1. 03:54:977 - Duplicate inherited point

1. 00:56:477 - until 01:08:263 - I think you can raise the volume there a bit, so player not lost feedback on what the clicked, the curent kinda too quite imo
2. 02:10:191 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - How about nerf down the jumps a bit lower there? yes it's fit with the barking sound, but I think those jumps sequences kinda overdone
3. 02:16:834 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to follow imo, especially the movement from (2) to (3), yet I think based on the music there's no such of indicates to do a big jump there. Something like 02:23:692 (1,2,3,4) - is more apropriate to play imo
4. 02:42:334 (1) - How about delete Additions soft there? the normal whistle way more fit there imo
5. 02:48:334 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not really that comfortable with that soft claps there
6. 02:58:406 (3) - The clap better on head
7. 02:54:549 - Use normal whistle sound there, can emphsized more the music imo
8. 02:55:191 - That normal clap better be on here 02:55:406 -
9. 03:12:120 (2) - I think you can use 1/2 slider there then add a circle here 03:12:441 - instead extend the slider, because that blue tick is worth to be clicked imo
10. 03:34:834 (2,3,4) - About that one and this one 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - kinda make me confused when play, because you seems use same pattern and placement with diffrent rhythm (1/2 and 1/3)
11. 03:50:691 (1,2) - Tbh how the stream began kinda not comfortable there, I think instead doing like the current, you can extend (1) to end on blue tick here 03:51:441 - then delete (2), it's easier to hit the next stream sequences imo, something like http://puu.sh/k1Mmq/0f6024e3fd.jpg
12. 03:53:691 (1) - I really not sure about the placement on that one, because I barely see the reverse arrow on it, yet I think you can do flip ctrl+h there, something like http://puu.sh/k1MoO/92a67a3d32.jpg
13. 04:00:120 (1,2) - Imo the movement weird, because the rhythm is not like 03:59:049 (3,4) - . Maybe you can try to extend (1) to end on blue tick like this http://puu.sh/k1NUj/f19d8210e5.jpg
14. 04:01:727 (1) - Delete that? it doesn't represent anything imo, then nc next note
15. 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) - NC? sv change noticeable and the spacing kinda too far and to sudden imo hard to follow
16. 04:06:549 (5) - Why no sv change there? like the previous 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) -
17. 04:11:906 (1) - Delete that? because red tick seems empty imo, furthermore the movement (4) to (1) kinda not comfortable, you can insert circle here instead 04:12:120 -
18. 04:18:763 (13) - Kinda overmap imo, I don't really hear anything on yellow tick, maybe change into 1/4 slider instead might good
19. 04:18:977 (1,2) - On that stream up to 25 combos, I think you can cut the combo and make a new combo here 04:20:263 -
20. 04:40:191 (7) - Change into 1/2 slider instead? the reverse kinda odd imo
21. 04:57:120 (3) - Maybe move that to x:256 y:344? the movement from (2) to (3) somewhat odd
22. 04:48:763 (7) - Following the electronic sound, how about lowering the sv there? then you can a bit nerf down the jump here 04:48:763 (7,1) -
23. 04:52:513 (8,9,10) - How about flip them upward? so the overall movement less weird
24. 05:00:120 - I still have some doubt on last part;;

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello elvis, take it easy~

[General]

