This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June-22-10 at 5:35:30 PM

Artist: Yuria
Title: You (TV Size)
Source: Shuffle!
Tags: Navel Teras
BPM: 130
Filesize: 8053kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.43 stars, 148 notes)
2. Normal (2.81 stars, 83 notes)
3. Teras' Insane (4.98 stars, 259 notes)

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size)
Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SB change June 13, 2010 - redownload if you downloaded before this time

Sb change agian June 16, 2010 - redownload if you download before this time

^ June 21, 2010

^ June 22, 2010

the map didn't upload completely,could you do a full submission?

samipale wrote:

the map didn't upload completely,could you do a full submission?

done

offset:2097,fix it

this is a 1/4 song ,so Beat Snap Divisor should use 1/2 or 1/4.not use 1/3 or 1/6
and after changing offset,make the notes all on ticks,like this


and when you have done above...open AIMod(Ctrl+Shift+A) to mod your map by AI

PS: YURIA and YOU are all capital

PS2:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=17043
read this ,it helps you finding people to mod your map

PS3:if someone have modded your map and helpful ,give kudosu to him
<---click this
don't give me until i mod your map

no, your notes are also on wrong tick, get the playback rate to 25% and listen where ticks notes should on,and fix it
generally speaking ,it's most on white tick, then red tick ,then blue tick

ehh...i saw someone also mapping this song,anyway,good luck to you

Well

[General]
Source : delete "opening", only Shuffle! in source
Tags : Delete your tag because
Yuria is Artist
You is Tittle
Shuffle Is Source
Maybe add anime character

[Normal]
Well, resnap all notes
Sliders Velocity too high, imo
You have a lot of notes in blue ticks, it's ugly
a lot of sliders and notes sounds wrong
you need to remake this :/

[Insane]
resnap all notes~
overall dificulty and life drain too high
use distance snap~

Hum... Maybe I mod this, after you resnap all notes~
because it's impossible to make a real mod for me, for the time...

[General]
-Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja).osb delete this and full submit.
-Open AIMod and fix unsnapped circles.
-Use grid level 3 for mapping (View->Grid Level->3) and distance snap(distance snap is opcional but it's more easy map with that).

[Normal]
-Sliders are a little fast for a normal diff.
-A lot of circles out of place.

[Hard]
-00:07:635 (1) finish this spinner here 00:09:481
-00:32:212 (8) move it to 00:32:327
-00:31:564 (6) move it to 00:31:635
-00:31:342 (5) move it to 00:31:404
-00:29:807 (1) --^ 00:29:789
-00:30:160 (2) --^ 00:30:250
-00:36:179 (1) --^ 00:36:250
-well I can found a lot more in bot diff. so please check it yourself

Uhmm... I think that u need remap a lot of things, send me a pm if u finish of fix u song~

Looks better now =)

[Normal]
-00:26:789 (1) finisht it in 00:27:250 or 00:27:481
-00:30:135 (3) move it to 00:30:250
-00:29:789 add a circle
-00:33:481 add a circle
-00:33:827 (3) move it to 00:33:943
-00:35:673 (2) move it to 00:35:558
-00:35:327 add a circle
-Well now u can understand my logic, adding and moving some circles =P, maybe u can try if u like it or not, only maintain star diff under 3,5 stars =) and remember spacing.


[Insane]
-00:01:635 to 00:07:173 some circles don't fit with u actual timing and I don't know what to do, maybe map it with 1/8, try to ask to MATs
-Open AIMod and fix unsnapped circles xD
-Add a circle here 01:03:943
-01:03:437 (1) move it to 01:03:481
-01:03:641 (2) move it to 01:03:712
-01:07:173 to 01:07:635 same has before (remember fix spacing)
-01:11:673 (1) move it to 01:11:789 and finisht it in 01:12:250
-01:12:481 add a circle
-01:12:943 add a circle
-01:13:866 add a circle
-01:14:558 (1) finish it in 01:15:020
-01:18:250 (1) finish it in 01:18:712
-01:19:113 (2) move it to 01:19:173
-01:20:487 (5) move it to 01:20:558

