Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- · forum

Sidetail

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-14T03:52:42+00:00

GabCM wrote:
Well, as requested in my modding queue, here I come!

[General]
Very nice storyboard! It could've been the official music video with some touch-ups at this point. Thank you!

[Bravery]
It seems I don't have enough experience to enjoy Insane/Extra maps just yet. I should remove those difficulties from my modding queue for the time being. Anyway, my modding will be mostly based on what I've seen from an automatic play. I'm sorry if it doesn't meet your expectations.

00:46:657 (4) - It looks mispositionned compared to the slider right before. Actually remapped this area haha
01:22:282 (3,5) - I would prehaps place those two a bit higher, and in a more symmetrical manner. Slightly moved up with rest of it
02:11:220 (1) - Once again, that circle looks like it could hinder a chance to gain more points from that spinner ??.

Whew! That was my first time modding. As I've already said, my Bravery map modding probably isn't that good. I hope I helped you at all! Good luck!

~~Thanks a lot GabCM!! Will comeback to it to apply the mod later on!~~ APPLYED!!

Synpoo

616 posts

Joined August 2013

Synpoo 2015-08-15T01:59:33+00:00

Hi, as requested from my queue.

[Easy]

00:09:720 (3,4) - consider moving to (330:162) and (394:262) to improve flow slightly (it also forms a cute ass triangle)
00:19:470 (4) - this could use a curve as the flow into the next slider feels really forced
00:37:095 (1) - rather have this as 1/1 + note to emphasize the really strong beat with a click, plays much better
00:40:095 (3) - really not a fan of this repeat, you miss the start of the next measure here. Consider this:
01:13:095 (5) - NC
01:23:220 (1) - delete clap
01:28:470 (4) - better as a 1/1 + note again, you miss the snare in the middle white tick and this ends on a strong beat

[Manul's Normal]
The spread from Easy -> this -> Hard is a bit bad imo, it would be better if this diff were 2.2+ star rating
Consider ar5 and od5 if you increase the difficulty of this

00:57:532 - add a note, this rhythm is the same 00:59:970 (2,3) -
01:16:470 (1,2) - blanket is a bit poor

[FreeSongs' Hard]

00:20:032 (9,10) - quite overmapped for a hard, there's not even really anything to map on the red tick, there's actually a pretty distinct pause in the music here (which can be used to emphasize the start of the next measure instead of this triple)
00:37:095 (3) - add clap on head, remove from tail
01:36:532 (1) - this looks...so much better as a regular curve

[Gaia's Insane]

01:28:845 (6) - how come this is snapped to 1/8 when it's clearly a 1/4 rhythm here?

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:12:720 (1,2) - rhythm here is wrong, it goes like this (do what you want with it)
00:36:860 (1) - this doesn't start until the red tick
01:00:907 (1) - you miss a strong white tick with this 1/1, i recommend this rhythm
01:27:532 (6,7) - remove finishes
01:28:095 (7,3) - - add clap
01:29:220 (5) - add finish
01:39:157 (7) - overmapped, there's nothing on the blue tick, leave this as a 1/2 or two notes
02:02:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - random 0.1 changes in spacing throughout this stream, keep it equal

[Bravery]

00:37:282 (2,3,4,5,1) - rearrange this pattern so that 5 lands on 1, there really shouldn't be any movement here. Alternatively, make 5 a 3/4 slider with increase velocity
00:40:844 (5,6,7) - interesting that you decided to make this a triple but you didn't place a note at 00:42:626
00:54:063 (4) - delete this, it sounds wrong and there's nothing on the blue tick
01:23:220 (1,3,1,3,1) - these finishes are not necessary
01:26:595 (2,3,4) - rhythm is incorrect, it's like this:
01:31:470 (5,6,7,8) - give these more spacing or a more distinct pattern since there's actual vocals that represent these compared to 01:30:720 (1,2,3,4) -
01:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty large spacing/lots of movement and high density for such a calm, slow part imo

GL with this nice set!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-15T02:45:30+00:00

Synpoo wrote:
Hi, as requested from my queue.

[Easy]
00:09:720 (3,4) - consider moving to (330:162) and (394:262) to improve flow slightly (it also forms a cute ass triangle) LOL oh yes!
00:19:470 (4) - this could use a curve as the flow into the next slider feels really forced Bent it!
00:37:095 (1) - rather have this as 1/1 + note to emphasize the really strong beat with a click, plays much better Appled
00:40:095 (3) - really not a fan of this repeat, you miss the start of the next measure here. Consider this:
Applied
01:13:095 (5) - NC Applied
01:23:220 (1) - delete clap Applied!
01:28:470 (4) - better as a 1/1 + note again, you miss the snare in the middle white tick and this ends on a strong beat Applied
[Bravery]
00:37:282 (2,3,4,5,1) - rearrange this pattern so that 5 lands on 1, there really shouldn't be any movement here. Alternatively, make 5 a 3/4 slider with increase velocity Changed to 3/4 slider!
00:40:844 (5,6,7) - interesting that you decided to make this a triple but you didn't place a note at 00:42:626 Fixed!
00:54:063 (4) - delete this, it sounds wrong and there's nothing on the blue tick Fixed!
01:23:220 (1,3,1,3,1) - these finishes are not necessary Fixed!
01:26:595 (2,3,4) - rhythm is incorrect, it's like this: Fixed!
01:31:470 (5,6,7,8) - give these more spacing or a more distinct pattern since there's actual vocals that represent these compared to 01:30:720 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed!
01:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty large spacing/lots of movement and high density for such a calm, slow part imo Scaled down!

GL with this nice set!

Thank you Synpoo!!!

IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-15T06:39:07+00:00

Hi, as requested to throw my two cents here.
The artist herself has different expressions on her romanised name, so take it easy.

from http://www.mami-kawada.jp/disco_single_02.php

As this song has quite a number of ranked versions already, so staying consistent with them would be my suggestion.

VTC

767 posts

Joined October 2010

VTC 2015-08-16T11:19:11+00:00

안녕하세요 한국분 맞으시죠? 한국어로 모딩 드리겠습니다.

부탁해주신 두개난이도만 모딩하겠습니다

Just suggestion
Unrankable
Should be fixed

[General].[/color]
별다른 문제는 없네요

[Manul's Normal]
00:01:470 (1) - 보컬을 따랐다고는 하지만 너무 안어울리는 슬라이더입니다 지워주시고 1/1 슬라이더를 00:01:470 - ~ 00:01:845 - 여기까지 추가해주세요

00:02:220 (2,3) - 너무 가깝습니다 리듬에 있어서, 긴 텀이 존재하는데 이 슬라이더는 x1.0 디스턴스의 간격을 보이네요 이 두슬라이더 의 디스턴스를 조절해주세요

00:05:220 (1) - 여전히 1/2 슬라이더는 어울리지않습니다 특히 이부분에서는 보컬도,신디음도 따르지않고있어요 혼자 따로노는 슬라이더입니다 'Normal' 난이도에서 1/2 박자를 사용하실땐 언제나 그곳에 그 박자와 어울리는 소리가 존재해야함을 잊지마세요.

00:07:845 - 서클 추가해주세요 보컬이 시작되는부분인데 서클은 없네요

00:08:970 (3,4) - 마찬가지로 1/2박자가 들어갈 곳이 아닙니다. 1/1 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요 전부

00:11:220 (1,1) - 'Normal' 난이도에서는 슬라이더를 돌리는 도중 다음 노트가 보이면 안됩니다 이것은 'Easy' 난이도도 마찬가지입니다

00:14:970 (1) - ^

00:17:970 (2,3) - ^
이렇게 자꾸 1/2 슬라이더 지적하는 부분에는 1/2 슬라이더가 들어갈 소리가 없습니다 유의해주세요 아래는 전부 1/2 슬라이더가 필요없는곳입니다.

