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roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June-22-10 at 5:35:30 PM

Artist: Yuria
Title: You (TV Size)
Source: Shuffle!
Tags: Navel Teras
BPM: 130
Filesize: 8053kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.43 stars, 148 notes)
  2. Normal (2.81 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Teras' Insane (4.98 stars, 259 notes)
Download: Yuria - You (TV Size)
Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SB change June 13, 2010 - redownload if you downloaded before this time

Sb change agian June 16, 2010 - redownload if you download before this time

^ June 21, 2010

^ June 22, 2010
Last edited by roflninja , edited 126 times in total.
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
the map didn't upload completely,could you do a full submission?
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja

samipale wrote:

the map didn't upload completely,could you do a full submission?
done
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
offset:2097,fix it

this is a 1/4 song ,so Beat Snap Divisor should use 1/2 or 1/4.not use 1/3 or 1/6
and after changing offset,make the notes all on ticks,like this


and when you have done above...open AIMod(Ctrl+Shift+A) to mod your map by AI

PS: YURIA and YOU are all capital

PS2:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=17043
read this ,it helps you finding people to mod your map

PS3:if someone have modded your map and helpful ,give kudosu to him
<---click this
don't give me until i mod your map
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja

samipale wrote:

offset:2097,fix it = done (i'm horrible at offset =/ )

this is a 1/4 song ,so Beat Snap Divisor should use 1/2 or 1/4.not use 1/3 or 1/6 = done
and after changing offset,make the notes all on ticks,like this = done
[attachment=0:dbcdd]1.jpg[/attachment:dbcdd]

and when you have done above...open AIMod(Ctrl+Shift+A) to mod your map by AI = done

PS: YURIA and YOU are all capital

PS2:http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=17043
read this ,it helps you finding people to mod your map

PS3:if someone have modded your map and helpful ,give kudosu to him
<---click this
don't give me until i mod your map
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
no, your notes are also on wrong tick, get the playback rate to 25% and listen where ticks notes should on,and fix it
generally speaking ,it's most on white tick, then red tick ,then blue tick

ehh...i saw someone also mapping this song,anyway,good luck to you ;)
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar
Well

[General]
Source : delete "opening", only Shuffle! in source
Tags : Delete your tag because
Yuria is Artist
You is Tittle
Shuffle Is Source
Maybe add anime character

[Normal]
Well, resnap all notes
Sliders Velocity too high, imo
You have a lot of notes in blue ticks, it's ugly
a lot of sliders and notes sounds wrong
you need to remake this :/

[Insane]
resnap all notes~
overall dificulty and life drain too high
use distance snap~

Hum... Maybe I mod this, after you resnap all notes~
because it's impossible to make a real mod for me, for the time...
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[General]
-Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja).osb delete this and full submit.
-Open AIMod and fix unsnapped circles.
-Use grid level 3 for mapping (View->Grid Level->3) and distance snap(distance snap is opcional but it's more easy map with that).

[Normal]
-Sliders are a little fast for a normal diff.
-A lot of circles out of place.

[Hard]
-00:07:635 (1) finish this spinner here 00:09:481
-00:32:212 (8) move it to 00:32:327
-00:31:564 (6) move it to 00:31:635
-00:31:342 (5) move it to 00:31:404
-00:29:807 (1) --^ 00:29:789
-00:30:160 (2) --^ 00:30:250
-00:36:179 (1) --^ 00:36:250
-well I can found a lot more in bot diff. so please check it yourself

Uhmm... I think that u need remap a lot of things, send me a pm if u finish of fix u song~
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Looks better now =)

[Normal]
-00:26:789 (1) finisht it in 00:27:250 or 00:27:481
-00:30:135 (3) move it to 00:30:250
-00:29:789 add a circle
-00:33:481 add a circle
-00:33:827 (3) move it to 00:33:943
-00:35:673 (2) move it to 00:35:558
-00:35:327 add a circle
-Well now u can understand my logic, adding and moving some circles =P, maybe u can try if u like it or not, only maintain star diff under 3,5 stars =) and remember spacing.


