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Now it's irre's turn thank you!Mako Sakata wrote:
Hello elvis, take it easy~
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- 03:54:977 - Duplicate inherited point
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- 00:56:477 - until 01:08:263 - I think you can raise the volume there a bit, so player not lost feedback on what the clicked, the curent kinda too quite imo
okie- 02:10:191 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - How about nerf down the jumps a bit lower there? yes it's fit with the barking sound, but I think those jumps sequences kinda overdone
eeeh, no i think it's really fits to these sounds so i'd keep it as it is- 02:16:834 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda hard to follow imo, especially the movement from (2) to (3), yet I think based on the music there's no such of indicates to do a big jump there. Something like 02:23:692 (1,2,3,4) - is more apropriate to play imo
changed it a bit- 02:42:334 (1) - How about delete Additions soft there? the normal whistle way more fit there imo
welp, i'd like to keep them because it'll be too much whistles- 02:48:334 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not really that comfortable with that soft claps there
okie- 02:58:406 (3) - The clap better on head
too much claps in a row, plus it'll ruin my hitsound pattern- 02:54:549 - Use normal whistle sound there, can emphsized more the music imo
- 02:55:191 - That normal clap better be on here 02:55:406 -
not accepted these two suggestions as well due the same reason- 03:12:120 (2) - I think you can use 1/2 slider there then add a circle here 03:12:441 - instead extend the slider, because that blue tick is worth to be clicked imo
green- 03:34:834 (2,3,4) - About that one and this one 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - kinda make me confused when play, because you seems use same pattern and placement with diffrent rhythm (1/2 and 1/3)
- 03:50:691 (1,2) - Tbh how the stream began kinda not comfortable there, I think instead doing like the current, you can extend (1) to end on blue tick here 03:51:441 - then delete (2), it's easier to hit the next stream sequences imo, something like http://puu.sh/k1Mmq/0f6024e3fd.jpg
- 03:53:691 (1) - I really not sure about the placement on that one, because I barely see the reverse arrow on it, yet I think you can do flip ctrl+h there, something like http://puu.sh/k1MoO/92a67a3d32.jpg
- 04:00:120 (1,2) - Imo the movement weird, because the rhythm is not like 03:59:049 (3,4) - . Maybe you can try to extend (1) to end on blue tick like this http://puu.sh/k1NUj/f19d8210e5.jpg
changed it in a bit other way- 04:01:727 (1) - Delete that? it doesn't represent anything imo, then nc next note
there is sounds in background and it goes well with rhythm pattern happy made so no changes here- 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) - NC? sv change noticeable and the spacing kinda too far and to sudden imo hard to follow
okie- 04:06:549 (5) - Why no sv change there? like the previous 04:03:120 (7) - 04:04:835 (6) -
as i can see it goes at the same sv values from here, so it's a way how heppy represented a buildup here so i'd keep it- 04:11:906 (1) - Delete that? because red tick seems empty imo, furthermore the movement (4) to (1) kinda not comfortable, you can insert circle here instead 04:12:120 -
there is some sounds morevoer it's about rhythm patterns again, so no- 04:18:763 (13) - Kinda overmap imo, I don't really hear anything on yellow tick, maybe change into 1/4 slider instead might good
welp, okay- 04:18:977 (1,2) - On that stream up to 25 combos, I think you can cut the combo and make a new combo here 04:20:263 -
and here- 04:40:191 (7) - Change into 1/2 slider instead? the reverse kinda odd imo
- 04:57:120 (3) - Maybe move that to x:256 y:344? the movement from (2) to (3) somewhat odd
dunno, it seemd fine for me, it's a bit uncommon tho but i don't think that it's that weird to play- 04:48:763 (7) - Following the electronic sound, how about lowering the sv there? then you can a bit nerf down the jump here 04:48:763 (7,1) -
- 04:52:513 (8,9,10) - How about flip them upward? so the overall movement less weird
i'd like to keep it because... well i just like it- 05:00:120 - I still have some doubt on last part;;
i think that it goes well with music
I still have some doubt on some parts, but other than that looks god enough, hope it help
http://puu.sh/k24kh/cc949f4c11.txtMako Sakata wrote:
[*]03:34:834 (2,3,4) - About that one and this one 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - kinda make me confused when play, because you seems use same pattern and placement with diffrent rhythm (1/2 and 1/3) It's well indicated by the music here, also the spacing between them (timing wise) is enough imo.
[*]03:50:691 (1,2) - Tbh how the stream began kinda not comfortable there, I think instead doing like the current, you can extend (1) to end on blue tick here 03:51:441 - then delete (2), it's easier to hit the next stream sequences imo, something like http://puu.sh/k1Mmq/0f6024e3fd.jpg Uh.. no, I think it plays better with 2
[*]03:53:691 (1) - I really not sure about the placement on that one, because I barely see the reverse arrow on it, yet I think you can do flip ctrl+h there, something like http://puu.sh/k1MoO/92a67a3d32.jpg ok
Pho wrote:
00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - you're certain you don't wanna fix that pattern up? This just doesn't feel right to play at all with all these strong beats on the tails ;-;
EDIT: a bit more stuff
[Collab]
- 00:45:977 (1) - Two passiver finisher HS on a backslider sound bad idk. Maybe claps.
i prefer these finishes instead or something else honestly- 00:47:906 (1,2,3) - Tried putting circles on the tails already? Cause Drumclaps on tails.
okay- 00:55:191 (4,5) - Not a nice offbeat slider either, ctrl+g?
okay- 00:56:477 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't think you'll get away with this pattern because of what i already said.
Easiest solution would be to shift the whole slidersection + greenlines for SV to 00:56:263 -- 01:00:977 (6) - This could benefit from a slightly higher SV (1.5x) for that swoosh sound.
Also lowering the SV on 00:59:691 (1,5) - these slightly would fit the tone of the music too.
green- 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - Irritating spacing as 1/2 1/4 look the same
green- 01:14:263 (3) - Circle + 1/4 slider with high SV (2x)/circle for that swoosh sound starting at 01:14:477 -
uhh, no i'd keep it as it is because it would be a bit too much, also i don't think that it worth that kind of emphazise- 01:24:977 (5) - Whistle on head would be neat for the string sound
- 01:33:120 (4) - Whistle on tail.
green for both- 02:24:549 (4) - Goes over two beats that are as intensive as the head of the slider, so why not 3 circles?
not so green because it gives a nice emphazise to background sounds, also i think it's works better even for these strong beats- 02:48:549 (6) - I hope that finisher on tail is intended lol. Also you're missing a normalwhistle on head.
- 03:03:549 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure why doubles here cause it doesn't stand for anything in the music (?).
well, since previous part full of 1/4s and this part is a build-up i wanted to make it different, i don't think that these doubles is a big problem to play them because of synth sounds
03:03:656 (2) - should be snapped on the next red tick to follow the leading melody.- 03:17:906 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the flow transition here, could be smoother
okie- 03:35:691 (1,2,3,1) - Confusing to play. Even with NC you can't really tell that this is 1/3 snapped - well at least me.
- 03:39:549 (1,1) - Why are there finishers on these slidertails? ;_;
- 05:02:691 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Just two things to clean this a bit up: 1. 05:03:013 (1,1) - Align the slider with the other 4 minisliders and 2. 05:03:549 (1) - Make this a circle please.
Did it in a bit other way
There's a clear strong cymbal beat at the end, not sure why you have to put a slider for it then.because since you still have to click at this slider it works as a "circle" but oh well i changed it anyways