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Maon Kurosaki - Setsuna no Kajitsu

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Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
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Homura-

N a s y a wrote:

आपसे मिलकर अच्छा लगा　
:arrow: いや俺うえらえらだよ

[たなとす]

・00:49:120 (1) - ここ00:08:575 (1) -みたいに スライダーにnormalのwhisleつけてもいい気がする　
:arrow: normal whistleは最初のとこだけでいいかなー なんか音が思ってるのと違う
・00:51:496 (1) - ^
:arrow: ^
・01:22:684 (4,5) - 完全に重ねるか離すかにしてほしいかも
:arrow: ここら辺の配置変えました
・01:23:427 (2) - vocalが01:23:724 - で切れてるので1/1スライダーでいいかもしれない
:arrow: ^

[ほむら]
・スタックが多かった(konami)
:arrow: あの音取りするとやっぱりスタックさせちゃうっていうか・・・ हाँ।

[いまげ]　代わりに直しました
・00:17:932 (1) - 終点のadditionsをdrumにしてもいいかもしれない
:arrow: はい
・00:38:130 (2) - ここうるさくない？
:arrow: さい　(めちゃくちゃうるさかったので自分のdiffに合わせました)　
・01:26:694 (3) - finishいれてもいいかも？
:arrow: こう
all fixed

以上です。
がんばってください :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea:
前のmodでも言われたところをズバっと言ってくれたのでかなり助かりました
modありです azul待ってます
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Lecana

N a s y a wrote:

आपसे मिलकर अच्छा लगा



[れかな]

・01:26:249 (3) - 音的には1/2スライダーと単発？
:arrow: OKです～


以上です。
がんばってください :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea:
ありがとうございました（˘ ³˘)

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Title:Setsuna no Kajitsu
TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:Homura-
Version:Lecana's Insane
Source:グリザイアの楽園 -LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA-
Tags:grisaia no rakuen frontwing opening tv size visual novel image-- shirakai kacha lecana haruru
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387,258,72437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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215,275,73922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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194,15,74367,1,2,1:0:0:0:
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235,266,78080,1,6,0:0:0:0:
235,266,78377,6,0,P|143:303|76:264,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,358,79120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79640,12,8,80605,0:0:0:0:
346,251,80902,5,12,0:0:0:0:
346,251,81051,2,0,P|391:157|388:100,1,152.999995330811,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,74,81496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,74,81793,2,0,L|172:158,1,76.4999976654053,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,119,82387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,54,82536,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,291,83427,2,0,P|251:340|184:325,1,152.999995330811,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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132,232,85209,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
[General]
  1. 赤線はGuyさんのに合わせましょう！
    :arrow: そのままでいいです！
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:734 (3) - 音が伸びているので伸ばしませんか？
  2. 00:44:664 (2,3) - スタックのこのパターンはやりづらいです。このように変更してみては？