SPOILER

00:21:720 (4,5) -
00:27:720 (3,4) -
00:30:720 (3,4) -
00:34:470 (5) -
00:35:970 (3,2,3) -
00:51:720 (3,4) -
01:17:970 (3,4) -
01:20:970 (2) -
01:22:845 (4) -
01:24:720 (3,4) -
01:29:970 (3) -
01:34:470 (5) -
01:35:970 (2,3) -
01:39:157 (2) -
01:44:970 (1) -
01:48:720 (3) -
01:51:720 (4,5) -
01:54:720 (3,4) -
01:59:970 (2,3) - ^

00:23:220 (1,2) - 좀더 완벽한 블랭킷이 되도록 해보세요

00:42:532 - 서클 추가해주세요

00:50:970 (2) - 그리드 레벨 4 기준으로 한칸만 올려주세요

00:52:470 (4) - 이슬라이더 지우시고 똑같은 간격의 1/1 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요

00:53:032 - 위의것을 따르신 다음 여기다가 서클추가

00:55:282 (4) - 보컬을 무시해버리는 슬라이더입니다 보컬따라주세요

01:06:720 (3) - 이것도 그리드 레벨 4 기준으로 한칸만 올려주세요

01:07:470 (4) - 이슬라이더는 한칸만 오른쪽으로 옮겨주세요

01:14:032 - 서클추가해주세요

01:14:220 (1,1) - 'Normal' 난이도에서는 슬라이더를 돌리는 도중 다음 노트가 보이면 안됩니다 이것은 'Easy' 난이도도 마찬가지입니다

01:16:470 (1) - 정작 1/2박자가 필요한부분에는 안쓰셨네요 슬라이더 시작은 01:16:470 - 여기 끝은 01:16:657 - 여기 01:16:845 - 그리고 여기다가 서클추가 해주세요

01:19:470 (5,1) - 모양이 서로 이쁘지않아요 01:19:470 (5) - 이슬라이더를 복사해서 사용해주세요 사소한 블랭킷도 신경써주시길 바랍니다.

이렇게요

01:22:845 (4) - 어울리지않습니다 이상할정도예요. 지워주시고 01:22:845 - 여기다가 서클하나만 놔주세요

01:33:345 - 서클추가해주세요

01:40:845 - 슬라이더 추가해주세요

try this

01:41:220 (1,1) - 'Normal' 난이도에서는 슬라이더를 돌리는 도중 다음 노트가 보이면 안됩니다 이것은 'Easy' 난이도도 마찬가지입니다

01:56:970 (2,4) - 보기안좋게 겹쳐있습니다 풀어주세요

01:57:345 (3,1) - 블랭킷 많이 어긋나있습니다 이런 구도라면 블랭킷 신경써주세요

02:02:220 (1,2) - 1/2박자가 들어갈곳이 아닙니다. 박자 수정해주세요

02:05:220 (1,1) - 서클 지우시고 그냥 서클 위치에다가 스피너 시작해주세요. 노멀난이도에서 추천드리고싶지않습니다.

모딩을 전부 하고나서 겟난주신분이 외국인이라는걸 깨달았네요. 죄송합니다 겟난주인분께 잘 말씀해주세요.

[Bravery]

00:07:470 (3,4) - 어울리지않는다고 해야할까 보기이상한 패턴입니다

시도해 보세요

00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - 너무 서클이 응집해있습니다. 1,2,3,4 는 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요.

00:10:657 (6) - 왜 여기 1/2 리피트 슬라이더가 들어갔죠 전혀 어울리지 않습니다 다 서클로 바꿔주세요

00:11:782 (3) - 좀더 완벽한 S자가 되도록 해보세요

00:12:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 확실한 오버매핑입니다

00:40:844 (5,6,7) - 어울리지 않습니다. 1/2 슬라이더랑 서클하나로 바꿔주세요

00:52:845 (5,6) - 마찬가지로 1/4 박자가 어울리지 않습니다 1/1 서클 하나만 놓아주세요

01:23:032 - 서클 하나 추가해주세요

01:23:783 (3) - Ctrl + G 사용하시면 좀더 재미있을수도 있겠네요

01:36:720 (1) - 전의 노트와 너무 가깝습니다 고쳐주세요

01:38:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 오버매핑입니다.

02:02:970 (1,2,3,4) - 좀더 둥글게 연타동선을 수정해보세요

02:03:720 (7,1) - 너무 가깝습니다 1을 저멀리 둬야 할거같아요.

02:11:220 (1,1) - 서클 지우시고 그냥 서클자리에서부터 스피너 시작해주세요

아직 랭크될 준비가 안된거같아요 맵퀄리티에 좀더 신경을 써주시고 다른 랭크맵을 보면서 점프패턴이나 연타동선을 공부하시는것이 좋아보입니다.

그냥 제 의견이예요 ~

화이팅!

Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2015-08-16T11:56:28+00:00

Hello! I guess this mod is from my queue ...

[Easy]

00:29:220 (1) - I don't think claps is suitable for this slider head
00:30:720 - Remove clap and finish here, also remove clap on 00:31:095 - . They sounded over-hitsounded for me
00:34:470 - With the same reason as above, remove clap
00:35:970 (6) - Movement from this slider to this slider 00:37:095 (7) - might be kinda harsh for this diff . Maybe try to use a curve slider and direct it to next slider here 00:37:095 (7) - , like this
SPOILER
00:59:220 - I would like to see this downbeat appears as a clickable note . Rearrange this slider 00:58:845 (1) - to a simple 1/1 pattern like this
SPOILER
01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Combo here is a bit strange with the previous . How about try my suggestions over here : 01:26:220 (6,1) - Swap new combo and also do it here too 01:29:220 (5,1) - , to match it with the rhythm precisely
01:34:470 (1,2) - Well, you don't need to add a new combo here 01:34:470 - because this slider is more capable to have it 01:35:220 (2) -
02:05:407 (1,1) - I feel a bit aware for those spinners . I think beginners can't catch "1000" points from they, actually . I tried to spin like them, and just got 300 without score

[Manul's Normal]

00:01:470 (1) - Use 1/2 rhythm as a starter might be kinda too sudden here, although they're following the vocal here . I would rather to play them as a 1/1 slider, or delete them
00:03:720 (3) - Fix spacing
00:18:720 (3) - Harsh transition from here to 00:19:470 (4) - for me . It has less indication to 00:19:470 (4) - . I suggest you to change the slider direction to other direction, except on the right side . Play it as a straight slider to upper side is fine too
00:28:470 (4) - Goes same here, try not to direct it to the left side
00:41:220 (1) - This slider shouldn't start here, honestly . it must be started out here 00:41:032 - , to emphasis the long sound at here . If you're intend to follow my suggestion, make sure you keep it ends on the same place, 00:41:595 -
00:52:470 (4) - Same as fourth point (You overdid it, if you're intended to fix it, try to realize it yourself)
00:57:532 - Keep it emptied isn't not a good idea here . You haven't tried to empty it beforehand, because there's a same beat that appears every measure in entire sequences and should be capable to emphasized . I strongly recommend you to keep the pattern consistent with 00:45:532 (3) - and 00:48:532 (3) - , to provide a nice rhythm towards the song
01:01:095 - It should be emphasized for me . Try to make it map it by a clickable or non-clickable object here, because the beat is sound rather loud
01:13:470 (4) - End this slider at 01:13:845 - . The current end isn't match perfectly with the song here, because the vocal is rather loud here 01:13:845 - for being emphasized than 01:13:751 -
01:47:970 (2,4) - Nazi, overlap looks bad for me, they looks untidy, try to avoid it

[FreeSongs' Hard]

00:36:907 (1,2,3) - It should be 1/8 snap . Use 1/8 slider to replace them is a nice way to go (it's okay to keep them if you don't want make it more complicated)
00:46:845 (4,1) - Stack 3/4 pattern isn't really a good choice for me . I'd rather to make it spaced like this 00:49:845 (4,1) - so that players could easily notice it
01:17:032 (1,1) - They should be 1/8 too . You can see the reason above why I mention this point
01:32:220 (1,2) - Same as 2nd point
01:53:126 - Beat that appears on this section should be filled too, because the rhythm still connected each others from 01:52:845 (9,10,11) - , so leave it emptied sounded somehow strange
02:05:126 - Start on this, it should be 1/8 snap . See the same reason above

[Gaia's Insane]

