Minakami Yuki wrote:

礼拜二晚上考完试后来看

1. hp2?

1. 01:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这一段没体现节奏特点，个人建议是做一点节奏上的改动，kiai的后半部分做的就可以，而这里全都是1/1接note的梗，显得相对无趣，可以选择多跟一些vocal

1. 00:06:062 (1) - 用1/2滑条？感觉后面红线上的音还是不要忽略的好
2. 00:23:316 (2,3) - blanket
3. 00:41:258 (4) - 尾巴换个方向，现在视觉上的间距容易造成误读，向下吧？或者也可以把00:40:964 (3) - 做成一个1/2slider

1. 照顾那点刷pp的人的话ar8.5比较好
2. 00:00:964 (1,3) - 我个人不太喜欢这种flow以及overlap的方式，个人倾向于把note这么藏http://puu.sh/ipBpr/e491f07b0f.jpg，不过只是个人看法而已啦
3. 00:26:062 (1,2) - 这里的梗有对vocal的强调作用，可以把间距稍微拉大点，不要blanket：http://puu.sh/ipBJ3/9fce0c3ff9.jpg
4. 01:05:081 (7,1) - 间距拉大点？有点和后面的差太大了
5. 01:10:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这个间距打起来很不舒服怎么前面大后面还越来越小了
6. 01:22:141 (5) - 放在01:22:336 (1) - 尾巴上？
7. 01:26:454 (2,3,4) - 这个放左边点吧？离前面有点近啊

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy

1. hp2?感觉意义不大无视掉了

Normal

1. 01:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这一段没体现节奏特点，个人建议是做一点节奏上的改动，kiai的后半部分做的就可以，而这里全都是1/1接note的梗，显得相对无趣，可以选择多跟一些vocal

做了小小的修改

Hard

1. 00:06:062 (1) - 用1/2滑条？感觉后面红线上的音还是不要忽略的好 我觉得现在挺好
2. 00:23:316 (2,3) - blanket √
3. 00:41:258 (4) - 尾巴换个方向，现在视觉上的间距容易造成误读，向下吧？或者也可以把00:40:964 (3) - 做成一个1/2slider √

Insane

1. 照顾那点刷pp的人的话ar8.5比较好 我把HP改成6了，我不只是照顾刷pp的人
2. 00:00:964 (1,3) - 我个人不太喜欢这种flow以及overlap的方式，个人倾向于把note这么藏http://puu.sh/ipBpr/e491f07b0f.jpg，不过只是个人看法而已啦 我承认不怎么好看不过还挺顺手
3. 00:26:062 (1,2) - 这里的梗有对vocal的强调作用，可以把间距稍微拉大点，不要blanket：http://puu.sh/ipBJ3/9fce0c3ff9.jpg √
4. 01:05:081 (7,1) - 间距拉大点？有点和后面的差太大了 √
5. 01:10:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这个间距打起来很不舒服怎么前面大后面还越来越小了 √
6. 01:22:141 (5) - 放在01:22:336 (1) - 尾巴上？ 我不怎么喜欢直接放尾巴的那种方法
7. 01:26:454 (2,3,4) - 这个放左边点吧？离前面有点近啊 √

忙的我都忘了来摸了，音效我没注意，你自己再看看有没有什么漏的，然后找我

1. 00:23:316 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/iqWJb/45155840b3.jpg 这真是blanket好了吗。。。不要敷衍我啊233

