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Cool Joke - UNDO

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 13, 2010 at 9:12:01 PM

Artist: Cool Joke
Title: UNDO
Source: Fullmetal Alchemist
Tags: Starrodkirby86
BPM: 171
Filesize: 9896kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.85 stars, 577 notes)
  2. Kirby's Hard (4.97 stars, 533 notes)
  3. Normal (2.75 stars, 165 notes)
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Yeah................
Last edited by ztrot , edited 56 times in total.
UFO Donut
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Joined September 2008
UFO Donut
as i told you on chat, the lyrics of this song are awesome maybe you should storyboard-subb it
you can also add a kiai time
looking forward
Daru
osu!painter
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Joined August 2008
Daru
Here are the sprites you asked for. :)

V V V

Download: sprites.zip
Takuma
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Takuma
☆
Easy:
  1. 00:39:79 (1,2,3) - 1 level 3 grid right
  2. 00:41:19 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:30 (2,3,4) - 1 level 3 grid down
  4. 00:49:26 (2,3) - 1 level 3 grid up
  5. 01:08:56 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1 level 3 grid right
  6. 01:40:14 (2) - 1 level 3 grid down
  7. 01:42:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 level 3 grid up
  8. 01:53:47 (4,5) - 1 level 3 grid up
Normal:
  1. 01:51:72 (4) - align with 01:52:07 (5)
  2. 02:34:53 (8) - align with 02:34:88 (9)
  3. 02:43:30 (7) - not properly stacked with 02:41:89 (5); 1 level 3 grid up
  4. 02:45:40 (3,4,5) - align with 02:44:70 (1)
  5. 02:51:02 (2,3,4) - 1 level 3 grid down
  6. 02:51:72 (5) - ^
  7. 03:01:02 (4,5) - 1 level 3 grid up
  8. 03:01:54 (6) - ^
Nothing major here; nice/fun map.
Last edited by Takuma , edited 1 time in total.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Easy
This is gonna need hitsounds too
00:41:90 (1) - This note kinda feels randomly placed, it doesn't really fit a pattern here.
01:02:77 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda messy looking, and 4 is too close
01:17:69 (3) - Can you centre this between 1 and 2? For symmetry's sake ^_^
01:36:11 (1,1) - I believe one of the hardest things to learn when you first start playing osu! is recovering quickly after spinners. The players who play at this difficulty level I believe will have problems hitting the note after the spinner, it's only 1 beat away. Personally I would shorten the spinner to the previous white tick and delete 1.
01:40:145 - KIAI TIIIME
01:46:46 (4) - Nudge this up so it lines up with 2

Normal
01:18:21 (5,6) - Reverse these? *suggestion*
02:14:18 (1) - New combo
02:15:23 (3) - Remove New Combo
02:16:63 (1) - New combo
02:50:233 - KAIA TIIIIME
02:50:32 (1) - New combo (for epicness)
03:07:163 - end kiai time, and maybe soft sampleset?
03:07:86 (4) - new combo if you switch samplesets
03:18:215 - back to normal sampleset if you switch

I didn't really notice any hitsounds, maybe add more whistles/claps?
OK, I mistook the custom sounds for the actual song :P mah bad. Nontheless, I still think this map would benefit from more claps and whistles..

starr
Daru
osu!painter
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Daru
Moar sprites!
(DP intentional)

Download: Desktop.zip
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
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Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Starrodkirby86
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And here you go. My difficulty.

Originally on Normal hit circles it's 11mil, but I made them a little bit larger to make it 9mil. Enjoy...xD

Download: Cool Joke - Undo (ztrot) [KIRBY Mix].osu
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
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Starrodkirby86
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Slider whistle is because there's an absence of normal-sliderwhistle.wav . ztrot needs to change that. :P

I'll correct the rest and edit this post.

New version up.

Download: Cool Joke - Undo (ztrot) [KIRBY Mix].osu
Starrodkirby86
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Here's the beatmaps with new sounds...

I also added in a Lead-in time of 2 seconds...and did some minor changes...Erm, yeah. ^^

Good luck.

