1. 00:45:977 (1) - Two passiver finisher HS on a backslider sound bad idk. Maybe claps.
2. 00:47:906 (1,2,3) - Tried putting circles on the tails already? Cause Drumclaps on tails.
3. 00:55:191 (4,5) - Not a nice offbeat slider either, ctrl+g?
4. 00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't think you'll get away with this pattern because of what i already said.
   Easiest solution would be to shift the whole slidersection + greenlines for SV to 00:56:263 -
5. 01:00:977 (6) - This could benefit from a slightly higher SV (1.5x) for that swoosh sound.
   Also lowering the SV on 00:59:691 (1,5) - these slightly would fit the tone of the music too.
6. 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - Irritating spacing as 1/2 1/4 look the same
7. 01:14:263 (3) - Circle + 1/4 slider with high SV (2x)/circle for that swoosh sound starting at 01:14:477 -
   
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8. 01:24:977 (5) - Whistle on head would be neat for the string sound
9. 01:33:120 (4) - Whistle on tail.
10. 02:24:549 (4) - Goes over two beats that are as intensive as the head of the slider, so why not 3 circles?
11. 02:48:549 (6) - I hope that finisher on tail is intended lol. Also you're missing a normalwhistle on head.
12. 03:03:549 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why doubles here cause it doesn't stand for anything in the music (?).
    03:03:656 (2) - should be snapped on the next red tick to follow the leading melody.
13. 03:17:906 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the flow transition here, could be smoother
14. 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - Confusing to play. Even with NC you can't really tell that this is 1/3 snapped - well at least me.
    
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15. 03:39:549 (1,1) - Why are there finishers on these slidertails? ;_;
16. 05:02:691 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just two things to clean this a bit up: 1. 05:03:013 (1,1) - Align the slider with the other 4 minisliders and 2. 05:03:549 (1) - Make this a circle please.
    There's a clear strong cymbal beat at the end, not sure why you have to put a slider for it then.

Pho wrote:

00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - you're certain you don't wanna fix that pattern up? This just doesn't feel right to play at all with all these strong beats on the tails ;-;

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1. 00:45:977 (1) - Two passiver finisher HS on a backslider sound bad idk. Maybe claps.
   i prefer these finishes instead or something else honestly
2. 00:47:906 (1,2,3) - Tried putting circles on the tails already? Cause Drumclaps on tails.
   okay
3. 00:55:191 (4,5) - Not a nice offbeat slider either, ctrl+g?
   okay
4. 00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't think you'll get away with this pattern because of what i already said.
   Easiest solution would be to shift the whole slidersection + greenlines for SV to 00:56:263 -
5. 01:00:977 (6) - This could benefit from a slightly higher SV (1.5x) for that swoosh sound.
   Also lowering the SV on 00:59:691 (1,5) - these slightly would fit the tone of the music too.
   green
6. 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - Irritating spacing as 1/2 1/4 look the same
   green
7. 01:14:263 (3) - Circle + 1/4 slider with high SV (2x)/circle for that swoosh sound starting at 01:14:477 -
   
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   uhh, no i'd keep it as it is because it would be a bit too much, also i don't think that it worth that kind of emphazise
8. 01:24:977 (5) - Whistle on head would be neat for the string sound
9. 01:33:120 (4) - Whistle on tail.
   green for both
10. 02:24:549 (4) - Goes over two beats that are as intensive as the head of the slider, so why not 3 circles?
    not so green because it gives a nice emphazise to background sounds, also i think it's works better even for these strong beats
11. 02:48:549 (6) - I hope that finisher on tail is intended lol. Also you're missing a normalwhistle on head.
12. 03:03:549 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why doubles here cause it doesn't stand for anything in the music (?).
    well, since previous part full of 1/4s and this part is a build-up i wanted to make it different, i don't think that these doubles is a big problem to play them because of synth sounds
    03:03:656 (2) - should be snapped on the next red tick to follow the leading melody.
13. 03:17:906 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the flow transition here, could be smoother
    okie
14. 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - Confusing to play. Even with NC you can't really tell that this is 1/3 snapped - well at least me.
    
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15. 03:39:549 (1,1) - Why are there finishers on these slidertails? ;_;
    
16. 05:02:691 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just two things to clean this a bit up: 1. 05:03:013 (1,1) - Align the slider with the other 4 minisliders and 2. 05:03:549 (1) - Make this a circle please.
    Did it in a bit other way
    There's a clear strong cymbal beat at the end, not sure why you have to put a slider for it then.because since you still have to click at this slider it works as a "circle" but oh well i changed it anyways