00:19:153 (19153|1,19318|2,19318|0,19400|3,19483|0,19483|2,19483|1) - should have 1/6 stream just like 00:16:680 (16680|1,16735|3,16790|0,16845|1,16845|3) -
can adjust into something like this
http://puu.sh/iVbVU/cbc7cc2670.jpg. note that the middle note is 1/4 snap. only the 1st and 3rd is 1/6
No, im absolutely sure that it is 1/4 here.00:21:955 (21955|2,21955|0,22037|3,22120|0,22120|2,22120|1) - should be the same with 00:20:472 (20472|2,20636|3,20691|1,20746|0,20801|1,20801|2,20801|3) - , revamp. (streeam)
Yep, its 1/6, thanks.00:26:076 - should be 3 notes, keep it consistent, just like 00:26:406 (26406|1,26406|2,26406|3,27065|3,27065|1,27065|0) -
Hydria should overview this part :/00:25:746 - this also should be 3 notes
00:25:417 - 3 notes
00:27:395 - same
00:29:098 (29098|2,29153|1,29290|2) - ghost note, delete.
00:28:713 - should be 3 notes, the phase has not changed yet. you have a lot of issue with layering, make sure it is consistent across the same phase.
00:29:373 (29373|0,29373|1,29702|1,29702|0) - this too, for every red lines, you sometimes use 3, sometimes use 2, please keep it consistent as the beat is very consistent around that part.
00:29:950 - should also be a note here, audible bg pitched instrument
00:30:114 (30114|2) - delete, unless you're also mapping that pitch slides of the vocal
00:34:812 (34812|2,34812|3,34895|1,34895|0,34977|2,34977|3,35059|3,35059|2,35142|1,35142|0,35224|0,35224|1,35307|2,35307|3,35389|2,35389|3,35472|0,35472|1,35554|0) - unnecessary jack, revamp. make it into trill pattern, pitch of the beat is different there is no reason for you to jack at 00:34:977 (34977|3,34977|2,35059|3,35059|2,35142|1,35142|0,35224|0,35224|1,35307|3,35307|2,35389|2,35389|3) -
00:46:351 (46351|2,46351|3) - 1 note is enough imo
I think its OK. 2 Notes are on red ticks here, its consistent as the sound is consistent. Also its challange diff and we decided to map with high density. So its OK in my oppinion.00:46:680 - keep it consistent, 3 notes here, rearrange to avoid jacking
00:47:669 (47669|3,47669|2,47669|1) - emphasis does not justify 3 notes, you use 3 notes for that emphasised beat already, use 2 here
00:49:153 (49153|0,49153|3,49153|1,49318|3,49318|2,49373|1,49428|0,49483|1,49483|2,49483|3) - use 3 notes here for consistency with earlier pattern that i suggested above
00:50:472 (50472|3,50472|2,50472|1) - this is louder than 00:50:142 (50142|1,50142|0,50142|3,50307|3,50307|2,50307|0) - . by utilising 3 notes for all these, you're ignoring the emphasis all together and makes it much more difficult to sight read while playing and listening to the song, readjust as you see fit
00:52:779 (52779|3,52779|2,52779|1) - same, no reason to put 3, should only be 2. wrong emphasis
00:54:428 - add a note to 1, you've been utilising 3 notes to express this beat, the phase has not change keep it consistent
00:56:406 (56406|1,56406|0,56461|3,56516|2,56570|0,56570|1,56625|3,56680|2,56735|1,56735|0) - usually for this sound people express it with 1/8 stream instead of 1/6. i personally, do not recommend 1/6 as it is not integrated or fast enough to justify as a stream since the beat is continuously hold here.
01:06:296 (66296|1,66296|2,66625|0,66625|2,66625|3,66955|1,66955|0) - you got this backward, note count should be 3 2 3, not 2 3 2.
Woops... fixed, thanks01:05:966 - you put 3 here because its a new phase after 4 x 4/4
Was been three with issue above. Fixed with this issue01:05:636 - and 01:06:296 - and 01:06:955 - should be the same so keep it consistent.
^01:08:603 (68603|0,68686|0) - unnecessary jack, move it to 3 4 because its empty. after LN its not jack because you withdraw your hold before pressing again.
Ah, good to know xD Fixed01:19:235 (79235|1,79318|2,79400|3,79483|1,79483|0,79483|2,79565|3,79647|1,79730|0,79812|1,79812|2,79812|3,79895|0,79977|2,80059|3,80142|2,80142|1,80142|0,80224|3,80307|2,80389|1) - all streams are ghost note, this is unacceptable, you're basically overmapping this diff, please delete.
