1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: I would try to steer clear of white/off-white combo colours like #1 here, as a lot of skins use white numbers, which are incredibly hard to see using this colour scheme. Perhaps try a pink to go with the cherry blossoms in the bg?
3. Metadata: You can remove "Absolute" from tags, since it's already in the song title
4. Timing: You need to add some more timing points, since there are some 1/2 pauses in the music that throw off the placement of the downbeat. Basically, there should be one downbeat per measure (4 bars or white ticks) and the downbeat should mark the most prominent beat. Whilst this doesn't affect the placement and playability of notes, it makes spotting NC and timing inconsistencies much easier, meaning it's easier to mod (and therefore you get more and better feedback). To correct for the offsets/pauses, you should add new timing points at 00:02:496 - 00:12:868 and 01:03:772 (no need to change bpm, time signature or anything like that, it's purely to correct for the pauses)
5. Hitsounds: Why are soft-hitnormal and soft-hitwhislte the same? If you're not using any whistle hitsounds, you can remove soft-hitwhistle - otherwise, you should find a different hitsound so the whistle emphasises the notes it's used on
6. AImod: If you add the timing points I suggested above, you might end up with some very marginally unsnapped notes due to rounding errors in the time display - if this happens, make sure to do a quick check and resnap of all notes using AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A)

Easy

I would change this to AR3 - the song isn't fast enough to justify AR4 and besides, you already have AR4 on the Normal, so there's a weird progression here

00:00:103 (1) - Try and start closer to the centre of the playfield in Easier diffs, as it gives newer players more chance to react. You could rotate 00:00:103 (1,2,3,4) - 45 degrees anticlockwise and move to [x-188,y-284]
00:05:847 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is a little untidy here, I would bring (3) down so it's in line with (2), then bring (4) up slightly to create a curve, which I feel is more interesting than a set of linearly arranged circles
00:10:954 (2,3) - Try and avoid 1/2 spacing in Easy - the overlapping hit objects can be very confusing to newer players. I would just keep (2) as a circle instead of a 1/1 slider
00:14:464 (4,1) - Flows a bit awkwardly to me - try moving 00:15:422 (1,2,3) - down to [x-408,y-136] - this creates a smoother flow between 00:16:698 (3,4) also
00:21:166 (2,3) - Same as at 00:10:954 (2,3)
00:21:645 (3,1) - Watch out for ugly slider overlaps - I'd move 00:23:081 (1,2,3) down and to the right to avoid this, and you can also curve (2) to create a smoother flow here
00:32:017 (3,1) - DS is inconsistent here - looks like it's 1/1 but is actually 2/1 - you could try something like this instead (no change to 00:32:017 (3) - or 00:36:007 (1) -)


00:43:507 (5) - NC here and remove from 00:44:782 (1) since the previous combo is a little long
00:43:507 (5,1) - These look too close together, be sure to enforce DS here
00:47:017 (2) - Same as 00:10:954 (2,3) - 1/2 spacing and 1/2 sliders are really confusing for new players due to the circle overlap. I would just keep this as a circle on the white tick
00:50:847 (2) - ^
00:47:337 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:48:613 (2) to keep a constant 2 measure NC pattern
00:48:613 (2) - I would remove the repeat here and add a 2/1 slider at 00:49:570 for the prolonged vocal note, and then put a circle at 00:50:527 for the drum+cymbal like you've done in the next measure at 00:53:081 (2)
00:51:166 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:53:081 (2) and also consider changing the slider to the the same pattern I suggested above
00:55:315 (2,1) - This has a weird flow, and is also a somewhat ugly overlap. Try to reflow this using the left side of the playfield since there's plenty of empty space over there to keep you from getting cramped up - maybe something like this? (You'll need to move some of the following notes around to maintain DS, but this should get you started)


00:58:985 - I would add a 1/1 slider here for the secondary vocals, this section feels a bit empty without anything here
01:00:261 - ^
01:00:900 (1) - Replace this with a single circle on the red tick to avoid the 1/2 spacing again
01:05:847 (4) - Split this into a single circle and 1/2 slider (to map the drawn out vocal note) and then NC the 1/2 slider for the downbeat at 01:06:325 - even if you decide not to do this, you should still NC 01:05:847 (4) since this combo is quite long, and is an unnecessary health drain for new players
01:08:400 (1) - ^
01:10:952 (4) - ^ Again, NC this even if you don't change the pattern as I suggested to keep combo length down
01:16:059 (4) - ^

01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section suffers from clockpattern syndrome a bit - essentially the notes just flow in one big circle, and then you turn around and come back again. This isn't all that interesting to play, and, so I feel you should try to vary your patterns up a bit more here
01:20:847 (4,5) - Avoid stacking in Easy diffs, as it's very confusing for new players
01:23:081 (2,3) - ^ 1/2 stack, even more confusing >.< - I would remove 01:23:241 (3) since it follows the red tick 1/1 pattern you've been using in this section
01:24:517 (2,3) - Try to move these somewhere else to avoid overlapping with 01:23:081 (2,3) - Ctrl+H and then rotate (3) to abgle more upwards?

Hard

The AR increase between Normal and Hard is too high as I mentioned before - maybe make this AR7?

00:00:103 (1,2,3) - I'd add some horizontal movement here to make it less linear - try moving (2) to the left or right, or maybe angling (3) clockwise slightly

00:05:049 (2,3) - Watch out for bad blankets (as I mentioned in Normal) - Increase the curve on (1) and try moving (3) to the left

00:05:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The "square" pattern here looks neat in the editor, but it flows really weirdly during play and isn't all that intuitive. Try moving 00:06:007 (4,5,6,7,8) to x:356, and then rotating 00:06:326 (6,7,8) - 45 degrees anticlockwise, to give a pattern like this:

I reduced AR to about 4 to show the whole pattern, so the overlap isn't a problem.

00:08:400 (5,6) - Curve these more to create a better blanket

00:10:156 (1,2) - Sharp change of direction ruins the flow here - try curving (1) less and/or move the following combo more to the left to reduce the harshness of the direction change

00:16:698 (6) - Move this down a little and add a downwards curve to improve the flow both to and from this note

00:21:645 (4,5,6,7) - This linear pattern of circles isn't all that interesting - consider making a curved flow, or try arranging them into a square/diamond/X shape

00:24:358 (6) - Same as at 00:16:698 (6) - but an upwards movement

00:53:081 (6,3) - If you want to keep these sliders vertical, at least make them symmetrical - (3) is angled inwards slightly

00:59:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clockpatterns again

01:03:773 (3) - Don't forget to NC here for the start of the kiai

01:16:539 (3) - Nitpicky point, but this is quite close to the health bar - perhaps move or angle it downwards slightly?

JBHyperion wrote:

Yo, M4M request from Wild and Hyper's Modding Queue

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: I would try to steer clear of white/off-white combo colours like #1 here, as a lot of skins use white numbers, which are incredibly hard to see using this colour scheme. Perhaps try a pink to go with the cherry blossoms in the bg? Alright. Was trying to follow the characters' hair colour (e.g. Yurie with silver hair).
3. Metadata: You can remove "Absolute" from tags, since it's already in the song title Nah I think that is fine. Although I will change if other modders mention about it.
4. Timing: You need to add some more timing points, since there are some 1/2 pauses in the music that throw off the placement of the downbeat. Basically, there should be one downbeat per measure (4 bars or white ticks) and the downbeat should mark the most prominent beat. Whilst this doesn't affect the placement and playability of notes, it makes spotting NC and timing inconsistencies much easier, meaning it's easier to mod (and therefore you get more and better feedback). To correct for the offsets/pauses, you should add new timing points at 00:02:496 - 00:12:868 and 01:03:772 (no need to change bpm, time signature or anything like that, it's purely to correct for the pauses) Didn't quite get it. I could use a explanation with a PM or something
5. Hitsounds: Why are soft-hitnormal and soft-hitwhislte the same? If you're not using any whistle hitsounds, you can remove soft-hitwhistle - otherwise, you should find a different hitsound so the whistle emphasises the notes it's used on Removed whistle
6. AImod: If you add the timing points I suggested above, you might end up with some very marginally unsnapped notes due to rounding errors in the time display - if this happens, make sure to do a quick check and resnap of all notes using AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A) After I get the explanation

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

I would change this to AR3 - the song isn't fast enough to justify AR4 and besides, you already have AR4 on the Normal, so there's a weird progression here Good suggestion. I felt that AR4 was too fast compared to the speed of the song.

00:00:103 (1) - Try and start closer to the centre of the playfield in Easier diffs, as it gives newer players more chance to react. You could rotate 00:00:103 (1,2,3,4) - 45 degrees anticlockwise and move to [x-188,y-284]Fixed
00:05:847 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is a little untidy here, I would bring (3) down so it's in line with (2), then bring (4) up slightly to create a curve, which I feel is more interesting than a set of linearly arranged circles Good point, Fixed.
00:10:954 (2,3) - Try and avoid 1/2 spacing in Easy - the overlapping hit objects can be very confusing to newer players. I would just keep (2) as a circle instead of a 1/1 sliderFixed.
00:14:464 (4,1) - Flows a bit awkwardly to me - try moving 00:15:422 (1,2,3) - down to [x-408,y-136] - this creates a smoother flow between 00:16:698 (3,4) also Nice flow Fixed.
00:21:166 (2,3) - Same as at 00:10:954 (2,3) Fixed.
00:21:645 (3,1) - Watch out for ugly slider overlaps - I'd move 00:23:081 (1,2,3) down and to the right to avoid this, and you can also curve (2) to create a smoother flow here Fixed. I thought this overlap won't get noticed... xD
00:32:017 (3,1) - DS is inconsistent here - looks like it's 1/1 but is actually 2/1 - you could try something like this instead (no change to 00:32:017 (3) - or 00:36:007 (1) -)
Thanks for the suggestion! I forgotten to change the DS :/ Fixed.

00:43:507 (5) - NC here and remove from 00:44:782 (1) since the previous combo is a little long Fixed. I am still no good with NC management in Easy.
00:43:507 (5,1) - These look too close together, be sure to enforce DS here Instead moved (1) with grid snap.
00:47:017 (2) - Same as 00:10:954 (2,3) - 1/2 spacing and 1/2 sliders are really confusing for new players due to the circle overlap. I would just keep this as a circle on the white tick
00:50:847 (2) - ^ Both of them fixed.
00:47:337 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:48:613 (2) to keep a constant 2 measure NC pattern Fixed.
00:48:613 (2) - I would remove the repeat here and add a 2/1 slider at 00:49:570 for the prolonged vocal note, and then put a circle at 00:50:527 for the drum+cymbal like you've done in the next measure at 00:53:081 (2) Nice suggestion on this flow Its even better than my one xD Fixed.
00:51:166 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:53:081 (2) and also consider changing the slider to the the same pattern I suggested above Fixed.
00:55:315 (2,1) - This has a weird flow, and is also a somewhat ugly overlap. Try to reflow this using the left side of the playfield since there's plenty of empty space over there to keep you from getting cramped up - maybe something like this? (You'll need to move some of the following notes around to maintain DS, but this should get you started) Moved the circle to the most right. It at least doesn't overlap awkwardly. You may suggest any other pattern, because the image isn't showing up :C


00:58:985 - I would add a 1/1 slider here for the secondary vocals, this section feels a bit empty without anything here
01:00:261 - ^ Both fixed.
01:00:900 (1) - Replace this with a single circle on the red tick to avoid the 1/2 spacing again Fixed.
01:05:847 (4) - Split this into a single circle and 1/2 slider (to map the drawn out vocal note) and then NC the 1/2 slider for the downbeat at 01:06:325 - even if you decide not to do this, you should still NC 01:05:847 (4) since this combo is quite long, and is an unnecessary health drain for new playersChanged into a 1/1 slider and 2 circles. For NC I added it on 01:06:485 (1).
01:08:400 (1) - ^ Changed into a 1/1 slider and a 1 and 1/2 slider.
01:10:952 (4) - ^ Again, NC this even if you don't change the pattern as I suggested to keep combo length down Changed into a 1/1 slider and 2 circles. Added NC though.
01:16:059 (4) - ^ Changed into 2 1/1 sliders. Also added new combo at 01:17:975 (1).

01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section suffers from clockpattern syndrome a bit - essentially the notes just flow in one big circle, and then you turn around and come back again. This isn't all that interesting to play, and, so I feel you should try to vary your patterns up a bit more here Fixed. Changed the pattern up
01:20:847 (4,5) - Avoid stacking in Easy diffs, as it's very confusing for new players Well after I changed the pattern these are no more stacked.
01:23:081 (2,3) - ^ 1/2 stack, even more confusing >.< - I would remove 01:23:241 (3) since it follows the red tick 1/1 pattern you've been using in this section Fixed. Wasn't sure to put this notes.
01:24:517 (2,3) - Try to move these somewhere else to avoid overlapping with 01:23:081 (2,3) - Ctrl+H and then rotate (3) to abgle more upwards? Instead I changed the pattern abit so that the sliders would be at the top side of the playfield.

Don't have time to mod anything else now, but I'll come back to look at the other diffs tomorrow (:

Let me add in what did I add and what I did not slowly as I finish up my homework

1. the slider (slider velocity) feel really slow imo, not fit with AR and song.
2. 00:00:262 (2) - 1 grid left
3. 00:03:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - to be honest, this kind of pattern doesn't playing well, stack 00:04:730 (6,7) together and make a jump on 00:05:049 (1) is more fit with song.
4. 00:05:049 (1) - you missing many many many many finish, you can add such as 00:05:049 (1) , 00:07:603 (1) and so on. try to recheck yourself to find more experience
5. 00:21:645 (1,1,1,1) - I know it looks beautiful but this is really unnecessary imo. QAT will mentioned this
6. 00:22:922 - I really recommend you to add note here to make it as triple because there have beat there. double and specially start on blue sick is very hard to play.
7. 00:29:624 (6) - inconsistent spacing.
8. 00:40:555 (6) - looks off, move right to match with other.
9. 00:56:751 (1,2) - completely overlapped, I recommend you to avoid overlapped. it doesn't clean and very hard to read as well.
10. 01:03:932 (2) - this slider doesn't fit with song.
11. to be honest, the slider really slow to fit with song.

1. 00:12:071 (3) - don't hate me, but this slider is ugly XD
2. 00:19:890 (1,2,3) - compared to the spacing you used since beginning, this spacing is really over and player might misread it. consider to decrease the spacing.
3. 00:43:507 (2) - better add new combo here because the speed of slider was changed.
4. 00:55:634 - you missing note here, if you followed vocal, try to use 1/2 slider instead so it will follow vocal and still emphasis the clap on tail.

