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8284 vs wa. - Adularescence [OsuMania]

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Marirose
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月29日 星期六 at 下午 9:53:01

Artist: 8284 vs wa.
Title: Adularescence
Source: BMS
Tags: bof2013 konzertsaal CROSS OVER Chronica bms of fighters victorica_db
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4275kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. 5K Another - 5Key (4.22 stars, 1336 notes)
  2. 5K Hyper - 5Key (3.34 stars, 1049 notes)
  3. 5K Normal - 5Key (1.96 stars, 479 notes)
  4. victorica's 8K LV.12 - 8Key (4.56 stars, 1336 notes)
  5. victorica's 8K LV.6 - 8Key (1.96 stars, 491 notes)
  6. victorica's 8K LV.9 - 8Key (3.15 stars, 871 notes)
Download: 8284 vs wa. - Adularescence
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It's back.
8284 vs wa. - Adularescence
5K+8K SET

8K by victorica_db
db说:SB
UPDATE HISTORY

Thanks to :
shionelove,liaoxingyao,Zan -,Critical_Star,biemote,-LASU-,Blocko,Frim4503,ExUsagi,
pocket-Gao,stryver12,Kuo Kyoka,shionelove
Stars:
biemote,liangv587*3,Spy*2,Kuo Kyoka*2,liaoxingyao,Critical_Star,a v a l o n*2,victorica_db,stryver12,
liaoxingyao
Mod From PM
....
[General]

[5K Normal]
00:07:640 (7640|4) - 其实可以删这个note啊 意义不明
00:27:693 (27693|4) - Add a note
00:32:903 (32903|3,32903|1) - 2和4 Add notes
00:33:219 (33219|1) - Move to 1
00:36:693 (36693|1,36693|4,36903|4,36903|1,37114|4,37114|1,37325|4,37325|1,37535|0,37535|3,37746|0,37746|3) - 这真的大丈夫
01:44:746 (104746|2) - Move to 4
[5K Hard]
Can't mod
[5K Another]
Can't mod
完毕
shionelove
meow
column S1234567 12345

reduce star diff please
change BG please(size issue)
fix 1ms please

8K
[Lv.6]
00:02:588 (2588|7) - delete
00:04:640 (4640|1,4956|7) - move to 7 1
00:05:272 - to 00:12:535 -i recommend this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234028
same pitch=same column in calm area meow
00:19:482 (19482|6) - move to 4
00:20:114 - add 7
00:23:114 (23114|3,23746|3,24377|3,25009|3,25640|3,26272|3) - move to 5
00:32:746 (32746|0,32746|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234046
00:38:588 (38588|5,38746|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234055
00:47:114 (47114|3) - move to 1
01:03:219 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234060
to 01:10:798
01:12:693 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234090
01:22:877 (82877|1,82956|3,83035|5,83114|7,83193|1,83272|3,83351|5,83430|7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234095
[LV.9]
00:01:325 (1325|7,1482|5,1640|3) - move to 357
00:02:588 - to 00:12:535 -same as Lv.6
00:15:851 (15851|5,15851|7) - one move to 1
00:22:482 (22482|6,22482|4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234116
00:32:272 - add
00:36:456 (36456|2,36535|3,36614|4) - move to 456><
01:12:851 (72851|0,73009|0,73167|0) - delete
01:20:798 (80798|5,80851|3) - 1/4
01:27:298 - add
01:46:167 (106167|3,106167|7,106167|1) - move to 246?
[Lv.12]
00:02:588 - to 00:12:693 -same as Lv.6
00:12:219 (12219|7,12298|5,12377|3,12535|1,12614|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234152
00:27:456 (27456|2,27614|6) - ?delete
00:31:167 (31167|4) - add
01:18:114 (78114|2,78167|4,78219|6,78272|4,78325|2,78377|6) - move to 234567?
01:20:798 (80798|4,80851|2,80903|5) - move to 354?

5K
[Normal]
00:07:482 (7482|1,7640|4) - move to 4 3?
00:32:903 - add
00:58:167 (58167|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2234475
01:46:167 (106167|0,106167|4) - too long
[Hyper]
00:32:825 - add
01:16:246 (76246|2,76719|2,77193|2,77667|3) - delete?
01:37:325 (97325|0,97403|1,97482|3) - 1/6?
01:46:167 (106167|4,106167|0) - toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long
[Another]
00:32:825 - add
00:45:930 (45930|4,46009|3) - meow?
01:27:219 (87219|0,87219|4,87298|1,87377|3,87377|4) - 1/6 meow
01:31:009 - lack some notes,compare with Hyper please
01:32:667 (92667|2,92667|3) - meow
01:37:325 (97325|3,97325|0,97403|4,97403|1,97482|0,97482|4) - 1/6
01:40:903 (100903|4,100903|3,100903|1) - add
01:46:167 (106167|4,106167|2,106167|0) - loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool


nyao
Zan-
duckduckduck
click
[5K Normal]
01:23:272 - add note to 4, i feel missing note here
01:36:061 (96061|0) - move to 2

