"Niva"
[Insane]
->Apply Tick Rate 2 as well? Never mind this, just saw your reply above ._.
-> Err, why is the Kiai Time (which is present in Expert) missing here o.o
i think you had an old version of the diff
-> Refer to the Kiai Time issue mentioned in above Insane? o.o
all fixed 10 years ago lel
-> It would feel a lot nicer though imo if the break part is mapped as well considering the other diffs did the same thing as well - this is just a personal view though, as the current break isn't used in an abrupt fashion or so (:
not sure what Arphi will say, but imo it's a good thing to make a little break for beginners. but well, 1 minute song anyway... so idk. Arph will decide if he wants to map more
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-> Err, why is the Kiai Time (which is present in Expert) missing here o.o
i think you had an old version of the diff
- 00:04:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider using manual stacking here perhaps? It avoids unwanted overlap though (plus somehow it fits the dubstep synth's progression, imo)
? - 00:08:985 (4) - Small suggestion here, perhaps consider to let this encircle (5)'s end for aesthetics?
the idea was to fit style of (3) - 00:10:235 (1,2) - I personally feel this jump is not wide enough to emphasize the dubstep here and to be honest it feels quite tricky here because the in a slight glance it looks like a 3/4 or a 1/1 imo... Widening the jump should give more intuitivity here though, like this for example :
changed - 00:13:735 (6) - Another small suggestion here, but perhaps make the slider's second half curved slightly downward to let this slider carry more flow from (5)?
i tried to fix it by a few pixels but i dont wanna ruin the slider shape so yeah - 00:19:485 (6,7,8,9) - Umm, why not make these four equally spaced (by moving (6)'s start to ~y:220, for example) o.o? I get the point of the jump here but the 'spacing inequality' here feels awkward somehow imo...
i get your point. the intention was to make these 00:19:235 (5,6,7) - jumpy. like, the two circles after the slider don't belong to this pattern. i moved (6) a bit to make spacing equal between 5-6-7 instead of 6-7-8-9 (to distinguish the pattern more clearly) - 00:23:485 (7,8,1) - Consider applying a 120-degrees rotation pattern here? Your current pattern is actually fine but this way you'll get a triangle between (7,8,1)'s head which plays more natural alongside an arguably much better flow from (8) to (1)
i think i did it - 00:26:485 (3) - Consider making this slider 00:26:985 (6)'s exact mirror perhaps shape-wise?
done - 00:27:985 (10,2) - Perhaps try to make another circular pattern here considering you've beautifully done so in 00:27:235 (7,8,9)? (:
dont, but in a different way - 00:30:735 (3,4) - Convert these two into a single slider? There's a really good flow building up from (1,2)'s placement, and a simple slider placement like this greatly continues the flow and adds much more fun here imo, really~
it would be too much of sliders in a row :c and i intentionally break the flow at 00:30:985 (5) - to compliment the music - 00:32:985 (4) - CTRL + G for flow?
okay - 00:39:485 (9,10,11) - Really minor suggestion here, consider curving these slightly upward / downward for aesthetics?
yes please - 00:47:235 (4) - Minor stuff here but this object's not equally spaced between (3)'s end and (5) - not really a big issue, but it's worth pointing out that you can get this to equally space both (3,4,5) and (3,4,6) :
i wanted to make the spacing equal between (4) and (3)'s start and between (2)'s and (3)'s ends. it's visually more noticable thus more important for me - 00:54:235 (1) - Stack atop of (2), or place this elsewhere further so that a jump is made? This downbeat sound here is the one which should be emphasized though (not the (2)), so that it would feel a lot more natural if the jump is made between (9,1) instead of (1,2)
yes - 01:02:235 (1) - Same as Expert
- 01:10:235 (1) - Same as Expert
as i replied before, i changed this in all diffs after the first mod
-> Refer to the Kiai Time issue mentioned in above Insane? o.o
all fixed 10 years ago lel
- 00:04:235 (1,3,1) - Consider adding soft-hitwhistle to some of all of these three sliders' end perhaps? Having modded the harder difficulty earlier it feels quite empty hearing this part's hitsound though imo ._.
good one - 00:06:985 (2,3) - Minor issue but (3) isn't perfectly in the center of (2) - in this case I think you can just move this to ~x:239 y:251 regardless of the distance snap (it's not noticeable at all while playing, don't worry) to fix this issue
used approach circle to fix it. also the spacing 1-2-3 was uneven, fix that too - 00:11:235 (4) - Small suggestion here, perhaps consider shaping this slider like this to confer more flow from the previous (3) :
no way. i never use such shapes and 3 totally fits 4 (i often use these mirrored straight things) - 00:15:735 (4,5) - Perhaps CTRL+G these two so that (5,1) will get a more emphasizing jump (aside from getting a really good pseudo-circular movement around (3,4,5,1)?
i prefer vertical movements here. and also i want (5) to be dropped down to (1). i mean, the flow... (5) is on the same curve as (1)'s shape suggests. the cursor kinda drops down from 5 to 1 - 00:17:735 (6) - Break this apart to a 1/1 slider + circle? Here it feels quite weird somehow considering your previously used rhythm on 00:09:735 (5) o.o
aren't they the same? those rhythms are the same except i added a note at 00:17:610 - to bring variety etc - 00:28:985 (3) - CTRL + G perhaps?
nah, this is a pattern like this one 00:24:735 (2,3,4) - - 00:32:235 (1) - Small suggestion here, perhaps stack this slider's end to 00:30:985 (4) - for beauty?
okay - 00:34:235 (1,2) - (1) should be located around ~x:359 y:370 if your intention is to let the previous (5) to encircle this note - also it's worth noting though that you can slightly curve these two for an extra accent if you wish~
it wasnt the intention, but now i encircled it, nice idea - 00:38:235 (1) - Alter this into a repeating slider perhaps, considering you've used a repeating slider previously on 00:34:235 (1)?
yes yes yes - 00:51:235 (3,4,1,2) - Albeit readable I personally found that this spacing here is quite unexpected, really - I think it'll be a lot more intuitive if (3,4,1) is made equally spaced instead (:
okay and also fixed in a similar spot earlier (00:43:985 - ) - 00:56:735 (2,3) - Again with the slight curve suggestion for accent here - also perhaps try spacing out (2,3) more so this part looks more spacious?
okay added a curve - 01:01:485 (6,7) - I personally feel the rhythm-of-choice here to be quite strange, I don't know but I really feel like this one's coming out of nowhere (can't really decide whether the emphasize here is the Bangarang one or the Renai Circulation's melody) - adding a circle at 01:01:360 should improve this part's rhythm intuitivity a lot imo...
as for me, this fits both skrillex and renai parts. i can easily hear it fitting. idk, maybe it's just personal - 01:08:235 (1,2,3) - Minor suggestion here, perhaps make (1)'s start, (2)'s end, and (3)'s start equally spaced here for aesthetics
this pattern changed totally, i don't have a slider at (2) anymore
-> It would feel a lot nicer though imo if the break part is mapped as well considering the other diffs did the same thing as well - this is just a personal view though, as the current break isn't used in an abrupt fashion or so (:
not sure what Arphi will say, but imo it's a good thing to make a little break for beginners. but well, 1 minute song anyway... so idk. Arph will decide if he wants to map more
Big thanks for you again mister Niva Love