1. 00:35:209 (3,4,5) - perfect rhythm but I not recommend you to use circles to emphasis it. use reverse slider instead. also apply on 00:33:932 and so on.
2. pretty fine to me, just need some pattern improvement and neater just rearrange them, I can't point out.

1. 00:02:496 (1,1,1,1) - still, you missing many finish. add them.

1. 00:33:294 (1) - unrankable (inconsistent spacing)
2. 00:34:571 (3,1) - ^
3. 00:53:720 (1) - better remove new combo here, lowest diff doesn't trend to add many new combo also missing finish here.
4. 01:08:400 (1) - the strong beat suppose to be the head of slider or circle but you used it as reverse of slider which isn't clickable so please reconsider about this.
5. 01:20:528 (3,4,5) - looks really impossible to read for newbie, unstack them.

P A N wrote:

[Exceed]

1. the slider (slider velocity) feel really slow imo, not fit with AR and song. Fixed. Was feeling the same.
2. 00:00:262 (2) - 1 grid left Fixed after SV change
3. 00:03:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - to be honest, this kind of pattern doesn't playing well, stack 00:04:730 (6,7) together and make a jump on 00:05:049 (1) is more fit with song. Fixed. Better flow with this
4. 00:05:049 (1) - you missing many many many many finish, you can add such as 00:05:049 (1) , 00:07:603 (1) and so on. try to recheck yourself to find more experience Erm... I feel like finish hitsounds on that places feels way too 'overused' for me. It feels like I am using too much. Will change if others mention it.
5. 00:21:645 (1,1,1,1) - I know it looks beautiful but this is really unnecessary imo. QAT will mentioned this Removing NCs for now.
6. 00:22:922 - I really recommend you to add note here to make it as triple because there have beat there. double and specially start on blue sick is very hard to play. Well these is for making difference between insane and this diff. Feels more like extra if I do this. Just my opinion.
7. 00:29:624 (6) - inconsistent spacing. Fixed
8. 00:40:555 (6) - looks off, move right to match with other.Fixed.
9. 00:56:751 (1,2) - completely overlapped, I recommend you to avoid overlapped. it doesn't clean and very hard to read as well.Fixed
10. 01:03:932 (2) - this slider doesn't fit with song.Removed. Added 2 circles instead.
11. to be honest, the slider really slow to fit with song. Yea increased SV.

[Insane]

1. 00:12:071 (3) - don't hate me, but this slider is ugly XD I will not hate you Fixed.
2. 00:19:890 (1,2,3) - compared to the spacing you used since beginning, this spacing is really over and player might misread it. consider to decrease the spacing. Fixed.
3. 00:43:507 (2) - better add new combo here because the speed of slider was changed. Fixed
4. 00:55:634 - you missing note here, if you followed vocal, try to use 1/2 slider instead so it will follow vocal and still emphasis the clap on tail. Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:35:209 (3,4,5) - perfect rhythm but I not recommend you to use circles to emphasis it. use reverse slider instead. also apply on 00:33:932 and so on.Fixed most of them using repeated sliders or just sliders.
2. pretty fine to me, just need some pattern improvement and neater just rearrange them, I can't point out. Maybe will fix this if I can think of any other patterns.

[General]
00:46:060 - you can decrease the volume here because it's a soft part of the song. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:02:496 (1,1,1,1) - still, you missing many finish. add them. I again feel that finish is not necessary here, like what I did to other diffs.

[Easy]

1. 00:33:294 (1) - unrankable (inconsistent spacing) Added circle to make the spacing consistent.
2. 00:34:571 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:53:720 (1) - better remove new combo here, lowest diff doesn't trend to add many new combo also missing finish here. Didn't remove NC or add finish, because the combo will be too long if I remove NC, and finish doesn't seem necessary here, as far as the song goes.
4. 01:08:400 (1) - the strong beat suppose to be the head of slider or circle but you used it as reverse of slider which isn't clickable so please reconsider about this. Fixed.
5. 01:20:528 (3,4,5) - looks really impossible to read for newbie, unstack them. Fixed.

that's all for me now, this map still need a lot of work but as long as you get many mod and so on, it will got better of course :3 GL ! Thanks a lot

JBHyperion wrote:

Yo, M4M request from Wild and Hyper's Modding Queue

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: I would try to steer clear of white/off-white combo colours like #1 here, as a lot of skins use white numbers, which are incredibly hard to see using this colour scheme. Perhaps try a pink to go with the cherry blossoms in the bg?
3. Metadata: You can remove "Absolute" from tags, since it's already in the song title
4. Timing: You need to add some more timing points, since there are some 1/2 pauses in the music that throw off the placement of the downbeat. Basically, there should be one downbeat per measure (4 bars or white ticks) and the downbeat should mark the most prominent beat. Whilst this doesn't affect the placement and playability of notes, it makes spotting NC and timing inconsistencies much easier, meaning it's easier to mod (and therefore you get more and better feedback). To correct for the offsets/pauses, you should add new timing points at 00:02:496 - 00:12:868 and 01:03:772 (no need to change bpm, time signature or anything like that, it's purely to correct for the pauses)
5. Hitsounds: Why are soft-hitnormal and soft-hitwhislte the same? If you're not using any whistle hitsounds, you can remove soft-hitwhistle - otherwise, you should find a different hitsound so the whistle emphasises the notes it's used on
6. AImod: If you add the timing points I suggested above, you might end up with some very marginally unsnapped notes due to rounding errors in the time display - if this happens, make sure to do a quick check and resnap of all notes using AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A)

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

I would change this to AR3 - the song isn't fast enough to justify AR4 and besides, you already have AR4 on the Normal, so there's a weird progression here

00:00:103 (1) - Try and start closer to the centre of the playfield in Easier diffs, as it gives newer players more chance to react. You could rotate 00:00:103 (1,2,3,4) - 45 degrees anticlockwise and move to [x-188,y-284]
00:05:847 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is a little untidy here, I would bring (3) down so it's in line with (2), then bring (4) up slightly to create a curve, which I feel is more interesting than a set of linearly arranged circles
00:10:954 (2,3) - Try and avoid 1/2 spacing in Easy - the overlapping hit objects can be very confusing to newer players. I would just keep (2) as a circle instead of a 1/1 slider
00:14:464 (4,1) - Flows a bit awkwardly to me - try moving 00:15:422 (1,2,3) - down to [x-408,y-136] - this creates a smoother flow between 00:16:698 (3,4) also
00:21:166 (2,3) - Same as at 00:10:954 (2,3)
00:21:645 (3,1) - Watch out for ugly slider overlaps - I'd move 00:23:081 (1,2,3) down and to the right to avoid this, and you can also curve (2) to create a smoother flow here
00:32:017 (3,1) - DS is inconsistent here - looks like it's 1/1 but is actually 2/1 - you could try something like this instead (no change to 00:32:017 (3) - or 00:36:007 (1) -)


00:43:507 (5) - NC here and remove from 00:44:782 (1) since the previous combo is a little long
00:43:507 (5,1) - These look too close together, be sure to enforce DS here
00:47:017 (2) - Same as 00:10:954 (2,3) - 1/2 spacing and 1/2 sliders are really confusing for new players due to the circle overlap. I would just keep this as a circle on the white tick
00:50:847 (2) - ^
00:47:337 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:48:613 (2) to keep a constant 2 measure NC pattern
00:48:613 (2) - I would remove the repeat here and add a 2/1 slider at 00:49:570 for the prolonged vocal note, and then put a circle at 00:50:527 for the drum+cymbal like you've done in the next measure at 00:53:081 (2)
00:51:166 (1) - NC here and remove from 00:53:081 (2) and also consider changing the slider to the the same pattern I suggested above
00:55:315 (2,1) - This has a weird flow, and is also a somewhat ugly overlap. Try to reflow this using the left side of the playfield since there's plenty of empty space over there to keep you from getting cramped up - maybe something like this? (You'll need to move some of the following notes around to maintain DS, but this should get you started)


00:58:985 - I would add a 1/1 slider here for the secondary vocals, this section feels a bit empty without anything here
01:00:261 - ^
01:00:900 (1) - Replace this with a single circle on the red tick to avoid the 1/2 spacing again
01:05:847 (4) - Split this into a single circle and 1/2 slider (to map the drawn out vocal note) and then NC the 1/2 slider for the downbeat at 01:06:325 - even if you decide not to do this, you should still NC 01:05:847 (4) since this combo is quite long, and is an unnecessary health drain for new players
01:08:400 (1) - ^
01:10:952 (4) - ^ Again, NC this even if you don't change the pattern as I suggested to keep combo length down
01:16:059 (4) - ^

01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section suffers from clockpattern syndrome a bit - essentially the notes just flow in one big circle, and then you turn around and come back again. This isn't all that interesting to play, and, so I feel you should try to vary your patterns up a bit more here
01:20:847 (4,5) - Avoid stacking in Easy diffs, as it's very confusing for new players
01:23:081 (2,3) - ^ 1/2 stack, even more confusing >.< - I would remove 01:23:241 (3) since it follows the red tick 1/1 pattern you've been using in this section
01:24:517 (2,3) - Try to move these somewhere else to avoid overlapping with 01:23:081 (2,3) - Ctrl+H and then rotate (3) to abgle more upwards?

Normal

The AR increase between Normal and Hard is too high - maybe make this AR5? Good point, I can feel it plays out much better now. Fixed.

Okay keep in mind the points I made in Easy, because you've done some of the same things here. For example, watch out for the following (I'll just list an example of each and you can find the rest if applicable):

1. Strange or awkward flow - 00:03:932 (3,4) - try angling this 45 degrees anticlockwise so it's pointing between (2) and (4), also 00:12:868 (1,2,3) - try to align sliders neatly by either angling them towards each other or creating blankets Did it. Fixed.
2. Clockpatterns - 00:05:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try and vary the movement and flow to create more interesting patters Fixed.
3. Stacks - 00:09:358 (4,5) - You should maintain constant DS in Normal as well as Easy, so unstack these This was naturally fixed after I fixed the above point.
4. Bad blankets - 00:30:581 (1,2) - You can make much smoother curves if you only use one grey anchor point in your sliders - (1) currently looks quite squashed on the right-hand side. Try using the approach circle of (2) to line up your blankets Removed blanket, and instead changed up pattern.
5. Inconsistent NC usage - 00:43:507 (5,1) - Unless you have particularly prominent notes you want to emphasise (e.g the start of the kiai at 01:03:773 (3)-), NCs should usually go on the downbeat, so swap the NC between these two to put it on (5) instead of (1) - notice how it's a much stronger beat in the music with the prominent vocal note Good point yet again, fixed.
6. Overly long combos - 01:03:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to keep combos to a sensible length to avoid huge health drain on easier difficulties (this can easily be fixed with the NC changes suggested above)Fixed.

Now that you've got an idea of what you're looking for, you can go through this diff again and fix it up - a lot of the things I mentioned are easy mistakes to make, but thankfully are also quite easy to fix. Where you've got to change, add or remove patterns, don't forget to vary them up too, rather than copy-pasting the changes wholesale.Generally what I did was, instead of going literally clockwise/anticlockwise for the whole map, I moved some circles out of the circle, so that it at least won't look like just a pile of circles mashed into one difficulty.

Hard

The AR increase between Normal and Hard is too high as I mentioned before - maybe make this AR7?I think AR8 is fine, considering that this is quite a fast song. Plays out more nicer in my opinion.

00:00:103 (1,2,3) - I'd add some horizontal movement here to make it less linear - try moving (2) to the left or right, or maybe angling (3) clockwise slightlyFixed by moving (2) little to the right.

00:05:049 (2,3) - Watch out for bad blankets (as I mentioned in Normal) - Increase the curve on (1) and try moving (3) to the left I guess fixed. Looks better now.

00:05:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The "square" pattern here looks neat in the editor, but it flows really weirdly during play and isn't all that intuitive. Try moving 00:06:007 (4,5,6,7,8) to x:356, and then rotating 00:06:326 (6,7,8) - 45 degrees anticlockwise, to give a pattern like this:

I reduced AR to about 4 to show the whole pattern, so the overlap isn't a problem. Yes fixed, looks more nice now

00:08:400 (5,6) - Curve these more to create a better blanket Fixed.

00:10:156 (1,2) - Sharp change of direction ruins the flow here - try curving (1) less and/or move the following combo more to the left to reduce the harshness of the direction change Fixed.

00:16:698 (6) - Move this down a little and add a downwards curve to improve the flow both to and from this note Fixed.

00:21:645 (4,5,6,7) - This linear pattern of circles isn't all that interesting - consider making a curved flow, or try arranging them into a square/diamond/X shape Made this pattern into a zigzag.

00:24:358 (6) - Same as at 00:16:698 (6) - but an upwards movement Fixed.

00:53:081 (6,3) - If you want to keep these sliders vertical, at least make them symmetrical - (3) is angled inwards slightly Mistakes were made... fixed.

00:59:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Clockpatterns again Fixed.

01:03:773 (3) - Don't forget to NC here for the start of the kiai Hmm... Fixed. Will make changes if other modders point out this.

01:16:539 (3) - Nitpicky point, but this is quite close to the health bar - perhaps move or angle it downwards slightly? Toned it down a bit.

I'll leave this here for now, as I feel you've got a reasonable amount to work with (don't forget that what I've said for ENH can be applied to the harder two diffs as well). If you found this helpful and you'd like me to come back at some point in the future and mod the other two diffs / recheck the diffs I've modded, just give me a shout. Same goes if you have any questions or want me to explain anything in more detail (PM me about the timing points when I'm online and I'll explain that to you).

Best of luck! (:

Frim4503 wrote:

col:1,2,3,4,5,6,7

General

1. dif gap between Lv.8 and Lv.14 is too big. try increase star dif in Lv.8 to above 2 and change the title to Lv.10 Did it.
2. delete 4k in all dif. cuz you just using 1 type of key Fixed.

4k Lv.6

00:00:900 (900|1) - move to 4
00:09:039 (9039|1,9358|0) - swap col.
00:09:517 (9517|0) - move thi to 3
00:10:156 (10156|2,10634|3) - swap col again
00:10:954 - http://puu.sh/hNfB4/a0a3fb4d6b.png
00:26:911 (26911|2) - move to 1
00:28:826 (28826|1) - ^ 3
00:35:688 (35688|0) - ^ 4
00:38:400 (38400|1) - remove
00:42:868 (42868|2,43108|2) - ^
00:47:017 - http://puu.sh/hNfQW/5e955ba6d6.png ALL FIXED. I can't make easy difficulties on mania :/ Thanks for this!