[5K Hyper]
00:02:272 - add note | consistency
00:25:325 (25325|2) - move to 00:25:640 - | ^
00:25:956 (25956|1) - remove | ^
00:41:746 (41746|4,42061|0,42377|0) - remove | no particulary need 2-noted*
00:49:798 (49798|4) - move to 4
01:02:587 (62587|4) - remove | *^
01:36:140 - add note | consistency, see previous pattern like 01:33:614 -
01:46:167 (106167|4,106167|0) - stop LN at 01:49:956 - | that's too long xD

[victorica's 8K LV.9]
01:39:772 (99772|7) - remove?

sorry only that i can do

gl~
Akasha-
8284 vs wa. - Adularescence [OsuMania]


Hi, come by request, if you have any question, call me on PM

BPM: 190.000
Offset: 1328


The new offset with fit for your mp3 now
Good luck with your mapset
biemote
8K我不会.....只看5K......

5K NM
这个歌打算RANK么?如果是,那恭喜你,再做一个EZ,或者压难度吧~
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00:01:482 加一个如何?感觉更配音乐啦.....
00:04:798 and 00:07:325 and 00:12:377 你在 00:09:851 都有note,咋这里就木有了呢?
00:31:009
00:36:535 可以去掉,前面是一个16分的鼓点的原因.
00:40:956 突然从鼓点转到主音,再考虑一下?
00:43:009 从这里开始的LN加米比较稀,可以试着按照音高重新调整一下LN出现的轨道.
01:20:903 突然又变了,考虑下改成LN到 01:22:167 停止,再加鼓点.
01:23:351 突然出现的......不大好吧?
01:26:588 对的主音?考虑移到 01:26:430
01:29:114 移到 01:29:035
01:34:482 突然出现的16分,改成8分如何?
01:36:693 移到 01:36:614
01:41:746 01:43:956 01:45:219 01:45:851 同上,向下移1/8啦///
00:22:798 (22798|4,23114|4,23430|4,23746|4,24061|4,24377|4,24693|4,25009|4,25325|4,25640|4,25956|4,26272|4) -
简单图这种大长串子.....再考虑下?
00:57:851 (57851|1) - 为啥到 00:58:167 - 就没有了? 00:58:482 (58482|3,58798|0,59114|2) - 这三弟兄还是改成单点,如何?
再把突然没对的LN加回去......

简单图请多注意一下音高排列~
还有对简单图多花点心思啊~

5K HYPER
00:03:851 一下转到.....好吧我不知道叫啥乐器....真的好么?
00:22:246 (22246|1,22325|4,22403|3) - 考虑下,可以删掉,又是突然转换.
00:41:351 (41351|3,41667|1) - ^
01:29:746 - 我听起来更像是32分.....
00:20:982 (20982|1) - 这个音符可以暂时不要.当然...不去掉也没啥.....
00:22:798 (22798|4,22798|0,22956|1,23114|4,23114|3,23272|1,23430|4,23588|1,23746|4,23746|2,23903|1,24061|3,24219|1,24377|3,24377|4,24535|1,24693|2,24851|4,25009|1,25009|0,25167|3,25325|0,25482|3,25640|1,25640|0,25798|3,25956|0,26114|3,26272|1,26272|4,26430|2) - 小X啊.这种动次打次动次打次要摆的更变化性一点.....

5K Another
难图我不会摸的说.... :o

好次的MOD..... :cry:
Critical_Star
Hi XP
只是建议 lol
摸了5K 图 XD

AI Mod = OD 8

5K NORMAL
01:17:903 加1个? (kick)
01:22:167 加2个? (建议抓大音)
01:22:325 减2个 (如果抓大音)
01:22:403 加2个 (如果抓大音)
01:22:640 加1个? (kick)



5K HYPER
00:02:588 加1个? (大音)
00:42:693 加1个? (因为 00:41:746 / 00:42:061 / 00:42:377 也有2个)
00:43:482 加1个? (有音)
01:02:903 加1个? (因为 01:02:588 / 01:02:272 / 01:01:956 也有2个)
01:22:325 减1个? (小音)
01:22:403 加1个?(大音应该在这里)

