Xero_HT wrote:

Moin,

[Allgemein]
-Artist: Naoki-T ok, stimmt 'miwa' heißt das album. auch grad gemerkt
-Titel: chAngE well, its the same. waiting for a BAT to approve that the title's characters have to be 1:1
-Source: Bleach (kein OP, du kannst aber in den Tags "Opening X (X= Das wievielte Opening)" hinzufügen)ok
Sound Qualität ist nicht gut : /ich weiß nicht was du hast, ist ganz normal oO?
Lied hört zu aprubt auf.da es ein opening song ist, ist es tv-size!
Die Circles und Sliders sind manchmal ziemlich zufällig plaziert. Vielleicht machste nochmal ein paar Stellen neu.nö ôo
Skin und Hitsounds sind jedoch gut. (Haste den Skin selber gemacht? Wenn ja - Respekt!)jop, nen ganzen abend dran gesessen^^
Benutze die gleichen Combo Farben für alle Diffs.die farben hab ich entsprechend den hintergrundbildern gewählt. find sie ok
Du kannst nicht die eine Diff. in 1/2, 1/4 snappen und die andere in 1/6. klar, das ist der sinn von verschiedenen diffs. oder hast du schonmal ein hard, insane oder lunatic auf 1/1 gesehen, weil easy auch 1/1 war oO?

[Normal]
Hitsounds sind zu laut. find ich nicht. nur die am anfang, hab die runtergeschraubt

00:07:667 (2) - Ein Tick nach oben. h8 'nazi' mods...
00:10:940 (1) - Lass den Spinner hier enden. ???
00:54:213 (1) - Solche Spacings sind nichts für Normals.zu klein oder wie oO? ist ein neuer combo. solange der abstand nicht zu extrem ist ists in ordnung. und der abstand hier ist ja wohl ohne jegliche probleme zu erreichen!
00:54:758 (1) - .. Also ein bisschen einfallsreicher geht's dann schon oder? siehe mod post vor dir und weiter oben (glaub erster mod post). die map ist eigentlich easy und ranked kriterium ist mindestens eine map mit <3 sternen
01:06:395 (1,2) - ^^

Bitte geh die gesamte Map nochmal durch und guck was du verbessern könntest..finde alle in ordnung. lassen sich ohne probs spielen, sind nicht zu einfach und nicht zu schwer.

Die anderen Schwierigkeiten haben ähnliche Probleme.find ich nicht ö,ö

Remappe am besten nochmal die Maps, da sie doch ziemlich zufällig gemappt wurden. nope

Xero_HT wrote:

[Allgemein]
-Titel: chAngE

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Xero_HT wrote:

[Allgemein]
-Titel: chAngE ok

I agree with Xero_HT.

Source should be BLEACH. i'll leave it as it is

[Easy]
Is not Easy Try to semplify it. oO even my little sister was able to play this without probs and she never played osu b4 ôo
Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. ok
00:52:395 (3) - Move at 00:52:213 (3) - ?? nope
00:54:758 (1) - Too long. Try to divide it or to do something else.Example[...] ok

01:24:940 (5) - Overlap this with 01:24:395 (4) - nope
01:26:213 (2) - Overlap this with 01:25:667 (1) - ok
01:27:667 (3) - Overlap this with 01:27:485 (2) - ok

[Normal]
This is Hard what exactly is hard in this diff?

Star~

Astom wrote:

[General]
-Naoki-T - chAngE (TV Size) (Sekuyi).osb delete this. (and full submit) ok
-Look for better bg's (1024x768), bg_ichigo.jpeg is 800x500 how I say before please use 1024x768 or 800x600. looks like I made a mistake when typing '600' thanks
-Add some tags like Ichigo k, same tags added

[Easy]
-00:51:849 (2) move this to 00:51:667 and add a circle in 00:52:031. nonono xD I want it to be like this
-00:53:849 uhm maybe unncesary, and I think that is hard for a easy diff. meant the spacing to the note placed at the vocal start? fixed it now with distance snap!

[Normal]
-00:06:031 (2) delete this circle, 00:05:849 (1) remove new combo and add new combo here 00:06:213. ok

[Hard]
-mmm.. maybe hard of read =/ but nothing important.

