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- 00:35:012 (5,6,7) - NC these three because of the timing of note change and plus it keeps things easier to read.
- 00:11:644 (1,2) - The first note should be further apart from the stream since this is rather the only time in this section where it's rather super close, but the same rhythm. Gameplay wise it also feels a bit awkward having to move from the previous slider end to that note (since it's decently-short spaced between), but then suddenly have it all super closed up.
- 00:19:539 (2) - This should be moved slightly more diagonally-upwards right to even it out between 00:19:223 (1) - and 00:19:854 (3) - upcoming streams.
- 00:35:644 (1,3) - Just a small suggestion but I would CTRL+G these two and then move 00:36:591 (4) - where it's stacked on top of 00:35:486 (7) - like so:
- 00:41:644 (1) - This slowed 3/4th slider here concerns me in that a player is prone to break here easily because it's leniency circle doesn't lead into 00:41:960 (1) - Also, 01:01:854 (1,1) - this here is fine so for kind of consistency sake you should have the aforementioned slow slider look like this:
- 00:47:960 (1) - Remove NC here and then 00:48:275 (4) - NC this. 00:52:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You did it correctly here.
- 00:49:381 (1) - NC unneeded
- 00:56:960 (4) - This isn't completely lined up to 00:56:644 (2) - so you either you do line it up or I suggest move it to x:176, y:168.
- 01:27:118 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 notes have a different DS out of the entire stream and it just feels off. Like your hitsound volume changes at 01:26:644 (3) - this note, which I have no idea why at that note .-. but it fits more to be on this 01:26:802 (1) - note and in this case I would have the DS of these 01:26:802 (1,2,3,4) - be the same as the last 4. You did it on here 01:36:907 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). Maybe have it look like this:
- 01:37:539 (5) - NC
- 01:38:486 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - I would slight move these slightly to the right so you would have more of a diagonal snap feel between 01:38:328 (4,5) -
- 01:42:591 (1,2) - This and 01:43:065 (3,4) - this should be the same since the spacing between 3 and 4 are not the same. Copy and Paste 01:42:591 (1,2) - and then CTRL+G then CTRL+H ~ have the slider on that be at the same exact place before.
- 01:43:539 (5) - I would have this at x:306,y:308 because it would look a lot nicer if it's lined up to 01:42:591 (1) -
- 01:48:118 (5,6,7) - These three particular stick out of the whole flow from the singletap+triples, so I'd have it look like this
- 01:56:960 (3,4) - Why the little small jump here? The tempo is the same as 01:57:118 (4,5) - and the spacing between these two are short.
- 01:58:223 (3,4) - Jump between these two is rather big so in-gameplay you should have a player have the same feeling between 01:58:854 (6,1) -
- 01:59:960 (5,6) - These should be like 01:59:328 (2,3) - so copy/paste it and then CTRL+G then move it back to where it was. 02:00:276 (1) - This would be rather close to the previous note after you do this so I suggest moving it at x:348,y:44.
- 02:00:907 (6,7,8) - NC these three because of the timing of note change and plus it keeps things easier to read.
- 02:15:907 (3,4,5) - Just me but I would have this line up with 02:16:223 (6) -
- 02:22:381 (5) - This slider placement is weird mainly because of its angle it's facing to the next note. Have it move slightly to the left.
- 02:24:591 (5) - NC this because you followed it 02:14:486 (1) - here as well.
- 02:33:433 (2,3,4) - Just me, but I would move this triplet slightly diagonally-upward to the left.
- 02:44:960 (3,4) - Distance between these should be the same as 02:44:486 (1,2) -
- 02:56:881 (4) - NC and then 02:56:960 (1) - Remove NC. This helps in reading and differentiating the fact that 02:56:644 (1,2,3) - this is a triplet would then allow to stream downwards more comfortably.
- 03:16:065 (2) - NC
- 04:19:223 (4) - ^
- 04:48:591 (5) - For consistency sake, NC this and then 04:49:854 (5) - this. You did this to 04:58:697 (1,2,3) - and 04:59:960 (1,2,3) - as well.
- 05:19:539 (1) - NC this due to because 05:20:802 (5) - it follows this combo color.
- 05:29:170 (3,4) - This isn't the same spacing between 05:28:697 (1,2) - these two.
- 05:37:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This stream isn't following anything, but the vocals. Your streams have been following the drums before, so either remove this or extend the stream to about 05:38:486 (3) - the tick at which this note is at.