spacing is now identical as in previous combos; remapped from 00:32:133 (3) to 00:38:058 (6)
00:35:000 (6) - whistle? sure, added in 00:38:058 (6) as well
01:00:988 (6) - whistle at the end? sure, why not..
01:15:891 (5) - why not just align with (4)... don't think this cross looks good. remapped whole combo
01:39:013 (4) - new combo for spacing change. fixed this in slightly different way and it's ok now

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All DIffs~
- Delete "Skiboslaw.png"and full submit next time, you aren't using it.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Skib's Hard~
01:38:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing change feels so weird...

Skiboslaw wrote:

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All DIffs~
- Delete "Skiboslaw.png"and full submit next time, you aren't using it.

I guess it blends really well into the background because its length is like 1/3 of the screen and people still have trouble spotting it... (it's in the Hard diff)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Fine.
  If someone wants to say "3.5 stars are too much for rank": please care about the map itself and not the rating. There are way harder Normals ranked.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Ahahahah the SB xD
  I read this is youyr first map, that's quite a nice work, good job ^^
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:50:668 (1,2,3,4) - the (4) does not follow the "pattern" because it's actually 1/4 before. If you can, move 00:51:719 (4,5,6,7) more to the right
  00:56:401 (3) - stack correctly
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:04:618 (2,3,4) - unreadable change of spacing. You can move (2) above (3) and make a stack, it will fit good since you did the same for 00:06:146 (7,8)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:08:248 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - is this new combo spam really necessary? >.< I think something like (1,2,1,2,1,2) is better :3
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  The following is a suggestion for a pattern you used some times in the map. I think my suggestions will make those parts more readable. Try and see if they're good to you.
  00:23:534 (14) - new combo
  00:26:592 (14) - new combo; 00:27:356 (1) - remove new combo
  00:35:764 (14) - ^
  00:38:821 (14) - new combo; 00:39:585 (1) - remove new combo