5K ANOTHER
00:43:482 加1个? (有音)

xeona哥好运~ XD[/quote]
Topic Starter
Marirose
fixed offset,applied mods
Topic Starter
Marirose
updated
-LASU-
hi-

|1|2|3|4|5|,|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

5K
5K Normal
00:31:325 (31325|4,31325|0) - 1notes remove (Hyper diff 1notes)
01:12:693 - add note 5

5K Hyper
00:59:903 - add note 3
01:03:061 (63061|0,63140|1) - move to 2,3
01:19:640 - add note 4
01:26:588 - add note 1
01:41:746 - add note 5
01:07:798 (67798|3) - move to 3
01:08:114 (68114|3) - ^

5K Another
00:01:956 - add note 5
00:14:272 - add note 3
00:16:482 - ^
00:46:798 - add note 1
00:55:798 - add note 3
00:58:009 - add note 2

8K
victorica's 8K LV.6
00:20:114 - add note 8 ?

victorica's 8K LV.9
00:55:640 - add note 3 (LV.6 2notes)
01:26:114 - add note
01:26:588 - ^
01:41:272 - add note 2 or 3
01:45:219 - add double note 1,3

victorica's 8K LV.12
00:20:903 - add note
00:21:851 - ^
00:31:798 - add double note
00:32:903 - add note
00:48:061 - add note 7
01:26:035 - add note
01:26:509 - ^
01:31:561 - ^
01:34:088 - ^
01:36:851 - ^
01:43:798 - add note
good luck
Frim4503
as requested from
col : 1,2,3,4
maybe it will be good if you change all name dif into level (ex: 5k Lv.5)
5k Normal
00:48:061 - add note (like the previous patern)
01:12:851 (72851|2) - move to 2
01:13:009 (73009|1) - ^ 3
01:28:482 (88482|1) - ^ 4
8k lv. 6
try to resize the BG

8k lv. 9
try to resize the BG

8k lv. 12
try to resize the BG

good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Marirose
applied lasu and frim;s mod,updated! :)
Arzenvald
lemme re-check later rather than copying old post.. my old mod was cancer LOL.. dw dw

[5K Normal]
00:53:114 (53114|4,53114|0,53746|3,54377|1,55009|0,55640|4) - ctrl + H, follow the pitch more accurate?

01:21:219 - 01:21:693 - 01:22:167 - 01:22:640 add something here, it just feels not right because it's climatic, but it's so emtpy..

starts from the kiai, i feels the pattern doesn't coincident with the music.. to make it more flowwy, just layer the 3/4 beat synthesizer, and ignore the percussion..

01:25:798 (85798|2) - remove
01:26:588 (86588|0) - move 1/4 below
01:28:482 (88482|1,88798|2,89114|3,89272|1,89430|4,89588|0,89746|2) - http://puu.sh/fmNzH.png
01:36:061 (96061|1) - move 1/4 above
01:36:693 (96693|2) - move 1/4 below
01:38:588 (98588|4) - move 1/4 above
01:41:746 (101746|0) - 1/4 below
01:43:956 (103956|1) - 1/4 below

01:44:903 (104903|1,105140|1,105377|3,105535|1,105772|1,106009|3) - something like this, the beat fits well with the synth..

[5K Hyper]
the gap is big from normal to hyper.. the object amount gap is like doubled on 5K to hyper..
so consider to make the hyper more easier & less denser

00:25:009 (25009|1,25009|0,25167|3) - move this to right, the rhythm on the anchors 00:22:956 (22956|1,23272|1,23588|1) - is kinda out on 8th beat..

00:29:114 (29114|3) - to 3, and 00:29:272 (29272|1,29430|3,29430|4,29588|2,29746|0) - ctrl + H, so the rhythm is like right right left left (per 2 beat)

00:30:693 (30693|1) - to 5

00:31:009 (31009|1,31167|4,31167|0) - this notes has same sound, consider to make it has same amount of notes (like 3 3)

ooo nice layering in this 00:43:009 (43009|4) - phase.. how bout adding x0.90 sv for slow down moment, 01:01:956 (61956|4) - x0.95, and 01:03:219 (63219|4) - back to x1.00

[5K Another]
01:13:403 (73403|3) - move to 3 to prevent 1/2 jack

00:22:719 (22719|3,22798|0) - perhaps ctrl + J to follow previous stream pattern.. also judged more well

00:47:982 add on 5, and 00:48:061 (48061|4) - move to 3?