1. 03:54:977 - Duplicate inherited point

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1. 00:56:477 - until 01:08:263 - I think you can raise the volume there a bit, so player not lost feedback on what the clicked, the curent kinda too quite imo
   okie
2. 02:10:191 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - How about nerf down the jumps a bit lower there? yes it's fit with the barking sound, but I think those jumps sequences kinda overdone
   eeeh, no i think it's really fits to these sounds so i'd keep it as it is
3. 02:16:834 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to follow imo, especially the movement from (2) to (3), yet I think based on the music there's no such of indicates to do a big jump there. Something like 02:23:692 (1,2,3,4) - is more apropriate to play imo
   changed it a bit
4. 02:42:334 (1) - How about delete Additions soft there? the normal whistle way more fit there imo
   welp, i'd like to keep them because it'll be too much whistles
5. 02:48:334 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not really that comfortable with that soft claps there
   okie
6. 02:58:406 (3) - The clap better on head
   too much claps in a row, plus it'll ruin my hitsound pattern
7. 02:54:549 - Use normal whistle sound there, can emphsized more the music imo
8. 02:55:191 - That normal clap better be on here 02:55:406 -
   not accepted these two suggestions as well due the same reason
9. 03:12:120 (2) - I think you can use 1/2 slider there then add a circle here 03:12:441 - instead extend the slider, because that blue tick is worth to be clicked imo
   green
10. 03:34:834 (2,3,4) - About that one and this one 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - kinda make me confused when play, because you seems use same pattern and placement with diffrent rhythm (1/2 and 1/3)
11. 03:50:691 (1,2) - Tbh how the stream began kinda not comfortable there, I think instead doing like the current, you can extend (1) to end on blue tick here 03:51:441 - then delete (2), it's easier to hit the next stream sequences imo, something like http://puu.sh/k1Mmq/0f6024e3fd.jpg
12. 03:53:691 (1) - I really not sure about the placement on that one, because I barely see the reverse arrow on it, yet I think you can do flip ctrl+h there, something like http://puu.sh/k1MoO/92a67a3d32.jpg
13. 04:00:120 (1,2) - Imo the movement weird, because the rhythm is not like 03:59:049 (3,4) - . Maybe you can try to extend (1) to end on blue tick like this http://puu.sh/k1NUj/f19d8210e5.jpg
    changed it in a bit other way
14. 04:01:727 (1) - Delete that? it doesn't represent anything imo, then nc next note
    there is sounds in background and it goes well with rhythm pattern happy made so no changes here
15. 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) - NC? sv change noticeable and the spacing kinda too far and to sudden imo hard to follow
    okie
16. 04:06:549 (5) - Why no sv change there? like the previous 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) -
    as i can see it goes at the same sv values from here, so it's a way how heppy represented a buildup here so i'd keep it
17. 04:11:906 (1) - Delete that? because red tick seems empty imo, furthermore the movement (4) to (1) kinda not comfortable, you can insert circle here instead 04:12:120 -
    there is some sounds morevoer it's about rhythm patterns again, so no
18. 04:18:763 (13) - Kinda overmap imo, I don't really hear anything on yellow tick, maybe change into 1/4 slider instead might good
    welp, okay
19. 04:18:977 (1,2) - On that stream up to 25 combos, I think you can cut the combo and make a new combo here 04:20:263 -
    and here
20. 04:40:191 (7) - Change into 1/2 slider instead? the reverse kinda odd imo
21. 04:57:120 (3) - Maybe move that to x:256 y:344? the movement from (2) to (3) somewhat odd
    dunno, it seemd fine for me, it's a bit uncommon tho but i don't think that it's that weird to play
22. 04:48:763 (7) - Following the electronic sound, how about lowering the sv there? then you can a bit nerf down the jump here 04:48:763 (7,1) -
23. 04:52:513 (8,9,10) - How about flip them upward? so the overall movement less weird
    i'd like to keep it because... well i just like it
24. 05:00:120 - I still have some doubt on last part;;
    i think that it goes well with music

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I still have some doubt on some parts, but other than that looks god enough, hope it help

Mako Sakata wrote:

[*]03:34:834 (2,3,4) - About that one and this one 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - kinda make me confused when play, because you seems use same pattern and placement with diffrent rhythm (1/2 and 1/3) It's well indicated by the music here, also the spacing between them (timing wise) is enough imo.
[*]03:50:691 (1,2) - Tbh how the stream began kinda not comfortable there, I think instead doing like the current, you can extend (1) to end on blue tick here 03:51:441 - then delete (2), it's easier to hit the next stream sequences imo, something like http://puu.sh/k1Mmq/0f6024e3fd.jpg Uh.. no, I think it plays better with 2
[*]03:53:691 (1) - I really not sure about the placement on that one, because I barely see the reverse arrow on it, yet I think you can do flip ctrl+h there, something like http://puu.sh/k1MoO/92a67a3d32.jpg ok

