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miwa - chAngE (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Sekuyi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 14. November 2010 at 19:38:37

Artist: miwa
Title: chAngE (TV Size)
Source: BLEACH
Tags: Ichigo Kon Urahara Kuroneko-sHerald
BPM: 165
Filesize: 11464kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bankai (4,57 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Hollow (4,83 stars, 257 notes)
  3. Kuro Shikai (2,31 stars, 95 notes)
  4. Shikai (3,02 stars, 121 notes)
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size)
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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All maps finished~
Adamozo
Awesome song and nice map. Star :>
wmfchris
Official ranking criteria: need a easier diff lower than 3 stars.

[hard]
0:02:940 (1) spacing
0:22:213 (1) spacing, up 1 grid
0:27:667 (3,4) down 1 grid
0:38:031 (5) spacing, right 1 grid
0:54:758 (1~12) resnap it into a stright line

*a bit boring, more patterns of note arrangements can be used

[normal+] HP drain rate -1
0:04:758 (3) spacing
0:08:031 (7,8) spacing, right 1/2 grid

[normal] OA+1

Star
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Done~!
Leeg
Hi! Let's mod this :p
I recommend you to put a video-background
Also, don't follow things I say you don't like :D

[Normal]
00:01:122 (2) -
00:01:849 (3) -
00:02:576 (4) -
00:21:849 (2) -
00:22:213 (3) -
00:27:304 (1) -
00:27:667 (2) -
00:29:122 (4) -
00:29:849 (5) -
00:30:213 (6) -
00:31:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:34:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
... and more
Distance snap all!!

A lot of errors with that, you'll have to move each note again to relocate all. :S
I don't see more errors except that^. Maybe some parts don't follow the rythm but I can't suggest any change.


[Normal+]
I recommend you use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
00:29:122 (6) - move 3 grid right and one up.
00:29:849 (7) - distance snap if you do ^
00:30:213 (8) - distance snap if you do ^
00:48:031 (1) - ¿New combo?
00:54:758 (1) - distance snap, it's hard to get there from the previous beat.
01:09:122 (3) - Move to previous white tick and distance snap.
01:09:485 (4) - ^
01:09:849 (5) - ^
01:27:667 (1) - cut this , it should finish on the previos red tick
01:28:031 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 to white tick, and the others, you know :D


[Hard]
I don't like how you confuse people with those disordered streams >_> but it's only my opinion.
00:06:940 (4) - Distance snaping, or it will be confusing. And so the following beats.
00:22:576 (2) - Move one grid up.
01:11:667 (1) - Start on previous white tick, and end here 01:13:849 -
01:17:122 (1) - < Start. End> 01:19:667 -

That's all :D

Nice map and great song :O
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Leeg wrote:

Hi! Let's mod this :p
I recommend you to put a video-background
Also, don't follow things I say you don't like :D

[Normal]
00:01:122 (2) - v
00:01:849 (3) - v
00:02:576 (4) - v
00:21:849 (2) - v
00:22:213 (3) - v
00:27:304 (1) - v
00:27:667 (2) - v
00:29:122 (4) - v
00:29:849 (5) - v
00:30:213 (6) - *fixed* everything @1x spacing now
00:31:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - its 1x spacing from here^^
00:34:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
... and more ^
Distance snap all!!

A lot of errors with that, you'll have to move each note again to relocate all. :S
I don't see more errors except that^. Maybe some parts don't follow the rythm but I can't suggest any change.


[Normal+]
I recommend you use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
00:29:122 (6) - move 3 grid right and one up.
00:29:849 (7) - distance snap if you do ^
00:30:213 (8) - distance snap if you do ^
00:48:031 (1) - ¿New combo?
00:54:758 (1) - distance snap, it's hard to get there from the previous beat.
01:09:122 (3) - Move to previous white tick and distance snap.
01:09:485 (4) - ^
01:09:849 (5) - ^
01:27:667 (1) - cut this , it should finish on the previos red tick in the song it's 3 short and 1 long guitar riff(? dunno if its called so in english), sounds scary if i remove the last short one ö.ö
01:28:031 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 to white tick, and the others, you know :D ^


[Hard]
I don't like how you confuse people with those disordered streams >_> but it's only my opinion.
00:06:940 (4) - Distance snaping, or it will be confusing. And so the following beats.
00:22:576 (2) - Move one grid up.
01:11:667 (1) - Start on previous white tick, and end here 01:13:849 -
01:17:122 (1) - < Start. End> 01:19:667 -