00:03:532 (1) - Shouldn't jump appears on this for more better accentuation?
00:14:032 (8) - Let this slider snapped 1/8 is fine because this is an Insane, so please consider it
00:25:657 (2,3,4) - I don't feel right about this anti-jump . I guess you still can make a jumpy flow here, because the things still need more accentuation
01:17:032 (3) - Same as 2nd point
01:26:220 (1) - I think you need some movement to this slider for more better accentuation . It appears has the more louder vocal than the vocal here 01:21:532 -

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:20:595 (2) - Looks more better if you could unify the blanket here . It goes same for here 00:21:532 (6) -
01:17:220 (3) - I think you need new combo here, as beat is loud at start out new stanza
01:20:032 (4) - The jump is too much for beat here, as it sound doesn't even strong at all to be placed by a jump like this . Consider to reduce the spacing a bit, maybe try to place it on 324|316
01:34:845 (6) - Missing clap here
02:10:938 (8) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, please delete the circle . If you're intended to place that long sound with this, you need to fill 02:11:126 - , but it sounded more better if you could delete that (8)

[Bravery]

00:22:845 - I would like to see this appears as a clickable object here, for more better accentuation and keep your rhythm consistent in entire sequences here 00:16:845 (6) - , 00:19:845 -
00:38:782 - Whistle here feels really out of place for me, better to remove it
01:12:907 (2) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, better to remove this circle

[]
I feel like the mapset rhythmical pattern is good . All I can say is just try to improve the flow both on Bravery and Suzuno's
Good Luck!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-17T19:14:31+00:00

VocaloidTACU wrote:
안녕하세요 한국분 맞으시죠? 한국어로 모딩 드리겠습니다.

Just suggestion
Unrankable
Should be fixed

[General].[/color]
별다른 문제는 없네요 네

[Bravery]

00:07:470 (3,4) - 어울리지않는다고 해야할까 보기이상한 패턴입니다
시도해 보세요

00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - 너무 서클이 응집해있습니다. 1,2,3,4 는 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요. ㄴㄴ 이게 바꾼거에요. BN이 슬라는 맞지안다고 앴어요.

00:10:657 (6) - 왜 여기 1/2 리피트 슬라이더가 들어갔죠 전혀 어울리지 않습니다 다 서클로 바꿔주세요 보컬이랑 잘 맞습니다

00:11:782 (3) - 좀더 완벽한 S자가 되도록 해보세요 조금 움직였는데, 별로 차이가 없는듯 ;

00:12:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 확실한 오버매핑입니다 아니에요 ;; 가이야 인샌도 이랬는데, 괜찮은거였어요

00:40:844 (5,6,7) - 어울리지 않습니다. 1/2 슬라이더랑 서클하나로 바꿔주세요 저게 더 나은거 같은데;;

00:52:845 (5,6) - 마찬가지로 1/4 박자가 어울리지 않습니다 1/1 서클 하나만 놓아주세요 음...

01:23:032 - 서클 하나 추가해주세요 거기에 아무것도없어요 ;;

01:23:783 (3) - Ctrl + G 사용하시면 좀더 재미있을수도 있겠네요 바로 전에꺼랑 비슷하게 하는게 좋다고 생각하네요. 그리고 CTRL+G를 하면 거리가 또 망가져요

01:36:720 (1) - 전의 노트와 너무 가깝습니다 고쳐주세요 아니에요, 전에꺼는 1.18X 거리이고, 다음껀 1.19X 이에요.

01:38:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 오버매핑입니다. 아니에요

02:02:970 (1,2,3,4) - 좀더 둥글게 연타동선을 수정해보세요 고쳤습니다

02:03:720 (7,1) - 너무 가깝습니다 1을 저멀리 둬야 할거같아요. 스택했어요

02:11:220 (1,1) - 서클 지우시고 그냥 서클자리에서부터 스피너 시작해주세요 여기에 큰 마지막 노트가 그거인데;;

아직 랭크될 준비가 안된거같아요 맵퀄리티에 좀더 신경을 써주시고 다른 랭크맵을 보면서 점프패턴이나 연타동선을 공부하시는것이 좋아보입니다.

그냥 제 의견이예요 ~

화이팅! 모딩 감사합니다!

Ipas wrote:
Hello! I guess this mod is from my queue ...

[Easy]
00:29:220 (1) - I don't think claps is suitable for this slider head I actually changed other HS quite a bit
00:30:720 - Remove clap and finish here, also remove clap on 00:31:095 - . They sounded over-hitsounded for me^
00:34:470 - With the same reason as above, remove clap ^
00:35:970 (6) - Movement from this slider to this slider 00:37:095 (7) - might be kinda harsh for this diff . Maybe try to use a curve slider and direct it to next slider here 00:37:095 (7) - , like this Fixed
SPOILER
00:59:220 - I would like to see this downbeat appears as a clickable note . Rearrange this slider 00:58:845 (1) - to a simple 1/1 pattern like this Fixed, thanks!
SPOILER
01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Combo here is a bit strange with the previous . How about try my suggestions over here : 01:26:220 (6,1) - Swap new combo and also do it here too 01:29:220 (5,1) - , to match it with the rhythm precisely Fixed!
01:34:470 (1,2) - Well, you don't need to add a new combo here 01:34:470 - because this slider is more capable to have it 01:35:220 (2) - Fixed!
02:05:407 (1,1) - I feel a bit aware for those spinners . I think beginners can't catch "1000" points from they, actually . I tried to spin like them, and just got 300 without score I think those are long enough :/

[Bravery]
00:22:845 - I would like to see this appears as a clickable object here, for more better accentuation and keep your rhythm consistent in entire sequences here 00:16:845 (6) - , 00:19:845 - Fixed!
00:38:782 - Whistle here feels really out of place for me, better to remove it Thanks!
01:12:907 (2) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, better to remove this circle Fixed
[]
I feel like the mapset rhythmical pattern is good . All I can say is just try to improve the flow both on Bravery and Suzuno's
Good Luck! Thank you!

Nitrousdragon

353 posts

Joined July 2014

Nitrousdragon 2015-08-19T19:24:37+00:00

random mod ^_^

[Bravery]
Only one suggestion (dunno why, I got here too late I guess

)
00:49:563 (4,5) - Make this triple smoother.

I can't catch anything else, plus I want you to lengthen the spacing between some of the triples and the streams.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-08-19T20:33:41+00:00

Hello! You said to me to check the mapset.Well I testplayed it and here's my opinion:
The set looks fine but I think it will much better if you will find more mods for Suzuno's Insane and Bravery diff to polish the set much better.
Also,on 00:14:220- and on 00:38:220- on Gaia's Insane I found duplicate green lines

no kds for this post.Good Luck!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-20T00:48:15+00:00

Nitrousdragon wrote:
random mod ^_^

[Bravery]
Only one suggestion (dunno why, I got here too late I guess )
00:49:563 (4,5) - Make this triple smoother.

I can't catch anything else, plus I want you to lengthen the spacing between some of the triples and the streams.

I'll see about that! I am currently reinstalling Windows 8 haha. Thanks for tiny mod and star!

ByBy13 wrote:
Hello! You said to me to check the mapset.Well I testplayed it and here's my opinion:
The set looks fine but I think it will much better if you will find more mods for Suzuno's Insane and Bravery diff to polish the set much better.
Also,on 00:14:220- and on 00:38:220- on Gaia's Insane I found duplicate green lines

no kds for this post.Good Luck!

All right! Thank you for taking a look at my map!!

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2015-08-21T11:22:33+00:00

sorry for late mod college stuff outta nowhere

[General]

AiMod: Nothing out of ordinary
Folder: Clean
BPM/Offset: Sounds good.
Other: Nothing else c:

[Easy]

00:28:095 (3,1) - Not sure on the chemistry in regards to these notes, the curved slider also progresses with little regard for slider flow, (for example: http://puu.sh/jJbov/11593162b9.jpg ).

00:44:970 (2) - I would bring this to (x:424 y:116) for better flow.

01:06:720 (3) - I believe it would be better if clear anchor points were put like this:

Slider

01:47:220 (1) - This slider is a little uneven in regards to curves, I would try this:

Slider

[Manul's Normal]

00:02:220 (2,3) - I wouldn't put a gap of this length paired with an anti-jump like this, newer players will have trouble reading this.