[Insane]
-00:01:635 to 00:07:173 some circles don't fit with u actual timing and I don't know what to do, maybe map it with 1/8, try to ask to MATs
-Open AIMod and fix unsnapped circles xD
-Add a circle here 01:03:943
-01:03:437 (1) move it to 01:03:481
-01:03:641 (2) move it to 01:03:712
-01:07:173 to 01:07:635 same has before (remember fix spacing)
-01:11:673 (1) move it to 01:11:789 and finisht it in 01:12:250
-01:12:481 add a circle
-01:12:943 add a circle
-01:13:866 add a circle
-01:14:558 (1) finish it in 01:15:020
-01:18:250 (1) finish it in 01:18:712
-01:19:113 (2) move it to 01:19:173
-01:20:487 (5) move it to 01:20:558

Well try u best ^^ I like this song so I have hope in see it ranked
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Thanks for the help and star Astom
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
The way normal currently plays isnt good enough for newbies, however Normal needs to be toned down and fixed, if you want it to be the easiest diff of your set.
Delete .osb and full submit
Timing feels strange, please consult an expert timer (Ok maybe the timing isnt what's wrong, but your many spacing errors, or both)

[Normal]
Begin by lowering Hp Drain, increasing hit circle size, and OD-1
I recommend using grid Lv 2 at least, try Lv 3, it's causing spacing errors a lot
00:26:789 (1) - No new combo
00:27:712 (1) - This slider can easily be turned into a few notes
00:29:558 (2) - New combo
00:29:558 (2,3,4) - Uneven stacked notes? stack the 1st 2 and put the 3rd farther
00:30:712 (5) - Spacing
00:33:250 (1,2) - Stack theese 2 or turn into a slider.
00:34:404 (4,5) - ^
00:35:097 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:36:020 (4) - End at: 00:36:481
00:37:173 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
00:41:789 (3,4) - Spacing
... (And the spacing error list goes on, so i recommend you recheck your whole map for spacing errors)
00:42:712 (1) - Can be replaced by notes.
00:46:404 (6) - Drop the repeat and make it end at: 00:47:673
I guess you can see where im getting at, this will need a bit of reworking, hope you can figure out the rest, if not im always open for a remod.

[Insane]
Why does Insane have a long break that Easy doesnt have?, also why does it start way sooner?
Will need also some reworking in regards of spacing and making sense to the song a bit, you will need to work on your patterns as they seem kinda random.

[Overall]
Please read the FAQ about Editing beatmaps and ask for help if needed, if you cant figure this out on your own, please drop me a forum PM and i'll give you more detailed information, this map will need a lot of work, but hopefully you will be able to work it well. Good Luck!~
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Ran out of time while i was remapping normal, should have that fixed soon
Agree with the long break, was debating that, think I'll just remove it
As for the patterns, I didn't want a predicable song, might change that
Bne-chan
23 posts
Joined April 2009
Bne-chan
You could add the video, the video of this opening is so magic xD and also it's more fun playing with the video :D

Mod
[Normal]
00:26:442 (2) - move it to the previous red tick
00:26:776 (3) - Spacing problem here: it is too far from the previous note, use distance snap.
00:37:514 (2) - move it to the next white tick
00:42:135 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:45:360 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:45:825 (5) - move it to the next white tick
00:48:148 (4) - move it to the next white tick
00:56:440 (2) - move it to the next white tick
01:00:021 (x) - Why not put a note here?
01:00:127 (2) - move it to the next white tick
01:02:461 (5) - move it to the previous red tick
01:03:479 (1) - short this slider by one tick
01:05:672 (5) - move it to the previous red tick, short the slider in one tick and increase it in two repeats
01:07:175 (1) - shorten the slider by one tick
01:08:442 (3) - move to the next white tick
01:11:328 (1) - shorten the slider by one tick
01:13:500 (6) - move it to the next white tick
01:17:206 (6) - move it to the next white tick
01:20:904 (5) - move it to the next white tick
01:21:828 (1) - move it to the next white tick and shorten the slider by one tick
01:22:847 (2) - shorten the slider by one tick

And pay attention to the Spacing, distance snap is a good friend xD
After this, go trough [Hard] and correct similars problems ;)

btw I think that is taking too long for start playing, you should map the start of the song, because the notes are starting almost in the middle of the song and this leave a very short play time D:
Sugestion: Make some sliders with curves and nice forms ;D


Star for Kaede *-*
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
JhnySmthApl
I'm on my iPod peepz =)
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Hey!