01:07:798 (67798|4,67877|1) - add some 'another' taste, by turning this to simple jack, and this one 01:08:114 (68114|1,68193|3) - too

01:27:272 (87272|0) - ^

welp, same as hyper, the layering is so nice at last kiai.. =w=)b

[Overall]
the issue itself found in the diff gap, i believe you can manage it to make the diff gap more smooth...
xD and seems like my old mod wasn't that cancer-ish.. hahah mari m4m my map qq
Topic Starter
Marirose
updated :)
pocket-Gao


5KNormal 根本看不出问题....

5K Hyper
00:32:903 (32903|4) - 前面的颤音(这称呼没错吧..)在这时间点中断 这也没明显的鼓点音 所以...还用2个note...?
00:50:272 - 这里建议摆成类似00:52:798 (52798|1,52877|3,52956|1,53035|3) - or 00:55:325 (55325|1,55403|3,55482|0,55561|3) - 的打击感觉(嗯 只是建议)
01:22:167 - 额看了后面的摆法 这里应该是两个note吧

5K Another
HP建议8.5

00:10:956 (10956|3,11114|3,11272|3) - 这三个音第一个音和后面都不一样 为啥都同轨道..
00:17:114 (17114|1) - 个人感觉换个位置好点 对应和手感上..都感觉怪怪的 和 00:19:640 -这前后有种不符的感觉(但愿是我多想
00:20:903 (20903|0,20903|4,20943|1,20982|2,21022|3,21061|4,21377|0,21417|1,21456|2,21496|3) - 说实话你不要因为那张图的原因就彻底对hs这样啊....用whistle真的很别扭;w;
00:22:088 (22088|3) - 到这里全是|3|4|交替太87了 也太损手感(?) 建议有1个note换下位置
00:41:667 - 这里突然中断 然后进入爆发段会不会很奇怪(我打不动不清楚..
00:43:482 (43482|1) - 这个细音抓了 那 00:58:325 这些细音为啥不抓。。
01:24:693 - 这段开头打起来更爽
然后没了(

8K column : |S|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
8k lV.6
00:20:272 - 漏音
01:08:114 (68114|1) - 这音并不是与前面的音呈音调越来越高 有点转折的感觉
01:19:640 - 这些盘该抓的还是抓了吧 优先考虑的不是star
01:25:640 - 这里加个鼓点的音打起来感觉会好点
01:26:509 - 这里是故意漏的吗...
01:29:114 (89114|6) - 个人觉得摆|S|好
01:35:272 (95272|3,95272|1) - 为啥轨道跑到|1|3|了。。

8K Lv.9
相比起 01:25:956 - ,这里 00:02:588 (2588|1,2588|6,2588|3) - 和 00:32:903 (32903|1,32903|5,32903|7) - 是不是有点overnote了
00:13:640 (13640|0) - 00:22:325 (22325|0) - 这抓啥...
01:25:956 - 这里最好加note
01:45:851 - 还是抓吧

8K Lv.12
00:01:640 (1640|3,1640|1) - 一个clap就够了吧...两个的话和小x一样大声了
woc这盘子兼职杀人
00:22:482 - 4个太over了
01:03:693 (63693|5) - 前后音还是有区别的 建议换个位置
01:30:061 (90061|0) - 这个如果把hs去掉我就不知抓哪个了... 后面也有些类似的没抓
01:35:588 (95588|1) - 建议|2| 与前面一样 也和 01:35:588 (95588|4,95746|3,95746|5,95903|6,95903|4) - 从高音到低音

啊...再自删一次吧
stryver12
Moar 8K!!!

[8K Another]
00:24:298 - Add note? (melody)
00:32:825 - ^ (kick)
01:13:798 (73798|7,74272|7,74746|7,75219|5,75535|7,75851|7,76325|7,76798|7,77272|4,80903|5) - I recommend putting this to scratch lane? (Since it's Another diff)
01:21:535 - Add note? (cymbal)
01:23:114 (83114|2) - Put to scratch lane?
01:25:640 (85640|5) - Remove clap, and add one note for it
01:29:746 (89746|1) - Remove finish, add one note for it
Consider 01:29:746 (89746|7) - for kick sound (add whistle, remove whistle from 01:29:746 (89746|1) since this one is for ascending melody)
01:30:693 - add note? (cymbal)

