M4M request from you (in-game)
[General]
Increase quality of the BG, you should ask good old Ringating for this
Also, I'm quite sure BPM is 74 constantly, it's very calm. Set it all to 74, and change SV to 2,8 so it still feels the same. Don't forget to do a 0.5 at the start of the map so it doesn't go faster.
Why is it all 74? For the same reason some maps are 300+ BPM. The claps; Claps should go at every other beat (2nd and 4th) That is not the case here, it's every 3rd beat. Halve the BPM to fix this. If the claps would have fallen on all red ticks, BPM should be doubled
Rest seems fine
Good luck!
[General]
Increase quality of the BG, you should ask good old Ringating for this
Also, I'm quite sure BPM is 74 constantly, it's very calm. Set it all to 74, and change SV to 2,8 so it still feels the same. Don't forget to do a 0.5 at the start of the map so it doesn't go faster.
Why is it all 74? For the same reason some maps are 300+ BPM. The claps; Claps should go at every other beat (2nd and 4th) That is not the case here, it's every 3rd beat. Halve the BPM to fix this. If the claps would have fallen on all red ticks, BPM should be doubled
Rest seems fine
[Fake World]
- 00:12:813 (2,3) - Distance between them is very high, as it's all incredibly slow and low spaced
- 00:22:543 (4,5) - ^^
- 00:27:002 (1) - I think you're better off folwwing the piano here, as you do it in the previous part as well (Use 1/4)
- 00:37:340 (2) - Why is this evenly spaced with the rest as it's much calmer then the rest? Please space (1,2,3) a little less so there is more emphasis on the other (strong) notes
- 00:59:435 (1,2,3,4) - I'm no fan of this pattern. I think a triangle for (1,2,3) would work better. Then space (3,4), cause a stack is a little awkward IMO
- 01:01:462 (2) - Why not follow the vocals here? A 2/1 slider feels a little undermapped here. Make (1) a 1/1 slider, and then let (2) start where the rest of the vocals are
- 01:14:029 (2) - I'm no fan of such sliders, as the curve is too big and the sldier is relatively small. Please make it a straight slider, or decrease the curve of it
- 01:28:624 (3) - Starting from here, I think you should add more claps. Think about 01:30:246 (7) - (start), 01:33:489 (7) - etc.
Do you see the pattern? A clap at every 3rd beat, it feels much better. - 01:47:678 (1,2,3) - Either space them a little or stack them, this way it feels as 1/4, and it feels weird the DS is low, comparing to the previous part, as the DS there is quite high (1.2)
- 01:57:002 (6,7) - Improve the blanket, this looks a little weird imo
- 01:58:624 - Add a circle here, and make the spinner start 1/4 later, as the start of a slider has no emphasis (you've done it correctly at 01:39:165 (3) -
- 02:07:543 (4,1) - The low spacing is fairly awkward, as the previous part is all 1/2, this has same distance and it has 1/1
- 02:14:029 (1) - Starting from here, again, the claps. Do them at every 3rd beat, it fits more
- 02:32:475 (2,3,4) - This should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4
- 02:41:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Such low spacing here, up it a little. It looks a lot like a previous pattern, which was 1/4
- 02:51:327 (1,2) - Again, really low spacing
- 02:54:570 (2) - Why not follow the vocals more? It seems fairly undermapped
- 03:05:719 (4) - Move to 191:169, feels much better (still has 2.14 ds, but it's almost the same for the next note, which looks better)
- 03:32:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - Low distance and that slider makes it fairly confusing. Up the spacing, it'll also feel better as it's the build up for the kiai part
- 04:02:676 (9,10) - This is really hard to play, as you tap the stream, but you still see an other note, thus you click again, 1/4 early, resulting in a sliderbreak
- 04:05:919 (3) - Nc this, SV change
- 04:09:162 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - While this may look good in the editor, it does not when playing. Why? stacked notes like this do onot appear this way when , move all circles down/right a little to fix it (or make a custom stack). It's recommended to turn on Stacking in options so you know when it stacks
- 04:13:824 (1,2,3) - This should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4
- 04:22:337 (3,4,5,6,7) - This star looks really squished. Please redo it, and either use the Create Polygonal circles tool (Offset=18, #objects is 5, DS is 1.3) Then Ctrl Shift S (enter 2) and Ctrl J, then make them flow good or put a note, and rotate by 144 degrees (repeat 4 times)
- 04:27:709 (16,1) - Decrease DS to make the stream look nicer (1.2/1.5=0.8DS)
- 04:32:370 (5,6,7) - Move back 1/4?
- 04:39:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Refer to 04:22:337 (3,4,5,6,7), with 1.5-1.6 spacing
- 04:40:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not make this go in s atraight line, it look really sloppy now as some objects are at 252,other at 250, other at 253, make it all the same X-coordinate. 04:40:985 (6,1) - Make these follow it as well
- 04:43:114 - 04:44:428 - Are these necessary? They feel really weird The 3rd one is fine, as it changes the real beat, but these 2 feel bad
Good luck!