    img
  3. 01:01:892 (1,2) - 上記と同様に！
  4. 01:02:932 (4,5,6,7) - 音取りが途切れ途切れになっているので少しやりづらい印象がありました、このようにしてみては。
  5. 01:04:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音がつながっているところで音を切ると不自然なので、繋げてこのようにしてみては？
  6. 01:10:506 (5,6,1,2) - ちょっと難しいのでリバース使ってあげましょう。
  7. 01:12:437 (4,5,6,7) - 01:02:932 (4,5,6,7) - とおそらく同じ
  8. 01:17:932 (3,4) - ちょっとリズムが読みづらいです。4から音が伸びているので同じようにスライダーで伸ばしてあげるといいです
  9. 01:26:100 (4,5,6) - 曲に合わせるのであれば、こちらの音取りのほうがフィットするかもしれません
[学校行け]
  1. 00:13:773 (3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが手前からの流れも綺麗だし、次の 00:14:219 (1) - ここが強調されると思います。
  2. 00:54:169 (2) - なんでここだけいきなり裏の音をとっているのかよくわからないのでメロディ拾いませんか？
  3. 01:01:150 (3,1) - この間隔は非常にわかりづらいのでこのようなパターンを用いるのであれば３にスタックさせるべきです。
  4. 01:28:922 (1,2) - どうでもいいけどパターンにあわせるならこっちのほうが綺麗(見た目)
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[わかな]
  1. 00:06:051 (1,2,3) - そもそもどこの音に合わせているのかわからないので、メロディにあわせませんか？
  2. 00:16:150 (3,4) - 流れが悪い上にジャンプしすぎだから調整しよう！ｗ
  3. 00:51:199 (1,2) - スライダー速度早くするなら1番じゃなくて2番のスライダーじゃない？？？？？？？？？？
  4. 00:58:773 (2,3) - 流れは悪くないんだけど、２と３の間に間隔をあけてしまうと、流れを殺しているように感じるから、詰めない？00:58:922 - add noteでもいいし、00:58:773 (2) - 同じようにスライダーを使ってもいい
  5. 01:01:298 (2,3) - Overmap 音がないところに配置はしてはいけません！ｗ
  6. 01:08:130 (4,5,6) - これでもいいんだけどlight insaneだったら飛びすぎだしやりづらいから、こんな感じで
  7. 01:08:427 - ここにsoft-finishいれよね、せやね。
  8. 01:09:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - まず 01:09:466 (2,3) - 3連打っぽいような音がないし、01:10:060 (4) - ここから音が伸びているので、単発でとめるのはフィットしてないと思う。だから以下の音取りを試してみてください。
  9. 01:27:140 (6) - 頭のclapを消しましょう！
  10. 01:28:625 (1,2,3,4) - なんでDSがばらばらなのかわからない、流れの提案もします！01:28:773 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
[Haruru's Insane]
  1. nice map :3
[Thanatos]
  1. 00:16:595 (1,2,3) - キックが入るような音ではない気がする・・・。
  2. 00:50:605 (4,5) - 流れ的にはCtrl+Gしたほうがいい、今のままの流れだと右下にはこないきがする、、、
  3. 00:54:021 (3) - 音にはあってるけどExtraだし、次のような音取りでつめたほうがいいかも？
  4. 01:00:407 (4,1) - 微妙な間隔開いていてやりづらい印象がありました、4のスライダーの終点にフィニッシュが入るくらい強いのであれば、このような音取りがフィットすると思います。
  5. 01:10:951 (5,6) - haruruさんのほうではずーっと連打がここには入っているのでExtraもそれにあわせたほうがいいかも
  6. 01:20:159 (5,1) - 流れがあまりよくないので、01:20:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - これを大きなスライダーと見て、このくらい傾ければ流れはよくなると思います、そのあとの流れもこれに沿って修正してみてください。
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  7. 01:28:031 (1,1,1,1,1) - もちろんだけどNcたくさんあって見づらいのでやめましょう。
Last edited by Satellite , edited 1 time in total.
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai

Satellite wrote:

[General]
  1. 赤線はGuyさんのに合わせましょう！ :arrow: ほむらさんよろしく～ :)
8-) 8-) 8-) →[学校行け] ← 8-) 8-) 8-)
  1. 00:13:773 (3) - Ctrl+Gしたほうが手前からの流れも綺麗だし、次の 00:14:219 (1) - ここが強調されると思います。 OK~
  2. 00:54:169 (2) - なんでここだけいきなり裏の音をとっているのかよくわからないのでメロディ拾いませんか？ すんません… 直したけど配置と音付けがまずいかもしれない :|
  3. 01:01:150 (3,1) - この間隔は非常にわかりづらいのでこのようなパターンを用いるのであれば３にスタックさせるべきです。 OKOK~
  4. 01:28:922 (1,2) - どうでもいいけどパターンにあわせるならこっちのほうが綺麗(見た目) 採用～～～～！！ いや、天才？
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さててありがとなのら :oops:
http://puu.sh/iBVeG.zip
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