That's all :D

Nice map and great song :O
Done~!
Adamozo

Leeg wrote:

Hi! Let's mod this :p
I recommend you to put a video-background
Also, don't follow things I say you don't like :D

[Normal]
00:01:122 (2) -
00:01:849 (3) -
00:02:576 (4) -
00:21:849 (2) -
00:22:213 (3) -
00:27:304 (1) -
00:27:667 (2) -
00:29:122 (4) -
00:29:849 (5) -
00:30:213 (6) -
00:31:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:34:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
... and more
Distance snap all!!

A lot of errors with that, you'll have to move each note again to relocate all. :S
I don't see more errors except that^. Maybe some parts don't follow the rythm but I can't suggest any change.


[Normal+]
I recommend you use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
00:29:122 (6) - move 3 grid right and one up.
00:29:849 (7) - distance snap if you do ^
00:30:213 (8) - distance snap if you do ^
00:48:031 (1) - ¿New combo?
00:54:758 (1) - distance snap, it's hard to get there from the previous beat.
01:09:122 (3) - Move to previous white tick and distance snap.
01:09:485 (4) - ^
01:09:849 (5) - ^
01:27:667 (1) - cut this , it should finish on the previos red tick
01:28:031 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 to white tick, and the others, you know :D


[Hard]
I don't like how you confuse people with those disordered streams >_> but it's only my opinion.
00:06:940 (4) - Distance snaping, or it will be confusing. And so the following beats.
00:22:576 (2) - Move one grid up.
01:11:667 (1) - Start on previous white tick, and end here 01:13:849 -
01:17:122 (1) - < Start. End> 01:19:667 -

That's all :D

Nice map and great song :O
It's good idea. Put video dawg ~.~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Meow meow~! ^^
Sakura
[General]
What's the point of having a Normal and a Normal+?

[Normal]
Since you like +s on diffs i'd say this is an Easy+

[Normal+]
Uhh... why not just rename this to Hard? oh but you already have one ._. i dunno it's just odd to me

[Hard]
Ok this is an insane...


But nevertheless nice map! +Star The diffs are just ehh... well... weird
-Xero-
Moin,

[Allgemein]
-Artist: Naoki-T
-Titel: chAngE
-Source: Bleach (kein OP, du kannst aber in den Tags "Opening X (X= Das wievielte Opening)" hinzufügen)
Sound Qualität ist nicht gut : /
Lied hört zu aprubt auf.
Die Circles und Sliders sind manchmal ziemlich zufällig plaziert. Vielleicht machste nochmal ein paar Stellen neu.
Skin und Hitsounds sind jedoch gut. (Haste den Skin selber gemacht? Wenn ja - Respekt!)
Benutze die gleichen Combo Farben für alle Diffs.
Du kannst nicht die eine Diff. in 1/2, 1/4 snappen und die andere in 1/6.

[Normal]
Hitsounds sind zu laut.

00:07:667 (2) - Ein Tick nach oben.
00:10:940 (1) - Lass den Spinner hier enden.
00:54:213 (1) - Solche Spacings sind nichts für Normals.
00:54:758 (1) - .. Also ein bisschen einfallsreicher geht's dann schon oder?
01:06:395 (1,2) - ^

Bitte geh die gesamte Map nochmal durch und guck was du verbessern könntest..

Die anderen Schwierigkeiten haben ähnliche Probleme.

Remappe am besten nochmal die Maps, da sie doch ziemlich zufällig gemappt wurden.
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Xero_HT wrote:

Moin,

[Allgemein]
-Artist: Naoki-T ok, stimmt 'miwa' heißt das album. auch grad gemerkt
-Titel: chAngE well, its the same. waiting for a BAT to approve that the title's characters have to be 1:1
-Source: Bleach (kein OP, du kannst aber in den Tags "Opening X (X= Das wievielte Opening)" hinzufügen)ok
Sound Qualität ist nicht gut : /ich weiß nicht was du hast, ist ganz normal oO?
Lied hört zu aprubt auf.da es ein opening song ist, ist es tv-size!
Die Circles und Sliders sind manchmal ziemlich zufällig plaziert. Vielleicht machste nochmal ein paar Stellen neu.nö ôo
Skin und Hitsounds sind jedoch gut. (Haste den Skin selber gemacht? Wenn ja - Respekt!)jop, nen ganzen abend dran gesessen^^
Benutze die gleichen Combo Farben für alle Diffs.die farben hab ich entsprechend den hintergrundbildern gewählt. find sie ok
Du kannst nicht die eine Diff. in 1/2, 1/4 snappen und die andere in 1/6. klar, das ist der sinn von verschiedenen diffs. oder hast du schonmal ein hard, insane oder lunatic auf 1/1 gesehen, weil easy auch 1/1 war oO?