Delete the .osb file if you're not making a storyboard.

[Video]
Might want to add the OP? TV size feels so empty otherwise :<


[Normal]

00:25:866 (1) Move this to the white tick at 00:26:097. Then fix the spacing.
00:26:443 (2) Spacing.
00:35:558 (3) One grid right?
00:36:020 (4) Start this slider at 00:35:789 and end it at 00:36:481? And fix spacing.
00:45:932 (5) Move this note to 00:45:827 if you want it to be at it's current position.
00:46:404 (6) End slider at 00:47:327 and add a finish at the end.
00:49:625 (4) Move it to 00:49:520 if you want it to be at it's current position.
00:51:943 (2) End slider at 00:53:789.
00:56:327 (x) I would add a reverse slider here so it ends at 00:56:558. Then delete the (2) that's on the blue tick.

1:05:789 (5) I would end this slider at 1:06:481 instead.
1:06:712 (x) After the slider change. Add a note here with a whistle?

1:17:327 (6) Move it to 1:17:212 if you want it to be at it's current position.

[Hard]

Pretty much the same things I pointed out in your [Normal]
Too short sliders, wrong spaced notes and so on.
So I would say that you should have a look at the suggestions in normal and look for them in hard aswell.
I'm pretty much short on time atm. So sorry if I cannot mod all of your map. :<

Anyways.
Can I make a diff? :> Tried to map this quite some time ago. So I would like to give it a shot if you let me of course. ^^

Star*
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Here is my diff. Not done yet. But I'm posting it so I can get opinions about it ;-)

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
K, let's mod a bit~!

Remove the audio from video file. 20mb is really big.
Also, for all diffs I wouldn't lengthen the note placement for the vocals. On some parts you place notes on red ticks (in this song the red ticks are mostly beginning and ending of the vocals), thats good! But then the next notes are placed on the blue ones, then again red. Then red red for a while, then red red blue red [...] . What I mean is, you change the rythm you use for the vocals pretty often. When playing it's really confusing and makes your maps hard to read.

When I check what rythm you actually wanted to use I understand why you chose 1/3 beat snap divisor. I didn't test it, but I think it'd sound better in many parts of your maps. I don't think samipale's suggestion for the beat snap divisor should have been applied. Too bad I don't know how it actually was before :s

[Normal]
- 01:05:789 ~ (5) repeat only once, so end is 01:06:481 and add a single note to 01:06:712

[Hard]
- 00:26:789 ~ (4) slider end on red tick
- 00:29:558 ~ place a circle here
- 00:30:481 ~ (3,4) move to next white tick
- 00:33:250 ~ place a note here and move the slider to the next white tick
- 00:35:097 ~ same as above
-- 00:35:327 ~ when you do ^ : slider end on red tick
- 00:36:943 ~ (1,2) again move the sliders to the white ticks and place single notes on their old position (red ticks). also, shorten the first slider by 1/4, so it ends on the white tick
- 01:03:481 ~ (1,2,3) place (2) on the red tick, like you do at 01:07:173 with (1,2,3)
- 01:24:135 ~ (4) slider end on next white tick
- 01:27:020 ~ (1) slider end on previous white tick (shorten by 1/4 tick)

No star yet. Bookmarked this topic and I'll check it again later on ;)
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
EDIT: Done. I hope it's good enough.
But I don't think if it's really that insane. But it's not easy either. >.>