Satellite wrote:

[General]
  1. 赤線はGuyさんのに合わせましょう！
    :arrow: そのままでいいです！
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:734 (3) - 音が伸びているので伸ばしませんか？
  2. 00:44:664 (2,3) - スタックのこのパターンはやりづらいです。このように変更してみては？

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  3. 01:01:892 (1,2) - 上記と同様に！
  4. 01:02:932 (4,5,6,7) - 音取りが途切れ途切れになっているので少しやりづらい印象がありました、このようにしてみては。
  5. 01:04:862 (2,3,4,5) - 音がつながっているところで音を切ると不自然なので、繋げてこのようにしてみては？
  6. 01:10:506 (5,6,1,2) - ちょっと難しいのでリバース使ってあげましょう。
  7. 01:12:437 (4,5,6,7) - 01:02:932 (4,5,6,7) - とおそらく同じ
  8. 01:17:932 (3,4) - ちょっとリズムが読みづらいです。4から音が伸びているので同じようにスライダーで伸ばしてあげるといいです
  9. 01:26:100 (4,5,6) - 曲に合わせるのであれば、こちらの音取りのほうがフィットするかもしれません
:arrow: all fixed


[Thanatos]
  1. 00:16:595 (1,2,3) - キックが入るような音ではない気がする・・・。

    :arrow: no change
  2. 00:50:605 (4,5) - 流れ的にはCtrl+Gしたほうがいい、今のままの流れだと右下にはこないきがする、、、
    :arrow: 別に今のままでも大丈夫だと思います
  3. 00:54:021 (3) - 音にはあってるけどExtraだし、次のような音取りでつめたほうがいいかも？
  4. 01:00:407 (4,1) - 微妙な間隔開いていてやりづらい印象がありました、4のスライダーの終点にフィニッシュが入るくらい強いのであれば、このような音取りがフィットすると思います。
  5. 01:10:951 (5,6) - haruruさんのほうではずーっと連打がここには入っているのでExtraもそれにあわせたほうがいいかも
  6. 01:20:159 (5,1) - 流れがあまりよくないので、01:20:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - これを大きなスライダーと見て、このくらい傾ければ流れはよくなると思います、そのあとの流れもこれに沿って修正してみてください。
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  7. 01:28:031 (1,1,1,1,1) - もちろんだけどNcたくさんあって見づらいのでやめましょう。
書いてないところは直しました
さんきゅーさってってー
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Lecana

Satellite wrote:

[General]


[わかな]
  1. 00:06:051 (1,2,3) - そもそもどこの音に合わせているのかわからないので、メロディにあわせませんか？
  2. 00:16:150 (3,4) - 流れが悪い上にジャンプしすぎだから調整しよう！ｗ
  3. 00:51:199 (1,2) - スライダー速度早くするなら1番じゃなくて2番のスライダーじゃない？？？？？？？？？？
  4. 00:58:773 (2,3) - 流れは悪くないんだけど、２と３の間に間隔をあけてしまうと、流れを殺しているように感じるから、詰めない？00:58:922 - add noteでもいいし、00:58:773 (2) - 同じようにスライダーを使ってもいい
  5. 01:01:298 (2,3) - Overmap 音がないところに配置はしてはいけません！ｗ
  6. 01:08:130 (4,5,6) - これでもいいんだけどlight insaneだったら飛びすぎだしやりづらいから、こんな感じで
  7. 01:08:427 - ここにsoft-finishいれよね、せやね。
  8. 01:09:466 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - まず 01:09:466 (2,3) - 3連打っぽいような音がないし、01:10:060 (4) - ここから音が伸びているので、単発でとめるのはフィットしてないと思う。だから以下の音取りを試してみてください。
  9. 01:27:140 (6) - 頭のclapを消しましょう！
  10. 01:28:625 (1,2,3,4) - なんでDSがばらばらなのかわからない、流れの提案もします！01:28:773 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
:arrow: 全部OK～～～～
わかなわかんな～い( •́દ•̩̥̀ )
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Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
OK looks fine to me ~ good luck :3/
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-
(((( ;ﾟдﾟ))))ｱﾜﾜﾜﾜ
Ahnon2555
21 posts
Joined October 2012
Ahnon2555
Ranked please :)
Ahnon2555
21 posts
Joined October 2012
Ahnon2555
Qualified Now :)
Yoshimaro
539 posts
Joined January 2014
Yoshimaro
When this gets ranked, I'm the first one to say that SnowWhite gonna DT + HD this.
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi

Thanatos

  1. 00:39:021 (2,3,4,5) - I barely can hear the stream, I feel that I'm clicking the air, remove stream or add normal sampleset on every beat there
  2. 01:06:348 (4,5,6,7) - same as above
  3. 01:10:951 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
  4. 01:20:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll get more opinions about this, also maybe you can get some with a QAT
  5. rest is cool
Haruru:

  1. 01:01:744 (4,1) - reduce the spacing a bit in this pattern, just to avoid confusion about 1/2
  2. 01:19:937 (2,3) - weird stack o.o, its this on purpose? cuz looks a bit bad in game tbh
  3. 01:20:308 (4) - same as Thanatos I'll ask for some opinions about this
Lecana:

  1. 00:47:932 (1,1,1,1) - don't combo spam pls, it's not necessary, plus you just mess up the drain in the whole diff
Normal:

  1. 00:21:199 (2,3,1) - flow here is a bit weird, and doesn't play nice for a normal diff imo, just do something like this:
    SPOILER
    I like this normal diff
call me back, when u reply to this
Lecana
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Lecana

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Lecana:

  1. 00:47:932 (1,1,1,1) - don't combo spam pls, it's not necessary, plus you just mess up the drain in the whole diff
    :arrow: OK


call me back, when u reply to this
thx mod~(//∇//)

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TitleUnicode:刹那の果実
Artist:Maon Kurosaki
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Creator:Homura-
Version:Lecana's Insane
Source:グリザイアの楽園 -LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA-
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Haruru
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Haruru

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Haruru:

  1. 01:01:744 (4,1) - reduce the spacing a bit in this pattern, just to avoid confusion about 1/2
  2. 01:19:937 (2,3) - weird stack o.o, its this on purpose? cuz looks a bit bad in game tbh
  3. 01:20:308 (4) - same as Thanatos I'll ask for some opinions about this

call me back, when u reply to this
all fixed. thanks! http://puu.sh/iTQUU.zip
Homura-
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Homura-

Natsu wrote:

Hi

Thanatos

  1. 00:39:021 (2,3,4,5) - I barely can hear the stream, I feel that I'm clicking the air, remove stream or add normal sampleset on every beat there
    :arrow: fixed
  2. 01:06:348 (4,5,6,7) - same as above :arrow: fixed
  3. 01:10:951 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ :arrow: fixed
  4. 01:20:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'll get more opinions about this, also maybe you can get some with a QAT
    :arrow: it removed the whistle except head with alacat's opinion
  5. rest is cool
Normal:

  1. 00:21:199 (2,3,1) - flow here is a bit weird, and doesn't play nice for a normal diff imo, just do something like this:
    :arrow: fixed
    SPOILER
    I like this normal diff
call me back, when u reply to this
thank you for mod!
GO~
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congratz.
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Thank you for Natsu!
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Congrats Homura- °v°/
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Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Inappropriate spread.
  1. Normal has a lot of constant 1/2 rhythms, so it's like a light hard difficulty, which makes gap from easy to normal a but large, because your Easy is almost 3/2 or 2/1 sliders with 1/1 rhythm gap, with only a few circles.
Haruru's Insane