[Normal]
Hitsounds sind zu laut. find ich nicht. nur die am anfang, hab die runtergeschraubt

00:07:667 (2) - Ein Tick nach oben. h8 'nazi' mods...
00:10:940 (1) - Lass den Spinner hier enden. ???
00:54:213 (1) - Solche Spacings sind nichts für Normals.zu klein oder wie oO? ist ein neuer combo. solange der abstand nicht zu extrem ist ists in ordnung. und der abstand hier ist ja wohl ohne jegliche probleme zu erreichen!
00:54:758 (1) - .. Also ein bisschen einfallsreicher geht's dann schon oder? siehe mod post vor dir und weiter oben (glaub erster mod post). die map ist eigentlich easy und ranked kriterium ist mindestens eine map mit <3 sternen
01:06:395 (1,2) - ^^

Bitte geh die gesamte Map nochmal durch und guck was du verbessern könntest..finde alle in ordnung. lassen sich ohne probs spielen, sind nicht zu einfach und nicht zu schwer.

Die anderen Schwierigkeiten haben ähnliche Probleme.find ich nicht ö,ö

Remappe am besten nochmal die Maps, da sie doch ziemlich zufällig gemappt wurden. nope
Danke für deine Mühe ;) ~
Kuroneko-sHerald

Xero_HT wrote:

[Allgemein]
-Titel: chAngE
I agree with Xero_HT.

Source should be BLEACH.

[Easy]
Is not Easy :o Try to semplify it.
Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one.
00:52:395 (3) - Move at 00:52:213 (3) - ??
00:54:758 (1) - Too long. Try to divide it or to do something else.Example:


01:24:940 (5) - Overlap this with 01:24:395 (4) -
01:26:213 (2) - Overlap this with 01:25:667 (1) -
01:27:667 (3) - Overlap this with 01:27:485 (2) -

[Normal]
This is Hard

Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Xero_HT wrote:

[Allgemein]
-Titel: chAngE ok
I agree with Xero_HT.

Source should be BLEACH. i'll leave it as it is

[Easy]
Is not Easy :o Try to semplify it. oO even my little sister was able to play this without probs and she never played osu b4 ôo
Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. ok
00:52:395 (3) - Move at 00:52:213 (3) - ?? nope
00:54:758 (1) - Too long. Try to divide it or to do something else.Example[...] ok

01:24:940 (5) - Overlap this with 01:24:395 (4) - nope
01:26:213 (2) - Overlap this with 01:25:667 (1) - ok
01:27:667 (3) - Overlap this with 01:27:485 (2) - ok

[Normal]
This is Hard what exactly is hard in this diff?

Star~
Astom
[General]
-Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi).osb delete this. (and full submit)
-Look for better bg's (1024x768), bg_ichigo.jpeg is 800x500 how I say before please use 1024x768 or 800x600.
-Add some tags like Ichigo :P

[Easy]
-00:51:849 (2) move this to 00:51:667 and add a circle in 00:52:031.
-00:53:849 uhm maybe unncesary, and I think that is hard for a easy diff.

[Normal]
-00:06:031 (2) delete this circle, 00:05:849 (1) remove new combo and add new combo here 00:06:213.

[Hard]
-mmm.. maybe hard of read =/ but nothing important.

Star~
Kuroneko-sHerald
Can I do a diff? :D
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Astom wrote:

[General]
-Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi).osb delete this. (and full submit) ok
-Look for better bg's (1024x768), bg_ichigo.jpeg is 800x500 how I say before please use 1024x768 or 800x600. looks like I made a mistake when typing '600' thanks :D
-Add some tags like Ichigo :P k, same tags added

[Easy]
-00:51:849 (2) move this to 00:51:667 and add a circle in 00:52:031. nonono xD I want it to be like this
-00:53:849 uhm maybe unncesary, and I think that is hard for a easy diff. meant the spacing to the note placed at the vocal start? fixed it now with distance snap!