4k Lv.8

00:14:943 - add note Fixed.
00:15:262 - ^ Fixed.
00:17:496 - ^ Fixed.
00:17:815 - ^ Fixed.
00:22:762 - ^ 2 Doesn't seem necessary. I don't really hear any instrument in the background at here either.
00:22:922 - ^ 3 Fixed.
00:23:081 (23081|1) - move to 4 Fixed accordingly.
00:42:868 (42868|0,43108|0,43347|0) - move to 2 Fixed. My mania patterns are really random.
01:06:326 - add note Didn't really change it, but instead moved 01:06:485 (66485|3,66485|1) these to start at this point.
01:11:432 - ^ Added long note.
01:16:539 - ^ Added long note at 4 then removed 01:16:698 (76698|1).
01:20:688 - ^ Fixed.
01:27:071 - ^ Fixed.

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Hello~ Sorry that you somehow ended up being one of the last people for my queue for the first batch to mod , my sincerest apologies I don't mind Was busy on my own too...

[Easy]
00:53:081 (3,4) - Stacking in Easy is never a good thing, even though it's only two notes Wasn't sure to put this, fixed.

[Normal]
00:40:954 (1,2,3,4) - You could make the part where the 2,3,4 are to the 3 being in a slightly different position Fixed. Didn't notice the blanket was slightly awkward.

01:00:900 (1,2,3) - Stacking can be confusing to newer players and make it generally more hard for them Fixed.
Mostly just don't stack for this difficulty About that. Well I think its fine to stack 2 notes. But of course stacking 3 will make it too hard for new players.

[Hard]
01:18:294 (5,6) - I really want this to be blanketed lol. Good point. Fixed.


[Insane]
00:23:241 (4,5,6) - Can go something like this maybe? Again, good point. Fixed.


[Exceed]
00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) - Since this is your hardest difficulty, I think it would be reasonable to have the jumps fairly large for this part because of the "long" period of time that the player has to jump to each note. Fixed. I can't really think of much patterns and all...

Hope that helped, couldn't really find things that we're too bad (That's a good thing ) Thanks!

schwarzvgrune wrote:

SPOILER

mod from PM.

i'm really really sorry to tell you this beforehand but.
there are too many issues with your map that i just don't know where to start.... Nah this is my first time mania map, I don't mind.

In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

i can only point out some general stuffs at the moment because i just don't know where to start..
you still need a lot of work to fix your mania (esp. HD)
i will just go through the main issue one by one, without getting into specific because i'll just give examples (too many mistake, i'm so sorry) No problems.

lvl 14
long notes abuse

00:00:422 (422|3,900|0,1379|1) -

your LN across the diff is very random. it is extremely recommended not to map beat and express them as LN.
and also vocal. it's extremely discouraged to map vocal as well in mania. please consider that when you map.
and next. your LN, if you're following the background instrument (electric guitar, or whatever it is that you're following) be sure to snap it properly

00:00:422 (422|3,900|0) - these are 2/4 beat too short if you're mapping the bg electric guitar

00:02:496 (2496|3) - LN abuse.
00:04:411 (4411|2,5049|0,6964|0,7603|1) -
00:13:028 (13028|0,13985|1,14464|2,15422|3,15741|3,16060|3,16379|3,16698|0,17017|0,17337|0) - and so on.
00:17:975 (17975|3,18613|2,19092|1,20368|0,20847|1) -

00:19:890 (19890|1,20049|2,20368|0,20847|1) - from this, i am now 90% sure that some of your LN follows the singer?
this is extremely discouraged and it would be better for you not to map it.


wrong / incorrect emphasis

00:12:868 - this doesn't make any sense. why only 1 note here? beat emphasis is here because it signals a new phase.
and from this point onward, your placement are (imo) all incorrect unfortunately.. the emphasis of the beat is on the white line, yet you have 2 notes all on the red line. please recheck across your whole diffs. use 25% playback.


00:33:613 - here again several examples, there are too many that i cannot possibly point them out to you one by one,
00:40:954 - 00:42:230 -
and so on.


low quality MP3
this is the case for many anime song. but you need at least a decent quality mp3 to be able to distinguish the sound and map properly, i will provide you with some links below at the end of the mod which i hope you could take a little bit of time to read through and do some research first.


incomplete / inappropriate hitsound


you only use 1 hitsound across the whole map, which means you don't really use anything after all. you need at least 2 or 3 to distinguish the sound and also to give emphasis. for example
00:42:868 - this here, have stronger beat.

00:51:485 - this one is similar with snare sound, a rather high-pitched beat.

and so on. i can give you some recommendations on hitsound later, but the most important thing now is to actually getting your map fixed.


unnecessary - and abusive - jack / hammer

you do not have any pattern at all, or at least your pattern does not allow you to flexibly place the notes, and most of the hammer are not justified here imo. there is practically no exact pitch whereby a hammer is needed, some of the parts are also over-mapped because of the hammer abuse. here are examples
00:36:725 (36725|2,36805|2) -
00:27:709 (27709|0,27868|0,28028|0,28188|0) -
00:28:347 (28347|2,28507|2,28826|2,28985|2,29145|3,29305|3,29464|0,29624|0) -
01:07:443 (67443|3,67603|0,67603|2,67762|1,67922|2,67922|1,68081|0,68241|2,68241|0,68241|1,68400|3,68560|2,68560|3,68560|0,68720|1,68879|0,68879|3,69039|2,69198|1,69198|0,69278|2,69358|2,69517|1,69517|2,69517|0,69677|3,69837|1,69837|3,69837|2) -

basically it exists on the whole map. please reconsider.


lastly, this is my opinion, and again i deeply apologise, and i am sorry if i offended you in any way (because i did not intend to offend you)
however. at it's current stage the mania mode is (probably) not safe-able (i.e. cannot be saved). the only way for you to fix all these, imo, is to actually remake the whole diffs...

and if you're very new to mania mapping its better for you to take a look at other ranked map and copy their style / patterning for exercise. you may also want to request your friend to do GD for you to make it easier, and you can learn from that GD-ers.

here are the links that i promised to you

some stuffs which you need to probably get more familiar with
Osu!mania Ranking Criteria
How to Get Your Map Ranked

extra stuffs to make your beatmap more sophisticated
WARNING: CREDIT GOES TO RESPECTIVE USERS, I DID NOT CLAIM ANY RIGHTS TO THEIR WORKS!
hitsound tutorial + download pack
LordRaika's Hitsound Guide

wants to improve your background / audio / video? visit the link below v
Ringating's BG, Audio and Video Improvement Queue

wants to improve / add video for your beatmap? visit the link below v
Shad0w1and's HD Video Encoding Queue

tools made by Agka for SV / BPM changes calculator (?)

good luck o(≧v≦)o~~

zj0924 wrote:

Hi！From my queue

[General]

1. sound effect need to be improved Like what? I took it as increase the volume, so I did exactly that.
2. flow is kinda boring you can refer to other mappers and imitate how they flow in their map Indeed, I need to work on my flow.

[Easy]

1. I'd suggest ds x1.1 current one looks so crampedFixed.
2. 00:09:039 (3) - remove clap？The thing is, I am trying to place claps on every upbeat possible. It creates a nice effect IMO
3. 00:10:954 (2) - ^ Yea this one is on downbeat, nice catch. Fixed.
4. from 00:12:868 (1) - to 00:21:166 (6) - I suggest remove all the clap because there a no snare in bg Again, claps on upbeat.
5. 00:17:656 (5,1) - ds? Fixed when I applied 1.1x DS
6. 00:27:230 (4) - clap Fixed. Removed clap on the end of slider and added at the starting of slider. Also added a circle afterwards on the next upbeat.
7. 00:29:783 (4) - ^ ^^ but without the circle.
8. 00:30:581 (1) - finish Fixed. I didn't hear a cymbal in the background originally.
9. 00:39:039 (2,3) - why there are gap between these two? you should map this like 00:40:954 (1,2,3,4) - for consistency Fixed.
10. 00:40:954 (1,2,3,4) - move in circle is quite boring imo try some other flows Modified (3) to 2 circles.
11. 00:44:783 (2) - this part is quiet you may consider replace the normal hit with soft-hit normal there are no kicks in bg Don't think that is necessary, but will change if others mention it.
12. 00:52:124 (2) - finish Maybe you couldn't hear it, but there is a finish. Increased volume instead.
13. 00:56:911 (2,1) - transition can be improved Curved the slider.
14. 01:19:092 (1) - you might need map this Didn't get it, but moved the starting point 1/2 behind.
15. 01:23:081 (2) - use a 1/2sliderFixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:496 (1) - finish Fixed for all difficulties.
2. 00:05:688 (2) - map this for better transition Didn't get what you said ;-;
3. 00:10:954 (2) - blanket? Fixed.
4. 00:11:113 (3) - map this plz Again, didn't get what you said ;-;
5. 00:26:911 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - plz don't move in a circle... Fixed the pattern.
6. 00:37:762 (4) - you could use a slider to express wellI don't prefer to put any notes or repeats on blue tick in normal and easy diffs... so yea.
   
7. 00:43:507 (1) - why use 0.75sv too slow and looks cramped DS fixed it.
8. 00:47:017 (1,2,3) - stack plz Instead made (1) and (2) as a 1/2 slider.
9. 00:58:666 (2,3) - the gap why you don't map this? If you mean by aligning them in a line, then yes, I fixed it.
10. 01:06:326 (1) - start here or the rhythm lacks varietyMoved the starting point of slider 1/2 infront.

[Hard]

1. this diff is relatively good for me Thanks!
2. 00:20:368 (2) - there's no need to use a return slider,try mapping sth with combination of circle and slider instead Fixed.
3. 00:23:081 (1,2) - stack? Fixed.
4. 00:33:454 (1,2) - suggest use a slider instead or it'll be sudden I think this is fine.
5. 00:37:762 (6) - I suggest use reverse slider I mentioned before Trying to make some varieties on patterns here, as I used few of them before.
6. 00:56:751 (1,2) - stack? Fixed.
7. 01:03:773 (1) - no need to extend to1/4 Looks fine for me.
8. 01:14:624 (3,4) - looks crowded and doesn't flow well Good point, Fixed.
   

GL~

• 
  fix some of your sliders/blankets
  
  00:01:698 (6) - maybe set this far off or turn it into a 1/2 slider
  00:02:177 (2) - stack this to the head of 00:02:496 (1)
  00:07:603 (1) - fix this
  00:23:241 (4) - maybe ctrl+g
  00:55:794 (1) - maybe can you do it smth like this
  
  
  01:04:411 (3) - ctrl+g
  01:07:283 (2) - maybe move this to the left
  01:08:560 (4) - ctrl+g as well

• 
  this feels like a normal but faster and with harsher diff settings
  
  00:02:177 (3) - i feel like this would be better stacked to 00:02:496 (1). either move the the circle to the slider(which doesn't feel right on a hard diff) or the slider to the circle. maybe find a way to close the distance.
  00:06:964 (8) - ctrl+g
  00:07:603 (2) - blanket this properly
  00:07:603 (2) - maybe move this to the tail of 00:08:400 (5) -

• 
  00:07:283 (4) - can you move this somewhere to the right?
  00:30:103 (1,2) - can you tighten the space in these two a liiitle bit? and then maybe stack 00:30:581 (1) to wherever you put 00:30:262 (2)
  
  i would point a few things out but i might just be too salty which is why i thought they're bad.

domSaur wrote:

a mod of some sort

[Insane]

• 
  fix some of your sliders/blankets
  
  00:01:698 (6) - maybe set this far off or turn it into a 1/2 slider I just set it off so that they aren't overlapping, but not a lot.
  00:02:177 (2) - stack this to the head of 00:02:496 (1) I believe that this is ok.. Don't really know how to explain it.
  00:07:603 (1) - fix this Guess I fixed it.
  00:23:241 (4) - maybe ctrl+g
  00:55:794 (1) - maybe can you do it smth like this
  
  
  01:04:411 (3) - ctrl+g It kinda breaks the flow
  01:07:283 (2) - maybe move this to the left Originally this was to follow the flow from the previous notes.
  01:08:560 (4) - ctrl+g as well I am using etna slider pattern

[Hard]

• 
  this feels like a normal but faster and with harsher diff settings
  
  00:02:177 (3) - i feel like this would be better stacked to 00:02:496 (1). either move the the circle to the slider(which doesn't feel right on a hard diff) or the slider to the circle. maybe find a way to close the distance. Looks fine for me
  00:06:964 (8) - ctrl+g I don't want to make the jump on the next note
  00:07:603 (2) - blanket this properly Fixed
  00:07:603 (2) - maybe move this to the tail of 00:08:400 (5) - Nah this looks fine already. Idk I think this flow feels better... IMO

[Exceed]

• 
  00:07:283 (4) - can you move this somewhere to the right? Instead ctrl+g 00:06:964 (3).
  00:30:103 (1,2) - can you tighten the space in these two a liiitle bit? and then maybe stack 00:30:581 (1) to wherever you put 00:30:262 (2) I think a jump here is fine
  
  i would point a few things out but i might just be too salty which is why i thought they're bad.

some(or most) of your sliders feels wonky. i'm not sure if any of these are of help but yeah... /o/

1. 00:06:964 (3) - I suggest you ctrl+ g this one for better flow. else you change motions too often for this and the jump afterwards feels much more natural this way. you'd have to move 00:07:603 (1) - to the left a bit, though
2. 00:08:241 (3,4,5) - to fit the music the jump should be from 3 -> 4 and not from 4 -> 5 because the pitch changes at 3 -> 4 please change this
3. 00:16:060 (5,6) - to go with the strong vocals i suggest you change those two circles into a slider. because 5 is much stronger than 4 and this also fits the rhythm better and makes it more interesting than just clicking wild circles
4. 00:17:017 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:19:571 (8) - i suggest you ctrl+g this one for flow. atm you change direction here and it doesn't fit the music because there's no big change or gap here. if you ctrl+ g this feels a lot smoother
6. 00:20:049 (9,10) - again maybe change those two into one slider
7. 00:21:326 (3,4,1,2) - it's not good to make a jump after such a parallel pattern. i suggest you curve 3,4 and 1 a bit more so the jump is a bit better prepared
8. 00:22:922 - add a circle here. there's a clear drum sound and the double wouldn't fit alone. else this is predestinated as unreadable
9. 00:23:560 (5) - how about you place this to the right of 4 so you get some nice circular flow and also a cool jump from 5 -> 6. like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:27:709 (4,5,6,7) - those beats are weak but you force the player to click all of this. why? change this into two sliders.
11. 00:29:305 (5,6,7) - how about you change this again? to much changes in motion. something like this would be much better:
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:29:783 (7,1,2) - this doesn't work out. this is unreadable and i think it's also unrankable. you use a antijump for a 1/1 that's okay but don't use a big fullscreen 1/2 jump afterwards! please make the distance a bit consistent here. no jump.
13. 00:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - i think you shold change this into sliders. this feels weird. and 1/4 sliders make a cool kick.feeling that is also in the music
14. 00:38:400 (1,2,3,4) - please emphasize the voice like i told you at 00:16:060
15. 00:48:613 (1,2,3,4) - the same think with consistent distance.
16. 00:54:358 (3,1,2) - ^
17. 00:56:911 (2,1,2) - this is okay, though. because there's no distance and stuff
18. 01:01:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this doesn't flow good at all and is also difficult to read and doesn't feel natural. you can change this with ctrl + g 01:02:017 (1,2) - and make a square out of 01:02:017 (1,2,3,4) -
19. 01:03:294 (1,2,1) - again distance
20. 01:05:049 (1) - ctrl+ g for flow reasons
21. 01:09:278 (5,6) - i suggest you don't stack this stream. this one's sudden and you don't have many streamy-stuff here so it's easier for the player to read and feels better
22. 01:10:156 (5,1) - why that repeating slider? it doesn't fit. go with the vocals here and emphasize them.
23. 01:17:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again. you emphasize EVERYTHING but the vocals are clearly stronger than the drums so slider stuff like i told before
24. 01:21:007 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g this for flow
25. you got a lot of flow issues in this diff so maybe go through it and change everything that feels a bit strange.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Just mod for me Normal to Insane