00:38:970 (2) - I would curve this the other way so it flows nicer and looks better when coupled with the upcoming slider.

01:12:720 (3,4) - I would move these to the left until slider 3 is in line with the previous slider.

01:17:220 (2) - I would consider a NC here since the music 'bursts' into the chorus.

01:39:720 (3,4) - I would have these the same slider for consistency.

Sliders

01:57:720 (4,5) - these sliders aren't parallel. I think they'd be better if they were.

01:58:470 (5,1) - Perhaps a blanket here for nicer looks?

[FreeSong's Hard]

Honestly, nothing outstanding to bring up for a mod. Nice map c:

[Gaia's Insane]

00:25:470 (1,2,3) - Progressing from quick sliders into slow anti-jumps is a little jarring even for insane, I would maybe make the notes further apart.

00:40:845 (5,6,1) - I would make these notes to the left more, so the triangle is more of an equilateral.

02:06:907 (1,2,3) - I would keep spacing consistent here.

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:26:220 (1,2) - I would curve slider 2 more to make for a better consistent blanket

00:30:157 (4,6) - The slider curves too much in the middle to warrant a good blanket, I would curve the slider less.

01:05:220 (1,2) - I don't think having the slider on a red tick is too good with regards to how the vocals play here.

01:06:720 - You skip a big white tick, and their is a clearly audiable note

01:35:220 (1) - NC here and remove NC at 01:35:970 and have a NC 01:37:470

[Bravery]

00:17:595 (2,3) - I would make these sliders the same to fit the music better and add to consistency.

I dont know what else, because I don't wanna suggest stuff I don't understand the mapping of because of the difficulty haha

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-21T20:03:14+00:00

[ Space ] wrote:
sorry for late mod college stuff outta nowhere

[General]

AiMod: Nothing out of ordinary c: c: c: c: c:
Folder: Clean c: c: c: c: c:
BPM/Offset: Sounds good. c: c: c: c: c:
Other: Nothing else c: c: c: c: c: c:

[Easy]

00:28:095 (3,1) - Not sure on the chemistry in regards to these notes, the curved slider also progresses with little regard for slider flow, (for example: http://puu.sh/jJbov/11593162b9.jpg ). Current seems better!

00:44:970 (2) - I would bring this to (x:424 y:116) for better flow. FIXED

01:06:720 (3) - I believe it would be better if clear anchor points were put like this: FIXED

Slider

01:47:220 (1) - This slider is a little uneven in regards to curves, I would try this: FIXED

Slider

[Bravery]

00:17:595 (2,3) - I would make these sliders the same to fit the music better and add to consistency. ???

I dont know what else, because I don't wanna suggest stuff I don't understand the mapping of because of the difficulty haha

~~Thanks for mod! I'll apply soon!!~~ APPLIED!!!!!

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-08-24T01:37:24+00:00

Sorry for the long delay nwn

Karia wrote:
FreeSongs' Hard
00:11:782 (3,1) - A bit hard to catch this 1/1 rhythm. Just one 1/1 slider is better imo.. it should be ok imo qwq
00:14:782 - add a note. It's better in-playing Since this beat 00:14:407 - has been ignored, ignoring 00:14:782 - feels fine when playing imo
00:26:782 (3,4) - swap the rhythm I feel this beat 00:26:970 - is stronger
00:31:095 (7) - change to 1/2 slider fixed!!
00:54:720 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - unsuitable jump in Hard diff I think the jump is fine. If others say the same, I will definitely change it
01:04:657 (6) - change to circle + 1/2 slider I'm not following the drum here
01:05:220 (1,2) - weird rhythm. slider - circle is better ^
01:15:157 (2) - Delete the finish fixed!
01:32:220 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better in Hard diff changed into 1/1 slider
01:34:845 (4) - 1/2 is better cuz of vocal feel like the vocal is 1/4 qaq
01:41:032 (4) - Delete a note? You don't follow the vocal 01:40:282 (2,3) - here, so this note is needless imo deleted!
01:46:845 (7) - This also 1/2 is better I think 3/4 sliders fit here better
01:51:345 (4) - 1/2 slider + circle ^

Ipas wrote:
[FreeSongs' Hard]
00:36:907 (1,2,3) - It should be 1/8 snap . Use 1/8 slider to replace them is a nice way to go (it's okay to keep them if you don't want make it more complicated) yea, I want to keep them for simplifying the rhythm
00:46:845 (4,1) - Stack 3/4 pattern isn't really a good choice for me . I'd rather to make it spaced like this 00:49:845 (4,1) - so that players could easily notice it fixed
01:17:032 (1,1) - They should be 1/8 too . You can see the reason above why I mention this point ^
01:32:220 (1,2) - Same as 2nd point fixed!
01:53:126 - Beat that appears on this section should be filled too, because the rhythm still connected each others from 01:52:845 (9,10,11) - , so leave it emptied sounded somehow strange fixed!
02:05:126 - Start on this, it should be 1/8 snap . See the same reason above ^

Synpoo wrote:
[FreeSongs' Hard]
00:20:032 (9,10) - quite overmapped for a hard, there's not even really anything to map on the red tick, there's actually a pretty distinct pause in the music here (which can be used to emphasize the start of the next measure instead of this triple) fixed! (remove the over-mapped triplet)
00:37:095 (3) - add clap on head, remove from tail fixed
01:36:532 (1) - this looks...so much better as a regular curve re-adjusted the shape a little bit

Thanks for the mods!!

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs YellowManul Gaia
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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SliderMultiplier:1.4
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Gaia 2015-08-25T10:10:12+00:00

ty 4 mods

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TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
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Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs YellowManul Gaia
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YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-26T09:57:17+00:00

meow

http://puu.sh/jP2M6/8b044ee964.osu

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-09-01T04:42:03+00:00

All right, I received everyone's up-to-date maps and updated it.

I'll ask few people (preferably who can give honest opinion for each diff) and decide!

Thanks for your work you guys!

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-09-01T22:41:50+00:00

[Bravery]

00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - These circles felt really random to me. The change from 1/2 sliders to 1/2 single tap doesn't really match the song imo. Circles would fit better for mapping vocals such as : 00:09:157 - 00:09:345 - 00:09:532 - etc..
00:11:782 (3) - Could make this 1/2 slider and add a circle on 00:12:157 - for the drum beat.
00:16:845 (6) - No jump for this? Stacking it felt a bit lame imo The drum beat is quite emphasized..
00:29:220 (6) - NC this cuz it's a new measure. Fits your NC pattern better.
00:39:720 (1,2,3) - Linear flow like this generally doesn't play very well because there isn't any angle change so it makes it hard for players to snap.
01:33:157 (3,1) - Put a larger jump here for better emphasis onto 1.

[Gaia's Insane]

00:20:220 (1,2,3) - This flow from 2>3 is quite sharp and doesn't really fit the music since nothing is really emphasized on 3.
00:25:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - Quite misleading imo. Anti-jumps are okay, but then you put a kick slider onto 4 with pretty large spacing. Just plays weird for me.
01:11:032 (5) - You could try putting 5 on 289||15 so it's blanketted by 3. Flow will be less harsh imo because it's not a complete 180 degree motion.
01:24:345 (3) - two circles just fits better here imo lol. Your rhythm choice in the Kiai is surprisingly simple compared to non-kiai sections where you map 3/4 circle jump patterns. It's largely slider spam so far .
01:33:532 (1,2,3,1) - Feels really simple compared to verse sections .
01:38:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Did you hand map this stream? :S It looks really weird, like the stream isn't a nice curve
I scaled it out, yea 3>4>5 is basically linear. idk. i'd remake this stream using ctrl+shift+f
The Kiai felt really underwhelming. Mainly just slider spam with one or two circle jumps, and streams at the end. These streams like 02:02:220 (1,2,3) - are usually preceded by simple 1/2 slider patterns so theres not really any build up going into them through circle jumps etc...