[Normal]
-00:06:031 (2) delete this circle, 00:05:849 (1) remove new combo and add new combo here 00:06:213. ok

[Hard]
-mmm.. maybe hard of read =/ but nothing important.

Star~
@Neko: Sure you can^^
Kuroneko-sHerald
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Hmm...it's good, and rly 'Easy' ^^ but the rythm at 00:19:485 (1,2,3) is weird. I see you want to place them according to the vocals, but they are kinda off beat. on 1/8 beats with +1/8 beat for (1) and (2) it sounds better I think, check plz :D
Kuroneko-sHerald
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Ok, that'd do too ^^
Updated~! (*cough*just a few seconds)
Kuroneko-sHerald
Tag should be Kuroneko-sHerald :roll:
matthewhln
Good song.
Star :3

Can I do a Taiko insane diff?
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Thanks for star matthewhln :)

Sure you can, but I won't add it - sry...4 Maps are enough for now.
But if you are interested, you can make a Taiko diff for another song I am working on atm ^^ for more info just pm ;)
matthewhln

Sekuyi wrote:

Thanks for star matthewhln :)

Sure you can, but I won't add it - sry...4 Maps are enough for now.
But if you are interested, you can make a Taiko diff for another song I am working on atm ^^ for more info just pm ;)
That's ok :3
Since I can't make that diff with this song well easily lol

Take good care :)

PS:If I finally finished, I may just put here and let it be (for someone who may want it) lol
Nakagawa-Kanon
star

all fine with me
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Oh come on ... no ignorance for new mappers please <.<
Seeing other maps getting approved in 1~2 days and waiting days/weeks to even get a respond for your own map(s) is really frustrating...
DJPop
~Kuro Easy~
Add more hitsounds.

~Easy~
01:10:667 (1) - start on red tick

~Normal~
01:10:667 (1) - start on red tick

~Hard~
00:58:576 (9) - new combo
01:03:667 (8) - ^
01:08:395 (6,1) - kind of random jump, I don't like it - -"


+Star
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
thx^^ done~
Kuroneko-sHerald

DJPop wrote:

~Kuro Easy~
Add more hitsounds. Done.
Download: Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Updated~
livender
The moment i Downloaded this map I though of trying Hard out.
I made many mistakes and tried to do Hard rock on it
I made lesser mistakes and it was apparently much easyer
So if I could say would you put Overall higher at hard :P?

Anyway Star
Sonnyc
Hello

Kuro Easy
- End the Second Kiai time in 01:12:395

00:41:485 (5) - Clap
00:47:667 (6) - Kill Finishes, and increase 1 Reverse
00:51:122 (1) - Kill Finish
01:23:485 (1) - End at 01:25:485
01:25:667 (1) - If you accept ^, Start at 01:25:849 (End at the same place)

Easy
00:24:758 (4) - Clap in start, no Clap in the middle
00:27:667 (2) - ^
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish
01:00:031 (1) - Jump in Easy? (Not a big distance though..)
01:08:758 (1) - 1 Grid Right
01:09:849 (4,5) - 1 Grid Down
01:24:395 (4,5) - 1 Grid Left

Normal
00:27:667 (3) - Distance
00:31:304 ~ 00:36:395 - I saw this in [Easy]..?
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish

Hard
- IMO, Custom Hit Colors hurt my eyes.

00:45:304 (1,3,5) - No Whistle
00:46:758 (1) - No Whistle at the end
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish

Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

sonnyc wrote:

Hello

Kuro Easy
- End the Second Kiai time in 01:12:395ok

00:41:485 (5) - Clap ok
00:47:667 (6) - Kill Finishes, and increase 1 Reverseok to the first
00:51:122 (1) - Kill Finishok
01:23:485 (1) - End at 01:25:485
01:25:667 (1) - If you accept ^, Start at 01:25:849 (End at the same place)

Easy
00:24:758 (4) - Clap in start, no Clap in the middlechanged the claps. start is also wrong, 'coz it's 4/4 for the claps in this part^^
00:27:667 (2) - ^
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok
01:00:031 (1) - Jump in Easy? (Not a big distance though..)
01:08:758 (1) - 1 Grid Right ok
01:09:849 (4,5) - 1 Grid Down ok
01:24:395 (4,5) - 1 Grid Left ok