Hard wrote:

Wow. Why so many stars. Sorry... I spent all my kudos here...
Mod from my queue. When you finished applying my mod please rate the quality with the poll in my queue: t/326019/start=45

[Exceed]

1. 00:06:964 (3) - I suggest you ctrl+ g this one for better flow. else you change motions too often for this and the jump afterwards feels much more natural this way. you'd have to move 00:07:603 (1) - to the left a bit, though Fixed.
2. 00:08:241 (3,4,5) - to fit the music the jump should be from 3 -> 4 and not from 4 -> 5 because the pitch changes at 3 -> 4 please change this ^^
3. 00:16:060 (5,6) - to go with the strong vocals i suggest you change those two circles into a slider. because 5 is much stronger than 4 and this also fits the rhythm better and makes it more interesting than just clicking wild circles ^^
4. 00:17:017 (3,4) - ^ ^^
5. 00:19:571 (8) - i suggest you ctrl+g this one for flow. atm you change direction here and it doesn't fit the music because there's no big change or gap here. if you ctrl+ g this feels a lot smoother Did ctrl+g, but didn't reverse direction of the flow. Instead I gone with a blanket.
6. 00:20:049 (9,10) - again maybe change those two into one slider I think this is fine, considering that there are not much circles after this.
7. 00:21:326 (3,4,1,2) - it's not good to make a jump after such a parallel pattern. i suggest you curve 3,4 and 1 a bit more so the jump is a bit better prepared Fixed.
8. 00:22:922 - add a circle here. there's a clear drum sound and the double wouldn't fit alone. else this is predestinated as unreadable You are right, fixed. Didn't hear a drum when I was mapping :/
9. 00:23:560 (5) - how about you place this to the right of 4 so you get some nice circular flow and also a cool jump from 5 -> 6. like this: Fixed. Flow plays out much better.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:27:709 (4,5,6,7) - those beats are weak but you force the player to click all of this. why? change this into two sliders. I only changed 6 and 7 to 1/2 slider.
11. 00:29:305 (5,6,7) - how about you change this again? to much changes in motion. something like this would be much better: Fixed
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:29:783 (7,1,2) - this doesn't work out. this is unreadable and i think it's also unrankable. you use a antijump for a 1/1 that's okay but don't use a big fullscreen 1/2 jump afterwards! please make the distance a bit consistent here. no jump. Fixed
13. 00:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - i think you shold change this into sliders. this feels weird. and 1/4 sliders make a cool kick.feeling that is also in the music Fixed.
14. 00:38:400 (1,2,3,4) - please emphasize the voice like i told you at 00:16:060 Changed 2 and 3 to slider.
15. 00:48:613 (1,2,3,4) - the same think with consistent distance. I am trying to create an effect that the spacing is increasing every 2 notes of circle.
16. 00:54:358 (3,1,2) - ^ Decreased jump in 1 and 2
17. 00:56:911 (2,1,2) - this is okay, though. because there's no distance and stuff
18. 01:01:539 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this doesn't flow good at all and is also difficult to read and doesn't feel natural. you can change this with ctrl + g 01:02:017 (1,2) - and make a square out of 01:02:017 (1,2,3,4) - Thanks for the suggestion! Fixed.
19. 01:03:294 (1,2,1) - again distance Stacked 1 and 2, but didn't do anything to the next combo 1.
20. 01:05:049 (1) - ctrl+ g for flow reasons Curved the slider instead. Ctrl+g this feels bit weird to me.
21. 01:09:278 (5,6) - i suggest you don't stack this stream. this one's sudden and you don't have many streamy-stuff here so it's easier for the player to read and feels better Fixed.
22. 01:10:156 (5,1) - why that repeating slider? it doesn't fit. go with the vocals here and emphasize them.
23. 01:17:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again. you emphasize EVERYTHING but the vocals are clearly stronger than the drums so slider stuff like i told before Don't want to be following the vocals here although they are louder.
24. 01:21:007 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g this for flow Ctrl+g these feels weird for me again.
25. you got a lot of flow issues in this diff so maybe go through it and change everything that feels a bit strange.

hope that helped. you got similar mistakes in your other diffs as well so please fix the flow-issues in all of them.

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Just mod for me Normal to Insane

As requested.

Insane

1. 00:00:900 (4) - Not really a fan on the repeating sliders, especially same pattern and facing same angleI think these are fine.
2. 00:01:379 (5) - Move further away If I move this further, I think the spacing will be too big.
3. In general, that starting part is way too left side heavy. Move the notes around some more. Never noticed that. Fixed.
4. 00:12:071 (3) - Wiggle sliders are unrankable Fixed.
5. 00:32:656 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Does this have to be spaced out so much? It goes from slow to fast really quick, so I suggest lowering DS here Fixed. Realized .9x SV wasn't enough.
6. 00:43:507 (1) - Fix anchor points here Well... If you mean by placing anchor points on the slider, I did that.
7. 00:53:081 (1) - Remove NC, place it 00:52:603 (6) - here Fixed.
8. 01:23:081 (1,2,1,2,3) - I think spacing here makes it hard to judge when to hit the notes. I know there are still NCs there, but regardless I'd change spacing on the second part Removed jump from 5 to 1, stacked 2 on 1, and changed jump pattern on 3,4 and 5. Also, jump from 2 to 3 removed.

Hard

1. 00:23:081 (1,2,3) - So many stacks I think this is still fine.
2. 01:03:773 (1) - I think 1/1 works better here [color=red]Having a kick hitsound at the end of this slider blends into the song well. Didn't really know how to explain this :C

Normal

1. 00:04:411 (4) - DS inconsistency
2. 00:06:326 (3) - ^
3. 00:10:156 (1) - ^
4. 00:11:432 (1) - I won't list anymore, just make sure to fix this up (I recommend Grip Snap: Off, Distance Snap: On and just move everything to get it in right position) Fixed all DS inconsistency.
5. 00:19:890 (4) - 1/2 slider instead to match vocals? Fixed
6. 00:42:868 This matches song better (3/4) Instead made a 3/4 slider with no repeats, and added a circle afterwards.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:47:017 (1,2,3,1,2) - Why so many sideways sliders. Add variation ^_^ Curved some sliders.
8. From 01:03:773 up to around 01:13:666 The rhythm is really off. I suggest remapping this part, with more emphasis on using 1/2s to match vocals.Fixed. I think this is better.

Nice desu. Good luck ^_^

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

M4M from wkyik's Mod Queue

[Ins]

1. pls check all of the blanket I guess I fixed em all.
2. The pattern were not good enough, note were mostly place straight in front to the previous one
   for example 00:50:528 (4,5,1,2,3) - and 00:52:603 (1,2,3,4) - Curved them.
3. And some note placing for a circle pattern were unpolished into a circle for example 00:41:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:847 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ,though I prefer u can change it into a diff pattern but not circle lol Did it
   
   example

   
4. 00:19:571 (4) - if u want to keep the same ds between (3,4),i suggest that put (4) at x:44 y:92 or u may let it overlap to (2)slider's end for the purpose of tidy Fixed while fixing blankets.
5. 00:20:368 (4) -
   try to place in this way ,it looks more pertty

   
   Fixed
6. 00:20:847 (6) - didn't wrap (5) properly Fixed
7. 00:25:475 (4,5) - suggest change it into slider Plays out nicer, fixed.
8. 00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) -
   maybe it look better...

   
9. 00:27:868 (2,3) - Ctrl G for rhythm Changed while fixing blankets.
10. 00:33:214 (9,1) - be careful for the different ds cause by sv change ,(9,1)were not having the same ds with those stream now Didn't notice that, fixed.
11. 00:37:762 (1) - try to hv a little curve for this slider Fixed while fixing blankets.
12. 00:40:315 (4,5) - 00:39:039 (3,4) - overmap I think this is ok as of now, but will change it if more modders mention it.
13. 00:43:507 (1) - this slider really strange Fixed. Made it as just a simple curve.
14. 00:43:507 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i suggest that this part may keep ds x1.0 unchange probably Nah, the song itself is getting bit quieter; SV of .75 fits IMO
15. 00:48:613 (1,2,1) - misleading between (2,1) Fixed.
16. 00:50:528 (4,5,1,2) -
    suggestion

    
    It seems ok to have a small jump here as the instruments enter again, fixed.
17. 00:54:198 (1) - del NC? Opps, miss-clicked here. Fixed.
18. 01:01:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think these jumps were to sudden,maybe u may increase ds note by note and (3,4,5,6) should be a group of larger jump than (1,2) Fixed.
19. 01:03:294 (1) - slider would extend to 01:03:613 - Following the vocals here.
20. 01:03:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
    01:04:411 (3) - it seems doesn't fit into music,try this

    
    Good point. Fixed.
21. 01:06:964 (5,1) - suddenly a quick move? Fixed.
22. 01:09:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:10:475 (6,7,1) - 01:14:305 (3,1) - this kind of flow seems to be bad Fixed. Although I didn't change the last pattern.
23. 01:09:837 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) -
    flow in a straight line always be boring,what i am saying is:

    
    Fixed above ^^
24. 01:13:985 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - messy Changed the pattern.
25. 01:17:177 (1,2,3) - 01:18:294 (2,3,4) - 01:24:517 (1,2,3,4) -
    straight line again

    I think that 01:18:294 (2,3,4) is fine. Others all changed.
26. 01:18:613 (4,5) - a sudden jumps for ? Fixed.

[Hard]

2. pls check all of the blanket Did it
3. mostly flow problem,those didn't mention any reseon below which I think flows were bad
4. I do think 00:56:911 (2) - 01:16:539 (3) - 01:21:645 (6) - were following the vocal to much Except the first one, all changed.
5. 00:11:751 (6) - this overlap was not good Fixed.
6. 00:14:943 (7,8,1) - I think this flow is fine.
7. 00:21:007 (3,4,5,6) - Fixed.
8. 00:25:156 (7,8,1,2) - Same reason like 00:14:943 (7,8,1)
9. 00:27:709 (7,8,1,2) -
10. 00:33:454 (1,2,3,4) - copy 00:34:730 (2,3) - is better Kinda fixed it. Changed (4) into 3/4 slider with a repeat.
11. 00:38:241 (7,1,2,3) - too much subject in the same place in this 1 second Considering the fact that this is a Hard difficulty, I think this is fine.
12. 00:40:954 (1,2,3,4) - straight line,this flow usually appears in "very"old maps....=_=(tm1209 said :he usually finds this flow in djpop's maps ) O.O fixed.
13. 00:54:198 (2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm feels strange ,00:54:996 - missing note Changed the whole pattern into some sliders, therefore no note was added at 00:54:996.
14. 01:06:166 (3,4,5) - 01:11:592 (1,2,3) - straight line Fixed I guess.
15. 01:07:124 (1,2,3,4) - Going in a triangle flow should be fine.

[NM]

1. 00:12:868 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:23:081 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:613 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm may follow some vocal unless it will be a little boring,now it only match the drum but nothing else The thing is, I like to follow the instruments in the background for easy and normal. Mainly due to the fact that most of them lands on white tick, but also the hitsounding will be pretty nice, considering the drum in the background.

[EZ]

1. 00:02:017 (4) - change to slider, end at 00:02:177 -
2. 00:17:975 (1) - change to shape to blanket (2) Fixed.
3. 00:28:188 (1,2,3) - blanket pls Fixed.
4. 00:34:571 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:124 (3) - ^
6. 00:39:677 (1) - ^
7. 00:41:592 (2) - ^
8. 00:42:868 (5) - ^
9. 00:49:571 (3) - yaa....etc,lots of slider didn't blanket so i don't mention anymore below... If you meant to FIX this blankets, I surely did.
10. 01:02:337 (4) - change to slider, end at 01:02:496 - Same thing like above. Actually I refrain from using 1/2 sliders before kiai, because it is not like a climax of a song.
11. 01:11:592 (2,3,4) - Sorry, but the flow is bit... weirder. :/
    try this

    

The biggest problem was the flow when u placing notes,use less and less straight flow,work hard on and improve it.
Not only using lots of straight slider,imo straight is difficult for me to make a gd flow,curve slider makes flow better (for me).
I can't help lots in EZ and NM ,I am really weak at it ,sorry It is ok, good mod anyways.
You may take a look at NoDap's version and learn some from his map. Surely will look at it, I didn't even knew there was No Dap's version :C

That's all, at last ,pls reply which line of mods do accept or don't ,this really useful for improve my modding skill ;u;~
GL

Yuii- wrote:

Hi, hi! Hi!

Mod requested in Tess' + Yuii's Queue

General

1. Stretch out the first Kiai up to 01:13:826 -
2. Stretch out the second Kiai up to 01:27:230 - Few others mentioned this through PM, so fixed.

Remove the following green lines as they appear to be unnecessary:

1. 00:12:230 - Was removed earlier.
2. 00:44:624 - This is to bring back the volume to the optimal level after that 5% volume green line.
3. 00:59:544 - Fixed.
4. 01:02:735 - ^^
5. 01:03:134 - ^^

I will also recommend you to give a re-check into the Easy and Hard diff since they seem to be the ones with the most problems.

Easy

General

Be careful with short multiple-repeat sliders. As they are very short, players of this level are not able to read when the slider will end. Therefore, the patterns involving them need to have simple, easily readable placement, that doesn't involve going back over the slidertrack, stacking or anything similar.