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
Looks good Teras
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja).osb remove this file from your folder and full submit
  2. add Teras to all diffs' tags.
[Normal]:
  1. unsnapped notes exist
  2. 00:26:443 (2) - maybe this note should be at 00:26:327
  3. 00:38:789 (1) - end this slider at 00:39:943
  4. 00:51:943 (2) - too much part of the beginning circle is hidden
  5. 01:18:250 (1) - end at 01:18:597 feels better
  6. 01:03:481 (1) - end at 01:03:943
  7. 01:07:173 (1) - end at 01:07:520
  8. 01:10:866 (1) - end at 01:11:212
[Hard]:
  1. add background and movie in this diff
  2. 00:45:854 (4) - unsnapped
  3. 00:28:289 (3) - place a note here instead of slider
  4. 00:28:635 (T) - add a slider and ends at 00:28:866 and reverse for 1 time
  5. 00:42:481 (T) - how about adding a note here?
  6. 00:49:866 (T) - and here?
  7. 00:51:712 (T) - and here?
  8. 01:12:481 (2,3) - ahh, hidden notes. change the way you place them
[Teras's Insane]:
  1. 00:21:481 (3) - cancel clap
  2. 00:22:404 (6) - cancel clap. (I know what you do that for but they doesn't fit the guitar well)
  3. 01:19:173 (6) - new combo
  4. 01:22:866 (6) - ^
  5. 01:23:789 (11) - ^
Epic song, good luck ^^
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Colin Hou wrote:

[Teras's Insane]:
  1. 00:21:481 (3) - cancel clap
  2. 00:22:404 (6) - cancel clap. (I know what you do that for but they doesn't fit the guitar well)
  3. 01:19:173 (6) - new combo
  4. 01:22:866 (6) - ^
  5. 01:23:789 (11) - ^
Epic song, good luck ^^
All done ~

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras's Insane].osu
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
[Overall]
file size ~22mb for TV Size ?(~1.30 mins) i think it's too much!

TAG : japanese anime Navel Teras
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
@vincerio

Japanese and Anime shouldn't appear in tags cuz they will be something like genre when this get ranked.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja

vincerio wrote:

[Overall]
file size ~22mb for TV Size ?(~1.30 mins) i think it's too much!

TAG : japanese anime Navel Teras
I kow the size is a bit big, im working on a way to shrink it
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
[Normal]

00:18:456 (2) -It piles it 00:18:702 (3) - .
01:03:948 (1) - add a finish
01:07:882 (2) - It piles it 01:08:128 (3) - or 01:08:128 (3) - It piles it 01:08:620 (4) -
01:23:128 - this kiai time Please enlarge it imo?
02:50:915 (3) - new combo
02:51:407 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:882 (1) - new combo

[Hard]

00:44:522 (4) - new combo
01:23:128 - this kiai time Please enlarge it imo?


good map!

+Star
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) delete the .osb file and full submission
2) the picture "60716" is useless? If yes, delete it and full submission


[Normal]
lack of hitsound
start a hitobject at blue tick is not suitable for [Normal]
00:25:866 (x) add a note?
00:33:250 (1,2) they don't look good since they were covered by the slider
00:36:135 (4) start at 00:36:020 and end at 00:36:481
00:36:943 (x) add a note ?
00:56:443 (2) move it to the next white tick ( 00:56:558)
01:00:135 (2) ^
01:08:443 (3) ^

[Hard]
lack of hitsound
00:34:404 (1,2) covered by the slider, don't look good.
00:36:250 (1,2) ^
00:41:789 (2) ^
01:09:366 (6) start at 01:09:250
01:11:097 (x) add a note?
01:23:097 (x) ^
01:24:135 (5) better to slience the slidertick
01:28:750 (2) change this slider to a circle?

[Teras's Insane]
fine~

Get my star~
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi

roflninja wrote:

vincerio wrote:

[Overall]
file size ~22mb for TV Size ?(~1.30 mins) i think it's too much!

