As per your request:
[General]
Wow, just the initial feeling of this map, combined with the music itself left a huge grin on my face. Kudos for that. Excellent job on the presentation.
The kiai's don't really fit this song at all to me.
[Normal]
00:33:463 (1,1) - Maybe instead of just doing the same slider over and over, reposition it, mix it up, do normal beats, redesign the sliders... do something different.
00:41:565 (1,2) - This kind of plays awkwardly for the play style up until that point. You're used to just the drumming of the beat, boom boom boom boom, then holy shit, consecutive kick sliders. Maybe just do long sliders instead of kicks? Maybe also do that last note where the spinner starts, then start the spinner.
00:54:485 (1,2,1) - These also kind of play awkwardly. It's hard to get the feel of how long they're going to last without just staring at the approach circles, which you really shouldn't have to do in a music game until you get into the higher level of play.
00:58:865 (1) - Maybe realign this so you don't have the overlap with the [6]?
01:22:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is pushing it for a normal difficulty. I'd tone it down.
01:45:288 (3) - With the motion that you're going with, you may as well have this horizontally flipped...
01:48:792 (5) - ^
01:50:763 (1,2,1) - Play awkwardly again. I really don't think these types of sliders work in this sort of difficulty.
01:59:522 (2,3,4,5,6) - The 2 is really soon after the kick slider ends, and the rhythm you propose for players to perform just feels beyond the realm of a normal difficulty.
02:20:982 (1) - These are also pushing it for difficulty... maybe try using some sliders and go with the trumpet fanfare?
02:32:587 (1) - Really soon after a short spinner on a normal...
02:36:091 (1) - ^
02:41:565 (2,3,4,5) - Same comment about notes after a kick slider from 01:59
02:46:492 (1) - What is this following in the music? Delete it.
02:49:996 (1) - ^
02:53:609 (1,2,3) - Really? You should opt for some more longer sliders instead of using the short repeaters so much...
02:57:113 (2,1) - That's just awesome.
[Shulin's Hard]
00:36:967 (1) - Maybe try to form this so it's not overlapping with the 2? (Or redesign the 2)
00:59:741 (2) - Maybe make curved due to overlap?
[Ignacio's Insane]
The hit sounds feel really loud to me. It could be that you're hitting so many notes. Maybe lower the volume a tad?
01:31:711 (1,2,3) - This didn't feel like a good spot to have sixteenths. If anything, keep it to eighths, and the beat after put in the sixteenths at 01:32:368.
02:01:054 (2,3) - The way these two cross each other doesn't look very good. Try to go for more of a split right down the middle instead of just glancing the side. Kind of like how the 4 right afterward looks compared to the 3.
02:55:361 (1) - Kinda weird seeing this stacked at the end of a stream like that.
03:03:243 (2) - Maybe position this so it isn't sticking into the slider afterward?
Aw, not final two notes at the end like the other two difficulties? I feel cheated. :(
Excellent job on the presentation. The only problem I can see about the maps is the difficulty of the easiest of the set. Tone it down and this is golden.