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:42:549 (4,5) - I see this part as something "unwanted" for an Easy diff. Replace it for a slider or just leave (5) as a blanket. Made it into a single slider.
2. 00:53:081 (3,4) - Replace it for a slider. Fixed. Good point.
3. 01:06:485 (1,2) - ^ Again, good point. Fixed.
   
   
4. 01:08:400 (1) - This could be good for a Normal diff, but not for this one. Replace it for a circle. Fixed.
5. 01:18:613 (3) - ^Fixed.

Readability Issues

Additionally, there are some tiny spacing errors in this difficulty, sometimes caused by stacking, that make objects touch each other slightly although they are not supposed to, which should be fixed to avoid confusion and to make the map more polished.

Normal

General

OD -1
HP -1

Or at least -0.5. "5,0" may be quite unreasonable for a Normal diff. Fixed them.

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:19:890 (4) - This slider should finish at 00:20:049 - as there is where the vocal finishes. Fixed. Piyoko_9796 ^^ has mentioned about this too.
   
   
2. 00:20:368 - Fix blanket. Preferably add a circle.
   00:37:922 - Same. However, I don't know how you could amend this part. Erm... There is no object in this time sections?
   
   
3. 00:30:103 - ^! I strongly recommend you to replace this for a slider from that point up to 00:30:262 - Fixed.
   
   
4. 00:30:581 (1) - This slider appears to last for a very long period, and, in my opinion, can be improved. Try a different way of fixing it. I thought about this, but I think it is fine as the way it is. Will change if more people mention that this is too long.
5. 01:03:773 (3) - Finish it at 01:04:092 - so you can then add a circle at 01:04:251 - Fixed.
   
   
   The following blankets can be fixed with a circle, if you are going to reject the following objects, please, explain why.
6. 00:48:932 - Add circle! It actually feels lot more better now. Fixed.
7. 00:54:996 - ^ Fixed.
8. 00:55:634 - ^ ^^
9. 01:01:858 - ^ Fixed.
   
   
10. 01:09:517 - 01:12:390 - That section is really bad, I recommend a remap of that part. As a modder / player I don't know what are you mapping, you are not following any specific thing, not the vocals nor the beats. It is pretty hard to say in my case... But I am trying to use lots of 1/1 sliders, just to be tidy. If I would be following the vocals, the flow would be very weird. If I would follow something else in the song, well... I did try it, and it is pretty weird, just like some old maps somehow (just my opinion). I'll see what I can do with these.
    
    
11. 01:17:177 - Something's missing here. You can either place a circle or move 01:17:337 (2) - Hmm... Can't really hear anything in the background itself, but I did add it, because it sounds pretty nice.
    
    
12. 01:24:517 (1,2) - Come on, you can do this! Add more spacing between these sliders. Fixed. Made sure these won't overlap each other.

Hard

General

To be honest, this is probably a very hard difficulty to judge. Firstly, because isn't well mapped at all. There's a lot of issues throughout the entire map: slow slider velocity, unnecessary blankets, extremely long sliders, etc. See below for examples.

OD -1 ("7,0" may be quite difficult for a Hard). Fixed.

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:14:145 (6) - This slider is really long, players might get bored at this part. Why do not try with my suggestion explained below? It would ensure that the gameplay remains fun while still fitting the song. I'm not including the fact that is really slow. Replace this thing for the following pattern: 00:14:145 - circle // 00:14:305 - slider 00:14:464 - reverse arrow there 00:14:624 - finish there // 00:14:783 - circle.
2. 00:20:368 (2) - Same happens with this one. Try finishing it at 00:20:688 - and then keep on with another thing. The current placement seems to be quite bad.
3. 00:30:581 (3) -
4. 00:32:017 (5) - For all above suggestions. I declined it, because I am trying to follow the beat here. The slider isn't that long after all, although this slider and the previous ((3)) slider I may consider to change it.
5. 00:33:932 (4) - This slider isn't about being long or short, just that it doesn't fit with the music at all. Fixed at the mod before this.
6. 01:03:773 (1) - This slider appears to be really long, like, it should definitely end way before. In my opinion, the best alternative way for this would be to end it at 01:03:932 - and then adding a circle at 01:04:092 - I'll think about this. I don't prefer to place a circle in a blue tick... so this is what it have become.
   
   
7. 00:44:464 (2) - Place this circles between the sliders. Will not make a forced jump to place it between the sliders.
   
   
8. 00:55:156 (5) - This one has nothing to do here. Try replacing it for a slider from 00:54:996 - to that point, maybe it sounds better than the actual one. Fixed in the above mod.
   
   
9. 01:09:198 - 01:09:358 - Two beats right here! Why don't you try adding a slider? Added it in.

Hitsounding

1. 01:25:475 (1) - Clap!Doesn't seem really necessary. I can't hear the snare in the background.

Readability Issues

1. 01:13:347 (3) - Unnecessary stack. Fixed.

Insane

General

The Slider Velocity in this difficulty is way too low, causing several problems. Increased by .1x

Rhythm and Gameplay

1. 00:01:379 (5) - I don't strongly recommend you to do a slider like this one without constant sound. Replace it for a normal one. This is to express the instrument in this part (don't know what it is called...).
   
   
2. 00:06:326 (1) - Try placing this slider under 00:05:688 (3) - so everything will look more tidy.
   
   
3. 00:34:172 (4,4,4) - You could replace these 1/4 sliders for 2 sliders, because they actually feel quite uncomfortable. Also, you can try to finish 00:33:932 (3) - in the red tick (following vocals). This will also play better as people won't get many 100s, which, while testplaying I got 100 in this part
   I think these patterns are fine, because I am following the drum. I'll change if few more people comment on it.
   
4. 00:40:315 (4,5) - Try making one long slider here, instead. These sliders don't sound that good as there's no constant beat to place them. It'd be nice if you start it at 00:40:315 - then you place the return at 00:40:634 - (mainly because there's where the beat is) and then finish it at 00:40:954 -
   Same happens with 00:39:039 (3,4) - there's no constant beat, so it sounds really unpolished. For this part, I thought on something different, check it out: http://puu.sh/i1EMg/98ed1f580e.jpg Good point Fixed.
   
   
5. 00:53:081 (4) - In order to fix the unnecessary blanket formed before 00:53:720 (1) - I will ask you to finish this slider one tick before (blue) and then adding a new slider from 00:53:400 - to 00:53:560 - you can also add Clap in the new one! Fixed
   
   
6. 01:03:294 (1) - It'd look nicer if you make the slider velocity go slower only for this slider, it'll follow the actualy rhythm of this part. Good point again, Fixed.
   
   
7. 01:13:267 (5) - I don't see why you mapped this. Unnecessary triplet. Fixed.
   
   
8. 01:24:517 (1,2,3,4) - I would like you to follow the following recommendation, as the actual pattern is quite boring and it doesn't fit at all with the section before and after this one. With this, I mean that you should try a "jumpy" part as well: http://puu.sh/i1Gh7/02ffa84af5.jpgFixed. good point again

Overdone / Unreasonable Spacing

Remember that jumps or higher spacings stress the note the player jumps to. If the spacing of a map changes there has to be a reason for that in the music. When a note in the music doesn't have a lot of emphasis, there shouldn't be a huge jump leading to it.

1. 00:49:571 (3,4) - This jump is really annoying, especially if you are playing the map with HR. Try to search for an alternative way of mapping this section. Well... I'm not a fan of HR... moved (4) to the right. Hope this works.
   
   
2. 01:18:613 (4,5) - This seems to be a really forced jump. In order to avoid that, I re-placed everything and made a pattern, so it also plays better. 01:18:294 (2) - at x224 y232 // 01:18:454 (3) - x168 y132 // 01:18:613 (4) - x232 y36 // 01:18:773 (5) - x308 y132 // (6) leave it like that. Fixed.

Hitsounding

1. 00:02:177 (2) - Finish here to give more emphasis to this part. Rather go with clap, I don't want to follow the hi-hat(am I wrong?) in the background.
   
   
2. 00:32:735 (3,5,7,9) - No beat on the ones mentioned. Remove Clap. Sounds more neat. Fixed.
   
   
3. 00:50:688 (5) - Clap here, please! Fixed.
   
   
4. 01:27:150 (7) - Whistle + 01:27:230 (8) - Clap Rather just go with hit-normal here.(kick)

Readability Issues

1. 01:14:624 (1,2,3) - This overlap is quite hard to read, especially with the Default skin. Try Ctrl+H'ing it. Fixed it in a different way.

Chamue wrote:

General

SPOILER

Offset I think is better to put 111 I took this mp3 from Sekai-nyan's map. So yea, no change
In tags you can add to OP Opening = OP, so no change.

Easy

SPOILER

00:00:430 (2) - the last point of the slider is put on x:232 y:200 Fixed.
00:02:504 (1) the midpoint of the slider put it on the x:128 y:112 and the last point on the x:188 y:84 Fixed.
00:03:940 (4) - to rotate at -40 degrees Looks better, fixed.
00:08:408 (2) - move on x:328 y:320
00:09:047 (3) - move on x:164 y:344
00:09:685 (4) - move on x:188 y:200 Fixed everything above.
00:17:025 (4) - the last point to put on x:96 y:96 Fixed.
00:18:621 (2) - copy 00:17:983 (1),paste,ctrl+J ctrl+H ctrl+G put on x:280 y:120 Fixed.
00:20:536 (1) - the midpoint on x:344 y:228,the last point on x:336 y:200 Fixed.
01:07:132 (3) - move so that 01:05:855 (4) does not overlap Fixed.
01:16:068 (1) - slightly to the left Fixed.
01:25:004 (4) - better to add a slider or can do so: Fixed like the picture.

Normal

SPOILER

00:03:932 (3) - ctrl+H and put in place Turn is going to be too sharp, not fixed.
00:13:515 (2) - ctrl+J and put in place Again, I'll have to make sharp turn after this slider if I do that, but maybe I'll change it if more people mention it.
00:38:081 - I think it is better to put a circle,but you could leave that out Not adding it here, because no beats are on this tick, rather they are on the blue tick, and I don't want that to happen in normal.
01:03:294 (1,2) - better to put the slider,but you could leave that out Since other difficulties uses slider, fixed.

Hard

SPOILER

Better set CZ 3.5 because 4 is more appropriate for the Insane True that, but it is also fine for Hard, as this song's BPM is pretty high.
00:05:528 (3) - copy 00:05:049 (2),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J and put it in the same place Fixed.
00:08:879 (6,7) - slightly to the right I think this is fine, as I checked the whole Hard previously on the mod before this.
00:13:985 (5,6) - 5 on 00:14:783,and 6 on 00:13:985 If that happens, I won't be able to place a clap hitsound in the available upbeat, resulting in a weird hitsounding pattern.
00:16:539 (5,6) - ^ also Same reason. ^^
00:23:560 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the distance between the notes a bit more to not overlap Fixed I guess?
00:33:932 (4) is to make the slider as 00:35:209 (3) Don't want it to be overlapping with (1), so didn't change.
00:37:124 (4) - to reduce to the blue tick Should have seen this previously fixed.
00:54:837 (4,5,6) - make something like: Fixed.

01:05:049 (4,1) - make as with 00:13:985 (5,6) Same reason.
01:05:688 (2,3) - delete 3 and make in 2 slider reverse Didn't make changes above, so no changes.
01:24:996 (3) - copy 01:24:517 (1),paste,ctrl+H,ctrl+J reverse,put on x:168 y:200 Gonna keep it the way like it is right now.

Insane

SPOILER

00:01:858 (7) - better to put a circle This is already a circle though...
00:06:326 (1) - to put in place 00:05:688 (3) Fixed in a mod before this.
00:24:837 (9,1,2) - ctrl+G Nice flow, fixed.
00:34:172 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:35:448 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:36:725 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:37:363 (2) - ^ Fixed.
00:41:831 (5) - ^ Fixed.
00:50:847 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
00:52:762 (2,3) - ^ I think this jump would be pointless. Not fixed.
00:55:794 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:09:677 (2,3) - ^ Wouldn't want to make a mini jump here.
01:11:113 (2) - ^ ^^
01:11:751 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
01:13:267 (5) - remove A slider here is fine, as there is some kind of a prolonged sound.
01:18:613 (4,5) - ctrl+G Became a opposite Z pattern, I like that. Fixed.[/color]
01:19:092 (1) - ^ Now that I look at it, there is a pitch change in the vocals. Should have realized this earlier and made a jump... Fixed.

Good Luck!~

XiMerx wrote:

Hello Scavenger! Hey there~
and dude yer blankets aint nice so imma help u True, I tried and failed xD

[Insane]
00:05:049 (1) - Blanket not perfect. Move second point to 328,76 and third point to 240,84 and move 00:05:528 (2) - to 292,168 to perfect the blanket. Note that the DS is screwed up so you need to move the notes after them.
00:06:326 (1) - Move second point to 136,232 and third point to 100,284 then move 00:06:805 (2,3) - to 192,312. Then 00:06:964 (3) - 2nd point to 252,312 and 3rd point to 312,232.
00:07:443 (4) - Stack with 1 again (after fixing blanket) Fixed everything

and shit, you have tons of bad blankets. ill teach u
http://puu.sh/ifsBq/5f00332e29.jpg
One of the blankets you tried to make, but it isn't good. You can check using the approach circle, and it should be something like this:
http://puu.sh/ifsEg/0e3ada85b1.jpg
See how the blanket changed? The approach circle must be perfectly alligned with the slider line. It must have equal gap between the approach circle... you know what I mean. Noted

If you need help find me in game or forum-PM. No kudosu for this If you say so... ok.
And I will do a recheck once everything is not ugly.

walaowey wrote:

Hi o/

Here is my diff..Finished xD

My diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Soul.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 63294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Absolute Soul
TitleUnicode:Absolute Soul
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:[Sc4v4ng3r]
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:アブソリュート・デュオ
Tags:Absolute duo Opening tv_size
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Good luck with that xD

XiMerx wrote:

Did you actually change all the blankets? Anyways I'll try to mod tomorrow, will edit this.