1. I know you most likely got current metadata from anime's website, but it's not artist's website, just one's who made the anime and didn't participate on song at all. Most official are publisher's or artist's website or CD cases. You might notice they use different form, which is カラフル。（AnimeVer.） - On the whole cover, anywhere, there is not a single link to the anime's website, but there is link to the only official publisher (even Sawai Miku's website redirects there) - So capitalize V, remove the space between anime and ver and use Japanese brackets. Or just copy it from there or from their website, I am just saying the difference. Please don't take metadata from anime website - They are not artists, you might even notice they used different title in video. Always go for metadata from artist or publisher, then, lastly from users of the song. Romanization then would be Colorful.(AnimeVer.) obviously.
2. Don't use CABAC and Deblocking filter in video for osu! It's not designed for real-time playback. CABAC is used for blu-ray films to reduce filesize, but it is harder to decode it, especially when you play a game (you won't recognize the filesize difference much for these resolutions and lengths). Deblocking filter is used to make a better visual quality, problem of this is it is not part of the video, decoder (or simply video player) will firstly decode the video and then will apply the filters - That means, your PC will read video and then add effect to it, again, only for watching. If possible, avoid such settings because it might result in lag for slower machines or if you run something on background. Since you have now opportunity to do so, use video without these effects.
3. Not critically important, but source should be moreover 冴えない彼女の育てかた and Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata should be in tags - Respectively, we use metadata for official data, we don't use for example translations for songs, we just use original language which we romanize when there is romanize ability. But yeah, use the way you believe in.
4. 00:08:317 (4) - On hard is out of the music, definitely cannot be 1/4. Please replace it with 1/6 on 00:08:219 - with 2 repeats, changing 1/3 for 1/4 is not okay if it is offbeat.
5. 01:27:434 (1) - On hard might start on 01:27:337 - as you did not insane, I won't force it anyway, if you want to map the note on 01:27:239 - , then it also could have some consistency.
6. 01:01:748 (4) - On insane is not snapped on any beat on the end. You never mapped a sound which was really not in the song. This is only case you did. It would be best if you ignored the 3/4 slider and kept only notes mapped with bigger jump, for example like this. What you maybe hear here is fading-out voice, but that is never on beat. For example in epic kind of songs where there are long voices, you never hear the end on beat, so you can map only the next lyric. You might say you actually did place it on 00:04:101 (1) - but be aware, this one is mapped to soft cymbal, which in comparison with fading-out voice is on the beat.
7. Also HP on Easy is quite low, I'd choose or so 1.5, because this is not kind of the easiest easy and with current settings you actually can miss 1st two combos and still pass.

Wafu wrote:

Hi, just came here for some little clarification, some things in the beatmap were not done properly and must be changed. I would like to get this ranked, but I don't want to do so instantly after you'd fix the stuff, just to be sure nothing escapes from our sight. Doing so just for sure it doesn't get ranked instantly after this and so it gets checked by someone else than me before it gets final heart.

1. I know you most likely got current metadata from anime's website, but it's not artist's website, just one's who made the anime and didn't participate on song at all. Most official are publisher's or artist's website or CD cases. You might notice they use different form, which is カラフル。（AnimeVer.） - On the whole cover, anywhere, there is not a single link to the anime's website, but there is link to the only official publisher (even Sawai Miku's website redirects there) - So capitalize V, remove the space between anime and ver and use Japanese brackets. Or just copy it from there or from their website, I am just saying the difference. Please don't take metadata from anime website - They are not artists, you might even notice they used different title in video. Always go for metadata from artist or publisher, then, lastly from users of the song. Romanization then would be Colorful.(AnimeVer.) obviously.√
2. Don't use CABAC and Deblocking filter in video for osu! It's not designed for real-time playback. CABAC is used for blu-ray films to reduce filesize, but it is harder to decode it, especially when you play a game (you won't recognize the filesize difference much for these resolutions and lengths). Deblocking filter is used to make a better visual quality, problem of this is it is not part of the video, decoder (or simply video player) will firstly decode the video and then will apply the filters - That means, your PC will read video and then add effect to it, again, only for watching. If possible, avoid such settings because it might result in lag for slower machines or if you run something on background. Since you have now opportunity to do so, use video without these effects.Because Network restrictions I can not get your Video. Osu! Able close the Video
3. Not critically important, but source should be moreover 冴えない彼女の育てかた and Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata should be in tags - Respectively, we use metadata for official data, we don't use for example translations for songs, we just use original language which we romanize when there is romanize ability. But yeah, use the way you believe in.√
4. 00:08:317 (4) - On hard is out of the music, definitely cannot be 1/4. Please replace it with 1/6 on 00:08:219 - with 2 repeats, changing 1/3 for 1/4 is not okay if it is offbeat.√
5. 01:27:434 (1) - On hard might start on 01:27:337 - as you did not insane, I won't force it anyway, if you want to map the note on 01:27:239 - , then it also could have some consistency.√
6. 01:01:748 (4) - On insane is not snapped on any beat on the end. You never mapped a sound which was really not in the song. This is only case you did. It would be best if you ignored the 3/4 slider and kept only notes mapped with bigger jump, for example like this. What you maybe hear here is fading-out voice, but that is never on beat. For example in epic kind of songs where there are long voices, you never hear the end on beat, so you can map only the next lyric. You might say you actually did place it on 00:04:101 (1) - but be aware, this one is mapped to soft cymbal, which in comparison with fading-out voice is on the beat. I think it is no problem
7. Also HP on Easy is quite low, I'd choose or so 1.5, because this is not kind of the easiest easy and with current settings you actually can miss 1st two combos and still pass. Can let Rookie Adapt to the game is Easy purpose

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Any additional questions are welcome.