[FreeSong's Hard]

00:15:345 (3,4) - This rhythm felt off for me. Try Ctrl+G'ing it because the music puts emphasis onto 00:15:532 - which is currently completely ignored.
00:32:595 (2,3) - This is quite a big jump onto 3... I don't think 3 is that strong in the music though . The jump is so big it makes 00:33:345 (5,1) - seem less impactful.
01:38:032 (5,1) - I don't think you need to stack them. you can put some spacing from 5>1 too. That way players have some movement going into the sliders instead of pausing before playing them.
01:48:157 (2,3) - I prefer if you stack 3 under 2 so there is some movement from 3>4 to emphasize the note on 4. I liked how 01:45:157 (2,3,4) - played!
01:57:157 (3,1,3) - Watch your slider-end stacking here xP

[Normal]

00:02:220 (2,3) - What is this spacing :S.
00:24:720 (4,5) - This flow is kind of awkward going into 5. Try rotating slider 5 like -60 to -90 degrees.
00:28:470 (4,1) - This flow is also weird on a Normal because players are moving to the right of the screen after playing the repeat on 4... but the slider is on the left, so the flow isn't natural.
00:54:720 (3,1) - Not good imo to stack 1/2 repeat sliders on top of sliders like this It's hard to read. You have so much space, no need to stack and make it hard to read xP.
00:57:532 - Why not map a circle here to keep the rhythm 1/1 and not have a 3/2 gap.
02:04:657 (5,1) - Keep spacing 1.00.

[Easy]

00:39:345 (2,3) - This rhythm felt welrd imo...
Try this rhythm
01:06:720 (3,4,1) - This slider transition doesn't look really nice. especially from 4>1 since the flow doesn't match the shape of the slider .

good luck. finally a map for this song!!1

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-09-02T01:00:14+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Bravery]

00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - These circles felt really random to me. The change from 1/2 sliders to 1/2 single tap doesn't really match the song imo. Circles would fit better for mapping vocals such as : 00:09:157 - 00:09:345 - 00:09:532 - etc.. Fixed
00:11:782 (3) - Could make this 1/2 slider and add a circle on 00:12:157 - for the drum beat. Current one is simpler and fits quite well
00:16:845 (6) - No jump for this? Stacking it felt a bit lame imo The drum beat is quite emphasized.. I made is consistant throughout the map. I like current one
00:29:220 (6) - NC this cuz it's a new measure. Fits your NC pattern better. Oops i forgot after remapping that part
00:39:720 (1,2,3) - Linear flow like this generally doesn't play very well because there isn't any angle change so it makes it hard for players to snap. I changed it a bit
01:33:157 (3,1) - Put a larger jump here for better emphasis onto 1. Slightly moved

[Easy]

00:39:345 (2,3) - This rhythm felt welrd imo... Spamming 1/2 seems boring though, I'll change if another modder points it out
Try this rhythm
01:06:720 (3,4,1) - This slider transition doesn't look really nice. especially from 4>1 since the flow doesn't match the shape of the slider . It doesn't seem to affect hugely on flow as that particular part is calm. The slider shape fits vocal well imo
good luck. finally a map for this song!!1

Thanks a lot!

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-09-03T04:14:09+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[FreeSong's Hard]

00:15:345 (3,4) - This rhythm felt off for me. Try Ctrl+G'ing it because the music puts emphasis onto 00:15:532 - which is currently completely ignored. converted the slider into a 1/2 slider and a circle (It should be better now ;w;)
00:32:595 (2,3) - This is quite a big jump onto 3... I don't think 3 is that strong in the music though . The jump is so big it makes 00:33:345 (5,1) - seem less impactful. nerf the jump a bit
01:38:032 (5,1) - I don't think you need to stack them. you can put some spacing from 5>1 too. That way players have some movement going into the sliders instead of pausing before playing them. sure.
01:48:157 (2,3) - I prefer if you stack 3 under 2 so there is some movement from 3>4 to emphasize the note on 4. I liked how 01:45:157 (2,3,4) - played! I prefer to keep mine for now ;_; (the music here 01:48:345 - actually gives me a feeling of "movement stop")
01:57:157 (3,1,3) - Watch your slider-end stacking here xP Fixed!!

Thanks for your mod!

update!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
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Creator:BetaStar
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212,244,99626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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248,316,100282,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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67,208,104032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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12,136,105157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,136,105344,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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200,152,109470,2,0,B|160:116|160:116|160:60,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,44,109845,2,0,P|60:40|0:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,110407,5,2,0:0:0:0:
40,208,110595,2,0,B|40:248|40:248|16:272|16:316,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,348,110970,2,0,P|92:344|132:348,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,111345,2,0,P|236:344|256:260,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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468,112,112470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,204,112657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,252,113032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,248,113595,2,0,P|196:256|128:240,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,113970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,120,114157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,251,114345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,189,114532,6,0,P|112:186|161:251,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,264,115095,2,0,L|92:120,1,125.999996154785,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,115470,2,0,B|52:96|52:96|-8:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,115845,2,0,B|240:44|240:44|300:56,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,131313,12,0,137220,0:0:0:0:

KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-09-05T01:39:35+00:00

Hello~! As request from my queue

[Bravery]

00:08:220 (1,4) - I don't think this overlap intentional , just don't overlap
00:27:345 (4,2) - how about stack this under slider trail? maybe it looks better
00:29:220 (1,4) - stack
01:18:720 (1,3) - stack circle with slider trail
01:18:532 (5,5) - stack
01:18:345 (4,6) - ^
01:32:032 (8,3) - stack circle with slider trail

[Gaia's Insane]

00:05:782 (2,1) - I don't think this overlap intentional , just don't overlap
00:07:845 (4,2) - ^
00:11:220 (1,3) -^
00:20:595 (2,4) - stack
00:26:782 (3,1) - overlap
00:29:595 (2,4) - stack
00:30:532 (1,2) - I don't this this is intentional too

00:33:157 (5,1) - ^
00:33:532 (1,3) - ^
00:37:282 (2,1) - how about stacking these? o.o
01:02:220 (1,2) - overlap
01:17:220 (1,4) - how about stacking?

Well, That's all

I hope my mod helps you ♥

Sidetail

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-09-05T02:48:14+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~! As request from my queue

[Bravery]

00:08:220 (1,4) - I don't think this overlap intentional , just don't overlap Those were negligible, but fixed.
00:27:345 (4,2) - how about stack this under slider trail? maybe it looks better ???
00:29:220 (1,4) - stack Messes up distance :/
01:18:720 (1,3) - stack circle with slider trail Already stacked ._.
01:18:532 (5,5) - stack Those things will not matter much as they are long away from each other in the song. Also it hurts on distance
01:18:345 (4,6) - ^ Same thing :/
01:32:032 (8,3) - stack circle with slider trail Fixed

I hope my mod helps you ♥

Thanks.

CXu

osu! Alumni

3,558 posts

Joined March 2009

CXu 2015-09-05T12:19:31+00:00

Hi. Leetra asked me to mod your Bravely diff so yeah.

[Bravely]