1. 00:00:422 (3,5,6) - 3 has a loud cymbal sound (kinda) as well as (5). Since both of them, in terms of instruments, are the same, I suggest you use sliders for both. I recommend switching (5,6) so (5) becomes a slider.
2. 00:04:411 (4) - Here you didn't put emphasis on it, means no difference in DS. However, 00:07:603 (1) - here you did. I suggest emphasising both or not.
3. 00:24:358 (1,2) - I heard "money" as the vocal... but what are these sliders trying to follow?
4. 00:58:507 (4) - I think you should stack with 00:58:666 (1) - since you did it for the rest.
   "fu" "ka"- slider end
   "ta" "ka"- stack
   "ri" "ra"- 1/1 slider
   (lyrics btw, you decided to stack them because consistency, but this you didn't)
   
5. 01:03:294 (8) - NC because there's no point continuing since you stacked it and there isn't any follow points.
6. 00:55:475 (3) - You emphasised on it but not 00:56:273 (1) -

1. 00:10:954 (6,7,8) - Weird if you emphasise like that... idk what you should change to
2. 00:17:496 (3) - I think its better to just flow DS with (4,5,6), not much to emphasise on (4) and created a weird jump
3. 00:18:613 (2,3) - Fix blanket? o.o (I believe you know how)
4. 00:19:890 (1,2,3) - Not a jump, so the rhythm is weird because they flow but the vocal doesn't match. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/ijnOi/58fcc96f2f.jpg
5. 00:24:997 (1,2,3,4) - However, you're trying to follow instruments, and they sound the same. So I recommend just placing them at consistent DS and not making a jump from 2>3
6. 00:26:751 (3) - Fix blanket?...
7. 00:28:826 (3,4,5) - ^
8. 00:54:358 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:56:113 (2,1) - ^
10. 00:30:262 (6) - I believe... stacking mistake?
11. 00:42:230 (1,2) - Why not just put repeated slider at 1.5x??
12. 01:03:294 (1) - I see you were trying to follow the blank sound. Didn't hear that lolll vocal2stronk
13. 01:16:539 (1) - Wow. Suzuki Konomi sang really hard this time, and you placed a circle. I recommend this rhythm from 01:16:539 to 01:17:656 http://puu.sh/ijoaL/c95819d3f6.jpg (Yellow slider is the start)
14. 01:18:294 (2,3,4,5) - I recommend replacing this with 2 sliders so that the slider end emphasised on the strong vocal.
15. 01:23:081 (1,2) - (3,4,5) being a triangle and you placed (1,2) out of nowhere. I recommend placing them in the middle of the triangle or be more badass and move (1,2) to be equidistant to (3,4,5), by any chance you understand that. I suck at placing stuffs in a triangle so yea :^)

XiMerx wrote:

Hi Scavenger again. Not gonna edit lol

[walao weeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy]
lol fc'd first try

1. 00:00:422 (3,5,6) - 3 has a loud cymbal sound (kinda) as well as (5). Since both of them, in terms of instruments, are the same, I suggest you use sliders for both. I recommend switching (5,6) so (5) becomes a slider.
2. 00:04:411 (4) - Here you didn't put emphasis on it, means no difference in DS. However, 00:07:603 (1) - here you did. I suggest emphasising both or not.
3. 00:24:358 (1,2) - I heard "money" as the vocal... but what are these sliders trying to follow?
4. 00:58:507 (4) - I think you should stack with 00:58:666 (1) - since you did it for the rest.
   "fu" "ka"- slider end
   "ta" "ka"- stack
   "ri" "ra"- 1/1 slider
   (lyrics btw, you decided to stack them because consistency, but this you didn't)
   
5. 01:03:294 (8) - NC because there's no point continuing since you stacked it and there isn't any follow points.
6. 00:55:475 (3) - You emphasised on it but not 00:56:273 (1) -

hmm... jumps flow well but idk what are they following

[Insane]

1. 00:10:954 (6,7,8) - Weird if you emphasise like that... idk what you should change to Removed jump and made into one 1/2 slider and a circle.
2. 00:17:496 (3) - I think its better to just flow DS with (4,5,6), not much to emphasise on (4) and created a weird jump Fixed like what you said, it plays out much better.
3. 00:18:613 (2,3) - Fix blanket? o.o (I believe you know how) Didn't notice this due to my poor eyesight fixed.
4. 00:19:890 (1,2,3) - Not a jump, so the rhythm is weird because they flow but the vocal doesn't match. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/ijnOi/58fcc96f2f.jpg Fixed like what you said.
5. 00:24:997 (1,2,3,4) - However, you're trying to follow instruments, and they sound the same. So I recommend just placing them at consistent DS and not making a jump from 2>3 Fixed again.
6. 00:26:751 (3) - Fix blanket?... Again, my eyesight deceived me.
7. 00:28:826 (3,4,5) - ^ I honestly don't know what happened to this lol
8. 00:54:358 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:56:113 (2,1) - ^ Above and this fixed.
10. 00:30:262 (6) - I believe... stacking mistake? Fixed when fixing blanket up there.
11. 00:42:230 (1,2) - Why not just put repeated slider at 1.5x?? I disagree here. Instrument isn't strong enough here, so I think 1.5x repeated slider won't fit with the song and the vocal.
12. 01:03:294 (1) - I see you were trying to follow the blank sound. Didn't hear that lolll vocal2stronk Honestly, I don't know what I was thinking here. Fixed.
13. 01:16:539 (1) - Wow. Suzuki Konomi sang really hard this time, and you placed a circle. I recommend this rhythm from 01:16:539 to 01:17:656 http://puu.sh/ijoaL/c95819d3f6.jpg (Yellow slider is the start) Fixed. Again the same reason like above.
14. 01:18:294 (2,3,4,5) - I recommend replacing this with 2 sliders so that the slider end emphasised on the strong vocal. Keeping this for now, but if more people comment on it I will definetely change it.
15. 01:23:081 (1,2) - (3,4,5) being a triangle and you placed (1,2) out of nowhere. I recommend placing them in the middle of the triangle or be more badass and move (1,2) to be equidistant to (3,4,5), by any chance you understand that. I suck at placing stuffs in a triangle so yea :^) illuminati confirmed oh god Fixed like what you said, it looks really nice.

That's it I guess. Suck at modding other diffs but I think you should roam through Easy-Hard to find some blankets errors. Will see again, I need my eyesight to not deceive me once more.
GL
and kudosu for this Of course

1. You need to recheck all of them whether they are in DS or not. ohh if the DS is 1.1x, then it must be 1.1x
2. 00:02:017 (4) - better fix where you put. i checked it (DS). don't forget with this one 00:02:496 (1) -
3. 00:03:932 (3) - DS check
4. 00:07:603 (1) - ^
5. 00:10:156 (1) - ^
6. 00:11:432 (3) - ^
7. 00:21:645 (1) - ^
8. 00:37:124 (3) - i think you should fix the blanket with the circle properly
9. 00:43:507 (1) - DS check
10. 00:51:166 (1) - spot that the border is off screen
11. 00:58:347 (1) - DS check
12. 01:02:017 (3) - the end should be 01:02:656
13. 01:06:326 (1) - DS check
14. 01:15:262 (3) - ^
15. 01:19:092 (1) - ^
16. 01:20:368 (3) - ^
17. 01:21:645 (1) - ^
18. 01:23:081 (2) - ^
19. 01:25:315 (2) - bad idea for newbie players

1. 00:12:868 (1) - don't put it there. remap this one, seriously. it supposed to be DS

1. Slow parts should add whistle since there is a piano note there
2. 00:54:358 - this part needs to add clap for that

1. 00:01:379 (5) - really? i don't think 1/8 is fitable
2. 00:43:789 to 00:44:464 - seriously? increase the volume
3. The slow parts needs to add a whistle for that
4. 00:54:358 - this part needs to add clap for that
5. 01:13:985 (1) - forgot about finish?

1. 00:01:379 (1) - mind adding a drum hitsound?
2. 00:02:017 (2) - remove finish
3. 00:02:177 (3) - clap
4. 00:15:262 (8,1) - clearly, finish is not fitable
5. 00:17:975 (1) - ^
6. 00:20:209 (6) - ^ (tail)
7. 00:25:634 (1) - ^
8. 00:28:188 (1) - ^
9. 00:40:954 (1) - ^

XiMerx wrote:

Hi Scavenger again. Not gonna edit lol

[walao weeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy]
lol fc'd first try

1. 00:00:422 (3,5,6) - 3 has a loud cymbal sound (kinda) as well as (5). Since both of them, in terms of instruments, are the same, I suggest you use sliders for both. I recommend switching (5,6) so (5) becomes a slider. fixed
2. 00:04:411 (4) - Here you didn't put emphasis on it, means no difference in DS. However, 00:07:603 (1) - here you did. I suggest emphasising both or not. the beat in 00:04:411 is not that strong.. 00:07:603 is a lot stronger..so I emphasizes on it. but if more modders tell me to change it..i will
3. 00:24:358 (1,2) - I heard "money" as the vocal... but what are these sliders trying to follow? if u slow down the song..u will hear 2 strong beats here..1 in 00:24:358(1) and another 1 in 00:24:358(2) .. actually this strong beats is in 00:26:911 but its a little softer than in (1,2) so i didnt emphasize them
4. 00:58:507 (4) - I think you should stack with 00:58:666 (1) - since you did it for the rest. Yes , I try to stack them now..
   "fu" "ka"- slider end
   "ta" "ka"- stack
   "ri" "ra"- 1/1 slider
   (lyrics btw, you decided to stack them because consistency, but this you didn't)
   
5. 01:03:294 (8) - NC because there's no point continuing since you stacked it and there isn't any follow points. Fixed
6. 00:55:475 (3) - You emphasised on it but not 00:56:273 (1) fixed -

hmm... jumps flow well but idk what are they following iimo, its fine as long as u enjoy it :3

and kudosu for this

-Hakurei- wrote:

shall we?

[Walao's Insane]

1. 00:01:379 (1) - mind adding a drum hitsound?
2. 00:02:017 (2) - remove finish
3. 00:02:177 (3) - clap
4. 00:15:262 (8,1) - clearly, finish is not fitable
5. 00:17:975 (1) - ^
6. 00:20:209 (6) - ^ (tail)
7. 00:25:634 (1) - ^
8. 00:28:188 (1) - ^
9. 00:40:954 (1) - ^ Fixed all of them, Sorry i'm not that good with hitsounding xD

check your maps for hitsound for a while. you need to do something on that. GL!

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-Hakurei- wrote:

shall we?

[Easy]

1. You need to recheck all of them whether they are in DS or not. ohh if the DS is 1.1x, then it must be 1.1x Sorry :/ I guess I forgotten to fix all DS after fixing blankets...
2. 00:02:017 (4) - better fix where you put. i checked it (DS). don't forget with this one 00:02:496 (1) -
3. 00:03:932 (3) - DS check
4. 00:07:603 (1) - ^
5. 00:10:156 (1) - ^
6. 00:11:432 (3) - ^
7. 00:21:645 (1) - ^ All fixed.
8. 00:37:124 (3) - i think you should fix the blanket with the circle properly Never noticed this, fixed.
9. 00:43:507 (1) - DS check Fixed.
10. 00:51:166 (1) - spot that the border is off screen Fixed.
11. 00:58:347 (1) - DS check Fixed
12. 01:02:017 (3) - the end should be 01:02:656 I didn't feel that is right, so instead ended it on 01:02:496 and added finish there.
13. 01:06:326 (1) - DS check
14. 01:15:262 (3) - ^
15. 01:19:092 (1) - ^
16. 01:20:368 (3) - ^
17. 01:21:645 (1) - ^
18. 01:23:081 (2) - ^ All fixed.
19. 01:25:315 (2) - bad idea for newbie players Deleted.

[Normal]

1. 00:12:868 (1) - don't put it there. remap this one, seriously. it supposed to be DS Fixed.

[Hard]

1. Slow parts should add whistle since there is a piano note there Originally soft-whistle wasn't in the beatmap; it was only here after walaowey added his hitsound in. So I think this is fine.
2. 00:54:358 - this part needs to add clap for that For now I won't add it in, but if more people comment on this I will.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:379 (5) - really? i don't think 1/8 is fitable If you hear carefully, there is that guitar sound matching 1/8 snap.
2. 00:43:789 to 00:44:464 - seriously? increase the volume First, there is only that ongoing vocals, so we are not losing anything even if the volume is 5%. At 00:44:464, there is only vocal which sounds here, but I will change the volume here if more people comment on this.
3. The slow parts needs to add a whistle for that Same reason like Hard.
4. 00:54:358 - this part needs to add clap for that Same reason like Hard.
5. 01:13:985 (1) - forgot about finish? Oh yes I sure did, fixed.

check your maps for hitsound for a while. you need to do something on that. GL!

1. 00:41:831 (6) - Ctrl+G for better aesthetics.
   
   
2. 01:03:294 (1) - Replace this for a circle as it's NOT a constant sound. This is only a way of emphasising the beat at 01:03:294 - and the low sound of the vocal. If you want to map the WHOLE vocal, finish it at 01:03:613 - however it will NOT be the same, as there's nothing to map right there.

Yuii- wrote:

Hi, Scavenger! Hello again

NO KUDOS ok... if you say so.

Recommendation on Insane:

1. 00:41:831 (6) - Ctrl+G for better aesthetics. I like this flow, it plays out much better and looks really nice changed.
   
   
2. 01:03:294 (1) - Replace this for a circle as it's NOT a constant sound. This is only a way of emphasising the beat at 01:03:294 - and the low sound of the vocal. If you want to map the WHOLE vocal, finish it at 01:03:613 - however it will NOT be the same, as there's nothing to map right there. I disagree here. I am trying to map this slider according to the lyrics, but it also seems like I am trying to map it to the vocals at the same time. For now keeping it because it looks fine to me, but surely will change it if more people comment on this.

Try thinking of these 2 minor things.

Good luck!

1. 00:01:379 (1,2) - Kind of an awkward gap here since it's 1/1... You could add a circle to 00:01:858 - . maybe stacking it on 2?
2. 00:14:464 (3,4,5) - I know you borrow some of your mapping style from mine, so I can mention this. Your spacing here isn't reflective of the song's emphasis. Note that the drums are emphasized on 3 and 5 (basically white ticks) but you have a large jump from 3>4. 4 lands on a red tick that isn't emphasized so the jump doesn't reflect the music.
3. 00:14:783 (5,6,7) - Same here. Note the jump to 6, even though it's not emphasized in the music.
4. 00:15:741 (2,3) - ^ Here you could put a jump for emphasis.
5. 00:28:188 (1,4) - Overlaps like this aren't good for readability:P. You can already see 4 even before Slider 1 finishes due to the AR (and i wouldn't recommend increasing AR to solve this problem lol).
6. 00:30:103 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern has the same spacing, but there is considerably more emphasis onto 1 based on the vocals of this song. Therefore a larger jump would fit much better.
7. 00:34:571 (1) - Would be nice if you could emphasize these notes too. Jump or something? They're definitely emphasized by the percussion.
8. 00:35:847 (1) - ^
9. 00:39:358 (5,6,1) - Mentioned earlier about spacing. right now 6 is being emphasized by the jump.