Well try u best ^^ I like this song so I have hope in see it ranked

Thanks for the help and star Astom

[General]
The way normal currently plays isnt good enough for newbies, however Normal needs to be toned down and fixed, if you want it to be the easiest diff of your set.
Delete .osb and full submit
Timing feels strange, please consult an expert timer (Ok maybe the timing isnt what's wrong, but your many spacing errors, or both)

[Normal]
Begin by lowering Hp Drain, increasing hit circle size, and OD-1
I recommend using grid Lv 2 at least, try Lv 3, it's causing spacing errors a lot
00:26:789 (1) - No new combo
00:27:712 (1) - This slider can easily be turned into a few notes
00:29:558 (2) - New combo
00:29:558 (2,3,4) - Uneven stacked notes? stack the 1st 2 and put the 3rd farther
00:30:712 (5) - Spacing
00:33:250 (1,2) - Stack theese 2 or turn into a slider.
00:34:404 (4,5) - ^
00:35:097 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:36:020 (4) - End at: 00:36:481
00:37:173 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
00:41:789 (3,4) - Spacing
... (And the spacing error list goes on, so i recommend you recheck your whole map for spacing errors)
00:42:712 (1) - Can be replaced by notes.
00:46:404 (6) - Drop the repeat and make it end at: 00:47:673
I guess you can see where im getting at, this will need a bit of reworking, hope you can figure out the rest, if not im always open for a remod.

[Insane]
Why does Insane have a long break that Easy doesnt have?, also why does it start way sooner?
Will need also some reworking in regards of spacing and making sense to the song a bit, you will need to work on your patterns as they seem kinda random.

[Overall]
Please read the FAQ about Editing beatmaps and ask for help if needed, if you cant figure this out on your own, please drop me a forum PM and i'll give you more detailed information, this map will need a lot of work, but hopefully you will be able to work it well. Good Luck!~

Ran out of time while i was remapping normal, should have that fixed soon
Agree with the long break, was debating that, think I'll just remove it
As for the patterns, I didn't want a predicable song, might change that

You could add the video, the video of this opening is so magic xD and also it's more fun playing with the video

Mod
[Normal]
00:26:442 (2) - move it to the previous red tick
00:26:776 (3) - Spacing problem here: it is too far from the previous note, use distance snap.
00:37:514 (2) - move it to the next white tick
00:42:135 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:45:360 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:45:825 (5) - move it to the next white tick
00:48:148 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:56:440 (2) - move it to the next white tick
01:00:021 (x) - Why not put a note here?
01:00:127 (2) - move it to the next white tick
01:02:461 (5) - move it to the previous red tick
01:03:479 (1) - short this slider by one tick
01:05:672 (5) - move it to the previous red tick, short the slider in one tick and increase it in two repeats
01:07:175 (1) - shorten the slider by one tick
01:08:442 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:11:328 (1) - shorten the slider by one tick
01:13:500 (6) - move it to the next white tick
01:17:206 (6) - move it to the next white tick
01:20:904 (5) - move it to the next white tick
01:21:828 (1) - move it to the next white tick and shorten the slider by one tick
01:22:847 (2) - shorten the slider by one tick

And pay attention to the Spacing, distance snap is a good friend xD
After this, go trough [Hard] and correct similars problems

btw I think that is taking too long for start playing, you should map the start of the song, because the notes are starting almost in the middle of the song and this leave a very short play time D:
Sugestion: Make some sliders with curves and nice forms ;D


Star for Kaede *-*

I'm on my iPod peepz =)

Hey!

Delete the .osb file if you're not making a storyboard.

[Video]
Might want to add the OP? TV size feels so empty otherwise :<


[Normal]

00:25:866 (1) Move this to the white tick at 00:26:097. Then fix the spacing.
00:26:443 (2) Spacing.
00:35:558 (3) One grid right?
00:36:020 (4) Start this slider at 00:35:789 and end it at 00:36:481? And fix spacing.
00:45:932 (5) Move this note to 00:45:827 if you want it to be at it's current position.
00:46:404 (6) End slider at 00:47:327 and add a finish at the end.
00:49:625 (4) Move it to 00:49:520 if you want it to be at it's current position.
00:51:943 (2) End slider at 00:53:789.
00:56:327 (x) I would add a reverse slider here so it ends at 00:56:558. Then delete the (2) that's on the blue tick.

