Hi! This song is pretty chill, so let's just get down to business shall we?
You got that skin thingy going on here huh? It looks nice.
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You got that skin thingy going on here huh? It looks nice.
Beginner
- 00:11:284 (1,3) - These could be shaped like this to look nicer:
- 00:29:284 (1,1) - These two also can be shaped nicer:
- 00:41:284 (5) - This can be shaped as a S shape; although remember to keep to the DS.
- 01:17:284 (1) - Hm? This is weirdly shaped. Maybe you could have this? :
- 01:21:784 (2,3) - The flow with these two could be better. Although you might need to adjust a little to compensate for DS.
- 01:26:284 (1) - Could be shaped as such:
- 01:34:534 (5) - This elbow isn't obvious enough to the eye.
Advanced
- 00:14:284 (1) - You'd have to adjust this a bit to partially blanket the other note. Like so:
- 00:16:346 (4,5) - The spacing with these two do not corroborate with 00:13:909 (6,7) and 00:11:846 (2,3), which are both leading notes up to a slider.
- 00:18:034 (2,3,4) - The general flow of this is awkward. Maybe have the hump of the slider face the other way.
- 00:21:409 (4,5,6) - The cursor curves straight up, but then has to stop and awkwardly move to the right. This might not a be a huge problem for such a SV, but with higher difficulties the awkwardness will come up. I strongly suggest fixing this at it's foundation before moving up on the difficulty ladder Take note that if there are other such cases, I will indicate a & and spell out how the cursor would move.
- 00:23:284 (1,2) - & The cursor expects to go downwards but is forced to move upwards.
- 00:24:784 (5,6) - &The cursor expects to move downwards at an angle but is forced to go straight up to catch the next note.
- 00:25:909 (7,8) - These two notes don't actually follow up to the slider nicely. Here's how I suggest it could be:
- 00:28:159 (5,6,7) - The notes don't complement the slider well. Have the slider hump face the other way and it should look better.
- 00:40:534 (4,5,6) - Number 5 is a bit out of place.
- 00:41:284 (1) - This slider shape should copy the one here 00:42:784 (4)
- 00:50:284 (1) - Nice wobble
- 01:52:159 (5,6,7) - These two also don't complement the slider well. Try having them face the general direction of the slider.
Challenging
- 01:26:284 (1,3,5,6) - The sliders aren't exactly stacked below these notes.
- The long whistle at the end actually ends at 02:26:659 (2), so the slider should be a little longer. I made a little loop with a nice water droplet hole, so maybe you could do this?
Overall
- I liked how the map had it's own kind of essence to complement the song. I especially liked playing the challenging difficulty; it was fun to single tap to.
- If this is for rank, then Good Luck with Rank! Hoped my mod helped!