Misure wrote:

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加油啦~

Yuii- wrote:

Placeholder!

General

Metadata: The ranked version shows "(Anime Ver.)": https://osu.ppy.sh/b/609129
However, there are also proofs on: http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/SRCL-8676 at the very bottom that say "COLORFUL ANIME VER. / SAWAI MIKU
カラフル。 (AnimeVer.) / 沢井美空"

I don't know which one is correct. I believe Wafu


Please, check the offset as well! The ranked version shows a different one from the one you are using it. He placed it in the strongest beat from the very beginning (after the drum-y part). I think that would fit better as well. I think now offset is good.

Easy

General

OD +2 read what I wrote in the Normal diff. I think now OD gap is Suitable

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:27:630 (3,4) - This sounds SUPER bad to be honest. For following the vocals + beats you can either use 2 sliders (the first one from 00:27:631 - to 00:28:023 - and the second one from 00:28:415 - to 00:28:807 - ) however that would sound even worse, so I don't recommend it... or just one full slider from 00:27:631 - to 00:28:807 - with 1 reverse arrow at 00:28:219 - ... remember to add a Whistle to the reverse!

I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.

Normal

General

OD +1 will compensate the mapset as you are using 5 in Hard and 6 in Insane (this after reading the Easy notes, of course).

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:00:179 (1,2) - This sounds quite odd. You are mapping two different things in the same object and skipping lots of things in the middle of the sliders. Try placing a 1/2 slider from 00:00:180 - to 00:00:572 - with only one reverse arrow. This will follow the drum part correctly and it will leave some reaction time at the very beginning of the map for the most newbie players. I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.
   
   
2. 00:08:611 (3) - Would be better if you change it for two circles in order to emphasise the piano (?) sound. One in 00:08:611 - and the other one in 00:09:003 - . I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.
   
   
3. 00:14:101 - Add a circle here!

I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.

Hard

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:21:356 (1) - This sounds completely off from the music as its ignoring beats. Try replacing this for a 1/4 slider (instead of 1/2) with 2 reverse arrows from 00:21:356 - to 00:21:650 - and then add a circle with Clap in 00:21:748 - .
   I think Not suitable for this Rhythm,Now is good
   
2. 01:01:748 (4) - I don't dislike this, however the waiting time may be quite long. Instead of this awkward and poor circle that has nothing to do right here, why don't you try adding a spinner from 01:00:670 - to 01:01:748 - add Clap to it, if you feel like to.

I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.

Insane

General

AR -0.2 or 0.7 Remember that this is a super calm and slow song. AR8.5 or even 8 (what I STRONGLY recommend) would do a better job. I believe player Would like it

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:14:297 (4,5,6,7) - I don't get what you are trying to do right here. There's an increase in the accentuation rhythm of the music as this section goes on, but you are reducing the spacing between each note as the beats move on. Try something like: http://puu.sh/it6bj/b59207a407.jpg I think this And did not get better.I choose my own ideas.
   
   
2. 00:21:552 (3) - Call me crazy, but this should be a 1/6 slider and end in 00:21:683 - . However, as this can be super tricky (and even end up on an unrankable issue) for an almost 4 SR map, I'd suggest you to replace 00:21:356 (1,2,3) - for a full 1/6 slider with 3 reverse arrows from 00:21:356 - to 00:20:964 (5) - . Fix
   
   
3. 00:49:983 (3) - This plays super bad considering that you are not mapping any anti-jump throughout the map. I'd strongly recommend you to Ctrl+G this and then moving 00:50:572 (4) - to the low-right, somewhere near x380 y160. Fix
   
   
4. 01:14:003 (7,8) - Place this properly. Do not map this under the slider because it will affect gameplay A LOT. Move them a bit above, maybe x256 y192. Fix
   
   
5. 01:14:297 (9) - NC here! There's a complete new section from what you were mapping.I think now is Right

Hitsounding

1. 00:14:493 (5) - Add Whistle as well.

Fix

CALL ME FOR A RE-CHECK ONCE YOU HAVE APPLIED THIS ^
I want to rank this ^^

Good luck!

Minakami Yuki wrote:

我又被低阶

Online wrote:

Wrong English metadata. Dequalify to fix this issue please.

There should be a space between "Colorful." and "(AnimeVer.)"

Source: I have the original disc and it says カラフル. (AnimeVer.) and not カラフル.(AnimeVer.), translates to "Colorful. (AnimeVer.)"