1:05:789 (5) I would end this slider at 1:06:481 instead.
1:06:712 (x) After the slider change. Add a note here with a whistle?

1:17:327 (6) Move it to 1:17:212 if you want it to be at it's current position.

[Hard]

Pretty much the same things I pointed out in your [Normal]
Too short sliders, wrong spaced notes and so on.
So I would say that you should have a look at the suggestions in normal and look for them in hard aswell.
I'm pretty much short on time atm. So sorry if I cannot mod all of your map. :<

Anyways.
Can I make a diff? :> Tried to map this quite some time ago. So I would like to give it a shot if you let me of course. ^^

Star*

Here is my diff. Not done yet. But I'm posting it so I can get opinions about it ;-)

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu

K, let's mod a bit~!

Remove the audio from video file. 20mb is really big.
Also, for all diffs I wouldn't lengthen the note placement for the vocals. On some parts you place notes on red ticks (in this song the red ticks are mostly beginning and ending of the vocals), thats good! But then the next notes are placed on the blue ones, then again red. Then red red for a while, then red red blue red [...] . What I mean is, you change the rythm you use for the vocals pretty often. When playing it's really confusing and makes your maps hard to read.

When I check what rythm you actually wanted to use I understand why you chose 1/3 beat snap divisor. I didn't test it, but I think it'd sound better in many parts of your maps. I don't think samipale's suggestion for the beat snap divisor should have been applied. Too bad I don't know how it actually was before :s

[Normal]
- 01:05:789 ~ (5) repeat only once, so end is 01:06:481 and add a single note to 01:06:712

[Hard]
- 00:26:789 ~ (4) slider end on red tick
- 00:29:558 ~ place a circle here
- 00:30:481 ~ (3,4) move to next white tick
- 00:33:250 ~ place a note here and move the slider to the next white tick
- 00:35:097 ~ same as above
-- 00:35:327 ~ when you do ^ : slider end on red tick
- 00:36:943 ~ (1,2) again move the sliders to the white ticks and place single notes on their old position (red ticks). also, shorten the first slider by 1/4, so it ends on the white tick
- 01:03:481 ~ (1,2,3) place (2) on the red tick, like you do at 01:07:173 with (1,2,3)
- 01:24:135 ~ (4) slider end on next white tick
- 01:27:020 ~ (1) slider end on previous white tick (shorten by 1/4 tick)

No star yet. Bookmarked this topic and I'll check it again later on

EDIT: Done. I hope it's good enough.
But I don't think if it's really that insane. But it's not easy either. >.>

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu

Looks good Teras

[General]:

1. Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja).osb remove this file from your folder and full submit
2. add Teras to all diffs' tags.

[Normal]:

1. unsnapped notes exist
2. 00:26:443 (2) - maybe this note should be at 00:26:327
3. 00:38:789 (1) - end this slider at 00:39:943
4. 00:51:943 (2) - too much part of the beginning circle is hidden
5. 01:18:250 (1) - end at 01:18:597 feels better
6. 01:03:481 (1) - end at 01:03:943
7. 01:07:173 (1) - end at 01:07:520
8. 01:10:866 (1) - end at 01:11:212

[Hard]:

1. add background and movie in this diff
2. 00:45:854 (4) - unsnapped
3. 00:28:289 (3) - place a note here instead of slider
4. 00:28:635 (T) - add a slider and ends at 00:28:866 and reverse for 1 time
5. 00:42:481 (T) - how about adding a note here?
6. 00:49:866 (T) - and here?
7. 00:51:712 (T) - and here?
8. 01:12:481 (2,3) - ahh, hidden notes. change the way you place them

[Teras's Insane]:

1. 00:21:481 (3) - cancel clap
2. 00:22:404 (6) - cancel clap. (I know what you do that for but they doesn't fit the guitar well)
3. 01:19:173 (6) - new combo
4. 01:22:866 (6) - ^
5. 01:23:789 (11) - ^

Epic song, good luck ^^