Download: Cool Joke - Undo (ztrot) [Easy].osu

Download: Cool Joke - Undo (ztrot) [Normal].osu
ToRMeNToR_84
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ToRMeNToR_84
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
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About the claps...
They aren't of ztrot's doing, but I helped him with the hitsounds. I tried to make it sound similiar to my difficulty within consistency, but I don't know if I made it win or fail. But you can always replace the Clap sound effect if it's too much of a hassle to change. :P

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ToRMeNToR_84
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Joined May 2008
ToRMeNToR_84
I forgot to mention how clean the skin looks. I like it. Much better than a lot of skins I've seen in the past on other maps. Love the spinner and all.

I forgot to star your map, that's the reason for my post mostly.

So have you checked some stuff out yet?
Mashley
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Joined September 2008
Mashley
Like the skin
Try offset 8824, before this point may need a different offset. Snap all notes after doing this.
Some notes patterns are a bit ugly but otherwise c'est bon. Starred!
Nachy
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Nachy
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Dean
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Dean
Good map, I can't really see anything wrong.
For Easy, though, the claps sound off on 01:08:91 (4), but I'm no expert and sorry if I'm wrong.
+Star.
Starrodkirby86
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Graved by request :(


Get it ranked sometime...maybe a remap? :(
Shinde
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Shinde
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Cool Joke - Undo Hitsplashes.rar
PicoLo
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Joined July 2009
PicoLo
Fullmetal alchemist. ^^
~Star. ;)
CrazyBanana
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Joined January 2009
CrazyBanana
Star :D
ztrot
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ztrot
bringing it back
Lybydose
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Lybydose
Offset 8,905 works a lot better for me, which is +19ms from what you had before.

As for that opening part: using a separate timing section at 3,140 offset sounds and plays fine to me, but I'm not 100% sure. If you want to keep that section, that seems like it will work just fine though.

Keep the BPM at 171.00 for both.

Also haha, really easy older style KIRBY mix :o
Sakura
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Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion

[Normal]
No preview point set
01:35:903 (1) - This note is kind of pointless, maybe delete and extend the spinner to this note?
01:57:482 (4,5) - Sounds weird Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7379
01:58:008 (x) - Add a note here
01:58:184 (x) - Add a slider here, remove (1) and end the slider on: 01:58:359
01:58:886 (2) - Move back to white tick
01:59:061 (x) - Add note
01:59:236 (x) - Add note
01:59:412 (5) - Remove
02:00:289 (6) - Move back to white tick
Not completely mapped, the other diffs are more mapped, make the mapping consistent across all difficulties

[Hard]
Preview point not set

[KIRBY Mix]
Preview point not set

God took me forever to mod this, yeah i know i sux... anyways i would need a reply regarding all this stuff before i can +Star, Good Luck! ~
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami

ztrot wrote:

bringing it back
Bring it all back to you!~
arien666
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arien666
[General]
No preview time is not good idea ;_;

[Normal]
00:16:448 (2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:17:326 (1,2,3) - Maybe, making same as 00:15:922 (1,2,3) will be better :3
00:58:378 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move '2nd grey tick' little left so that makes symmetric?
01:18:378 (4) - How about move 2 grid left?
01:46:448 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

[Insane]
00:19:694 (8,9) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:42:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - [Suggestion] Maybe, making symmetric via x-axis would be better imo ;_; [Even 1 grid things]
00:45:396 (1) - [Suggestion] How about align with start and reverse mark?
00:56:273 (3) - How about move 1 grid down?
01:59:606 (11,12) - How about move 1 grid up?
02:14:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same suggestion as 00:42:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:16:624 (1) - [Suggestion] How about align with start and reverse mark?
02:27:501 (3) - How about move 1 grid up?
03:15:922 (2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

[Kirby's Hard]
Why does Hard have more 'Star Rating' than Insane???< No problem on map anyway
02:11:010 (1) - How about move '2nd grey tick' 1 grid up to make this symmetric?
02:12:413 (1) - ^ But down
02:16:624 (1) - ^ down
02:18:027 (1) - ^ up
02:25:045 (1) - [Suggestion] How about align with both start and end?
02:25:747 (2) - ^



Auu...
Pizza is good ;_;

Anyway, good luck for your another song, ztrot :3



ps. Boring sunday Kudo Star bonus orz
NoHitter
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NoHitter
General
Please set preview points. I suggest: 01:39:431
Remove cool joke undo and add Starrodkirby86 (not just SRK...) to Tags
Also why is Kirby's Hard harder than insane? Kirby's diff give a less score than Insane...