I'll be suggesting things in the mod, and some of them might not match your mapping style, so feel free to reject them as you see fit.
I'm not a fan of OD7 on insanes. Consider using OD8 or something, since it's kinda dumb to click all over the place and still get 100%
00:03:720 (1,2,3) - Curve (1,3) like this? http://puu.sh/k0BuS.jpg. Makes the flow fairly clear, and leads into the curve of 00:05:220 (1) - as well.
00:09:720 (5) - NC. I think this is like the only place your combo's go over 2 stanzas instead of one.
00:09:157 (4,1,2) - You're missing whistles on all the white ticks here. (You're actually missing quite a few hitsounds here and there, such as finish at 00:20:220 (1) - , clap at 00:22:845 (5) - , finish at 01:35:220 (1) - etc. After going through my mod, you should go through your map and check that every hitsound is where they should be.)
00:15:532 (5) - Move to 216;304? Having it in the middle of the two sliders (3,4) makes the pattern look cleaner. You might need to move the notes after it a bit for spacing, but shouldn't be too hard to do that.
00:21:532 (6) - Maybe move this further down on the playfield? The song doesn't drop in power here, so the lower spacing feels a bit underwhelming to play.
00:28:845 (5,1) - Maybe rearrange the pattern slightly so these don't overlap with 00:28:095 (2) - ?
00:40:844 (5,6,7) - What do you think about something like this? http://puu.sh/k0BYW.png
00:45:532 (6) - I prefer going back and forth like you do at 00:48:157 (4,5,6) - , so maybe stack this with (4)?
00:52:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you did the change at 00:40:844 (5,6,7) -, do something similar here for consistency: http://puu.sh/k0C7q.png
00:54:907 (2) - The stack doesn't feel too good to me, as it kind of breaks the flow of the map, while the lyrics of the song keeps "flowing" or whatever. Maybe move it to 128;204?
00:57:345 (6,7) - A zig-zagging pattern and higher spacing to follow the pitch works well here imo: http://puu.sh/k0Ceb.png
01:10:470 (4) - Remove repeat and add a note at 01:10:845 - instead? This way you'll hit both the "ma" and "de" of the vocals, while keeping the same rhythm.
01:12:720 (1,2,3) - This part might be a bit hard to read, so consider moving (1) further away from (2,3), and maybe stack (2,3) as well.
01:16:470 (1,2,3) - Using circles instead of sliders would be better here imo, to capture the power of the vocals before kiai. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/k0CVS.png Alternatively, you can remove (4) to make 3 notes for the vocal and then a triple before the kiai. (Although, the actual rhythm of this part is weird and I can't really tell, but using 1/4 should be fine.)
01:19:470 (3) - Do you think you could rearrange the pattern here a bit so this note isn't overlapped by 01:18:720 (1) - ? Since these kinds of overlaps look unintentional, they also make the map and pattern look more messy than necessary, and working around them will make your map look more polished.
01:20:595 (2) - Curve this similarily to 01:20:220 (1) - ? Makes the two sliders look like they belong in the same pattern more, and improves the flow a bit. http://puu.sh/k0D7o.png
01:27:157 (5,6) - The pattern looks nice, but doesn't feel as satisfying to hit, as the song increases in intensity, while the spacing here is closer than earlier. Consider increasing the spacing on these notes. (You'll have to rearrange your pattern though)
01:30:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little something, but you could, instead of having all these 8 notes "lumped together" in one jump-around pattern, maybe split it up into (1,2,3,4) and (4,5,6,7,8), where (4) is the common note between the two patterns in a way. This way, you can split up the parts with and without vocals.
01:32:782 (2,3) - ctrl+g on (2), and ctrl+g on (3) (so they face the opposite direction) flows better from 01:32:220 (1)
01:33:532 (1) - If you do the above, consider ctrl+g on this too, for the circular flow from (3).
01:36:251 (5) - No need for this note, as there is no triple in the song here.
01:41:220 (8,1) - Swap NC here.
01:42:532 (7,1) - ^
01:44:220 (1,2) - The stack doesn't feel too good here, as the pause in movement don't really match the song imo. You can move it to 268;32 or something.
01:59:595 (2,5) - dis slight overlap pls.
02:11:220 (1) - I would add a finish here, since it's more or less the end of the map and all.

Kawada Mami so guud.

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2015-09-05T13:33:59+00:00

stumbled across this somehow (?)

cpoixpoiupoi unravel the code
offset sounds a bit early try a +7~9

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-09-05T19:31:13+00:00

xChippy wrote:
stumbled across this somehow (?) c~~poi~~x~~poi~~u~~poi~~ unravel the code c ~~poi~~ x ~~poi~~ u ~~poi~~ unravel the code
offset sounds a bit early try a +7~9

I changed to +7. thanks for pointing it out!!

CXu wrote:
Hi. Leetra asked me to mod your Bravely diff so yeah.

[Bravely]
I'll be suggesting things in the mod, and some of them might not match your mapping style, so feel free to reject them as you see fit.
I'm not a fan of OD7 on insanes. Consider using OD8 or something, since it's kinda dumb to click all over the place and still get 100% I really like something lower than OD8 on this map ;_; I changed to 7.5.
00:03:720 (1,2,3) - Curve (1,3) like this? http://puu.sh/k0BuS.jpg. Makes the flow fairly clear, and leads into the curve of 00:05:220 (1) - as well. Sure!
00:09:720 (5) - NC. I think this is like the only place your combo's go over 2 stanzas instead of one. Thanks.
00:09:157 (4,1,2) - You're missing whistles on all the white ticks here. (You're actually missing quite a few hitsounds here and there, such as finish at 00:20:220 (1) - , clap at 00:22:845 (5) - , finish at 01:35:220 (1) - etc. After going through my mod, you should go through your map and check that every hitsound is where they should be.) I remapped that first part and completely forgot to put HS there :s. Fixed!
00:15:532 (5) - Move to 216;304? Having it in the middle of the two sliders (3,4) makes the pattern look cleaner. You might need to move the notes after it a bit for spacing, but shouldn't be too hard to do that. Fixed!
00:21:532 (6) - Maybe move this further down on the playfield? The song doesn't drop in power here, so the lower spacing feels a bit underwhelming to play. Lowered.
00:28:845 (5,1) - Maybe rearrange the pattern slightly so these don't overlap with 00:28:095 (2) - ? Sure
00:40:844 (5,6,7) - What do you think about something like this? http://puu.sh/k0BYW.png I think that is better
00:45:532 (6) - I prefer going back and forth like you do at 00:48:157 (4,5,6) - , so maybe stack this with (4)? Moved other one on 4 instead
00:52:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you did the change at 00:40:844 (5,6,7) -, do something similar here for consistency: http://puu.sh/k0C7q.png Fixed!
00:54:907 (2) - The stack doesn't feel too good to me, as it kind of breaks the flow of the map, while the lyrics of the song keeps "flowing" or whatever. Maybe move it to 128;204? omg this is pretty nice
00:57:345 (6,7) - A zig-zagging pattern and higher spacing to follow the pitch works well here imo: http://puu.sh/k0Ceb.png I increased the spacing, but didn't move both though.
01:10:470 (4) - Remove repeat and add a note at 01:10:845 - instead? This way you'll hit both the "ma" and "de" of the vocals, while keeping the same rhythm. thanks
01:12:720 (1,2,3) - This part might be a bit hard to read, so consider moving (1) further away from (2,3), and maybe stack (2,3) as well. I moved (1) but stacking (2,3) seems more harder to read than now imo ><
01:16:470 (1,2,3) - Using circles instead of sliders would be better here imo, to capture the power of the vocals before kiai. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/k0CVS.png Alternatively, you can remove (4) to make 3 notes for the vocal and then a triple before the kiai. (Although, the actual rhythm of this part is weird and I can't really tell, but using 1/4 should be fine.) I tried your rhythm!
01:19:470 (3) - Do you think you could rearrange the pattern here a bit so this note isn't overlapped by 01:18:720 (1) - ? Since these kinds of overlaps look unintentional, they also make the map and pattern look more messy than necessary, and working around them will make your map look more polished. I moved that slider so it doesn't touch anything, but I don't know it is sufficient enough to look polished. ;/
01:20:595 (2) - Curve this similarily to 01:20:220 (1) - ? Makes the two sliders look like they belong in the same pattern more, and improves the flow a bit. http://puu.sh/k0D7o.png Applied!
01:27:157 (5,6) - The pattern looks nice, but doesn't feel as satisfying to hit, as the song increases in intensity, while the spacing here is closer than earlier. Consider increasing the spacing on these notes. (You'll have to rearrange your pattern though) Fixed!
01:30:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Just a little something, but you could, instead of having all these 8 notes "lumped together" in one jump-around pattern, maybe split it up into (1,2,3,4) and (4,5,6,7,8), where (4) is the common note between the two patterns in a way. This way, you can split up the parts with and without vocals. I tried my best to fix it!
01:32:782 (2,3) - ctrl+g on (2), and ctrl+g on (3) (so they face the opposite direction) flows better from 01:32:220 (1) Applied
01:33:532 (1) - If you do the above, consider ctrl+g on this too, for the circular flow from (3). Modified this part quite a lot
01:36:251 (5) - No need for this note, as there is no triple in the song here. Yes, removed
01:41:220 (8,1) - Swap NC here. Fixed!
01:42:532 (7,1) - ^ Fixed!
01:44:220 (1,2) - The stack doesn't feel too good here, as the pause in movement don't really match the song imo. You can move it to 268;32 or something. Changed quite a lot there
01:59:595 (2,5) - dis slight overlap pls. Fixed!
02:11:220 (1) - I would add a finish here, since it's more or less the end of the map and all.Fixed!
Kawada Mami so guud. <3 Yes!

thanks both of you!!