1. 00:45:977 (1) - Two passiver finisher HS on a backslider sound bad idk. Maybe claps.
2. 00:47:906 (1,2,3) - Tried putting circles on the tails already? Cause Drumclaps on tails.
3. 00:55:191 (4,5) - Not a nice offbeat slider either, ctrl+g?
4. 00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't think you'll get away with this pattern because of what i already said.
   Easiest solution would be to shift the whole slidersection + greenlines for SV to 00:56:263 -
5. 01:00:977 (6) - This could benefit from a slightly higher SV (1.5x) for that swoosh sound.
   Also lowering the SV on 00:59:691 (1,5) - these slightly would fit the tone of the music too.
6. 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - Irritating spacing as 1/2 1/4 look the same
7. 01:14:263 (3) - Circle + 1/4 slider with high SV (2x)/circle for that swoosh sound starting at 01:14:477 -
   
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8. 01:24:977 (5) - Whistle on head would be neat for the string sound
9. 01:33:120 (4) - Whistle on tail.
10. 02:24:549 (4) - Goes over two beats that are as intensive as the head of the slider, so why not 3 circles?
11. 02:48:549 (6) - I hope that finisher on tail is intended lol. Also you're missing a normalwhistle on head.
12. 03:03:549 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why doubles here cause it doesn't stand for anything in the music (?).
    03:03:656 (2) - should be snapped on the next red tick to follow the leading melody.
13. 03:17:906 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the flow transition here, could be smoother
14. 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - Confusing to play. Even with NC you can't really tell that this is 1/3 snapped - well at least me.
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:39:549 (1,1) - Why are there finishers on these slidertails? ;_;
16. 05:02:691 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just two things to clean this a bit up: 1. 05:03:013 (1,1) - Align the slider with the other 4 minisliders and 2. 05:03:549 (1) - Make this a circle please.
    There's a clear strong cymbal beat at the end, not sure why you have to put a slider for it then.

Pho wrote:

00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - you're certain you don't wanna fix that pattern up? This just doesn't feel right to play at all with all these strong beats on the tails ;-;

EDIT: a bit more stuff

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1. 00:45:977 (1) - Two passiver finisher HS on a backslider sound bad idk. Maybe claps.
   i prefer these finishes instead or something else honestly
2. 00:47:906 (1,2,3) - Tried putting circles on the tails already? Cause Drumclaps on tails.
   okay
3. 00:55:191 (4,5) - Not a nice offbeat slider either, ctrl+g?
   okay
4. 00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't think you'll get away with this pattern because of what i already said.
   Easiest solution would be to shift the whole slidersection + greenlines for SV to 00:56:263 -
5. 01:00:977 (6) - This could benefit from a slightly higher SV (1.5x) for that swoosh sound.
   Also lowering the SV on 00:59:691 (1,5) - these slightly would fit the tone of the music too.
   green
6. 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - Irritating spacing as 1/2 1/4 look the same
   green
7. 01:14:263 (3) - Circle + 1/4 slider with high SV (2x)/circle for that swoosh sound starting at 01:14:477 -
   
   SPOILER

   
   uhh, no i'd keep it as it is because it would be a bit too much, also i don't think that it worth that kind of emphazise
8. 01:24:977 (5) - Whistle on head would be neat for the string sound
9. 01:33:120 (4) - Whistle on tail.
   green for both
10. 02:24:549 (4) - Goes over two beats that are as intensive as the head of the slider, so why not 3 circles?
    not so green because it gives a nice emphazise to background sounds, also i think it's works better even for these strong beats
11. 02:48:549 (6) - I hope that finisher on tail is intended lol. Also you're missing a normalwhistle on head.
12. 03:03:549 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why doubles here cause it doesn't stand for anything in the music (?).
    well, since previous part full of 1/4s and this part is a build-up i wanted to make it different, i don't think that these doubles is a big problem to play them because of synth sounds
    03:03:656 (2) - should be snapped on the next red tick to follow the leading melody.
13. 03:17:906 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the flow transition here, could be smoother
    okie
14. 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - Confusing to play. Even with NC you can't really tell that this is 1/3 snapped - well at least me.
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:39:549 (1,1) - Why are there finishers on these slidertails? ;_;
    
16. 05:02:691 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just two things to clean this a bit up: 1. 05:03:013 (1,1) - Align the slider with the other 4 minisliders and 2. 05:03:549 (1) - Make this a circle please.
    Did it in a bit other way
    There's a clear strong cymbal beat at the end, not sure why you have to put a slider for it then.because since you still have to click at this slider it works as a "circle" but oh well i changed it anyways