roflninja wrote:

vincerio wrote:

[Overall]
file size ~22mb for TV Size ?(~1.30 mins) i think it's too much!

TAG : japanese anime Navel Teras

I kow the size is a bit big, im working on a way to shrink it

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Teras' Insane]
00:02:097 (1) - nazi. 1 grid down. Fixed Nazi grid.
00:26:443 (2) - whistle at the start. Done.
00:30:943 (5) - whistle Done.
00:38:327 (8) - ^ ^
00:38:789 (1) - whistle at the end. Done.
01:09:366 (9) - stack with (8)'s end? I like how it looks at the moment. So I won't do this. ^^
01:11:558 (5) - why not at the symmetrical place with (1)? 3 grid up. Done.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - spam finish is stupid. Hmpff. Remove finish from (1)
01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

1. Do a full submit. I only get Normal and Hard .

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Insane]
00:01:635 - starting from here add some notes Kay. Added more notes
00:22:404 - new combo
00:46:404 - ^ Nah, I prefer it like it is now.
00:51:250 - ^ [color=#0000FF]Added new combo at (9) instead. [/color]
[/color]00:53:789 - place this notes with simetry :3 Placed them in another way. Feel free to recheck.
01:19:173 - new combo Done.
01:26:212 - short break must be removed. Place here spinner (auto bonus is about 5000p) Hmm. Added the spinner then. But it sounds strange to me. So I might do some other changes later.

Star ;; )

scar1410 wrote:

Well, just little suggestions
If you don't like, ignore~

[Normal]
00:48:712 (2,3,4) - I don't like the 3 finish patterns :/, (2) Whistle; (3) nothing; (4) whistle
00:50:097 (1,2) - stack with 00:49:520 (4)

[Hard]
00:46:404 (1) - I don't like finish. Maybe, Whistle in the begin and in the end

[Teras' Insane]
00:47:789 (1,2,3,4) - buh spam finish ;.; I like how it sounds here. I won't do anything about it.
01:18:366 (2,3,4) - ^ Removed one more finish. It should be better now.
01:22:058 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:25:750 (2,3,4) - ^^

Good luck~ :>
Star~

Shinxyn wrote:

Lets see....
A very new mapper feeling xD
I don't think countdown fits too well on this song
I am unsure about the timing... it sounds like the vocal is earlier than the music D:



Teras'- Add a tiny bit of lead-in time please Added.
00:01:635 (1,2) - what, a jump right off the bat? Wopps. Must have done that by mistake XD
00:15:020 - shift timing panel before note Done ~
00:40:635 (4) - nazi down a tick, make this a straight line Fixed Nazi grid.
00:43:866 - hmm add note to match 00:42:020 (3)? or remove 42:020? xD Added a note.
00:43:981 (6) - ^ if you did add a note, add clap to match too ^
00:56:558 (2) - I was more expecting this to be a 1/4 note following vocal, but its fine >< I added one more note so it follows the vocal.
01:14:558 (1,2,3,4) - ... make these the same amount of notes and slider length as 01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5)? (though I kinda think you should remove the clap on this stream) Done ~
Fair

There's one part of the video that seems almost... not allowed... mmm
@.@ have someone check timing...? I checked the timing before I asked to guest map this. And it looked fine to me. Same goes with the offset O.o I'm not an expert. But I'm sure this timing is correct.

sonnyc wrote:

Hello~



Teras Insane
- Decrease Overall difficulty.. or nvm~ It becomes so slow if I lower it. I prefer when it's like this

Good map~~
Star

AngelHoney wrote:

Insane

Notes shouldn't go before the first offset They aren't....Look at my offset tbh.
remove Countdown I don't have any countdown...-.-
move Lead-in to 1000ms ...lolIt's on that already....

Hard

on some parts have many sound clap...