CXu

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2009

CXu 2015-09-05T23:11:35+00:00

Flying shoe is best shoe.

MillhioreF

Pro Tester

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Joined July 2011

MillhioreF 2015-09-05T23:36:27+00:00

osu! needs more ranked shoes.

Sidetail

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Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-09-05T23:55:22+00:00

MillhioreF wrote:
osu! needs more ranked shoes.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Keada

656 posts

Joined June 2013

Keada 2015-09-08T19:56:05+00:00

Heya, Leetra asked me to mod Bravely Insane diff

Just gonna be some suggestions etc I guess

Bravely

00:03:352 (3) - would fit better and flow much nicer if you did a curve instead of a straight one http://puu.sh/k4veW/724533bd8c.jpg
00:19:102 (2) - maybe turn this the other way like this? http://puu.sh/k4vl7/b9fa3168bd.jpg
00:19:852 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow
00:23:227 (1) - better make this a straight one? to be consisten with the next sliders 00:23:977 (6) - 00:24:727 (1) -
00:26:977 (3) - im not really a fan of those sliders tbh, for me this would look better http://puu.sh/k4vAy/8b70d02636.jpg
00:38:227 (1) - would be better if you curved it the other way http://puu.sh/k4vJf/2ce8e1cc10.jpg
01:07:477 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+g this , plays out much better imo
01:12:914 - I hear a beat here which youve mapped earlier D:
01:21:352 (5,6) - ctrl+g because the 6 doesnt play that good onto the next combo
01:26:883 (3,4) - just imo, this doesnt fit that well, with more spacing here
01:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about something like this http://puu.sh/k4wf5/a0941845ac.jpg
01:40:664 (4,5) - ctrl+g because it fits more with a jump on (4)
01:52:289 (3,4,5) - maybe have the same direction as this 01:51:539 (7,8,1) - feels much better to play tbh
01:58:477 (3,4) - first ctrl+G these and then ctrl+g these 01:58:852 (5,6) -
02:01:102 (2) - move to x295 y124 to stack sliderend with 02:00:352 (5) -
02:11:320 (1) - maybe end slider on 02:18:539 - cause it fades to here

Good luck

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2015-09-08T23:24:25+00:00

[General]
i think combo color blue is a bit off than the rest of the other colors , maybe find a lighter blue

[Easy]
00:14:977 (2) - start on the next red tick sounds better imo
01:47:227 (1) - maybe use the shape like 01:50:227 (1) - would look nice

[Manul]
00:57:539 - add a circle maybe ? just like 01:00:539 (3) -
01:53:977 (2) - maybe you can fix this curve to blanket (3) well

[Freesongs]
00:14:602 (1,2,3) - imo this pause feels a little weird , it works better if the sliders are pulled 1/2 earlier i think
01:16:102 (4,1) - swap nc ?

the rest are pretty neat imo

[Gaiaiaiaiaiaiaia]
00:11:602 (2) - move this a bit up to get straight movement from (1) and nicer blanket
00:14:789 (3) - adjust a little to the right
00:53:789 (3) - ctrl g feels better imo
01:15:539 (1,2) - swap nc ?

[Insane]
00:12:352 - add a circle ?
00:32:977 (3,4,5) - ctrl H this pattern works out better (imo)

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00:37:852 (5) - i think change this to circle is better imo , also looks neater , since nothing to be hear at 00:38:039 -
00:56:883 (4) - maybe remove this instead and relocate 00:56:789 (3) - a little jump would do , since triplet here doesnt feel very fitting
01:09:539 (6,1) - blanket ?
01:16:102 (2) - i think straight movement is cool

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01:19:852 (5,2) - blanket
01:23:227 (1,3) - these straight sliders felt a little awkward imo , try some curves here

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01:30:352 (5) - maybe make this slider heads to the next object would feel better

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01:30:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think these jumps can be sort neater imo

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01:34:102 (2) -

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01:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think this is much harder than how u did on highest diff ( all 1/4 sliders )
01:41:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion

02:00:352 (5,2) - maybe stack it with the tail
02:10:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe

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[Flying Shoe]
o.o diff name
00:04:477 (2,3) - this feels a little too packed rather than 00:01:477 (1,2) -
maybe silent the sliderside on the intro , doesnt really sound good to me tbh
00:05:227 (1) - lower the tail volume , quite unpleasent to hear since there is no vocal stops there
00:11:789 (3) - nc since its anti jump
00:47:414 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe this part deserves more movement rather than just backforth , just my opinion tho ( just like you did in insane )
01:13:008 (2,3) - increase some distance , according to your previous 1/2 jumps are much higher spacing which can mislead players a lot
01:18:539 (1) - how about curving like this as if its follow the previous slider curve would fit your flow as well (blanket 01:18:914 (2) - as well )

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01:19:664 (5) - move this a little upward might be nicer imo instead of stacking
http://puu.sh/k4Hh5.jpg
01:30:445 (4) - i think without this sounds better imo , didnt here any significant 1/4
01:36:352 (4) - x:372 y:208
01:38:977 (5) - nc ~
01:52:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a little off flow , just a suggestion

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01:58:477 (3,4) - ctrl g ?
02:03:539 (4) - i think its better if this heads downwards like how this 02:02:977 (1) - heads upwards to ballance up the pattern

thanks and gl ~!

CXu

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CXu 2015-09-09T00:41:03+00:00

Rumia- wrote:
[Flying Shoe]
o.o diff name - Flying shoes in the sky~~
00:04:477 (2,3) - this feels a little too packed rather than 00:01:477 (1,2) - - Not sure what you mean. That they feel too close?
maybe silent the sliderside on the intro , doesnt really sound good to me tbh - Hitsounds are copied from Insane. I might go through the whole diff later and readjust hitsounds to better fit my diff and what melodies I'm trying to follow.
00:05:227 (1) - lower the tail volume , quite unpleasent to hear since there is no vocal stops there - Hmm. I tried that, but I actually find that sounding weirder than what it is currently. Keeping for now, but might readjust things later on when I actually do get around to the hitsounds.
00:11:789 (3) - nc since its anti jump - Mm, from people playtesting and the fact that it's ar9, it doesn't seem like people trip up on this, as there's quite a bit of time between (3,4) to see the antijump. Keeping for now, but if more people think it's hard to read I'll add a nc on (4)
00:47:414 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe this part deserves more movement rather than just backforth , just my opinion tho ( just like you did in insane ) - My preference for this part
01:13:008 (2,3) - increase some distance , according to your previous 1/2 jumps are much higher spacing which can mislead players a lot - Made it slightly bigger. Hopefully clearer now.
01:18:539 (1) - how about curving like this as if its follow the previous slider curve would fit your flow as well (blanket 01:18:914 (2) - as well ) - Interesting idea, but the curve of that slider would look out of place compared to every other curved 1/2 slider in the map
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01:19:664 (5) - move this a little upward might be nicer imo instead of stacking - That doesn't look very neat though. I'm also avoiding overlaps l for the most part through the entire map, and it would be weird to have this one overlap in the map.
http://puu.sh/k4Hh5.jpg
01:30:445 (4) - i think without this sounds better imo , didnt here any significant 1/4 - Lolyes. Why is this even a triple. Remapped this part.
01:36:352 (4) - x:372 y:208 - This part was originally a line between (3,4,5) but that doesn't play that well, so I moved (4) further out. This feels like a more natural flow imo so keeping it.
01:38:977 (5) - nc ~ - I NC for every stanza (except the antijumps in the beginning) and I don't want to break that pattern.
01:52:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a little off flow , just a suggestion - I assume you mean the flow between (1,2) It's supposed to be a drop-off, where you play the curved slider as a straight slider, with the help of slider leniency. I don't think it plays particularily bad, and your suggestion seems to have an awkward motion from (6) into the stream imo.