01:43:878 (103878|0,103878|1,103878|3,103961|2,104043|0,104125|1,104208|0,104208|2,104208|3,104290|1,104373|2,104455|0,104538|3,104538|1,104538|2,104620|0,104702|3,104785|1,104867|3,104867|0,104867|2,104950|1,105032|2,105114|0,105197|2,105197|3,105197|1,105279|0,105362|1,105444|2) - many notes on blue lines are also ghost notes, please recheck carefully, this is basically overmapping. not appropriate and needs to be fixed...
Yes, its overmapped here. I think it seems fine even its overmapped. Ill wait for more modders response for this.01:45:527 (105527|0,105527|1,105527|3,105691|2,105691|1,105691|3,105856|3,105856|2,105856|0,106021|0,106021|3,106021|1,106186|2,106186|3,106186|1,106351|0,106351|3,106351|2,106516|1,106516|3,106516|2,106680|1,106680|2,106680|0,106845|3,106845|0,106845|1,106845|2,107010|3,107010|0,107010|2,107010|1,107175|0,107175|1,107175|3,107175|2,107340|2,107340|3,107340|1,107340|0,107505|0,107505|1,107505|3,107505|2) - you're ignoring the emphasis of the beat and just put 3 notes and 4 notes and spam them here, not really appropriate imo. this is overmapped. please revamp carefully.
something like this would be better in terms of readability, better representation of the beat, correct emphasis, and of course, no overmap.
01:45:527 - starting from here, revamped note is highlighted.
http://puu.sh/iVcII/2a373c11a0.jpg Nope. 3 Hits is for the drum here, its on all beats the same. The 4-chords are since its a bit harder drum and same pitch before 1/8 stream. 01:48:329 (108329|2,108329|1,108494|0,108494|1,108658|1,108658|2,108823|3,108823|2) - only 1 pitch, unreasonable to put 2 notes. this is blatant overmapping. you need to represent the part of the song accurately. this is especially since the pitch of the instrument is not loud that i dont see any justification for you to have 2 notes here.. this is 4k not 8k, you need to consider note count / chord in appropriation with the amount of the total key that we can press as well as emphasis of the actual song. you did this as well in previous part which i failed to mention. please recheck your whole diffs.
Yes, it is a bit overmapped. But also its fitting the music here. As i said, for challange diff we decided to use a higher note density, also at this point here.01:49:647 (109647|2,109647|3,109730|0,109812|3,109812|1,109977|0,109977|2,110059|2,110059|0,110142|3,110142|1) -
your pattern is inconsistent. if you're going to emphasise the vocal then emphasise it correctly. why 212 then suddenly 222 (note count). you did this as well earlier, this is inconsistent and need to be fixed.
01:48:988 (108988|1,108988|0,108988|2,109153|2,109153|1,109153|3,109318|0,109318|1,109318|3,109318|2,109483|0,109483|1,109483|3) - this is also overmapping. 2 2 2 3 should be more appropriate.
2 hits for instrument, 1 for voice. Ive changed the 4-er to 3er.01:49:483 - this is emphasised, signifying a new phase with very loud beat, where you utilised only 3 notes yet 01:49:318 - you use 4 here,
fixed, see above. => not fixed, Hydria has to look.01:54:922 (114922|0,114922|2,115005|1,115087|3,115087|2,115252|1,115252|0,115334|1,115334|0,115417|3,115417|2) - same issue
01:58:796 (118796|3,118796|2,118878|0,118878|1,118961|0,118961|1,119043|2,119043|3,119125|2,119125|3,119208|1,119208|0,119290|0,119290|1,119373|0,119373|3,119455|3,119455|0,119538|2,119538|1,119620|2,119620|1) - unreasonable jacks to me, the pitch of that instrument is different, no justification to jack at all, please change it into trill form. either 12 34 or 13 24 or 14 23
and that spam should continue until 02:00:032 - . the pitch descends but its until the next phase, you suddenly cut off in the middle. (4/4 lines earlier(
here is an example of what you can do appropriately.
http://puu.sh/iVd3i/a4013c260b.jpgmod ends.
overall this diffs still needs a lot of fixing, many parts are actually overmapped with uneccessary amount of notes. you're abusing the placement too much for the sake of raising the difficulty. song should works for pattern, not the other way around.
if there is no way for you to raise the difficulty from the 2nd hardest one that you currently have this means that it is just not possible to map it into harder song given its current circumstances.
I iknow that this needs fixing. But dont tell me just "all is overmapped" what youre doing here right now. I know that the song decide which patterns are possible and not the other way, but i think it is ok as it is currently. Also this is a collab diff, so two guys have overviewed and mapped this as it is - and we booth think it is ok and not too much overmapped. Isuues are given in map, sure. were not perfect.
SC diff is not using the full potential of this song, thats why i decided to add this Challange Diff. To have a diff which is using all from song what is given.good luck