Normal
00:27:667 (3) - Distanceok
00:31:304 ~ 00:36:395 - I saw this in [Easy]..? yep
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok

Hard
- IMO, Custom Hit Colors hurt my eyes. lol

00:45:304 (1,3,5) - No Whistle ok
00:46:758 (1) - No Whistle at the end ok
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok

Star~
Thx~! :3
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Easy]

  • • 00:30:213 (6,1) - I don't like this jump: keep "Distance Snap" active and fix the spacing
    • 00:33:849 (1) - Remove "New combo"
    • 00:36:758 (1) - ^

    • 00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Delete these circles and add a spinner (start: 00:52:031 // end: 00:54:213)
    • 01:24:940 (5) - Move this circle here 01:25:122 (white tick)
    • 01:25:304 (6) - Move this circle here 01:25:485 (white tick)
    • 01:25:667 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 later. Also, delete this slider 01:26:213 (2) and add a circle here 01:26:576 (white tick)
    • 01:27:122 (1) - Move this circle here 01:26:940 (white tick)
    • 01:27:485 (2) - Move this circle here 01:27:304 (white tick)
[Normal]

  • • 00:33:849 (1) - Remove "New combo"
    • 00:36:758 (1) - ^
    • 01:27:667 (1) - ^
    • 01:28:213 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Thanks :D
All done~!
Kuroneko-sHerald
Since you have changed diffs name, I have some suggests:

Change from "bankai" to "hollow" and viceversa? As someone suggested in others bleach maps an hollow isn't more powerful than a bankai.
Can you change my diff from "Kuro Easy" to "Kuro Shikai" or something else? :D
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Well, telling from the looks ichigo's undeveloped hollow form is way stronger than bankai. Don't want to start talking about his ultimate form - which is also hollow ;)

Changed yours, currently uploading~ finished
Kuroneko-sHerald

Sekuyi wrote:

Well, telling from the looks ichigo's undeveloped hollow form is way stronger than bankai. Don't want to start talking about his ultimate form - which is also hollow ;)
That was the same thing that I said when someone tell me to change diffs' name lol
You can leave the names unchanged, btw, because there isn't "ichigo" before the name (for example "Ichigo's Bankai") it would be more correct to put as I said :P

Sekuyi wrote:

Changed yours, currently uploading~ finished
Thanks :D
banvi
Bleach :)
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Thankies for star -^.^-
Kecco
•Overall•
Ok.

•Hollow•
00:01:849 (9) - New combo.

•Bankai•
00:58:576 (7) - New combo.

•Shikai•
00:48:031 (6) - New combo.

•Kuro Shikai•
OK.

Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
Ok.

•Hollow•
00:01:849 (9) - New combo.

•Bankai•
00:58:576 (7) - New combo. ok

•Shikai•
00:48:031 (6) - New combo. ok

•Kuro Shikai•
OK.

Star~
Thanks ^^
personne3000
Not perfect (of course...), but still, I like it :D

If I had to give you an advice, I'd say you should work on the sounds...

Anyway :
~Star~
kino77
Hi~

[Kuro Shinkai]
00:34:940 - Add note here?
00:54:213 (1) - Start KIAI right here?
01:05:849 (1) - ^

[Shinkai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ?
00:52:031 (1) - Start with 00:52:576 and filled the blank with notes?
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one?

Hitsound mod
SPOILER
00:32:395 (4) - Clap?
00:33:849 (8) - ^
00:35:304 (4) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - ^
00:38:213 - ^
00:39:667 - ^
00:40:395 (2) - Remove clap?
00:41:122 - Clap?
00:42:576 (6) - ^
[Bankai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ?
00:21:849 (1) - From here,the hitsound pattern changed,I perfre the one before here~
00:54:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I really don't like this long stream...
00:58:031 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one?

[Hollow]
OD lv.7?
Arrange hitsound well?Try hitsound pattern?
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one?