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01:58:477 (3,4) - ctrl g ? - Zig-zag with increasing spacing. ctrl+g'ing would make the pattern look less structured in terms of spacing imo,
02:03:539 (4) - i think its better if this heads downwards like how this 02:02:977 (1) - heads upwards to ballance up the pattern - I've actually been thinking about this as well, but I'm not sure I want to just make this head downwards. I don't feel like that fits well with how you still get a sense of going back-and-forth with with the (1,2) slider making you go to the right, and not so much down as pointing (4) would do. I'll look into this pattern later though. It's just 2:30am now sooo yeah.

thanks and gl ~!

Thanks for modding!

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445,193,114352,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Sidetail

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T02:49:53+00:00

I'll apply all of my mods after getting internet going up and running at new house. ;_;

Karen

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Karen 2015-09-09T15:24:01+00:00

As your request~

General

Easy

01:56:227 (5,1) - the rhythm here is a bit weird, try this instead:
from 01:56:227 -
01:59:227 (1,2) - ^weird rhythm, try :
from 01:59:227 - follow 02:00:539 - this sound better
02:05:414 (1) - you can end the spinner here 02:10:852 - , there is no rules on the spacing between spinners.

Normal

00:02:227 (2,3) - confusing spacing, please use DS*1.0 for balance
00:57:539 - i feel very empty here, please add a note like 01:00:539 (3) - this
01:27:352 (3) - i think you should use clap here instead.
01:53:977 (2,3) - oh the blanket will make me mad
00:59:227 (1) - ctrl+j for better flow o.o
01:13:477 (4) - a reverse slider here will fit more, to follow 01:14:039 - this beat.
01:26:977 - missing whistle?
01:27:352 - clap instead?
01:27:727 - remove clap here
01:28:477 - remove clap and finish
01:29:227 - remove clap
02:02:414 - remove clap
02:02:789 - remove
02:04:289 - add clap
02:04:664 - ^

Hard

00:33:539 (1) - ctrl+g then the flow will be much better o.o

Gai jiang

too late now, i'll continue tmr;_;

CXu

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CXu 2015-09-09T17:56:56+00:00

I think you accidentally bubbled it.

Also, for my diff, maybe "Graviton Shoe" might be a better diffname, as that seems to be the name of the shoes in-game (Decided to play through the introduction of the game

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Sidetail

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T18:00:44+00:00

CXu wrote:
I think you accidentally bubbled it.

Also, for my diff, maybe "Graviton Shoe" might be a better diffname, as that seems to be the name of the shoes in-game.

Haha, pretty I was pretty stoned to see bubble status. I'll change the name / apply those mods after today's classes end!

Thanks Karen!

CXu

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CXu 2015-09-09T18:01:20+00:00

It's actually anti-graviton I think. I should probably check the VN again lol.

Edit:
Yeah, "Anti-Graviton Shoes" or Grasshu.

So go with "Anti-Graviton Shoe"

Sidetail

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T18:04:48+00:00

CXu wrote:
It's actually anti-graviton I think. I should probably check the VN again lol.

"I should probably check the VN again lol."

c;

Edit: Yeah sure.

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Rumia- 2015-09-09T19:36:50+00:00

dat accident bubble

Sidetail

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T19:41:04+00:00

inb4 accidental qualification =w=

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T22:05:15+00:00

Keada wrote:
Heya, Leetra asked me to mod Bravely Insane diff
Just gonna be some suggestions etc I guess

Bravely
00:03:352 (3) - would fit better and flow much nicer if you did a curve instead of a straight one http://puu.sh/k4veW/724533bd8c.jpg Sure
00:19:102 (2) - maybe turn this the other way like this? http://puu.sh/k4vl7/b9fa3168bd.jpg Not symmetrical anymore :s
00:19:852 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow The next object is harder to reach if I do ctrl+g D:
00:23:227 (1) - better make this a straight one? to be consisten with the next sliders 00:23:977 (6) - 00:24:727 (1) - Sure
00:26:977 (3) - im not really a fan of those sliders tbh, for me this would look better http://puu.sh/k4vAy/8b70d02636.jpg Kind of modified a bit
00:38:227 (1) - would be better if you curved it the other way http://puu.sh/k4vJf/2ce8e1cc10.jpg I quite like the idea of this, but current one looks good already.
01:07:477 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+g this , plays out much better imo Current one seems slightly better imo :s
01:12:914 - I hear a beat here which youve mapped earlier D: Current seems more accurate. I put a circle there long time ago, and according to previous mods I had to remove it
01:21:352 (5,6) - ctrl+g because the 6 doesnt play that good onto the next combo Completely redone that part
01:26:883 (3,4) - just imo, this doesnt fit that well, with more spacing here Fixed
01:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about something like this http://puu.sh/k4wf5/a0941845ac.jpg I like your style as well, but mine seems to do the job pretty all right haha.
01:40:664 (4,5) - ctrl+g because it fits more with a jump on (4) i would've done that if there was NC there, but since there is no NC, I think following similar DS seems better
01:52:289 (3,4,5) - maybe have the same direction as this 01:51:539 (7,8,1) - feels much better to play tbh If I do that, the circles will overlap >< I like that idea though
01:58:477 (3,4) - first ctrl+G these and then ctrl+g these 01:58:852 (5,6) - Applied
02:01:102 (2) - move to x295 y124 to stack sliderend with 02:00:352 (5) - Sure.
02:11:320 (1) - maybe end slider on 02:18:539 - cause it fades to here Slider? If you mean spinner, it previously ended there, but previous mods mentioned that it seems better off to end on current position (to be more consistant throughout the other difficulties)

Good luck

Sidetail

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Sidetail 2015-09-09T22:05:50+00:00

RIP I ACCIDENTALLY DID DOUBLE POST ON REPLYING FOR MODS ><

Rumia- wrote:
[General]
i think combo color blue is a bit off than the rest of the other colors , maybe find a lighter blue NOW LIGHT BLUE

[Easy]
00:14:977 (2) - start on the next red tick sounds better imo I don't really want 1/8 in Easy diff ><
01:47:227 (1) - maybe use the shape like 01:50:227 (1) - would look nice I'll come back to this for consistency. I have that current one because I want to use other shapes while i can to make it look better

[Insane]
00:12:352 - add a circle ? There was circle long time ago, but i didn't feel the necessity to put one there since there is not really a beat there
00:32:977 (3,4,5) - ctrl H this pattern works out better (imo) Errr feels weird D: sadddd
SPOILER
00:37:852 (5) - i think change this to circle is better imo , also looks neater , since nothing to be hear at 00:38:039 - I really wanted this to flow that HS, but i didn't want to do 3/4 so I ended up with this. It seems pretty nice, but I'll come back to this later if another mod complains about this.
00:56:883 (4) - maybe remove this instead and relocate 00:56:789 (3) - a little jump would do , since triplet here doesnt feel very fitting I tried to be consistent as possible. Same sounding beat on 00:56:039 (6,7,1) and 00:59:789 (4,5,6)
01:09:539 (6,1) - blanket ? I think you are on different version of my map? The current one that I am editing with has perfect blanketting
01:16:102 (2) - i think straight movement is cool Sure
SPOILER
01:19:852 (5,2) - blanket Fixed
01:23:227 (1,3) - these straight sliders felt a little awkward imo , try some curves here Applied! Thanks.
SPOILER
Ahhhhhhhh I like the current one, literally took me 30 minutes on this ;_;
01:30:352 (5) - maybe make this slider heads to the next object would feel better
SPOILER
01:30:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think these jumps can be sort neater imo
SPOILER
01:34:102 (2) -
SPOILER
01:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think this is much harder than how u did on highest diff ( all 1/4 sliders )
01:41:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion :o I like this suggestion

02:00:352 (5,2) - maybe stack it with the tail Haha, previous mod mentioned it!
02:10:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe I don't want have hugggge spacing in quiet & calm part :s
SPOILER

thanks and gl ~!

Thanks Rumia-~

Karen wrote:
Easy
01:56:227 (5,1) - the rhythm here is a bit weird, try this instead: Thanks!
from 01:56:227 -
01:59:227 (1,2) - ^weird rhythm, try : Thanks!
from 01:59:227 - follow 02:00:539 - this sound better
02:05:414 (1) - you can end the spinner here 02:10:852 - , there is no rules on the spacing between spinners. Thanks!

RIP Bubble ;_;

http://puu.sh/k5Ped/f22588e3d9.jpg

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