1. 00:02:975 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm better. Sliders on red ticks are quite weak.
2. 00:17:017 (2) - Would be better if you split this slider into a 1/2 slider and mapped 00:17:337 - to a circle to map the drums.
3. 00:23:241 (4,5,6) - This flows rather poorly from 5>6. Weird leftward motion before entering 6.
4. 00:24:198 (7,9) - Maybe don't overlap
5. 00:37:762 (1,1) - No jump? Jump would emphasize the note nicely.
6. 00:47:017 (1,2) - This is a calm section 1/2 slider is better.
7. 00:55:315 (5,1) - Idk about this overlap too.
8. 01:05:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This NC pattern seems irregular. Please double check.
9. 01:08:241 (3,4,5) - This kind over overlap doesn't really work honestly... Firstly, the flow from 01:07:603 (1,2,3) - could be improved. You could have these sliders overlap like 50% and move circularly instead.
   
   Better flow too and much more readable

   
10. 01:25:475 (4) - 1/2 slider instead? The jump sequence begins at 01:25:794 - . And you could probably start the NC there too for better clarity.

1. 00:05:528 (3,4) - Try using 2 1/2 sliders instead. better rhythm since now 00:05:847 - is clickable.

1. 00:10:954 (2) - Could probably make this a 1/2 slider instead. It fits anyways
2. 00:13:507 (2,4) - Are these overlaps intentional? they look weird honestly . Like the overlap serves no purpose.
3. 00:20:368 (1,2,3) - This flow is really odd. A beginner would gravitate towards circle 3 because that follows the counter-clockwise flow of this pattern. breaking flow isn't recommend on lower diffs anyways.
4. 00:24:358 (3,4,1) - Ehh overlaps This creates really poor readability...
5. 00:27:549 (5,2) - Seemingly random overlaps etc... They just make the map seem less polished .
6. 00:33:613 (1,2,3) - Here too, the flow is very counter-intuititive because you could naturally go from 1>3 because of the flow + the curve. But players are forced to go into 2 first then 3 which creates really weird motions. Not suitable for Normal imo...

1. 00:04:890 (4,1) - Easy should use 1/1 rhythm honestly. I would just delete 4.
2. 00:09:996 (4,1) - ^
3. 00:10:156 (1,2) - This flows weird too because players play through slider 1 and then have to awkwardly go back on their previous motion to catch slider 2. It's not a natural flow.
4. 00:17:975 (1,2,3) - Same as Normal, You tend to want to go from 1>3 because of the flow + direction.

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From Modding Queues

Easy

※It is targeted for all "Easy - Insane" about hitsounds.
00:07:603 (1) - I hear "cymbals sound" with a head.Please add "Finish". Added.

00:09:996 (4) - add Whistle. This is an upbeat, added clap instead.

00:35:528 (4,1) - Please clean the blanket.00:35:847 (1) - end point x:196 y:268 Oh didn't saw that, fixed.

00:43:507 ～ 00:51:166 - I think that a sound of the soft of the custom does not match music.A "custom2" is better.When you want to delete the sound of the slider, please use this.http://puu.sh/ioEbm.zip Nah, I think the drum rolls in the sliders are fine as it is right now.

00:53:720 (1,2) - ^. Fixed.

00:57:230 (4,5) - ^.00:57:549 (5) - center point x:400 y:280 and end point x:324 y:300 Fixed in a different manner.

01:15:262 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm.How about this? Yea good point, fixed.


01:21:645 (1) - I hear "cymbals sound" with a head.Please add "Finish". I felt adding finish to the whole slider except the tail sounds better, so did that.

01:24:198 - I hear a strong sound.remove clap.and add Sampleset drum "Finish" Use the playback rate of 50%, you can hear that it is actually snare in the background which is being strong, so no changes.

Normal

00:06:964 (4) - This slider,I think stack 00:05:049 (1) - is more beautiful.When it move, "00:06:326 (3)" may have to move by relations of DS. I don't really want to break the flow here, because there is notes on red ticks continuously which is hard for beginners. Stacking on (1) will break the flow's direction, which I don't really want.

00:37:762 (4) - I think that "three beats" of rhythm matches.But It might be pointed out in BN or QAT. I want to create a bit of a break here for the players. Plus, even if I wanted to change this, this slider can be still snapped even if we use the "four beats" rhythm, because the blue tick perfectly matches that.


00:42:868 (1) - Please clean the stack.x:200 y:260 Don't know why is that slider over there, fixed.

00:45:422 (4,5) - Please clean the blanket. Fixed, I guess?

00:53:081 (1,2) - Please clean the stack. Was fixed when I was rechecking.

Hard

00:17:496 (7) - Please move.x:468 y:312 is better.(stack) Fixed.

00:52:443 (6) - Do you not add it? Added, and made a trap on the notes afterwards.


01:11:592 (1) - Please move.x:244 y:220 is better.(stack) It was the DS problem, fixed.

Insane

00:03:454 (4) - I feel that a flow is bad.Please move.The flow to the next 00:03:932 (5,6,7) improves, too.
Good point, fixed.

00:26:273 (2,3) - The same slider, please.It looks more beautiful. Fixed.

00:27:868 (2,3) - I seem to make a flow forcibly.00:27:868 (2) - please move.x:468 y:268.How about this? When I was fixing the above point, I change the flow of this, it should look nicer, as I stacked the tail of 00:28:028 (3) to the tail of 00:27:230 (4).

00:33:773 (2) - This overlap is not good...please move.x:140 y:156.How about this? Nah, don't wanna make a big jump here, instead moved to x:140 y:204

Walao's Insane

※Only this map has "Widescreen Support". Please exclude a check.
※Because this map is the most difficult, the OD thinks that there may be "8".(Compared with Insane diff)

01:01:698 (2,4,6) - Would you like to open an interval? It's the feeling that is good because it is a excited point.


01:24:198 (5) - I hear a strong sound.remove whistle.and add Sampleset drum "Finish"

The interval between the circles seems narrow overall.I think that you may open it a little more.

Good luck.

monstrata wrote:

[Walao's Insane]

1. 00:01:379 (1,2) - Kind of an awkward gap here since it's 1/1... You could add a circle to 00:01:858 - . maybe stacking it on 2?
2. 00:14:464 (3,4,5) - I know you borrow some of your mapping style from mine, so I can mention this. Your spacing here isn't reflective of the song's emphasis. Note that the drums are emphasized on 3 and 5 (basically white ticks) but you have a large jump from 3>4. 4 lands on a red tick that isn't emphasized so the jump doesn't reflect the music.
3. 00:14:783 (5,6,7) - Same here. Note the jump to 6, even though it's not emphasized in the music.
4. 00:15:741 (2,3) - ^ Here you could put a jump for emphasis.
5. 00:28:188 (1,4) - Overlaps like this aren't good for readability:P. You can already see 4 even before Slider 1 finishes due to the AR (and i wouldn't recommend increasing AR to solve this problem lol).
6. 00:30:103 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern has the same spacing, but there is considerably more emphasis onto 1 based on the vocals of this song. Therefore a larger jump would fit much better.
7. 00:34:571 (1) - Would be nice if you could emphasize these notes too. Jump or something? They're definitely emphasized by the percussion.
8. 00:35:847 (1) - ^
9. 00:39:358 (5,6,1) - Mentioned earlier about spacing. right now 6 is being emphasized by the jump.

Pattern wise, nice job ;o. But I think more control could be put into emphasis and jumps so the strong parts of the song can be better appreciated.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:975 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this rhythm better. Sliders on red ticks are quite weak. Well yea you got the point, but I would not want to make a jump here.
2. 00:17:017 (2) - Would be better if you split this slider into a 1/2 slider and mapped 00:17:337 - to a circle to map the drums. I think it is okay to follow the vocals here, to have a mini-jump based on the vocal changes, and better flow, as the tails are stacked together.
3. 00:23:241 (4,5,6) - This flows rather poorly from 5>6. Weird leftward motion before entering 6. Hmm... I changed (4) to a straight slider, I think that works just fine.[/color]
4. 00:24:198 (7,9) - Maybe don't overlap Didn't see that, fixed.
5. 00:37:762 (1,1) - No jump? Jump would emphasize the note nicely. Added jump, good point.
6. 00:47:017 (1,2) - This is a calm section 1/2 slider is better. Well ok, changed.
7. 00:55:315 (5,1) - Idk about this overlap too. Lol opps didn't see this, fixed.
8. 01:05:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This NC pattern seems irregular. Please double check. Rearranged NCs according to downbeats, but kept the last 3. This was to alert players about the jump incoming.
9. 01:08:241 (3,4,5) - This kind over overlap doesn't really work honestly... Firstly, the flow from 01:07:603 (1,2,3) - could be improved. You could have these sliders overlap like 50% and move circularly instead. Yea good point, fixed. Added some jumps afterwards.
   
   Better flow too and much more readable

   
10. 01:25:475 (4) - 1/2 slider instead? The jump sequence begins at 01:25:794 - . And you could probably start the NC there too for better clarity. I don't think that is necessary. The jump is actually taking place from (1) to (2), not from (4) to (1), so there need not be a 1/2 slider and a circle afterwards to indicate jump.

[Hard]

1. 00:05:528 (3,4) - Try using 2 1/2 sliders instead. better rhythm since now 00:05:847 - is clickable. Well ok, fixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:10:954 (2) - Could probably make this a 1/2 slider instead. It fits anyways Yea fixed.
2. 00:13:507 (2,4) - Are these overlaps intentional? they look weird honestly . Like the overlap serves no purpose. Well before this saw a DS inconsistency here, and fixed this while fixing all DS.
3. 00:20:368 (1,2,3) - This flow is really odd. A beginner would gravitate towards circle 3 because that follows the counter-clockwise flow of this pattern. breaking flow isn't recommend on lower diffs anyways. Well changed into a 1/1 slider, that should be better.
4. 00:24:358 (3,4,1) - Ehh overlaps This creates really poor readability... Fixed while fixing DS
5. 00:27:549 (5,2) - Seemingly random overlaps etc... They just make the map seem less polished . ^^
6. 00:33:613 (1,2,3) - Here too, the flow is very counter-intuititive because you could naturally go from 1>3 because of the flow + the curve. But players are forced to go into 2 first then 3 which creates really weird motions. Not suitable for Normal imo... ^^
   Most of the overlaps are now fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:04:890 (4,1) - Easy should use 1/1 rhythm honestly. I would just delete 4. You have a point, but not necessarily all 1/1 rhythm. You can use 1/2 rhythm also. And honestly, using all 1/1 rhythm is way too boring for me; plus there is a prominent beat on red beats, so why not?
2. 00:09:996 (4,1) - ^ ^^
3. 00:10:156 (1,2) - This flows weird too because players play through slider 1 and then have to awkwardly go back on their previous motion to catch slider 2. It's not a natural flow.
4. 00:17:975 (1,2,3) - Same as Normal, You tend to want to go from 1>3 because of the flow + direction.
   Replaced ALMOST EVERYTHING in Easy, I guess fixed all above other than that?

Tbh problems are recurring, so i'll leave it at this and let you do some self-modding. Mods will only improve your map to a certain degree. The rest is just your own work in remapping, reworking, and improving by yourself.

Good luck Thanks for the mod, now I get how to make flows more natural... I guess?

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey, random mod bcs why not! Yey

[General]

Tags:

Add: Julie, Lilith, Tomoe, Miyabi, Aoi and Tooru to the tags Added.

[Easy]

00:02:496 (1,2) - I believe that this blanket isn't as good as it can be, why not try this so it is more consistent? Was fixed before your mod.

Blanket

00:03:294 (2,3) - Make these the same slider by copy and paste for more consistency. Did it.

00:08:400 (2) - Why not flip it so you can blanket with the previous slider? Flip it horizontally or vertically? Although I think this is alreay a blanket though...

00:09:039 (3,4,1) - I believe better flow can be done here, why not make it like this? Yea did it.

Your arrangement

My arrangement

00:22:283 (2,3) - This overlap isn't very nice, I would possibly try to rearrange it as such to not overlap eachother. Rearranged the pattern and the patterns afterwards.

00:53:720 (1,2) - Make these the same slider for consistency and a more even blanket You got your point, fixed.

00:55:315 (2,3) - Blanket slider 3 with the curve of slider 2 like so: It was already like that, adjusted so that it looks more like a curve of (2).

Blanket

01:13:985 (1,2) - I don't really like the combination here it doesn't look as good as you can make it, try this: Was fixed before your mod.

Sliders

[Normal]

00:12:868 (1,2) - This blanket can be improved by moving the 2nd slider to the left slightly Fixed.

00:23:720 (2,3,4) - You should make these sliders the same, so it has better flow and consistency Well it was the same sliders. Fixed the flow.

00:43:347 (2,1) - The transition here breaks flow I would make it more circular with the previous slider Changed.

Flow

01:15:900 (5,1,2,3,4) - Why do you suddenly use non-curved sliders, I don't understand? First thing, this can improve how the notes will look like significantly, at least to my own eyes. Believe me, at first I used all curved sliders, it was too cramped and flow was hard to manage, it is lot more better to use sliders which has sharp turns.

[Hard]

00:09:517 (8,1) - The blanket here ban be improved at the bottom of it. Fixed it somehow.

*Also the blanket at the end of slider 8 blanketing with slider 1 can be improved like so:

Blanket

00:18:613 (4,5) - The consistency here can be improved by making the sliders of the same type. Yea fixed.

00:20:368 (2,3) - Blanket these perhaps? It is impossible to blanket these 2 unless I toggle DS, so no changes.

00:41:592 (4,1) - Bad transition tbh, perhaps make them flow more? Didn't really get what you said, so instead rotated (4) bit to the left.

00:56:751 (1,2) - Move these further upward for a nicer overall look and make the sliders the same for better consistency. Only made the slider same for consistency, didn't move them further upwards.

01:02:177 (4,6) - Refrain from making these touch as it doesn't look too nice in play. Moved them to make them symmetrical, should look better now.

[Walao's Insane]

00:00:900 (5,1) - Bad transition together, the touching agh it burns!

00:12:071 (3) - The first curve can be improved, I don't really like the curve tbh

Curve

00:27:868 (5,1) - Perhaps move the slider a bit further down for a more prominent blanket?

[Insane]

00:01:379 (5) - Why a 1/8 slider, the audio has nothing like this here? Well... Reason is because there is a strong guitar sound snapping onto 1/8 rhythm, making this slider fit into the song. There is already a ranked version that features this by eINess : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/255919

00:09:517 (1,3) - Same reasons about slider consistency :3

00:13:985 (1,2) - Put the 2nd slider in the middle of the first slider for better looks and blanketing Well I prefer this, and didn't really get you either :/

00:19:092 (3) - I'd curve this more around the slider end so it creates a more prominent blanket. Moving up the 2nd anchor point by 1 grid fixes this.