Star~

Sekuyi wrote:

Thanks for star matthewhln

Sure you can, but I won't add it - sry...4 Maps are enough for now.
But if you are interested, you can make a Taiko diff for another song I am working on atm ^^ for more info just pm

DJPop wrote:

~Kuro Easy~
Add more hitsounds. Done.

sonnyc wrote:

Hello

Kuro Easy
- End the Second Kiai time in 01:12:395ok

00:41:485 (5) - Clap ok
00:47:667 (6) - Kill Finishes, and increase 1 Reverseok to the first
00:51:122 (1) - Kill Finishok
01:23:485 (1) - End at 01:25:485
01:25:667 (1) - If you accept ^, Start at 01:25:849 (End at the same place)

Easy
00:24:758 (4) - Clap in start, no Clap in the middlechanged the claps. start is also wrong, 'coz it's 4/4 for the claps in this part^^
00:27:667 (2) - ^
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok
01:00:031 (1) - Jump in Easy? (Not a big distance though..)
01:08:758 (1) - 1 Grid Right ok
01:09:849 (4,5) - 1 Grid Down ok
01:24:395 (4,5) - 1 Grid Left ok

Normal
00:27:667 (3) - Distanceok
00:31:304 ~ 00:36:395 - I saw this in [Easy]..? yep
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok

Hard
- IMO, Custom Hit Colors hurt my eyes. lol

00:45:304 (1,3,5) - No Whistle ok
00:46:758 (1) - No Whistle at the end ok
00:52:395 (3) - No Finish ok

Star~

• • 00:30:213 (6,1) - I don't like this jump: keep "Distance Snap" active and fix the spacing
  • 00:33:849 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 00:36:758 (1) - ^
  • 00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Delete these circles and add a spinner (start: 00:52:031 // end: 00:54:213)
  • 01:24:940 (5) - Move this circle here 01:25:122 (white tick)
  • 01:25:304 (6) - Move this circle here 01:25:485 (white tick)
  • 01:25:667 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 later. Also, delete this slider 01:26:213 (2) and add a circle here 01:26:576 (white tick)
  • 01:27:122 (1) - Move this circle here 01:26:940 (white tick)
  • 01:27:485 (2) - Move this circle here 01:27:304 (white tick)

• • 00:33:849 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 00:36:758 (1) - ^
  • 01:27:667 (1) - ^
  • 01:28:213 (1) - ^

Sekuyi wrote:

Well, telling from the looks ichigo's undeveloped hollow form is way stronger than bankai. Don't want to start talking about his ultimate form - which is also hollow

Sekuyi wrote:

Changed yours, currently uploading~ finished

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
Ok.

•Hollow•
00:01:849 (9) - New combo.

•Bankai•
00:58:576 (7) - New combo. ok

•Shikai•
00:48:031 (6) - New combo. ok

•Kuro Shikai•
OK.

Star~

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[Shinkai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ? ok
00:52:031 (1) - Start with 00:52:576 and filled the blank with notes?
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? ok

Hitsound mod

SPOILER

00:32:395 (4) - Clap? ok, same for the rest^^
00:33:849 (8) - ^
00:35:304 (4) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - ^
00:38:213 - ^
00:39:667 - ^
00:40:395 (2) - Remove clap?
00:41:122 - Clap?
00:42:576 (6) - ^

[Bankai]
00:10:940 (1) - Start with 00:11:122 ? ok
00:21:849 (1) - From here,the hitsound pattern changed,I perfre the one before here~ fixed
00:54:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I really don't like this long stream...
00:58:031 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? ok

[Hollow]
OD lv.7? true, a bit low. set it +1^^
Arrange hitsound well?Try hitsound pattern? did some changes^^
01:14:213 - Add notes in this break and next one? done

Combo mod

SPOILER

00:01:849 (9) - New combo? ok, with all. for other changes the text after suggestion
00:02:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:03:304 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
00:04:758 (6) - New combo?
00:05:849 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:06:213 (3) - New combo? made it @00:06:940
00:07:667 (8) - ^ no new here (^)
00:26:940 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:28:395 (4) - New combo?

Work hard~
Star~

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[Kuro Shikai]
00:34:940 - Add note here? Done.
00:54:213 (1) - Start KIAI right here? Done.
01:05:849 (1) - ^ Done.

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hi.

[Shikai]
01:00:758 (2) - Allign better. wouldn't know why. it's ok that way

[Bankai]
01:16:758 (7) - Allign better. ^

[Hollow]
00:38:576 (8) - 1 grid right. ok
01:11:304 (3,4) - Pick 01:10:758 (1,2),then Ctrl+C --> Ctrl+V --> Edit --> Flip Vertically. fixed

Good luck,star~

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
00:31:849 - Add a note? No.
01:06:395 (2) - Well,notes are out.My suggestion is to put a circle 01:06:395 and move this slider to 01:06:576. Done.

mekadon95 wrote:

Sorry for late mod

SPOILER

[Shikai]
00:02:576 (4) - Align with (2) done
00:08:395 (1) - Align with (2) done
00:29:849 (5) - New combo
00:37:849 (3,5) - Doesn't look uniform, change the patterns
00:40:758 (3,5) - ^
00:45:304 (1) - 1st and 2nd slider point isn't same as the others check with the vocals. it's fine ^^
00:57:122 (1,6) - Align together
00:58:576 (5) - New combo
01:02:940 (5) - ^
01:07:304 (2) - Maybe..... make it 90-degree cclockwise than the prev. one.
[Bankai]
General-Change the colors, it seems hard to read, like Bad Apple!! hard to read like Bad Apple? you mean Ephemeral's? it's perfect to read with black & white in perfect contrast.
00:45:304 (1) - same as [Shinkai] (see Shikai)
00:58:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugly patterns
[Hollow]
00:01:485 (7,1) - Align different combo, so it has to be played different by the player. so, no.
00:01:667 (8,2) - ^ ^
00:51:849 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Add jumpsi'm not a fan of jumps in combos. i only use them for the beginning of new combos.

mekadon95 wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change hitsounds in some parts of it. Suggestion: Normal, clap, normal, clap, etc. Done.
00:40:031 (1~8) - Combo is too long. New combo at 00:41:485 (5) No.
All kiai time- 2x speed seems better tbh It's easy, so I won't change it.

Slanox wrote:

Hello,

[Shikai]

- 00:06:213(1) : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 00:07:667(2) : ^ ^
- 00:08:395(1) : ^ ^
- 00:08:758(2) : ^ ^
- 00:09:849(3) : New combo ? ok~
- 01:00:031 to 01:04:576 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?
- 01:07:304(2) : ^ ^

[Bankai]

- 01:25:667 to 01:28:758 : Spacing. distance snap is active and placed it there. should be ok?

[Hollow]

Good !


Good map & song !
Get my star !

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
everything is fine for me, so just a few suggestions

[shikai]
00:08:395 (1) - no new combo? nah

[bankai]
00:23:304 (6) - new combo? aye
00:48:031 (7) - ^ nah, think it's better this way to follow the rythm and have a new combo here when rythm changes (00:50:576)
01:16:758 (7) - stack with (6)'s end a bit better? done^^

awsome map, go get this ranked

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Your missing Approach Circle for the hit circles. oh, you mean for the skinning part? i don't want to change it^^

[Hollow]
00:00:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it'd be better if you followed the lyrics here rather than the instruments. oh nues :s
00:18:576 (1) - Dont see what's this following it's just some kind of a small 'intro' for the rythm ^^

[Bankai]
Fine

[Shikai]
Fine

[Kuro Shikai]
Fine

Ok looks good, have a star

Hellzero wrote:

Shikai
00:45:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ---fixed
Bankai
00:07:667 (4,6) - 1 gird down
00:05:849 (6) - spacing ---nah, that little pixels won't disturb while playing
00:41:122 (4,5,6,7) - 1 gird right[/color] ---fixed
00:54:758 (1) - 2 gird left? ---fixed
Hollow
Fine

Star~

Leorda wrote:

[Shikai]
00:07:667 (2) - Move 1 grid up? aye~
01:02:940 (5) - New combo? aye~

[Bankai]
Banzaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

00:24:758 (6) - Add finish at end? nah
00:48:031 (7) - New combo? aye~
00:55:667 (6) - ^ nah

[Hollow]
Those BG are very scary, like Kecco

00:55:667 (6) - New combo? nah
01:11:667 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short? aye~
01:17:122 (1) - ^ aye~

Good song
STAR

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

General;
- Bleach ~ I like this song (:
- Ehhh...your BGs look very random, like first you have rukia, then kon, then urahara ?? and well ichigo-hollow is the only in my opinion that fits the diff name... BGs got nothin' to do with the diff names^^
- Make spinner approach circle other color ?? nope
- The colors you use for the circles (except for the third color) are a bit too light and soft...make them a bit darker ?? ^

Kuro Shikai;
- Is a guest diff right ?? I think the name should be Kuro's Shikai named by himself. so...

- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot nah
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too, like this[...]
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy nah, I think he just wants to start with a separate rythm based on the vocals instead of the original rythm.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat nah, sounds ugly
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat nah, doesn't fit the vocals which this one is following then
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 nah, I think he wants to follow the vocals
- 00:41:485 >> new combo nah, thats 1 vocal stream. it's irritating with 2 combos here.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*
- 01:16:031 >> new combo nah, again this is 1 vocal stream.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo ^
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? *leave it to Kuro when he's back again*

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Please add an approachcircle to the folder (even if it's the default one). added one
*I always recommend placing the preview point slightly before where you want it to account for the song selection fade-in. The red tick before the chorus (54031ms) should sound better. chAngEd
*It's a bit strange that each diff uses the same slider velocity... (usually the velocity gets faster as the difficulties get harder) But it's fine, I suppose. left it as it is

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? left it as it is
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that...
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. placed on white ticks now ^^
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well left it as it is
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty...