TAG : japanese anime Navel Teras
I kow the size is a bit big, im working on a way to shrink it
Uhm, as I said, remove the audio~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
- I saw a .osb file even I have already re-download again D: ...
- Add kiai in first two diffs?
- Stack Leniency should be the same on all difficuties o.o

Normal
00:36:020 (4) - resnap problem here? finish this at red tick (00:36:481)
01:08:558 (3) - spacing problem
00:38:097 (4,5) - overlap these notes, looks better
01:19:173 (1) - no new combo? since you didn't do this before

Hard
- HP Drain - 1~2
00:32:558 (11) - doesn't look good, overlap or what?
00:41:789 (2) - hidden notes? don't do that Q_Q
01:09:250 (6) - finish at white tick

Teras's
- Tags..o.o a bit different from others?
00:18:943 (x) - add a note here sounds better o.o
00:29:789 (9) - replace whistle
01:16:866 (1) - delete new combo


others are fine:D star for you
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Diffs•
I think "Teras's Insane" should be "Teras' Insane".

•Overall•
What do you think about changing combo colours?

•Teras's Insane•
00:31:635 (8) - New combo.
01:19:173 (1) - 1 grid up?

•Hard•
00:35:097 (1,2) - 1 grid left?

Seriously, I think that roflninja's diffs should have a lot of changements. If It's your first map, keep it but have some improvements.

Star~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Fixed most of the changes and fixed the name. Seems like I missed that one. Thanks for noticing Kecco. :P


So here's the update. Delete the other one. ^^

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
roflninja
All mods done, thank you for the time

@Sekuyi

if you have a program to strip the audio lemme know cause ones i have wont do it
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
As I said. Add the new diff I gave you that had the name change. And delete Teras's Insane :P
Because the old version is till there. ^^
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i love this song= =, good luck.
you have an unused .osb file, delete it and re full-submit
when you want hitsound on a slider's all beats, don't just choose the slider and select hitsound, it will change the sliderslide sound, choose every beat to add hitsounds plz. this problem happens many times. example:00:26:789 (4) @ [Normal]
[Normal] and [Hard] needs same kiai time as [Teras'Insane]
offset: about +5
you use too many circles in your own diff= =, try to use more sliders.

[Normal]
slider tick rate:1
00:26:097 (2,3,4) - it's hard for players to read 3/4 beat at the very beginning, maybe you should use a slider instead of 2&3&4's start, and a circle instead of 4's end.
00:42:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 grid down?
00:50:097 (1) - 1 grid left to stack with (2)
01:07:173 (1) - turn off "grid snap" and make it stack with (5)'s end.

[Hard]
00:53:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...don't think you need these new combos.
01:28:058 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

[Teras' Insane]
00:02:097 (1) - nazi. 1 grid down.
00:26:443 (2) - whistle at the start.
00:30:943 (5) - whistle
00:38:327 (8) - ^
00:38:789 (1) - whistle at the end.
01:09:366 (9) - stack with (8)'s end?
01:11:558 (5) - why not at the symmetrical place with (1)? 3 grid up.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - spam finish is stupid.
01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Teras' Insane]
00:02:097 (1) - nazi. 1 grid down. Fixed Nazi grid.
00:26:443 (2) - whistle at the start. Done.
00:30:943 (5) - whistle Done.
00:38:327 (8) - ^ ^
00:38:789 (1) - whistle at the end. Done.
01:09:366 (9) - stack with (8)'s end? I like how it looks at the moment. So I won't do this. ^^
01:11:558 (5) - why not at the symmetrical place with (1)? 3 grid up. Done.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - spam finish is stupid. Hmpff. Remove finish from (1)
01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
Thanks for your mod. ^^

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu
ryuzza_old
2 posts
Joined September 2009
ryuzza_old
someone help me!!! roflninja is forcing me to star him by a gun to the head!!!!
jk...

i'll mod this later
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
here you go with the vid: http://www.mediafire.com/?tjozjgoenzf
I am using "Any Video Converter" for that. Also, this thread could be interesting for you: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=639
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi

[General]
1) Please full submit again, because I have 2 diff when I already download
2) The begin of song is not same on each diff, [Teras' Insane] is begin at 00:02:097, but why other diff is start at 00:25:866? Please map from 00:02:097

[Normal]
I think the object place in red tick might be confuse for beginner player.... Fix this

00:33:943 (3) - Mix it up with whistle and clap, doesn't looks good, remove whistle or clap?
01:13:173 (5) - New combo?