00:23:241 (4) - Why not curve this to blanket over the previous 3 notes. Blanketing this will create an effect that the flow looks like is going to the right, but at (6) the flow suddenly changes to the left, which results the player to quickly cancel their motion to the right and continue from the left, which I don't want. Straight slider fixes that problem.

00:23:560 (5,7) - Definitely blanket this you've a good opportunity to do so True that, but I think it is alright for this to just blanket (8).

00:27:230 (4) - Curve it less so that it can blanket around the curvature of the slider.

00:43:507 (1) - Why not make it look like this instead? That is absolutely better, fixed.

Slider

00:47:975 (3) - Move this down slightly so it flows with the previous curve better Fixed.

01:12:709 (3) - Move this upward to the left slightly so it flows nicer with the previous slider Oh, (2) wasn't supposed to be there, moved (2) to the optimal location. Sorry :C

01:15:741 (3) - Blanket this with the oncoming slider for better looks. I prefer the triangular pattern of these, but will change if more people bring this up.

01:25:475 (4) - Move this upwards so it flows better with the slider Yea good catch, fixed.

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From Modding Queues

Walao's Insane

※Only this map has "Widescreen Support". Please exclude a check. fixed
※Because this map is the most difficult, the OD thinks that there may be "8".(Compared with Insane diff) fixed

01:01:698 (2,4,6) - Would you like to open an interval? It's the feeling that is good because it is a excited point. nice idea xD


01:24:198 (5) - I hear a strong sound.remove whistle.and add Sampleset drum "Finish" fixed

The interval between the circles seems narrow overall.I think that you may open it a little more. i think its ok though..

monstrata wrote:

[Walao's Insane]

1. 00:01:379 (1,2) - Kind of an awkward gap here since it's 1/1... You could add a circle to 00:01:858 - . maybe stacking it on 2?
2. 00:14:464 (3,4,5) - I know you borrow some of your mapping style from mine, so I can mention this. Your spacing here isn't reflective of the song's emphasis. Note that the drums are emphasized on 3 and 5 (basically white ticks) but you have a large jump from 3>4. 4 lands on a red tick that isn't emphasized so the jump doesn't reflect the music.
3. 00:14:783 (5,6,7) - Same here. Note the jump to 6, even though it's not emphasized in the music.
4. 00:15:741 (2,3) - ^ Here you could put a jump for emphasis.
5. 00:28:188 (1,4) - Overlaps like this aren't good for readability:P. You can already see 4 even before Slider 1 finishes due to the AR (and i wouldn't recommend increasing AR to solve this problem lol).
6. 00:30:103 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern has the same spacing, but there is considerably more emphasis onto 1 based on the vocals of this song. Therefore a larger jump would fit much better.
7. 00:34:571 (1) - Would be nice if you could emphasize these notes too. Jump or something? They're definitely emphasized by the percussion.
8. 00:35:847 (1) - ^
9. 00:39:358 (5,6,1) - Mentioned earlier about spacing. right now 6 is being emphasized by the jump.

Pattern wise, nice job ;o. But I think more control could be put into emphasis and jumps so the strong parts of the song can be better appreciated.

applied all of your mod xD .. I've always been a fan of your mapping style..haha

[ Space ] wrote:

Hey, random mod bcs why not!

[Walao's Insane]

00:00:900 (5,1) - Bad transition together, the touching agh it burns! lol..not that worse though..at least it still can be seen xD..but if more modders say about this..i'll consider changing it xD

00:12:071 (3) - The first curve can be improved, I don't really like the curve tbh fixed

Curve

00:27:868 (5,1) - Perhaps move the slider a bit further down for a more prominent blanket? fixed

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Absolute Soul
TitleUnicode:Absolute Soul
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:[Sc4v4ng3r]
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:アブソリュート・デュオ
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OzzyOzrock wrote:

Just wanna post that my queue is only for taiko since my standard mods are really bad ;w;

imaikiseta wrote:

Insane

00:13:985 (1) - This slider doesn't fit here, it doesn't match Suzuki's singing or the beats in the back. I would do this instead:
00:13:985 (1) - The end of this slider goes 00:14:145
^^00:14:305 - Then add circle here I am following the vocals for this part, it is pretty strong. The lyrics is going - "ka" at 00:13:985 and "ko" at 00:14:305.

00:42:230 (1) - Slider should end here, 00:42:549 so you're following the beat (in the back), sounds irregular if left as what it is Listen carefully, you can hear that her voice is landing on the blue tick, so it is feasible to have the slider end there.
00:48:932 (2,1) - Move these a bit back Trying to keep the DS here.

00:52:603 (6) - Circle is an extra, there's nothing going on there (so remove) I hear a kick here... Or is it just me? Keeping it for now, will have DS problems if I don't.
01:08:241 (3) - I suggest starting this slider here, where 01:07:124 (1) used to be at Yea did it.

Insane is getting remapped anyways.

Hard

00:20:368 (2,3) - I don't get this concept... I know why you ended the long slider here 00:20:847 but it also blocks mapping the singing. I would do:
00:20:368 (2) - End this slider here 00:20:688
^^00:21:007 (3) - Start this slider here 00:20:847 Fixed.

00:34:730 (2) - Doesn't fit exactly...I know that this goes with the singing but she says "oo (oh)" here 00:34:890 , so change the slider into a mini reverse slider This is fine, as this is expressing the prolonged vocal. You've got the point on the lyrics though, but I am expressing that in Insane, so this should be fine in Hard.

^^00:35:847 - Add circle (?) Kick is pretty weak here, so not added.

00:52:443 (6) - Round this slider the other way, breaks the flow if it is the way it is now Fixed.

01:05:688 (2) - I think this would be better off being a reverse slider because flow is weird and when I first listened to it, it didn't sound right either Yea you do have the point here, fixed.

01:24:996 (3) - ^^ Keeping this one though. Although the lyrics is "lute" which is somewhat prolonged, but since it is prolonged, wanted to express it this way.
01:25:475 (1) - Spinner should end here 01:26:751 because she stops singing there and so you could add a circle here 01:27:230Just like Normal, I don't think having a circle right after a spinner until Hard is right.

Normal

00:43:507 (1) - Might as well end the slider here 00:44:464 so remove 00:44:464 (2) Didn't realise I could do that, fixed.
01:25:475 (1) - Spinner should end here 01:26:751 because she stops singing there and so you could add a circle here 01:27:230 That is true, but since this is Normal, and notes after spinner should be given few beats break in Easy and Normal, so not changed.

Easy Diff seems fine.

1. I think good metadata. =v=b

1. 00:05:049 (1) - ctrl + J
   I think more follow next note
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:783 (2,4) - move at x:256 y:260
   move at center. this Symmetrical.
   should be adjust after note(00:17:975 (1,2) - )
3. 00:33:932 (2) - umm.not fitting tail point(00:34:251 - )
   I think this slider(00:33:932 (2) - ) end at 00:34:571 -
   idea:
   
4. 00:58:188 (4,1) - I think not good follow slider.
   try this~
   
   SPOILER

   
   and next note(00:59:943 (2) - ) move at x:68 y:100
5. 01:01:220 (3) - add NC
   changed melody this point
6. 01:09:358 (5) - add NC and 01:09:677 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:22:443 (2) - remove fhinish at head
   I think don't need thitsound this point

1. AR8 -> AR7
   
2. 00:09:996 (7,1) - I think not good follow next note (00:09:996 (7) - ->00:10:156 (1) - )
   00:09:996 (7) - stack 00:10:156 (1) - head point
3. 00:50:528 - and 00:50:688 - add note?
   idea:
   
4. 00:58:347 (3) - I would blanket 00:58:188 (2) - ,making little jump
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:08:879 (5,6,1) - this stack is hard to look x_x
   try this
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:03:932 (6) - add NC
2. 00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) - I think not good follow previous one stream
   00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + H
   and 00:21:645 (1,3) - move at x:415 y:319 00:21:964 (2,4) - move at x:183 y:263
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:24:358 - I want note....
4. 01:11:432 (1) - make curve slider
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:14:783 (3,4) - I think not good follow next note (01:14:783 (3) - ->01:15:262 (4) - )
   idea:
   
   SPOILER

   

litoluna wrote:

hi~　Sc4v4ng3r
from My Queue Thanks for choosing

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

1. I think good metadata. =v=b

[Easy]

1. 00:05:049 (1) - ctrl + J Better flow, fixed.
   I think more follow next note
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:783 (2,4) - move at x:256 y:260 Never noticed this, fixed.
   move at center. this Symmetrical.
   should be adjust after note(00:17:975 (1,2) - ) Did it
3. 00:33:932 (2) - umm.not fitting tail point(00:34:251 - )
   I think this slider(00:33:932 (2) - ) end at 00:34:571 - Yea you have the point on this one, but I think using more 1/1 sliders here fits into the music better, it expresses the fast pace of this particular part of the song. It is going to get slower later anyway.
   idea:
   
4. 00:58:188 (4,1) - I think not good follow slider. Fixed, but curved the slider in another way.
   try this~
   
   SPOILER

   
   and next note(00:59:943 (2) - ) move at x:68 y:100 Since I curved the slider in another way, no changes for this one, as the flow is going to break.
5. 01:01:220 (3) - add NC Fixed
   changed melody this point
6. 01:09:358 (5) - add NC and 01:09:677 (1) - remove NC Never noticed this :/ fixed.
7. 01:22:443 (2) - remove fhinish at head Removed.
   I think don't need thitsound this point

[Hard]

1. AR8 -> AR7 I will see what other modders think. If so, I will change this to AR 7.5, 7 seems really slow.
   
2. 00:09:996 (7,1) - I think not good follow next note (00:09:996 (7) - ->00:10:156 (1) - ) This is a jump to emphasize on the cymbals in the background. Instead stacking, I made it as a isoceles triangle.
   00:09:996 (7) - stack 00:10:156 (1) - head point
3. 00:50:528 - and 00:50:688 - add note? Did it.
   idea: Fixed in a different way. Made a jump to emphasize the strong piano.
   
4. 00:58:347 (3) - I would blanket 00:58:188 (2) - ,making little jump Good idea, fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:08:879 (5,6,1) - this stack is hard to look x_x You have a point... But I feel that this pattern is totally fine for Hard.
   try this
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:03:932 (6) - add NC Fixed.
2. 00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) - I think not good follow previous one stream
   00:21:645 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + H
   and 00:21:645 (1,3) - move at x:415 y:319 00:21:964 (2,4) - move at x:183 y:263 Fixed all, I love this jump pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:24:358 - I want note.... I don't think a note is really needed here, will see if more modders mention this.
4. 01:11:432 (1) - make curve slider Nice flow, fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:14:783 (3,4) - I think not good follow next note (01:14:783 (3) - ->01:15:262 (4) - ) Again a really nice flow, fixed.
   idea:
   
   SPOILER

   

gl~!!

1. looking good to me. o3o

1. there are a lot of unnecessary green lines, please delete them - http://puu.sh/iVbZ5.png
2. 00:00:103 (1,2) - I knooow it's the very first objects but the red tick is the exact same sound as (1). :c why don't you use a short slider instead of a circle?
3. 00:01:698 (3,1) - the tick change is confusing, especially for beginners, because there's a beat at 00:02:177 - but no object. Extend (3) til the red tick, or (becasue the white tick is louder), try this instead -
   
   I know there are many similar patterns where you ignore beats, but this is the most confusing one, imo. (The others are confusing, too, and tbh I'd prefer if all of them were changed, but you probably have your reason to ignore some louder beats and use this rhythm, so I won't point them out.)
4. 00:20:368 (3,4) - super minor and nitpicking here, but move (4) a grid to the left please :b
5. 00:21:166 (4,5) - the rhythm's a little confusing. it's very similar to 00:11:432 (3) - but mapped totally differently. might be better if this is more consistent? or try this -
   

1. some unnecessary green lines, too. - http://puu.sh/iVc0C.png
2. 00:06:805 (4,5) - imo, this plays better if you unstack them, cause this slows the player down.
3. 00:09:039 (3) - reverse here feels off, becaue the reverse emphasizes a beat you've ignored before. Consider using a 1/1 slider or emphasize more of the other beats. example -
   
4. 00:16:698 (3) - I'm not sure what this reverse is mapped to. O: sounds a little off to me, maybe you like this better? -
   
5. 00:19:890 (4,1) - sounds so abrupt, there's still a beat on the white tick and the vocals go on, too. consider extending (4)
6. 00:30:103 (5,1) - same as ^, how aboout adding a circle in-between?
7. 00:32:656 (4,1) - and here, the second red beat at (4) should be mapped somehow. you can shorten (4) and add a circle again to emphasize this better. or try this -
   
8. 01:05:528 (5,6) - same as 00:06:805 (4,5), unstack? slowing down players isn't a bad thing, but here I feel like it doesn't match the melody. it plays awesome here for exmaple 01:00:422 (2,3) - but ya. up to you!
   same - 01:08:081 (4,5) -
   01:10:634 (4,5) - etc
9. 01:23:560 (1,2,3) - because of the previous combo this might throw players off. I'd prefer a reverse slider here, also matches the previous patterns better. -
   

1. greeeeeeen lineees - http://puu.sh/iVceH.png
2. 00:09:517 (6,7,1) - flow is weird, can you rotate 00:10:156 (1,2) - by -45° and move it further to the right? feels a lot better
3. 00:14:464 (6,1) - I'd prefer if you unstack them, because that'd match better with the song. There is a break in the vocals here, but while the vocals slow down before the break and are very weak after the break, the SV doesn't match them. It feels like the speed matches the rhythm and the music just goes on.. just my view, ofc. >w<
4. 00:17:496 (6,1) - same here
5. 00:19:571 (5,1) - and here
6. 00:43:507 (1,1) - this plays weird, imo. the slider matches the vocals, but the vocals start way sooner at 00:44:464 - where the spinner ends. tbh I don't know how you can change this to make it play better without making the spinner too short. Maybe you can replace the spinner with a slider? -
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7. 00:50:528 (1,2,3,4) - this is weird to play, too, imo, because of the jump and then the regular spacing. The beat on (4) is SO MUCH louder than the others but the spacing before is back to the regular 1.2 .. :c There should be an even bigger jump, imo.
8. 01:08:241 (3,4) - eh, parallel sliders might looks better :b

1. 00:08:081 (2) - ctrl+g for better flow, then ctrl+g 00:08:400 (3) - too
2. 00:11:751 (1,1) - NCs are unnecessary, imo. anti-jumps should be readable at this difficulty without NCs
3. 00:20:688 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - that seems overmapped. :/ there's a background sound, but it's so beraly audiable.. it's weird to not follow the vocals or the beat better here. :c up to you, I'd prefer a different rhythm
4. 00:43:507 (1,1) - same as in Hard