Normal

fine~

[DBF] wrote:

[Tera's insane]

Overall difficulty -1. I will not do this. I like it how it is now.
00:32:904 (6) - finish. Won't do this.
00:36:481 (7) - remove whistle and add finish. ^
00:38:327 (8) - ^^
00:43:981 (6) - clap. ^
00:46:635 (6) - ^ Added.
00:47:096 (9) - ^^
00:50:096 (4) - ^ ^
00:53:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad, you must remake that, not good for play. Kay..changed. Last time I change this part. So next person to ask me to change can just skip doing that. Because I will not. It's so easy now anyways.. <.<

Star~

gdeath wrote:

Overall:
The map is fine,but soft-clap is really not suitable for this song imo.
Take a look at the hitsound of [Teras' Insane] as reference.
Meanwhile,PreviewTime on [Hard] is different from others
pls unite them.

[Teras' Insane]
01:23:442 (4) - remove clap Done.
01:23:788 (1) - add clap^
01:24:250 (1) - remove clap and add finish ^

Star!

JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Make it a silder that repeats on 00:26:442 and add a beat on 00:27:250?
00:42:135 (4) - Considering this is a normal, moving the beat 1/4 back to the white tick would make it easier to hit for those that are not as good in osu.
00:45:827 (5) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
01:07:173 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:10:866 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:13:635 (6) - ^
01:14:558 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:17:211 (6) - ^
01:18:250 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:20:558 (5,6,7) - Turn this into a silder that repeats once on 01:20:904.


[Hard]
00:45:020 (3) - Hard to see due to it being overlapped by 00:44:558 (2). Move it away.


[Insane]
Nice mapping.
00:01:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Lower the silder velocity/half the BPM? Feels too fast to the song. Nah, I don't think it's too fast ^^
00:40:173 (1) - Feels kinda , with the almost-silent hitsounds and it being linked to nothing.Won't change this. I hate loud normal Hitsounds :-/

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai here comes your mod~

[Overall]
Everythings all fine and dandy, except for the fact that you don't have a difficulty under 3 stars. Someone ate your easy difficulty. Normal has 2.81 stars. No need for an easier diff.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Mmmh... This is okay.

[Teras' Insane]
Teras, wasn't I just talking about this difficulty to you the other day?
I shall post what I said about this difficulty.
I don't particularly like your HP Drain, feel like it needs to be lowered one tick.
OD is fine, I like where it is right now.
00:54:596 (7) - That cursed note, I STILL feel like it should be stacked with 5,6. I know you're going to say no though. It will still be a no xD

You need an easy.
*throws a star at you*
There you go~

Xgor wrote:

[Teras]
Not that found of the high HP drain but it might be just me. It's now you and I_Tatsuo_I.
Wish you added a bit more hitsounds, mainly in the beginning I don't think I need more hitsounds. <.<
00:43:981 (6,7) - Move back 1/4 on the time line. Nah, it sounds horrible to me

Nothing changed. Thanks for your mod though

*star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~Tera's Insane~
- Just a little thing, Tags in here are "Teras Navel" when in the rest of diffs are "Navel Teras". Not a big deal but it might affect online tags

00:18:942 (7) - Fix Spacing.

Fixed both ;-)

Nice map :3 *star*

1. Timing seems about right

Doomsday93 wrote:

[TERA'S INSANE]

00:54:596 (8) - Perhaps you could stack this on (7) to make a 3 beat stack?. It seems more intuitive that way. Kay, fixed it then.

Apart from the seemingly random jumps you've put in (like at 01:16:635 or 00:03:250), I quite like this map. The jumps themselves aren't that bad anyway, so the map stays fun. Nice work I like those random jumps

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

'Aight then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems about right

[NORMAL]

The layout of the beats are a little dull, since most of the beats are all in straight lines and on right angles, There isn't anything technically wrong though. You could consider experimenting more with patterns that you put your beats in in your next map. It'll make it much more interesting. will try next time, this is my first map so its kinda =/

[HARD]

Looks much more interesting than Normal, which is a good sign.