[Hard]
01:03:481 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:07:173 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:250 (1) - Move 1 grid up?

[Teras' Insane]
Fine~

Good song
STAR
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Good morning! It's really almost afternoon here... But whatever, it's morning for me.

Here's some stuff I found while going through it quickly.

General
  1. Do a full submit. I only get Normal and Hard :( .
Normal
It's ok with notes on red ticks for normal IMO. However, avoid blue ticks as much as possible.
01:02:097 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern bothers me. Maybe you should convert it into sliders due to confusion and blue ticks.

[Hard]
00:26:327 (x) Maybe add a note here and stack it with what's currently (3).
00:31:404 (7) - New combo
00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you look closesly, this stream has inconsistent spacing
01:28:289 (4) - Too far from (3), no?
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Your preview point time is different in Normal and Hard. Please set the same value on every difficulty.

[Hard]

00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing in this stream is inconsistent. Please align the notes manually with Distance Snap turned off.
01:10:404 (1,2) - This double sound odd. Move it 1/4 back or just transform it into a single note.

I don't see the Teras difficulty. You need to do the full submission to get it back.

not bad, +star
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:50:097 (6) - add new combo
01:28:289 (4) - distance check

[Teras' Insane]
fine
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Must
Should
Suggestion

[Normal]
Clear. All good. May be add custom colours?

[Hard]
00:31:404 - new combo
00:49:866 - ^
00:58:404 - ^
01:04:404 - distance
01:09:020 - move to another place
01:10:866 - remove new combo
01:23:789 - distance
01:28:750 - finish

[Insane]
00:01:635 - starting from here add some notes
00:22:404 - new combo
00:46:404 - ^
00:51:250 - ^
00:53:789 - place this notes with simetry :3
01:19:173 - new combo
01:26:212 - short break must be removed. Place here spinner (auto bonus is about 5000p)

Star ;; )
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar
Well, just little suggestions
If you don't like, ignore~

[Normal]
00:48:712 (2,3,4) - I don't like the 3 finish patterns :/, (2) Whistle; (3) nothing; (4) whistle
00:50:097 (1,2) - stack with 00:49:520 (4)

[Hard]
00:46:404 (1) - I don't like finish. Maybe, Whistle in the begin and in the end

[Teras' Insane]
00:47:789 (1,2,3,4) - buh spam finish ;.;
01:18:366 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:058 (2,3,4) - ^
01:25:750 (2,3,4) - ^

Good luck~ :>
Star~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Insane]
00:01:635 - starting from here add some notes Kay. Added more notes ;)
00:22:404 - new combo
00:46:404 - ^ Nah, I prefer it like it is now.
00:51:250 - ^ [color=#0000FF]Added new combo at (9) instead. :P [/color]
[/color]00:53:789 - place this notes with simetry :3 Placed them in another way. Feel free to recheck.
01:19:173 - new combo Done.
01:26:212 - short break must be removed. Place here spinner (auto bonus is about 5000p) Hmm. Added the spinner then. But it sounds strange to me. So I might do some other changes later.

Star ;; )
Thanks for your mod. ^^
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

scar1410 wrote:

Well, just little suggestions
If you don't like, ignore~

[Normal]
00:48:712 (2,3,4) - I don't like the 3 finish patterns :/, (2) Whistle; (3) nothing; (4) whistle
00:50:097 (1,2) - stack with 00:49:520 (4)

[Hard]
00:46:404 (1) - I don't like finish. Maybe, Whistle in the begin and in the end

[Teras' Insane]
00:47:789 (1,2,3,4) - buh spam finish ;.; I like how it sounds here. I won't do anything about it.
01:18:366 (2,3,4) - ^ Removed one more finish. It should be better now.
01:22:058 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:25:750 (2,3,4) - ^^

Good luck~ :>
Star~
Thanks ~

roflninja, feel free to rename my diff to [Teras' Hard]. As I don't find it being that insane. I bet someone will ask you to do that eventually anyways. But just update this first though~