Combo mod
SPOILER
00:01:849 (9) - New combo?
00:02:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:03:304 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
00:04:758 (6) - New combo?
00:05:849 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:213 (3) - New combo?
00:07:667 (8) - ^
00:26:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:395 (4) - New combo?
Work hard~
Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[Shinkai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ? ok
00:52:031 (1) - Start with 00:52:576 and filled the blank with notes?
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? ok

Hitsound mod
SPOILER
00:32:395 (4) - Clap? ok, same for the rest^^
00:33:849 (8) - ^
00:35:304 (4) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - ^
00:38:213 - ^
00:39:667 - ^
00:40:395 (2) - Remove clap?
00:41:122 - Clap?
00:42:576 (6) - ^
[Bankai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ? ok
00:21:849 (1) - From here,the hitsound pattern changed,I perfre the one before here~ fixed :)
00:54:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I really don't like this long stream...
00:58:031 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? ok

[Hollow]
OD lv.7? true, a bit low. set it +1^^
Arrange hitsound well?Try hitsound pattern? did some changes^^
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? done

Combo mod
SPOILER
00:01:849 (9) - New combo? ok, with all. for other changes the text after suggestion
00:02:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:03:304 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
00:04:758 (6) - New combo?
00:05:849 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:213 (3) - New combo? made it @00:06:940
00:07:667 (8) - ^ no new here (^)
00:26:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:395 (4) - New combo?
Work hard~
Star~
Thank you very much! <3
Kuroneko-sHerald

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[Kuro Shikai]
00:34:940 - Add note here? Done.
00:54:213 (1) - Start KIAI right here? Done.
01:05:849 (1) - ^ Done.
Download: Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Files updated~!
IceBeam
Hi.

[Kuro Shikai]
00:31:849 - Add a note?
01:06:395 (2) - Well,notes are out.My suggestion is to put a circle 01:06:395 and move this slider to 01:06:576.

[Shikai]
01:00:758 (2) - Allign better.

[Bankai]
01:16:758 (7) - Allign better.

[Hollow]
00:38:576 (8) - 1 grid right.
01:11:304 (3,4) - Pick 01:10:758 (1,2),then Ctrl+C --> Ctrl+V --> Edit --> Flip Vertically.

Good luck,star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hi.

[Shikai]
01:00:758 (2) - Allign better. wouldn't know why. it's ok that way

[Bankai]
01:16:758 (7) - Allign better. ^

[Hollow]
00:38:576 (8) - 1 grid right. ok
01:11:304 (3,4) - Pick 01:10:758 (1,2),then Ctrl+C --> Ctrl+V --> Edit --> Flip Vertically. fixed

Good luck,star~
Thanks <3
Kuroneko-sHerald

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
00:31:849 - Add a note? No.
01:06:395 (2) - Well,notes are out.My suggestion is to put a circle 01:06:395 and move this slider to 01:06:576. Done.
Download: Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Updated~!

//edit: oh come on guys. there is a checkbox "ignore star priority" to see maps without bubbles and such stuff. this is just like bingo with a 1000000000 lesser chance of getting even noticed! well, at least two of the MAT-Team helped out. Much appreciated!
Kuroneko-sHerald
:o I've just realized that Artist is wrong :?

It should be "miwa", not "Naoki-T" (you can check it here or here).
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
/*update yet to come. can't see a reason to update when BATs likely ignore new mappers...*/ <- ignored for now because of the kindness of a modder

/*it's been 2 whole months now and not 1 BAT looked at this thread. there are maps in pending with even 6 months or 1 freaking year(!!) without even 1 reply. i wonder how your employer would react when you ignore incoming mails for months. i know there are a damn lot of pending maps to look at, and i also know a lot of the BATs are students, and maybe some of them aren't taking their job here seriously. it's ok, though... but guys, there are like 21 BATs active here. pending has 30 pages with maps. Like 3-4 pages are already bubbled/starred. so where's the problem to look at the other pages and checking the maps? 1 page has 25 maps. Calculating with approx. 30 minutes (modding(!)) each map its 12 1/2 hours. so 1 page is easily done in 1 week (a bit more than 1 hour modding a day).

you guys are doing a great job, but you shouldn't check maps of already good and known mappers only. who knows whos hiding in the crowd out there? */

uffz, now i'll get smacked <.<'
well, nvm. somebody has to say what actually is true.