[8K Hyper]
00:28:798 (28798|2,29430|3,30061|1,30693|1,31325|1) - 2 hitsounds in one note is unrankable (I guess)
* I know it's because this part are for melody, but.....
01:04:167 - add note? (melody)
01:04:640 - ^
01:05:114 - ^
01:05:430 - ^
01:06:693 - ^
01:07:167 - ^
01:09:219, 01:09:693, 01:10:167, 01:10:482, 01:10:798, 01:11:746, 01:12:219, 01:12:377, 01:12:535 - ^
01:13:798 (73798|7,74272|7,74746|7,75219|7,75535|7,75851|7,76325|7,76798|7,77272|7,77746|7) - 2 hitsounds in one note (unrankable?)
01:20:903 (80903|1) - remove finish, add one note for it

[8K Normal]
00:23:114 (23114|5,23746|5,24377|5,25009|5,25640|1,26272|1,28167|5,28798|5,29430|5,30061|5,30693|5,31325|5) -
you have one note made for clap, then hitsound it with clap.....
00:33:219 (33219|7,33851|3,34482|3,35114|3,35746|3) - ^
00:37:956 (37956|5) - remove?
00:39:219 (39219|3) - remove finish, add one note for it
01:21:377 (81377|0,81377|7) - wrong snap, move to 01:21:535 (unless I hear it wrong....)

Nice one :), but too many notes with 2 hitsounds... (there are some that I don't mention, try fix it yourself)
If 2 hitsound in 1 note is rankable, then ignore some if you think it will make it harder. (but not the whistle+finish, because every finish deserve one independent note!)
Topic Starter
Marirose
5K updated
Topic Starter
Marirose

pocket-Gao wrote:



5KNormal 根本看不出问题....

5K Hyper
00:32:903 (32903|4) - 前面的颤音(这称呼没错吧..)在这时间点中断 这也没明显的鼓点音 所以...还用2个note...? 如果我抓颤音的话,00:32:272 - 也要加了,所以我这里抓的是鼓点
00:50:272 - 这里建议摆成类似00:52:798 (52798|1,52877|3,52956|1,53035|3) - or 00:55:325 (55325|1,55403|3,55482|0,55561|3) - 的打击感觉(嗯 只是建议) 会卡手的
01:22:167 - 额看了后面的摆法 这里应该是两个note吧 省略

5K Another
HP建议8.5 采用

00:10:956 (10956|3,11114|3,11272|3) - 这三个音第一个音和后面都不一样 为啥都同轨道.. 已修改
00:17:114 (17114|1) - 个人感觉换个位置好点 对应和手感上..都感觉怪怪的 和 00:19:640 -这前后有种不符的感觉(但愿是我多想 修改了
00:20:903 (20903|0,20903|4,20943|1,20982|2,21022|3,21061|4,21377|0,21417|1,21456|2,21496|3) - 说实话你不要因为那张图的原因就彻底对hs这样啊....用whistle真的很别扭;w; 性药的锅(笑
00:22:088 (22088|3) - 到这里全是|3|4|交替太87了 也太损手感(?) 建议有1个note换下位置
00:41:667 - 这里突然中断 然后进入爆发段会不会很奇怪(我打不动不清楚..
00:43:482 (43482|1) - 这个细音抓了 那 00:58:325 这些细音为啥不抓。。00:43:482 (43482|1) - 是hithat
01:24:693 - 这段开头打起来更爽
然后没了(


啊...再自删一次吧
感谢小高摸 ;)
Topic Starter
Marirose
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Kamikaze
Just passing by, easiest 8K diff is 2,23* and it has to be below 2* otherwise it's unrankable
Topic Starter
Marirose

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Just passing by, easiest 8K diff is 2,23* and it has to be below 2* otherwise it's unrankable
thanks for reminding :)
Akasha-
8284 vs wa. - Adularescence [OsuMania]


[Generals]
  1. BPM: Good
  2. Offset: Good
  3. Snapping Conflicts: Good
  4. AiMod: Good
  5. Preview Time: Good
  6. Hitsound: Good
  7. Folder's Problems: None
  8. Timing: Great
  9. Tags: Sound Good
  10. Metadata: Fine
  11. Kiai: Great
  12. BG: Good
Since all things are fixed w/ lets go for bubble, no problems appears

Bubbled

Congratulation on the bubble, Marirose and victorica_db <3 ~ Great map with good song ~ Good luck on Qualification
stryver12
Plz no more "bye"....
I love the 8k mapset...
shionelove
quick check and Qfed congraz
stryver12
gz victorica & marirose !!!

but the 8k normal diff...
01:21:377 (81377|0,81377|7) - still bothers me, because there's no cymbal there
Topic Starter
Marirose

stryver12 wrote:

gz victorica & marirose !!!

but the 8k normal diff...
01:21:377 (81377|0,81377|7) - still bothers me, because there's no cymbal there
turntable not always for cymbal,bro :D
Sky_Demon
高產大法好
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