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Lets see....
A very new mapper feeling xD
I don't think countdown fits too well on this song
I am unsure about the timing... it sounds like the vocal is earlier than the music D:

Normal-
00:25:866 (1) - I say remove this, starting on a 1/2 vocal that's not very clear feels kinda unsettling
00:26:097 (1,2,3,1) - hmm.. this part sounds the same as 00:29:789 (2,3,4), 00:33:481 (2,3,4) and so on... yet only this part follows vocal more and uses 1/4? stick with 1/2 please... or actually 1/1?
00:42:712 (1) - hmm, if you're matching vocal, extend this by 1/4... if not, then snap the repeat to 1/1
@.@ the hitsounds are basic... they don't sound -bad- though

Hard-
The overall difficulty could be adjusted a bit, but its fine...
00:30:250 (3) - following how you were mapping this, shift this back a 1/4 beat
01:24:135 (5) - start this on the red tick (then extend by 1/4) (compare this to 01:09:250 (6))
01:28:289 (4) - spacing? (or why is it hanging out like this)
I think Normal and Hard should match Insane's kiai

Teras'- Add a tiny bit of lead-in time please
00:01:635 (1,2) - what, a jump right off the bat?
00:15:020 - shift timing panel before note
00:40:635 (4) - nazi down a tick, make this a straight line
00:43:866 - hmm add note to match 00:42:020 (3)? or remove 42:020? xD
00:43:981 (6) - ^ if you did add a note, add clap to match too
00:56:558 (2) - I was more expecting this to be a 1/4 note following vocal, but its fine ><
01:14:558 (1,2,3,4) - ... make these the same amount of notes and slider length as 01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5)? (though I kinda think you should remove the clap on this stream)
Fair

There's one part of the video that seems almost... not allowed... mmm
@.@ have someone check timing...?
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
For the moment, i'll leave a star, tell me by forum pm after you fix Shinxyn's mod.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Shinxyn wrote:

Lets see....
A very new mapper feeling xD
I don't think countdown fits too well on this song
I am unsure about the timing... it sounds like the vocal is earlier than the music D:



Teras'- Add a tiny bit of lead-in time please Added.
00:01:635 (1,2) - what, a jump right off the bat? Wopps. Must have done that by mistake XD
00:15:020 - shift timing panel before note Done ~
00:40:635 (4) - nazi down a tick, make this a straight line Fixed Nazi grid.
00:43:866 - hmm add note to match 00:42:020 (3)? or remove 42:020? xD Added a note.
00:43:981 (6) - ^ if you did add a note, add clap to match too ^
00:56:558 (2) - I was more expecting this to be a 1/4 note following vocal, but its fine >< I added one more note so it follows the vocal.
01:14:558 (1,2,3,4) - ... make these the same amount of notes and slider length as 01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5)? (though I kinda think you should remove the clap on this stream) Done ~
Fair

There's one part of the video that seems almost... not allowed... mmm
@.@ have someone check timing...? I checked the timing before I asked to guest map this. And it looked fine to me. Same goes with the offset O.o I'm not an expert. But I'm sure this timing is correct.
Thanks for your mod Shinx

Download: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Normal
00:50:097 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat
Hard
00:30:135 (3) - spacing
00:34:404 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:250 (1) - ^
00:44:327 (x) - add a note?
01:24:020 (5) - move this to the next blue tick and then shorten it by 1/4 beat
Teras's Insane
00:27:943 (6) - i grid right

good map
STAR!
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Now's the time to give away the star~ * ^^
Nice work!
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello roflninja.

[Normal]
00:42:712 (1) - I don't like this.Maybe remove and add 2 sliders? [00:42:712 - 00:43:173,or probably adding a reverse-slider with 00:42:943 between those notes] and [00:43:635-00:44:097]
00:50:097 (1) - ^
01:23:789 (1) - Maybe you could silence the spinner?

[Hard]
00:51:712 (6) - New combo?
01:22:866 (1) - Remoe new combo?
01:23:789 (4) - New combo?
01:24:020 - Add a circle here.

[Teras' Insane]
Fine,but why there's no video in this difficulty?

Good luck,star~
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