[Shikai]
*Same difficulty settings as the easiest diff? Raise OD/Drain at least a few ticks each... chAngEd

[Bankai]
*Raise the OD like... 4 ticks. =x chAngEd

[Hollow]
01:05:122 (1) - I suggest starting this on the previous blue tick and extending to give the player more time to react (since it's a short spinner and it caught me off-guard while testing) chAngEd
01:17:122 - expected a note here just your imagination *chAngEd

Not bad for one of your first maps, but you'll get better with time. (: thankies :3

Hellzero wrote:

Kuro Shikai
00:31:849 -circle? No.

Leorda wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
THE BG IS KAWAII DESU YO!!!!!!!

00:20:940 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:31:304 (1) - This slider is too short for easy diff Nah...
00:41:122 (4) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.
00:43:304 (B) - The break are too short, remove it? No.
01:12:758 (B) - ^ No.
01:16:031 (5) - New combo, it's long for new combo Follows the vocal, so I prefer to not change.

lovhin456 wrote:

Kuro Shikai;
- 00:11:122 >> should start at 00:10:940 but end at the same spot No.
- 00:19:485 (1-7) >> select all notes, then move (1) to 00:19:667, the other notes should move when you move (1) too. No, because in that way it doesn't follow the vocal.
Also new combo to (5) because 7 notes in a row of the same combo is too much for easy. I prefer to not change it.
- 00:22:031 >> move to 00:22:213 and remove a repeat No.
- 00:24:031 >> remove a repeat No.
- 00:31:304 >> end at 00:31:667 No.
- 00:41:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:08:758 (1)(2) >> curve this better Done.
- 01:16:031 >> new combo No.
- 01:17:485 >> new combo No.
- 01:23:485 >> delete this spinner ?? No.

Derekku wrote:

[Kuro Shikai]
*Perhaps raise the Overall Difficulty/Drain a tick or two each? No, as stated by Sekuyi.
*Try to avoid mapping primarily on the red ticks for the easiest difficulty. They can be very unpredictable/confusing to newbies. Having said that... Usually I map in the way you say, but for this song I've prefer to map in this other way.
00:19:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these sliders or map on the white ticks. Made sliders.
00:30:031 (4,5) - perhaps make this a slider as well No.
*I really would have liked more sliders throughout this diff. It's a fast paced song, so following the lyrics near-100% is a bit too crazy for the easiest difficulty... Think that "Shikai" was the easiest diff before

Sekuyi wrote:

bubble gone ._. ?

Sekuyi wrote:

I downloaded osu on my notebook and couldn't download this beatmap without getting an error "Cannot import beatmap" or something like that. So I reupped the files and then it worked.

Also, there were strange squares in my 1st post yesterday, so I deleted them and wrote "Meow..." instead.

Does this pop bubbles?...no way man... ._. I didn't change even one 1 to 0 or 0 to 1 in the files >.<

James2250 wrote:

Seeing as it isn't bubbled currently I will mod it
Source is in caps for a reason right? ye, was in discussion and we left it in caps then

-Kiai time should be the same on every difficulty
-Odd having every difficulty have the same velocity

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick

Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff +1 at least changed
00:24:395 (3) - new combo to match others nah
00:28:758 (3) - ^
00:36:758 (8) - I would align this with 6, looks odd atm nah, only the score is visible on the left when playing
01:00:031 (1,2) - endpoints could be stacked better changed

Bankai:
00:28:395 (4) - new combo to match others changed
00:33:849 (8) - stack on 4? nope
00:36:758 (8) - align with 6 nope, as stated before, you'll only see the score and not the note when playing. you'll still see it when editing... use play mode instead of edit mode
00:40:031 (1,3) - align fixed

Hollow:
looks good

*star*

James2250 wrote:

Kuro Shikai:
AR/Overall Diff + 1 AR no, OD yes.
End the kiai time on the white tick at 00:59:667 like all the other difficulties, not a blue tick I don't think that someone will ever notice it during play. Btw, I can put it at the white tick at 01:00:031 - , that is the end of the kiai in all the other difficulties.

Waiting for further modding...

deepsea wrote:

I am still the only bat checked this or did I miss something?>_>

deepsea wrote:

EDIT:James2250 reminds 320 kbps mp3 ahhhhhhh
Fix this and contact me.