Normal
01:01:185 (1) - Too close to the spinner
01:39:782 (1) - ^
Well some notes feel oddly placed especially those in the offbeats

Kirby's Hard
03:06:448 - 03:17:326 is 1/2 bpm

Edit: I think the title is UNDO not Undo
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Mystearica
Mystearica
I like your new style.
orioncomet
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orioncomet
Just some suggestions.

[General]
- the first offset is different.. only 1ms tho >.<; Fix offset on Normal to 3,140
- deleted "Fullmetal Alchemist undo cool joke" from your tag?
- delete .osb file?

star ~
Gens
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Gens
Hmm, seems like you haven't fixed some stuff~ just leaving here that some skin stuff is unneeded and some elements are missing, like approachcircle. The combobursts cannot be more than 500px in width etc.

Will probably do a full mod once you fix this~ (lazy mod post)
ztrot
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Topic Starter
ztrot
I removed the approach circle by request everything else is fixed
Leeg
290 posts
Joined March 2009
Leeg
Hi. A few suggestions if you don't like them don't use them D:
[General]
I think 1 second-lead in is better than 2 here.

[Normal] >_> map the whole song as you did in [Insane], don't be so lazy!!
00:18:729 (4) - Distance snap this. :S
00:25:045- Consider adding a slider 00:25:396 -
00:48:203 - Add a beat here? (finish sound)
00:51:010 - Add repeat.
01:02:764 (1,2,3,4) - This is not distance-snaped but it plays ok :)
01:10:659 - Make it a slider that ends in the next white tick
01:46:448 (4) - Distance Snap this.
01:57:501 (4) - Distance SNAP it or...
01:57:501 (4) - Move it to the white tick <<<<<.
01:58:904 (2) - ^
02:00:308 (5) - Distance snap it.

[Insane]
16m score!?! O_O... If I were you I would remove some streams, I really think they don't fit the song at all.
03:30:308 (3) - distance snap

I can't find more things wrong here... maybe because I'm not good at modding insanes D:

[Kirby's hard]
Rename it to Kirby's Insane (¬¬'')
02:22:764 (4,5,6) - Distance snap this.
02:24:343 (4,5,6) - Distance snap this.
03:02:062 (4) - Distance snap it
03:03:466 (4) - Distance snap it.


Can't find more things. Star!
ouranhshc
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Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Insane
00:36:624 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:799 (2) - new combo (questionalble)
00:37:326 (1) - remove new combo(questionable)
01:59:782 (12) - new combo
03:02:238 (3,5,8) - line it up with (2)
03:02:589 (4,6,7) - line it up with (1)
03:12:764 (5) - 1 grid up
03:28:904 (8) - new combo
03:29:606 (1) - remove new combo

Normal
01:02:238 (4) - new combo
01:02:764 (1) - remove new combo

Hard
im not too crazy about the underlapping (is that even a word) and overlapping stuff
-Xero-
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-Xero-
Add tags: full metal fma
star!
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Old map needs help ><
I see stuff that you didn't change from older mods
Like the tags and lead-in suggestions~
Maybe add an (default) approachcircle skin

Normal-
Could be nazi'ed more... a lot more, oh well.
I'd also say finish mapping this diff the whole way through... I can't make you though
(remember when I asked you about the difference between scores for a 4min map, and you said have the mapper map whole thing, assuming that they only mapped half way..? yea... I'm using what you said against you... (700k to 9/16mil?)) map whole thing please :<~

Insane- 16mil? uhh, I don't think this is hard enough for this score tbh (even if there is no breaks + hp drain is fairly high)
Play it safe and reduce the hp by two ticks and rename this Hard? :X
XD this could also be nazi'ed more

Kirby's- che, this is only lower in score cuz of all the non-sense breaks and where it starts :<
I like Kirby map I can play :o

arrrgh, so much nazi arrangement and hitsounds I can point out...but you told me go easy on it since its old...
so my biggest concern is the length of Normal and score of Insane~ yea......
What to do~

Edit: fine, be lazy on Normal xD, rest is fixed ~ Bubbled~
Gens
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Gens
Normal's first offset is different by 1ms, how dare you

[Kirby's Hard]

02:34:343 (6,7) - A bit hard to read... the same goes to the next one. I guess you can blame the custom approachcircle.

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