-> I actually wrote a BAT a PM. Got no response. Not even a "No, sorry. No time" or w/e. And he was online that time (last active in profile). Know what I mean?...
mekadon_old
Sorry for late mod
SPOILER
[Kuro Shikai]
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change hitsounds in some parts of it. Suggestion: Normal, clap, normal, clap, etc.
00:40:031 (1~8) - Combo is too long. New combo at 00:41:485 (5)
All kiai time- 2x speed seems better tbh
[Shikai]
00:02:576 (4) - Align with (2)
00:08:395 (1) - Align with (2)
00:29:849 (5) - New combo
00:37:849 (3,5) - Doesn't look uniform, change the patterns
00:40:758 (3,5) - ^
00:45:304 (1) - 1st and 2nd slider point isn't same as the others
00:57:122 (1,6) - Align together
00:58:576 (5) - New combo
01:02:940 (5) - ^
01:07:304 (2) - Maybe..... make it 90-degree cclockwise than the prev. one.
[Bankai]
General-Change the colors, it seems hard to read, like Bad Apple!!
00:45:304 (1) - same as [Shinkai]
00:58:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly patterns
[Hollow]
00:01:485 (7,1) - Align
00:01:667 (8,2) - ^
00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Add jumps
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

mekadon95 wrote:

Sorry for late mod
SPOILER
[Shikai]
00:02:576 (4) - Align with (2) done
00:08:395 (1) - Align with (2) done
00:29:849 (5) - New combo
00:37:849 (3,5) - Doesn't look uniform, change the patterns
00:40:758 (3,5) - ^
00:45:304 (1) - 1st and 2nd slider point isn't same as the others check with the vocals. it's fine ^^
00:57:122 (1,6) - Align together
00:58:576 (5) - New combo
01:02:940 (5) - ^
01:07:304 (2) - Maybe..... make it 90-degree cclockwise than the prev. one.
[Bankai]
General-Change the colors, it seems hard to read, like Bad Apple!! hard to read like Bad Apple? you mean Ephemeral's? it's perfect to read with black & white in perfect contrast.
00:45:304 (1) - same as [Shinkai] (see Shikai)
00:58:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly patterns
[Hollow]
00:01:485 (7,1) - Align different combo, so it has to be played different by the player. so, no.
00:01:667 (8,2) - ^ ^
00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Add jumpsi'm not a fan of jumps in combos. i only use them for the beginning of new combos.
thanks for mod
Kuroneko-sHerald

mekadon95 wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change hitsounds in some parts of it. Suggestion: Normal, clap, normal, clap, etc. Done.
00:40:031 (1~8) - Combo is too long. New combo at 00:41:485 (5) No.
All kiai time- 2x speed seems better tbh It's easy, so I won't change it.
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Updated.
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Shikai]

- 00:06:213(1) : Spacing.
- 00:07:667(2) : ^
- 00:08:395(1) : ^
- 00:08:758(2) : ^
- 00:09:849(3) : New combo ?
- 01:00:031 to 01:04:576 : Spacing.
- 01:07:304(2) : ^

[Bankai]

- 01:25:667 to 01:28:758 : Spacing.

[Hollow]

Good !


Good map & song !
Get my star !
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Shikai]

- 00:06:213(1) : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 00:07:667(2) : ^ ^
- 00:08:395(1) : ^ ^
- 00:08:758(2) : ^ ^
- 00:09:849(3) : New combo ? ok~
- 01:00:031 to 01:04:576 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 01:07:304(2) : ^ ^

[Bankai]

- 01:25:667 to 01:28:758 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?

[Hollow]

Good !


Good map & song !
Get my star !
thanks for mods^^
roflninja
Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo?

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo?
00:48:031 (7) - ^
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better?

awsome map, go get this ranked :)
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo? nah :D

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo? aye
00:48:031 (7) - ^ nah, think it's better this way to follow the rythm and have a new combo here when rythm changes (00:50:576)
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better? done^^

awsome map, go get this ranked :)
thanks for mods and star :D
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles.

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments.
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles. oh, you mean for the skinning part? i don't want to change it^^

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments. oh nues :s
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following it's just some kind of a small 'intro' for the rythm ^^

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star

Thanks <3
Hellzero
Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle?
Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right

00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left?
Hollow
Fine

Star~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Hellzero wrote:

Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ---fixed
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing ---nah, that little pixels won't disturb while playing ;)
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right[/color] ---fixed
00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left? ---fixed
Hollow
Fine

Star~
Thankies <3
Leorda
HEI

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?
01:12:758 (B) - ^
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo


[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up?
01:02:940 (5) - New combo?

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end?
00:48:031 (7) - New combo?
00:55:667 (6) - ^

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo?
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short?
01:17:122 (1) - ^

Good song
STAR
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Leorda wrote:

[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up? aye~
01:02:940 (5) - New combo? aye~

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end? nah
00:48:031 (7) - New combo? aye~
00:55:667 (6) - ^ nah

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo? nah
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short? aye~
01:17:122 (1) - ^ aye~

Good song
STAR
Thx for mod -^.^-
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name...
- Make spinner approach circle other color ??
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ??


Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this:


Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667
- 00:41:485 >> new combo
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better
- 01:16:031 >> new combo
- 01:17:485 >> new combo
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ??

Shikai;
- Is okk ~

* Sorry I can't really mod hard or insane :(
* Star ~
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name... BGs got nothin' to do with the diff names^^
- Make spinner approach circle other color ?? nope
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ?? ^

Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai named by himself. so...
thx 4 mods^^

so, looks like Kuro is on holiday or something. I checked your suggestions for him:

- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot nah
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this[...]
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy nah, I think he just wants to start with a separate rythm based on the vocals instead of the original rythm.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat nah, sounds ugly
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat nah, doesn't fit the vocals which this one is following then
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 nah, I think he wants to follow the vocals
- 00:41:485 >> new combo nah, thats 1 vocal stream. it's irritating with 2 combos here.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
- 01:16:031 >> new combo nah, again this is 1 vocal stream.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo ^
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
Derekku
[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one).
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better.
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose.

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each?
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each...

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing)
01:17:122 - expected a note here

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (:
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one). added one
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better. chAngEd
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose. left it as it is

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? left it as it is
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. placed on white ticks now ^^
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well left it as it is
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each... chAngEd :D

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x chAngEd :D

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing) chAngEd
01:17:122 - expected a note here just your imagination *chAngEd

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (: thankies :3
Updated~!
Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for the delay, but I was on holiday :P

Hellzero wrote:

Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle? No.

Leorda wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff Nah...
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? No.
01:12:758 (B) - ^ No.
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.

lovhin456 wrote:

Kuro Shikai;
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot No.
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too. No, because in that way it doesn't follow the vocal.
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy. I prefer to not change it.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat No.
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat No.
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 No.
- 00:41:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better Done.
- 01:16:031 >> new combo No.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? No.

Derekku wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? No, as stated by Sekuyi.
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that... Usually I map in the way you say, but for this song I've prefer to map in this other way.
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. Made sliders.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well No.
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty... Think that "Shikai" was the easiest diff before :P
Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Changed :3
Kuroneko-sHerald
I've made some pattern change. Please update it and sorry for the bother :(

Download: miwa - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi) [Kuro Shikai].osu
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Nevermind, changed it ^^
deepsea
._.
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
:3 I got a response, nice ~^.^~
<3 ya
Hitsugaya936
star
La Cataline
*shoots a star* (:
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
bubble gone ._. ?
Kuroneko-sHerald

Sekuyi wrote:

bubble gone ._. ?
Did you edit the first post of this thread or updated the map after the bubble?
Otherwise it's strange :o
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<
Kuroneko-sHerald

Sekuyi wrote:

I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<
Any changes to anything will pop your bubble, both if you edit your post or if you reupload your map (even if you didn't change a thing) :o
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Can I read that somewhere? Also some other info which might happen if I do anything to a bubbled/ranked map?
It actually would suck pretty much if it gets ranked, when one kind person bubble it again, I'd change something in the first post and *bang* begone from ranking and back to pending oO I understand why it is this way, but please, sticky it somewhere so new mappers'll know it :?
sebaviteh
Nice beatmap
Topic Starter
Sekuyi
Thanks.
Changed the speed of approach circle and deleted an unnecessary note in [Hollow].
James2250
Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right?

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4?
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6
00:40:031 (1,3) - align

Hollow:
looks good

*star*
Topic Starter
Sekuyi

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right? ye, was in discussion and we left it in caps then

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least changed
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others nah
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm nah, only the score is visible on the left when playing
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better changed

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others changed
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4? nope
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6 nope, as stated before, you'll only see the score and not the note when playing. you'll still see it when editing... use play mode instead of edit mode ;)
00:40:031 (1,3) - align fixed

Hollow:
looks good

*star*
thanks for mod. just waiting for neko's response to upload the changed maps.

//edit:
the kiai is ok in kuro's map. it's better to place it right after the last note in kiai than place the kiai end exactly on the last note. as you can see in my diffs, i placed the kiai ends right on the first note of the new combo. so kiai ends exactly when the new combo starts.
regarding the OA diff: it's an easy map and should stay this way. so i don't think he'll change.

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