Inappropriate emphasis on patterns.
  1. 01:03:971 (4,5,1) - The beat: 01:04:268 - in music is stronger than 01:04:120 - , we'd like to see the space of 01:04:120 (5,1) - is larger than 01:03:971 (4,5) -, which fits music more.
Readablility issues.
  1. 01:19:417 (4,1) - This pattern is very hard to read due to the anti-jump on 1/1 and 1/2 rhythms, although you add an NC at 01:19:565 (1) - . We'd like you to split 01:19:417 (4,1) -out.
  2. 01:19:565 (1,2,3,4) - The distance space has a big mess here: 01:19:565 (1,2) - the 1/4's distance is almost same even larger than the 01:20:011 (3,4) - 1/2's, we'd recommend you use the distance snap more properly and make the pattern easier to read.

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###DM
Fycho
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[iMage's Easy]
  1. 00:00:581 (1,2,1) - Can you please not overlap these sliders, they are really confusing for beginners.
[Thanatos]
  1. 00:57:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:58:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The jumps are overdone somehow, I suggest you decrease the DS of them a bit, especially 00:57:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which should be smaller than 00:58:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - because the music is progressive.
Haruru
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Haruru
all fixed http://puu.sh/j1hSB.zip
Meg
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Meg

Fycho wrote:

[iMage's Easy]
  1. 00:00:581 (1,2,1) - Can you please not overlap these sliders, they are really confusing for beginners.
EDIT: i fixed it
http://puu.sh/j1k7I.zip
Natsu
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Natsu

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice



Haruru's Insane


Readablility issues.
01:19:417 (4,1) - This pattern is very hard to read due to the anti-jump on 1/1 and 1/2 rhythms, although you add an NC at 01:19:565 (1) - . We'd like you to split 01:19:417 (4,1) -out. I'm still wonder how this can be hard to read LOL?

Also I do disagree with the spread, its fine as it is, you know the 1/2 patterns at normal diff are sliders mostly people is basically clicking 1/1 objects and holding

###DM
anyways xD, let me know when you fix the ¨Issues¨.
Homura-
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Homura-

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

fixed

thanks QATs
sorry Satellite and Natsu :cry:
Last edited by Homura- , edited 2 times in total.
Homura-
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Homura-

Fycho wrote:

[Thanatos]
  1. 00:57:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:58:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The jumps are overdone somehow, I suggest you decrease the DS of them a bit, especially 00:57:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , which should be smaller than 00:58:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - because the music is progressive.
    :arrow: I have kept in mind the arrangement as much as possible easy to AIM.　The DS it is whether or not easy to do rather than such as.This is the story of the players point of view.
    This rise most for me.
    I do not intend to change this arrangement by the above reasons .
thank you for mod
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
As requested.

- Lecana's Insane :
00:03:481 - (Timing points) They are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, fix the volume please.
Same for 00:04:829 -

- Haruru's Insane :
01:19:565 (1,2,3) - Has this been fixed ? according to Disqualification Notice concerning issues with reading.

-Thanatos :
00:24:169 (2,3) - There should be more distance between this slider and this circle. Because they are too close compared to what you did before and after, and it could be better if you keep consistency with difficulty and spacing. It will be more fluid to play.



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Haruru
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Haruru
fixed. sorry for the inconvenience. http://puu.sh/j1rfr.zip
Homura-
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Homura-

Cherry Blossom wrote:

As requested.

- Lecana's Insane :
00:03:481 - (Timing points) They are at the same time but they don't have the same volume, fix the volume please.
Same for 00:04:829 -
:arrow: It was fixed in place

-Thanatos :
00:24:169 (2,3) - There should be more distance between this slider and this circle. Because they are too close compared to what you did before and after, and it could be better if you keep consistency with difficulty and spacing. It will be more fluid to play.
:arrow: fixed


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thank you for mod

gogo~
Cherry Blossom
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Good Luck, rebubbled.
Homura-
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Thank you for Cherry Blossom　 :)
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