01:09:250 (6) - Perhaps you could move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this). It follow the lyrics better that way to me.agree with you there

yehl wrote:

[Teras' Insane]
00:04:865 (3) - add whistle
00:07:519 (3) - ^
00:08:442 (2) - ^
00:18:365 - add circle to emphasize the beginning of song.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - reverse or do something. similar to 01:14:558
00:26:211~00:40:058 - volume is too low

No to all. I prefer how it is now

banvi wrote:

Oh, Bubbled.

my mod

00:27:481 (4) 1 grid down? (bacause spacing a bit far)
00:54:250 (5) 1 grid left?(^)
00:58:404 (5) 1 grid up?(^)
01:08:096 (3) 1 grid right?
01:16:173 (4) 1 grid up?

I don't like Nazi mods. COme up with something else if you want me to change anything <.<

Nice map~
star & gl

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Hmm...everything is pretty solid in this map, methinks~

Except for one aspect...Er...in the video, there's some crazy nipple footage there... I think it would be best if you can find some way to remove it. I tried to remove it by adding a white overlay via video, but all that did was up the size by a giant amount. XD

But I guess you can add a white overlay on that part using SB a la http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10359 . :S

Sorry about being picky on this.

Teras wrote:

I laughed my head off when I saw the SB. XD

roflninja wrote:

Full submition done, thanks osuplayer111

will look at what Derekku Chan has to say now then

Teras wrote:

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. Will this force me to delete notes....? -.-
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. With red you mean..A timing section? ...<.< To be honest.. I don't get what you mean by this.
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late) When I playe through my diff. The offset went between 0-1-2 all the time.. I don't think that is necessary.




[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

It is. Look again..O.o

Waiting with my changes..Want a reply on this before I do anything..

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. offset seems fine to me
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. I don't get this either
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late)again, seems fine to me
*I see that 00114_shuffle1.jpg is being used to cover up certain bits at roughly 00:48:711, but (especially on the no-video version) it looks rather strange; with no fade-in/out and just a large/mostly-white rectangle. Adding some transparency to the logo (to cut out the white), enlargening it a bit, and fading it in/out would look MUCH better on both the video and no-video settings. I rly don't wanna waste hours figuring that out =/

[Normal]
00:26:443 (2) - this is the only single-blue-tick note in the whole difficulty. Please change it to something else that's less confusing and more consistent with the rest of the map. seemed fine to me, but changed
00:54:250 (1) - perhaps move back to the red tick and extend? did that
01:05:789 (5,1) - aren't stacked properly fixed

[Hard]
00:26:789 (4) - overlap could be confusing... Besides, I'd rather see 2,3,4 as a repeating slider or something similar to show the triplet pattern that will be used throughout the song.. i kinda like that overlap
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing won't change
00:46:173 - expected a note here added
00:51:366 (5,2) - i dont like the overlap :/
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - ^
*Spacing was a bit linear, making the triplets hard to predict, but it wasn't too bad..

[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

dvorak wrote:

bpm 130.000 ±0.004 about 11366 ~ 54836 , 56547 ~. no problem about this.

checking about 2106 - 11366 and 54836 - 56547


map are good for me.

Tapdancingmetroid wrote:

I agree with Derekku on the issue of that censor-logo thing, so I went ahead and cropped it a bit/added a border. (tried adding transparency to the entire logo, though some of the smaller details on the outside of the logo looked a bit out-of-place).

If you (or someone else) could find a higher quality/larger version of the logo, that would be pretty helpful.

Terra's Insane
The triplet (notes 4, 5, and 6) at 00:18:470 are a bit difficult to read, since the slider ends with a 1/4th note gap between it and note 4. Either add a note in this gap, or move the three notes so they aren't directly over the end of the slider.
Otherwise, no errors.

Added a note to fill the gap.

Anyway, either enlarge that version of the logo I gave you or find a higher quality version of it (ideally with transparency).

roflninja wrote:

Long 3 month run

Thanks to anyone who helped me
Teras for the Dif
Astom for getting this going after 2 months of nothing